THE SEVEN STUDIOUS SISTERS

by Margaret Pollock Sherwood · from The Princess Pourquoi

fairy tale satire humorous Ages 8-14 5036 words 22 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 1141 words 5 min Canon 100/100

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Once upon a time, there was a King. His name was King Leo. He did not like smart girls. This is a story about his big surprise!

King Leo sat on his throne. He felt very worried. Seven kind sisters stood before him. Their names were Sylvie and Natalie. Amelie and Virginie too. Sidonie, Dorothée, and Clementine. They wanted to go to school. They wanted to learn new things. King Leo thought of his daughter. Her name was Princess Pourquoi. She asked too many questions. King Leo shook his head. Smart girls made trouble, he thought. He felt a little angry. He did not want them to learn.

Jester Jack saw King Leo was sad. Jester Jack was very clever. He had a secret plan. He said, "Make a school for girls!" King Leo looked at him. "What?" said King Leo. Jester Jack said, "I will teach them. I will make them study hard. They will get tired of it." King Leo liked this trick. He smiled a little. Jester Jack smiled too. His smile was a little sad.

King Leo said, "Yes, Jester Jack!" He said, "You will be Lord Rector." He said, "You will run the school." King Leo asked his wise men too. These wise men were teachers. King Leo thought they would be bad. He thought the girls would get bored. He thought his trick would work. He felt happy again. Jester Jack put on a big robe. He looked very grand.

A new school was built. It was big and very pretty. The seven sisters went there. Many other girls went too. They were all very happy. They learned about the stars. They learned about numbers. They read many books. Sylvie loved the star lessons. Natalie loved the old stories. Amelie loved the number games. The sisters asked many questions. They talked about new ideas. They were not bored at all. They felt very smart and happy.

Jester Jack watched the girls learn. He saw Clementine each day. Clementine was very smart. She had kind eyes. She had a sweet smile. She asked the best questions. Lord Rector talked to her often. He saw how good she was. His heart felt warm near her. He forgot his secret plan. He started to love Clementine. This was not part of the trick.

Clementine liked Lord Rector too. She thought he was very wise. He knew many things. He made hard ideas seem easy. She did not know his secret. She did not know about the trick. She just saw a kind teacher. She trusted him very much. She felt happy near him. She learned much from him. Her heart was happy too.

Time went by very fast. Soon, school was almost done. This was called graduation day. Lord Rector felt sad inside. He had a secret to tell. He knew he tricked Clementine. He felt bad in his heart. He took Clementine aside. He said, "I must tell you something." He said, "I am Jester Jack." He said, "I am the King's Fool." He said, "King Leo sent me here." He said, "I was to trick you." He felt very sorry.

Clementine was surprised at first. But she did not get angry. She looked at him with kind eyes. She said, "It is okay." She said, "You are still wise." She said, "You taught me so much." She said, "You are a good man." Clementine still loved him. She knew his heart was good. Lord Rector felt happy and sad. He was happy she was kind. He was sad he tricked her.

It was graduation day at last. Everyone came to the school. King Leo sat on his big chair. He smiled a very big smile. He thought, "My plan worked!" He thought the girls were tired. He thought they were not too smart. He looked at the sisters. He felt proud of his trick. He thought he was very clever. He waited for it to end. He thought he had won.

Lord Rector stood up tall. He looked at Clementine. He took her hand gently. He said, "We love each other." He said, "We want to marry." He looked at King Leo. He said, "Please bless us, King Leo." King Leo's mouth fell open. He was very surprised. This was not his plan at all. He stared at Jester Jack. He stared at Clementine. He did not know what to say.

Then something else happened. Sylvie stood up too. Natalie stood up too. Amelie and Virginie stood up. Sidonie and Dorothée stood up. Each sister held a teacher's hand. The sisters said, "We love them too!" They said, "We want to marry too!" King Leo's eyes got very big. All seven sisters loved their teachers! The trick did not work at all. The teachers loved the smart girls.

King Leo started to laugh. He laughed very loudly. "Ha ha ha!" he said. He thought, "They just want to marry!" He thought he was still clever. But Jester Jack did not laugh. He looked sad and sorry. He said, "I am sorry, King Leo." He said, "I tricked everyone." He said, "It was not kind." Jester Jack was truly sorry. He knew it was wrong.

King Leo looked at Clementine. He saw her kind face. He saw she loved Jester Jack. He saw she was smart and good. King Leo knew the truth now. Being smart is not bad. It is good. The girls were happy and wise. He was wrong to stop them. King Leo felt a little shy. He said, "I bless you all." He said, "You are all very smart." He said, "This is a good thing." He learned his lesson that day. Smart girls make the world better.

Everyone was happy. King Leo learned a good lesson. Being smart is a wonderful thing for everyone!

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THE SEVEN STUDIOUS SISTERS


THE SEVEN STUDIOUS SISTERS

His Majesty the King was in a terrible state of mind. Leaning back, speechless, upon his throne, with his crown over one ear, his fists clenched, he strove in vain to speak, but only an inarticulate gurgling made its way from the royal throat. Behind him stood his Jester, merry in cap and bells; on the right, the court philosophers, with puckered brows and sagely folded arms; and all about knights-at-arms and ladies-in-waiting silent and dismayed.

Before the King, on the lowest step of the throne, almost under the gold-brocaded canopy, knelt, with clasped hands and beseeching eyes, Sylvie, Natalie, Amelie, Virginie, Sidonie, Dorothée, and Clementine, the seven beautiful daughters of old Count Benoît of Verdennes, all badly frightened, but intrepid.

"Speak!" thundered the King at last. "No, do not speak! Every word will be used against you!"

"Your Majesty," began Sylvie, who was the eldest and had black hair, "we came to beg,"—

"With great earnestness," continued Natalie, who had brown hair,—

"That you will give us the opportunity," said golden-haired Amelie, shivering,—

"To study," said Virginie, who had brown eyes,—

"And grow wise," said Sidonie, whose eyes were blue,—

"And so we ask," said Dorothée, who had gray eyes,—

"That we may enter the university," said little Clementine, who had dimples.

It was sad for the youngest to say the hardest part of all, yet perhaps it was only fair, as it was the strong will of Clementine that had led them there, and the courage of Clementine that had kept them from faltering by the way.

They were simply repeating what they had just said; the parts had been arranged before coming, in hope that his Majesty could not resist. Never in their worst forebodings, when they had talked it over as they braided one another's hair in the tiring-room of the castle, had they dreamed of anything so terrible as this.

"Wh-what put this idea into your heads?" thundered his Majesty.

Then the seven answered as one maiden: "The Princess Pourquoi."

The King groaned aloud, and the knights-at-arms and the ladies-in-waiting groaned with him. Was it not enough for him to have had a daughter whose useless thinking had embittered his reign? She, with her quick intellect and ready questions, had made his throne totter under him; and now, when she was safely married and away—ay, and had made as good a match as the dullest maid in Christendom, must the spirit of inquiry come back to him in seven shapes? Since she was gone, all had been peace; he had been able to sleep most of the other half of the day also. His Majesty fidgeted under his purple robe. The Church had taught him that it was right for the sins of the fathers to be visited upon the children, but nothing about the sins of the children being visited upon the fathers, and he could not understand.

Sylvie, Natalie, Amalie, Virginie, Sidonie, Dorothée, and little Clementine looked at him with begging eyes. Now brown eyes and blue eyes and gray eyes and black hair and brown hair and golden hair and dimples all appealed strongly to the King, and he was surprised at himself for a moment for not being able to act as ugly as he thought he felt.

"What do you want to study for?" he demanded, his hands slowly unclenching.

"I don't know," faltered little Clementine, blushing into her dimples. Somewhere there was a faint ripple of laughter, and yet the Jester's face was perfectly sober when he lifted his head.

"To be wise and know things," said Sidonie. The King stamped.

"To be a power," said Natalie.

"Pshaw!" said the King.

"To understand all things," said Virginie. The King groaned.

"So that people will like us," said Amelie. Then came again that echo of mocking laughter, and the Jester muttered from behind the throne:—

"Now are there some here that are greater fools than I; for the whole world knows that a woman is better beloved for what she understands not than for what she understands."

The King looked desperately about him, for he was at his wits' end, but none came to his aid. The philosophers, with their eyes cast down, were stroking their beards; the ladies-in-waiting were looking away, as delicacy demanded, after so shocking a request; the knights-at-arms were frankly gazing at blue eyes or brown, as taste suggested. Then the King spoke hoarsely:—

"This is treason. The lowest dungeon in my castle is not too hard a punishment for such offense. At any cost this spirit must be quenched—at any cost."

Tears flowed softly down the cheeks of the seven maidens, and fell on their clasped hands, and the drops from Virginie's brown eyes sparkled like jewels on Amelie's golden hair. Then, in the sorrowful pause, the King's Jester stepped softly forward, and the little bells upon his patches rang as he came.

"Sire," said he, "I could tell a remedy more potent than this and less savage."

"Speak, Fool!" said the King.

"Not afore folks," answered the Jester, with a smile.

"They understand not your folly," said the King.

"Ay, but they might, for none can tell when words of wisdom may begin to penetrate dull brains. Clear me the room of these philosophers and the others, and let the maidens begone, for I cannot abide a woman's tears."

"Go!" said his Majesty.

Then the weeping maidens and the ladies-in-waiting passed out in a shimmer of gold color, and crimson, and blue, and rich green; and after them, like a shadow, crept the philosophers in garments of black; and then, with a clash of steel and flashing of wrought armor, went the knights-at-arms, and the presence chamber was empty, save for the King on the throne and the Jester, who stood before him in the posture of the philosophers, with folded arms and head bent low.

"Sire," said the Fool, "when women grow wise"—

"The kingdom is lost," said his Majesty. "Little enough comfort is there now."

"They will outstrip their brothers," said the Jester.

"They will meddle with matters of state," said the King.

"They will see through us all," continued the Fool. "For my part, I would keep them the sweet, blind creatures that they are. 'Tis enough for me that I see through myself. Now there is one way, and one only, to check the growing intellect of women."

"And what may that be?" asked the King, the sadness lifting from his face.

"Forsooth, they must have a university of their own," answered the Jester.

"What!" thundered his Majesty.

"WHAT!" THUNDERED HIS MAJESTY

"Ay!" said the Fool, nodding; "there is no other way. The Princess Pourquoi has lighted in this land a fire that can be put out in only one fashion. Let a foundation be made; let walls arise; let lecturers come. Naught save a university curriculum will avail now to dull the wits and divert the minds and check the thought of women."

"In truth you have a pretty wit," said the King, and he smiled. "But who will take charge of this undertaking and plan me the work that it may avail?"

"I," said the Jester. "Who else? Cap and gown would become me well, and though the King may lose his fool, he will gain My Lord Rector, who will speak bravely in the Latin tongue."

"And whom can we trust to aid in the work?" asked his Majesty.

"Lend me but the philosophers," said the Jester, with a wink, "and their natural parts shall prevail where intent might come badly off in this great task of dulling women's wits."

Then the two spoke long between themselves, and when they had finished, the Jester went and called the pages, and the great doors were thrown open, so that all entered as they had gone, and there was shimmer of silk and shining of jewels and gleaming of armor. The seven maidens came trembling in every limb, not knowing but their heads should fall, and they knelt as before at the foot of the throne, only now they had nothing to say. Then the King lifted up his voice and, smiling, said that it should be even as they had desired, and that learning and wisdom should be theirs. In one thing only should change be made: they should not mingle with the herd of men, but should have, sequestered and apart, a place of learning for womankind. When they heard this, Sylvie leaned her face upon the head of Natalie and wept for joy; and Natalie hers upon the head of Amelie, and Amelie upon Virginie, and Virginie upon Sidonie, and Sidonie upon Dorothée, and Dorothée upon little Clementine, and because Clementine had nowhere to lean her head, she wept into her own dimples.

Then the King's Fool went away and did not come again, and of this there was great talk for three days, and then all was forgotten, for another jester filled his place. One day appeared at court a grave gentleman clad all in flowing black, bearded, and with eyes cast down in a sort of inward look. All called him My Lord Rector, and none knew him for the King's Jester because he had changed his cap. He spoke but little, and that in Latin, as "Verbum sat sapienti; depressus extollor; veni, vidi, vici;" and if he made gibe or jest, there were none who could understand.

There was upon the outskirts of the city a great building that had once been the Palace of Justice, but was no longer used because a loftier one had been erected in the square where the minster rose. This stood not far from the river-bank, and was all of gray stone that had crumbled somewhat, so that the tracery of leaf and flower in the Gothic windows and the faces and claws of the gargoyles that peered from roof and corner were in many places worn away. It was built on three sides of a great court, where now grass and vine and flower grew unchecked, on the spot once worn by the feet of gathering citizens and the tramp of steeds. Bluebird and swallow and wren had entered through the broken windows, and had built about the window niches and in the crannies of the carven vine. This, said the King, should be the place of learning consecrated to the maidens, for it was not meet that they should gather in the market square or on the hill beyond the minster, as young men did in those days when thousands came together to listen to philosophical disputes, and no roof was sufficient to cover them. Workmen came and mended broken arch and column, and cleared away the tangled vines of the court, but left growing grass and flower, and did not touch the nesting birds, for the seven lovely sisters begged that they might stay. Hither flocked innumerable damsels, who came riding from all parts of the kingdom, with squires before them and waiting-maids behind. They came on black jennet and white palfrey and pony of dapple gray; maiden madness had run throughout the kingdom, and all who could sit on saddle or hold rein rushed hither for their share of the new learning. Many were pursued by father or brother, by maiden aunt or widowed mother, begging them to abide at home in safety as modest maidens should.

CAME RIDING FROM ALL PARTS OF THE KINGDOM

It was noised abroad that the Lord Rector would deliver the first lecture when the new work began, and all were eager to hear; so it came to pass one day that a huge company passed in procession under the carven Gothic gate and into the great hall whose stained windows looked one way on the river and the other way on the court. First, in gown of velvet and of silk, came My Lord Rector, muttering in his beard; after him followed the philosophers, with stately step and slow; and then young squires a-many, who were eager to see what would befall; and lords and ladies in gay clothing, rarely embroidered in choice colors. There were maiden students also, many score, and at their head Sylvie, in scarlet silken gown, and Natalie in green; Amelie in brown velvet, curiously slashed, and Virginie in yellow; Sidonie in blue samite, and Dorothée in silver, and little Clementine in white, as befitted her tender years. Now behold! within the great hall the King was already waiting in a chair of state under a velvet canopy, and My Lord Rector and the philosophers of the new faculty bowed low to him as they entered. Then the Rector mounted upon a platform, and bowing to the King with "Rex augustissimus" he winked in his old fashion and fell a-coughing, and the King winked back and then fell a-sneezing, to hide the smile that his beard only half concealed.

"Viri illustrissimi," continued the Rector, bowing again before his audience and speaking in a solemn voice: "mutatis mutandis, horresco referens, da locum melioribus, dux femina facti, humanum est errare, nil nisi cruce, graviora manent, post nubila Phoebus, sunt lachrimae rerum, vae victis."

The last words came with a quiver of the voice, and many wept, for they did not understand his folly. Then My Lord Rector turned to the fair body of women students and spoke, seeing only the face of little Clementine:—

"Feminae praeclarissimae, credo quia impossibile est, inest Clementia forti, crede quod habes et habeo, sic itur ad astra, toga virilis, vita sine literis mors est, varium et mutabile semper femina, vade in pace," and with this there was hardly a dry eye in the house. So the new university was opened.

Needless to say, the success of the undertaking was great. Throughout the land, bower and hall and dell were left empty, for the maidens had all gone to the capital to get learning. They no longer wrought fair figures in the embroidery frames in the great halls of their ancestral castles, or polished the armor of father and brother, or brewed cordials for the sick over the glowing coals. They no longer wandered in gowns of green on their palfreys by hill or dale for the joy of going. By hundreds they bowed their fair heads before the philosophers as they lectured, taking notes upon the tablets of their minds, for they did not know how to write. My Lord Rector, when he spoke, could find no room large enough to contain his audiences, so he lectured only on sunshiny days, and stood on a platform in the centre of the great court; and words of grave nonsense fell from his lips as the light fell on golden hair or brown. So intently did the maidens listen that they did not smell the fragrance of the flowers crushed beneath their feet, wild rose and lily and violet, nor did they hear the beat of the wings of startled birds, nor see red crest, or golden wing, or blue, flash across the sky.

Being a cunning man and keen, My Lord Rector had left to the flocking students the choice of the lectures that they should pursue.

"Let them but manage it themselves," he said, smiling wickedly, at a private audience with the King, "and we shall see great things."

So the maidens met in assembly and consulted gravely together, and conferred with Rector and with faculty, and presently many branches of learning were established and all was going with great vigor. Each student chose for herself what course she should pursue, and it was pretty to see how maiden whims worked out into hard endeavor. Black-haired Sylvie specialized in dramatics, for she made, with her sweeping locks, an excellent tragedy queen; Natalie in athletics, and she took the standing high-jump better than any knight in Christendom; golden-haired Amelie devoted all her time to fiddling and giglology, and soon became proficient; Virginie, of the brown eyes, took ping-pong and fudge; blue-eyed Sidonie, acrostics and charades; Dorothée took chattering and cheering, and soon her sweet voice could be heard above the noise of building, or the roar of battle; while little Clementine worked at all branches of frivology, and became a great favorite, for in looks and in manner and in taste she represented that which is most pleasing in woman.

To tell of all they did and learned and thought would be too long a tale, and, moreover, the records of much of it have perished, but men say that their life was both strenuous and merry, and that womankind blossomed out into new beauty of face and form and mind. The infinite range of opportunity has been but faintly shadowed forth in the hints already given; and to those who philosophized and those who poetized, those who took societies and those who took cuts, life was one long burst of irrelevant, joyous activity. Most zealous of all the students was little Clementine. Ceaselessly alert, she listened with upturned face to lectures in the great flower-grown court; with infantile audacity she ventured out into vast unknown realms of thought, and puckered her white forehead in trying to work out the unutterable syllable. Now she walked the cloisters where the shadow of carven leaf and tendril fell on her hair, studying a parchment; and again, in moments of relaxation, she rode her dog-eared pony fast and furiously. To some this animal may seem strange, but there were many queer creatures in those days, as Sir John Maundeville tells.

It came to pass, no one knows how, that nothing done by little Clementine escaped the notice of My Lord Rector, for his eyes followed her always. When he lectured, he lectured to Clementine; whether he said words of Latin or of the vulgar tongue, he spoke them to her eyes; and he was ashamed of the learned nonsense he was speaking when he gazed on Clementine. Sleeping, he saw her walking so-and-so under the shadow of Gothic arch with leaf shadows on her face, and he dreamed of taking the parchment from her white fingers and—But here he always woke, though he tried to dream farther. Clearly, something had happened to him that neither his experience as Sir Fool nor as Lord Rector had prepared him to understand.

Save for this haunting thought, he was very gay behind a solemn face. Dearly he loved his task, and none but the King and himself heard the faint tinkle of bells from under his scholar's cap. Always they greeted each other with Latin words, and they had many conferences wherein they chuckled together over the success of their plan, for they knew that they had drawn all these women forth to follow after the very shadow of learning, and that the end would leave them more ignorant than before. Always, however, in these moments of mirth, like a stab at the heart came to the Lord Rector the thought of deception practiced upon Clementine. Her trusting eyes, lifted to him in uttermost faith, reproached him by night and by day. If, by force, he put his conscience from him, he was sure to see her face as she listened, hiding in the recesses of her heart the silly words he said. Once, as she went alone toward the lodgings, and he followed at a great distance, a foot-pad set upon her in a dark corner, where a stone stairway gave shelter to thieves, and My Lord Rector, rushing forward, struck lustily about him right and left and felled the knave, taking from him the lady's netted purse and giving it back to her. She said no word save one of thanks, but after, when her eyes were raised, he saw that a new light had been added to the old, and that little Clementine reverenced him not only as a learned man, but as a brave one, too.

So weeks drifted by, and months, and then came a great event, for the maidens had determined to carry out a custom that belonged to that olden time and formed the final test of the scholar. All agreed that Clementine, brave, childish, perverse little Clementine, should initiate the new audacity. Therefore, one early morning, when the first rays of the sun were just peeping over the high stone city wall, she might have been observed stealing in academic garb of black over her white dress to the great oak, iron-studded door of the old Palace of Justice. Here, with a stone, she hammered a long parchment, and she established herself hard by, so that all who saw her knew that she was there to defend against all comers the theses she had nailed up. Now there were eight, and they ran as follows:—

1. That the ineffable and the intangible are not the same.

2. That all that is not, is, and all that seems to be, is not.

3. That—but it would be foolish to transcribe all the theses that little Clementine defended, for no one would understand. Suffice it to say that they were subtle beyond the mind of man, and clothed in words drawn from the deep abyss of the inane, where unborn thought goes ever crying for birth. One by one her six sisters came against her and argued, but to no avail, for little Clementine, no less skillful than David of yore, gathered together verb and adjective and slung them so unerringly that antagonist after antagonist went down, and she, often snubbed as being but the youngest, stood forth in the eyes of the admiring crowd a victor.

The picture that she made, standing against that gray stone wall flecked with green moss, with a grinning gargoyle leaning down toward her, was very sweet. In little Clementine the brown hair and the golden hair, the brown eyes and the gray eyes, of the family met in a peculiarly bewitching combination that had a chameleon quality of color constantly changing. Moreover, as she argued in well-chosen words, she was unconsciously establishing the unspoken thesis:—

That four dimples may exist at the same time in a maiden's face without seeming too many.

This My Lord Rector saw, and something gave way within him. When the argument was over and the audience was departing, he called Clementine to him inside the gate as one who would ask something, and then stood speechless. The maiden, who was flushed and weary, lifted her scholar's cap, and he saw, in the locks of hair that were neither brown nor gold, pearls woven; and above the collar of the gown showed the embroidered white samite of her dress.

"Little Clementine," said My Lord Rector, "your student life is almost done. Does that fact cause rejoicing?"

"Nay," said Clementine, casting down her eyes.

"Shall you grieve for anything left behind?"

"Ay," said the maiden.

"And what?" asked My Lord Rector.

"The learned lectures, the dissertations, the wise words," said Clementine, looking up and dimpling.

"And any special ones?" asked he, wondering if she heard about him the jingle of bells.

"Ay," said Clementine, smoothing her gown with slim white fingers and setting her lips together. Not another word would she say, though the great man begged humbly.

"Clementine," asked My Lord Rector, changing the subject, "shall you ever wed?"

"If the right man comes," said the maiden.

"And what must he be?"

"He must be very wise."

"Am I wise, little one?" asked the Rector.

"Wisest of all," answered the maiden, whispering.

Then he took her white hand in his and said softly, "Amo. Amas?" but Clementine did not understand a word of Latin. Looking up, however, she saw something she did understand, and then My Lord Rector bent and kissed her hand, wisely using the old, old way of wooing that was found before words, Latin or other, were invented.

Then Clementine drew back trembling and looked, and behold, he who had been but a wonderful voice was changed, and she saw that he was a man, and young, and comely, with merry eyes touched with sadness, and a mouth whose curves were both cynical and sweet.

"Why, why should you choose me?" asked the maiden, in a voice that shook for reverence.

"Because you are so adorably foolish!" cried the lover, forgetting, and that was a mistaken speech, which mere words could not explain away.

It was agreed between them that none should know what had befallen until the day when old Count Benoît and his Lady Myriel came up to the city to take home their seven daughters, for their work was counted done. So the two lived a glad life, though they spoke but seldom; often a glance of the eyes made food for both day and night. All the time My Lord Rector's conscience pricked him more and more, until he could no longer bear it, and one day, coming upon Clementine where she passed the path by the rippling river, near three willow trees that were freshly leaved out, for it was spring, he told her the tale of how he and the King had deceived womankind, and, with torture of spirit, confessed himself the King's Fool. Then Clementine looked up at him with eyes where the gray and the brown seemed flecked with green, perchance from the shadow of the willows, and said firmly:—

"I have always seen that they who call themselves fools are the least so," nor could he ever after by any words of confession shake her steadfast faith in his wisdom.

At last came the day when Count Benoît arrived, and with him cousins and other kin from far and near, for all would know something of the strange new ways in the city. At lecture hour all crowded together in the great hall, and again the King was there upon the dais, solemn of look, but merry of heart, for his eyes twinkled under his heavy eyebrows as he looked at the fair, fresh faces before him, innocent of thought as any other maidens' faces, and he chuckled to think how he and his dear Fool had outwitted them all. Then he looked with affection at his trusty philosophers who stood near in silk robes with slashes of velvet and hoods of rainbow colors, and he thanked heaven that had given him strong supporters in the crisis that had threatened his kingdom. Gazing upon the assembled audience of friends and kinsfolk, he rejoiced to think that for them, as for him, the country had been saved.

But My Lord Rector was speaking in the Latin tongue, "ad hoc gradum admitto ...," and Sylvie, Natalie, Amelie, Virginie, Sidonie, Dorothée, and little Clementine, with all the other maidens who had frolicked with them merrily so long a time, arose, as pretty a sight to see as ever king in Christendom had before him, and their new honors fell upon untroubled white foreheads. Then there was sound of rejoicing, and light shone through the stained windows on the glad faces and gay garments of the people assembled there; and suddenly, lo! My Lord Rector stepped from his high place and went to take the hand of little Clementine. With eyes cast down she followed him, and now she was rosy and now pale, and so the two kneeled at the feet of the king under the canopy.

"We two do crave your Majesty's blessing," said My Lord Rector, "on our betrothal."

Then a ripple of wonder and of laughter ran through the great hall, and his Majesty, smiling, blessed them with extended hands, and as they rose, he bent forward with a twinkle, whispering:—

"You have done well, My Lord Rector, in carrying out your purpose. It is pity that you may not marry them all."

For the first time he found no answering jest in his favorite's eyes, and would have inquired why, but the philosopher who stood nearest, and had caught the whisper, smiled, and taking Sylvie's hand, led her to the foot of the throne, saying:—

"But I, your Majesty, may wed this lady with the King's consent, for she has given hers." Then a second philosopher led forth Natalie, and a third Amelie, and a fourth Virginie, and a fifth Sidonie, and a sixth Dorothée, and behold! the seven sisters were again kneeling before the throne awaiting the King's blessing, but with their lovers at their sides.

Then his Majesty leaned back his head and roared with laughter till the vaulted ceiling reëchoed, and tears of mirth ran down his cheeks and shone upon his beard, and all laughed with him, though they knew not why, all save My Lord Rector, whose face wore the saddest look a man may wear.

"Now, was this planned among you?" asked his Majesty.

Then they shook their heads, and each philosopher said:—

"Forsooth, I thought I was the only one," and with that the King roared again.

In the bustle that followed, when old Count Benoît and his Lady Myriel hung upon the necks of their seven daughters in turn, the King tapped the Lord Rector upon the arm.

"You have builded even better than the promise said," whispered his Majesty. "From this blow shall the aggressive intellect of woman not arise."

But the Rector looked gloomily upon him and knelt again, and begged that his Majesty would release him from further service that he might go to the wars.

"Two parts of the Fool have I played for your Majesty," said the man bitterly, "and from both I would be released, for you and I have done a great wrong."

Little Clementine had drawn nearer, and many-colored light of purple and crimson and gold fell on her fair face and parted lips as she looked in wonder at her lover. Then the King saw and understood, and he was ashamed.

"Nay, My Lord Rector," he said, bending low, "what we have done of wrong we will right. You shall even go on with the task set before you, and that that you do lack of a wise man shall this woman's faith make good."



Story DNA fairy tale · humorous

Moral

True wisdom often lies in unexpected places, and attempts to suppress knowledge or human nature are ultimately futile.

Plot Summary

Seven beautiful and studious sisters petition their King to attend university, sparking his fear of educated women. His Jester devises a plan: create a women's university, with himself as Lord Rector, to 'dull their wits' through rigorous study. However, the sisters thrive, and the Lord Rector falls in love with the youngest, Clementine. At graduation, he confesses his deception to her, but she maintains faith in his wisdom. All seven sisters then announce their engagements to their professors, including the Lord Rector, completely subverting the King's original intent. The King, initially amused, eventually understands the deeper wisdom and blesses their unions, realizing the futility of his attempt to suppress knowledge.

Themes

wisdom vs. follygender rolesdeception and truthlove and understanding

Emotional Arc

frustration to amusement to unexpected romance to bittersweet realization

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: witty dialogue, irony, rule of seven

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: moral justice
Magic: none
the university (symbol of both suppression and enlightenment)the jester's cap and bells (symbol of hidden wisdom)

Cultural Context

Origin: American (late 19th/early 20th century, but with European fairy tale setting)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects societal debates around women's education and suffrage movements of the late 19th and early 20th centuries, using a fairy tale setting to satirize conservative views on female intellect.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The King is distressed by the request of Count Benoît's seven daughters—Sylvie, Natalie, Amelie, Virginie, Sidonie, Dorothée, and Clementine—to study at university, fearing a return of the 'spirit of inquiry' embodied by his own daughter, Princess Pourquoi.
  2. The Jester proposes a solution: establish a women's university, with himself as Lord Rector, to 'dull their wits' through academic rigor.
  3. The King agrees, appointing the Jester as Lord Rector and the court philosophers as professors, believing they will naturally fail to truly educate the women.
  4. The university is built, and the sisters, along with other maidens, begin their studies, finding great joy and intellectual stimulation.
  5. The Lord Rector, observing Clementine's intelligence and charm, begins to fall in love with her, despite his initial cynical intentions.
  6. Clementine, in turn, admires the Lord Rector's wisdom, unaware of his true identity or the King's plot.
  7. As graduation approaches, the Lord Rector's conscience pricks him, and he confesses his deception to Clementine, revealing he is the King's Fool.
  8. Clementine, undeterred, maintains her faith in his wisdom, asserting that those who call themselves fools are often the wisest.
  9. At the graduation ceremony, the King is present, confident in his successful scheme to 'dull' the women's intellect.
  10. The Lord Rector publicly proposes to Clementine, revealing their betrothal and seeking the King's blessing.
  11. Immediately after, the six other sisters also announce their engagements to the court philosophers, who had also fallen in love with their students.
  12. The King roars with laughter, initially believing his plan has succeeded in a different way, but the Lord Rector expresses bitter remorse for the deception.
  13. The King, witnessing Clementine's steadfast love and faith in the Rector, understands the deeper truth and blesses the unions, acknowledging that their 'wrong' will be 'righted' by the women's wisdom and faith.

Characters 9 characters

The King ⚔ antagonist

human adult male

A man of robust build, prone to emotional outbursts. He is described as having a heavy beard and twinkling eyes under heavy eyebrows when amused. His posture is often one of authority, though he can be seen leaning back speechless or fidgeting when distressed.

Attire: Royal attire, specifically a purple robe. He wears a crown, which is sometimes askew over one ear, indicating his agitated state. His robes are likely made of rich fabrics like velvet or brocade, befitting a monarch of a European kingdom.

Wants: To maintain peace and order in his kingdom, specifically by preventing women from gaining wisdom and challenging the established male-dominated power structure. He wants to avoid the 'trouble' his daughter, Princess Pourquoi, caused.

Flaw: Fear of intellectual women, easily manipulated by his Jester, stubborn adherence to tradition, a tendency to avoid discomfort.

Starts as a rigid, fearful, and manipulative ruler determined to suppress female intellect. He is initially delighted by the Jester's plan to trick the sisters. He ends the story acknowledging his wrong, feeling shame, and committing to righting it, suggesting a shift towards greater wisdom and fairness.

His crown askew over one ear, indicating his agitated state.

Authoritarian, easily exasperated, traditionalist, somewhat naive, ultimately capable of shame and correction.

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An adult male of robust build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a heavy, graying beard and heavy eyebrows. His eyes are wide with exasperation, and his mouth is slightly open as if about to thunder a command. He wears a deep purple velvet robe with gold embroidery, and a golden crown sits slightly askew on his head. His fists are clenched at his sides. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Jester / My Lord Rector ○ supporting | antagonist (initially) | protagonist (eventually)

human young adult male

Comely and young, with a posture that can mimic philosophers or be merry. He is agile enough to step softly forward and later described as a man.

Attire: Initially a jester's cap and bells with patched garments. Later, as My Lord Rector, he wears the academic robes of a university official, likely a dark, formal gown with scholarly adornments, though not explicitly described.

Wants: Initially, to please the King and maintain his position by devising a 'remedy' to the 'problem' of studious women. Later, driven by a pricking conscience, he seeks to right the wrong he committed and marry Clementine out of genuine affection.

Flaw: Initially, a willingness to deceive for the King's approval; later, his deep remorse and guilt over the deception.

Begins as a clever but morally ambiguous character, devising a deceptive plan to trick the sisters. He falls in love with Clementine, leading to a crisis of conscience. He confesses his deception and seeks to right the wrong, transforming into an honorable man who champions the sisters' true education and marries Clementine.

His jester's cap and bells, contrasting sharply with his later scholarly robes.

Witty, cynical, manipulative (initially), intelligent, observant, charming, eventually remorseful and honorable.

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A young adult male, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has merry eyes touched with sadness, a mouth with cynical and sweet curves, and a fair complexion. He wears a jester's cap with bells, a brightly colored patched tunic, and simple trousers. He holds his hands clasped in front of him, with a thoughtful, slightly melancholic expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Clementine ★ protagonist

human young adult female

The youngest of the seven sisters, described as having dimples and a fair face. She is initially trembling and blushing, later rosy and pale, and eventually her eyes are flecked with green.

Attire: Initially, likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, possibly a plain gown, but still of good quality. When she kneels before the King, she is described with 'many-colored light of purple and crimson and gold' falling on her face, suggesting she is still dressed in fine attire for the graduation ceremony.

Wants: To study and grow wise, to understand things, driven by a deep curiosity and a desire for knowledge. Later, her motivation shifts to love and unwavering faith in her beloved.

Flaw: Initially, her youth and shyness make her falter and blush. Her deep faith in the Jester's wisdom makes her vulnerable to his initial deception.

Starts as the youngest and most timid but also the most determined of the sisters. She falls in love with the Lord Rector, is initially deceived, but her unwavering faith in his wisdom ultimately redeems him and leads to their marriage. She becomes a symbol of intuitive wisdom and steadfast love.

Her dimples, which are mentioned multiple times and blush when she is embarrassed.

Intrepid, strong-willed (the leader of the sisters), initially faltering and blushing, but later firm, steadfast, and full of wonder.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a fair complexion, a round face with prominent dimples, and eyes that are a mix of gray and brown, appearing flecked with green. Her lips are slightly parted in wonder. Her hair is a light brown, styled in soft waves that frame her face. She wears a simple, elegant gown of pale blue linen, with a fitted bodice and a flowing skirt, suitable for a count's daughter attending a formal event. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sylvie ◆ supporting

human young adult female

The eldest of the seven sisters. Her physical description is limited to her hair color.

Attire: Likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, but still of good quality. For the graduation, she would be in fine attire.

Wants: To study and grow wise, to understand things.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but shares the sisters' initial naivety regarding the King's true intentions.

Starts as a determined student seeking knowledge. She is eventually married to one of the philosophers, suggesting a resolution where her desire for wisdom is integrated with a traditional path.

Her striking black hair.

Earnest, determined, studious.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a serious, earnest expression, with dark, intelligent eyes and a fair complexion. Her long, straight black hair is neatly braided and falls over her shoulders. She wears a deep emerald green velvet gown with a high neckline and long sleeves, adorned with subtle silver embroidery along the cuffs and hem. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Natalie ◆ supporting

human young adult female

One of the seven sisters. Her physical description is limited to her hair color.

Attire: Likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, but still of good quality. For the graduation, she would be in fine attire.

Wants: To study and grow wise, specifically 'to be a power'.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but shares the sisters' initial naivety regarding the King's true intentions.

Starts as a determined student seeking knowledge and power. She is eventually married to one of the philosophers, suggesting a resolution where her desire for influence is integrated with a traditional path.

Her brown hair.

Assertive, ambitious, studious.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a determined expression, with warm brown eyes and a fair complexion. Her long, wavy brown hair is styled in an elegant updo, with a few soft curls framing her face. She wears a rich crimson silk gown with a square neckline and puffed sleeves, adorned with delicate gold trim. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Amelie ◆ supporting

human young adult female

One of the seven sisters. Her physical description is limited to her hair color.

Attire: Likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, but still of good quality. For the graduation, she would be in fine attire.

Wants: To study and grow wise, specifically 'so that people will like us'.

Flaw: Her desire for approval, which the Jester mocks.

Starts as a determined student seeking knowledge and social acceptance. She is eventually married to one of the philosophers, suggesting a resolution where her desire for approval is integrated with a traditional path.

Her golden hair, which sparkles with tears from Virginie's eyes.

Sensitive, perhaps a bit timid, desirous of social acceptance, studious.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a gentle expression, with wide, light blue eyes and fair skin. Her long, wavy golden hair cascades down her back, shimmering softly. She wears a sky-blue satin gown with delicate lace trim along the sweetheart neckline and short puffed sleeves. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Virginie ◆ supporting

human young adult female

One of the seven sisters. Her physical description is limited to her eye color.

Attire: Likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, but still of good quality. For the graduation, she would be in fine attire.

Wants: To study and grow wise, specifically 'to understand all things'.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but shares the sisters' initial naivety regarding the King's true intentions.

Starts as a determined student seeking knowledge and understanding. She is eventually married to one of the philosophers, suggesting a resolution where her intellectual pursuits are integrated with a traditional path.

Her brown eyes, from which tears sparkle like jewels on Amelie's golden hair.

Inquisitive, intellectual, studious.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has an intelligent, thoughtful expression, with deep brown eyes and a fair complexion. Her medium-length, wavy auburn hair is pulled back in a simple bun, with a few strands escaping around her temples. She wears a rich forest green brocade gown with a modest round neckline and long, fitted sleeves. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sidonie ◆ supporting

human young adult female

One of the seven sisters. Her physical description is limited to her eye color.

Attire: Likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, but still of good quality. For the graduation, she would be in fine attire.

Wants: To study and grow wise, specifically 'to be wise and know things'.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but shares the sisters' initial naivety regarding the King's true intentions.

Starts as a determined student seeking knowledge. She is eventually married to one of the philosophers, suggesting a resolution where her intellectual pursuits are integrated with a traditional path.

Her blue eyes, which are noted by the knights-at-arms.

Intellectual, straightforward, studious.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a thoughtful, earnest expression, with striking blue eyes and a fair complexion. Her long, straight blonde hair is worn loose, falling gracefully over her shoulders. She wears a rich sapphire blue velvet gown with a modest V-neckline and long, fitted sleeves, adorned with silver embroidery. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Dorothée ◆ supporting

human young adult female

One of the seven sisters. Her physical description is limited to her eye color.

Attire: Likely a fine dress befitting a count's daughter, possibly in gold, crimson, blue, or rich green as mentioned for the ladies-in-waiting. Later, as a university student, she would wear simpler, more practical attire, but still of good quality. For the graduation, she would be in fine attire.

Wants: To study and grow wise.

Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but shares the sisters' initial naivety regarding the King's true intentions.

Starts as a determined student seeking knowledge. She is eventually married to one of the philosophers, suggesting a resolution where her intellectual pursuits are integrated with a traditional path.

Her gray eyes, which are noted by the knights-at-arms.

Determined, studious.

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A young adult female, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a calm, intelligent expression, with striking gray eyes and a fair complexion. Her long, dark blonde hair is styled in a sophisticated chignon, with a few soft waves framing her face. She wears a deep plum purple silk gown with a high, ruffled collar and long, flowing sleeves, adorned with intricate gold embroidery. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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The Royal Presence Chamber

indoor Implied to be temperate, as it's an indoor setting.

A grand hall within a European-style castle, likely French or German given the names, featuring a raised dais with a gold-brocaded canopy over the King's throne. The room is spacious, filled with courtiers, and later emptied. Stained glass windows are implied by the 'light shone through the stained windows' at the end.

Mood: Initially tense and formal, then shifts to solemnity, and finally to boisterous mirth and celebration.

The seven sisters make their initial plea to the King; the King and Jester conspire; the final graduation ceremony and mass betrothal take place here.

King's throne with gold-brocaded canopy Dais Stained glass windows Vaulted ceiling Courtiers (Jester, philosophers, knights-at-arms, ladies-in-waiting)
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A grand, high-ceilinged royal presence chamber in a medieval European castle, possibly French or German, with large stained-glass windows filtering colorful light onto a polished stone floor. A raised dais at the far end holds an ornate, gold-brocaded throne. Tapestries depicting heraldic scenes hang on the rough-hewn stone walls. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Castle Tiring-Room

indoor Implied to be temperate, as it's an indoor setting.

A private room within the castle where the sisters prepare themselves, likely with mirrors and dressing tables, where they discuss their plans.

Mood: Intimate, conspiratorial, filled with girlish chatter and nervous anticipation.

The sisters discuss their audacious plan to ask the King for university admission.

Mirrors Dressing tables Hair braiding Private chamber furnishings
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A cozy, well-appointed tiring-room in a medieval European castle, with a large wooden dressing table and a polished metal mirror. Soft light from a mullioned window illuminates embroidered cushions on a window seat and a heavy tapestry covering one wall. Several wooden chairs are arranged around the room, and a half-braided strand of hair lies on the table. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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University Great Hall

indoor Implied to be temperate, as it's an indoor setting.

A large hall within the university where lectures are given, likely with tiered seating for students and a dais for the Rector. It is filled with students and later, the King and other guests.

Mood: Initially studious and formal, later becoming a place of revelation and emotional turmoil for Clementine.

The sisters attend lectures, Clementine receives her 'degree' and is wooed by the Rector.

Dais for the Rector Tiered seating for students Lectern Stone or timber construction
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A vast, echoing great hall of a medieval European university, with tall, arched windows letting in diffused daylight. Rows of long wooden benches face a raised dais with a simple lectern. The walls are of rough-hewn stone, and the ceiling is supported by heavy timber beams. A few scattered books and quills lie on the benches. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Path by the Rippling River

outdoor daytime Spring, with fresh leaves on willows, implying mild weather.

A path running alongside a gently flowing river, shaded by three newly leaved willow trees, indicating springtime.

Mood: Serene, natural, but becomes emotionally charged with confession and revelation.

My Lord Rector confesses his deception to Clementine.

Rippling river Path Three willow trees with fresh green leaves Riverbank vegetation
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A winding dirt path follows the gentle curve of a clear, rippling river. Three elegant willow trees, their branches heavy with fresh, vibrant green spring leaves, lean gracefully over the water's edge, casting dappled shadows on the path. The riverbank is covered in soft, verdant grass and small wildflowers. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.