JACK in LUCK
by Katharine Pyle · from Mother's Nursery Tales
Adapted Version
A boy named Jack lived. He worked for seven long years.
Jack worked for his Master. He worked for seven years. Master gave him no money. Then Master gave Jack a big gold lump. It was as big as Jack's head. Jack was very happy. He thanked his Master.
Jack went home. The gold was very heavy. Jack felt tired. The sun was hot. He walked slowly. The gold was a big burden.
Jack saw a Horse Man. The man rode a fast horse. Jack thought, 'Horse is better!' He traded gold. Jack was happy. He rode the horse.
Jack tried to ride fast. The horse was wild. It jumped up. Jack fell off. He fell down. He thought the horse was not good.
Jack saw a Cow Man. The man had a calm cow. Jack thought, 'Cow gives milk!' He traded horse. Jack was happy again.
Jack tried to milk the cow. The cow did not give milk. The cow moved its leg. Jack fell down. He thought the cow was not good.
Jack saw a Butcher Man. The man had a plump pig. Jack thought, 'Pig is good food.' He traded cow. Jack was happy again.
Jack met a Young Man. The Young Man said, "Be careful! This pig might be trouble!" Jack got worried. He did not want trouble.
Jack thought, 'A goose is safe.' He traded pig. He thought of eggs. He thought of a soft pillow for mother. He was happy.
Jack saw a Grinder Man. The man sharpened knives. He had a big, useful stone. Jack thought, 'Stone is good!' He traded goose. He got a heavy rock too. He was happy.
Now Jack carried the big stone. He carried the heavy rock. They were very, very heavy. Jack was tired. He was hot and sweaty.
Jack stopped at a well. He wanted to drink water. He bent down. When he stood up, the heavy stone fell! The rock fell too! Splash! Into the well they went.
Jack had nothing to carry now. He felt so light! He felt so happy! "I am the luckiest man!" he said. He was free.
Jack walks fast. His heart is light. His feet are light. Soon, he is home with his mother. He is very happy. Jack learned happiness is not about many things. It is about feeling light and free. Jack was very happy. He had no things, but he had a light heart. He was home with his mother.
Original Story
JACK IN LUCK
Jack had served his master well for seven long years without having been paid a penny. At the end of that time Jack went to him and said, “Master, I have been with you seven years, and now it is time for me to go home to see my mother. But oughtn’t I to be paid something first?”
“Yes,” said his master, “you have served me well, and you shall be well paid in return.”
He then brought out a lump of gold as big as Jack’s head and gave it to the lad.
Jack thanked him and wrapped the gold up in a handkerchief and tied the corners together, so he could carry it. Then he said good-by to his master, and off he set, whistling merrily. But the way was long and the sun was hot. The further Jack went the wearier he grew, and the gold weighed as heavy as lead. He shifted it from hand to hand, but every moment it became a heavier burden.
After awhile Jack met a man riding merrily along on a fine horse.
“That is a fine nag you are riding,” said Jack.
“Yes, it is,” answered the man.
“Well, you are a lucky fellow,” said Jack. “There you ride along as light as a bird, and I have to trudge in the dust and carry a lump of gold that weighs like lead.”
“Is that gold you have tied up there?” asked the man.
“Yes, it is.”
“I would like to see a lump of gold as big as that.”
Jack untied the handkerchief and showed the gold to the man. When the man saw it his eyes glittered and his mouth worked.
“Listen,” said he to Jack, “I am a good-natured sort of a fellow. I am almost home and you have still a long way to go. Give me the gold and you shall have my horse in exchange, and then you can ride along as proud as a king, and I will do the trudging.”
That seemed to Jack a fine bargain. He thanked the man and gave him the gold, and then he mounted the horse. The man put a switch in his hand and said, “If he does not go along fast enough just touch him with this and he will go faster.” Then he tied up the gold in a great hurry, and made off with it.
As for Jack he rode along holding his head high and glancing about him. “How proud mother will be to see me come riding up to the door like a nobleman,” thought he. “How much better to ride with my head in the air than to trudge along in the dust.”
After awhile Jack thought he would like to go faster, and he gave the horse a cut with the switch. But the nag was a lively one. When it felt the switch it kicked up its heels, and away it went, jolting and bumping. Jack held on as long as he could, and then he fell off into a ditch full of stinging nettles. Luckily a man passing by stopped the horse and brought it back to him. The man was leading a cow by a rope.
“That was a nasty fall you had,” said he.
“Yes,” answered Jack. “Now I see that a horse is a tricky animal. A man gave him to me for a lump of gold I was carrying, and he seemed quiet enough then.”
“A lump of gold?” asked the man.
“Yes, a lump of gold. How lucky you are to have a nice quiet animal like the cow to give you good milk and butter and cheese, instead of a horse that runs away and throws you off.”
“Yes, I am lucky,” said the man. Then he thought a bit. “Listen,” said he. “I have had so much butter and cheese and cream that I am tired of them. If you like you shall have my cow and I will take your horse, and you will have the best of the bargain.”
“That I will,” cried Jack joyfully, “and I thank you kindly for speaking of it.” He then gave the horse to the man, and the man gave him the cow. Then the man sprang upon the horse and away he rode in haste without once turning to look behind him.
Jack led the cow along by the rope, and his heart was light if his heels were not. “Now I can live like a king,” said he. “When I am thirsty all I have to do is to milk the cow and have a drink of fine fresh milk; and when I have a piece of bread—it is easy enough to get a piece of bread—I can always have some butter with it, or a tasty bit of cheese.”
The sun was high in the sky by now, and it shone so hot that Jack’s mouth grew as dry as a nutmeg grater. “Now is the time for a glass of milk,” said he. He tied the cow to a post, and then he sat down and tried to milk her; but he had never learned how to milk, and not a drop could he get. Moreover he was so awkward about it that at last the cow gave him a kick that sent him head over heels across the road. Jack got up and rubbed his head. “That is a very dangerous animal,” said he, “or else she does not like me.”
Just then a butcher came by, wheeling a fine little pig in a barrow, and he stopped to speak with Jack. “What ails you,” said he, “that you look so sad and down in the mouth?”
“Oh,” said Jack, “my cow has kicked me and will not give me a drop of milk,” and he told the butcher the whole story, how he had exchanged the gold for a horse, and the horse for a cow.
“You made a bad bargain,” said the butcher. “That cow is old and will never give milk. There is nothing to do with her but to knock her on the head and use her for beef.”
“How could I do that?” asked Jack. “And besides I do not like beef. If she were only a fine little pig, now! There is nothing I love better than a tender juicy bit of pork.”
“Well, there now!” said the butcher. “I am too kind-hearted for my own good, but if you like I will take the cow and you shall have my pig in exchange.”
Jack was delighted. He thanked the butcher and took the pig in exchange for his cow, and off he set, wheeling the pig before him, and he was as happy as a lark.
After awhile he met a young man who carried a fine fat white goose under his arm. Jack had known the youth before, and they stopped to talk. Jack told him all about his adventures, and what fine bargains he had made.
“Yes, that is well,” said the youth. Then he showed Jack his goose, and made him weigh it by the wings and feel how fat it was, and how soft were its feathers.
“It is a fine fowl,” said Jack. “But after all it is not as fine a creature as my fat pig, and it will not taste as good when it is eaten, either.”
The youth looked the pig all over, and scratched his head. “I do not know about that pig,” said he. “A man just over there beyond the hill had his pig stolen two days ago. I misdoubt me but what this may be the very one. I only hope you may not get taken up and put in prison for having it.”
“In prison,” cried Jack in alarm. “But I cannot go to prison. My mother is looking for me home, and it would break her heart if I did not come.”
“I will tell you,” said the youth; “I know the ways about here better than you do. If you like I will take the pig and give you my goose in exchange. I may suffer for it, but if anyone is taken to prison at least it will not be you.”
Jack thanked him with tears in his eyes. He gave him the pig and took the goose and went on his way rejoicing. “After all,” thought he, “I would rather have a goose than a pig. Not only is it good to eat, but it may lay me a fine big egg, and its feathers will do to make a soft pillow for mother to lay her head on.”
So thinking he trudged along with the goose under his arm, and after awhile he came to a village, and there was a knife-grinder turning his wheel and sharpening knives and scissors for people.
He worked so quickly and sang so merrily as he worked that Jack stopped to watch him.
“That is a fine trade of yours—that of a knife-grinder,” said Jack.
“Yes, it is,” answered the man. “People are glad to see me come, and they save their knives and scissors for me to sharpen. I always can earn a bit of money, and when I am tired of one place I take my wheel and go on to the next. But that is a fine goose you have. Where did you buy it?”
“I did not buy it, I got it in exchange for a pig.”
“And where did you get the pig?”
“Oh, I took it in exchange for a cow.”
“Where did you get the cow?”
“I got it in exchange for a horse.”
“Where did you get the horse?”
“I bought it for a lump of gold as big as my head.”
“Where did you get the gold?”
“My master gave it to me in payment for seven years’ service, but the gold was too heavy, and the horse ran away, and the cow would give no milk, and the pig had been stolen, but this is a very fine goose, so you see I have been lucky in the end.”
“That you have,” said the knife-grinder. “But after all I would rather own this grindstone of mine than the very finest, fattest goose. The goose is eaten and that is the end of it, but this grindstone always earns me a bit of money to jingle in my pocket.”
“Yes, that is true,” said Jack. “I wish I had a grindstone.”
The knife-grinder looked thoughtful. “It might be managed,” said he. “I have another grindstone that is a bit damaged, but works all right. If you like you can have it in exchange for your goose, and once you have a grindstone the rest of the business is easy enough.”
“I am in luck indeed,” said Jack. “I have only to wish for a thing and I get it. Here, take the goose, and give me the grindstone.”
The man gave Jack an old cracked grindstone. Then he picked up a heavy stone that lay by the roadside. “Take this with you, too,” he said. “It will be useful to you if you ever have a crooked nail to straighten. Then you will only have to lay it on the grindstone and beat it with this rock, and you can straighten it out in no time.”
“Yes, that will be a fine thing,” said Jack, and he took the grindstone and the rock and thanked the man and went on his way.
But the road was rough and the sun was hot, and before long Jack was so weary with the weight he carried that he could hardly drag one foot after another, and the sweat poured down from his forehead.
After awhile he came to a place where a well of water bubbled up clear and fresh and cool. Jack put his stones down on the edge of it and stooped over to drink, but as he rose up again he happened to give the stones a push, and plunk! they both fell into the well and sank to the bottom.
“Now thanks be to heaven!” cried Jack. “If I had had to carry those stones much farther my back would surely have broken. Oh, what a lucky fellow I am! Everything I touch turns to luck.”
Then he started off with a light heart and light heels, and it did not take him long to reach his mother’s house.
Story DNA
Moral
True happiness and contentment are not found in material possessions, but in a light heart and freedom from burdens.
Plot Summary
Jack, after seven years of service, receives a large lump of gold, but finds it too heavy to carry. He successively trades it for a horse, then a cow, then a pig, then a goose, and finally a heavy grindstone and rock, each time believing he's made a better bargain. Overwhelmed by the weight of the grindstone and rock, he accidentally drops them into a well. Feeling immense relief and declaring himself the luckiest man, Jack finally reaches his mother's house with a light heart, having shed all his material burdens.
Themes
Emotional Arc
optimism to burden to relief
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story reflects a pre-industrial society where physical labor was common, and goods were often exchanged directly rather than bought with currency. The concept of 'luck' is often tied to simple fortune rather than complex schemes.
Plot Beats (14)
- Jack serves his master for seven years without pay and is finally given a lump of gold as big as his head.
- Jack sets off for home, but the gold is too heavy and burdensome to carry.
- He meets a man on a horse and, envying his ease, trades the heavy gold for the horse.
- The horse is wild and throws Jack into a ditch, leading him to believe horses are tricky.
- He meets a man with a cow and, desiring a quiet animal for milk, butter, and cheese, trades the horse for the cow.
- Jack tries to milk the cow but cannot, and the cow kicks him, making him think it's dangerous or dislikes him.
- He meets a butcher with a pig and, disliking beef and desiring pork, trades the cow for the pig.
- He meets a youth who warns him the pig might be stolen, frightening Jack with the prospect of prison.
- Jack trades the pig for the youth's goose, feeling lucky to avoid trouble and anticipating eggs and a pillow for his mother.
- He meets a knife-grinder and, admiring his trade and the grindstone's perpetual usefulness, trades the goose for an old, cracked grindstone and a heavy rock.
- The grindstone and rock are incredibly heavy, making Jack weary and sweaty as he continues his journey.
- Jack stops at a well to drink, and as he rises, he accidentally pushes the grindstone and rock into the well.
- Jack feels immense relief and declares himself the luckiest man alive, now free of all burdens.
- With a light heart and light heels, Jack quickly reaches his mother's house.
Characters
Jack ★ protagonist
A sturdy young man, likely of average height and build, accustomed to physical labor from seven years of service. His face would show the effects of trudging long distances under the sun, with a tanned complexion and perhaps a few scrapes from his fall into the nettles.
Attire: Simple, worn peasant clothing suitable for a servant, such as a coarse linen tunic or shirt, sturdy wool breeches, and practical leather boots or shoes. The colors would be muted, like browns, greys, or undyed linen.
Wants: To return home to his mother, to be well-paid for his service, and to feel 'lucky' and prosperous.
Flaw: Extreme naivety and gullibility, leading him to make poor trades. He lacks practical knowledge and critical thinking.
Starts with a valuable lump of gold, but through a series of increasingly disadvantageous trades, he loses all material wealth. However, he gains freedom from burden and a profound sense of inner luck and contentment, arriving home with nothing but a light heart.
Optimistic, naive, easily swayed, good-natured, trusting, and resilient. He consistently sees the positive in every exchange, despite obvious disadvantages.
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A young peasant man, early twenties, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build, fair skin with a tanned complexion, and a round, open face with bright blue eyes. His light brown hair is short and slightly disheveled. He wears a coarse cream linen tunic, sturdy brown wool breeches, and worn leather boots. He has a wide, trusting smile on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Jack's Master ○ minor
Likely a man of some means, perhaps a farmer or landowner, with a comfortable but not overly opulent appearance. His build would suggest a life of overseeing rather than heavy labor.
Attire: Practical but respectable clothing for a landowner or tradesman of the era, such as a sturdy wool tunic or coat over a linen shirt, and trousers, in muted but well-maintained fabrics. Perhaps a simple leather belt.
Wants: To settle his debt with Jack and maintain his reputation, while perhaps subtly ensuring the payment is inconvenient.
Flaw: A degree of stinginess or a desire to get the most out of his servants.
Static. He appears only at the beginning to set Jack's journey in motion.
Initially appears fair by offering payment, but the seven years of unpaid service suggest a shrewd, perhaps exploitative, nature. He fulfills his obligation but with a large, unwieldy payment.
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An adult man, middle-aged, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build, a weathered face with a short, neat brown beard, and kind but shrewd eyes. He wears a dark green wool tunic over a cream linen shirt, sturdy brown trousers, and practical leather boots. He holds a large, rough lump of gold in his hands. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Horse Trader ⚔ antagonist
A lean, agile man, with a cunning look in his eyes, suggesting a life of quick deals and travel. He would appear well-groomed for a traveler, but with a practical edge.
Attire: Practical but slightly better quality traveling clothes than Jack's, perhaps a dark wool jacket, sturdy breeches, and tall leather riding boots. A wide-brimmed hat might complete his look.
Wants: To acquire wealth (the gold) through deceptive means.
Flaw: Greed, which drives his deceptive actions.
Static. He appears, makes his deceptive trade, and disappears.
Cunning, greedy, manipulative, and quick-witted. He preys on Jack's naivety.
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An adult man, middle-aged, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a lean build, sharp features, narrow dark eyes that glitter, and a cunning expression. His dark hair is neatly combed. He wears a dark grey wool jacket, sturdy brown breeches, and tall black leather riding boots. He holds a small riding switch in one hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Cow Trader ⚔ antagonist
A sturdy, practical man, likely a farmer or drover, with a no-nonsense appearance. His hands would be calloused from working with animals.
Attire: Simple, functional peasant or farmer's attire: a coarse linen shirt, a practical vest, sturdy trousers, and worn leather shoes or clogs. Colors would be earthy and muted.
Wants: To acquire a horse for his old, unproductive cow.
Flaw: Greed and a willingness to take advantage of others.
Static. He appears, makes his deceptive trade, and disappears.
Opportunistic, shrewd, and quick to recognize a bad bargain for Jack. He presents himself as helpful but is ultimately self-serving.
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An adult man, middle-aged, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build, a weather-beaten face with a plain expression, and calculating brown eyes. His short, dark hair is practical. He wears a coarse grey linen shirt, a dark brown wool vest, sturdy green trousers, and worn leather shoes. He holds a thick rope in his hands. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Butcher ⚔ antagonist
A robust, perhaps portly, man, with strong arms from his trade. His clothing might show signs of his work, perhaps a bloodstain or two, but generally clean.
Attire: A practical, sturdy linen apron over a simple shirt and trousers, perhaps with a leather belt from which tools might hang. Colors would be muted, but the apron would be a prominent feature.
Wants: To acquire an old cow for a pig, making a profitable exchange.
Flaw: Greed and a willingness to exploit others' misfortune.
Static. He appears, makes his deceptive trade, and disappears.
Shrewd, opportunistic, and seemingly kind-hearted, but ultimately self-serving. He uses Jack's distress to his advantage.
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An adult man, middle-aged, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a robust, slightly portly build, a jovial but shrewd face with observant brown eyes, and short, receding dark hair. He wears a clean white linen apron over a simple blue linen shirt and sturdy brown trousers. He pushes a small wooden barrow containing a fine, plump white pig. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Youth with Goose ⚔ antagonist
A young man, perhaps a bit younger than Jack, with a lean build. He would appear earnest and concerned, but with a hidden manipulative streak.
Attire: Simple, practical peasant clothing, similar to Jack's, but perhaps a bit newer or cleaner. A light-colored linen shirt and trousers.
Wants: To acquire a pig for his goose, likely a better trade for him.
Flaw: His willingness to use fear and deception.
Static. He appears, makes his deceptive trade, and disappears.
Manipulative, cunning, and opportunistic. He uses fear to trick Jack.
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A young man, early twenties, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a lean build, an earnest but slightly worried expression with darting blue eyes, and tousled light brown hair. He wears a simple cream linen shirt and sturdy brown trousers. He holds a large, plump white goose tucked under his left arm. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Knife-Grinder ⚔ antagonist
A wiry, energetic man, with strong arms and hands from turning his wheel. His clothes would be practical and perhaps stained with grime from his work.
Attire: Practical, hard-wearing clothes suitable for a traveling tradesman: a sturdy leather apron over a simple shirt and trousers, perhaps with a cap. Colors would be dark and utilitarian.
Wants: To acquire a goose for his old, damaged grindstone, making a profitable exchange.
Flaw: His desire to make a good trade, even if it means taking advantage of someone.
Static. He appears, makes his deceptive trade, and disappears.
Cheerful, industrious, shrewd, and opportunistic. He values practical, money-earning tools over perishable goods.
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An adult man, middle-aged, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a wiry build, an animated face with a cheerful smile and observant brown eyes, and slightly wild, dusty dark hair. He wears a sturdy dark leather apron over a simple grey linen shirt and dark trousers. He stands beside a large, hand-cranked grindstone, with his hands positioned as if turning the wheel. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Long Road Home
A dusty, sun-baked country road stretching long distances, likely unpaved, with sparse vegetation along the edges. The sun is hot and high in the sky, casting harsh light.
Mood: Initially burdensome and weary, transitioning to hopeful and light-hearted with each exchange, then back to weary, and finally joyous.
Jack's entire journey of exchanges takes place along this road, where he meets various characters and trades his possessions.
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A long, winding, unpaved country road stretches into the distance under a bright, hot midday sun. The road surface is dry and dusty, with small stones and ruts. On either side, parched grass and hardy wildflowers grow, occasionally interspersed with low, thorny bushes. The sky above is a clear, pale blue with a few wispy clouds, and the air shimmers with heat. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Village Square with Knife-Grinder
A bustling, lively village square, likely in a German-inspired setting, with a knife-grinder actively working his wheel. The square would be a place of commerce and social interaction.
Mood: Lively, industrious, and a place of casual commerce and conversation.
Jack meets the knife-grinder here and makes his second-to-last exchange, trading the goose for a grindstone and a heavy rock.
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A lively German village square in the late afternoon, paved with rough cobblestones. In the foreground, a knife-grinder sits at his wooden cart, actively turning a large, worn grindstone, sparks occasionally flying. Behind him, half-timbered Fachwerk houses with steep, gabled roofs and small, multi-paned windows line the square. The sunlight is warm and golden, casting long shadows from the buildings and people. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Roadside Well
A natural spring or well bubbling up clear, fresh, and cool water, located by the side of a rough road. It's a simple, functional spot for travelers to refresh themselves.
Mood: Relief, refreshment, and ultimately, a moment of profound liberation and joy.
Jack accidentally drops the grindstone and rock into the well, realizing his good fortune in being rid of the heavy burden.
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A natural spring bubbles up clear, cool water from a mossy stone basin at the edge of a rough, dirt road. The ground around the well is damp and dark, contrasting with the dry, dusty path. Overhead, the leaves of a gnarled oak tree filter the bright afternoon sunlight, creating dappled patterns on the water's surface and the surrounding earth. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
