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ARETHUSA

by Jean Lang

ARETHUSA

Arethusa and Alpheus: A Story of Water

CEFR A1 Age 5 384 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, there was a nature girl. Her name was Arethusa. She loved to run. She played in the woods. She was a nymph. Nymphs are nature girls. Arethusa liked to hunt. She liked cool rivers.

One hot day, Arethusa felt warm. She found a cool river. It came from mountains. She put clothes on a tree. She stepped into the water. It felt nice. She was happy.

Alpheus was the river god. He saw Arethusa. He liked her very much. He wanted her to stay with him. The river water moved fast. It made a loud sound. Alpheus spoke to her.

Arethusa was very, very scared. Alpheus spoke loudly. He wanted her to stay. He was big and loud. This made Arethusa scared. She ran from the water. She ran to the woods.

Alpheus ran after her. He was very fast. Arethusa ran and ran. Alpheus came closer. He was right behind her. She could not get away.

Arethusa was so scared. She cried for help. She called to Diana. Diana was a goddess. Diana was her friend. "Please help me!" she cried.

Diana heard her friend. Diana used her magic. A big grey cloud came down. It wrapped around Arethusa. Alpheus could not see her. Then, magic changed Arethusa. She became a water fountain.

Alpheus waited for the cloud. The cloud went away. He looked for Arethusa. He saw the water fountain. It was Arethusa now. He knew it was her.

Alpheus did not stop. He changed himself too. He became a fast river. He flowed very quickly. He still wanted Arethusa. He chased the new fountain. He flowed right after her.

Diana helped again. She made a secret path. It went under the ground. The fountain flowed there. It went very far away. It went to a new place. The place was called Sicily.

The fountain flowed under the ground. It flowed under the sea. It went a long way. Then it came out. It was a new spring. It was in Sicily.

Alpheus still wanted her. He followed her path. He went under the ground. He went under the sea. His water joined her water. They were together forever.

And so, the water of Alpheus and the water of Arethusa flowed together in the spring, forever and ever.

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ARETHUSA

“We have victualled and watered,” wrote Nelson from Syracuse in 1798, “and surely, watering at the fountain of Arethusa, we must have victory. We shall sail with the first breeze; and be assured I will return either crowned with laurel or covered with cypress.” Three days later, he won the Battle of the Nile, one of the greatest sea-fights of history.

Here in our own land the tales of the Greek gods seem very remote. Like the colours in an old, old portrait, the humanity of the stories seems to have faded. But in Sicily they grow vivid at once. Almost, as we stand above Syracuse, that long yellow town by the sea—a blue-green sea, with deep purple shadows where the clouds above it grow dark, and little white-sailed boats, like white butterflies, wing their way across to the far horizon—can we

“Have glimpse of Proteus rising from the sea, Or hear old Triton blow his wreathèd horn.”

Here, to this day, one of the myths most impossible of acceptance to the scientific modern mind lives on, and Arethusa is not yet forgotten. “In Ortygia,” says Cicero, “is a fountain of sweet water, the name of which is Arethusa, of incredible flow, very full of fish, which would be entirely overwhelmed by the sea, were its waters not protected from the waves by a rampart and a wall of stone.” White marble walls have taken the place of the protecting barrier, but the spring bubbles up to this day, and Ortygia (Quail Island) is the name still given to that part of Syracuse. Fluffy-headed, long, green stalks of papyrus grow in the fountain, and red and golden fish dart through its clear water. Beyond lie the low shores of Plemmgrium, the fens of Lysimeleia, the hills above the Anapus, and above all towers Etna, in snowy and magnificent serenity and indifference to the changes wrought by the centuries to gods and to men. Yet here the present is completely overshadowed by the past, and even the story of Arethusa knocks loudly at the well-barricaded doors of twentieth-century incredulity.

The beautiful Arethusa was a nymph in Diana’s train, and many a time in the chase did she thread her way through the dim woodland, as a stream flows down through the forest from the mountains to the sea. But to her, at last, there came a day when she was no longer the huntress but the hunted.

The flaming wheels of the chariot of Apollo had made the whole land scintillate with heat, and the nymph sought the kind shelter of a wood where she might bathe in the exquisite coolness of the river that still was chilled by the snows of the mountain. On the branch of a tree that bent over the stream she hung her garments, and joyously stepped into the limpid water. A ray of the sun glanced through the leaves above her and made the soft sand in the river’s bed gleam like gold and the beautiful limbs of the nymph seem as though carved from pure white marble by the hand of Pygmalion himself. There was no sound there but the gentle sound of the stream that murmured caressingly to her as it slowly moved on through the solitude, and so gently it flowed that almost it seemed to stand still, as though regretful to leave for the unknown forest so beautiful a thing as Arethusa.

“The Earth seemed to love her And Heaven smiled above her.”

But suddenly the stillness of the stream was ruffled. Waves, like the newly-born brothers of the billows of the sea, swept both down-stream and up-stream upon her, and the river no longer murmured gently, but spoke to her in a voice that thrilled with passionate longing. Alpheus, god of the river, had beheld her, and, beholding her, had loved her once and forever. An uncouth creature of the forest was he, unversed in all the arts of love-making. So not as a supplicant did he come to her, but as one who demanded fiercely love for love. Terror came upon Arethusa as she listened, and hastily she sprang from the water that had brought fear upon her, and hastened to find shelter in the woodlands. Then the murmur, as of the murmur of a river before a mighty flood comes to seize it and hold it for its own, took form in a voice that pled with her, in tones that made her tremble as she heard.

“Hear me, Arethusa!” it said. “I am Alpheus, god of the river that now thou hast made sacred. I am the god of the rushing streams—the god of the thundering cataracts. Where the mountain streams crash over the rocks and echo through the shadowy hollows of the hills, I hold my kingship. Down from Etna I come, and the fire of Etna is in my veins. I love thee! I love but thee, and thou shalt be mine, and I thine forever.”

Then Arethusa, in blind panic, fled before the god who loved her. Through the shadowy forest she sped, while he swiftly gained upon her. The asphodel bent under her flying feet, and the golden flowers of the *Fiori Maggio* were swept aside as she fled. Yet ever Alpheus gained upon her, until at length she felt that the chase was ended, and cried to Diana to save her. Then a cloud, grey and thick and blinding as the mist that wraps the mountain tops, suddenly descended and enfolded her, and Alpheus groped for her in vain.

“Arethusa!” she heard him cry, in a voice of piteous longing—“Arethusa!—my belovèd!”

Patiently he waited, with the love that makes uncouth things beautiful, until at length a little breath from Zephyrus blew aside the soft grey veil that hid his beloved from his sight, and he saw that the nymph had been transformed into a fountain. Not for a moment did Alpheus delay, but, turning himself into a torrent in flood, he rushed on in pursuit of Arethusa. Then did Diana, to save her votary, cleave a way for her through the dark earth even into the gloomy realm of Pluto himself, and the nymph rushed onward, onward still, and then upward, until at length she emerged again to the freedom of the blue sky and green trees, and beheld the golden orange groves and the grey olives, the burning red geranium flowers and the great snow-capped mountain of Sicily.

But Alpheus had a love for her that cast out all fear. Through the terrible blackness of the Cocytus valley he followed Arethusa, and found a means of bursting through the encumbering earth and joining her again. And in a spring that rises out of the sea near the shore he was able at last to mingle his waters with those of the one for whom he had lost his godship.

“And now from their fountains In Enna’s mountains, Down one vale where the morning basks, Like friends once parted Grown single-hearted, They ply their watery tasks, At sunrise they leap From their cradles steep In the cave of the shelving hill; At noontide they flow Through the woods below And the meadows of asphodel; And at night they sleep In the rocking deep Beneath the Ortygian shore; Like spirits that lie In the azure sky When they love but live no more.”

Shelley.

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Characters 3 characters

Arethusa ★ protagonist

nymph young adult female

Exquisitely beautiful, with limbs so perfectly formed they appear carved from pure white marble. Her form is graceful and lithe, suited for the chase.

Attire: Typically wears light, practical garments suitable for hunting, which she hangs on a tree branch before bathing. These would be simple, perhaps made of fine linen or silk, in natural colors.

Wants: To remain free and chaste, to continue her life as a huntress in Diana's train, and to escape the unwanted advances of Alpheus.

Flaw: Her overwhelming fear and panic when confronted by Alpheus, which leads her to flee rather than confront.

Transforms from a fleeing nymph into a sacred fountain, eternally pursued but also eternally preserved, maintaining her essence even in a new form.

Joyous, innocent, fearful, chaste, determined to maintain her independence.

Alpheus ⚔ antagonist

river god adult male

An uncouth creature of the forest, implied to be powerful and imposing, reflecting the force of a rushing river. His form is not explicitly detailed beyond being 'uncouth'.

Attire: As a river god, he would likely appear with elements of his watery domain, perhaps draped in reeds or with water flowing around him, rather than conventional clothing.

Wants: To possess Arethusa, driven by an immediate and overwhelming love.

Flaw: His inability to understand or respect Arethusa's desire for freedom and chastity, leading to his forceful pursuit.

Begins as a forceful pursuer, transforms into a torrent, and ultimately merges his waters with Arethusa's fountain, achieving a form of union.

Passionate, obsessive, demanding, relentless, unversed in the arts of love-making, persistent.

Diana ◆ supporting

goddess ageless female

Not explicitly described, but as the goddess of the hunt and chastity, she would be depicted as strong, athletic, and regal.

Attire: As a Greek goddess of the hunt, she would wear a chiton, perhaps short for ease of movement, made of fine linen or silk, in colors like white, silver, or forest green. Often depicted with a bow and quiver.

Wants: To protect her chaste votary, Arethusa, from unwanted advances and preserve her purity.

Flaw: Not explicitly shown in this story.

Acts as a divine savior, intervening to protect Arethusa.

Protective, powerful, divine, responsive to her votaries.

Locations 3 locations
The Fountain of Arethusa (Ortygia, Syracuse)

The Fountain of Arethusa (Ortygia, Syracuse)

outdoor Implied Mediterranean climate, possibly warm and sunny, with a blue-green sea and dark cloud shadows.

A fountain of sweet water, protected by white marble walls from the sea. Fluffy-headed, long, green stalks of papyrus grow in it, and red and golden fish dart through its clear water. It is located on Ortygia (Quail Island), a part of Syracuse, with views of the blue-green sea, low shores of Plemmgrium, fens of Lysimeleia, hills above the Anapus, and Mount Etna in the distance.

Mood: Ancient, mythical, serene, a place where past and present merge.

The present-day manifestation of Arethusa's transformation, a place of historical and mythical significance.

white marble wallsclear sweet waterpapyrus stalksred and golden fishblue-green seaMount Etna (snow-capped in distance)golden orange grovesgrey olive treesred geranium flowers
Mountain River in a Dim Woodland

Mountain River in a Dim Woodland

outdoor afternoon Warm, scintillating heat from Apollo's chariot, but the river remains cool from mountain snows. Implied summer or late spring.

A secluded, dim woodland with a river still chilled by mountain snows. Sunlight occasionally glances through the leaves, making the soft sand in the river's bed gleam like gold. The river flows gently, murmuring caressingly through the solitude. Gnarled tree branches bend over the stream.

Mood: Peaceful, solitary, then suddenly disturbed and terrifying.

Arethusa bathes in the river and is discovered by Alpheus, leading to her flight.

dim woodlandcool, limpid riversoft golden sand in riverbedsunlight filtering through leavesgnarled tree branches overhanging riverexposed tree roots
Shadowy Forest and Asphodel Meadows

Shadowy Forest and Asphodel Meadows

outdoor day Warm, with the 'fire of Etna' implied in Alpheus's description, suggesting a hot climate. The presence of asphodel and Fiori Maggio indicates spring/early summer.

A shadowy forest giving way to meadows where asphodel bends underfoot and golden Fiori Maggio flowers grow. The terrain is varied, with hills and hollows where mountain streams crash over rocks.

Mood: Terrified, desperate, relentless pursuit.

Arethusa flees from Alpheus through the landscape, culminating in her transformation into a cloud.

shadowy forest treesasphodel flowersgolden Fiori Maggio flowersmountain streamscrashing cataractsrocky terrainhollows and hills

Story DNA myth · poetic

Plot Summary

The myth of Arethusa tells of a beautiful nymph in Diana's train who, while bathing, is seen and passionately pursued by the river god Alpheus. Terrified, Arethusa flees, crying out to Diana for help. Diana transforms her into a fountain to aid her escape, but Alpheus, undeterred, transforms into a torrent and follows her through the earth and sea. Arethusa emerges as a spring in Sicily, but Alpheus eventually finds a way to mingle his waters with hers, creating an eternal union.

Themes

pursuit and escapetransformationunrequited lovedivine intervention

Emotional Arc

peace to terror to eternal union

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: poetic language, classical allusions, direct address to reader (implied), quotations of poetry

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: bittersweet
Magic: talking river god, divine transformation (nymph to fountain, god to torrent), divine intervention (Diana creating an underground path), gods with human emotions and actions
the fountain of Arethusa (symbol of purity, escape, and eternal union)the river Alpheus (symbol of relentless passion and pursuit)

Cultural Context

Origin: Greek (myth adapted and retold in English)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The introduction references Lord Nelson's historical visit to Syracuse in 1798, linking the ancient myth to a more recent historical event and emphasizing the myth's enduring presence. Cicero's mention of the fountain also grounds the myth in historical record.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The story begins by establishing the enduring presence of the Arethusa myth in Syracuse, Sicily, referencing historical figures and geographical features.
  2. Arethusa, a beautiful nymph in Diana's train, enjoys hunting and bathing in cool rivers.
  3. One hot day, Arethusa bathes in a mountain-fed river, feeling peaceful and alone.
  4. The river god Alpheus sees her, is instantly smitten, and his waters begin to stir and speak to her with passionate longing.
  5. Terrified by Alpheus's intense declaration of love and his uncouth nature, Arethusa flees from the river.
  6. Alpheus pursues her relentlessly through the forest, gaining on her despite her speed.
  7. In desperation, Arethusa cries out to her patron goddess, Diana, for salvation.
  8. Diana intervenes by enveloping Arethusa in a thick cloud, then transforming her into a fountain.
  9. Alpheus, momentarily thwarted, waits patiently until the cloud dissipates and he sees her new form.
  10. He immediately transforms himself into a rushing torrent and continues his pursuit of the fountain Arethusa.
  11. Diana cleaves a path through the earth, even into the underworld, for Arethusa to escape to Sicily.
  12. Arethusa travels beneath the earth and sea, eventually emerging as a spring in Ortygia, Syracuse.
  13. Alpheus, driven by his unwavering love, follows her through the dark depths and bursts forth to mingle his waters with hers in the Sicilian spring, achieving an eternal union.

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