THREE
by Rose Fyleman · from The Rainbow Cat
Adapted Version
Once there was a young prince. He was kind and brave. His parents sent him away. He went to see the world. He would be king one day. They wanted him to learn.
Prince Leo rode his horse. He came to a small village. The village was pretty. A good smell filled the air. It was new bread. He felt hungry then.
He saw Lily. She was very pretty. Lily smiled at him. He wanted a roll. He had a big gold coin. Lily had no small change. Prince Leo must stay. He would eat more rolls.
Prince Leo stayed one week. He liked Lily very much. They talked and laughed. He felt sad to leave. His parents would not like her. She was not a princess.
Prince Leo rode away. He felt very sad. He missed Lily. He could not forget her. He turned his horse around. He would go back to her. His parents would love her.
He came to the village. The shop was quiet. The Baker was not there. He had passed away. Lily was not there either. She left to find work. Prince Leo felt very sad.
Prince Leo looked for Lily. He looked everywhere. He asked many people. He did not find her. He went home then. He looked very sad. He was thin and pale.
The King and Queen worried. Prince Leo was so sad. They saw his pain. He told them his secret. He loved Lily. He wanted to marry her.
His parents were not sure. Lily was not a princess. They thought for a while. Prince Leo was very sad. They wanted him happy. They said yes then.
One morning, Prince Leo ate. He ate breakfast rolls. The rolls tasted special. They were warm and sweet. Only Lily made rolls like these. He knew she was here. He felt very happy.
Prince Leo ran to the kitchen. He found Lily there. Lily looked up. She peeled potatoes. She was a kitchen-maid. They were very happy. They saw each other again.
The King and Queen met Lily. She was sweet and pretty. They saw her good heart. They liked her very much. They gave their blessing. Prince Leo could marry her.
Prince Leo and Lily married. It was a grand day. They lived in a nice house. They were very happy. True love always finds a way.
Original Story
THREE
The Prince and the Baker’s Daughter
THERE was once a prince who was very brave, good and handsome. He was quite young, too, and before he settled down to learning how to rule the kingdom which would one day be his, he was sent by his father out a-travelling into the world.
The king gave his son a beautiful white horse and a bagful of big gold pieces, and told him to come back when the money was all spent.
His mother made him a blue velvet mantle embroidered with silver, and she also gave him a hat with a blue feather in it.
“I want my son to look nice when he goes out riding into the world,” she said.
He rode away on his white horse and turned to wave his hand to his mother and father before he went over the hill-top.
“How handsome he looks,” said his mother, wiping away a tear or two.
“Well, that’s nothing to cry about,” said his father, and blew his nose. Then they went back into the palace and continued ruling.
The prince rode on and on.
Wherever he went people were very nice to him, even when he got beyond the borders of his own kingdom where he was no longer known.
It is not every day that a handsome prince comes riding along on a white horse, and moreover with a bagful of fine gold pieces to spend.
All the girls ran out to look at him as he passed, and when he stayed anywhere, even for a short time, people seemed to get to know about it at once and asked him to their houses and gave grand parties in his honour and made so much of him altogether that he was in some danger of getting thoroughly spoiled.
But he had been very well brought up, and he had a naturally amiable disposition.
Besides, he had always been told by his mother that if you are a prince you must try hard to behave as a prince should, and be modest, considerate, and very polite to every one.
One morning close on midday, he came to a tiny village which he did not know at all.
He was rather hungry after his ride, and as he passed down the narrow little street he became aware of a delicious smell of new bread.
It came from the open door of the village baker’s, and as he glanced in he saw a pile of beautiful, crisp new rolls heaped up in a big white basket.
He got down off his horse and went in.
“I should like to buy one of those nice little rolls,” he said to the baker’s daughter, who stood behind the counter.
She was very pretty. She had blue, shining eyes and fair smooth hair, and when she smiled it was like sunshine on a flowery meadow.
The prince ate up his roll and then another and yet another, and while he ate he talked to the baker’s daughter. But no one can eat more than three rolls one after another, and at last he felt that the time had come to pay for what he had had and ride on his way.
But, as it happened, he had no small change, nothing but a gold piece such as those which he had in his bag.
The baker’s daughter hadn’t enough money in the whole shop to change such a big gold piece, her father having set off that very morning with all the money in the till in order to buy a sack of flour from the miller in the next village.
She had never even seen so large a gold coin before. She wanted to give him the rolls for nothing, but of course he wouldn’t hear of that, and when he said it didn’t matter about the change she wouldn’t hear of that either.
“Then there’s nothing for it,” said the prince, “but for me to stay in the village until I have eaten as much as my gold piece will pay for.”
As a matter of fact he was really quite glad of an excuse to stay, the baker’s daughter was so very pretty, and he was getting a little tired of travelling.
He pottered about in the bakehouse all the afternoon and watched her making the dough for her delicious rolls.
He even offered to help her.
His blue mantle got rather floury, but he didn’t mind that in the least.
The baker’s daughter was rather worried that such a fine gentleman should get in such a mess.
She didn’t know he was a prince, otherwise she might have been more worried still.
In the evening, when the baker returned, the prince asked if he could put him up for a couple of nights.
The baker was a kindly and simple old soul. “Gladly, gladly,” he said, rubbing his hands together and smiling, for the village was a small one and they were very poor, and he was glad to make a little extra money.
The prince stayed a whole week at the baker’s house. By that time, what with the bread he had eaten—though he was careful not to eat much and always to choose the cheapest—and the price of his lodging, about half of the gold piece was spent, and the baker’s daughter was able to give him the change from the money she had taken in the shop.
So he had no excuse for staying any longer, which grieved him because he had grown very fond of the baker’s daughter and did not like leaving her.
But he had an idea that his mother and father would not think her a very suitable bride for him, for princes cannot always marry whom they please, and so he rode sadly away.
But the farther he went the sadder he became, and at the end of two months he could bear it no longer, and so one fine morning he turned his horse’s head round and rode back again the way he had come.
“She is good and clever and beautiful,” he said. “What more can one want in a wife? When my mother and father see her they will love her as much as I do and will be quite willing that I should marry her.” Which really was very optimistic of him.
But alas, when he came to the village and sought the baker’s shop, he was met by strange faces.
The baker had died a month since, he was told, and his daughter had left the village and gone out into the world to work for her living, for she could not manage the bakehouse by herself and there was none to help her now that her father was gone.
The prince was very, very troubled and unhappy. He tried to find out something more about her, but his efforts were fruitless; no one seemed to know what had become of her.
“I will search the world over till I find her,” he said, “even if it take me the whole of my life.”
He wandered on and on, always making fresh inquiries, always hoping to hear something of his lost love, but always in vain.
And at last he got back to his own kingdom.
When his mother and father saw him they were horrified to find how pale and thin he had grown.
HE RODE AWAY ON HIS WHITE HORSE AND TURNED TO WAVE HIS HAND TO HIS MOTHER AND FATHER BEFORE HE WENT OVER THE HILL-TOP.
“Travelling doesn’t seem to suit you, my son,” said his father, looking at him rather seriously and stroking his beard.
“The poor boy is tired out,” said his mother. “He’ll look better when he’s had a good rest and some proper food. I don’t suppose he’s ever had a really wholesome meal in those foreign parts.”
But the prince remained thin and sad and listless, and at last he told his father and mother the cause of his unhappiness. At first they were a little upset at the idea of his wanting to marry so humble a person as the daughter of a village baker—“But that of course,” thought the prince, “is only because they don’t know her.”
And after a time, when they saw how unhappy he was and that all the distractions with which they provided him were unavailing, and that his one idea was to go out into the world again and search for the baker’s daughter, they were so troubled that they felt they would be only too glad if he could have the wish of his heart fulfilled.
And then one day as the prince was sitting quietly at breakfast with his parents he jumped up suddenly with an expression of the greatest excitement and joy.
“What is it, my son?” said his astonished mother.
The prince couldn’t speak for a moment. For one thing he was too excited, and for another his mouth was full of bread, and I told you before how well brought up he was.
But he pointed to the dish of breakfast rolls and kept on nodding his head and swallowing as hard as he could.
The king and queen thought at first that sorrow had affected his brain, but the prince was able to explain very soon. “The rolls, the rolls,” he said. “Her rolls, hers. No one else could make them so good. She must be here.” And he rushed off to the kitchen without further ado.
And there, sure enough, he found the baker’s daughter, peeling potatoes over the sink.
By the merest chance she had taken a place as kitchen-maid in the king’s palace, though she hadn’t the faintest idea, when she did so, that the king’s son was the same person as the handsome stranger who had once stayed in her father’s house.
And though she had been there a month she had never seen him. How should she? King’s palaces are big places, and the kitchen-maids stay in the kitchen premises, so that she and the prince might never have come face to face at all if it had not happened that, owing to the illness of the royal roll-maker, she had undertaken to make the breakfast rolls that morning.
When the king and queen saw how sweet and beautiful she was they made no objection to her as a bride for their son, and so he asked her at once to marry him, which she consented to do, for she loved him as much as he loved her.
“I don’t know that I should have chosen a baker’s daughter for our son’s wife,” said the queen to her husband when they talked it over that evening. “But she’s certainly a charming girl, and quite nice people go into business nowadays.”
“She’ll make him an excellent wife,” said the king. “Those rolls were delicious.”
So they got married quite soon after. The wedding was a rather quiet one because the bride was in mourning for her father, whom she had loved dearly. All the same, it was a very nice affair, and everybody was most jolly and gay. The prince and his wife had a beautiful house not very far from the palace, and I think it is extremely likely that they lived happily ever after.
Story DNA
Moral
True love can overcome social barriers and will find a way to reunite those meant to be together.
Plot Summary
A handsome young prince, traveling the world, falls in love with a beautiful baker's daughter when a large gold piece forces him to stay at her shop. Despite his feelings, he leaves, believing his royal parents would disapprove. Overcome with sadness, he returns to find her gone, her father having died. After a long, fruitless search, he returns home heartbroken, eventually convincing his parents to accept his love. By a stroke of fate, he recognizes her unique rolls being served at the palace and finds her working as a kitchen-maid, leading to their joyful reunion and marriage.
Themes
Emotional Arc
contentment to sorrow to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common societal expectations of marriage and class in pre-modern European societies, where royal marriages were often strategic and not based on personal affection.
Plot Beats (13)
- A young, handsome prince is sent by his parents to travel the world before taking on royal duties.
- He arrives at a small village, drawn by the smell of fresh bread, and enters the baker's shop.
- He meets the pretty baker's daughter and, having no small change for his gold piece, is compelled to stay until he eats enough to spend the coin.
- He spends a week at the baker's house, growing fond of the daughter, but eventually leaves sadly, believing his parents would not approve of her as a bride.
- After two months of increasing sadness, he decides to return to the village, convinced his parents will love her once they meet her.
- Upon his return, he discovers the baker has died and his daughter has left the village to find work.
- The prince searches for her extensively but in vain, eventually returning to his own kingdom, pale and thin from grief.
- His parents are concerned by his condition, and he eventually confesses his love for the baker's daughter and his desire to marry her.
- Initially hesitant due to her humble origins, his parents eventually agree to his wish, seeing his profound unhappiness.
- One morning at breakfast, the prince tastes the rolls and immediately recognizes them as being made by his beloved.
- He rushes to the kitchen and finds the baker's daughter working as a kitchen-maid, having taken the job by chance.
- The king and queen, seeing her beauty and sweetness, give their full approval for the marriage.
- The prince and the baker's daughter marry and live happily ever after in a beautiful house near the palace.
Characters
The Prince ★ protagonist
Tall and slender, with a noble bearing. Initially healthy and robust, he becomes noticeably pale and thin from grief and extensive travel.
Attire: A luxurious blue velvet mantle embroidered with silver, and a hat adorned with a blue feather. Later, his mantle becomes floury from working in the bakehouse. After his travels, his clothes would likely be worn from the journey, though still of fine quality.
Wants: Initially, to travel and gain experience before ruling. Later, his sole motivation is to find and marry the Baker's Daughter.
Flaw: His initial optimism about his parents' acceptance of a commoner bride, and his deep emotional vulnerability when separated from his love, leading to physical decline.
Starts as a somewhat sheltered but well-meaning prince on a grand tour. He falls deeply in love, experiences profound loss and grief, and ultimately transforms into a determined individual willing to defy societal expectations for love, learning resilience and true devotion.
Brave, good, handsome, amiable, modest, considerate, polite, determined, romantic, somewhat naive (optimistic about his parents' acceptance).
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A young adult male, tall and slender with a noble bearing, facing forward. He has a handsome face with clear features and fair skin. His hair is smooth and well-kept, of an unspecified color. He wears a luxurious blue velvet mantle embroidered with silver, and a hat adorned with a blue feather. He stands with a confident, upright posture, a gentle, amiable expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Baker's Daughter ★ protagonist
Pretty and charming, with a wholesome appearance. She is likely of average height and build for a young woman working in a village bakehouse.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a baker's daughter in a village, likely made of linen or cotton in muted colors. When working in the palace kitchen, she would wear a plain kitchen-maid's dress and apron. Her mourning period would involve dark, simple attire.
Wants: Initially, to help her father with the bakehouse and make a living. After her father's death, to support herself. Ultimately, to be with the Prince whom she loves.
Flaw: Her vulnerability after her father's death, leaving her without support and forcing her to leave her home.
Starts as a simple village girl, falls in love with a visiting prince, experiences the loss of her father and her home, and is forced to seek work elsewhere. Through a stroke of fate and her own skill, she is reunited with the prince and marries him, ascending to royalty while retaining her humble virtues.
Pretty, charming, kind, honest (refusing to take the prince's money without change), hardworking, resourceful (managing the bakehouse, then finding work), loving (mourning her father).
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A young adult female, pretty and charming, facing forward. She has fair, smooth hair, blue shining eyes, and a fresh complexion. Her smile is bright and warm. She wears a simple, practical linen dress in a muted color, with a plain white apron tied at the waist. Her hands are capable, perhaps lightly dusted with flour. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
A man of authority, likely of a sturdy build. He is described as stroking his beard, indicating he has one.
Attire: Royal attire, likely rich robes of a formal nature, befitting a monarch. Specific colors and fabrics are not mentioned but would be opulent.
Wants: To ensure his son is well-prepared to rule, and later, to see his son happy.
Flaw: Initially, a slight class prejudice regarding his son's choice of bride.
Initially a traditional monarch concerned with royal propriety, he softens and becomes more accepting of his son's unconventional choice for a bride, prioritizing his son's happiness.
Practical, somewhat gruff ('nothing to cry about'), concerned for his son's well-being, eventually understanding and accepting, appreciates good food.
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An elderly male, sturdy build, facing forward. He has a long, well-groomed gray beard and a serious, thoughtful expression. He wears rich, formal royal robes in deep jewel tones, possibly with gold embroidery. He stands with an authoritative posture. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Queen ◆ supporting
A regal woman, likely of a graceful build. She is described as wiping away tears, indicating a sensitive nature.
Attire: Elegant royal attire, likely flowing gowns of fine fabrics and colors, possibly with jewels, befitting a queen. She is concerned with her son looking 'nice'.
Wants: To ensure her son's happiness and well-being, and to see him marry suitably.
Flaw: Initially, a slight class prejudice and concern for social standing.
Starts as a traditional queen concerned with her son's royal duties and suitable marriage. She evolves to prioritize her son's profound happiness over strict adherence to social class, showing a loving and adaptable nature.
Maternal, sentimental ('wiping away a tear'), concerned with appearances ('look nice'), initially traditional, but ultimately loving and accepting.
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An elderly female, graceful build, facing forward. She has a kind, expressive face, with her hair elegantly styled, likely gray or white. She wears a flowing, elegant royal gown in a rich fabric and color, possibly with subtle embroidery or jewels. She stands with a dignified yet warm posture, a gentle, maternal expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Baker ○ minor
A kindly and simple old soul, likely with a sturdy build from years of physical work in the bakehouse.
Attire: Simple, practical working clothes typical of a village baker, likely made of linen or wool, possibly with a flour-dusted apron.
Wants: To earn a living and provide for his daughter, and to be hospitable to guests.
Flaw: His poverty and eventual death leave his daughter vulnerable.
A static character who provides a temporary home for the Prince. His death serves as a plot point that separates the Prince and the Baker's Daughter.
Kindly, simple, welcoming, hospitable, poor but honest.
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An elderly male, sturdy build, facing forward. He has a friendly, smiling face with wrinkles, and graying hair. He wears simple, practical linen work clothes and a flour-dusted white apron. He stands with a slightly hunched but sturdy posture, rubbing his hands together. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Village Baker's Shop
A small, narrow shop in a tiny village, with an open door revealing a counter and a big white basket piled high with beautiful, crisp new rolls. The bakehouse is visible, where dough is made.
Mood: Warm, inviting, homely, filled with the delicious smell of fresh bread, later becomes a place of quiet affection and simple work.
The Prince first encounters the Baker's Daughter, eats her rolls, and finds an excuse to stay due to lack of small change. He spends a week here, falling in love.
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A cozy, rustic village baker's shop interior, with a worn wooden counter in the foreground. Sunlight streams through an open doorway, illuminating a large wicker basket overflowing with golden-brown, crusty bread rolls. In the background, a glimpse into a small, flour-dusted bakehouse with a brick oven and kneading table. Warm, inviting light fills the space. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The King's Palace Kitchen
A large, bustling kitchen within a grand royal palace, equipped for preparing meals for royalty. It features a sink for washing, and areas for baking, like where the royal roll-maker would work.
Mood: Busy, functional, initially unknown to the Prince, later becomes a place of joyous reunion and discovery.
The Prince, recognizing the unique taste of the rolls, rushes to the kitchen and finds the Baker's Daughter working as a kitchen-maid, leading to their reunion and eventual marriage.
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A vast, bustling medieval palace kitchen, with high ceilings and large stone hearths. Morning light filters through a high arched window, illuminating a long wooden work table where various kitchen staff are busy. In one corner, a young woman is peeling potatoes over a deep stone sink, her back to the viewer. Copper pots and pans hang from racks, and sacks of flour are stacked against a rough-hewn stone wall. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.