FABLE VIII
by John Gay · from Fables of John Gay (Somewhat Altered)
Adapted Version
This is Doris. Doris likes to look in her mirror. "I am so pretty," she says. Doris is in her big, sunny room. She looks at her face in the mirror. She sees her big blue eyes. She sees her long yellow hair. "My eyes are so blue," she says. "My hair is so yellow. I am pretty."
The window is open. A little wasp flies into the room. Buzz, buzz, buzz. The wasp flies around the big room. Then, the wasp sees Doris. It flies around her yellow hair.
Doris is not happy. The buzz is in her ear. She stops looking in the mirror. "Go away, little wasp!" she says. She waves her hand fast. "Go away!" The wasp flies from her hand.
But the wasp does not go out. It flies near her again. "Don't be mad," buzzes the little wasp. "You are so pretty. You are like a big, red flower. You look very sweet."
Doris stops waving her hand. She smiles. "A flower?" she says. "You think I am a flower?" She looks at the little wasp. "You are a smart wasp. You are a nice wasp. You can stay."
The little wasp is happy. "Thank you, nice lady!" he buzzes. He flies a happy circle. He flies out the open window. He flies home. He sees his friends. "The lady is nice!" he buzzes. "She is pretty like a flower! She has juice for us! Come with me!"
Soon, many, many wasps come. The air is full of wasps. Buzz, buzz, buzz! The sound is loud now. They fly into the big room. They fly all around Doris. Doris has sweet red juice. The wasps smell the juice. They drink it.
Doris laughs. She claps her hands. "So many friends!" she says. "They all think I am pretty!" One wasp lands on her hand. It looks for juice. Doris moves her hand. The little wasp is scared. Ouch! The wasp stings her hand.
"Ouch! Ouch! My hand!" Doris shouts. Her hand hurts a lot. She is mad and sad. "Go away!" she shouts. "Go away, bad wasps!" All the wasps are scared. They fly out the window. The room is quiet. Doris looks at her red hand. A tear runs down her face. Doris is sad.
Original Story
FABLE VIII.
Lady and Wasp.
What stupid nonsense must the Beauty
Endure in her diurnal duty—
Buzzings and whispers from the stores
Of the fatuities of bores!
Yet such impertinence must be pleasing,
Or Beauty would resent such teazing.
A flap will drive a fly away,
A frown will drive a dog to bay:
So if the insects are persistent
'Twas Beauty that was inconsistent!
And if she does not know herself,
Blame not the persecuting elf.
It chanced upon a summer day
That Boris in her boudoir lay—
She the last work of God's fair creatures,
Contemplated her faultless features.
A wasp assailed her so reclined,
Bred of a persecuting kind.
He now advanced, and now retreated,
Till Beauty's neck and face grew heated;
She smote him with her fan: she said
Wasps were excessively ill bred.
But the wasp answered her: "Alas!
Before you blame me, view your glass.
'Twas beauty caused me to presume;
Those cherry lips, that youthful bloom,
Allured me from the plums and peaches
To Beauty, which the soul o'erreaches."
"Don't hit him, Jenny!" Doris cried:
"The race of wasps is much belied;
I must recant what I have said,—
Wasps are remarkably well bred."
Away Sir Sting fled, and went boasting
Amongst his fellows—Doris toasting;
And as his burgundy he sips,
He showed the sugar on his lips.
Away the greedy host then gathered,
Where they thought dalliance fair was feathered.
They fluttered round her, sipped her tea,
And lived in quarters fair and free;
Nor were they banished, till she found
That wasps had stings and felt the wound.
Story DNA
Moral
Those who encourage flattery will eventually suffer its negative consequences.
Plot Summary
A beautiful woman named Doris, though seemingly annoyed by persistent admirers, secretly enjoys their flattery. When a wasp bothers her, she initially swats it, but when the wasp attributes its persistence to her irresistible beauty, Doris is flattered and allows it to stay. The emboldened wasp then invites a swarm of its fellows, who enjoy Doris's hospitality. Doris only realizes her mistake and banishes them after she is stung, learning that encouraging flattery can lead to painful consequences.
Themes
Emotional Arc
complacency to irritation to realization
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
John Gay was known for his satirical fables, often critiquing societal norms and human follies of his time.
Plot Beats (10)
- The narrator introduces the idea that a beautiful woman, despite complaining, secretly enjoys the attention of 'bores' and 'insects,' implying her inconsistency if she doesn't drive them away.
- Doris, a beautiful woman, is admiring her features in her boudoir.
- A wasp repeatedly approaches and retreats from her, causing her to become agitated.
- Doris hits the wasp with her fan and calls it ill-bred.
- The wasp replies, stating that Doris's beauty, particularly her lips and bloom, is what attracted it.
- Doris, flattered by the wasp's words, changes her opinion, declares wasps well-bred, and prevents her maid Jenny from harming it.
- The wasp, Sir Sting, flies off to boast to his fellow wasps about Doris's hospitality and the 'sugar on her lips'.
- A swarm of wasps gathers around Doris, enjoying her tea and company.
- Doris tolerates the wasps until they sting her.
- Only after being stung does Doris banish the wasps, learning a painful lesson.
Characters
Doris ★ protagonist
Of slender build and graceful posture, she possesses a delicate beauty. Her skin is fair and unblemished, with a natural flush that hints at her youth and vitality. She is likely of European descent, given the context of the fable.
Attire: She is found in her 'boudoir,' suggesting she is dressed in elegant, comfortable attire suitable for private chambers, such as a silk dressing gown or a delicate muslin chemise, possibly with lace trim, in soft pastel colors. Later, when entertaining, she would wear a more formal gown of silk or brocade, perhaps a wide-skirted robe à la française, in rich colors appropriate for her status.
Wants: To be admired and to maintain her perceived beauty and social standing. She desires attention and validation.
Flaw: Her vanity and susceptibility to flattery. She is easily swayed by compliments, even from a wasp, and fails to recognize true danger until it's too late.
She begins as a vain woman annoyed by a 'persecuting' wasp, then becomes flattered and naive, inviting more wasps, and finally learns a painful lesson about the dangers of unchecked flattery and superficial judgment.
Vain, easily flattered, initially dismissive, later naive, and ultimately regretful. She enjoys admiration but lacks discernment.
Image Prompt & Upload
A young adult woman of European descent, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a finely sculpted face with full, red 'cherry lips' and bright eyes. Her fair skin has a natural rosy blush. Her hair is styled in soft curls, perhaps powdered, and piled elegantly. She wears an elegant 18th-century silk dressing gown in a soft pastel blue, trimmed with white lace, over a delicate muslin chemise. She holds a delicate ivory fan in her right hand, slightly open. Her expression is one of delicate vanity, with a hint of a self-satisfied smile. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Boris ⚔ antagonist
A typical wasp: slender body with a distinct narrow 'waist,' two pairs of membranous wings, six legs, and a prominent stinger at the abdomen's end. His body is segmented, with a shiny black and yellow striped pattern. He is small but agile.
Attire: Natural chitinous exoskeleton, black and yellow striped.
Wants: To gain access to sweet things and comfortable living, achieved through flattery and deception.
Flaw: His greed and overconfidence, which lead him to exploit Doris's vanity.
He begins as an individual pest, successfully flatters Doris, and then becomes a leader, bringing his greedy host to exploit her further, ultimately causing her harm.
Presumptuous, flattering, boastful, cunning, and ultimately predatory. He is driven by self-interest and pleasure.
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A single wasp, full body visible from head to toe, facing forward. It has a slender, segmented body with distinct black and bright yellow stripes. Two pairs of translucent, veined wings are spread slightly. Six delicate legs are visible. Its head features large, multifaceted compound eyes and short antennae. A prominent stinger is visible at the end of its abdomen. A tiny speck of white 'sugar' is visible on its mouthparts. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Jenny ○ minor
Likely a lady's maid or servant, she would have a practical, perhaps slightly worn, appearance. Her build would be average, and her posture deferential but capable.
Attire: A simple, practical linen or wool gown in muted colors, perhaps a brown or grey, with a white apron and a plain cap covering her hair, consistent with 18th-century servant attire.
Wants: To serve her mistress, Doris.
Flaw: Her subservience to Doris, which prevents her from acting independently.
Remains a static character, serving as a silent witness and recipient of Doris's instructions.
Obedient, observant, and perhaps a little wary, but ultimately follows her mistress's lead.
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A mature adult woman of European descent, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a plain, unadorned face with a neutral expression. Her hair is completely covered by a simple white linen cap. She wears a practical, long-sleeved grey linen gown with a high neckline, and a clean white apron tied at her waist. Her posture is respectful and slightly deferential. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Boris's Boudoir
A private, luxurious room where Boris, a beautiful lady, reclines and admires herself. It is a place of comfort and vanity.
Mood: Luxurious, self-admiring, initially serene but becomes agitated
Boris is admiring her features when she is first assailed by the wasp, leading to her initial irritation and the wasp's explanation.
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A lavish 18th-century English boudoir, with soft, natural light filtering through tall, draped windows. A chaise lounge upholstered in rich silk sits prominently, and a large, ornate gilded mirror reflects the room. Delicate porcelain figurines and silver trinkets adorn a polished mahogany dressing table. The air feels warm and still. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Wasp's Den/Gathering Place
A place where Sir Sting boasts to his fellow wasps about his encounter with Doris, sharing the 'sugar' from her lips while sipping burgundy.
Mood: Boastful, convivial, greedy, buzzing with activity
Sir Sting gathers his fellow wasps and encourages them to seek out Doris, leading to the subsequent swarm.
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A hidden, sun-dappled nook within a lush English garden, perhaps beneath the broad leaves of a burdock plant or nestled amongst overgrown roses. Tiny droplets of dew or spilled nectar glisten on green leaves and petals. The ground is soft earth and scattered fallen petals. The light is warm and dappled, suggesting a lazy summer afternoon. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Doris's Quarters
A comfortable, fair, and free living space where Doris entertains the wasps, offering them tea, until she realizes their true nature and feels their stings.
Mood: Initially welcoming and naive, becoming chaotic and painful
Doris, initially charmed by the wasps, allows them to stay and sip her tea, only to discover their stinging nature.
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A bright, airy drawing-room in an 18th-century English country house, with large sash windows open to a summer breeze. A small, elegant tea table is set with delicate porcelain cups and a silver teapot. Sunlight streams across the polished wooden floorboards, illuminating dust motes in the air. The walls are adorned with light floral wallpaper. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.