The Rainmaker
by Ambrose Bierce · from Fantastic Fables
Adapted Version
Officer Green came to the desert. He had a big plan. He brought many wagons. They had balloons and machines. The desert had no rain for ten years. Officer Green made a camp. He wanted to make rain. This was his big job.
Months passed. Much money was spent. All was ready now. The big machines made loud booms. They made big noises in the sky. The ground shook very much. This was part of Officer Green's plan. Rain would come soon.
Then much rain came down. It was a very big storm. Water fell very fast. Officer Green stood there. The rain carried him far away. His wagons went too. They were swept out of sight. The desert got very wet.
Reporter Tom just came to the desert. He saw the big rain. He climbed a hill. He ran very fast up the hill. The water did not reach him. He was safe now. He looked at the rain.
Reporter Tom saw a man there. The man was behind a small bush. He was on his knees. He was praying. This man was Mr. John. He was a mule driver. He was the only one from the camp.
Reporter Tom spoke to Mr. John. "You cannot stop this big rain," he said. "No prayer works." Tom doubted him. The rain was very strong. It was a big flood. He was very surprised.
Mr. John looked up at Reporter Tom. He spoke with a calm voice. "You do not understand," he said. "I am not stopping this big rain. God helped me. I am bringing this rain to the desert."
Reporter Tom thought it was very funny. A mule driver made all this rain? He did not believe it. The rain fell very hard now. He looked at Mr. John. He shook his head. This was a strange idea.
Mr. John spoke again. "I am not just a mule driver. My name is Pastor John. I am a pastor. I work for a company. This company made the rain machines. They made balloons too." Tom was surprised. So, the rain came! And sometimes, big surprises come from small places!
Original Story
The Rainmaker
An Officer of the Government, with a great outfit of mule-waggons loaded with balloons, kites, dynamite bombs, and electrical apparatus, halted in the midst of a desert, where there had been no rain for ten years, and set up a camp. After several months of preparation and an expenditure of a million dollars all was in readiness, and a series of tremendous explosions occurred on the earth and in the sky. This was followed by a great down-pour of rain, which washed the unfortunate Officer of the Government and the outfit off the face of creation and affected the agricultural heart with joy too deep for utterance. A Newspaper Reporter who had just arrived escaped by climbing a hill near by, and there he found the Sole Survivor of the expedition—a mule-driver—down on his knees behind a mesquite bush, praying with extreme fervour.
“Oh, you can’t stop it that way,” said the Reporter.
“My fellow-traveller to the bar of God,” replied the Sole Survivor, looking up over his shoulder, “your understanding is in darkness. I am not stopping this great blessing; under Providence, I am bringing it.”
“That is a pretty good joke,” said the Reporter, laughing as well as he could in the strangling rain—“a mule driver’s prayer answered!”
“Child of levity and scoffing,” replied the other; “you err again, misled by these humble habiliments. I am the Rev. Ezekiel Thrifft, a minister of the gospel, now in the service of the great manufacturing firm of Skinn & Sheer. They make balloons, kites, dynamite bombs, and electrical apparatus.”
Story DNA
Moral
Appearances can be deceiving, and sometimes the simplest explanation is not the true one.
Plot Summary
An Officer of the Government spends months and a fortune setting up elaborate equipment to make rain in a desert. The experiment succeeds with a massive downpour, but it washes away the Officer and his entire outfit. A Newspaper Reporter finds the sole survivor, a mule-driver, praying fervently and claiming to be responsible for the rain. The Reporter mocks him, but the 'mule-driver' reveals himself to be Reverend Ezekiel Thrifft, a minister working for the company that manufactured the rainmaking equipment, implying a deeper, ironic truth behind the event.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to surprise
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Ambrose Bierce was known for his cynical and often dark humor, frequently satirizing human nature and institutions. This story reflects a common skepticism towards grand, expensive, and often ineffective government projects or 'scientific' endeavors of the era, contrasted with traditional faith.
Plot Beats (9)
- An Officer of the Government arrives in a desert with extensive, expensive rainmaking equipment.
- After months and a million dollars, the equipment is ready and activated, causing huge explosions.
- A massive downpour ensues, washing away the Officer and his entire outfit.
- A Newspaper Reporter, who just arrived, escapes by climbing a hill.
- The Reporter finds the sole survivor, a mule-driver, praying intensely behind a bush.
- The Reporter sarcastically comments that prayer won't stop the rain.
- The 'mule-driver' corrects the Reporter, claiming he is bringing the rain through Providence.
- The Reporter laughs, finding the idea of a mule-driver's prayer being answered to be a joke.
- The 'mule-driver' reveals he is Reverend Ezekiel Thrifft, a minister working for Skinn & Sheer, the company that manufactured the rainmaking equipment.
Characters
The Officer of the Government ★ protagonist
A man of indeterminate height and build, likely appearing competent and authoritative, though ultimately overwhelmed by the forces he unleashes. His appearance would suggest a professional, perhaps slightly weathered by his desert expedition.
Attire: A formal, practical uniform suitable for a government official overseeing a large-scale engineering project in a desert, possibly made of sturdy canvas or wool in muted earth tones, with brass buttons and insignia. Perhaps a wide-brimmed hat to protect from the sun.
Wants: To bring rain to the desert using scientific and technological means, fulfilling a government mandate and perhaps seeking personal glory.
Flaw: Hubris and underestimation of the power of nature; a reliance solely on technology without considering its full consequences.
Begins as a confident leader of a grand project, ends tragically, washed away by the very success he engineered.
Ambitious, determined, perhaps overconfident, technologically-minded, ultimately tragic.
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A middle-aged man of average height and build, with a determined expression, short dark hair, and a neatly trimmed mustache. He wears a sturdy, tan canvas uniform jacket with brass buttons and shoulder epaulets, matching trousers, and tall leather boots. A wide-brimmed hat is on his head. He stands amidst a chaotic scene of overturned mule-waggons and scattered scientific apparatus, looking up at a sky beginning to unleash a torrential downpour, a look of dawning horror on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Newspaper Reporter ◆ supporting
A lean, agile man, suggesting someone who travels frequently and is quick on his feet, as evidenced by his escape. His appearance would be practical for travel and reporting in a rugged environment.
Attire: Practical, durable clothing suitable for travel and reporting in a late 19th-century American desert, likely a tweed jacket, sturdy trousers, and a hat, perhaps a fedora or a derby, to protect from the elements.
Wants: To report on the extraordinary rainmaking expedition, seeking a good story.
Flaw: A tendency towards cynicism and underestimation of the unexpected.
Arrives just in time to witness the catastrophic success of the rainmaking, confirming his initial skepticism but also encountering a surprising revelation.
Skeptical, curious, observant, somewhat jaded, quick-witted.
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A slender young adult male, with an alert expression, dark eyes, and short, practical brown hair. He wears a sturdy, dark tweed jacket over a light shirt, practical trousers, and worn leather boots. A slightly damp fedora is on his head. He holds a small notepad and pencil in his hands, looking down from a rocky hill at a flooded desert scene, a look of astonished disbelief on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Sole Survivor (Rev. Ezekiel Thrifft) ◆ supporting
Despite his humble 'mule-driver' habiliments, his demeanor suggests a man of spiritual authority and inner strength. He might have a lean, weathered look from his time in the desert, but with a calm, knowing presence.
Attire: Simple, worn, and practical clothing of a mule-driver: a coarse linen shirt, sturdy canvas trousers, and a leather vest, all in muted, dusty colors. These 'humble habiliments' contrast with his true identity.
Wants: To bring rain through prayer, believing in divine intervention, and fulfilling his role as a minister, even while disguised as a mule-driver.
Flaw: His humility might lead others to underestimate him.
Reveals his true identity and the true source of the rain (in his belief), serving as a counterpoint to the technological hubris of the Officer.
Devout, wise, humble, serene, insightful, possesses a dry wit.
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An adult male of average height and a lean, weathered build, with a serene and knowing expression. He has a short, practical grey beard and kind, deep-set blue eyes. He wears a simple, coarse, light brown linen shirt, a worn dark leather vest, and dusty canvas trousers. He is kneeling behind a mesquite bush, looking over his shoulder with a calm, profound gaze as torrential rain falls around him. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Desert Camp
A temporary camp set up in the midst of a vast, arid desert, characterized by a decade-long drought. It is filled with mule-waggons, balloons, kites, dynamite bombs, and electrical apparatus, indicating a large-scale, industrial operation.
Mood: Initially desolate and industrious, then chaotic and destructive
The Officer of the Government sets up his rainmaking operation, culminating in massive explosions and the subsequent deluge.
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A vast, sun-baked desert landscape stretches under a pale, cloudless sky, dotted with the temporary structures of a large, industrial camp. Mule-waggons are parked haphazardly, surrounded by crates and complex scientific equipment like large balloons and electrical generators. The ground is cracked and dry, with sparse, tough desert scrub clinging to life. In the distance, low, eroded sandstone mesas define the horizon. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Nearby Hill with Mesquite Bush
A small, elevated hill overlooking the desert camp, providing a vantage point. It features a mesquite bush, offering minimal shelter from the elements.
Mood: Desperate, revealing, chaotic
The Newspaper Reporter escapes the flood here and discovers the Sole Survivor (Rev. Ezekiel Thrifft) praying behind a mesquite bush.
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A rugged, rocky desert hill, slick with sheets of torrential rain, overlooks a distant, indistinct scene of a washed-away camp. A gnarled mesquite bush, its branches heavy with water, provides a meager shelter on the muddy, eroded slope. The sky is a dark, churning grey, and the air is thick with the downpour, obscuring the horizon in a watery haze. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
