Up in the Cloud-Land
by Katharine Pyle · from As the Goose Flies
Adapted Version
Ellen walked. Her White Gander walked with her. A naughty Goat followed too. Ellen came to a house. It was near the forest. She wanted to leave the Goat there. The Goat was a bit bad. Ellen hoped someone would help.
A kind woman sat on the porch. This was Jack's Mother. Jack was her son. They heard a sad sound. It was very far away. The sound made them worried. Jack's Mother looked sad. Jack looked scared.
Jack's Mother told Ellen a story. Jack cut a very tall plant. It went up to the sky. A kind, little old lady lived there. She was all alone now. She could not get down. She felt very lonely up high. That was her sad sound.
The White Gander spoke to Ellen. "I can fly," he said. "I can take you up high. We can help her." Ellen liked this idea. Jack and his Mother were very happy. They felt much hope now.
Ellen got on the White Gander. She held on tight. The gander flew up. Up, up, high in the sky they went. The world below grew small. They came to a quiet place. It was empty and gray. This was Cloud-Land.
They saw the Little Old Lady. She stood all alone. Her eyes were wide. She was so happy to see Ellen. "Are you real?" she asked. She felt so lonely up there. "I want to go home!" she cried. She was very glad.
The White Gander shook his head. "I cannot carry her," he said. "My wings are not strong enough." She smiled. "I have a rope," she said. "I made it myself. It is long and strong."
The Little Old Lady brought a basket. It was a big basket. Ellen tied the rope to it. The White Gander helped. They tied the rope to a tree. The knots were very tight. It was safe now.
The Little Old Lady got in the basket. She was a little scared. Ellen held the rope. The White Gander helped. They let the rope go slowly. Down, down she went. The basket went out of sight.
The Little Old Lady was safe. She was on the ground. Ellen got on the gander again. They flew down fast. Jack and his Mother waited. Everyone was so happy. They all smiled big.
Jack's Mother thanked Ellen. "What reward do you want?" she asked. Ellen did not want money. She asked for two things. "Please keep the Goat," she said. "Be kind to him." She asked for directions.
The Little Old Lady spoke. "You must take this," she said. She gave Ellen a special egg. It was bright yellow gold. It shone like the sun. "It is my thank you gift," she said. She was very grateful.
Ellen took the golden egg. She said goodbye to all. She got on the White Gander. They flew off fast. Ellen was happy. She had helped a friend. She had a special egg.
Being kind and clever can help others. It can bring good things to you.
Original Story
Up in the Cloud-Land
Ellen walked on toward the forest, followed by the white gander and the goat. She wondered what she could do with the goat. She could not take it with her, and if she turned it loose it would go and worry some other animals, she was sure.
Over toward the right at the very edge of the wood was a house. Ellen thought perhaps the people who lived there would take care of the goat, so she went over toward it.
When she reached the house, she found it was a very comfortable one with a porch covered with vines, and a stable and out-buildings at the back.
On the porch sat a gray-haired woman dressed in silk. She was looking up toward the quiet sky and listening to music that sounded from within the house. Ellen had never heard such beautiful music in all her life. As long as it sounded she could do nothing but stand and listen. Through the open window the little girl could see the top of a golden harp. She supposed some one must be playing on it, but she had never known before that any one in the world could play as beautifully as that.
When the music stopped the woman on the porch stirred and sighed. Then she lowered her eyes and her gaze fell upon Ellen. She rose and came to the edge of the porch. "Good-morning, child," she said. "Did you want to see me?"
"Yes," said Ellen. "I wanted to know whether you didn't want a goat."
"Why, no," answered the woman with some surprise, "I don't. We have all the animals about the place that we want."
"I wish you would take this one," urged Ellen. "I don't know what to do with it."
"How do you come to be leading it about the country? Is it your goat?"
"Not exactly." She began to tell the woman all her story of how she had followed the little pig to the village; of how she had found the animals were being worried by the goat, and of how she had made it come away with her. It all sounded so strange, Ellen was half afraid the woman would not believe it. She did not seem to think it surprising, however; but when Ellen had ended she shook her head. "No," she said; "we wouldn't want such a mischievous animal about, I'm sure; but I'll ask my son." Then she called, "Jack, Jack!"
In answer a tall, stout lad came to the door. "What is it, mother?" he asked.
"Here's a child who has a goat, and she says this, that, and the other" (and the woman repeated Ellen's story). "Now the end of the matter is, she wants to leave the goat here with us."
"I don't see how we can—" began the lad slowly, when suddenly he stopped and listened intently with a strange, scared look on his face.
His mother caught him by the arm. "What is it, Jack?" she cried. "What are you listening to? It isn't—"
Jack nodded without answering.
And now all listened, and Ellen knew that a sound she had heard some minutes before, without particularly noticing it, was the voice of some one weeping and complaining. The voice was very faint and far off, but in the silence the little girl could make out the words, "I can't get down! I can't get down! Woe is me, but it's lonely up here." Ellen could not tell where the voice came from, but it seemed to come from the sky. There was silence for a moment and then it began again lamenting and weeping.
The woman threw her silk apron over her head and began to rock herself and sob. "Oh, the poor thing! I can't stand it, Jack," she cried. "You've got to get her down somehow. You've got to."
The lad had turned somewhat pale. "What can I do, mother?" he asked. "You know I've tried everything I know, but there's never a ladder in all the world that would reach that far, and we have no more such beans as those."
"Who is it?" asked Ellen in a whisper.
The woman put down her apron and wiped her eyes. "It's that giant's poor wife," she answered. "You see it all came from Jack's selling our cow for a hatful of beans. I punished him well for it, but what good did that do? Then he planted them, and one of them grew so fast it grew right up to the sky."
"Oh; Jack and the Beanstalk!" cried Ellen.
"Then nothing would do but Jack must climb up and see what was at the top of the beanstalk. He climbed and he climbed," the woman went on, her voice broken by sobs, "until at last he climbed right up to the sky. There he found a wonderful country and a giant had a castle there. The giant was very rich. Besides his other treasures he had two bags of golden money, a golden hen, and a golden harp that played of itself. Perhaps you heard the harp playing as you came up."
"Yes, I did," said Ellen.
"All these things Jack managed to steal, one at a time, and brought them down the beanstalk with him. That was all right enough, for those things had once belonged to Jack's father, and had been stolen from him by the giant. Jack had no trouble in getting away with the bags of money and the hen, but the time he brought the harp the giant discovered him and chased him. He came clambering down the beanstalk after the lad, and would have killed us both without doubt, but Jack ran in and got a hatchet and chopped down the beanstalk. The giant, who was only half way down, fell with it and was killed, and I never was sorry for him a moment, for he was a wicked, cruel giant. The only thing I grieve about is his poor wife. She was so good to Jack, and now she is left there all alone in the giant's house, and no way of getting her down again, as far as I can see."
The woman began to sob again more bitterly than ever. As for Jack, he turned away and, putting his arm against the wall, hid his face in it.
The white gander plucked Ellen by the skirt. "Mistress, Mistress! Come with me a moment," he whispered.
Ellen followed him a little apart.
"I think I might help you to get the giant's wife down," he said.
"How would you do it?"
"Do you mount upon my back and I'll fly up there with you, for wings can fly where never ladder can reach. When we're once up there we'll soon find some way to get her down."
Ellen was pleased with this advice, and returning to the porch she told Jack and his mother what the gander had said.
They were filled with joy and gratitude. "If you only will get her down there is nothing you can ask for that we will not give you," cried the mother, "even the golden harp itself."
Ellen seated herself upon the gander's back and gathered the reins into her fingers. Then the bird spread its strong wings and rose in the air. Up and up it flew. The sky seemed to grow nearer and Jack and his mother and the old bald goat shrank to mere specks below.
Up, up, until Ellen grew dizzy with the height and closed her eyes.
There was a slight jar, and then the gander spoke, "Mistress, we are here."
Ellen unclosed her eyes and looked about her. She was in a wide gray country, such as she had never seen before. Everything about her was gray, the trees, the grass, the streams and sky—everything; and not far away was a gigantic, shadowy gray castle.
Close to where the gander had alighted stood a little old woman with her hands clasped. She was looking at Ellen with wide, wondering eyes. Presently she came nearer, and timidly stretching out her hand she touched Ellen with her finger. "Are you real, or are you only a dream?" she asked.
"Why I'm real, of course," said Ellen.
The little old woman caught her by the arm and began to sob with joy. "Oh, I'm so glad, so glad," she cried. "I've been so lonely up here. You won't go away and leave me here alone again, will you?"
"I've come to take you down," said Ellen.
"Oh, that's better still. It's many a long and weary year since my foot has been on the dear green grass. But how will you get me down?"
"I thought maybe the gander would carry us," said Ellen, but the white gander shook his head.
"No, no; my wings are not strong enough for that, and if I should fall we would all three break our necks."
"Then what shall we do?"
"I have a rope," said the little old woman timidly. "While I have been up here alone I spent my time making it, and now I think it is long enough. I often thought I would try to lower myself to the earth by it, but I was afraid."
Ellen looked at the gander. "That might do," he said. "Bring it here, and bring a basket, too; the biggest one you have."
The little old woman hastened away, and in a short time returned with the rope and a basket.
"Now tie them together," said the gander.
Ellen and the old woman did this, seeing to it that the knots were tight.
Then the white gander made Ellen twist the rope around a tree, so that the basket would hang down just over the cloudy edge of the sky country.
"Now get in the basket," said the gander.
The little old woman looked rather frightened, but she did as she was bid. Then the gander and Ellen began to let the rope slip, and as it slipped the basket slowly sank from sight. The weight did not seem great because of the rope's being twisted about the tree.
Down and down went the basket and the little old woman in it; down and down went the rope. Ellen thought they never would get done letting it slip. At last there was no more pull on it. "She has reached the ground," said the gander. "And now, mistress, get on my back and we will fly down."
"Oh, I'm almost afraid, we are so far up."
"Shut your eyes and hold me by the neck."
Ellen seated herself upon the gander's back. Then she clasped her arms about its neck and closed her eyes, as she was bid and then the gander flew out over the edge of the cloud-land.
It took but a little while for them to find themselves once more down in front of the vine-covered porch, and there was the little old woman with Jack and his mother, and they were joyful indeed.
"And now what will you have as a reward?" asked Jack's mother. "Will you have the golden harp? Or will you have a bag of golden money? Or what?"
But Ellen said she would not take anything, for she did not wish to burden down the gander. All she asked was that they would keep the goat and be kind to him, and that they would tell her how to get to the Queerbodies' House.
"The first I will gladly do," said Jack's mother, "but as to the second, all I can tell you is that the Queerbodies' House lies on the other side of the forest; but if you ask the forest folk, no doubt they can direct you how to go."
"This you must take at least," cried the little old woman; "it is all I brought from the gray country." She lifted her skirt, and from the pocket of the petticoat beneath she drew out an egg. It was just the size of a hen's egg and shaped like one, but Ellen exclaimed with admiration when she saw it, for it was all of pure yellow gold, and shone like glass. "Take it," said the little old woman, "I have no need of it now, for Jack and his mother have promised that I shall live here with them and share all that they have. You see you can easily carry this."
Ellen took the egg and thanked the little old woman. Then bidding good-by to all, she seated herself upon her gander, and away they flew so swiftly that almost immediately the vine-covered house was far away, and they found themselves at the edge of the deep, green forest.
Story DNA
Moral
Kindness and resourcefulness can lead to unexpected rewards and help those in need.
Plot Summary
Ellen, traveling with a gander and a troublesome goat, arrives at a house where she learns of the giant's wife, stranded in Cloud-Land since Jack chopped down the beanstalk. Moved by compassion, Ellen and her gander fly to the desolate Cloud-Land, find the lonely giant's wife, and devise a plan to lower her to Earth using a rope and basket she had made. After successfully reuniting the giant's wife with Jack and his mother, Ellen declines material rewards, asking only for the goat to be cared for and directions to her next destination, receiving a golden egg as a token of gratitude before continuing her journey.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is a sequel or continuation of the 'Jack and the Beanstalk' fairy tale, exploring the aftermath from a different perspective.
Plot Beats (13)
- Ellen, with a gander and a troublesome goat, approaches a house at the edge of a forest, hoping to leave the goat there.
- She meets a woman and her son, Jack, who are distressed by a distant weeping sound.
- The woman explains the weeping is from the giant's wife, trapped in Cloud-Land after Jack chopped down the beanstalk, and recounts the story of Jack and the Beanstalk.
- Ellen's gander volunteers to fly Ellen to Cloud-Land to rescue the giant's wife, to the joy of Jack and his mother.
- Ellen mounts the gander, and they fly high above the world into a gray, desolate Cloud-Land.
- They find the lonely giant's wife, who is overjoyed to see Ellen and eager to return to Earth.
- The gander states he cannot carry the giant's wife, but she reveals she has a long rope she made.
- They retrieve a basket, tie it to the rope, and secure the rope around a tree.
- The giant's wife gets into the basket, and Ellen and the gander slowly lower her down to Earth.
- Once the giant's wife is safely on the ground, Ellen and the gander fly down to rejoin her, Jack, and his mother.
- Jack's mother offers Ellen a reward, but Ellen declines, asking only for the goat to be kept and directions to the Queerbodies' House.
- The giant's wife insists Ellen take a golden egg as a personal token of gratitude.
- Ellen accepts the egg, bids farewell, and flies off with the gander towards the forest to continue her journey.
Characters
Ellen ★ protagonist
A young girl of average height and build for her age, with a curious and determined demeanor. Her movements are purposeful, reflecting her journey.
Attire: Simple, practical attire suitable for a child traveling through the countryside. Perhaps a sturdy linen or wool dress in muted colors, possibly with an apron, and comfortable walking shoes or boots. Nothing elaborate or decorative.
Wants: To find a home for the mischievous goat, to help those in need (the Giant's Wife), and to continue her journey to the Queerbodies' House.
Flaw: Can be easily swayed by the plight of others, sometimes taking on burdens that aren't hers (like the goat).
She begins by trying to solve a small problem (the goat) and ends up performing a heroic act (rescuing the Giant's Wife), demonstrating her growing courage and selflessness. She learns the value of her own kindness and resourcefulness.
Curious, resourceful, empathetic, persistent, brave.
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A young girl with a curious expression, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a round, youthful face with wide, observant eyes. Her hair is a practical, tied-back style. She wears a sturdy, simple linen dress in a muted blue, with a plain brown apron over it, and worn leather walking boots. She holds a small, smooth golden egg in her right hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
White Gander ◆ supporting
A large, strong white gander with powerful wings, capable of carrying a child. Its feathers are pristine white, and it has a long, graceful neck and a distinctive orange beak and webbed feet.
Attire: Its natural white feathers.
Wants: To help Ellen, whom he seems to serve as a companion and guide.
Flaw: Physical limitations, such as not being strong enough to carry two people.
Remains a steadfast and helpful companion, demonstrating his loyalty and intelligence throughout the journey.
Intelligent, resourceful, loyal, brave, a bit cautious (especially regarding weight limits).
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A large, majestic white gander standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has pristine white feathers, a long, graceful neck, and a bright orange beak. Its eyes are intelligent and observant. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Goat ○ minor
An old, bald goat, suggesting some age or wear. Its fur is likely coarse and possibly patchy due to its 'bald' description. It has horns typical of a goat.
Attire: Its natural fur.
Wants: To cause trouble or simply follow its own whims.
Flaw: Its inherent mischievousness makes it undesirable to others.
Remains a troublesome animal, eventually finding a home with Jack and his mother.
Mischievous, troublesome, stubborn.
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An old, somewhat bald goat standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has coarse, patchy fur in shades of brown and grey, with typical goat horns and a small beard. Its eyes hold a mischievous glint. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Jack's Mother ◆ supporting
A gray-haired woman, likely of a slender to average build, showing signs of age. Her face would show lines of worry and past hardship, but also kindness.
Attire: Dressed in silk, indicating a comfortable, if not wealthy, status. This would be a modest, well-maintained dress in a soft color, perhaps a deep blue or green, with a practical apron over it. The silk would be of good quality, but not overly ornate, reflecting her practical nature despite her comfort.
Wants: To see her son safe and to alleviate the suffering of the Giant's Wife, and to maintain the comfort of her home.
Flaw: Her emotional nature, which can lead to distress and helplessness.
Moves from a state of sorrow and helplessness over the Giant's Wife to joy and gratitude after her rescue.
Kind, emotional, grateful, a bit prone to worry, practical.
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An elderly woman with a kind, aged face, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has soft gray hair neatly pulled back. She wears a modest, well-maintained silk dress in a deep blue, with a practical cream linen apron tied over it. Her expression is one of gentle worry, with a hint of underlying kindness. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Jack ◆ supporting
A tall, stout lad, indicating a strong, sturdy build. He is likely in his late teens or early twenties, with a youthful but capable appearance.
Attire: Practical, sturdy clothes suitable for a young man living in the countryside. Perhaps a linen shirt, wool breeches, and a simple jerkin or waistcoat in earthy tones, with sturdy leather boots.
Wants: To protect his mother, to right past wrongs (retrieving his father's treasures), and to help the Giant's Wife, though he feels helpless.
Flaw: His past trauma with the giant makes him fearful of the situation, leading to helplessness.
Starts feeling helpless and guilty about the Giant's Wife, but ends up joyful and grateful for her rescue, reaffirming his good nature.
Brave (from past adventures), somewhat impulsive (selling the cow), caring (for his mother and the Giant's Wife), easily scared by the giant's wife's cries, resourceful (chopping down the beanstalk).
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A tall, stout young man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build, a youthful face, and practical, slightly tousled brown hair. He wears a simple cream linen shirt, dark brown wool breeches, and sturdy leather boots. His expression is one of concern and a touch of fear. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Giant's Wife ◆ supporting
A little old woman, implying a small stature and frail appearance, likely thin from her long isolation. Her hands are clasped, showing her anxiety and hope.
Attire: Simple, worn clothing suitable for someone stranded for a long time. Perhaps a plain, faded dress and a petticoat, likely made of sturdy, undyed fabric, showing signs of wear and tear but kept as neat as possible. The petticoat has a pocket.
Wants: To escape her loneliness and return to earth.
Flaw: Her fear of descending by herself, her physical frailty.
Transforms from a lonely, weeping figure to a joyful, grateful woman who finds a new home.
Lonely, timid, grateful, resourceful (making the rope), kind (was good to Jack).
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A small, frail old woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a small, wrinkled face with wide, wondering eyes and disheveled white hair. She wears a plain, faded grey dress and a simple white petticoat with a visible pocket. Her hands are clasped in front of her, and her expression is timid but hopeful. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Jack's Cottage at the Edge of the Wood
A very comfortable, cozy cottage with a porch covered in lush green vines. Out-buildings and a stable are at the back. The interior, glimpsed through an open window, contains a golden harp. The overall impression is one of a well-kept, humble but comfortable home, likely a half-timbered Fachwerk house with a thatched roof, typical of German fairy tales, nestled by a forest.
Mood: Initially peaceful and musical, then shifts to anxious and sorrowful, finally joyful and grateful.
Ellen arrives with the goat, hears the golden harp, learns the story of Jack and the Beanstalk and the giant's wife, and agrees to help rescue her.
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A cozy, well-maintained half-timbered Fachwerk cottage with a steep thatched roof, its front porch heavily draped in flowering green vines. Sunlight streams from the upper left, casting warm light on the weathered wooden beams and white plaster walls. An open window reveals a glimpse of a golden harp inside. A small, well-trodden dirt path leads up to the porch. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Cloud-Land
A wide, desolate, and eerie gray country high above the earth. Everything is gray: the trees, the grass, the streams, and the sky. A gigantic, shadowy gray castle stands in the distance. The ground is likely soft and ethereal, perhaps like compacted clouds or ash.
Mood: Eerie, lonely, desolate, and slightly surreal due to the monochromatic grayness.
Ellen and the gander arrive to rescue the giant's wife. They devise a plan to lower her to the ground using a rope and basket.
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A vast, desolate landscape high above the earth, entirely rendered in shades of muted gray. Ethereal, wispy gray trees with gnarled branches stand on a soft, cloud-like gray ground. A faint, winding gray stream meanders through the landscape. In the distance, a gigantic, shadowy gray castle with indistinct features looms under a perpetually overcast gray sky. The light is flat and diffused, creating a sense of immense height and isolation. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.