KEMPION
by Katharine Pyle · from Fairy Tales from Many Lands
Adapted Version
There was a kind girl. Her name was Ellen. She was very, very pretty. She lived with her father. He loved her so much.
One day, her father got married again. The new wife was not kind. She was the Wicked Stepmother. She did not like Ellen. She did not like Ellen's pretty face.
The Wicked Stepmother was mean to Ellen. She had secret magic. She was a bad witch.
Then Ellen's father went on a trip. He went far, far away. Ellen was alone with the Wicked Stepmother.
Stepmother took Ellen to a big rock. The big rock was by the sea. The Wicked Stepmother used her bad magic. She turned Ellen into a dragon! The dragon was big. The dragon was scary. Poor Ellen!
The dragon lived in a dark cave. The cave was under the big rock. All the people were scared. They ran away from the dragon.
Far away, there lived Prince Kempion. He was brave. He was kind too. He heard about the scary dragon. "I will help!" he said. He got in a boat. He sailed to the big rock.
The dragon came out of the cave. It was so big! It was so strong! Fire came from its mouth.
Prince Kempion wanted to fight it. But then he saw the dragon's eyes. The eyes were sad. They were like a girl's eyes. He put his bow down.
Then the dragon talked! "Kiss me three times," it said. "Then the bad spell will break."
Prince Kempion was very brave. He put his weapon down. He climbed up the big rock. He climbed up to the dragon.
He kissed the dragon once. Its mouth was cold. He kissed the dragon twice. Its mouth was warm. He kissed the dragon three times.
Poof! The dragon was gone! Ellen was back! She was a girl again. Her gold hair was long and pretty. Her blue eyes were happy.
Prince Kempion took Ellen to his castle. The King was so happy to see them. Everyone was happy!
Ellen told everyone the truth. "Stepmother did this to me," she said. "She used bad magic."
The King sent Stepmother far away. She could never come back.
Ellen and Prince Kempion got married. They loved each other very much.
Love and bravery break bad magic! And good always wins over mean!
And Ellen and Prince Kempion lived happily ever after, full of love and joy!
Original Story
KEMPION
(From the Scotch Ballads)
ANGUS MAC PHERSON had one daughter, and she was so beautiful that it made the heart ache to look at her. Her hair was of red gold; her eyes were as blue as the sky and she was as slim and fair as a reed, and because of her beauty she was always called the Fair Ellen.
Angus Mac Pherson loved Fair Ellen as he did the apple of his eye, but all the same her mother had only been dead a year when he was for marrying again and bringing a stepmother into the house.
The new wife was handsome too, with eyes as black as sloes, and hair like a cloud at night, but the moment she saw Fair Ellen she knew the girl was the more beautiful, and she hated her with a bitter black hate for her beauty’s sake.
Well, they lived along, and Fair Ellen served her stepmother well. She served her with foot and she served her with hand. Everything that she could do for her she did, but the stepmother hated her worse and worse, and a powerful wicked witch was she.
Now it chanced that Angus Mac Pherson had to go on a far journey, and he would be away a long time. He said good-by to his wife and his daughter and then he started out, and no one was left in the house but those two alone.
After he had been gone a little while the stepmother said, “Come, Fair Ellen, we are both sad and down-hearted. Let us go out and walk upon the cliffs where the wind blows and the sun shines.”
Fair Ellen was ready enough to go, so they set out together.
They walked along and they walked along until they came to Estmere Crag, and always as they walked the stepmother’s lips moved as though she were talking to herself, but no word did she utter.
“What is that you say?” asked Fair Ellen.
“’Tis a rhyme I learned when I was young,” said the stepmother. “I was but minding myself of it.”
After awhile they reached the top of the crag, and the sea was far, far below them. Then the stepmother turned to Fair Ellen.
“Blue of eyes and fair of speech,” she cried; “you have crossed my path, and none may do that and have good come of it. You have crossed my path with your beauty, but with your beauty you shall cross it no longer.”
Fair Ellen stood and looked at her, and her heart grew cold within her, and she could stir neither hand nor foot.
The stepmother raised her hand and touched her. “A loathly worm you shall be,” she cried. “You shall dwell under Estmere Crag and the salt sea shall be your home, and bonowed[1] shall ye never be, till Kempion, the king’s own son, shall come to the crag and thrice kiss thee.”
Then the witch turned and walked down the crag, and back to her own home.
But the Fair Ellen was changed in her shape so that even her own father would have feared her. Her shape grew long, her breath was fire, and she became a scaly dragon. Down over Estmere Crag she swung, and deep in a cavern she hid herself, and the smoke rose from the cavern and everyone was afraid.
Now it was not long that she had been there when word came to the king’s palace that such a beast was in the land, and that all the country was wasted because of her. But none dared to go out against her because she was so terrible.
But Kempion, the king’s own son, was as brave a prince as ever lived. Handsome he was, too, and straight and tall.
Now when he heard of the great beast his heart rose within him, and he swore that he would go out to slay it, and Segramore, his brother, said that he would go with him.
They built themselves a bonny boat, for they could best come to the beast’s lair by sea, and they two set out together; they two and no other, for everyone else was afraid to go with them.
They sailed out and on and around, and so they came within sight of Estmere Crag, and there lay the great worm stretched in and out among the rocks. It was a gruesome sight, and with every breath it breathed, the crag was lit up as if by fire.
Kempion and his brother had scarce come within a mile of the land when the beast saw them, and raised itself. It opened its mouth and fire and flame poured forth. It swung its head to and fro and the sea was lashed into foam.
“Keep further out,” cried Kempion to his brother. “Keep further out, for this beast has sure gone mad at the sight of us; a little more and it will set fire to all the land.”
Then Segramore kept the boat off, and Kempion bent his arbalest bow and aimed an arrow at the head of the beast. He bent his bow, but the arrow stayed, for when he saw the eyes of the beast they were the eyes of a sorrowing maid, and they seemed to pierce to his very soul.
Nevertheless he kept his bow still bent and he called to it across the water, “Now, by my soul, unless you swear to me that you will quit my land, with this same shaft will I shoot you dead.”
Then the worm made answer,
“Out of my rocks I will not rise
Nor leave the land for fear of thee
Till over Estmere Crag ye come
And on my mouth three times kiss me.”
Then Kempion was like one distraught. He threw down his bow and bade his brother row back to the land. “I will go over the crag to you, beast,” he cried, “though I go to my death at the same time.”
Segramore begged and pleaded with him, but he would not listen. As soon as they came to the shore he leaped from the boat and all unarmed set out for Estmere Crag.
Up and up he climbed, and it was a dizzy height. Far, far below was the blue sea, and half way up from it the cavern where the beast made its lair. Kempion could see it there now, twisted among the rocks.
Out swung the great beast and around it came, the fiercest beast that ever was seen. The hair rose on Kempion’s head and he shut his eyes, for it was near him now. It came close and the fire was all about him, but it did not burn him. Then he kissed it.
He kissed it and the mouth was cold.
Out it swung and again it came.
“Out of my lair I will not rise,
I will not leave for fear of thee,
Oh, Kempion, you dear king’s son,
Till on the mouth you thrice kiss me.”
Then Kempion kissed the beast again and its lips were warm. The third time he kissed it, and its mouth was the mouth of a woman.
Then Kempion looked, and before him stood the most beautiful maid he had ever seen. Slim as a reed she was, and very fair, for her eyes were as blue as the sky, and her hair as bright as gold, and it fell all about her, and down to her knees like a mantle.
Then Kempion took his cloak and wrapped it about her. “You are my own true love,” he said, “and other maid I will marry none, for never have I seen such beauty and gentleness before.”
So he carried her up from Estmere Crag, and home to the palace of the king.
There, all was sorrow and mourning, for they thought that Kempion was surely dead. But when they saw him come into the hall, and saw the beautiful bride he had brought with him, all their sorrow was turned into rejoicing.
When they had heard how the young prince had broken the enchantment that had held Fair Ellen the old king turned to her. “Tell me, oh, my daughter,” he said, “was it mermaid in the sea, or was it werewolf in the wood, or some wicked man or wicked woman that wrought this cruel spell on thee?”
“It was not werewolf in the wood, it was not mermaid in the sea, but it was my wicked stepmother that wrought this cruel spell on me.”
Then said the king, “Punished shall she surely be; she shall be taken to the top of Estmere Crag, and thrown over into the sea, for such wickedness shall pollute my land no longer. But you, Fair Ellen, shall be the bride of my own dear son Kempion, and the half of all I have shall be yours and his forever.”
FOOTNOTE:
[1] Bonowed—ransomed or rescued.
Story DNA
Moral
True love and courage can break the most wicked enchantments and overcome evil.
Plot Summary
Fair Ellen, a girl of unmatched beauty, is cursed by her jealous stepmother, a wicked witch, and transformed into a terrifying dragon dwelling under Estmere Crag. Prince Kempion, a brave king's son, sets out to slay the beast but is moved by its sorrowful eyes. The dragon reveals the spell can only be broken by three kisses. Kempion, showing immense courage, climbs the crag and kisses the dragon three times, restoring Fair Ellen to her human form. They return to the palace, where Fair Ellen exposes her stepmother, who is then punished, and Fair Ellen and Kempion are set to marry.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is derived from Scotch Ballads, indicating a tradition of oral storytelling and poetic narrative.
Plot Beats (16)
- Fair Ellen, a girl of great beauty, lives with her father, Angus Mac Pherson.
- Angus remarries a beautiful but wicked woman who immediately hates Fair Ellen for her beauty.
- The stepmother, a powerful witch, treats Fair Ellen cruelly.
- Angus Mac Pherson departs on a long journey, leaving Fair Ellen alone with her stepmother.
- The stepmother takes Fair Ellen to Estmere Crag and, through a spell, transforms her into a terrifying scaly dragon.
- The dragon takes residence in a cavern under the crag, causing fear and devastation in the land.
- Prince Kempion, known for his bravery, hears of the beast and vows to slay it, despite his brother Segramore's apprehension.
- Kempion and Segramore sail to Estmere Crag, where the dragon confronts them with fire and fury.
- Kempion prepares to shoot the dragon but is stopped by the sorrowful, maiden-like eyes of the beast.
- The dragon speaks, revealing that it will not leave until Kempion comes to the crag and kisses it thrice.
- Kempion, despite his brother's pleas, disarms himself and climbs the treacherous Estmere Crag.
- Kempion kisses the fearsome dragon once, and its mouth is cold; he kisses it a second time, and its lips are warm.
- Upon the third kiss, the dragon transforms back into the beautiful Fair Ellen.
- Kempion takes Fair Ellen to his father's palace, where their arrival turns sorrow into rejoicing.
- Fair Ellen reveals her wicked stepmother was the one who cast the spell.
- The king orders the stepmother to be thrown from Estmere Crag into the sea as punishment, and declares Fair Ellen and Kempion will marry and inherit half his kingdom.
Characters
Fair Ellen ★ protagonist
Slim and fair, with a delicate build. Her beauty is so profound it 'made the heart ache to look at her'.
Attire: Initially, likely simple, modest attire befitting a Scottish maiden of the period, perhaps a linen gown or kirtle. After her transformation and rescue, she is wrapped in Kempion's cloak, suggesting she was without her own clothes.
Wants: To be free from the enchantment and return to her human form and normal life.
Flaw: Vulnerable to her stepmother's magic; her beauty makes her a target.
Transformed from a beautiful maiden into a terrifying dragon by her wicked stepmother, she is rescued by Kempion's bravery and love, returning to her human form and becoming a princess.
Obedient, sorrowful, gentle (even as a beast, her eyes convey sorrow). She is a victim of circumstance and her stepmother's malice.
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A young Scottish maiden standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a slender build, fair skin, and round, sky-blue eyes. Her very long, wavy red-gold hair cascades down to her knees. She wears a simple, cream-colored linen kirtle with long sleeves and a modest neckline. Her expression is gentle and slightly sorrowful. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Stepmother ⚔ antagonist
Handsome, but her beauty is overshadowed by her malice.
Attire: Likely fine, dark, and perhaps ornate clothing befitting a new wife of a landowner, possibly a dark wool gown with some embroidery, reflecting her sinister nature.
Wants: To eliminate Fair Ellen, whom she perceives as a rival in beauty, and secure her own position.
Flaw: Overwhelming envy and hatred, which ultimately lead to her downfall and punishment.
Introduced as a new wife, she reveals her true wicked nature by enchanting Fair Ellen. Her actions lead to her eventual punishment and death.
Envious, wicked, hateful, cruel, powerful (as a witch). Her hatred for Fair Ellen is 'bitter black'.
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An adult Scottish woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a handsome but stern face, with intense, dark black eyes and dark hair styled in an elaborate updo. She wears a dark forest-green wool gown with a fitted bodice and long, flowing skirt, possibly with subtle silver embroidery. Her posture is rigid and confident, with a slight sneer on her lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Kempion ★ protagonist
Handsome, straight, and tall, with a brave and noble bearing.
Attire: Princely attire, but practical for travel and combat. Perhaps a tunic and breeches made of fine wool or linen, possibly with a leather jerkin or cloak for protection. He uses his cloak to wrap Fair Ellen, suggesting it's a substantial garment.
Wants: To slay the beast terrorizing the land, driven by courage and a sense of duty. Later, to break the enchantment and claim Fair Ellen as his true love.
Flaw: His compassion can make him hesitate (when he sees the beast's eyes).
Starts as a brave prince setting out to slay a monster, but through his compassion and love, he becomes the rescuer of Fair Ellen and finds his true love, bringing joy back to his kingdom.
Brave, noble, compassionate (sees sorrow in the beast's eyes), determined, loving, honorable.
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A young Scottish prince standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He is tall and has a strong, athletic build. He has a handsome, resolute face with clear, determined eyes and short, neatly kept brown hair. He wears a deep blue wool tunic over a cream linen shirt, brown leather breeches, and sturdy leather boots. A heavy, dark green wool cloak is draped over his shoulders. He holds a large, unstrung arbalest bow in his left hand. His expression is brave and compassionate. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Angus Mac Pherson ○ minor
Not explicitly described, but implied to be a man of some standing, as he has a daughter of great beauty and a household.
Attire: Likely practical but respectable clothing for a Scottish landowner, such as a wool tunic, tartan kilt or trews, and a plaid.
Wants: To find companionship after his wife's death.
Flaw: Possibly poor judgment in choosing a new wife.
His journey away from home allows the stepmother's wickedness to unfold. He returns to find his daughter rescued and his new wife punished.
Loving towards his daughter, but perhaps somewhat naive or hasty in remarrying quickly after his first wife's death.
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An adult Scottish man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build and a kind, weathered face with a short, neatly trimmed beard and brown hair. He wears a practical, dark grey wool tunic, a tartan kilt in muted blues and greens, and a simple leather belt. His expression is one of quiet concern. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Segramore ○ minor
Not explicitly described, but implied to be a strong and capable young man, as he accompanies his brother on a dangerous quest.
Attire: Similar to Kempion, practical attire for travel and sea, perhaps a wool tunic and breeches.
Wants: To support and protect his brother Kempion.
Flaw: More cautious than Kempion, which prevents him from taking the final, crucial step to break the spell.
Accompanies his brother on the quest, serving as a loyal companion and a voice of caution.
Loyal, cautious, supportive, brave (though less reckless than Kempion).
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A young Scottish man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build and a earnest face with short, dark brown hair. He wears a practical, muted green wool tunic, brown linen breeches, and soft leather boots. His expression is one of concern and loyalty. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ○ minor
Implied to be an 'old king', suggesting wisdom and experience.
Attire: Royal robes, likely made of fine fabrics like silk or velvet, possibly in rich colors, with some embellishments, befitting a Scottish monarch.
Wants: To ensure justice and the well-being of his kingdom and family.
Flaw: His initial sorrow for his son.
Experiences sorrow at the presumed loss of his son, then joy at his return and the breaking of the spell. He delivers justice to the wicked stepmother and blesses the union of Kempion and Fair Ellen.
Wise, just, sorrowful (when Kempion is thought lost), joyful (at his return), decisive.
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An elderly Scottish king standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a regal, dignified presence, with a long, flowing white beard and kind, wise eyes. He wears a rich, deep purple velvet robe trimmed with gold embroidery and ermine fur, over a white linen tunic. A simple gold circlet rests on his head. His posture is upright and authoritative. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Angus Mac Pherson's House
A traditional Scottish croft or cottage, likely built of stone with a thatched or slate roof, where Fair Ellen lived with her father and later her wicked stepmother. The interior would be simple but sturdy, with a central hearth.
Mood: Initially loving, then increasingly tense and hateful due to the stepmother's presence.
Fair Ellen serves her stepmother; Angus Mac Pherson departs on a journey, leaving Fair Ellen alone with the witch.
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A cozy, dimly lit interior of a traditional Scottish croft. Rough-hewn stone walls are visible, with a small, crackling fire in a stone hearth casting warm light. Simple, sturdy wooden furniture like a table and chairs are arranged on a packed earth floor. A small, leaded glass window looks out onto a misty, green landscape. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Estmere Crag
A dramatic, towering sea cliff on the Scottish coast, composed of dark, weathered rock, with the sea far below. It features a cavern halfway up where the dragon makes its lair, and the top is exposed to strong winds.
Mood: Initially serene but quickly turns ominous and terrifying; later, a place of heroic confrontation and magical transformation.
Fair Ellen is transformed into a dragon; Kempion confronts and kisses the dragon, breaking the spell; the wicked stepmother is later thrown from the crag.
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A dramatic, windswept sea cliff on the rugged Scottish coast, composed of dark, stratified rock formations. The sheer rock face plunges down to a turbulent, deep blue sea far below, with white foam crashing against the base. Halfway up the cliff, a dark, gaping cavern entrance is visible. Sparse, resilient coastal vegetation like heather and tough grasses cling to the rocky ledges. The sky is a mix of dramatic grey clouds and patches of clear blue, with strong winds implied by the movement of the sea. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The King's Palace
A grand Scottish royal residence, likely a stone castle or a substantial manor house, with large halls suitable for gatherings. It would feature robust stone architecture, possibly with tapestries and heraldic decorations.
Mood: Initially sorrowful due to Kempion's perceived death, then transforms into joyous celebration and justice.
Kempion returns with Fair Ellen, revealing her identity and the breaking of the spell; the king pronounces judgment on the stepmother and blesses the union of Kempion and Fair Ellen.
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A vast, high-ceilinged great hall within a Scottish stone castle. Robust grey stone walls are adorned with large, richly woven tapestries depicting historical scenes and heraldry. A massive stone fireplace dominates one wall, and tall, narrow arched windows allow diffused light into the space. Heavy timber beams support the ceiling, and a long, polished wooden table is set for a feast. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.