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The Thoughtless Word

by Alexander Afanasyev

The Thoughtless Word

The Thoughtless Word Once upon a time an old man lived in a village with his wife, and they were very poor: they had only one son. And when he grew up, the mother said to her husband: “It is full time that we secured a wife for our son.” “Well, go and see if you can bargain for a wife.” The old woman went to her neighbour and asked him if her son could marry his daughter. But the neighbour said, “No!” And she went to the next peasant, who also declined the honour. And she searched the whole village, and not a single soul would hear a single word of it. When she came back she said: “Goodman, I fear our son is born under an unlucky star!” “Why?” “I went through the whole village, and there is nobody who will give me his daughter.” “That looks bad!” said the husband. “It will soon be summer, and we shall not have anybody to help us at the harvest. Woman, go into the next village, as you may find somebody there.” The old woman went to the next village, went from one end to the other, went through all the courtyards and houses of the peasants, but it was all in vain. Wherever she showed her nose, she was put off. And she came back home as she had left. “No one wants to be kin with such poor folk as us!” “In that case it is no good running oneself off one’s legs. Go and sit behind the oven.” But the son was indignant, and asked: “Father, bless me, and I will go and seek my own fate.” “Where then will you go?” “Wherever my eyes lead me!” So they blessed him and they let him go wherever the four winds blow. When the boy was on the road, he wept bitterly and spoke to himself: “Am I then the feeblest man in the world, and no maiden will really have me? If the Devil would only send me a bride I think I would rake her!” Suddenly, just as though he had grown out of the earth, an old man came to meet him. “Good day, doughty youth!” “Good day, old father!” “What were you saying just now?” Then the boy was frightened and did not know what to answer. “You need not fear me. I will do you no harm, and perhaps I can help you in your need. Speak out boldly.” So the boy told him all the truth. “Oh, I am a sorry fellow, and no maiden will marry me. That is making me angry; and I said in my indignation that if the Devil himself came and gave me a girl, I would make her my bride.” So the old man laughed and said: “I can give you a bride, oh, as many brides as you like”; and they then came to a lake. “Stand with your back to the water, and step backwards,” the old man told the boy. As soon as he had turned round, and had gone four steps, he found himself under the water, in a white stone palace.[16] All the rooms were splendidly furnished and finely decorated. The old man gave him meat and drink, and afterwards showed him twelve maidens, each of whom was fairer than the others. “Choose which you will of them. You shall have any of them.” “It is a difficult choice, grandfather! Let me have till to-morrow to think of it.” “Well, you can have until to-morrow,” said the old man, and he took him into a large room. The boy lay down to sleep and began to think which he would take. Suddenly the door opened and a beautiful maiden came in. “Are you asleep, doughty youth, or not?” “No, fair maiden, I cannot sleep. I am thinking which is the bride I shall take.” “That is the very reason I came to see you, in order to give you counsel; for, good man, you have become the Devil’s guest. So, listen to me; if you ever wish to return to the light of day, you must do as I say. If you do not, you will not leave this place alive.” “Give me your counsel, fair maiden. I shall not forget it all my life long.” “To-morrow the Evil Spirit will show you twelve maidens, one like the other. You must choose me, and look at me very carefully. There will be a patch over my right eye; that will be the sign.” And the maiden told him her story. “Do you know the pope in a neighbouring village? I am his daughter, and was stolen from his house nine years ago. One day my father was angry with me and made a hasty wish that the Devil might take me. I went in front of the house and cried, and the Unholy Spirit soon snatched me on the spot, carried me here; and I have never left the place since.” Next day the old man set the twelve maidens in a row before the boy, and commanded him to choose one of them. He looked until he had seen the one with the patch over the right eye, and chose her. The old man was angry, but he had to give her up. And he therefore mixed the maidens together and told him to make a second choice. The boy hit on the same one, and after a third choice he took his fated bride. “This has been your piece of luck. Now take her home!” All at once the boy and the maiden found themselves on the bank of the lake, and they walked backwards until they reached the high road. The Devil wanted to hunt after them; but all at once the lake vanished, and there was no trace of the water. When the boy had taken his bride into the village, he stopped at the pope’s house. The pope saw her, and sent a servant out and asked what they desired. “We are wandering folk, and ask for shelter.” “I have guests staying here, and my hut would be too small anyhow.” “But, father!” said the merchants, “wandering folk must be always taken in: they will not disturb us.” “Well, come in.” The boy and the maiden came in, made due greetings, and sat behind, on a corner of the fire bank. “Do you know me, father? I am your own daughter!” She told him what had happened; and they kissed, and embraced, and shed tears of joy. “Who is he?” said the pope, pointing to the boy. “That is my own chosen bridegroom, who brought me back to light of day, but for whom I should have remained beneath for ever!” Thereupon the fair maiden opened her bag, and there were golden and silver vessels in it which she had stolen from the devils. A merchant looked at them and said: “Those are my plate. Once I was dining with guests, and became rather drunk, quarrelled with my wife, and I wished them all to the Devil. And since then all my plate has vanished!” And this was the truth, for as soon as ever the man mentioned the Devil, the Evil Spirit appeared on the threshold, gathered up all the gold and silver plate, and threw skeleton bones down instead. So the boy got a fine bride, married her, and drove to see his parents. They had long given him up for dead, and it was no wonder; for he had been away for three years, although it had seemed to him only twenty-four hours that he had stayed with the Devil.

Moral of the Story

Thoughtless words, especially curses or wishes made in anger, can have unforeseen and powerful consequences, but courage and wit can overcome them.


Characters 7 characters

The Son ★ protagonist

human young adult male

None explicitly mentioned, likely a young, able-bodied man given the context of seeking a wife and working the harvest.

Attire: Simple peasant clothing, appropriate for travel and farm work.

Indignant, determined, somewhat impulsive, grateful.

The Old Man (Devil) ⚔ antagonist

magical creature elderly male

Appears suddenly, as if grown out of the earth.

Attire: None explicitly mentioned, likely simple, perhaps dark or nondescript clothing.

Deceptive, powerful, manipulative, bound by rules (e.g., giving up the maiden if chosen correctly).

The Pope's Daughter ◆ supporting

human young adult female

Beautiful, with a distinctive patch over her right eye when in the Devil's realm.

Attire: Initially, likely simple clothing from her time in the Devil's palace; later, implied to be carrying a bag with golden and silver vessels.

Resourceful, intelligent, brave, grateful, loyal.

The Old Woman (Mother) ○ minor

human elderly female

None explicitly mentioned, but described as an old woman.

Attire: Simple peasant dress, likely worn and practical.

Concerned, persistent (initially), easily discouraged.

The Old Man (Father) ○ minor

human elderly male

None explicitly mentioned, but described as an old man.

Attire: Simple peasant clothing.

Practical, somewhat resigned, loving towards his son.

The Pope ○ minor

human adult male

None explicitly mentioned.

Attire: Clerical attire, appropriate for a village priest.

Initially unwelcoming, but swayed by others' counsel, eventually overjoyed and repentant.

The Merchant ○ minor

human adult male

None explicitly mentioned.

Attire: Clothing befitting a merchant, perhaps slightly better than a peasant.

Observant, honest (in admitting his fault), perhaps a bit boisterous (given his story of getting drunk).

Locations 4 locations
Old Man's Village Home

Old Man's Village Home

indoor Implied to be summer approaching due to harvest needs.

A poor home in a village, likely small and humble, with an oven where the old woman is told to sit.

Mood: Humble, poor, initially despairing due to the son's lack of a bride, later joyful.

The initial family discussions about finding a wife for their son, and the son's decision to leave.

ovensmall living space
Road to the Unknown

Road to the Unknown

transitional Implied to be fair weather as he is traveling.

An unspecified road, where the boy walks alone, weeping bitterly.

Mood: Desolate, despairing, then suddenly eerie and magical with the appearance of the old man.

The boy's journey begins, he expresses his frustration, and encounters the old man (the Devil).

roadweeping boy
White Stone Palace (Under the Lake)

White Stone Palace (Under the Lake)

indoor N/A (underwater)

A magnificent palace located under a lake, with splendidly furnished and finely decorated rooms.

Mood: Magical, opulent, but also eerie and dangerous due to the Devil's presence.

The boy chooses his bride from the twelve maidens, guided by the pope's daughter, and outwits the Devil.

white stonesplendid furnishingsfine decorationstwelve maidens
Pope's House

Pope's House

indoor Varies

A house in a neighboring village, initially described as a 'hut' by the pope, but large enough to host guests. It has a fire bank.

Mood: Initially unwelcoming, then surprised, and finally joyous and revelatory.

The maiden reveals her identity to her father, the stolen treasures are revealed, and the Devil appears to reclaim his property.

fire bankguestsgold and silver vesselsskeleton bones

Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Thoughtless words, especially curses or wishes made in anger, can have unforeseen and powerful consequences, but courage and wit can overcome them.

Plot Summary

A poor young man, frustrated by his inability to find a wife, thoughtlessly wishes the Devil would send him a bride. The Devil appears and takes him to an underwater palace, presenting him with twelve maidens. One of the maidens, a priest's daughter also abducted by a careless curse, secretly advises the boy to choose her. The boy successfully outwits the Devil, escapes with the maiden, and they return to her father, revealing the consequences of thoughtless words. They marry and return to the boy's parents, having overcome their misfortunes.

Themes

the power of wordsfate vs. free willperseveranceredemption

Emotional Arc

despair to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: Devil/Evil Spirit, underwater palace, magical appearance/disappearance of characters and objects, time distortion (three years felt like one day), stolen magical treasures
the patch over the eye (a mark of identity/distinction)the golden and silver vessels (stolen wealth, consequences of curses)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Afanas'ev collected Russian folk tales, often reflecting peasant life, superstitions, and the role of the Orthodox church. The concept of 'thoughtless words' or curses having real power is a common folk belief.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. An old, poor couple tries to find a wife for their son, but no one in their village or the next will have him.
  2. The son, feeling indignant and unlucky, decides to seek his own fate and leaves home.
  3. While weeping and lamenting his fate, the son thoughtlessly wishes the Devil would send him a bride.
  4. An old man (the Devil) appears, offers him a bride, and leads him to an underwater white stone palace.
  5. The Devil presents twelve maidens for the boy to choose from, giving him until tomorrow to decide.
  6. One of the maidens, the pope's daughter, secretly visits the boy and tells him she was also taken by a thoughtless curse and instructs him to choose her by a patch over her right eye.
  7. The boy successfully identifies and chooses the correct maiden three times, outwitting the Devil.
  8. The boy and the maiden are transported back to the lake's bank, and the lake vanishes, preventing the Devil from pursuing them.
  9. They seek shelter at the pope's house, where the maiden reveals herself as his long-lost daughter, stolen by the Devil due to his angry wish.
  10. The maiden reveals golden and silver vessels she stole from the Devil, which a merchant recognizes as his own, also lost due to a thoughtless curse.
  11. The Devil appears, takes his stolen goods, and leaves skeleton bones in their place, confirming the power of the curses.
  12. The boy marries the maiden and returns to his parents, who had given him up for dead after three years, though to him it felt like only a day.

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