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The Snake Princess

by Alexander Afanasyev

The Snake Princess

The Snake Princess A Cossack was going on his road and way, and he arrived in the sleepy forest, and in that forest, in a glade, stood a hayrick. So the Cossack stood in front just to have a little rest, lay down in front of the hayrick and smoked his pipe, went on smoking, smoking, and never saw that a spark had fallen into the hay. After his rest he again mounted his horse and went on his road. But he had gone only some dozen paces, when a flame blazed out and lit up the wood. Then the Cossack looked back steadily, and saw the hayrick burning, and in the middle of the flame a fair maiden standing, saying in a threatening voice, “Cossack, good man, save me from death!” “How shall I save you? I see flames all around and cannot get up to you.” “Thrust your pike into the flame: I will jump out on to it.” So the Cossack thrust his pike into the flame and leapt to avoid the great heat. Then the fair maiden turned into a snake, crept on to the pike, crawled round the Cossack’s neck, coiled herself round his neck three times and put her tail between her mouth. The Cossack was frightened and had no notion what he should do or what should come to him. Then the snake spoke to him in a human voice: “Do not be frightened, good youth; bear me on your neck for seven years, and go to seek the Kingdom of Tin: when you arrive in that kingdom stay there and live there seven years more, and do not ever leave it: if you serve this service you shall be happy.” So the Cossack went to look for the Kingdom of Tin; much time went by, much water flowed in the river, and at the end of the seventh year he at last reached a steep mountain, and on that mountain stood a castle of tin, and around the castle was a lofty white stone wall. So he climbed up the mountain, and the wall opened in front of him, and he arrived at a broad courtyard. At that same instant the snake disentangled herself from his neck, struck the grey earth, and turned into the maiden of his soul, vanished from his eyes as though she had never been there. The Cossack stabled his horse, went into the palace, and began looking at the rooms: there were looking-glasses all about, silver and velvet, but never a soul of a man to be seen. “Ah!” thought the Cossack, “Wherever have I got to? Who will give me food and drink? I must here die of thirst and hunger.” And whilst he was thinking this, lo and behold! in front of him stood a covered table, and on the table was food and drink, enough for all. So he tasted what he would, drank what he would, strengthened his body, and thought of mounting on his horse to survey. He went into the stable, and the horse was standing in the stall and was eagerly devouring oats. Well, this affair had turned out very well after all; possibly he might go on living without any suffering. So the Cossack stayed for a very, very long time in the tin castle, until he became wearied unto death: it might be a joke, but he was always alone and could never exchange as much as a whisper with anybody. So, from sheer grief, he drank himself drunk and thought he would go out into the free world. But wherever he ventured forth there were lofty walls, with neither an entrance nor an exit. So he grew very angry, and the doughty youth took his cudgel, went into the palace and began knocking about the looking-glasses and mirrors, tearing up the velvet, breaking the chairs, shattering the silver. Possibly, he thought, the owner might come and let him free. But no, never a soul appeared! Then the Cossack lay down to sleep. Next day he woke up, went for a walk and a saunter, and he thought he would like to have some food, and he looked around: there was nothing to be had. “Ah!” he thought, “The slave rains on herself the blows if unfaithfully she mows. I smoked to death yesterday, and to-day I must starve.” He had despaired. And that very instant food and drink stood ready for him. Three days went by: the Cossack slept in the morning, and then looked out of the window, and his good horse stood saddled at the steps. What did that mean? So he washed and dressed, prayed to God, took his long pike and went into the open courtyard. Suddenly, from somewhere or other, the fair maiden appeared and said, “Health to you, good youth: the seven years are over. You saved me from my perdition and my end. Now, listen to me: I am a king’s daughter; Koshchéy the Deathless fell in love with me, took me away from my father and from my mother, wished to marry me, but I always laughed at him. Then he grew angry, and he turned me into a wild snake: I thank you for your long service. We will fare forth to my father’s court; he will wish to reward you with gold from his treasury and with precious stones: but do you take nothing of them. Simply ask for the keg which is lying in his cellar.” “But what is the use of that?” “If you turn that keg to the right a palace appears forthwith, if you turn it to the left, it vanishes.” “Very well,” said the Cossack. So he mounted his steed, set himself and the fair princess on it, and the lofty walls moved away from before him, and they set out on their road and way. May be long, may be short, at last they arrived at the kingdom named: the king saw his daughter and was overjoyed, began expressing his thanks and gave the Cossack sacks full of gold and pearls: but the doughty youth answered him, “I desire neither gold nor pearls, give me as a remembrance of you simply the keg which is lying in your cellar.” “You ask for a great gift, brother; but I must do what you say, for my daughter is dearer to me than all else that I have here. I do not regret the barrel; take it and go with God.” So the Cossack took the royal gift and set out to roam through the white world. He went on and on, and he met an ancient old man on the way: the old man answered him, “Give me food and drink, good youth!” So the Cossack leapt from his horse, undid the keg, turned it to the right, and a miraculous palace appeared on the spot: both of them went into the painted rooms and sat on covered chairs. “Ho, ye my faithful servants!” cried out the Cossack, “give food and drink to this guest.” Before ever the words were uttered, the servants brought an entire ox and three casks of beer. The old man set to and gourmandised, making the best of it. He ate the entire ox, and he drank the three casks of beer, croaked and said, “That was a small gift: still I cannot help it. I thank you for the bread and salt.” Then they went out of the palace, and the Cossack turned his keg to the left, and there was no sign of the palace. “Let us exchange,” said the old man to the Cossack. “I will give you a sword, and you give me the keg: what is the use of the keg to you? This is a sword which slays of itself: you need only wave it, and however incalculable the force may be it will slay them all in front of it. You see that forest? Shall I show you what it can do?” Then the old man drew his sword and said to it, “Set to work, self-slaying sword, and despoil all the dreamy forest.” So the sword flew out of his hands, cut down the trees, and laid them all down in regular boards. Then, after it had cut them down, it came back to its master. So the Cossack did not long bethink him, but gave the old man his keg and took the self-slaying sword, waved the sword, and killed the old man. Then he tied the keg to his saddle, mounted his horse, and thought he would go back to the King. But just then a terrible enemy was besieging the capital city of that King, and the Cossack saw an incalculable host and array, waved his sword and said, “Self-slaying sword, serve me a service and spill the hostile host.” And then there was a fine sight—heads flying about, blood flowing freely—and within one hour all the field was covered with corpses. Then the King came out, kissed him, and decided to give him the fair princess to wife. It was a gorgeous wedding. I was there at the wedding. I drank mead and wine: it flowed up to my whiskers, but it never entered my mouth.

Moral of the Story

Patience and faithful service can lead to great rewards, but true power comes with responsibility and can be easily misused.


Characters 5 characters

The Cossack ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Strong and doughty, capable of wielding a pike and a cudgel.

Attire: Traditional Cossack attire, including a uniform, boots, and possibly a fur hat. Carries a pike and later a cudgel.

Brave, resourceful, initially fearful but quickly adapts, somewhat impulsive.

The Snake Princess ◆ supporting

magical creature young adult female

Fair maiden, later revealed to be a king's daughter. Can transform into a wild snake.

Attire: Implied to be regal and beautiful once in human form, befitting a princess.

Mysterious, grateful, intelligent, determined.

Koshchéy the Deathless ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless male

Not explicitly described, but implied to be a powerful and fearsome sorcerer.

Attire: Unknown, but likely dark and imposing, befitting a villain.

Possessive, vengeful, powerful, cruel.

The King ○ minor

human adult male

A monarch, likely of dignified bearing.

Attire: Royal robes, crown, and other symbols of kingship.

Loving father, generous, grateful.

The Ancient Old Man ○ minor

human elderly male

An old man encountered on the road, with a large appetite.

Attire: Simple, worn clothing suitable for a traveler or hermit.

Cunning, gluttonous, manipulative.

Locations 4 locations
Sleepy Forest Glade with Hayrick

Sleepy Forest Glade with Hayrick

outdoor day not specified

A sleepy forest glade where a hayrick stands. The Cossack rests here, smoking his pipe.

Mood: peaceful, then suddenly dangerous and magical

The Cossack accidentally sets the hayrick on fire, and the Snake Princess (in maiden form) appears in the flames, asking for rescue.

hayrickforest treessparkflamesfair maiden in flames
Steep Mountain with Tin Castle

Steep Mountain with Tin Castle

outdoor day not specified

A steep mountain upon which a castle made of tin stands. Around the castle is a lofty white stone wall.

Mood: mysterious, imposing, isolated

The Cossack arrives after seven years of searching for the Kingdom of Tin. The wall opens for him, and the Snake Princess transforms and vanishes.

steep mountaintin castlelofty white stone wallopening wall
Broad Courtyard and Palace Rooms of the Tin Castle

Broad Courtyard and Palace Rooms of the Tin Castle

indoor day not specified

A broad courtyard inside the tin castle, leading to palace rooms filled with looking-glasses, silver, and velvet. No people are present.

Mood: eerie, opulent, lonely, magical

The Cossack lives here for seven years, experiencing magical provisions and extreme loneliness, eventually destroying the interior in frustration.

broad courtyardstableslooking-glassessilver objectsvelvet furnishingscovered table with food and drink
King's Capital City and Battlefield

King's Capital City and Battlefield

outdoor day not specified

The capital city of the King, under siege by a 'terrible enemy'. The surrounding field is covered with corpses after the battle.

Mood: chaotic, violent, then victorious

The Cossack uses the self-slaying sword to defeat the King's enemies, securing his marriage to the princess.

capital cityenemy hostflying headsflowing bloodcorpses

Story DNA fairy tale · whimsical

Moral

Patience and faithful service can lead to great rewards, but true power comes with responsibility and can be easily misused.

Plot Summary

A Cossack accidentally sets a hayrick on fire, saving a maiden who transforms into a snake and demands he carry her for seven years to the Kingdom of Tin, then live alone there for seven more. After enduring this long isolation, the snake reveals herself as a cursed princess and instructs him to ask her father for a magical keg that conjures a palace. The Cossack later trades the keg for a self-slaying sword, uses it to kill the trickster old man and reclaim the keg, and then saves the princess's kingdom from invaders, earning her hand in marriage.

Themes

patience and perseverancereward for servicethe nature of powerloneliness and isolation

Emotional Arc

fear to duty to isolation to reward to power to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (epilogue), magical realism

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: maiden transforming into a snake, snake speaking human language, tin castle appearing on a mountain, self-sustaining castle with food/drink appearing, magical keg that conjures/vanishes a palace, self-slaying sword
the snake (transformation, burden, hidden identity)the tin castle (isolation, patience, hidden magic)the magical keg (creation, power, provision)the self-slaying sword (destructive power, temptation)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian (Afanas'ev collection)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Afanas'ev collected this tale, likely from oral tradition, in the 19th century. The character of Koshchéy is deeply rooted in ancient Slavic mythology.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A Cossack rests by a hayrick, accidentally setting it on fire with a pipe spark.
  2. A maiden trapped in the flames asks the Cossack for help, instructing him to use his pike.
  3. The maiden transforms into a snake, coils around the Cossack's neck, and instructs him to carry her for seven years to the Kingdom of Tin, then live there for seven more.
  4. After seven years, the Cossack reaches the tin castle, where the snake transforms back into the maiden and vanishes.
  5. The Cossack lives alone in the self-sustaining castle for seven years, growing lonely and frustrated, even destroying parts of the interior.
  6. After the second seven years, the maiden reappears, revealing she is a king's daughter cursed by Koshchéy the Deathless, and thanks him for his service.
  7. She instructs him to refuse all treasures from her father and instead ask for a specific magical keg from the cellar, which can create and destroy a palace.
  8. The Cossack and the princess travel to her father's kingdom; the king, overjoyed, offers riches, but the Cossack asks only for the keg.
  9. The Cossack roams the world with his magical keg, encountering an old man who asks for food.
  10. The Cossack uses the keg to conjure a palace and feed the old man, who consumes an enormous amount of food and drink.
  11. The old man offers to trade a self-slaying sword for the keg, demonstrating its power by felling a forest.
  12. The Cossack agrees to the trade, then immediately uses the sword to kill the old man and reclaims the keg.
  13. Returning to the king's capital, the Cossack finds it under siege by a vast enemy army.
  14. He uses the self-slaying sword to decimate the enemy forces, saving the kingdom.
  15. The King, in gratitude, offers his daughter, the Snake Princess, in marriage to the Cossack.

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