ARACHNE
by Jean Lang · from A Book of Myths
Adapted Version
Once there was a girl named Arachne. She loved to weave. She was a human girl. She made pretty cloths. She used soft wool. She made many things. She was very good at this.
Many people watched Arachne. Nymphs came to see her. They liked her work very much. She made cloth with pictures. Flowers grew on her cloth. Birds flew on her cloth. All loved to watch her.
Arachne said, "I am the best weaver." No one is better. Athené heard this. Athené was a goddess. She made many things too. She was very good at crafts. Athené felt very angry.
Athené changed her look. She looked like an old woman. She walked to Arachne. "Be wise," she said. "Do not be too proud." "Gods are strong." "Do not make them angry."
Arachne laughed at the old woman. "I am the best weaver," she said. "I am better than Athené." "Let her come here now." "We can make things." "I will show her." "I will win this."
Athené changed again. She was not an old woman. She was a goddess now. Her eyes looked very angry. The nymphs were scared. They fell to the ground. But Arachne did not. She stood up tall.
Athené and Arachne started to weave. They both made fine cloth. They both worked very fast. Their hands moved quickly. They were both very skilled. They showed great talent.
Athené made a picture. It showed strong gods. It showed gods were strong. It showed what happens. People must not make gods angry. They must always respect them. This was her warning.
Arachne made a picture. It showed gods making mistakes. It showed gods doing silly things. It showed gods were not perfect. She was very proud of her cloth. She thought it was good.
Athené saw Arachne's cloth. Her eyes grew very dark. She was very angry. She tore Arachne's cloth. She broke it all up. She touched Arachne. She did not hurt her. But she was very cross.
Arachne felt very, very sad. She wanted to hide. She felt great shame. She did not want to be seen. She was so sad now. She cried many tears.
Athené saw Arachne's sadness. She said, "You will live." "But you will weave." "You will be a spider." "This is your new life." "You will spin always."
Arachne's body changed. It became small and grey. Her arms became thin legs. She grew many legs. She was a spider now. She made a fine thread. She hung from it. She started to weave. She still weaves today.
It is not good to be too proud. Do not say you are better than gods.
Original Story
ARACHNE
The hay that so short a time ago was long, lush grass, with fragrant meadow-sweet and gold-eyed marguerites growing amongst it in the green meadow-land by the river, is now dry hay—fragrant still, though dead, and hidden from the sun’s warm rays underneath the dark wooden rafters of the barn. Occasionally a cat on a hunting foray comes into the barn to look for mice, or to nestle cosily down into purring slumber. Now and then a hen comes furtively tip-toeing through the open door and makes for itself a secret nest in which to lay the eggs which it subsequently heralds with such loud clucks of proud rejoicing as to completely undo all its previous precautions. Sometimes children come in, pursuing cat or hen, or merely to tumble each other over amongst the soft hay which they leave in chaotic confusion, and when they have gone away, a little more of the sky can be seen through the little window in the roof, and through the wooden bars of the window lower down. Yet, whatever other living creatures may come or go, by those windows of the barn, and high up on its dark rafters, there is always a living creature working, ceaselessly working. When, through the skylight, the sun-god drives a golden sunbeam, and a long shaft of dancing dust-atoms passes from the window to what was once a part of the early summer’s glory, the work of the unresting toiler is also to be seen, for the window is hung with shimmering grey tapestries made by Arachne, the spider, and from rafter to rafter her threads are suspended with inimitable skill.
She was a nymph once, they say—the daughter of Idmon the dyer, of Colophon, a city of Lydia. In all Lydia there was none who could weave as wove the beautiful Arachne. To watch her card the wool of the white-fleeced sheep until in her fingers it grew like the soft clouds that hang round the hill tops, was pleasure enough to draw nymphs from the golden river Pactolus and from the vineyards of Tymolus. And when she drove her swift shuttle hither and thither, still it was joy to watch her wondrous skill. Magical was the growth of the web, fine of woof, that her darting fingers span, and yet more magical the exquisite devices that she then wrought upon it. For birds and flowers and butterflies and pictures of all the beautiful things on earth were limned by Arachne, and old tales grew alive again under her creative needle.
To Pallas Athené, goddess of craftsmen, came tidings that at Colophon in Lydia lived a nymph whose skill rivalled that of the goddess herself, and she, ever jealous for her own honour, took on herself the form of a woman bent with age, and, leaning on her staff, joined the little crowd that hung round Arachne as she plied her busy needle. With white arms twined round each other the eager nymphs watched the flowers spring up under her fingers, even as flowers spring from the ground on the coming of Demeter, and Athené was fain to admire, while she marvelled at the magic skill of the fair Arachne.
Gently she spoke to Arachne, and, with the persuasive words of a wise old woman, warned her that she must not let her ambition soar too high. Greater than all skilled craftswomen was the great goddess Athené, and were Arachne, in impious vanity, to dream that one day she might equal her, that were indeed a crime for any god to punish.
Glancing up for a moment from the picture whose perfect colours grew fast under her slim fingers, Arachne fixed scornful eyes on the old woman and gave a merry laugh.
“Didst say equal Athené? old mother,” she said. “In good sooth thy dwelling must be with the goat-herds in the far-off hills and thou art not a dweller in our city. Else hadst thou not spoken to Arachne of equalling the work of Athené; excelling were the better word.”
In anger Pallas Athené made answer.
“Impious one!” she said, “to those who would make themselves higher than the gods must ever come woe unutterable. Take heed what thou sayest, for punishment will assuredly be thine.”
Laughing still, Arachne made reply:
“I fear not, Athené, nor does my heart shake at the gloomy warning of a foolish old crone.” And turning to the nymphs who, half afraid, listened to her daring words, she said: “Fair nymphs who watch me day by day, well do ye know that I make no idle boast. My skill is as great as that of Athené, and greater still it shall be. Let Athené try a contest with me if she dare! Well do I know who will be the victor.”
Then Athené cast off her disguise, and before the frightened nymphs and the bold Arachne stood the radiant goddess with eyes that blazed with anger and insulted pride.
“Lo, Athené is come!” she said, and nymphs and women fell on their knees before her, humbly adoring. Arachne alone was unabashed. Her cheeks showed how fast her heart was beating. From rosy red to white went the colour in them, yet, in firm, low voice she spoke.
“I have spoken truth,” she said. “Not woman, nor goddess, can do work such as mine. Ready am I to abide by what I have said, and if I did boast, by my boast I stand. If thou wilt deign, great goddess, to try thy skill against the skill of the dyer’s daughter and dost prove the victor, behold me gladly willing to pay the penalty.”
The eyes of Athené, the grey-eyed goddess, grew dark as the sea when a thunder-cloud hangs over it and a mighty storm is coming. Not for one moment did she delay, but took her place by the side of Arachne. On the loom they stretched out two webs with a fine warp, and made them fast on the beam.
“The sley separates the warp, the woof is inserted in the middle with sharp shuttles, which the fingers hurry along, and, being drawn within the warp, the teeth notched in the moving sley strike it. Both hasten on, and girding up their garments to their breasts, they move their skilful arms, their eagerness beguiling their fatigue. There both the purple is being woven, which is subjected to the Tyrian brazen vessel, and fine shades of minute difference; just as the rainbow, with its mighty arch, is wont to tint a long tract of sky by means of the rays reflected by the shower; in which, though a thousand different colours are shining, yet the very transition eludes the eyes that look upon it.... There, too, the pliant gold is mixed with the threads.”
Ovid.
Their canvases wrought, then did Athené and Arachne hasten to cover them with pictures such as no skilled worker of tapestry has ever since dreamed of accomplishing. Under the fingers of Athené grew up pictures so real and so perfect that the watchers knew not whether the goddess was indeed creating life. And each picture was one that told of the omnipotence of the gods and of the doom that came upon those mortals who had dared in their blasphemous presumption to struggle as equals with the immortal dwellers in Olympus. Arachne glanced up from her web and looked with eyes that glowed with the love of beautiful things at the creations of Athené. Yet, undaunted, her fingers still sped on, and the goddess saw, with brow that grew yet more clouded, how the daughter of Idmon the dyer had chosen for subjects the tales that showed the weaknesses of the gods. One after another the living pictures grew beneath her hand, and the nymphs held their breath in mingled fear and ecstasy at Arachne’s godlike skill and most arrogant daring. Between goddess and mortal none could have chosen, for the colour and form and exquisite fancy of the pictures of the daughter of Zeus were equalled, though not excelled, by those of the daughter of the dyer of Colophon.
Darker and yet more dark grew the eyes of Athené as they looked on the magical beauty of the pictures, each one of which was an insult to the gods. What picture had skilful hand ever drawn to compare with that of Europa who,
“riding on the back of the divine bull, with one hand clasped the beast’s great horn, and with the other caught up her garment’s purple fold, lest it might trail and be drenched in the hoar sea’s infinite spray. And her deep robe was blown out in the wind, like the sail of a ship, and lightly ever it wafted the maiden onward.”
Moschus.
Then at last did the storm break, and with her shuttle the enraged goddess smote the web of Arachne, and the fair pictures were rent into motley rags and ribbons. Furiously, too, with her shuttle of boxwood she smote Arachne. Before her rage, the nymphs fled back to their golden river and to the vineyards of Tymolus, and the women of Colophon in blind terror rushed away. And Arachne, shamed to the dust, knew that life for her was no longer worth possessing. She had aspired, in the pride of her splendid genius, to a contest with a god, and knew now that such a contest must ever be vain. A cord hung from the weaver’s beam, and swiftly she seized it, knotted it round her white neck, and would have hanged herself. But ere the life had passed out of her, Athené grasped the cord, loosened it, and spoke Arachne’s doom:
“Live!” she said, “O guilty and shameless one! For evermore shalt thou live and hang as now, thou and thy descendants, that men may never forget the punishment of the blasphemous one who dared to rival a god.”
Even as she spoke, Arachne’s fair form dried up and withered. Her straight limbs grew grey and crooked and wiry, and her white arms were no more. And from the beam where the beautiful weaver of Lydia had been suspended, there hung from a fine grey thread the creature from which, to this day, there are but few who do not turn with loathing. Yet still Arachne spins, and still is without a compeer.
“Not anie damzell, which her vaunteth most
In skilfull knitting of soft silken twyne,
Nor anie weaver, which his worke doth boast
In dieper, in damaske, or in lyne,
Nor anie skil’d in workmanship embost,
Nor anie skil’d in loupes of fingring fine,
Might in their divers cunning ever dare
With this so curious networke to compare.”
Spenser.
Thus, perhaps, does Arachne have her compensations, and in days that followed long after the twilight of the gods, did she not gain eternal honour in the heart of every Scot by the tale of how she saved a national hero? Kindly, too, are her labours for men as she slays their mortal enemies, the household flies, and when the peasant—practical, if not favoured by Æsculapius and Hygeia—runs to raid the loom of Arachne in order to staunch the quick-flowing blood from the cut hand of her little child, much more dear to her heart is Arachne the spider than the unknown Athené.
“Also in spinners be tokens of divination, and of knowing what weather shall fall—for oft by weathers that shall fall, some spin or weave higher or lower. Also multitude of spinners is token of much rain.”
Bartholomew.
The sun has not long enough shown his face to dry up the dew in the garden, and behold on the little clipped tree of boxwood, a great marvel! For in and out, and all over its twigs and leaves, Arachne has woven her web, and on the web the dew has dropped a million diamond drops. And, suddenly, all the colours in the sky are mirrored dazzlingly on the grey tapestry of her making. Arachne has come to her own again.
Story DNA
Moral
Pride and challenging the gods' authority lead to dire consequences.
Plot Summary
Arachne, a mortal woman of unparalleled weaving skill, boasts that she is superior to the goddess Athené. Athené, disguised as an old woman, warns Arachne against such hubris, but Arachne defiantly challenges her to a weaving contest. Both create magnificent tapestries, but Arachne's depicts the gods' flaws, enraging Athené. In a fit of divine wrath, Athené destroys Arachne's work and strikes her, leading Arachne to attempt suicide. Athené prevents her death but transforms her into a spider, condemning her and her descendants to weave forever as a punishment for her blasphemy, though the story concludes by acknowledging the spider's enduring artistry and unexpected benefits to humanity.
Themes
Emotional Arc
pride to humiliation and eternal suffering
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is a retelling of a well-known Greek myth, primarily from Ovid's Metamorphoses. The inclusion of quotes from Ovid, Moschus, Spenser, and Bartholomew grounds it in a literary tradition.
Plot Beats (14)
- The narrator introduces Arachne, a spider, and then recounts her past as a human nymph.
- Arachne, daughter of a dyer, is renowned in Lydia for her exceptional weaving skill, attracting nymphs and mortals to watch her.
- Tidings of Arachne's boasts reach Pallas Athené, goddess of crafts, who is jealous of her own honor.
- Athené disguises herself as an old woman and warns Arachne against excessive pride and challenging the gods.
- Arachne scornfully dismisses the old woman, claiming she not only equals but excels Athené, and challenges the goddess to a contest.
- Athené reveals her true divine form, terrifying the onlookers, but Arachne remains defiant and accepts the challenge.
- Athené and Arachne begin their weaving contest, both demonstrating immense skill.
- Athené weaves scenes depicting the omnipotence of the gods and the doom of mortals who defy them.
- Arachne weaves scenes illustrating the weaknesses and misdeeds of the gods, particularly their deceptions and transformations.
- Athené, enraged by the beauty and insulting nature of Arachne's work, destroys the tapestry and strikes Arachne with her shuttle.
- Shamed and despairing, Arachne attempts to hang herself with a cord from her loom.
- Athené intervenes, saving Arachne from death but transforming her into a spider, condemning her to weave eternally.
- Arachne's body withers and transforms into a spider, forever hanging and spinning threads.
- The story concludes by reflecting on the spider's continued, albeit transformed, artistry and its unexpected benefits to humanity, suggesting a form of compensation for Arachne.
Characters
Arachne ★ protagonist
Before transformation: slender, graceful Lydian woman of average height. After transformation: a creature with grey, crooked, wiry limbs, resembling a spider, hanging from a fine grey thread.
Attire: Before transformation: simple, practical garments suitable for a weaver, likely made of linen or wool, allowing freedom of movement for her craft. The story mentions her 'white arms' and 'slim fingers' suggesting unadorned attire.
Wants: To prove her weaving skill is superior to all, even the gods; to gain recognition for her unparalleled talent.
Flaw: Hubris, excessive pride, inability to acknowledge the superiority of the gods.
Transforms from a supremely confident and defiant human weaver into a spider, eternally spinning, as punishment for her hubris, yet still retaining her unparalleled skill.
Proud, exceptionally skilled, defiant, ambitious, arrogant, artistic.
Image Prompt & Upload
A young Lydian woman, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a slender build, fair skin, and dark hair pulled back simply. She wears a simple, light-colored linen tunic, unadorned, allowing free movement of her arms. Her expression is defiant and proud, with a slight smirk. Her hands are poised as if working a loom. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Pallas Athené ⚔ antagonist
As an old woman: bent with age, leaning on a staff. As a goddess: radiant, with blazing eyes, later with eyes dark as a stormy sea. She is described as the 'grey-eyed goddess'.
Attire: As an old woman: simple, unassuming robes of a common elderly woman. As a goddess: majestic, flowing robes befitting an Olympian deity, possibly in shades of grey, blue, or white, perhaps with subtle olive branch or owl motifs, reflecting her wisdom and association with the olive tree.
Wants: To uphold her divine honor and superiority; to punish mortals who dare to challenge the gods.
Flaw: Pride, quick to anger when challenged, jealousy over her unique skills.
Initially attempts to warn Arachne, then reveals her true form and punishes Arachne for her hubris, transforming her into a spider.
Proud, jealous of her honor, wise (as old woman), vengeful, omnipotent, just (in her own divine view).
Image Prompt & Upload
A majestic Greek goddess, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a powerful, athletic build, fair skin, and a regal, stern expression. Her eyes are a striking grey. Her dark hair is pulled back in an elegant, classical style. She wears flowing, deep blue and white chiton and peplos, adorned with subtle olive branch embroidery, and a golden aegis on her chest. She holds a boxwood shuttle in her right hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Nymphs ◆ supporting
Graceful, beautiful, with 'white arms twined round each other' as they watch Arachne.
Attire: Light, flowing garments, typical of Greek nymphs, perhaps made of fine linen or silk, in natural colors, adorned with elements from their natural habitats (e.g., river reeds, vineyard leaves).
Wants: To witness Arachne's skill, to avoid divine wrath.
Flaw: Fear, easily intimidated by divine power.
Witness the contest and its aftermath, fleeing in terror.
Admiring, easily frightened, respectful of the gods.
Image Prompt & Upload
A group of three young Greek women, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. They have slender, graceful builds, fair skin, and long, flowing dark hair adorned with small leaves and river reeds. They wear light, flowing chiton dresses in shades of pale green and blue, made of fine linen. Their expressions are a mix of awe and fear. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Barn
A rustic, dark wooden barn with high rafters and a little window in the roof (skylight) and another lower down with wooden bars. It contains dry, fragrant hay, and shafts of golden sunlight occasionally pierce through the skylight, illuminating dancing dust-atoms. Spiderwebs, shimmering grey tapestries, hang from the rafters and across the windows.
Mood: Quiet, industrious, slightly dusty, ancient, a sense of hidden activity and timelessness.
The opening scene, establishing Arachne's current form and ceaseless work as a spider. It serves as a framing device for the flashback.
Image Prompt & Upload
A rustic, ancient barn interior, with massive, rough-hewn dark timber rafters crisscrossing overhead. Below, mounds of golden-brown, dry hay are piled, catching stray dust motes in the air. A small, high-set window in the roof allows a single, strong shaft of golden sunlight to cut through the gloom, illuminating a complex, shimmering spiderweb stretched between the rafters. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Idmon's Workshop/Weaving Area in Colophon, Lydia
A bustling workshop or open-air weaving area within the city of Colophon, Lydia, where Arachne, the dyer's daughter, demonstrates her unparalleled weaving skill. It is a place where nymphs from the golden river Pactolus and vineyards of Tymolus gather to watch her card wool and weave intricate tapestries on a loom.
Mood: Lively, admiring, competitive, filled with creative energy and tension.
Arachne's initial display of skill, her defiant challenge to Athené, and the weaving contest itself, leading to her transformation.
Image Prompt & Upload
An open-air weaving area in ancient Colophon, Lydia, under a bright Mediterranean sky. A sturdy wooden loom stands center, with fine threads stretched taut. Around it, a young woman with dark hair works intently, her hands deftly manipulating a shuttle. A small crowd of women and nymphs, dressed in flowing chiton, watch with awe, some leaning against whitewashed stone walls. Sunlight bathes the scene, highlighting the vibrant colors of woven fabrics. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Clipped Boxwood Tree in a Garden
A small, meticulously clipped boxwood tree in a garden, still covered with dew drops in the early morning. Arachne, in her spider form, has woven an intricate web all over its twigs and leaves, catching countless diamond-like dew drops that reflect all the colors of the sky.
Mood: Magical, serene, beautiful, a sense of quiet triumph and natural artistry.
The final scene, showcasing Arachne's enduring artistry and beauty in her transformed state, finding her 'compensations' and 'coming to her own again'.
Image Prompt & Upload
A meticulously clipped, dark green boxwood topiary tree stands in a serene garden at dawn. An incredibly intricate, delicate spiderweb is woven across its dense foliage, completely covered in countless shimmering dew drops that catch the first light of the rising sun. The tiny droplets reflect the soft pastel colors of the morning sky, creating a dazzling, diamond-like tapestry. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.