The Princess Who Would Not Smile

by Alexander Afanasyev · from Russian Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1146 words 5 min read
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The Princess who would not Smile

If you think of it, what a big world God’s world is: in it rich and poor

folk live, and there is room enough for them all; and the Lord overlooks

and judges them all. There are fine folk who have holidays, there are

wailful folk who must moil; every man has his lot.

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In the Tsar’s palace, in the Prince’s chamber, every day the Princess

Without a Smile grew fairer. What a life she had, what plenty, what

beauty round her! There was enough of everything that exists that the

soul may desire, but she never smiled, never laughed, and it seemed as

though her heart could not rejoice at anything.

It was a bitter thing for the Tsar her father to gaze at his doleful

daughter. He used to open his imperial palace to whoever would be his

guest. “Come,” he said, “come and try to enliven the Princess Without a

Smile: any one who succeeds shall gain her as his wife.” And as soon as

he had said this all folk thronged up at the gates of the palace,

driving up from all sides, coming on foot, Tsarévichi and princes’ sons,

boyárs and noblemen, military folk and civil. Feasts were celebrated,

rivers of mead flowed, and the Princess would not smile.

But, at the other end of the town, in his own little hut, there dwelt an

honourable labourer. Every morning he used to sweep out the courtyard:

every evening he used to pasture the cattle, and he was engaged in

ceaseless labour. His master was a rich man, a just man, and he did not

begrudge pay. When the year came to an end he put a purse of money on

the table, “Take,” he said, “as much as you like”; and the master went

outside.

The workman went up to the table and thought, “How shall I not be guilty

in the eyes of God if I take too much for my labour?” So he took only

one little coin, put it into the hollow of his hand and thought he would

have a little drink. So he went to the well, and the coin slipped

through his fingers and fell to the bottom. So the poor fellow had

nothing left. Now, anybody else in his place would have cried out, would

have become melancholy and angry, might have put his hands up. He did

nothing of the sort. “Everything,” he said, “comes from God. The Lord

knows what He gives to each man, whose money He divides, from whom He

takes the last money. Evidently I have given bad care, I have done

little work; and now am I to become angry?”

So he set to work once more. And all that his hand touched flew like

fire. Then, when the term was over, when one year more had gone by, the

master again put a purse of money on the table: “Take,” he said, “as

much as your soul desires”; and he himself went outside.

Then again the labourer thought how he should not offend God, how he

should not take too much for his work. So he took one coin and he went

to have a little drink at the well. In some way or other the money fell

from his hands and the coin tumbled into the well and was lost.

So he set to work even more obstinately: at night he would not sleep and

by day he would not eat. Other men saw their corn grow dry and yellow,

but his master’s corn prospered amain. Some men’s cattle became

bowlegged, but his master’s gambolled in the street. And the horses of

some masters fell downhill, but his master’s could not be kept to the

bridle. The master knew very well whom he must thank, to whom he must

render gratitude. So, when the third year came to an end, he laid a pile

of money on the table: “Take, my dear man, as much as your soul desires.

It is your work, and it is your money”; and he went out of the room.

Once more the workman took a single coin, went to the well for a drink

of water and looked, and the lost money floated up to the surface: so he

took them, and he then felt sure that God had rewarded him for his

labour. He was joyous and thought, “It is now the time for me to go and

look at the white world and to learn of people.” So he thought this, and

he went out whither his eyes gazed.

He went on to the field, and he saw a mouse running: “My friend, my dear

gossip, give me a coin; I will be of service to you.”

So he gave the mouse a coin.

Then he went to the forest, and a beetle crept up and said, “My friend,

my dear gossip, give me a coin; I will be of service to you.”

So he gave him the second coin.

Then he came up to the stream, and he met a sheat-fish. “My friend, my

dear gossip, give me a coin; I shall be of service to you.”

And he could not refuse him, so he gave his last coin.

So then he came into the city. Oh, it was so thronged! All the doors

were opened, and he looked, and the workman turned in all directions,

and he did not know where to go. In front of him stood the Tsar’s palace

decked with gold and silver, and at the window the Tsarévna Without a

Smile sat and gazed on him straight. What should he do? The light in his

eyes turned dark, and a sleep fell on him, and he fell straight into the

mud. Up came the sheat-fish with his big whiskers, and after him the

beetle and the mouse: they all ran up, they all pressed round him and

did all the service they could. The little mouse took his coat: the

beetle cleaned his boots, and the sheat-fish drove away the flies. The

Princess Without a Smile gazed on their services, and she smiled.

“Who is he who has enlivened my daughter?” cried the King. One man said

“I,” and another man said “I.”

“No,” said the Princess, “that is the man there”; and she pointed out

the workman.

Instantly he was taken into the palace, and the workman stood in the

imperial presence, a youth such as never was: then the Tsar kept his

princely word and gave what he had promised.

I am saying it. Was not this a mere dream? Did not the workman only

dream it? They assure me this is not the fact, and that it all happened

in real truth; so you must believe it.


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

True virtue and selfless kindness, even in the face of adversity, will eventually be rewarded, bringing joy not only to oneself but also to others.

Plot Summary

A beautiful but perpetually sad princess, whose father the Tsar promises her hand to anyone who can make her smile, remains unmoved by many suitors. Meanwhile, a humble and honest laborer repeatedly loses his hard-earned coins in a well but continues to work diligently, eventually recovering them. On his travels, he selflessly gives these coins to a mouse, a beetle, and a sheat-fish. Upon arriving in the city and collapsing, these grateful animals tend to him, and the sight of their kindness finally makes the Princess smile, leading to her marriage to the virtuous laborer.

Themes

humility and perseverancedivine reward for virtueinner joy vs. external wealththe power of simple kindness

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader, repetition of character traits (Princess Without a Smile), rule of three (years of service, animals helped)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs self (laborer's internal struggle with greed/acceptance); person vs fate (Princess's inability to smile)
Ending: happy
Magic: coins returning from the well, talking animals, animals performing human-like tasks
the lost and returned coins (symbolizing divine reward for virtue)the Princess's smile (symbolizing inner joy and transformation)the well (a place of loss and eventual retrieval)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian (collected by Afanas'ev)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Afanas'ev's collection of Russian fairy tales (Narodnye russkie skazki) was compiled in the mid-19th century, preserving oral traditions that reflect pre-industrial Russian society and its values.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The Princess Without a Smile lives in luxury but is perpetually sad, causing her father, the Tsar, distress.
  2. The Tsar announces that whoever can make his daughter smile will win her hand in marriage, attracting many failed suitors.
  3. A humble, honest laborer works diligently for a rich master, earning a single coin after the first year.
  4. The laborer's coin falls into a well, but he accepts it as God's will and works even harder.
  5. After the second year, he again earns a coin, which also falls into the well, yet he works with even greater obstinacy.
  6. After the third year, he earns a coin, and this time all three lost coins float back up from the well, confirming God's reward for his labor.
  7. Joyful, the laborer decides to travel and see the world.
  8. He encounters a mouse, a beetle, and a sheat-fish, each asking for a coin, and he selflessly gives away all three of his recovered coins.
  9. He arrives in the city, sees the Princess at her window, and collapses in the mud from exhaustion or a mystical sleep.
  10. The mouse, beetle, and sheat-fish appear and diligently clean and tend to the unconscious laborer.
  11. The Princess, observing the animals' service to the humble man, smiles for the first time.
  12. The Tsar asks who made his daughter smile; many claim credit, but the Princess points to the laborer.
  13. The laborer is brought into the palace, and the Tsar fulfills his promise, marrying his daughter to him.

Characters 7 characters

The Princess Without a Smile ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Grew fairer every day, doleful expression

Attire: Implied rich, regal attire befitting a princess in a palace

A beautiful princess with a perpetually sad or neutral expression

Melancholy, unsmiling, seemingly joyless, observant

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A young princess with a sorrowful expression, pale skin, and long dark hair cascading over her shoulders. She wears an ornate silver tiara and a deep blue velvet gown with intricate embroidery, her hands clasped gently before her. Her posture is slightly slumped, head bowed, eyes downcast with a hint of sadness. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Labourer ★ protagonist

human adult male

None explicitly stated, but implied to be hardworking and humble

Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a labourer, likely worn and sturdy

A humble man, perhaps with a single coin in his hand, looking towards a well

Honest, pious, hardworking, humble, patient, compassionate

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A man in his mid-thirties with a rugged, sun-weathered face and determined brown eyes. He has short, messy brown hair and a few days of stubble. He wears a faded, earth-stained linen tunic with rolled-up sleeves, patched brown trousers, and heavy, worn leather boots. A simple leather belt holds a small pouch. He stands firmly, one hand resting on a wooden-handled shovel, looking slightly upward with a hopeful, resolute expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Tsar ◆ supporting

human adult male

None explicitly stated

Attire: Imperial robes, crown, or other regalia befitting a Tsar

A worried king, perhaps gesturing towards his unsmiling daughter

Concerned, generous (in his offer), desperate to see his daughter smile

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A middle-aged man with a stern, authoritative expression, wearing an ornate golden crown adorned with red gems. He is dressed in a long, deep blue velvet robe with white fur trim over a richly embroidered tunic. His posture is rigid and upright, seated on a simple wooden throne with a straight back. His hair is dark and slicked back, with a neatly trimmed beard. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Master ◆ supporting

human adult male

None explicitly stated

Attire: Clothing of a wealthy landowner or merchant

A man placing a purse of money on a table

Rich, just, appreciative, trusting

Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly man with a long, flowing white beard and deep wrinkles around his kind, knowing eyes. He wears a layered robe of deep blue and grey, embroidered with subtle silver constellations. His posture is slightly stooped but dignified, leaning gently on a tall, gnarled wooden staff topped with a softly glowing crystal. He has a calm, patient expression, observing something just out of frame. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Mouse ◆ supporting

animal adult non-human

Small, furry, quick

A tiny mouse carrying a piece of clothing

Helpful, grateful, loyal

Image Prompt & Upload
A young anthropomorphic mouse with large round ears, soft gray fur, and bright curious eyes. Wearing a simple red vest over a white puffy shirt, brown trousers, and tiny leather boots. Standing upright with a cheerful smile, one paw resting on a small satchel slung over its shoulder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Beetle ◆ supporting

animal adult non-human

Creeping insect

A beetle cleaning a boot

Helpful, grateful, loyal

Image Prompt & Upload
A humanoid beetle with a glossy dark brown exoskeleton, segmented body, and large multifaceted eyes that gleam with intelligence. Two slender antennae extend from its head, and it has four articulated limbs, the upper pair held in a gentle, helpful gesture. It wears a minimal harness of twisted vines across its thorax. Standing upright on two hind legs, its posture is steady and supportive, with a calm, reassuring expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Sheat-fish ◆ supporting

animal adult non-human

Fish with big whiskers

A fish with prominent whiskers, perhaps shooing flies

Helpful, grateful, loyal

Image Prompt & Upload
A humanoid figure with the features of a large catfish, possessing smooth, mottled grey-green skin, long whisker-like barbels framing a wide, friendly mouth, and small, intelligent black eyes. They wear a simple, undyed linen tunic and trousers, belted with a rope. Their posture is slightly hunched and open-handed, as if offering assistance, with a gentle, observant expression. Their hands are broad and slightly webbed. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Tsar's Palace

indoor implied pleasant, as feasts are held

An imperial palace, decked with gold and silver, with open doors and a window where the Princess sits. It is a place of great plenty and beauty, but also of sorrow due to the Princess's inability to smile.

Mood: luxurious, grand, sorrowful, expectant

The Princess Without a Smile resides here; the Tsar hosts feasts to try and make her smile; the workman is eventually brought here to marry the Princess.

gold and silver decorations open doors window feast tables thronging gates
Image Prompt & Upload
A grand imperial palace at twilight, its baroque facade adorned with intricate gold leaf and silver filigree that catch the last purple and amber light. Massive ornate doors stand open, revealing a glimpse of a richly lit interior. A single, tall arched window on an upper floor glows with a soft, solitary light. The surrounding formal gardens are immaculate but still, with marble fountains and sculpted hedges under a vast, dusky sky. The atmosphere is one of majestic opulence tinged with a profound, silent melancholy. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Labourer's Little Hut

indoor varies, implying the passage of years

A small, humble dwelling belonging to an honourable labourer, in the 'other end of town'.

Mood: humble, industrious, simple, honest

The labourer lives and works here, receiving his pay from his master, and contemplating his honesty.

a table a purse of money a pile of money
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Dusk settles over the neglected edge of town. A small, weathered wooden hut with a sagging thatched roof sits at the end of a muddy, overgrown path. The single window glows with a warm, weak yellow light from a dying hearth fire. Outside, a worn wooden bucket and a splintered stool sit near the door. The surrounding grass is tall and weedy, and a crooked fence post leans nearby. In the soft twilight, the distant, grander rooftops of the main town are visible on the horizon, their chimneys dark. The air is still and cool, with long shadows stretching from the hut. The color palette is muted browns, deep greens, and dusky blues. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Well

outdoor

A well where the labourer goes to drink water.

Mood: simple, functional, fateful

The labourer repeatedly loses his coins here, and eventually recovers them, signifying divine reward.

water the bottom of the well
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A weathered stone well stands in a sun-dappled clearing at the edge of a village, late afternoon golden hour light casting long, soft shadows. The well is built of mossy, ancient stones, with a sturdy wooden roof and a thick rope disappearing into the deep, dark water below. A simple wooden bucket rests on the stone rim. Around the base, clusters of wildflowers and clover grow. The background features a gentle slope of rolling green hills and the distant, hazy silhouettes of thatched-roof cottages. The atmosphere is peaceful and timeless, with a sense of quiet respite. Warm amber and deep emerald tones dominate. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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The City Street (near the Palace)

outdoor day implied fair weather

A thronged city street, bustling with people, leading to the Tsar's palace.

Mood: chaotic, public, climactic

The labourer, overwhelmed, falls into the mud, and his animal friends come to his aid, causing the Princess to smile.

mud thronging crowds the Tsar's palace in the distance
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A grand cobblestone city street stretches toward the distant, majestic Tsar's palace, its gilded domes and spires catching the afternoon sun. Ornate, pastel-colored buildings with intricate carvings and arched windows line both sides, their balconies adorned with empty flower boxes. Warm sunlight bathes the scene in golden hues, casting long shadows across the empty street. The air feels still and quiet, with a clear sky overhead. The architecture features Russian-inspired details—baroque facades, patterned rooftops, and wrought-iron lampposts. In the foreground, a few fallen leaves rest on the cobblestones, hinting at a gentle breeze. The palace looms at the street's end, its white walls and blue domes prominent against the sky. No border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.