ANNETTE

by Burton Mrs. Harrison · from The Old-Fashioned Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation whimsical Ages 5-10 1198 words 6 min read
Cover: ANNETTE

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 348 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Annette and her Mother were very hungry. They had no food. Their small house was cold. A magic plant grew in their house. It grew from the floor. It went up, up to the sky. It was very tall.

Annette was curious. She wanted to see. She climbed the vine. She saw a new land. The sun was bright. There was a house. It was made of sweets. It looked very tasty. A Fairy lived in this house.

Three goats were inside. Big Goat was loud. He said, "Go now!" Mean Goat was angry. He said, "Leave!" Kind Goat was gentle. He said, "Stay. Be quiet. Do not touch." Annette listened closely.

Annette worked for the Fairy. The Fairy was strict. She said, "Do not touch mill!" Annette was quiet. She worked for a long time. Days passed quickly. She worked for six months.

Annette was very curious. She thought about the mill. She touched the mill. Gold dust came out! It covered Annette all over. She looked like gold. She sparkled brightly.

Kind Goat saw the gold. He smiled at Annette. He said, "I was curious too. I am free." My time is done. I will help you. We must go now.

Annette and Kind Goat ran. They took the mill. The Fairy was angry. She saw them leave. She flew after them. She was on a broom. Gold dust fell behind them. It glittered on the ground.

They went down the vine very fast. The Fairy cannot catch them. They were safe on the ground. The vine held them. It was a soft landing.

Kind Goat changed! He stood up tall. He was a handsome prince. He said, "I am Prince Leo. Fairy made me goat." She put a spell on me.

Prince Leo cut the vine. The Fairy cannot come. He stopped the mill. It made no more gold. The magic was gone.

Annette and Prince Leo marry. They lived in a castle. They use the mill for gold. Annette's Mother is happy. She lives with them. Everyone is happy. They live happily ever after.

Original Story 1198 words · 6 min read

ANNETTE;

OR,

THE MAGIC COFFEE-MILL.

APOOR woman and her daughter, who were on the verge of starvation, saw a little green bud of a plant growing through their cottage floor. They watered it, and in a day or two it sent forth long shoots, and became a vine, fine and delicate to look at, but tough as an iron wire. The vine put forth leaves, soon covering the inner walls of the cottage. The tendrils waved longingly toward the sun, and so the mother and daughter set their lattice window open, when, lo! the vine escaped as if it had wings and grew quickly heavenward. Lovely flowers bloomed on it, in shape like morning-glories, and rare birds came to drink the honey of their chalices. The maiden leaned out of her window and looked up. Higher, higher climbed the vine, till it was lost in the blue sky above them. The girl was seized with a yearning desire to climb up and see what could be seen. Her mother gave her leave, and she set out. Up, up, she went, and the mother watched below till the clustering green and many-colored bells hid her child from sight. At last the girl reached a wonderful new country, and stepped off the vine upon a shining silver path, which she followed through a green meadow till she came to a house made of honey-comb that glittered, oh! so beautifully. The columns of the porch were sticks of lemon-candy, and there were little benches to rest yourself upon, made of maple-sugar and cushioned with gingerbread. Annette, for so the girl was called, ventured to open the door of the house and peep in. There she found more beautiful things than I can tell you of—toys and books and pictures—and all the furniture was made of cake with raisins in it, so that, if one sat down to read, one need only turn around and nibble a knob off the chair, or pick raisins out of the arm of the sofa. Annette played a little and read a story-book, then she fell asleep on a couch made of apple-dumplings. Suddenly in came three goats, who were the servants of the fairy to whom this house belonged. "Let us butt her to death," said the oldest goat. "Let us trample on her, and bite her," said the second goat. "Let her alone," said the third goat, who was a kind little fellow with golden horns. "If she holds her tongue, and if she don't find out the secret of the golden coffee-mill, our mistress will let her stay here and work for her."

Annette heard this while pretending to be asleep, and when the fairy came home, she jumped up and made a nice little courtesy, begging to be allowed to do the housework. "Well," said the fairy, after looking at her sharply, "I will try you; only don't undertake to grind my coffee for me, and don't gossip with the goats."

Annette lived there for six months, and learned to make all kinds of goodies; for the fairy was the queen's confectioner in that country. You might eat all you pleased, provided you didn't talk; and not a word spoke Annette, and not a word spoke the goats. Every day the fairy went into a pantry and there ground her coffee; and every day she carried two or three bags full of something heavy, and put them in her chariot, and drove off with them. The coffee-mill looked like any other one, and Annette wondered vainly what its secret was. At last curiosity overcame her, and she stole into the pantry and began to grind the mill. Down fell a stream of pure gold-dust, and it powdered Annette all over till she looked like a golden image. "How shall I get rid of this?" she said, trying to shake it off, but the gold dust stuck fast. She cried and sobbed, for she knew that now the fairy would certainly find her out. In came the friendly goat. "Cheer up," said he. "That was the way my horns came to be gilded, because I yielded to my curiosity about the mill, when I first came here to live. The fairy wanted to kill me, but she let me off when I vowed to serve her faithfully for seven years. The time is just up, and so I propose that we escape together. Take the magic mill under your arm and get upon my back, and we will go down to your world."

Annette joyfully obeyed the friendly goat, and carrying the coffee-mill they set off from the fairy's house. Unfortunately she did not know how to stop the mill from grinding, and it left a path of gold-dust behind them as they fled, which showed the way to the fairy. The fairy followed them, riding on a silver broom-stick; but the goat was swift as the wind, and Annette clung to his golden horns, and held the magic mill tight under her arm. By good luck they reached the opening, near which the vine was growing, and, just as the furious fairy got near enough to stretch out her long arm after them, down went Annette, goat, and coffee-mill, through a rift in the clouds, to a land where their enemy could not follow them. The faithful vine caught them as they fell, and held them up stoutly. When they had climbed down, and touched the earth in safety, Annette was astonished to see her goat turn into a handsome young prince, with curling golden locks and kind blue eyes.

"You have freed me from my enchantment, beautiful maiden," he said, kneeling upon the grass at her feet. "Long years ago I and my wicked brothers were captured by the fairy and became her slaves under the form of goats, as you saw. For fear that they may find out some way to follow us, we must cut down this vine, and then we shall be free forever from all dread of disturbance."

Annette's mother came running out, kissed her child, and listened with wonder to the tale of her adventures. All this while the mill had gone on grinding, and before they knew it the cottage floor was knee-deep in gold-dust. "We shall be smothered at this rate," cried the prince laughing, and he hastened to make a magic sign he had learned from the fairy. The mill ceased to flow, and then the prince took an axe and cut the beautiful vine at its root. Annette wept to see the lovely leaves and blossoms shrivel up, but in a short time they vanished entirely from sight. The prince married Annette, and every day the mill ground gold enough to pay all the expenses of their palace and servants and horses, and also the expenses of Annette's mother, who had a separate palace for herself over the way.

The country people, for years after the time when Annette and the prince came down the magic vine, showering gold-dust along their way, continued to talk about the wonderful rain of stars they had seen in the sky that moon-lit night.



Story DNA fairy tale · whimsical

Moral

Curiosity can lead to unexpected consequences, but also to great rewards and freedom when combined with courage and kindness.

Plot Summary

Annette, a poor girl, climbs a magical vine to a sky-world where she becomes a fairy's servant in a house made of sweets. Despite warnings, her curiosity leads her to discover a magic coffee-mill that grinds gold. With the help of a kind, enchanted goat, she escapes the furious fairy, bringing the mill back to her world. The goat transforms into a prince, and they marry, using the mill's gold to live prosperously and free Annette's mother from poverty.

Themes

curiosityperseverancekindnessfreedom

Emotional Arc

starvation to prosperity | curiosity to liberation | enchantment to freedom

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: descriptive imagery, sense of wonder

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: magic vine, house made of sweets, talking goats, magic coffee-mill that grinds gold, fairy, silver broomstick, enchantment/transformation of prince
the magic vine (connection between worlds, growth, escape)the coffee-mill (wealth, temptation, freedom)gold dust (prosperity, consequence of curiosity)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects common fairy tale tropes of poverty, magical intervention, and transformation, popular in 19th-century children's literature.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. Annette and her mother are starving when a magical vine grows from their cottage floor, reaching into the sky.
  2. Annette climbs the vine and discovers a wondrous land with a house made of sweets, belonging to a fairy.
  3. Three goats, servants of the fairy, discuss killing Annette, but the kind third goat suggests she be allowed to stay if she keeps silent and doesn't discover the coffee-mill's secret.
  4. Annette becomes the fairy's servant, forbidden to touch the coffee-mill or speak, and lives there for six months.
  5. Overcome by curiosity, Annette grinds the coffee-mill, which produces a stream of gold dust, covering her.
  6. The kind goat reveals he was also cursed for his curiosity and offers to help Annette escape, as his seven years of service are up.
  7. Annette and the goat flee with the magic mill, leaving a trail of gold dust, pursued by the fairy on a silver broomstick.
  8. They narrowly escape the fairy by descending the vine back to Annette's world, which catches them safely.
  9. Upon reaching the ground, the goat transforms into a handsome young prince, revealing he and his brothers were enchanted by the fairy.
  10. The prince cuts down the vine to prevent the fairy from following them, and then stops the continuously grinding coffee-mill.
  11. Annette and the prince marry, using the magic mill to provide endless gold for their palace and Annette's mother.

Characters 6 characters

Annette ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Slender build, average height for a young woman. Initially appears as a poor girl, but later is covered in gold dust, making her appear like a golden statue.

Attire: Initially wears simple, worn peasant clothing made of coarse fabric. Later, she is covered in gold dust, which adheres to her clothes, making them appear golden.

Wants: To escape starvation, to satisfy her curiosity about the vine and the coffee-mill, and later to escape the fairy and find safety.

Flaw: Curiosity, which leads her to discover the coffee-mill's secret and put herself in danger.

Transforms from a starving peasant girl into a princess, freeing a prince from enchantment and gaining immense wealth. She learns the consequences of curiosity but ultimately benefits from it.

Covered head-to-toe in shimmering gold dust, appearing like a living golden statue.

Curious, obedient, kind, resourceful, determined, and initially somewhat naive.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young woman of slender build, average height, facing forward. She has soft features, kind blue eyes, and her hair is an unspecified color, but her entire body, hair, and simple peasant dress are covered in shimmering gold dust, making her appear like a golden statue. She holds a small, ornate wooden coffee-mill under one arm. She has a determined yet slightly worried expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Poor Woman ◆ supporting

human adult female

Unspecified, but likely thin and worn from poverty. Average height.

Attire: Simple, mended peasant clothing made of coarse, undyed fabric, reflecting her poverty.

Wants: To care for her daughter and survive starvation.

Flaw: Her poverty and vulnerability.

Remains largely static but benefits greatly from her daughter's adventures, moving from starvation to living in a separate palace.

A woman with a look of profound relief and joy, embracing her daughter.

Caring, supportive, hopeful (watering the plant), and later astonished and joyful.

Image Prompt & Upload
An adult woman of thin build, average height, facing forward. She has a kind, worn face, with an expression of profound relief and joy. Her hair is an unspecified color, pulled back simply. She wears a mended, simple, undyed linen peasant dress and a plain apron. Her hands are reaching out as if to embrace someone. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Friendly Goat / The Prince ◆ supporting

magical creature (goat) / human ageless (as goat) / young adult (as prince) male

As a goat: A kind little goat with golden horns. As a prince: A handsome young man with curling golden locks and kind blue eyes. Athletic build, noble bearing.

Attire: As a goat: Natural goat's fur, distinguished by golden horns. As a prince: Unspecified, but implied to be regal and fine, befitting a prince, perhaps a tunic and breeches of rich fabric.

Wants: To escape his enchantment and free himself from the fairy's servitude, and to help Annette.

Flaw: Initially, his curiosity led to his enchantment.

Transforms from an enchanted goat back into a handsome prince, freed by Annette, and marries her.

A kind goat with prominent, shimmering golden horns.

Kind, helpful, courageous, wise (having learned from his own curiosity), loyal, and decisive.

Image Prompt & Upload
A handsome young man with an athletic build, facing forward. He has curling golden hair, kind blue eyes, and a noble expression. He wears a simple yet regal tunic of deep blue linen with silver embroidery at the collar, and dark breeches. He holds a sturdy wooden axe in his right hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Fairy ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless female

Unspecified, but described as having a 'long arm' when reaching for Annette, suggesting a lean or elongated form. Implied to be powerful and perhaps intimidating.

Attire: Unspecified, but as the 'queen's confectioner' and a magical being, she likely wears elaborate, perhaps brightly colored or glittering garments, possibly made of silk or other fine, magical fabrics. Perhaps a pointed hat or elaborate headpiece.

Wants: To maintain her secrets, her control over her enchanted servants, and her magical possessions (the coffee-mill).

Flaw: Her inability to follow Annette and the goat into their world, and her reliance on the magic mill for her gold.

Remains static, serving as the primary obstacle for Annette and the prince.

Riding a silver broomstick, with a long, reaching arm.

Sharp, suspicious, stern, possessive, and vengeful. She is also a skilled confectioner.

Image Prompt & Upload
An ageless woman with sharp features and an intimidating expression, facing forward. She has a lean build and long, slender arms. Her hair is dark and pulled back severely. She wears an elaborate, flowing gown of deep emerald green silk, adorned with glittering silver embroidery, and a tall, pointed hat of the same color. She holds a slender silver broomstick. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Oldest Goat ○ minor

magical creature (goat) ageless male

A goat, likely larger or more imposing than the friendly goat, reflecting his aggressive personality.

Attire: Natural goat's fur.

Wants: To harm Annette, possibly out of resentment for intruders or a desire to please the fairy.

Flaw: His aggressive nature, which makes him less sympathetic.

Remains static, serving as a minor threat.

A goat with a menacing stance, ready to butt.

Aggressive, cruel, and suspicious.

Image Prompt & Upload
A large, sturdy goat, facing forward, with dark fur and prominent horns. It has a stern, aggressive expression, with its head slightly lowered as if preparing to butt. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Second Goat ○ minor

magical creature (goat) ageless male

A goat, likely similar in size to the oldest goat, but distinct from the friendly goat.

Attire: Natural goat's fur.

Wants: To harm Annette, similar to the oldest goat.

Flaw: His violent nature.

Remains static, serving as a minor threat.

A goat with a snarling expression, ready to bite.

Cruel, violent, and aggressive.

Image Prompt & Upload
A medium-sized goat, facing forward, with light brown fur and curved horns. It has a malicious, snarling expression, with its mouth slightly open to show teeth. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
No image yet

Annette's Cottage

indoor Implied temperate, as a vine grows indoors and outdoors

A poor, humble cottage with a floor through which a magical vine sprouts. The inner walls become covered with delicate green vine shoots and leaves, and a lattice window is opened to allow the vine to grow heavenward.

Mood: Initially desolate and starving, then hopeful and wondrous as the vine grows, finally prosperous and secure.

Annette and her mother discover the magic vine; Annette returns with the prince and the magic mill, filling the cottage with gold-dust.

wooden cottage floor lattice window magical green vine growing through the floor and covering walls gold-dust knee-deep on the floor
Image Prompt & Upload
A rustic, humble cottage interior with rough-hewn timber walls and a simple wooden floor. A vibrant, delicate green vine with morning-glory-like flowers grows vigorously through a crack in the floorboards, its tendrils reaching towards an open lattice window. Soft, filtered sunlight streams through the window, illuminating dust motes in the air and highlighting the vine's leaves. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
No image yet

The Sky Country Meadow

outdoor day Implied pleasant and sunny

A green meadow in a wonderful new country, reached by climbing a magical vine. A shining silver path leads through it.

Mood: Magical, wondrous, serene, but with an underlying sense of the unknown.

Annette first arrives in the fairy's realm; Annette and the prince escape back to her world.

lush green meadow shining silver path magical vine opening
Image Prompt & Upload
A vibrant, expansive green meadow under a clear, bright blue sky. A shimmering, narrow silver path winds gently through the tall, verdant grass. In the distance, the top of a colossal, leafy vine with large, colorful, morning-glory-like blossoms is visible, reaching up into the sky. Soft, even daylight bathes the scene. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
No image yet

The Fairy's Honeycomb House

indoor Implied perpetually pleasant, as it's a magical realm

A house made entirely of glittering honeycomb. Its porch has columns of lemon-candy and benches of maple-sugar cushioned with gingerbread. Inside, all the furniture is made of cake with raisins, and there are toys, books, and pictures.

Mood: Sweet, enchanting, whimsical, but also subtly menacing due to the fairy and her goats.

Annette lives and works here for six months; she discovers the secret of the magic coffee-mill.

glittering honeycomb walls lemon-candy porch columns maple-sugar benches with gingerbread cushions cake furniture with raisins pantry with a magic coffee-mill
Image Prompt & Upload
An enchanting, whimsical house constructed entirely from golden, glistening honeycomb, with hexagonal cells clearly visible. The porch features slender, translucent columns made of bright yellow lemon-candy, supporting a roof of more honeycomb. Small, inviting benches crafted from smooth, light brown maple-sugar are cushioned with soft, textured gingerbread. The interior is dimly lit, revealing furniture made of rich, dark fruitcake studded with raisins. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.