THE GENTLE ROBBER
by Margaret Pollock Sherwood · from The Princess Pourquoi
Adapted Version
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Once, a man lived far away. He was very tricky. His name was Mr. Sneaky. He took things from others. He always smiled big. He said, "Oh, it's nothing!" But he was not nice. He tricked many people. He wanted their gold. He wanted their silver. He spoke with sweet words. People trusted him. Then he took their things. He was a bad man. But his smile fooled people. He took gold from many. He took food from many. He took shiny things too. He was very greedy.
Mr. Sneaky had lots of gold. He had gold in his house. He had gold in big boxes. He gave much gold to the King. The King loved gold very much. His name was King Gold-Lover. Mr. Sneaky gave gold to him. He gave gold to the church too. Father Big Church ran the church. He liked gold very much too. Mr. Sneaky gave him lots of gold. The King was happy. Father Big Church was happy. Mr. Sneaky smiled his fake smile.
King Gold-Lover knew the truth. Father Big Church knew the truth. They knew the gold was stolen. Mr. Sneaky tricked people for it. But they took it. King Gold-Lover wanted a big school. Father Big Church wanted a big church. They used Mr. Sneaky's bad gold. They did not care. They wanted more gold. They liked what gold could buy. So they said nothing bad.
Then came a boy named Louis. People called him Brave Louis. He had a good heart. He heard about Mr. Sneaky. He heard the bad stories. People said Mr. Sneaky stole. People said he tricked them. Brave Louis felt very sad. He wanted to help people. He wanted to make things right. He said, "This is wrong!" He was not scared. He was very brave.
Brave Louis went to see him. He went to Father Big Church. He said, "Mr. Sneaky is bad!" He said, "He steals from people!" Father Big Church shook his head. He said, "No, Louis." He said, "Mr. Sneaky helps us." He said, "He gives us gold." He said, "Gold for my big church!" He did not want to listen. He sent Brave Louis away. Brave Louis felt very sad.
Brave Louis did not stop. He went to King Gold-Lover. He said, "Mr. Sneaky is bad!" He said, "He tricks people!" King Gold-Lover shook his head. He said, "Go away, boy!" He said, "Mr. Sneaky gives me gold!" He said, "I need his gold!" He did not want to listen. He sent Brave Louis away. Brave Louis felt very, very sad.
Brave Louis did not give up. He went to the town square. Many people were there. He spoke to all of them. He said, "Listen to me!" He said, "Mr. Sneaky is bad!" He said, "He steals from you!" He said, "He tricks you all!" The people looked at him. Some felt he was right. But many were scared. They did not speak up. They looked down at the ground. They were too scared of Mr. Sneaky.
King Gold-Lover heard about this. Father Big Church heard about this. They were very angry at Louis. They made a new rule. The rule said: no one helps Louis. No one gives him food. No one gives him a bed. No one talks to him. Brave Louis was all alone. No one could help him now. The people were too scared. They had to follow the rule.
Then bad men came for Louis. They grabbed Brave Louis. They took him to the King. King Gold-Lover said a bad thing. Father Big Church said a bad thing. They said, "Louis must go!" They said, "He must leave!" They said, "He can never come back!" Brave Louis had to go away. He had to leave his home. He could not come back. Not now. Not ever.
It was a very sad day. Louis stood in the town square. King Gold-Lover was there. Father Big Church was there. Mr. Sneaky was there too. He had his fake smile on. All the people watched. Brave Louis looked at them all. He held his head up high. He was still brave. He walked out of the town. He walked away from his home. The people watched him go. Some had tears in their eyes.
Louis walked away from the land. King Gold-Lover smiled a big smile. Father Big Church smiled too. Mr. Sneaky smiled his fake smile. They were all very happy. The people watched Louis go. They said it was fair. They said it was right. But was it right? It was not right at all.
King Gold-Lover, Father Big Church, and Mr. Sneaky went to the big church. They smiled big smiles. They said good things about Mr. Sneaky. They said, "He is so great!" They said, "He helps us all!" But it was all lies. They stayed in charge. They kept doing bad things. They kept taking gold. They kept tricking people. Nothing was made right.
And so, Mr. Sneaky stayed. King Gold-Lover stayed. Father Big Church stayed. They kept doing things their way. Brave Louis was gone. But some people did not forget. They held his brave words close. They knew he was right.
At times, big people in charge make bad choices. They want gold. They want power. It is brave to speak up. Even when it is hard. Even when no one listens. Good people should always try. They should do what is right. Be brave, just like Brave Louis.
Original Story
THE GENTLE ROBBER
THE GENTLE ROBBER
Once there was a robber bold—not that he looked bold, for he had the gentlest of manners and the most persuasive tongue. It was with a certain manly shyness that he approached his victims, and his voice was very low and soft as he convinced them how greatly to their interest it would be to hand over their purses, so that many went on through the green forest paths with empty pockets, it is true, but with eyes full of tears of gratitude for the benefactor who had held them up.
"Pray don't mention it!" said the Robber Chief, as he deprecatingly thrust into his wallet the purses he had taken and heard the outpoured thanks. "It is nothing, nothing! You would have done as much for me at any time if you had"—he never finished his sentence, but the wistful admiration of the man with empty pockets always added the right clause—"if you had had the brains."
Now the Gentle Robber, it need hardly be said, was highly successful in his chosen calling, or, as he put it, "the holy saints had given him rich possessions." He had started out moderately in a remote corner of the forest, as became a young and unassuming retail cut-purse, but soon his domain extended from his own retired dell to the adjacent glade, and the merry outlaw who had prospered there gave up the business and became a scrivener's clerk. It was not long before the Robber Chief owned the whole forest: the title-deeds, to be sure, belonged to the Abbey, which lay in a fat green meadow at the edge of the wood, but the monks could not work the forest as the robber could, and whatever harvest of gold and of silver, of jewels, of rich cloths from the packs of merchants of the East was to be gathered there, this one man reaped in his own apologetic way, which always seemed to beg pardon of those who were despoiled, for doing them so much good at one time. Soon the country round the forest was his, and yokel, franklin, and squire, Sir Bertram from the Castle, and the Prior from the Abbey, began to render him accounts, and it came to pass that the Bishop at the capital city, Mertoun, and the King upon his throne, and the strong nobles about him trembled at the robber's name, for the waves of his power flowed out until they met the waves of the sea.
Dearly the Gentle Robber loved his work in all its aspects, and he was master of its least details. A brave fight with a sturdy yeoman going home from market with a half-year's gains was joy to him, and merry in his ears was the sound of the thwack, thwack, thwack of the oaken staves as they fell on head and shoulders; an encounter with a rich merchant's train brought him naught but exhilaration, and the deft, swift hand that emptied the pack and purse thrilled as it went about its chosen task. There was slow, sensuous pleasure in stripping off the garments of knight and of squire and leaving their limbs uncovered to the cold. Daintiest amusement of all was the spoiling of widow and of orphan: something of the ascetic lingered in the bosom of the Robber Chief, and rare and delicate was the task of emptying the scantily furnished larder, of carrying away the worn clothes, and the single jewel saved from the wreck of happier days. He found delight in feeling about his knees the clasp of the thin arms of the naked orphan as it wept for food, for genius knows no distinction of small and great, and yeoman and squire, knight and merchant, widow and orphan alike, thrilled him with a sense of his power, and through their cries sang in his ear the word "success."
In the course of time it came to pass that he became the chief support of the kingdom which he had caused to totter as he swept its riches into his own bulging pockets. When he came to court, as he sometimes did, wearing grave apparel and showing a modest face, the King leaned lovingly upon him; was he not financing the war with Binnamere and causing a half-dozen universities, which had but lately come into fashion, to rise in different parts of the land? The Bishop conferred weightily with him in quiet corners; was he not building the great cathedral which was to be the glory of the city throughout coming ages?
"Nay, nay, nay!" said the Bishop, waving a white, jeweled hand as the Chief began to divulge some of his larger plans. "Tell me not of thy wicked schemes! Thy methods I must condemn utterly, but if thou bringest me the money, well, I can at least see to it that it be not used for bad purposes. And speaking of money, we need for the walls of the apse a hundred bags of gold. Dost thou think thou couldst manage it?"
"Ay," said the Gentle Robber, and that night he despoiled nine men, killing three that resisted longest, for he was a great lover of Holy Church, and a devout believer, nor could she ask of him any service that he would not perform.
Now the lust for gold is a strange thing. There be that gather it together into stockings and go hungry and dirty to the day's end for gold, and that is the miser's lust. There be that win it and spend it again freely for delicate food and fiery drink, and this is the sensualist's lust. There be that get it by cruel means and scatter it abroad on church and hospital, and this is the philanthropist's lust, which possessed the Robber Chief. Gold and jewels were piled so high in his forest cave that he could not see out of its window, and he hardly knew whether winter snow or the shadow of flickering leaves lay on the ground, nor could hungry church nor greedy halls of learning lessen his piles of treasure enough to let the sunlight in.
Far on the edge of the kingdom to eastward lived blunt Sir Guy of Lamont, and his son and heir was a young squire, Louis by name, who had grown up much alone, wandering in the greenwood that circled the castle. Strong of arm and lusty he grew, yet cared not for the hunt, for he was friend to fox and hare, and the wild deer knew and loved him. Living close to spreading oak and delicate beech, among green leaves and nesting things, he began to wear the look of those who see more than meets the eye, and knight and franklin chaffed him as he sat apart while they grew merry over mug of ale or glass of wine in his father's hall. As he dreamed his dreams and thought his thoughts, rumors of the deeds of the Robber Chief floated to his ears, and he was sorely puzzled. It was a wandering merchant who brought the tale, spreading out his stuffs of velvet and of silk over table and settle and chair, and showing three great fresh sword-cuts on his arm as he spoke:—
"Andrew, my brother, lost his head in the encounter, and it was severed by a single blow, but I escaped, though there be few that may."
HE BEGAN TO WEAR THE LOOK OF THOSE WHO SEE MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE
With that he recounted all the tales that he had heard in his wanderings of the wrong-doing of this man, and they were many. Sir Guy listened with "Zounds!" and "'Sdeath!" but the youth said never a word of pity or of blame; yet, when the story-teller had finished, he marveled at the lad's eyes. They were gray eyes, with lashes dark and long, and the look in them was as the look in the eyes of a gentle beast when he is hurt to the death; then came to them the sudden fire of the avenger of misdeeds.
"My hour has come to fight," said young Louis of Lamont to the great stag that licked his hand that evening in the forest as the sun went down in golden haze. "Men do not know this cruel wrong; I must go to tell them, and mayhap lead them forth with banner and with sword."
Early the next morning, when all were making merry at the hunt, he set the face of his snow-white steed to westward and rode down long, green, leafy ways and across a great level plain toward the setting of the sun. In doublet and hose of scarlet, laced with gold thread, he was comely to see, with a white plume in his velvet cap, and thick hair of yellow, clipped evenly at his neck, and on his face the beauty that shines out from a light within. All day he journeyed on, yearning to meet alone the Robber Chief, whom he pictured as a man brawny of arm and of evil countenance, wherein black brows hid the sinister eyes, and a black beard covered a cruel mouth; and the lad longed with the lusty strength of untried youth to measure swords with this terrible foe. That night a woman gave him shelter at a wayside hut, and told a tale of the Chief that chilled the young man's blood; the next night, as he lodged at a hall, deeds yet more cruel were recounted to him; and ever as he came nearer the heart of the kingdom, he found the air more rife with tidings of the Robber Chief's ill doings.
"They do not know," he said, lightly touching spur to his steed. "The King and the Bishop do not know of these wicked things. Pray God that I may come in time to lead men forth!"
At the edge of a great forest he met, one day, a tired-looking man on a tired horse. The rider was neatly clad in sober gray, and was both freshly shaven and neatly combed. Across his saddle lay a great bag of something that was wondrous heavy.
"Halt!" said the man, with a pleasant glance from his mild blue eyes. Then blood rose red to the young squire's cheek, and anger too great for any words lighted in his eyes, as his hand went to his dagger, and he urged his horse forward. It was a brave fight that he made, while the two steeds drew near and parted and drew near again, but a slender white hand with an iron grip reached deftly and snatched the dagger from his hand, nor could he reach the short sword which he had so proudly belted to his side; and the strength of his adversary was as the strength of ten.
"Nay, be not foolish," said a soft voice, as the lad struck out with stinging fist; "'tis but thy purse I ask, and it would grieve me to do thee wrong. The purses of the kingdom belong to me."
"Now, by what right?" cried Louis of Lamont, between set teeth, his cheeks flaming deeper red.
"By the right of having wit enough to get them," answered the robber. Then he pinioned the lad's arm to his side and thrust a deft hand into his pocket, drawing out a purse of wrought gold.
"It will be to thy best advantage if thou canst but see it that way," he said courteously.
In the mind of the other the vision of dark, beetling brows and red, hairy cheeks was fading.
"Thou—thou art the Robber Chief," he stammered. His adversary bowed.
"It is thou who didst murder Baron Divonne, and who didst starve the Squire's daughter of Yverton with her seven children, and"—So great was his horror of the tales that flocked to his tongue that he failed to speak them, but a light as from the wings of the Angel of Judgment shone from his eyes and brow.
"The question is not, 'Shall I take thy purse?'" the Chief said gently. "I have it. The question is, 'How shall I dispose of it to the best advantage?'"
"It isn't that! I do not want the purse," said the young man scornfully; "but how canst thou traffic in crime?"
"I have little time for talking," said the Gentle Robber, with a hurt look on his face; he was extremely sensitive to adverse criticism. "Now I must be off. This great bag of gold is for the orphan hospital at the Abbey. If I may mention it without boasting, it derives most of its supplies from me," and he looked wistfully for approval.
"Its supplies of orphans?" demanded Louis of Lamont, with his stern young lip curved in scorn; but the face of the other was as the face of a man who has failed to teach a great lesson of good.
As the lad rode on through the forest, his head was bent as if a hand had struck it and had laid it low, but coming into the open, he saw far off, across the valley, the spires of the capital city, Mertoun, and its many red roofs gleaming by the blue river, and his heart throbbed within him for thankfulness and joy.
"Hasten!" he cried to the beast that bore him. "Yonder in that strong city be strong men to help me right ill deeds, and a minute gained may save some woman's life, or spare the bitter crying of a child."
His eyes were filled with a vision of the knights that would go out with him to war for the right, with the waving of plumes and the flaming of banners, in their hearts the anger of God for cruel wrong; and a yearning for coming combat tugged at the muscles of shoulder and of arm.
The palace of the Bishop was moated, and there was a drawbridge there, and within, as on a green island, rose walls of fine gray stone, with window arch and doorway delicately carved. There was one at hand who took his steed, and one who led the way for him, and anon he found himself in a sunlit chamber where the Bishop stood looking out upon the great cathedral which was rising stone by stone, with its blue-clad workmen standing against a bluer sky.
"What is it, my son?" asked the Bishop, when he saw a young squire standing before him, worn, dust-stained, with anger burning in his eyes.
"Sire," said the guest, bending low, "I have hasted thither to tell thee of great wrongs."
"They shall be redressed," said the Bishop, laying his hand upon the lad's head.
"There is a man," said Louis of Lamont, kneeling, his lips white with wrath, "who doeth cruel wrong and bringeth folk to death, and it must needs be that none in high places know, for he goeth unpunished."
"He shall be found and placed in my lowest dungeon," said the Bishop fiercely. "Now tell me what he hath done."
"On my way hither I lodged with a poor woman who told me that he had slain before her eyes her husband and her sons, and all for a cup of silver coin that stood upon the mantel."
"A mere cup of silver coin!" groaned the Bishop. "He shall hang."
Then he told of the murder of Baron Divonne, and of the Squire's daughter of Yverton, who was starved with her seven children; and he told all the tales that the wandering merchant had brought with his cloths of cashmere and of silk. As he spoke longer, the face of his host grew anxious, and when he finished, saying, "Men call him the Gentle Robber," black care sat upon the brow of the host.
"Delay not," pleaded Louis. "Give me armed men, for thou hast said that he shall die for his sins, and I have the blood of fighters in my veins."
"Nay, child," said the Bishop. "Not so."
"Thou hast promised!" he cried in amaze.
"Ay," he made answer, "but I knew not then that the offenses were so many and so great, or that the enterprise was—ahem!—planned upon so large a scale. That makes all different."
"That makes the need to punish him a thousandfold greater," stammered the lad.
"Tut, tut!" said the Bishop, with the solemn smile he wore. "Thou dost not understand: logic is ever lacking in the young."
"Should not stripes be laid upon him for each cry he hath drawn forth? Should he not lay down his life, if that were possible, for each life he hath taken?"
"I had thought, when I heard the first tale, that he should die for the single crime," the Bishop made answer, "but the case is altered by the later facts. 'A life for a life,' saith the Scripture, but naught of a life for a dozen or threescore, or an hundred, as the case may be."
Then a flame of anger shone out in the lad's face, and he waited.
"My son," said the Bishop tenderly, "thou art young and ignorant, yet will I try to teach thee something of right ways of thought. In judging, all depends upon the point of view, and matters that look often black at first statement grow white or gray when thoroughly understood. Let us look upon this question in another aspect. Dost see yonder great cathedral rising?"
Though the youth made no answer, the Bishop saw that he was looking at the gray stones and at the blue-clad workmen.
"'Tis God's house," said the Bishop, "nor may it arise save through the gifts of this man. Wrong hath he done, but all is forgiven for that his gold is bent to holy purposes."
"But wrong he doeth still," said Louis of Lamont, in the stern voice of youth.
The Bishop coughed behind his hand even while he spoke.
"There is much in the ways of Providence that we may not comprehend. God moveth in a mysterious way."
"Had the Robber Chief ceased from his crime and shown true penitence"—began the lad, but the Bishop interrupted.
"God hath need of the man and of all the gold that he will bring, that institutions of learning and holy places may arise in the land."
"God may be worshiped by wood and stream," said the youth, in the still, small voice of one who knew; "nor hath He need of gold that is the price of suffering and pain and tears;" and so he turned and went down the steps, worn and weary, with dust on his crimson garments, and shame on his spirit, and the light of his face grown dim.
It had come back to its shining, however, the next day, when he went before the King.
"It may well be that there is one bad man who hath power," he said to himself, "and he the Bishop; but God would not grant that all be so," and hope beamed again from his eyes.
"'Tis the son of my old friend, Guy of Lamont, sayest thou?" cried the King, as he raised the lad's chin with one royal finger. "By my troth, 'tis his father's face again, but different."
"Sire," said Louis, as he did reverence, "I have come to tell of cruel wrong, and to win from thee a promise of redress."
"Thou shalt have it!" cried the King, with his hand upon his sword. "Friend or child of my friend went never yet uncomforted from the foot of my throne. Speak thy wrong."
Then the youth told him all that he had told the Bishop, and added thereto other tales, and hope shone sternly in his eyes.
"Send forth with me a band of thy men-at-arms," prayed the suppliant. "Even now, perchance, are orphans made that might have grown tall in happiness save for this man's lust for gold."
Then the King looked about, and his face grew dark with anger, for some half smiled and hid their smiles as best they could with jeweled hand or velvet sleeve; some showed fear at seeing this thing, which was not breathed at court, boldly brought to light.
FOR SOME HALF SMILED AND HID THEIR SMILES AS BEST THEY COULD
"Boy," said the King sternly, "hast no respect for them that be appointed to sit in high places, nor awe before an anointed King?"
"Yea, sire," answered Louis, marveling.
"Dost come before my throne with slanderous tales of one on whom I lean heavily and lovingly?"
"Sire," he said bravely, "thou dost not know his cruel deeds. He hath robbed and killed to the sickening of the heart."
"Mayhap," said the King, "but he hath carried all before him with great success, and so is the case altered. 'Tis a man of whom we have great need, and the young should not speak ill of older folk."
Then Louis of Lamont said never a word, but rose to his feet staggering, for the knowledge he had gained of men came as hard blows about the ears, and bending low, he turned away.
"Stay!" cried the King. "Thy offense is great: thou hast spoken ill of a public benefactor, yet if thou wilt hold thy tongue, nor repeat thy silly tales, I will make thee one of my courtiers, and thou shalt go brave in velvet and in jewels."
But the youth shook his head and went forth alone from the presence-chamber; all looked after him, with smiles and jeers and whispered words of scorn.
"'Sdeath!" cried the King. "'Tis a madman fit but for a dungeon, yet, for the sake of my old friend, Guy of Lamont, can I not cast him there."
The lad groped his way unevenly down the marble steps of the palace as one gropes in a path that is full of pitfalls and has suddenly grown dark, and he wandered, not knowing where, through the dark streets, until he found himself in the square before the great cathedral. Here many were passing with hands full of flowers, red roses and tall white lilies and blue blossoms that grow pale among the wheat, for it was the feast day of a saint, and they went to deck the altar which stood within unfinished walls, that men might worship there under the blue sky.
"I will tell them," said the lad; so he stood upon the cathedral steps and repeated all the tale, and blossoms red and blossoms white were dropped at his feet, as men and women clustered about to hear.
"Ay!" they cried out, "we go hungry for this man, but who shall deliver us from him? Horses and armor could we find, perchance. Wilt lead us to him?"
Then of a sudden he smiled, and ceased speaking because of the choking in his throat; but after, he took up the tale and told it in the market-place and before the Palace of Justice and wherever he could gather folk together.
As days passed, all this came to the ears of the King and of the Bishop and of the nobles of the court, and grave head met with grave head, and both were shaken solemnly in conference over this new peril which threatened the kingdom. One morn there went throughout the city a crier, who called aloud and read from a parchment in his hand to let men know that Louis of Lamont, son of Sir Guy, was cast out from Holy Church for slander of one of her greatest sons. Henceforward no man should give him shelter, no woman food or drink, lest they too come under the ban; and should he speak future evil words, his life would be forfeit.
Yet one who loved him—and there were many—hid him; and the next day and the next he wandered in the streets, begging men to rise in vengeance against the Robber Chief. On the third day he was taken by armed men, and the decree went forth that Louis of Lamont should, after three days, be burned at the stake in the square of the Palace of Justice. The youth smiled when he heard his doom; almost he was glad to escape from a world which he had not logic enough to understand.
So the day came when he should die, and it was a Friday of midsummer. In the centre of the square stood an iron post to which criminals were wont to be tied, and to this they bound him. Close about him were heaped fagots of wood and dried branches, and within he stood in a motley garment, and the look upon his face was as the coming of the day. All about was a great press of people, merchant and butcher and cloth-spinner, and peasant folk from the country round; and on a dais, built high for better seeing, were knights and ladies and nobles of the court, with the King himself, and the Gentle Robber at his side, trimly clad in sober gray and gently smiling.
It was a soft day of golden sun, and the sky was blue above the place, and the least wind sighed softly as if for pity as it breathed about the iron stake and played with the yellow locks of the young Squire's hair and moved the red folds of the shameful garment that they had placed upon him. Lifting his face, he leaned his cheek against the wind, for it seemed to him a breeze that had played among the beech leaves in the ancient forest by his father's hall, and in taking leave of it he said farewell to his hound and to the woodland paths and to his father's face.
Now came a ghostly father, with a torch that flamed backward against the blue day, and in the name of God and Holy Church he bent and kindled the fagots. Then was there quick tumult and rush and stir through the square, for all rushed forward to see and to hear, and little maids were sorely trampled in the press by the great feet of smith and of husbandman, and women's aprons were badly torn. None cared, for all knew that saving grace was to be won for their own souls if their eyes but caught a glimpse of an heretic that was being burned to death, and when the fire leaped high into the air, they gave God thanks. There was a flame in the young martyr's face that was not as the flame that leaped about him; but smoke and fire were speedy with their work, and his head bent over his breast, his body over the chain that bound him, and as his soul went free, folk breathed deeply in relief, saying that an evil-doer was dead. Upon the dais the King's broad face showed satisfaction; the Bishop lifted his eyes to heaven, thanking God, then let them rest on the gray stone walls of the cathedral, glad that now naught should prevent the walls of God's house from rising. In all the great crowd, none other was so devout and so thankful as the Gentle Robber, and his mild blue eyes were moist with tears as he whispered to the King:—
"'Tis marvelous, the ways by which Providence brings evil-doers to justice; ever the right prevails."
A GLIMPSE OF AN HERETIC BEING BURNED TO DEATH
Then all went to the cathedral, knight, squire, and lady in velvet and in silk, the Bishop in holy robes of purple and of white, and common folk in blue jean and plain linen, that special service might be held in praise for this great deliverance, and the Te Deum sung.
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Story DNA
Moral
Societal structures and powerful individuals can become so deeply entangled in corruption that they will actively suppress truth and justice to maintain their own comfort and status.
Plot Summary
A 'Gentle Robber' rises to immense power and wealth through charming deception and violence, becoming a celebrated benefactor to the King and the Church, who overlook his cruel methods for his financial contributions. Young Louis of Lamont, a pure-hearted squire, attempts to expose the Robber's true nature to the Bishop, the King, and the common people, but is dismissed, scorned, and ultimately condemned as a slanderer and heretic. Louis is publicly burned at the stake, his death celebrated by the corrupt authorities and a deluded populace, solidifying the Robber's power and the kingdom's moral decay.
Themes
Emotional Arc
hope to despair
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Written in the early 20th century, this story can be seen as a critique of societal hypocrisy, unchecked capitalism, and the corruption of institutions (government, church) that prioritize wealth and power over moral rectitude. The 'Gentle Robber' is a metaphor for powerful figures who maintain a facade of respectability while engaging in exploitative practices, often with the complicity of those in authority.
Plot Beats (12)
- A 'Gentle Robber' uses persuasive charm and violence to amass vast wealth and influence, becoming a respected figure in the kingdom.
- The Robber's power extends throughout the forest and surrounding lands, eventually making him the chief financial support for the King and the Church.
- The Bishop and King, despite knowing the Robber's methods, accept his ill-gotten gains for their projects, such as a cathedral and universities.
- Young Louis of Lamont, a pure-hearted squire, hears tales of the Robber's cruelty and is deeply disturbed, resolving to fight the injustice.
- Louis first appeals to the Bishop, who dismisses his concerns, prioritizing the Robber's financial contributions to the Church.
- Louis then appeals to the King, who also dismisses him, valuing the Robber's 'success' and financial support for the kingdom.
- Louis, disillusioned by the authorities, attempts to rally the common people by speaking out against the Robber in public squares.
- The King, Bishop, and nobles, threatened by Louis's words, excommunicate him from the Church and issue a decree forbidding anyone from sheltering or feeding him.
- Louis is eventually captured by armed men, and a decree is issued for him to be burned at the stake as a slanderer and heretic.
- On the day of his execution, Louis is tied to a stake in the public square, surrounded by a crowd, the King, the Bishop, and the Gentle Robber.
- The fagots are lit, and Louis dies, his death celebrated by the crowd and the authorities as the triumph of justice over an 'evil-doer.'
- The King, Bishop, and Gentle Robber express satisfaction and gratitude, and a special service is held in the cathedral to praise this 'deliverance,' solidifying their corrupt power.
Characters
The Gentle Robber ⚔ antagonist
Of average height and build, not overtly imposing, which belies his true nature. His movements are often described as 'manly shyness' or 'apologetic way', suggesting a non-threatening demeanor.
Attire: Initially, he would wear practical, unassuming forest attire suitable for a robber, likely dark, durable woolens or linens. When he comes to court, he wears 'grave apparel' and later is 'trimly clad in sober gray', suggesting well-tailored but understated clothing that projects respectability and humility, perhaps a tunic and hose of fine wool or linen, with a simple cloak.
Wants: Primarily driven by an insatiable lust for gold and the power it brings. He also seeks social acceptance and validation, using his ill-gotten gains to fund public works and earn the King's and Bishop's favor, thereby legitimizing his position.
Flaw: His profound hypocrisy and self-deception. He genuinely believes his actions are justified and even divinely sanctioned, which blinds him to his own evil and makes him incapable of true empathy or remorse.
He experiences no true arc. He begins as a gentle robber and ends as a gentle robber, having successfully integrated his criminal enterprise into the fabric of society and solidified his power, remaining utterly unrepentant and self-satisfied.
Deceptive, manipulative, ruthless, hypocritical, self-righteous. He feigns gentleness and gratitude while committing heinous acts, driven by a profound lust for power and wealth, rationalizing his cruelty as 'doing good'.
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An adult man of average height and build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a modest, gentle face with soft features, mild blue eyes that appear slightly moist, and neatly kept light brown hair. He wears a trimly tailored tunic and hose of sober gray wool, with a simple, unadorned dark cloak draped over his shoulders. His posture is slightly deferential, with a humble, almost apologetic expression. He holds a bulging leather wallet in one hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Louis of Lamont ★ protagonist
Strong of arm and lusty, suggesting a healthy, athletic build from his time in the greenwood. He is described as a 'young squire'.
Attire: Initially, he would wear practical, durable clothing suitable for a squire who spends time in the forest, likely simple tunics and breeches of linen or wool. When offered a courtier's role, he is promised 'velvet and in jewels', but rejects it. At his execution, he is dressed in a 'motley garment' and 'red folds of the shameful garment', likely ill-fitting, brightly colored, and mismatched clothes designed to humiliate him.
Wants: To expose the truth about the Gentle Robber and bring justice to the kingdom. He is driven by a strong moral compass and a desire to protect the innocent.
Flaw: His naivety and inability to compromise with evil. He lacks the political cunning to navigate the corrupt court, leading to his downfall.
Transforms from a naïve, nature-loving squire into a courageous martyr for truth and justice. He learns the harsh reality of human corruption but refuses to compromise his principles, ultimately sacrificing his life to awaken others.
Naïve, idealistic, courageous, principled, empathetic. He is deeply connected to nature and justice, unable to comprehend or tolerate the hypocrisy of the world. He is willing to sacrifice himself for his beliefs.
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A young adult male of strong, athletic build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has bright, earnest eyes, and long, wavy yellow-blonde hair that reaches his shoulders. His face shows a mixture of conviction and quiet dignity. He wears a motley, ill-fitting tunic of coarse red and blue linen, with simple brown breeches and no shoes. His posture is resolute, despite his circumstances. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
Possesses a 'broad face', suggesting a robust or perhaps somewhat corpulent build, indicative of his comfortable position. He is a figure of authority.
Attire: Wears royal attire befitting a monarch, likely rich velvet and silk robes, possibly embroidered with royal symbols, and adorned with jewels. He would wear a crown or circlet.
Wants: To maintain power and stability in his kingdom, finance wars, and support public works, even if it means condoning criminal behavior. He seeks to avoid internal strife and external threats.
Flaw: His moral compromise and reliance on the Robber's ill-gotten wealth. He is blind to the true cost of his 'benefactor's' actions and prioritizes political convenience over justice.
Remains largely unchanged, reinforcing his pragmatic and morally compromised stance. He continues to benefit from the Robber's actions and ensures the suppression of dissent.
Pragmatic, self-serving, easily manipulated, politically expedient. He values stability and the appearance of prosperity over true justice, willing to overlook the Robber's crimes as long as his kingdom benefits.
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An adult male with a broad, stern face, a neatly trimmed dark beard, and dark, authoritative eyes, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He wears a heavy, deep red velvet robe with gold embroidery, a white linen undershirt, and a golden crown adorned with rubies. His posture is regal and commanding, with an expression of satisfaction. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Bishop ◆ supporting
A figure of religious authority, likely of a dignified and perhaps somewhat portly build, consistent with a high-ranking cleric.
Attire: Wears 'holy robes of purple and of white', indicating rich ecclesiastical vestments, possibly silk or brocade, with a mitre and a crozier. He waves a 'white, jeweled hand', suggesting rings.
Wants: To build and glorify the Church, specifically the great cathedral, and to secure its financial well-being. He believes these ends justify the means.
Flaw: His moral relativism and willingness to accept 'wicked schemes' as long as they benefit the Church. He is blinded by his ambition for the Church's grandeur.
Remains unchanged, continuing to prioritize the Church's material gains over moral integrity, ultimately celebrating the death of Louis as a 'deliverance'.
Hypocritical, pragmatic, self-serving, pious on the surface but morally compromised. He prioritizes the Church's material wealth and projects (like the cathedral) over ethical considerations, rationalizing his acceptance of ill-gotten gains.
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An adult male of dignified, somewhat portly build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a grave, solemn face with neatly kept gray hair and a tonsure, and stern, dark eyes. He wears rich purple and white silk ecclesiastical robes, a white mitre on his head, and a large gold ring with a prominent jewel on his right hand. He holds a tall, ornate crozier in his left hand. His posture is authoritative and deliberate. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Green Forest Paths
Winding paths through a dense, green forest, likely in a temperate European climate. The forest floor is covered with leaves and undergrowth, with sunlight dappling through the canopy.
Mood: Initially serene and natural, but with an underlying tension due to the robber's presence. Later, it becomes a place of hidden wealth and power.
The primary domain of the Gentle Robber where he conducts his 'business' and accumulates wealth. Also where Louis of Lamont wanders.
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A winding, narrow dirt path meanders through a dense, ancient European forest. Tall, gnarled oak and beech trees form a thick canopy overhead, filtering soft, dappled sunlight onto the forest floor. Patches of vibrant green moss and fallen leaves cover the ground, with occasional wild ferns growing along the path's edge. The air feels cool and still, with a sense of deep quietude. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The King's Presence-Chamber (Palace of Mertoun)
A formal chamber within a grand European palace, likely medieval or early Renaissance in style, with marble steps leading down from it. It is a place of power and political maneuvering.
Mood: Formal, imposing, and initially dismissive, then scornful towards Louis. A place of authority and judgment.
Louis of Lamont confronts the King with his accusations against the Gentle Robber and is subsequently dismissed and scorned.
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A grand, high-ceilinged presence-chamber within a medieval European palace. Polished white marble steps descend from a raised dais where a richly carved wooden throne sits. Tapestries depicting heraldic scenes hang on stone walls, and tall, arched windows allow bright daylight to stream in, illuminating dust motes in the air. Courtiers in rich velvet and silk garments stand formally on the patterned stone floor. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Square before the Great Cathedral / Palace of Justice Square
A large, open public square in the capital city of Mertoun, paved with cobblestones. It is dominated by the unfinished walls of a great cathedral and later features an iron post for executions. It is a bustling place for public gatherings and justice.
Mood: Initially a place of religious procession and gathering, then becomes a site of public outcry and ultimately, a somber, crowded execution ground. A mix of piety, fear, and morbid curiosity.
Louis of Lamont preaches his message to the people, is later condemned, and finally burned at the stake here. It is the climax of the story.
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A vast, sun-drenched medieval European town square paved with irregular, worn cobblestones. In the background, the imposing, grey stone walls of a great cathedral rise, still visibly unfinished, open to the blue sky above. In the center foreground, a sturdy, dark iron post stands, surrounded by neatly stacked fagots of dry wood and branches. A raised wooden dais is positioned to one side, draped with rich fabrics. The square is filled with a dense, diverse crowd of people in period attire, their faces upturned. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.