FABLE XLV

by John Gay · from Fables of John Gay (Somewhat Altered)

fable moral tale satirical Ages all ages 271 words 2 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 400 words 2 min Canon 100/100

A man walks in a garden. The sun is warm and bright. The grass is very green. He sees many flowers. He sees a red rose. The rose is very pretty. He touches the soft red flower. He picks the rose from the bush.

The man is very happy. He holds the pretty rose. He holds it with care. He starts to sing a song. It is a quiet song. The song is for the rose. He sings about his good friend. "Rose, go to my friend," he sings. "I will give you to her. She is very kind and nice. She will be happy to see you."

The song says his friend is pretty. The man smiles as he sings. "My friend is very pretty," he sings. "Her smile is like the sun. Her eyes are bright stars. She is more pretty than you, rose."

The man's song becomes a little sad. He looks down at the rose. Its red head is bent down. He thinks the rose is sad too. "Are you sad, little rose?" he sings. "Are you sad about my friend?"

The rose hears the whole song. It is not happy at all. The little rose moves. The rose can talk! It looks right at the man. Its voice is small but clear. "Wait!" it says to the man. "That is not a nice song. Do not say I am pretty. Then say your friend is more pretty."

The rose asks a question. Its voice is a little stronger now. "Why is my name in your song? You do not sing about me. You sing about your friend." The rose waits for a moment. "You should sing a nice song. Sing a song just for your friend. Do not use my name in it."

The rose asks another big question. "Is your friend prettier if I am not? Does my sadness make her pretty? I do not think so."

“Do I have to be sad?” it asked. “Does that make your friend happy?” The rose stood up very tall. It lifted its red head high. "My beauty is my own," it said. "I am pretty too."

The man was very quiet. His song was finished now. He looked at the smart, pretty rose. He thinks for a long time. The rose is not sad now. It stands tall in his hand. The rose looks happy now.

Original Story 271 words · 2 min read

FABLE XLV.

Rose and Poet.

I scorn the man who builds his fame

On ruins of another's name:

As prudes, who prudishly declare

They by a sister scandaled are;

As scribblers, covetous of praise,

By slandering, snatch themselves the bays;

Beauties and bards, alike, are prone

To snatch at honours not their own.

As Lesbia listens, all the whister,

To hear some scandal of a sister.

How can soft souls, which sigh for sueings,

Rejoice at one another's ruins?

As, in the merry month of May,

A bard enjoyed the break of day,

And quaffed the fragrant scents ascending,

He plucked a blossomed rose, transcending

All blossoms else; it moved his tongue

To rhapsodize, and thus he sung:

"Go, rose, and lie

On Chloë's bosom, and be there caressed;

For there would I,

Like to a turtle-dove, aye flee to nest

From jealousy

And carking care, by which I am opprest.

There lie—repose

Upon a bosom fragrant and as fair;

Nor rival those

Beauties ethereal you discover there.

For wherefore, rose,

Should you, as I, be subject to despair?"

* * * *

"Spare your comparisons—oh! spare—

Of me and fragrancy and fair!"

A Maiden-blush, which heard him, said,

With face unwontedly flushed red.

"Tell me, for what committed wrong

Am I the metaphor of song?

I would you could write rhymes without me,

Nor in your ecstacies so flout me.

In every ditty must we bloom?

Can't you find elsewhere some perfume?

Oh! does it add to Chloë's sweetness

To visit and compare my meetness?

And, to enhance her face, must mine

Be made to wither, peak, and pine?"


Story DNA fable · satirical

Moral

True beauty and worth should not be diminished or compared to elevate another, nor should one build their fame on the ruins of another's name.

Plot Summary

The fable begins with a moral against building one's reputation by slandering others. A poet, enjoying a spring day, plucks a rose and sings a rhapsodic poem, primarily using the rose as a metaphor to praise his beloved Chloë's beauty, subtly implying the rose is lesser. Overhearing, a personified Maiden-blush rose indignantly confronts the poet, questioning why its own beauty must be diminished and made to 'wither, peak, and pine' simply to enhance another's, challenging the poet's self-centered artistic practice.

Themes

jealousyenvyself-worthoriginality

Emotional Arc

complacency to indignation

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader, rhyme, personification, didactic opening

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking rose
the rose (symbol of beauty, metaphor)Chloë (symbol of idealized, perhaps superficial, beauty)the poet (symbol of the artist, sometimes self-absorbed)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: 18th century

John Gay was an English poet and dramatist, known for his satirical fables and 'The Beggar's Opera'. This fable reflects the literary and social critiques prevalent in 18th-century England, particularly regarding plagiarism, envy, and superficial praise.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. The narrator introduces the theme of building one's fame or beauty by diminishing others, comparing it to gossips and envious scribblers.
  2. On a May morning, a poet plucks a beautiful rose.
  3. The poet begins to sing a poem, addressing the rose.
  4. He instructs the rose to lie on Chloë's bosom, expressing his own desire to be there.
  5. He compares the rose's fragrance and fairness to Chloë's, suggesting the rose should not rival her 'ethereal beauties'.
  6. The poet questions why the rose, like him, should be subject to despair.
  7. A Maiden-blush rose, having overheard the song, speaks up, her face flushed.
  8. The rose asks the poet to spare his comparisons of her to fragrancy and fairness.
  9. She questions why she is always made a metaphor in his songs.
  10. The rose expresses a wish that poets could write without constantly using her as a bloom or perfume.
  11. She asks if it truly adds to Chloë's sweetness to compare her to the rose.
  12. The rose concludes by asking if her face must wither and pine to enhance Chloë's.

Characters 3 characters

The Poet ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Of average height and slender build, with the slightly stooped posture of someone often lost in thought or writing. His hands might be stained with ink.

Attire: Simple, practical attire for a man of letters in 18th-century England: a plain linen shirt, perhaps a waistcoat of muted wool, and breeches. His clothes are well-worn but clean, suggesting a modest but respectable existence.

Wants: To find inspiration for his poetry and to express his admiration for beauty, particularly that of Chloë.

Flaw: His tendency to use others (even a rose) as mere metaphors for his own artistic expression, without considering their independent value or feelings. He is somewhat oblivious to the impact of his words.

He begins the story as an unthinking romantic, using the rose as a mere prop for his affections. He is challenged by the Rose's unexpected retort, implying a potential for him to learn greater empathy and self-awareness in his art, though the fable ends before his full transformation.

A young man with a quill pen tucked behind his ear, holding a freshly plucked rose, with a thoughtful, slightly distant expression.

Romantic, observant, somewhat self-absorbed, appreciative of beauty, and prone to grand declarations.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has dark, slightly disheveled shoulder-length hair, a pale, intellectual face, and observant dark eyes. He wears a plain cream linen shirt, a muted green wool waistcoat, and brown breeches. A quill pen is tucked behind his right ear. He holds a single, freshly plucked red rose in his right hand, looking at it with a thoughtful, slightly dreamy expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Maiden-blush Rose ◆ supporting

flower ageless non-human

A fully blossomed, vibrant red rose, with delicate, unfurling petals. It is described as 'transcending all blossoms else,' implying exceptional beauty and perfection in its form.

Attire: Its natural form as a flower, with its rich red petals and green stem and leaves.

Wants: To be recognized for its own inherent beauty and worth, rather than being a tool for someone else's flattery or poetic expression. It desires respect for its individuality.

Flaw: Its physical vulnerability to being plucked and its inability to escape its fate as a flower, making it dependent on human perception.

It begins as a silent object of beauty, then transforms into an active participant by speaking out against its objectification, asserting its own value.

A single, perfectly formed, deep red rose, with its petals appearing to deepen in color as if blushing with indignation.

Sensitive, articulate, indignant, self-aware, and surprisingly assertive. It resents being objectified or used as a mere comparison.

Image Prompt & Upload
A single, vibrant red rose, fully bloomed, with perfectly formed petals. Its petals are a rich, deep crimson, appearing to blush intensely. It has a sturdy green stem with a few green leaves. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Chloë ○ minor

human young adult female

Implied to be of exceptional beauty, as the Poet wishes the rose to lie on her 'bosom fragrant and as fair' and refers to her 'beauties ethereal.' She is the epitome of conventional feminine beauty of the 18th century.

Attire: Though not explicitly described, as a muse for a poet, she would be imagined in the finest contemporary fashion: a gown of silk or brocade, perhaps in soft pastels, with a fitted bodice and wide skirts, adorned with lace and ribbons, reflecting the elegance of 18th-century English society.

Wants: Not applicable, as she is an unseen character and a muse.

Flaw: Not applicable.

She remains an idealized, static figure throughout the fable, serving as the object of the Poet's affections.

A woman's delicate hand, perhaps adorned with a ring, resting gently on her chest, symbolizing her unseen presence and the Poet's desire for the rose to be near her.

Her personality is not revealed, as she is only an idealized object of affection and comparison. She represents the conventional standard of beauty.

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A young woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a delicate, fair complexion, with soft, elegant features and large, expressive eyes. Her hair is styled in soft curls, powdered and piled high, adorned with a ribbon. She wears a flowing gown of pale blue silk, with a fitted bodice, lace trim, and wide skirts. Her posture is graceful and refined. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
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Poet's Garden

outdoor morning Merry month of May, clear and fragrant

A vibrant garden, likely English in style, filled with various blossoms, particularly roses, in the fresh light of a May morning. The air is filled with fragrant scents.

Mood: Idyllic, fresh, inspiring, slightly melancholic due to the poet's internal thoughts

The poet enjoys the break of day, plucks a rose, and begins to sing a rhapsodic poem comparing the rose to Chloë's beauty, which offends a nearby 'Maiden-blush' rose.

Blossomed roses Fragrant ascending scents Morning light Lush greenery
Image Prompt & Upload
A sun-drenched English cottage garden in full bloom on a clear May morning. Dew-kissed rose bushes with vibrant red and pink blossoms dominate the foreground, their petals unfurling. Beyond, a winding gravel path leads through beds of various fragrant flowers, with soft, diffused sunlight filtering through the leaves of a distant oak tree. The air shimmers with a gentle warmth. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.