ECHO and NARCISSUS
by Jean Lang · from A Book of Myths
Adapted Version
Echo was a happy nymph. She loved to play and talk. Echo had a loud voice. She liked to laugh. She ran in the green woods. All knew Echo.
One day, Echo saw Hera. Hera was the queen. Echo played a trick on Hera. Echo talked and talked. Other nymphs ran away. Hera was very angry. She did not like the trick.
Hera said, "Say last words." Echo could not speak. She could only repeat. This was a sad magic.
Echo walked in the forest. She saw a boy. He was very nice. Echo liked him much. She wanted to be his friend. She watched him.
The boy called, "Who is here?" Echo said, "Here." The boy called, "Come!" Echo said, "Come!" The boy did not see her. He did not know. Echo wanted to talk. She could not say more.
The boy said, "Go away!" Echo said, "Away!" He was not kind. He did not want to play. He walked away from Echo. Echo was very sad. She felt bad.
Echo was very, very sad. She went to a cave. She hid in the mountains. Her body became small. It was like a whisper. Only her voice stayed there. Her voice was sad.
The boy walked in the sun. He was hot and tired. He found a quiet pool. The water was very clear. He bent down to drink.
The boy looked in the water. He saw a face. It was very pretty. He thought it was a friend. A water friend looked at him. He liked the face.
The boy tried to touch the face. The face went away. The water moved. Then the water was still. The face came back. He was confused. He tried again.
The boy loved the face so much. He stayed by the pool. He did not eat food. He did not sleep. He only looked at the face. He was very tired. He could not leave.
The boy stayed by the pool. He was very, very tired. He closed his eyes. He fell asleep for good. He did not wake up. He was very still.
The nymphs looked for the boy. Echo's voice called, "Boy!" He was not there. His body was gone. They looked all around.
The gods saw the empty place. They made a flower grow. It was a pretty white flower. We call it a Narcissus flower. It grew by the water. It was a pretty sight.
Original Story
ECHO AND NARCISSUS
In the solitudes of the hills we find her, and yet we may come on her unawares in the din of a noisy city. She will answer us where the waves are lashing themselves against the rugged cliffs of our own British coast, or we may find her where the great yellow pillars of fallen temples lie hot in the sun close to the vivid blue water of the African sea. At nightfall, on the lonely northern moors, she mimics the cry of a wailing bird that calls for its mate, but it is she who prolongs the roll of the great organ in a vast cathedral, she who repeats the rattle and crack and boom of the guns, no matter in what land the war may be raging. In the desolate Australian bush she makes the crash of the falling limb of a dead gum tree go on and on, and tortures the human being who is lost, hopelessly lost, and facing a cruel death, by repeating his despairing calls for help. Through the night, in old country-houses, she sports at will and gives new life to sad old tales of the restless dead who restlessly walk. But she echoes the children’s voices as they play by the seashore or pick primroses in the woods in spring, and when they greet her with laughter, she laughs in merry response. They may fear her when the sun has gone down, and when they are left all alone they begin to dread her mockery. Yet the nymph who sought for love and failed to gain what she sought must surely find some comfort on those bright days of summer and of spring when she gives the little children happiness and they give her their love.
When all the world was young, and nymphs and fauns and dryads dwelt in the forests, there was no nymph more lovely and more gay than she whose name was Echo. Diana would smile on her for her fleetness of foot when she followed her in the chase, and those whom she met in the leafy pathways of the dim, green woods, would pass on smiling at the remembrance of her merry chatter and her tricksy humour.
It was an evil day for Echo when she crossed the path of Hera, queen of the gods. The jealous goddess sought her errant husband, who was amusing himself with some nymphs, and Echo, full of mischievous glee, kept her in talk until the nymphs had fled to safety. Hera was furious indeed when she found out that a frolicsome nymph had dared to play on her such a trick, and ruthlessly she spoke fair Echo’s doom.
“Henceforth,” she said, “the tongue with which thou hast cheated me shall be in bonds. No longer wilt thou have the power to speak in greeting. To the tongues of others shall thy tongue be slave, and from this day until time shall cease thou shalt speak only to repeat the last words that have fallen on thine ears.”
A maimed nymph indeed was Echo then, yet whole in all that matters most, in that her merry heart was still her own. But only for a little while did this endure.
Narcissus, the beautiful son of a nymph and a river god, was hunting in a lonely forest one day when Echo saw him pass. To her he seemed more fair than god or man, and once she had seen him she knew that she must gain his love or die. From that day on, she haunted him like his shadow, gliding from tree to tree, nestling down amongst thick fern and undergrowth, motionless as one who stalks a wild thing, watching him afar off while he rested, gladdening her eyes with his beauty. So did she feed her hungering heart, and sought to find contentment by looking on his face each day.
To her at length came a perfect moment when Narcissus was separated from his companions in the chase and, stopping suddenly where the evening sun chequered the pathway of the forest with black and gold, heard the nymph’s soft footfall on the rustling leaves.
“Who’s here?” he called.
“Here!” answered Echo.
Narcissus, peering amongst the trees’ long shadows and seeing no one, called “Come!”
And “Come!” called the glad voice of Echo, while the nymph, with fast-beating heart, felt that her day of happiness had come indeed.
“Why do you shun me?” then called Narcissus.
“Why do you shun me?” Echo repeated.
“Let us join one another,” said the lad, and the simple words seemed turned into song when Echo said them over.
“Let us join one another!” she said, and not Eos herself, as with rosy fingers she turns aside the dark clouds of night, could be fairer than was the nymph as she pushed aside the leaves of the trackless wood, and ran forward with white arms outstretched to him who was lord of her life.
SHE HAUNTED HIM LIKE HIS SHADOW
With cold eyes and colder heart the one she loved beheld her.
“Away!” he cried, shrinking back as if from something that he hated. “Away! I would rather die than that you should have me!”
“Have me!” cried Echo pitifully, but she pled in vain. Narcissus had no love to give her, and his scorn filled her with shame. Thenceforth in the forest revels she never more was seen, and the nymphs danced gaily as ever, with never a care for her who had faded and gone away as completely as though she were a blossom in the passing of spring. In the solitude of mountain cliffs and caves and rocky places, and in the loneliest depths of the forest, Echo hid her grief, and when the winds blew through the dark branches of the trees at night, moaning and sighing, they could hear far below them the voice of Echo repeating their lamentations. For her, long nights followed hopeless days, and nights and days only told her that her love was all in vain. Then came a night when the winds no longer saw the figure of the nymph, white and frail as a broken flower, crouching close to the rocks they passed over. Grief had slain the body of Echo. Only her voice was left to repeat their mocking laughter, their wistful sighs—only her voice that lives on still though all the old gods are gone, and but few there are who know her story.
Heartwhole and happy, Narcissus, slayer of happiness, went on his way, and other nymphs besides fair Echo suffered from loving him in vain. One nymph, less gentle than Echo, poured the tale of her love that was scorned into the sympathetic ears of the goddess of Love, and implored her to punish Narcissus.
Hot and tired from the chase, Narcissus sought one day a lonely pool in the woods, there to rest and to quench his thirst.
“In some delicious ramble, he had found
A little space, with boughs all woven round;
And in the midst of all, a clearer pool
Than e’er reflected in its pleasant cool
The blue sky here, and there, serenely peeping
Through tendril wreaths fantastically creeping.”
As he stooped down to drink, a face looked at his through the crystal clear water, and a pair of beautiful eyes met his own. His surprise and joy at the sight of what he felt sure must be the most beautiful creature on earth, was evidently shared by the nymph of the pool, who gazed fearlessly up at him.
Round her head she had a nimbus of curls than which that of Adonis—nay, of the sun-god himself, was not more perfect, while her eyes were like the brown pools of water in a rippling mountain stream, flecked with sunshine, yet with depths untold. When Narcissus smiled at her in rapture, her red lips also parted in a smile. He stretched out his arms towards her, and her arms were stretched to him. Almost trembling in his delight, he slowly stooped to kiss her. Nearer she drew to him, nearer still, but when his mouth would have given itself to that other mouth that was formed like the bow of Eros—a thing to slay hearts—only the chilly water of the pool touched his lips, and the thing of his delight vanished away. In passionate disappointment Narcissus waited for her to return, and as soon as the water of the pool grew still, once more he saw her exquisite face gazing wistfully up into his. Passionately he pled with the beautiful creature—spoke of his love—besought her to have pity on him, but although the face in the pool reflected his every look of adoration and of longing, time and again he vainly tried to clasp in his arms what was but the mirrored likeness of himself.
In full measure had the avenging goddess meted out to Narcissus the restless longing of unsatisfied love. By day and by night he haunted the forest pool, and ere long the face that looked back at his was pale as a lily in the dawn. When the moonbeams came straying down through the branches and all the night was still, they found him kneeling by the pool, and the white face that the water mirrored had the eyes of one of the things of the woods to which a huntsman has given a mortal wound. Mortally wounded he truly was, slain, like many another since his day, by a hopeless love for what was in truth but an image, and that an image of his own creation. Even when his shade passed across the dark Stygian river, it stooped over the side of the boat that it might try to catch a glimpse of the beloved one in the inky waters.
Echo and the other nymphs were avenged, yet when they looked on the beautiful dead Narcissus, they were filled with sorrow, and when they filled the air with their lamentations, most piteously did the voice of Echo repeat each mournful cry. Even the gods were pitiful, and when the nymphs would have burned the body on a funeral pyre which their own fair hands had built for him, they sought it in vain. For the Olympians had turned Narcissus into a white flower, the flower that still bears his name and keeps his memory sweet.
“A lonely flower he spied,
A meek and forlorn flower, with naught of pride,
Drooping its beauty o’er the watery clearness,
To woo its own sad image into nearness;
Deaf to light Zephyrus it would not move,
But still would seem to droop, to pine, to love.”
Keats.
Story DNA
Moral
Excessive vanity and self-love can lead to one's own destruction and prevent genuine connection with others.
Plot Summary
The beautiful nymph Echo, cursed by Hera to only repeat others' words, falls deeply in love with the equally beautiful but vain youth, Narcissus. Narcissus cruelly rejects Echo, causing her to waste away until only her voice remains. Later, Narcissus, while hunting, discovers a clear pool and becomes entranced by his own reflection, mistaking it for a water spirit. He falls hopelessly in love with his own image, unable to leave the pool, and eventually dies of unrequited longing. The gods, taking pity, transform his body into the flower that bears his name, while Echo's voice continues to mourn him.
Themes
Emotional Arc
innocence to despair (Echo); pride to self-destruction (Narcissus)
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This is a retelling of a classical Greek myth, often attributed to Ovid's Metamorphoses. The inclusion of Keats' poem excerpt highlights its enduring literary influence.
Plot Beats (15)
- The story begins by describing Echo, a playful nymph beloved by Diana, whose voice is heard everywhere.
- Echo, in her mischievousness, distracts Hera while Zeus escapes with other nymphs, incurring Hera's wrath.
- Hera curses Echo, condemning her to only repeat the last words spoken to her.
- Echo sees the beautiful Narcissus hunting in the forest and falls instantly in love with him.
- Echo attempts to communicate with Narcissus, but her curse only allows her to repeat his words, leading to misunderstanding.
- Narcissus, repulsed by her inability to speak normally and her forwardness, cruelly rejects Echo, telling her he would rather die than be with her.
- Devastated by his scorn, Echo retreats to lonely places, her body wasting away from grief until only her voice remains.
- Another nymph, also scorned by Narcissus, prays to the goddess of Love (Aphrodite/Venus) for him to experience unrequited love.
- Narcissus, hot and tired, finds a secluded, crystal-clear pool in the woods.
- Upon seeing his reflection, Narcissus becomes instantly infatuated, believing it to be a beautiful water nymph.
- He tries to embrace and kiss the reflection, but it vanishes, only to reappear when the water stills.
- Narcissus is consumed by his hopeless love for his own image, unable to eat or sleep, wasting away by the pool.
- He eventually dies of his self-inflicted longing, and even in the underworld, he tries to glimpse his reflection in the Stygian waters.
- The nymphs, including Echo's voice, mourn Narcissus, but when they go to prepare his body for a pyre, it is gone.
- The gods, taking pity, transform Narcissus into the white flower that still bears his name.
Characters
Echo ★ protagonist
Graceful and fleet-footed, with a light, airy presence. Her body is described as becoming 'white and frail as a broken flower' due to grief, suggesting a delicate build.
Attire: Simple, flowing garments made of natural fibers, likely light linen or silk in shades of green, white, or earth tones, suitable for moving through forests and hills. Perhaps adorned with leaves or flowers.
Wants: Initially, to enjoy life and engage in playful chatter. After meeting Narcissus, her sole motivation becomes to gain his love.
Flaw: Her inability to speak her own thoughts (due to Hera's curse) and her overwhelming, unrequited love for Narcissus, which consumes her.
Transforms from a lively, mischievous nymph into a heartbroken, fading figure consumed by unrequited love, eventually losing her physical form but retaining her voice as the phenomenon of echo.
Merry, mischievous, playful, loving, deeply sorrowful, persistent in her affections, ultimately heartbroken.
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A young, slender nymph, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. She has long, wavy light brown hair adorned with small green leaves and wildflowers, large expressive hazel eyes, and fair skin. She wears a simple, flowing tunic of pale green linen, draped gracefully, revealing her bare arms. Her posture is one of gentle longing, with her hands clasped lightly at her chest. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Narcissus ⚔ antagonist
Exquisitely beautiful, described as 'more fair than god or man.' His face becomes pale as a lily due to his obsession, and his body is that of a huntsman.
Attire: Practical hunting attire suitable for ancient Greece: a short chiton or tunic made of linen or fine wool, possibly leather bracers, and simple sandals. Colors would be natural tones like white, cream, or light brown.
Wants: Initially, to hunt and enjoy his own company. Later, his sole motivation becomes to gaze upon and possess the beautiful image he sees in the pool.
Flaw: His extreme vanity and inability to love anyone but himself, leading to his downfall and death.
Begins as a beautiful but indifferent huntsman, becomes consumed by self-love and an unrequited passion for his own reflection, leading to his physical demise and transformation into a flower.
Vain, self-absorbed, cold-hearted, scornful, oblivious to others' feelings, obsessive, ultimately self-destructive.
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A very handsome young man with a muscular but lean build, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. He has a perfect nimbus of dark, curly hair, striking brown eyes, and smooth, fair skin. He wears a short, cream-colored linen chiton, belted at the waist, revealing his toned legs. His posture is one of proud indifference, with his head held high. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Hera ⚔ antagonist
Majestic and imposing, befitting the queen of the gods. Her presence commands respect and fear.
Attire: Rich, flowing robes of deep purple or gold silk, intricately embroidered, possibly with a peplos or chiton style, adorned with elaborate gold jewelry and a crown or diadem. Her attire would signify her status as queen of Olympus.
Wants: To catch her errant husband, Zeus, and to punish those who aid him or mock her.
Flaw: Her intense jealousy and inability to control Zeus's infidelity, which often leads her to punish innocent parties.
Remains consistent as a powerful, vengeful goddess, serving as the catalyst for Echo's curse.
Jealous, vengeful, powerful, ruthless, easily angered, cunning.
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A majestic goddess with a powerful build, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. She has dark, braided hair adorned with a golden diadem, piercing dark eyes, and a stern, regal face. She wears flowing robes of deep purple and gold silk, intricately embroidered, with a heavy gold belt. She holds a golden scepter in her right hand. Her posture is upright and commanding. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Goddess of Love ◆ supporting
Exquisitely beautiful and alluring, embodying love and desire.
Attire: Light, ethereal garments, possibly made of fine, translucent silk or chiffon in shades of rose, gold, or white, draped elegantly to enhance her beauty. Adorned with delicate jewelry, perhaps pearls or roses.
Wants: To punish those who scorn love and cause heartbreak, upholding the balance of love and justice.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but her domain over love might make her susceptible to its complexities.
Acts as an agent of divine justice, punishing Narcissus for his cruelty.
Sympathetic, just, powerful, avenging.
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A radiant goddess with a graceful, feminine build, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. She has long, flowing golden hair, large, compassionate green eyes, and flawless, luminous skin. She wears a flowing gown of soft rose-pink silk, draped elegantly over one shoulder, adorned with delicate gold filigree. She holds a single red rose in her right hand. Her posture is one of serene power and gentle understanding. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Dim, Green Woods (Echo's Domain)
Leafy pathways of a dense, ancient forest, filled with nymphs, fauns, and dryads. The light is dappled and filtered by a thick canopy, creating shifting patterns of black and gold on the forest floor, especially in the evening sun.
Mood: Initially merry and playful, later becoming lonely and sorrowful as Echo hides her grief.
Echo encounters Narcissus, is cursed by Hera, and later hides her grief here.
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A dense, ancient Greek forest with towering, gnarled oak and laurel trees, their thick canopies filtering the late afternoon sunlight into dappled patterns on the forest floor. The ground is covered in a rich carpet of fallen leaves, moss, and thick ferns, with winding, barely visible pathways. Golden light shafts pierce through the verdant foliage, illuminating pockets of wild flowers. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Lonely Forest Pool (Narcissus's Fate)
A secluded, crystal-clear pool nestled within a forest, surrounded by boughs woven around it, creating a hidden, intimate space. The water is so still and pure it perfectly reflects the blue sky and tendril wreaths creeping fantastically around its edges.
Mood: Initially refreshing and serene, quickly becoming obsessive, tragic, and ultimately mournful.
Narcissus discovers his reflection, falls in love with it, and eventually dies here, transforming into the narcissus flower.
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A secluded, perfectly still forest pool in ancient Greece, its surface like polished glass, reflecting a clear blue sky and the surrounding dense foliage. The pool is encircled by intertwined branches of olive and cypress trees, draped with ivy and wild grapevines, forming a natural, intimate alcove. The water's edge is soft earth and smooth, moss-covered stones. Cool, diffused light filters down from the canopy above. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.