GOLDILOCKS and the THREE BEARS
by Katharine Pyle · from Mother's Nursery Tales
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, there was a girl. Her hair was golden. Her name was Goldilocks. She liked to gather flowers. She walked into a big forest.
She saw a small house. No one was home. Goldilocks knocked on the door. No one answered her. She knocked again. Still, no one answered. She opened the door. She went inside the house.
She saw three chairs. One was big. One was middle. One was little. She sat in the big chair. It was too soft. She sat in the middle chair. It was too hard. She sat in the little chair. It was just right. The little chair broke.
She saw three bowls. One was big. One was middle. One was little. She tasted the big porridge. It was too hot. She tasted the middle porridge. It was too cold. She tasted the little porridge. It was just right. She finished it all.
Goldilocks felt sleepy. She went upstairs. She saw three beds. The big bed was too high. The middle bed was too low. The little bed was just right. She fell asleep there.
Father Bear came home. Mother Bear came home. Baby Bear came home. They walked in the forest. Now they were home.
Father Bear looked at his chair. "Someone sat in my chair!" he said. Mother Bear looked at her chair. "Someone sat in my chair!" she said. Baby Bear looked at his chair. "My chair is broken!" he said. Baby Bear felt sad.
Father Bear looked at his porridge. "Someone tasted my porridge!" he said. Mother Bear looked at her porridge. "Someone tasted my porridge!" she said. Baby Bear looked at his porridge. "My porridge is gone!" he said. Baby Bear felt sad.
The bears went upstairs. Father Bear saw his bed. "Someone lay in my bed!" he said. Mother Bear saw her bed. "Someone lay in my bed!" he said.
Baby Bear looked at his bed. He saw Goldilocks. She was in his bed. "She is in my bed!" he said. Baby Bear was happy.
Goldilocks woke up. She heard the bears. She opened her eyes. She saw the three bears. She felt very scared.
Goldilocks jumped from the bed. She ran to the window. The window was open. She jumped out. She ran home very fast.
Goldilocks never went back. She stayed away from the forest. Baby Bear was a little sad. He wanted to play.
Original Story
GOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE BEARS
There was once a little girl whose hair was so bright and yellow that it glittered in the sun like spun-gold. For this reason she was called Goldilocks.
One day Goldilocks went out into the meadows to gather flowers. She wandered on and on, and after a while she came to a forest, where she had never been before. She went on into the forest, and it was very cool and shady.
Presently she came to a little house, standing all alone in the forest, and as she was tired and thirsty she knocked at the door. She hoped the good people inside would give her a drink, and let her rest a little while.
Now, though Goldilocks did not know it, this house belonged to three bears. There was a GREAT BIG FATHER BEAR, and a middling-sized mother bear, and a dear little baby bear, no bigger than Goldilocks herself. But the three bears had gone out to take a walk in the forest while their supper was cooling, so when Goldilocks knocked at the door no one answered her.
She waited awhile and then she knocked again, and as still nobody answered her she pushed the door open and stepped inside. There in a row stood three chairs. One was a GREAT BIG CHAIR, and it belonged to the father bear. And one was a middling-sized chair, and it belonged to the mother bear, and one was a dear little chair, and it belonged to the baby bear. And on the table stood three bowls of smoking hot porridge. “And so,” thought Goldilocks, “the people must be coming back soon to eat it.”
She thought she would sit down and rest until they came, so first she sat down in the GREAT BIG CHAIR, but the cushion was too soft. It seemed as though it would swallow her up. Then she sat down in the middle-sized chair, and the cushion was too hard, and it was not comfortable. Then she sat down in the dear little chair, and it was just right, and fitted her as though it had been made for her. So there she sat, and she rocked and she rocked, and she sat and she sat, until with her rocking and her sitting she sat the bottom right out of it.
And still nobody had come, and there stood the bowls of porridge on the table. “They can’t be very hungry people,” thought Goldilocks to herself, “or they would come home to eat their suppers.” And she went over to the table just to see whether the bowls were full.
The first bowl was a GREAT BIG BOWL with a GREAT BIG WOODEN SPOON in it, and that was the father bear’s bowl. The second bowl was a middle-sized bowl, with a middle-sized wooden spoon in it, and that was the mother bear’s bowl. And the third bowl was a dear little bowl, with a dear little silver spoon in it, and that was the baby bear’s bowl.
The porridge that was in the bowls smelled so very good that Goldilocks thought she would just taste it.
She took up the GREAT BIG SPOON, and tasted the porridge in the GREAT BIG BOWL, but it was too hot. Then she took up the middle-sized spoon and tasted the porridge in the middle-sized bowl, and it was too cold. Then she took up the little silver spoon and tasted the porridge in the dear little bowl, and it was just right, and it tasted so good that she tasted and tasted, and tasted and tasted until she tasted it all up.
After that she felt very sleepy, so she went upstairs and looked about her, and there were three beds all in a row. The first bed was the GREAT BIG BED that belonged to the father bear. And the second bed was a middling-sized bed that belonged to the mother bear, and the third bed was a dear little bed that belonged to the dear little baby bear.
Goldilocks lay down on the GREAT BIG BED to try it, but the pillow was too high, and she wasn’t comfortable at all.
Then she lay down on the middle-sized bed, and the pillow was too low, and that wasn’t comfortable either.
Then she lay down on the little baby bear’s bed and it was exactly right, and so very comfortable that she lay there and lay there until she went fast asleep.
Now while Goldilocks was still asleep in the little bed the three bears came home again, and as soon as they stepped inside the door and looked about them they knew that somebody had been there.
“SOMEBODY’S BEEN SITTING IN MY CHAIR,” growled the father bear in his great big voice, “AND LEFT THE CUSHION CROOKED.”
“And somebody’s been sitting in my chair,” said the mother bear, “and left it standing crooked.”
“And somebody’s been sitting in my chair,” squeaked the baby bear, in his shrill little voice, “and they’ve sat and sat till they’ve sat the bottom out”; and he felt very sad about it.
Then the three bears went over to the table to get their porridge.
“WHAT’S THIS!” growled the father bear, in his great big voice, “SOMEBODY’S BEEN TASTING MY PORRIDGE, AND LEFT THE SPOON ON THE TABLE.”
“And somebody’s been taking my porridge,” said the mother bear in her middle-sized voice, “and they’ve splashed it over the side.”
“And somebody’s been tasting my porridge,” squealed the baby bear, “and they’ve tasted and tasted until they’ve tasted it all up.” And when he said so the baby bear looked as if he were about to cry.
“If somebody’s been here they must be here still,” said the mother bear; so the three bears went upstairs to look.
First the father bear looked at his bed. “SOMEBODY’S BEEN LYING ON MY BED AND PULLED THE COVERS DOWN,” he growled in his great big voice.
Then the mother bear looked at her bed. “Somebody’s been lying on my bed and pulled the pillow off,” said she in her middle-sized voice.
Then the baby bear looked at his bed, and there lay little Goldilocks with her cheeks as pink as roses, and her golden hair all spread over the pillow.
“Somebody’s been lying in my bed,” squeaked the baby bear joyfully, “and here she is still!”
Now when Goldilocks in her dreams heard the great big father bear’s voice she dreamed it was the thunder rolling through the heavens.
And when she heard the mother bear’s middle-sized voice she dreamed it was the wind blowing through the trees.
But when she heard the baby bear’s voice it was so shrill and sharp that it woke her right up. She sat up in bed and there were the three bears standing around and looking at her.
“Oh, my goodness me!” cried Goldilocks. She tumbled out of bed and ran to the window. It was open, and out she jumped before the bears could stop her. Then home she ran as fast as she could, and she never went near the forest again. But the little baby bear cried and cried because he had wanted the pretty little girl to play with.
Story DNA
Moral
Respect the property and privacy of others, as uninvited intrusion can lead to trouble.
Plot Summary
Goldilocks, a girl with golden hair, wanders into a forest and finds an empty cottage belonging to three bears. She enters and proceeds to try out their chairs, porridge, and beds, finding the baby bear's items 'just right' but breaking his chair and eating all his porridge before falling asleep in his bed. The three bears return home, discover the intrusions, and find Goldilocks. Startled awake, Goldilocks flees the house and forest, never to return, leaving the baby bear sad.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to fear
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story has evolved over time, with the intruder originally being an old woman in earlier versions before becoming Goldilocks.
Plot Beats (13)
- Goldilocks, a girl with golden hair, wanders into a forest while gathering flowers.
- She finds an empty house and, after knocking twice with no answer, enters.
- Inside, she finds three chairs and tries them all, breaking the baby bear's chair which was 'just right'.
- She then finds three bowls of porridge and tastes them, eating all of the baby bear's 'just right' porridge.
- Feeling sleepy, she goes upstairs and tries the three beds, falling asleep in the baby bear's 'just right' bed.
- The three bears (Father, Mother, and Baby) return home from their walk.
- They immediately notice that someone has been sitting in their chairs, with Baby Bear lamenting his broken chair.
- They then discover that someone has been tasting their porridge, with Baby Bear upset that his is all gone.
- The bears go upstairs and find that someone has been lying in their beds.
- Baby Bear joyfully discovers Goldilocks still asleep in his bed.
- Goldilocks wakes up to the bears' voices, sees them, and is terrified.
- She jumps out of bed, leaps out the open window, and runs home as fast as she can.
- Goldilocks never returns to the forest, and the baby bear is sad she left.
Characters
Goldilocks ★ protagonist
A small, slender child with fair skin and rosy cheeks, indicating a healthy, youthful complexion. Her build is delicate, consistent with her young age.
Attire: Likely a simple, practical dress suitable for gathering flowers in meadows, perhaps made of linen or cotton in a light color, typical of a European peasant child of the 19th century. No specific details are given, so inferring a modest, comfortable attire is appropriate.
Wants: Initially driven by curiosity and a desire for comfort and sustenance (rest, drink, food). Later, her primary motivation is self-preservation and escape.
Flaw: Impulsiveness and a lack of respect for others' property. Her curiosity leads her into trouble.
She learns a harsh lesson about trespassing and respecting others' property, leading her to avoid the forest and potentially become more cautious.
Curious, impulsive, entitled (takes liberties with others' property), somewhat fearless (enters an unknown house), and ultimately timid (flees when confronted).
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A small, slender child with fair skin and rosy cheeks, standing upright and facing forward. Her hair is exceptionally bright, spun-gold, and long, possibly styled loosely or in simple braids. She has a round, youthful face with wide, curious eyes. She wears a simple, light-colored linen dress, possibly with a modest pattern or embroidery, and practical, comfortable shoes suitable for walking in meadows. Her expression is one of innocent curiosity. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Father Bear ◆ supporting
A great big bear, implying significant height and a broad, powerful build, covered in thick fur. His size is intimidating.
Attire: None, as he is an animal. His natural fur coat serves as his 'attire.'
Wants: To maintain order and comfort in his home, and to protect his family.
Flaw: His temper and possessiveness can make him intimidating, potentially scaring away those who might not mean harm.
Remains consistent throughout the story, acting as the stern head of the household.
Authoritative, easily angered when his property is disturbed, protective of his home and family.
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A very large, adult male bear standing on two legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has thick, dark brown fur, a broad chest, and powerful limbs. His face is bear-like with a prominent snout and small, dark, watchful eyes. His posture is upright and imposing, conveying authority. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Mother Bear ◆ supporting
A middling-sized bear, smaller than Father Bear but larger than Baby Bear, suggesting a sturdy, maternal build, covered in thick fur.
Attire: None, as she is an animal. Her natural fur coat serves as her 'attire.'
Wants: To maintain comfort and order in her home, and to care for her family.
Flaw: Less assertive than Father Bear, she voices her concerns but doesn't take the lead in confrontation.
Remains consistent throughout the story, acting as the observant and nurturing figure.
Observant, practical, concerned with the details of her home, and a caring mother.
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A medium-sized adult female bear standing on two legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has thick, brown fur, a sturdy build, and a slightly softer face than the male bear, with intelligent, observant eyes. Her posture is upright and attentive. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Baby Bear ◆ supporting
A 'dear little' bear, no bigger than Goldilocks herself, implying a small, cub-like size, covered in soft fur.
Attire: None, as he is an animal. His natural fur coat serves as his 'attire.'
Wants: To enjoy his simple comforts (chair, porridge, bed) and to play.
Flaw: His small size and sensitivity make him vulnerable to disruptions and easily upset.
Experiences a range of emotions from sadness and frustration to joy and disappointment, reflecting a child's emotional journey.
Sensitive, easily saddened (when his chair is broken, porridge eaten), joyful (upon finding Goldilocks), and curious.
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A small, cub-like bear standing on two legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He is no bigger than a human child. He has soft, light brown, fluffy fur and a round, innocent face with wide, expressive eyes. His posture is slightly playful and curious. He holds a tiny silver spoon in one paw. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Meadows leading to the Forest
Expansive, sunlit meadows filled with flowers, transitioning into a cool, shady forest of tall trees.
Mood: Peaceful, inviting, adventurous at first, then slightly mysterious as the forest deepens.
Goldilocks wanders from the familiar meadows into the unknown, deeper parts of the forest, leading her to the bears' house.
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A winding dirt path disappears into a dense, ancient European forest, its tall, straight tree trunks casting long, cool shadows. Sunlight dapples through the thick canopy of broadleaf trees, illuminating patches of vibrant green moss and ferns on the forest floor. Wildflowers in shades of blue and white peek out from under the undergrowth. The air feels still and slightly humid. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Three Bears' Cottage - Living Room
A cozy, rustic cottage living room with three distinct sizes of furniture: a great big chair, a middling-sized chair, and a dear little chair, all arranged in a row. A wooden table holds three bowls of porridge. The room has a lived-in, simple feel.
Mood: Initially welcoming and curious for Goldilocks, then becomes a scene of disruption and discovery for the bears, filled with growing tension.
Goldilocks enters, tries the chairs and porridge, breaking the baby bear's chair and eating his porridge. The bears return and discover the intrusion here.
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The interior of a simple, rustic German-style cottage living room, with rough-hewn timber beams supporting a low ceiling and whitewashed plaster walls. A large, sturdy wooden table stands center, with three mismatched wooden chairs of varying sizes pulled up to it. Sunlight streams through a small, paned window, illuminating dust motes in the air and casting warm light on the worn wooden floorboards. A stone hearth is visible in the background. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Three Bears' Cottage - Bedroom
An upstairs bedroom in the cottage, containing three beds of different sizes: a great big bed, a middling-sized bed, and a dear little bed, all in a row. A window is open.
Mood: Initially peaceful as Goldilocks sleeps, then abruptly tense and alarming when the bears discover her.
Goldilocks tries the beds and falls asleep in the baby bear's bed. The bears discover her here, leading to her panicked escape.
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A cozy, sunlit bedroom in a rustic German cottage, with sloped attic ceilings and exposed timber beams. Three simple wooden beds of varying sizes are lined up against a wall, each covered with homespun blankets. A small, square window with wooden shutters is flung open, revealing a glimpse of green forest outside and allowing soft, diffused afternoon light to fill the room. The floor is made of wide, polished pine planks. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
