A Valuable Suggestion
by Ambrose Bierce · from Fantastic Fables
Adapted Version
Once, there was a Big Land. And a Small Land. They had a little problem. The Big Land was very big. It wanted to show its power. It wanted to make the Small Land scared. The Big Land had many big ships. It wanted to send these ships. They would go to the Small Land.
The Big Land got its big ships ready. There were many, many ships. They were very big ships. These ships would go very far. They would go to the Small Land's water. This was a long trip. The ships were all prepared.
The Big Leader was in the Big Land. The Clever Leader was in the Small Land. Big ships would leave soon. The Big Leader got a letter. It was from the Clever Leader. The letter came to him.
The Big Leader opened the letter. The Clever Leader wrote, "My friend, I know." You want to show your big ships. You want to show your power to us."
The letter said more. "But this is not needed. It costs too much money. You will spend a lot of money. This is not a good idea."
The Clever Leader put a paper in it. On the paper was a long list. It had all the Big Land's ships. Every big ship was on the paper. This showed the Clever Leader was very smart. He knew everything about the ships. He was a clever leader.
The Big Leader read the letter again. He thought, "This leader is smart!" He saw the Clever Leader knew much. He was very surprised by this. He thought it was a good idea. He liked the idea.
The Big Leader made a choice. "No big ships will go!" he said. He stopped the ships. He saved a lot of money. He saved much money. It was for his land.
The Big Leader used the saved money. He used it to talk. They had a problem. They found a good way. They fixed the problem for good. Everyone was happy then. This was a good end.
See? Being smart is good. It is better than being loud. It saves money too! The Clever Leader was smart. He helped everyone. He helped them be smart.
Original Story
A Valuable Suggestion
A Big Nation having a quarrel with a Little Nation, resolved to terrify its antagonist by a grand naval demonstration in the latter’s principal port. So the Big Nation assembled all its ships of war from all over the world, and was about to send them three hundred and fifty thousand miles to the place of rendezvous, when the President of the Big Nation received the following note from the President of the Little Nation:
“My great and good friend, I hear that you are going to show us your navy, in order to impress us with a sense of your power. How needless the expense! To prove to you that we already know all about it, I inclose herewith a list and description of all the ships you have.”
The great and good friend was so struck by the hard sense of the letter that he kept his navy at home, and saved one thousand million dollars. This economy enabled him to buy a satisfactory decision when the cause of the quarrel was submitted to arbitration.
Story DNA
Moral
Intelligence and wit can be more effective and economical than brute force in resolving international disputes.
Plot Summary
A powerful Big Nation plans a massive naval display to intimidate a smaller Little Nation it's quarreling with. Before the fleet sets sail, the President of the Little Nation sends a letter to the Big Nation's President, suggesting the display is unnecessary and proving their knowledge of the Big Nation's navy by enclosing a complete list of its ships. Impressed by this cleverness, the Big Nation's President cancels the demonstration, saving a vast sum of money, which is then used to successfully win the dispute through arbitration.
Themes
Emotional Arc
arrogance to pragmatism
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Ambrose Bierce was known for his cynical and satirical writing, often critiquing human folly and political maneuvering, which is evident in this fable-like story.
Plot Beats (9)
- A Big Nation has a quarrel with a Little Nation and decides to intimidate it with a grand naval demonstration.
- The Big Nation prepares to send its entire navy a vast distance to the Little Nation's port.
- Before the fleet departs, the President of the Big Nation receives a note from the President of the Little Nation.
- The Little Nation's President acknowledges the Big Nation's intention to display its power.
- The Little Nation's President suggests this display is unnecessary and costly.
- To prove their point, the Little Nation's President encloses a complete list and description of all the Big Nation's ships.
- The Big Nation's President is deeply impressed by the intelligence and practicality of the letter.
- The Big Nation cancels the naval demonstration, saving a thousand million dollars.
- The saved money is then used to secure a favorable outcome through arbitration for the initial quarrel.
Characters
President of the Big Nation ★ protagonist
A man of mature age, likely of a robust build befitting a leader of a powerful nation, though no specific details are provided. His demeanor would suggest authority and a certain gravitas.
Attire: Formal, dark-colored suit of the late 19th or early 20th century, possibly with a waistcoat and a crisp white shirt, indicative of his high office and the period of the story's author. Perhaps a subtle tie or cravat.
Wants: To assert his nation's dominance and resolve the quarrel in his nation's favor, while also demonstrating fiscal responsibility.
Flaw: Initially prone to grandstanding and potentially underestimating his opponents.
He begins by planning an expensive show of force but learns to appreciate a more subtle, economical, and intelligent approach to international relations, ultimately saving his nation a vast sum.
Initially proud and somewhat aggressive, but also pragmatic, intelligent, and capable of recognizing sound logic. He values economy and strategic thinking.
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A mature adult man of robust build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a serious, thoughtful expression, with neatly combed dark hair. He wears a dark, well-tailored suit with a white shirt and a dark tie. His posture is authoritative but contemplative. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
President of the Little Nation ◆ supporting
No specific details are provided, but one might infer a person of average build, perhaps appearing less imposing than his counterpart, yet possessing sharp intellect.
Attire: Formal, dark-colored suit of the late 19th or early 20th century, similar to his counterpart, but perhaps slightly less opulent, reflecting his nation's smaller stature. A crisp white shirt and a simple tie.
Wants: To protect his nation from an expensive and potentially destructive conflict, and to do so with minimal cost and maximum strategic advantage.
Flaw: His nation's inherent lack of military power, which he cleverly circumvents.
He remains consistent throughout the story, demonstrating his intelligence and resourcefulness, and successfully averting a costly conflict while saving his adversary money.
Intelligent, shrewd, resourceful, calm under pressure, and possessing a dry wit. He is a master of psychological warfare and economy.
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A mature adult man of average build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a calm, intelligent expression with a hint of subtle amusement, and neatly combed dark hair. He wears a dark, well-tailored suit with a white shirt and a simple tie. His posture is composed and confident. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
President's Office (Big Nation)
The private office of the President of the Big Nation, where he receives important communications and makes decisions of state.
Mood: Formal, serious, powerful, decision-making
The President of the Big Nation receives the surprising and sensible note from the President of the Little Nation, leading to a change in plans.
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A spacious, high-ceilinged presidential office, possibly in a neoclassical style, with dark polished wood paneling and a large, imposing mahogany desk at the center. Sunlight streams through tall, arched windows, illuminating dust motes in the air and casting long shadows across a patterned rug. A heavy, leather-bound chair sits behind the desk, and a large, antique globe stands in a corner. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
President's Office (Little Nation)
The private office of the President of the Little Nation, from where a shrewd and economical decision is made.
Mood: Astute, strategic, understated, intelligent
The President of the Little Nation drafts and sends the clever note that prevents a costly naval demonstration.
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A modest yet dignified presidential office, perhaps in a building with local architectural features, such as a colonial-era structure with louvered windows or a more modern, functional design. A simple, sturdy wooden desk is positioned near a window, offering a view of a bustling, smaller city street. Papers are neatly stacked, and a single, focused lamp illuminates the workspace. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Open Ocean / Naval Rendezvous Point
The vast, open sea where the Big Nation's fleet was intended to gather, hundreds of thousands of miles away from home.
Mood: Imposing, vast, potentially turbulent, strategic
The location where the grand naval demonstration was planned to take place, but ultimately avoided.
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A wide, panoramic view of the deep blue open ocean under a vast, partly cloudy sky. The water surface shows gentle swells, reflecting the light from above. The horizon stretches infinitely, with no land in sight, conveying immense distance and isolation. The air feels fresh and expansive. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
