The Feast of the Dead

by Alexander Afanasyev · from Russian Fairy Tales

folk tale cautionary tale dark Ages 8-14 199 words 1 min read
Cover: The Feast of the Dead
Original Story 199 words · 1 min read

The Feast of the Dead

Some girls were out at night for the evening, and arranged for an

evening party. They went out to get some vódka. There were bones lying

on the road. “Ho!” they said, “bones, bones, come and be our guests: we

are having an evening party.”

So, they went back home, brought the vódka, and stepped in over the

threshold.

But the bones came and sat at the table just like men, and said to the

maidens, “Now give us the brandy.”

So the girls gave them brandy.

“Give us bread!”

So they gave them bread.

They all sat down to eat, and one maiden dropped the meat.

Then the bones began lifting and stretching their legs under the bench.

The girls tried to run away; and the bones raced after them. The bones

caught one girl up, and broke her across their knees. The other girls

made their escape into the loft; one girl hid behind the water-butt.

The bones ran up to the loft and asked: “What is there up there?”

“God’s taper.”

“But down there?”

“The Devil’s poker,” she answered.

So the bones hauled the second girl out and strangled her.


Story DNA folk tale · dark

Moral

Do not mock or disrespect the dead, for their spirits may seek retribution.

Plot Summary

A group of girls planning an evening party mockingly invites bones they find on the road to join them. The bones arrive at their party, demanding food and drink. When one girl drops meat, the bones become enraged and pursue the fleeing girls, catching and breaking one. They then trick and strangle a second girl who is hiding, leaving the fate of the remaining girls uncertain.

Themes

disrespect for the deadconsequences of mockerysupernatural retributionfear

Emotional Arc

carelessness to terror

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: direct dialogue

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: tragic
Magic: animated bones, supernatural retribution
bones (representing the dead/spirits)vodka/bread (offerings, hospitality)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Afanas'ev collected Russian folk tales in the 19th century, reflecting traditional peasant beliefs and superstitions.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. Girls plan an evening party and go to buy vodka.
  2. They find bones on the road and mockingly invite them to their party.
  3. The girls return home with vodka.
  4. The bones arrive and sit at the table like men, demanding brandy.
  5. The girls give them brandy, then bread when demanded.
  6. During the meal, one maiden drops meat.
  7. The bones become agitated, stretching their legs under the bench.
  8. The girls try to run away, but the bones chase them.
  9. The bones catch one girl and break her across their knees.
  10. The remaining girls escape into the loft; one hides behind a water-butt.
  11. The bones ask what is in the loft.
  12. A girl answers, identifying 'God's taper' (the bones) and 'the Devil's poker' (the girl behind the water-butt).
  13. The bones pull out and strangle the second girl.

Characters 4 characters

The Girls ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Unspecified, but likely young and able-bodied to be out at night and running.

Attire: Unspecified, but likely simple dresses or peasant attire appropriate for an evening party in a rural setting.

A group of young women, initially jovial, then fleeing in terror.

Frivolous, playful (initially), terrified, quick-thinking (some of them).

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A young woman with long, flowing chestnut hair stands poised and determined. She wears a simple yet elegant sky-blue dress with puffed sleeves and a full skirt that falls to her ankles. Her posture is straight and confident, one hand gently resting on her hip. Her expression is one of quiet resolve, with bright, focused eyes looking forward. She is barefoot on the soft ground. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Bones ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless non-human

Skeletal remains, described as 'bones' that can sit like men, lift and stretch legs, and race.

Attire: None, as they are bones.

A collection of animated human bones, sitting at a table or pursuing the girls.

Demanding, menacing, predatory, relentless.

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A gaunt, skeletal figure with hollow, glowing eyes and a malicious grin. Its skin is stretched tight over bone, with patches of decay. It wears tattered, rotting dark robes that flutter in an unseen wind. One bony hand is outstretched in a grasping, aggressive pose, lurching forward. Ancient and menacing. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The First Girl Caught ○ minor

human young adult female

Unspecified, but she was caught by the bones while trying to escape.

Attire: Unspecified, likely similar to the other girls.

A young woman being broken across the knees of the animated bones.

Unlucky, terrified.

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The Second Girl Strangled ○ minor

human young adult female

Unspecified, but she hid behind a water-butt and was later found.

Attire: Unspecified, likely similar to the other girls.

A young woman hiding behind a water-butt, then being strangled by the bones.

Resourceful (in hiding), terrified, quick-witted (in her answers).

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A young teenage girl with pale, almost translucent skin, dark circles under her wide, haunted eyes, and messy, tangled dark hair that falls past her shoulders. She wears a tattered, faded white nightgown, dirty at the hem and sleeves. Her expression is one of silent terror and sorrow, her lips slightly parted as if gasping. She stands with a slight hunch, one hand lightly touching her own throat, her posture conveying vulnerability and a lingering dread. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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Road outside the house

outdoor night unspecified

A road where bones are lying, presumably in the evening or night.

Mood: eerie, foreboding

The girls invite the bones to their party.

bones road
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A desolate dirt road under a full moon, littered with ancient, sun-bleached bones and skulls half-buried in the soil. The scene is set in the deep blue hour of twilight, with a cold, ethereal glow from the moon casting long, sharp shadows. Gnarled, leafless trees with twisted branches line the path, their bark resembling petrified skin. A low, creeping mist swirls around the base of the trees and across the road, illuminated by the lunar light. The atmosphere is heavy, silent, and profoundly eerie, with a color palette of deep blues, muted grays, and stark white bone. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Dining area of the house

indoor night unspecified

The main room of the house where a table is set for a party.

Mood: initially festive, then terrifying

The bones join the girls at the table and demand food and drink, then begin to menace them.

table brandy bread meat bench
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A grand dining hall in an enchanted manor at twilight, bathed in the warm glow of a hundred tall beeswax candles. A long, polished oak table is set for a feast with fine porcelain, crystal goblets, and silver cutlery, each place meticulously arranged but empty. Tall, arched windows reveal a dusky purple sky over a shadowed garden. The stone walls are draped with deep green velvet tapestries, and a magnificent crystal chandelier hangs overhead, its facets catching the flickering light. The air feels still and expectant, rich with the scent of beeswax and the faint aroma of unseen flowers. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Loft

indoor night unspecified

An upper storage area in the house, accessible by climbing, where some girls hide.

Mood: terrified, desperate, claustrophobic

The girls attempt to escape the bones, and one is caught and strangled here.

loft water-butt
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Dusk light filters through a single small, grimy window in the upper loft of an old house, illuminating swirling dust motes. Golden hour sunbeams cut across the cluttered space, revealing rough-hewn wooden beams, a slanted roof, and a floor layered with forgotten treasures: stacked wooden crates, draped lace cloths, old leather trunks, and piles of yellowed books. The air is thick with the scent of aged wood, dried lavender, and forgotten memories. Shadows pool in the corners, creating a sense of hidden, quiet sanctuary. The palette is warm browns, dusty golds, and deep, velvety shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.