THE DEATH of ADONIS
by Jean Lang · from A Book of Myths
Adapted Version
Once, there was a goddess. Her name was Aphrodite. She was the goddess of love. Eros was her little boy. He played with his arrows. One arrow hit Aphrodite. It was a mistake. Her heart felt a new feeling. It was a strong, warm feeling. Aphrodite felt love.
Aphrodite walked in the forest. She heard dogs. She saw a young man. His name was Adonis. He was very handsome. His looks were perfect. Aphrodite looked at him. Her heart beat fast. She loved Adonis at once. This love was very strong. She wanted to be with him.
Aphrodite did not do her goddess work. She only thought of Adonis. She followed him always. Adonis loved to hunt. He hunted deer and wolves. Aphrodite went with him. She walked in the woods. Adonis did not see her love. He liked to hunt. He did not know her great love.
Aphrodite worried for Adonis. She said, "Be safe! Big beasts are scary." She told him often. Adonis just laughed. He was very brave. He was not afraid. He liked big beasts. He did not listen to her. He thought she worried too much.
One day, Adonis was happy. He felt very strong. He told Aphrodite his plan. ""I will hunt a big beast!" he said. "It has sharp teeth." Aphrodite felt very scared. She begged him. "Do not go!" She held his hand. Adonis did not listen. He just smiled. He wanted to hunt the big beast.
Aphrodite could not sleep. She worried all night. Her heart was very sad. She thought of Adonis. The sun came up. Aphrodite ran to the forest. She ran very fast. She heard sounds. They were sad, crying sounds from the dogs. Her heart felt cold. She knew it was wrong.
Aphrodite found Adonis. He lay on the ground. He was very, very badly hurt. The Big Boar hurt him. The dogs were around him. They were very quiet and still. Aphrodite cried out loud. Her heart broke. She saw the wound. It was a big, bad wound. Adonis was still. He did not move.
Adonis opened his eyes. He saw Aphrodite. She cried for him. In his last moments, he knew. He knew how much she loved him. Her love was strong. It was stronger than hunting. It was stronger than all things. Adonis felt her love. He felt it in his heart.
Aphrodite held Adonis close. She put his head in her lap. She kissed his lips. Adonis tried to smile. He closed his eyes. He went to sleep for good. Aphrodite cried and cried. Her tears fell on him. She held him tight. She did not want to let go.
Her tears fell. They fell on the ground. New things grew where he hurt. Red drops mixed with tears. Pretty flowers grew there. Red roses grew. White small flowers grew too. They were pretty flowers. They grew from love and sadness.
Aphrodite felt very, very deep sadness. She missed Adonis so much. She talked to Zeus. Zeus was a great god. She asked him for help. "Let me go to Adonis!" she cried. "Let me be with him. "Go to quiet place." Zeus saw her pain.
Zeus felt sad for Aphrodite. He saw her great love. He made a plan. "Adonis will come back," Zeus said. "He will come for half a year. He will come from the far-off, quiet place. Then you can be with her. You will see him each year."
So, Adonis comes back. He comes from the far-off place. He comes back each spring. The cold winter goes away. The flowers bloom then. New green grass grows. Aphrodite is happy again. This shows that love is strong. It shows that nature always comes back. Sadness can turn to joy. New life comes after winter. Pretty flowers grow.
Original Story
THE DEATH OF ADONIS
“The fairest youth that ever maiden’s dream conceived.”
Lewis Morris.
The ideally beautiful woman, a subject throughout the centuries for all the greatest powers of sculptor’s and painter’s art, is Venus, or Aphrodite, goddess of beauty and of love. And he who shares with her an unending supremacy of perfection of form is not one of the gods, her equals, but a mortal lad, who was the son of a king.
As Aphrodite sported one day with Eros, the little god of love, by accident she wounded herself with one of his arrows. And straightway there came into her heart a strange longing and an ache such as the mortal victims of the bow of Eros knew well. While still the ache remained, she heard, in a forest of Cyprus, the baying of hounds and the shouts of those who urged them on in the chase. For her the chase possessed no charms, and she stood aside while the quarry burst through the branches and thick undergrowth of the wood, and the hounds followed in hot pursuit. But she drew her breath sharply, and her eyes opened wide in amazed gladness, when she looked on the perfect beauty of the fleet-footed hunter, who was only a little less swift than the shining spear that sped from his hand with the sureness of a bolt from the hand of Zeus. And she knew that this must be none other than Adonis, son of the king of Paphos, of whose matchless beauty she had heard not only the dwellers on earth, but the Olympians themselves speak in wonder. While gods and men were ready to pay homage to his marvellous loveliness, to Adonis himself it counted for nothing. But in the vigour of his perfect frame he rejoiced; in his fleetness of foot, in the power of that arm that Michael Angelo has modelled, in the quickness and sureness of his aim, for the boy was a mighty hunter with a passion for the chase.
Aphrodite felt that her heart was no longer her own, and knew that the wound that the arrow of Eros had dealt would never heal until she knew that Adonis loved her. No longer was she to be found by the Cytherian shores or in those places once held by her most dear, and the other gods smiled when they beheld her vying with Diana in the chase and following Adonis as he pursued the roe, the wolf, and the wild boar through the dark forest and up the mountain side. The pride of the goddess of love must often have hung its head. For her love was a thing that Adonis could not understand. He held her “Something better than his dog, a little dearer than his horse,” and wondered at her whim to follow his hounds through brake and marsh and lonely forest. His reckless courage was her pride and her torture. Because he was to her so infinitely dear, his path seemed ever bestrewn with dangers. But when she spoke to him with anxious warning and begged him to beware of the fierce beasts that might one day turn on him and bring him death, the boy laughed mockingly and with scorn.
There came at last a day when she asked him what he did on the morrow, and Adonis told her with sparkling eyes that had no heed for her beauty, that he had word of a wild boar, larger, older, more fierce than any he had ever slain, and which, before the chariot of Diana next passed over the land of Cyprus, would be lying dead with a spear-wound through it.
With terrible foreboding, Aphrodite tried to dissuade him from his venture.
“O, be advised: thou know’st not what it is
With javelin’s point a churlish swine to gore,
Whose tushes never sheathed he whetteth still,
Like to a mortal butcher, bent to kill.
Alas, he naught esteems that face of thine,
To which love’s eyes pay tributary gazes;
Nor thy soft hands, sweet lips, and crystal eyne,
Whose full perfection all the world amazes;
But having thee at vantage—wondrous dread!—
Would root these beauties as he roots the mead.”
Shakespeare.
To all her warnings, Adonis would but give smiles. Ill would it become him to slink abashed away before the fierceness of an old monster of the woods, and, laughing in the pride of a whole-hearted boy at a woman’s idle fears, he sped homewards with his hounds.
With the gnawing dread of a mortal woman in her soul, Aphrodite spent the next hours. Early she sought the forest that she might again plead with Adonis, and maybe persuade him, for love of her, to give up the perilous chase because she loved him so.
But even as the rosy gates of the Dawn were opening, Adonis had begun his hunt, and from afar off the goddess could hear the baying of his hounds. Yet surely their clamour was not that of hounds in full cry, nor was it the triumphant noise that they so fiercely make as they pull down their vanquished quarry, but rather was it baying, mournful as that of the hounds of Hecate. Swift as a great bird, Aphrodite reached the spot from whence came the sound that made her tremble.
Amidst the trampled brake, where many a hound lay stiff and dead, while others, disembowelled by the tusks of the boar, howled aloud in mortal agony, lay Adonis. As he lay, he “knew the strange, slow chill which, stealing, tells the young that it is death.”
And as, in extremis, he thought of past things, manhood came to Adonis and he knew something of the meaning of the love of Aphrodite—a love stronger than life, than time, than death itself. His hounds and his spear seemed but playthings now. Only the eternities remained—bright Life, and black-robed Death.
Very still he lay, as though he slept; marble-white, and beautiful as a statue wrought by the hand of a god. But from the cruel wound in the white thigh, ripped open by the boar’s profaning tusk, the red blood dripped, in rhythmic flow, crimsoning the green moss under him. With a moan of unutterable anguish, Aphrodite threw herself beside him, and pillowed his dear head in her tender arms. Then, for a little while, life’s embers flickered up, his cold lips tried to form themselves into a smile of understanding and held themselves up to hers. And, while they kissed, the soul of Adonis passed away.
“A cruel, cruel wound on his thigh hath Adonis, but a deeper wound in her heart doth Cytherea[6] bear. About him his dear hounds are loudly baying, and the nymphs of the wild woods wail him; but Aphrodite with unbound locks through the glades goes wandering—wretched, with hair unbraided, with feet unsandalled, and the thorns as she passes wound her and pluck the blossom of her sacred blood. Shrill she wails as down the woodland she is borne.... And the rivers bewail the sorrows of Aphrodite, and the wells are weeping Adonis on the mountains. The flowers flush red for anguish, and Cytherea through all the mountain-knees, through every dell doth utter piteous dirge:
“‘Woe, woe for Cytherea, he hath perished, the lovely Adonis!’”
Bion.
Passionately the god besought Zeus to give her back her lost love, and when there was no answer to her prayers, she cried in bitterness: “Yet shall I keep a memorial of Adonis that shall be to all everlasting!” And, as she spoke, her tears and his blood, mingling together, were turned into flowers.
“A tear the Paphian sheds for each blood-drop of Adonis, and tears and blood on the earth are turned to flowers. The blood brings forth the roses, the tears, the wind-flower.”
Yet, even then, the grief of Aphrodite knew no abatement. And when Zeus, wearied with her crying, heard her, to his amazement, beg to be allowed to go down to the Shades that she might there endure eternal twilight with the one of her heart, his soul was softened.
“Never can it be that the Queen of Love and of Beauty leaves Olympus and the pleasant earth to tread for evermore the dark Cocytus valley,” he said. “Nay, rather shall I permit the beauteous youth of thy love to return for half of each year from the Underworld that thou and he may together know the joy of a love that hath reached fruition.”
Thus did it come to pass that when dark winter’s gloom was past, Adonis returned to the earth and to the arms of her who loved him.
“But even in death, so strong is love,
I could not wholly die; and year by year,
When the bright springtime comes, and the earth lives,
Love opens these dread gates, and calls me forth
Across the gulf. Not here, indeed, she comes,
Being a goddess and in heaven, but smooths
My path to the old earth, where still I know
Once more the sweet lost days, and once again
Blossom on that soft breast, and am again
A youth, and rapt in love; and yet not all
As careless as of yore; but seem to know
The early spring of passion, tamed by time
And suffering, to a calmer, fuller flow,
Less fitful, but more strong.”
Lewis Morris.
And when the time of the singing of birds has come, and the flowers have thrown off their white snow pall, and the brown earth grows radiant in its adornments of green blade and of fragrant blossom, we know that Adonis has returned from his exile, and trace his footprints by the fragile flower that is his very own, the white flower with the golden heart, that trembles in the wind as once the white hands of a grief-stricken goddess shook for sorrow.
“The flower of Death” is the name that the Chinese give to the wind-flower—the wood-anemone. Yet surely the flower that was born of tears and of blood tells us of a life that is beyond the grave—of a love which is unending.
The cruel tusk of a rough, remorseless winter still yearly slays the “lovely Adonis” and drives him down to the Shades. Yet we know that Spring, with its Sursum Corda, will return as long as the earth shall endure; even as the sun must rise each day so long as time shall last, to make
“Le ciel tout en fleur semble une immense rose
Qu’un Adonis céleste a teinte de son sang.”
De Heredia.
FOOTNOTE:
[6] Aphrodite.
Story DNA
Plot Summary
Aphrodite, wounded by Eros's arrow, falls deeply in love with the beautiful mortal hunter Adonis, who is oblivious to her affection and dismisses her warnings about dangerous prey. Despite her pleas, Adonis hunts a fierce wild boar and is mortally wounded. Aphrodite finds him dying, and in his last moments, he understands her love. Her tears and his blood transform into flowers, and her profound grief moves Zeus to allow Adonis to return from the Underworld for half of each year, symbolizing the cyclical renewal of nature with the arrival of spring.
Themes
Emotional Arc
joy to sorrow to bittersweet acceptance
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is a classical Greek myth, often associated with fertility cults and the cycle of death and rebirth in nature. The retelling incorporates literary references from Shakespeare, Bion, Lewis Morris, and De Heredia, enriching its classical foundation with later poetic interpretations.
Plot Beats (13)
- Aphrodite is accidentally wounded by Eros's arrow, making her susceptible to love.
- She encounters Adonis, a beautiful mortal hunter, and falls deeply in love with him.
- Aphrodite abandons her divine duties and follows Adonis on his hunts, despite his indifference to her love.
- She repeatedly warns Adonis about the dangers of hunting fierce animals, but he scoffs at her fears.
- Adonis, full of pride, announces his plan to hunt a particularly dangerous wild boar, ignoring Aphrodite's desperate pleas.
- Aphrodite spends a night in dread, then rushes to the forest at dawn, hearing mournful baying.
- She finds Adonis mortally wounded by the boar, surrounded by dead and dying hounds.
- Adonis, in his dying moments, finally comprehends the depth of Aphrodite's love.
- Aphrodite cradles him as he dies, sharing a final kiss.
- In her grief, Aphrodite's tears and Adonis's blood mix and transform into flowers: roses and wind-flowers (anemones).
- Aphrodite's sorrow is so profound that she begs Zeus to let her join Adonis in the Underworld.
- Zeus, moved by her devotion, decrees that Adonis will return from the Underworld for half of each year.
- Adonis's yearly return from the Shades is marked by the arrival of spring and the blooming of flowers, symbolizing enduring love and the cycle of nature.
Characters
Aphrodite ★ protagonist
Ideally beautiful woman, the subject of sculptor's and painter's art throughout centuries. Her form is of unending supremacy of perfection.
Attire: Initially, she is described as sporting, implying light, flowing attire suitable for a goddess. When grieving, she is unsandalled and her clothing is not explicitly detailed but implied to be simple or torn by thorns.
Wants: To win and keep the love of Adonis, and later, to overcome his death and bring him back to her.
Flaw: Her overwhelming love for Adonis makes her vulnerable to pain and grief, causing her to lose her divine composure and act with mortal desperation.
Transforms from a carefree goddess to a deeply suffering, almost mortal-like figure due to love and loss. She learns the depth of love and grief, and through her persistence, changes the natural order of life and death for Adonis.
Passionate, deeply loving, possessive, anxious, persistent, grief-stricken. She is driven by intense emotion and a desire for love.
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An ageless woman with perfect, radiant skin and a face of full perfection. She has long, dark, unbound hair that is unbraided and flowing wildly. Her eyes are crystal clear, and her lips are sweet. She wears a simple, flowing white chiton, torn at the hem, revealing feet that are unsandalled and slightly bleeding from thorn pricks. Her posture is one of deep anguish, head thrown back, arms outstretched in a wail. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Adonis ◆ supporting
The fairest youth, possessing unending supremacy of perfection of form. Fleet-footed with a perfect, vigorous frame. His body is described as having the power that Michael Angelo has modeled. He is marble-white and beautiful as a statue in death.
Attire: Implied to be practical for hunting, likely simple tunics or wraps, perhaps leather for protection, consistent with ancient Cypriot hunters. No specific details are given.
Wants: Driven by a passion for the chase and the thrill of hunting fierce beasts. He seeks challenge and glory in the hunt.
Flaw: His reckless courage and scorn for danger, particularly Aphrodite's warnings, lead directly to his death.
Begins as a proud, love-blind hunter. Dies tragically, but in his final moments, understands the meaning of Aphrodite's love. He is then granted a cyclical return from the Underworld, becoming a symbol of seasonal renewal.
Reckless, proud, passionate hunter, initially oblivious to love, courageous, scornful of fear. In death, he gains a moment of understanding and tenderness.
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A young man with a perfect, vigorous physique, appearing to be in his early twenties. He has dark, short, curly hair and sparkling brown eyes. His face is handsome and proud, with a slight, mocking smile. He wears a simple, short, light brown leather tunic, cinched at the waist with a rope belt, and sturdy leather sandals. He holds a shining bronze-tipped spear in his right hand, resting it on his shoulder. His posture is confident and slightly arrogant. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Eros ○ minor
A little god of love, typically depicted as a winged child.
Attire: Not specified, but typically depicted unclothed or with minimal drapery.
Wants: To play with his arrows, inadvertently causing love.
Flaw: His arrows can cause unintended consequences.
Plays a pivotal role in initiating the story's central conflict by accidentally wounding Aphrodite, but does not undergo a personal arc.
Playful, mischievous, innocent (in the context of the accident).
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A small, plump child with delicate white wings on his back. He has rosy cheeks, short, curly blonde hair, and wide, innocent blue eyes. He is unclothed. He holds a small golden bow in one hand and a single arrow in the other, looking mischievous. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Zeus ○ minor
King of the gods, implied to be powerful and majestic. His hand is capable of throwing a bolt with sureness.
Attire: Implied to be regal and divine, befitting the king of Olympus.
Wants: To maintain order among the gods and, eventually, to alleviate Aphrodite's suffering.
Flaw: Can be swayed by persistent emotional appeals, even when initially unwilling.
Initially resistant to Aphrodite's pleas, he is eventually moved by her profound grief and grants her wish, demonstrating his capacity for mercy.
Powerful, ultimately compassionate, wearied by incessant pleas, capable of softening his soul.
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An elderly, muscular man with a long, flowing white beard and stern, wise blue eyes. He has a regal and powerful presence. He wears a flowing, deep purple chiton draped over one shoulder, with intricate gold embroidery along the hem. He is seated on a grand, ornate golden throne. He holds a stylized golden lightning bolt in his right hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Wild Boar ⚔ antagonist
Larger, older, and more fierce than any Adonis had ever slain. It has churlish swine tushes that are never sheathed and are whetted still, like a mortal butcher. Its tusks are profaning and capable of disemboweling hounds and ripping open a human thigh.
Attire: Not applicable.
Wants: To defend itself and its territory, driven by its wild, untamed nature.
Flaw: Its ferocity makes it a target for hunters like Adonis.
Serves as the instrument of Adonis's death, fulfilling Aphrodite's foreboding warnings.
Churlish, remorseless, fierce, monstrous.
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A massive, old wild boar with coarse, dark brown bristles covering its entire body. Its hide is scarred and caked with mud. It has small, fierce red eyes and a powerful snout. Two long, sharp, yellowish tusks curve upwards prominently from its jaw. It stands in a defensive, aggressive posture, ready to charge. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Forest of Cyprus
A dense, wild forest on the island of Cyprus, characterized by thick undergrowth, branches, and dark, shadowy areas. It is a prime hunting ground.
Mood: Initially vibrant and active with the sounds of the chase, later becoming somber and tragic.
Aphrodite first encounters Adonis here; later, it is the site of Adonis's fatal boar hunt and death.
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A dense, ancient Mediterranean forest on Cyprus, with gnarled oak and pine trees casting deep shadows. The forest floor is a tangle of thick, thorny undergrowth and dark green moss, with patches of sunlight filtering through the dense canopy. The air is humid and still, with a sense of foreboding. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Cytherian Shores
The coastal areas of Cythera, a traditional domain of Aphrodite, likely featuring sandy beaches, rocky outcrops, and the sea.
Mood: Initially a place of peace and beauty for Aphrodite, later abandoned due to her new obsession.
Aphrodite's former favored dwelling place before she became consumed by her love for Adonis.
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A serene Mediterranean coastline with golden sandy beaches meeting clear turquoise waters. Gentle waves lap at the shore, and scattered smooth, sun-warmed rocks rise from the sand. Sparse, hardy coastal shrubs and wildflowers dot the low dunes, under a bright, clear sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Underworld (Shades)
The realm of the dead, described as a place of 'eternal twilight' and the 'dark Cocytus valley'.
Mood: Dark, somber, desolate, and eternal.
Adonis's temporary abode after his death, from which he is allowed to return for half of each year.
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A desolate, cavernous landscape shrouded in perpetual, dim twilight. Jagged, dark rock formations rise from a misty, grey ground, with a slow-moving, inky river (Cocytus) winding through the chasm. The air is heavy and still, with a sense of ancient, unending gloom. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.