THE MAGIC GUN
by Sister Agnes · from Fairy Tales Told in the Bush
Adapted Version
Old Barak loved to tell stories. Young Tom loved to listen.
Old Barak sat outside. He told Tom a story. It was about The Magic Gun. Old Barak spoke softly. Tom listened to every word.
Tom looked at the old gun. He held it in his hands. "Does it use nails?" Tom asked. "Yes, pretend nails," Old Barak said. "And a pretend knife?" Tom asked. "Yes, for magic," Old Barak said. Tom felt happy.
That night, Tom got up. He was very quiet. He went to Old Barak's hut. Old Barak slept soundly. Tom took The Magic Gun. He went outside for fun.
Tom walked a little way. The sun came up. He wanted to try the gun. It had pretend nails. He wanted to see its magic. Tom felt excited.
Then Tom saw a big Kangaroo. It stood up tall. Tom raised The Magic Gun. He aimed at the Kangaroo. Tom made a loud "Bang!" The Kangaroo stopped. It stood very still. Tom smiled.
Three Kookaburras laughed. They sat in a tree. "Ha-ha-ha!" they sang. Tom aimed The Magic Gun. He made a loud "Bang!" Kookaburras laughed more. They danced on the branch. Tom laughed too.
Tom wanted a boat. He put a pretend knife in the gun. He aimed at a tree. "Bang!" he said. A big piece of bark came off. It looked like a canoe. Tom put it in the river. He used the gun to paddle.
Tom went down the river. He saw a big bridge. A big, silly monster came out. It had big eyes. It had big horns. It was The Bunyip! Tom felt a little scared.
Tom put a pretend knife in the gun. He aimed at The Bunyip. "Bang!" he said. The Bunyip made a funny noise. It splashed water. Tom put pretend nails in the gun. "Bang!" he said again. The Bunyip splashed more.
The Bunyip came close. It nudged Tom's boat. Tom jumped into the water. He swam to the shore. The Bunyip splashed behind him. Tom ran and ran.
Tom felt very tired. He fell to the ground. Then his Father was there. "Tom, why are you here?" Father asked. "Why do you have that gun?" Father asked.
Tom rubbed his eyes. "It is The Magic Gun!" he said. "The Kangaroo is there. Kookaburras are there. Tom wanted to show Father. It was a big, fun dream.
Original Story
THE MAGIC GUN
“BARAK TELLING THE STORY OF THE MAGIC GUN.”
The Magic Gun.
It was September, the wattle blossom month, and many people were in and around beautiful Healesville, where the wattle is to be seen at its best. Old King Barak, the last King of the Yarra tribe, sat outside his hut at Coranderrk, surrounded by white people.
“You all too greedy,” he grumbled, “you come to see black man, black man make native fire, black man throw boomerang, black man throw spear; white man give him black brother pennies, pah, white man greedy, no give black man baccy, only pennies.” A few of the white people gave the dirty old chief a silver coin, then they went off to another hut to buy native baskets, and to see the funny black babies. One small boy stayed behind.
“I am not greedy, Barak; see, I have brought you a shilling.”
Barak greedily snatched the shilling.
“Last time,” said the boy, “you told me the story of the Yarra Yarra, and you promised to tell me the story of the Magic Gun to-day if I brought you another shilling. Do be quick and tell me, because the others will want to go back to the township as soon as they have bought some baskets and things.”
Charmed by the gift of the shilling, the old man told the small white boy the story of the Magic Gun in quavering voice, sometimes scarcely to be heard, for he was very frail; indeed, though little Tom Jones did not know it, this was the last time he, or any one else, was to hear the story of the Magic Gun from poor old King Barak of Coranderrk Station.
Tom drew a deep breath as the old man finished his story.
“Let me look at the gun, Barak,” he pleaded.
The old black took him into his hut, and proudly showed him an old-fashioned gun.
“And that is the gun that Buckly, the white man who was lost and lived among the blacks, really used?”
“Course it is, didn’t I tell you,” said King Barak.
“And he really used nails instead of bullets?”
“Course he did with this gun, it’s a Magic Gun,” answered the old man.
“And he put his knife into its——”
“Tom, Tom, we are going, come along,” called the voice of authority, so Tom could not finish his questioning, but had to drive away with the others.
That night, when the others were fast asleep in bed, Tom dressed himself very quietly—there was no need to get a candle, for there was a bright moon by whose light he could see quite well. He hurried, for he meant to go to Coranderrk Station, two miles away, sneak Barak’s Magic Gun, and just see for himself what its powers were like.
Fortune favoured Tom. Barak had somehow or other got some beer, although no one was allowed to sell beer to black men. Barak was in a drunken sleep and had not locked his door. Tom tiptoed in, took the Magic Gun from its place on the wall, and went out on his search for game. Tom walked steadily on until he was some miles from home. By this time the sun was rising, the whole country was bathed in a golden and purple light, but Tom had no thoughts for beauty or scenery. The Magic Gun filled his thoughts. He walked until, from very weariness, he sat down to rest against a log; not a thing had he seen upon which to try the Magic Gun, which had to be primed with nails instead of powder.
He enjoyed the bread and butter he had brought with him, and after he had finished it he felt rather sleepy—indeed, he closed his eyes for a moment—only for a moment, however, for just as he was pinching himself to keep awake, he saw a big old man kangaroo standing erect, looking at him, not many feet away. Stealthily Tom took his Magic Gun from the ground, raised himself and prepared to fire. With a bound the kangaroo was off, Tom following at a hot pace.
“Sure luck with the Magic Gun,” said Tom to himself, for though the kangaroo went like the wind, Tom kept up with it. On and on they went, for miles and miles it seemed to Tom, until at last the kangaroo seemed to be winded, for he suddenly stopped and backed up against a tree facing Tom. With a shaky hand Tom put in six nails, raised the gun to his shoulder and fired.
Bang went the gun; the air was so full of smoke that for some minutes nothing could be seen for it, but as it cleared away Tom shouted for joy, for the old man kangaroo was nailed to the tree as securely as if he had been held by several pairs of hands, while the nails were driven in.
“Gour-gour-gah-gah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah!”
A shout of laughter came from the tree-top. Tom, looking up, saw an old kookooburra (or laughing jackass) with head bent back, laughing and chuckling; soon he was joined by two young birds. The old one flew down, looked first at the dead kangaroo, then at Tom, after which he flew back to the branch on which he had been sitting and indulged in another burst of laughter; in this he was joined by the two young birds.
It seemed to Tom to be a personal insult. They must be laughing at him, because he knew no better than to shoot a kangaroo. He remembered now, the kangaroo was always hunted with dogs, never shot.
“Cheeky things,” said Tom, “I’ll teach them a lesson. They know I dare not shoot a kookooburra, so they think they can laugh at me as much as they like. I know what I’ll do, with this Magic Gun I can split the branch on which they are standing, then they won’t laugh so loud and long. One nail will be enough to do it.”
No sooner thought of than it was done. Bang went the gun once more, and before those rude kookooburras could fly away, the branch had opened, in slipped their little toes, and there they were caught nicely in a trap.
“Gour-gour-gah-gah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah-ah!” laughed the three trapped birds, but this time they were laughing at their own silliness in being caught so easily.
“They shall just stay there until I have been down the river and back again; but to go down the river I must have something to sail or row in. King Barak said that a knife was the thing to use instead of powder for that work. Now for making a canoe with the Magic Gun,” said Tom, at the same time placing an open penknife in the gun. Once more he raised it to his shoulder, but this time he fired at a great gum tree. The knife shot forth, struck the tree, and, as if guided by an invisible hand, cut the bark to the exact size and shape of a canoe. Tom gave a strong tug and pulled the bark clean away from the tree. There it lay, a very strong canoe, and in a short time Tom had dragged it across to the river, launched it, sprang in, and using the gun as a paddle, sailed gaily down the river.
It was so jolly! Of course it would have been better fun if some one had been with him, but then, none of the others really believed in the power of the Magic Gun, and King Barak said that if an unbeliever were present when he tried to use it, nothing could come of it.
Down the river went the canoe, nearing the dreadful place where the undercurrents met, the undercurrents which no one would face, not even the blacks, except in a magic canoe. Tom could now see the bridge which was just the other side of the dreaded part, where anything that was thrown in got sucked down. As he looked his blood froze in his veins, and his heart seemed to stop beating with fear of what he saw. From under the bridge came an awful shapeless mass, the only distinct part about it being a head with glaring eyes and big horns.
“The Bunyip,” wailed Tom, trying now to paddle to the shore and so escape the horrid thing coming towards him. Suddenly, a happy thought struck him. Why, of course, the Magic Gun could kill even a “Bunyip.”
With trembling hands he placed his knife in the muzzle of the gun, fired, and saw the knife describe a circle over the Bunyip’s head and fall into the water. Hurriedly he took some nails from his pocket and charged the gun with them, fired, and was horrified to see that when the nails struck the Bunyip, fire and smoke came from every hole made by them. Nearer and nearer came the horrid flame-belching creature until it touched the boat, and at the same instant Tom sprang overboard, swam to the shore, and fled, followed by the awful Bunyip.
Faster and faster went Tom, until at last he dropped to the ground because his legs refused to carry him any further. Then he felt the creature catch hold of him, and he sprang up wildly to fight it. But instead of the awful Bunyip, he saw his father, who gazed at his small son in surprise, and wanted to know why he had gone off alone so early in the morning, why he had borrowed Barak’s silly old gun, and what he meant by sleeping in the sun at that time of day.
Tom denied that he had been asleep. He looked at the Magic Gun. It was certainly rusty, as if it had been in the water, and he determined to get his father to go with him up the banks of the Yarra until they should come to the tree where he knew they would find the kangaroo skin nailed with the nails from the Magic Gun, and the three kookooburras caught in the split branch of the same tree; then he would be compelled to believe in its power.
Story DNA
Moral
Sometimes, what we perceive as magic or reality is merely a product of our imagination or dreams.
Plot Summary
Young Tom Jones is enthralled by old King Barak's tale of a 'Magic Gun.' Driven by curiosity, Tom steals the gun at night and embarks on a fantastical adventure, seemingly using the gun to nail a kangaroo to a tree, trap kookaburras, create a canoe, and battle a terrifying Bunyip. His thrilling escapade culminates in a chase by the Bunyip, only for Tom to wake up to his father, revealing the entire adventure was a vivid dream. Despite the reality, Tom remains convinced of the gun's magic and attempts to prove his dream to his father.
Themes
Emotional Arc
excitement to fear to confusion
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story features King Barak, a real historical figure (William Barak, 1824-1903), a leader of the Wurundjeri people. Coranderrk was an Aboriginal reserve. The portrayal reflects colonial attitudes of the time, with white visitors observing and interacting with Aboriginal people.
Plot Beats (12)
- Old King Barak, the last King of the Yarra tribe, tells young Tom Jones the story of the Magic Gun for a shilling.
- Tom is captivated by the story and inspects the old gun, questioning Barak about its unusual properties (nails for bullets, knife for powder).
- That night, Tom quietly dresses and sneaks to Coranderrk Station, finding Barak in a drunken sleep, and steals the Magic Gun.
- Tom walks for miles, waiting for sunrise, eager to test the gun, which uses nails for priming.
- He spots a large kangaroo, pursues it, and seemingly nails it to a tree with six nails from the Magic Gun.
- Three kookaburras laugh at Tom, so he uses the gun to split their branch, trapping their toes.
- Tom then uses a knife in the gun to cut bark from a gum tree, forming a canoe, and paddles down the river.
- He approaches a dangerous part of the river and encounters a terrifying Bunyip from under a bridge.
- Tom attempts to shoot the Bunyip with his knife and then with nails, but the creature is unharmed and belches fire and smoke.
- The Bunyip touches Tom's boat, causing him to spring overboard and flee to shore, pursued by the creature.
- Tom collapses from exhaustion, only to wake and find his father, who questions him about being out alone and borrowing Barak's gun.
- Tom denies sleeping and insists his adventure was real, determined to take his father to the tree where he believes the kangaroo and kookaburras are.
Characters
King Barak ◆ supporting
An old, frail Aboriginal man, likely with a lean build from age. His skin is described as 'dirty', suggesting a life lived outdoors without modern amenities, consistent with his dwelling in a hut at Coranderrk Station.
Attire: Simple, traditional, or worn clothing, likely made of natural fibers. Given the setting of Coranderrk Station in September (wattle blossom month), he would wear practical, possibly patched garments suitable for the Australian climate. Not explicitly described, but would be culturally appropriate for an Aboriginal elder in the late 19th/early 20th century.
Wants: To receive small comforts (tobacco, money) from the white visitors, to share his stories and maintain his cultural identity, and to be respected as the 'King of the Yarra tribe'.
Flaw: Vulnerable to alcohol (gets into a 'drunken sleep'), and his frailty makes him susceptible to illness or death. His desire for small comforts can be exploited.
No significant arc within the story; he serves as the initial storyteller and catalyst for Tom's adventure. The story notes his impending death, marking the end of an era.
Grumpy, shrewd, somewhat greedy (for 'baccy' and shillings), proud of his heritage and stories, frail.
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An elderly Aboriginal man, lean and frail, with deeply wrinkled, dark brown skin. His face is weathered with age, and his eyes are dark and observant. His hair is sparse, grey, and unkempt. He wears a simple, patched, earth-toned linen shirt and trousers, consistent with late 19th-century Australian Aboriginal attire. He sits cross-legged on the ground, his posture slightly hunched, with a look of weary wisdom. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Tom Jones ★ protagonist
A small boy, likely of slender build, as he is able to run for miles and swim to shore. His skin would be fair, consistent with being a 'white boy' in Australia.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a child in the early 20th century Australia. He dresses 'very quietly' in the night, implying everyday clothes. Likely a shirt and trousers, possibly made of cotton or linen.
Wants: To discover the truth and power of the Magic Gun, to experience adventure, and to prove the gun's magic to others.
Flaw: Naivety and overconfidence in the gun's power lead him into dangerous situations. His youth makes him susceptible to fear and exhaustion.
Begins as a curious boy who believes in magic. Through his adventure, he experiences both the thrill and the terror of the 'magic' and ultimately learns that some dangers are real, even if his adventure was a dream. He ends the story still convinced of the gun's power, despite his father's skepticism.
Curious, adventurous, imaginative, determined, a bit naive, easily frightened but also brave, and somewhat disobedient (sneaking out).
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A small, slender boy, approximately eight years old, with fair skin and rosy cheeks. He has short, light brown hair, slightly tousled, and wide, curious blue eyes. He wears a simple, light-colored cotton shirt with rolled-up sleeves and sturdy brown linen shorts, with bare feet. He holds a large, old-fashioned, rusty gun in his hands, looking determined and slightly mischievous. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Magic Gun ◆ supporting
An 'old-fashioned gun', described as 'rusty' after being in the water. It is large enough to be wielded by a small boy, but also substantial enough to be a 'gun'. Its appearance suggests age and wear.
Wants: N/A
Flaw: Its 'magic' only works for believers; an 'unbeliever' present negates its power. It requires specific, unusual 'ammunition' (nails, knife).
Remains a magical object throughout, though its 'magic' is ultimately revealed to be part of Tom's dream. It physically remains an old, rusty gun.
N/A (it's an object, but its 'magic' gives it a perceived personality of being powerful and unpredictable).
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An antique, muzzle-loading rifle, long and made of dark, aged wood and rusty metal. The barrel shows signs of corrosion and wear, and the stock is smooth from handling. It has a heavy, functional appearance, with no ornate decorations. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Old Man Kangaroo ○ minor
A 'big old man kangaroo', implying a large, muscular build typical of an adult male red kangaroo, with powerful hind legs and a thick tail. Its fur would be reddish-brown.
Attire: N/A (natural fur coat).
Wants: Survival, escape from perceived threat.
Flaw: Can be 'winded' by prolonged chase, making it vulnerable.
Serves as the first target for Tom's Magic Gun, demonstrating its 'power'. It is 'nailed to the tree' in Tom's dream.
Wild, wary, powerful, resilient (runs for miles), defensive when cornered.
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A large, adult male red kangaroo standing upright on its powerful hind legs, facing forward. Its fur is a rich reddish-brown, with a lighter underside. Its muscular arms are held close to its chest, and its long, thick tail rests on the ground for balance. Its face has dark, intelligent eyes and prominent ears. It has a wary, alert expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Old Kookaburra ○ minor
An 'old kookooburra' (kookaburra), a large kingfisher native to Australia. It would have a stout body, a large head, and a prominent, strong beak. Its plumage would be mostly brown and white, with distinctive dark eye-stripes.
Attire: N/A (natural plumage).
Wants: To observe and react to events, to express amusement.
Flaw: Can be easily trapped by its own 'silliness' and the gun's 'magic'.
Serves as a source of comic relief and a target for Tom's anger, demonstrating another aspect of the gun's 'power'. It is trapped in Tom's dream.
Mischievous, mocking, observant, prone to loud laughter.
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A large kookaburra bird perched on a tree branch, facing forward. It has a stout body with brown and white plumage, a large head with a prominent dark beak, and distinctive dark brown eye-stripes across its white face. Its head is tilted back, and its beak is open in a wide, cackling laugh. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Bunyip ⚔ antagonist
An 'awful shapeless mass' emerging from under a bridge. The 'only distinct part about it being a head with glaring eyes and big horns'. It is a 'horrid flame-belching creature'. Its body is indistinct, implying a fluid or amorphous form, possibly dark and slimy, consistent with a water monster.
Wants: To terrorize and consume, to guard its territory (the 'dreadful place where the undercurrents met').
Flaw: N/A (Tom's attempts to harm it fail, and it is only escaped by waking up).
Appears as the ultimate threat in Tom's dream, representing the most dangerous challenge. It remains a terrifying, unconquered entity.
Terrifying, relentless, aggressive, destructive.
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A monstrous, amorphous creature emerging from dark water, facing forward. Its body is a shapeless, dark, and possibly slimy mass, indistinct in form. From this mass, a distinct head emerges, featuring large, glowing red eyes and two prominent, sharp, dark horns. Smoke and faint flames emanate from its form. It has a terrifying, ancient expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Tom's Father ○ minor
Not explicitly described, but would be a typical adult male of European descent in early 20th century Australia. Likely of average build and height.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but would be practical, everyday clothing for an adult man in the Australian countryside, possibly a shirt and trousers, suitable for the morning.
Wants: To ensure his son's safety and well-being, to understand his son's unusual behavior.
Flaw: Skepticism prevents him from believing Tom's fantastical story.
Appears at the end to pull Tom out of his dream/adventure, bringing him back to reality. He remains skeptical of the Magic Gun's power.
Concerned, authoritative, practical, skeptical of 'magic'.
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An adult man of average height and build, with fair skin and a clean-shaven face. He has short, neatly combed brown hair and kind, concerned blue eyes. He wears a simple, light-colored cotton shirt with the sleeves rolled up and dark trousers, typical of early 20th-century Australian attire. He stands with a slight frown of surprise and concern. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Barak's Hut at Coranderrk Station
A simple, traditional Aboriginal hut, likely constructed from bark or branches, with a dirt floor. Inside, it houses an old-fashioned gun on the wall. The exterior is where King Barak sits, surrounded by white visitors.
Mood: Initially a place of cultural exchange and slight tension, later becomes a quiet, vulnerable space for theft.
King Barak tells the story of the Magic Gun; Tom later steals the gun from here.
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A dimly lit interior of a traditional Aboriginal bark hut, with a single, antique muzzle-loading gun hanging on a rough-hewn timber wall. Moonlight streams faintly through a small opening, illuminating dust motes in the air. The floor is packed earth, and simple, woven mats lie scattered. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Australian Bushland
Expansive, wild Australian bushland, characterized by gum trees (eucalyptus), logs, and dense undergrowth. The landscape is bathed in golden and purple light at sunrise.
Mood: Initially serene and beautiful, then becomes a setting for frantic pursuit and magical events.
Tom hunts a kangaroo, traps kookaburras, and uses the Magic Gun to create a canoe.
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A vast Australian bushland at dawn, with tall, slender eucalyptus trees casting long shadows across the undulating terrain. The sky is a gradient of soft purples, oranges, and golds, filtering through the sparse canopy. The ground is covered in dry grasses, scattered leaves, and fallen branches, with a few prominent, moss-covered logs. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Yarra River (Dreadful Undercurrents Section)
A section of the Yarra River known for its dangerous undercurrents, described as a 'dreadful place.' A bridge spans the river just beyond this treacherous part. The water is dark and turbulent, with a shapeless, horned creature emerging from beneath the bridge.
Mood: Terrifying, dangerous, and mysterious.
Tom encounters the Bunyip and attempts to defeat it with the Magic Gun.
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A dark, turbulent section of the Yarra River, with swirling undercurrents visible on the surface. A weathered, rough-hewn timber bridge spans the river in the distance. From beneath the bridge, a shadowy, indistinct mass with glowing, malevolent eyes and large, gnarled horns emerges from the murky water. The riverbanks are lined with dense, native Australian vegetation. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.