Candy City
by David Cory · from The Iceberg Express
Adapted Version
Mary Louise was very tired. Her feet hurt. She wanted to go home. She sighed. She could not walk more. A pony came. His name was Dapple Gray. He was happy. "Jump on my back!" Dapple Gray said. Mary Louise smiled. She got on the pony.
Mary Louise and Dapple Gray rode. They came to a special place. Little men worked there. They made sweet maple candy. They boiled sap from trees. The place smelled very good.
A Little Man wore a red hat. He spoke. "Do you like candy?" he asked. Mary Louise smiled. "Yes!" she said. The Little Man filled her pockets. They were full. "Take a message," he said. "Go to the Goody Sweet Tooth-Shop." "We bring candy tomorrow."
Mary Louise rode to a town. She saw a bridge. An Old Lady was there. She sang a song. "Give me a penny," the Old Lady sang. Mary Louise gave her a penny. Then she rode to the shop. She gave the message.
Mary Louise saw a big bear. The bear had a hurt foot. A small, sharp stick was in his foot. Mary Louise helped the bear. She took out the stick. The bear was happy.
Next, Mary Louise found Candy Town. Houses were made of candy. A Chocolate Man met her. He asked her to stay. He wanted her to write poems. Mary Louise said 'No'. She told the Chocolate Man she was lost. She wanted to go home now.
Mary Louise came to a big river. There was no bridge. A little duck came. His name was Commodore Drake. He had a small boat. He helped her.
They sailed on the big blue sea. They found an island. A hotel was there. It was made of coral. It was called Hotel Wave Crest. A kind Dolphin worked at the hotel. He saw Mary Louise's coat. It was sea green. The Dolphin said, "Your coat is magic!" It helps her swim.
The Dolphin offered Mary Louise food. It was a big fish dinner. But Mary Louise was not hungry. She said 'Thank you'.
Mary Louise felt very sleepy. She wanted to rest. She asked Commodore Drake for help. "Take me to Land of Nod," she said.
They arrived at the Land of Nod. It was a quiet place. Mary Louise and the duck slept. A star sang a soft song. They slept well.
Original Story
Candy City
Just then a little bird began to sing:
"In the valley, green and neat,
I see the print of little feet,
And way, way yonder in the glen
I see a host of little men."
"Dear me!" sighed Mary Louise. "I am too tired to walk any further."
"Jump on my back!" cried a happy voice, and up trotted a little pony named Dapple Gray.
"Oh, how nice," laughed Mary Louise, and climbing up on the saddle, rode off on this pretty little pony, and pretty soon, not so very far, they came to the place where the little men were at work. And what do you suppose they were doing. Why, you'd never guess if I gave you until the 4th of July.
They were making maple sugar out of the sap from the maple trees. First they boiled the sap in great big pots and then put it away to cool in queer little dishes of various shapes, and when the sugar hardened it was in the forms of funny little fish, queer little houses, strange animals, and, goodness knows, what not.
"Oh, we are the Sugar Candy Men,
And we work all day in the snow
To make the maple sugar cakes
To sell in the town below,"
sang one little man who wore a red peaked hat and long turned-up pointed shoes.
But when little Mary Louise rode up, they all stopped their work and looked at her, and the little man with the long turned up pointed shoes pulled off his red peaked cap and asked:
"What brings you here, Mary Louise? Are you fond of maple sugar candy?"
"I know lots of little boys and girls who are," answered Mary Louise with a smile.
"Well, hold open your pockets," said the little man, and he stood up on a stump alongside Dapple Gray and filled her pockets to overflowing. Wasn't that nice of him?
"You're very generous," said Mary Louise. "What can I do for you?"
"Go to yonder town and tell the dear old lady who keeps the 'Goody Sweet Tooth-Shop' that we will bring her candy tomorrow morning just as—
"The little red rooster
From his home on the hill
Sounds his merry cock-a-doo
Like a whistle shrill."
"All right," answered Mary Louise, and off she went to the little town down in the valley.
Well, by and by, after a while, and many a mile, and a song and a smile, for Mary Louise felt very happy with all those nice candies in her pocket, she came to a bridge over a river, on the other side of which nestled a little town among the trees.
Now there was a toll keeper, a funny little old lady with a crutch under her arm, at the entrance to the bridge.
"Give me a penny, Mary Louise,
For that is the toll you must pay,
If you would cross over the river to Dover,
Dover, just over the way."
sang the little old lady toll keeper.
"Here is the penny," laughed Mary Louise, leaning down from Dapple Gray and dropping it into the old lady's apron, which she help up in both hands.
"Pass on, little girl," she said, opening the gate, and in a few minutes Dapple Gray was clattering over the bridge. And pretty soon he drew up before the Goody Sweet Tooth Shop.
"I bring you good news from the little men of the glen," cried Mary Louise to the little old woman who just then looked out of the door.
"What is the news, dearie?" she asked, shading her eyes with her withered hand.
"Tomorrow morning, just at dawn,
When the little red rooster blows on his horn,
The maple sugar candy hearts,
Cute little cupids and candy darts,
In a great big box will be laid at your door
to give to the children who come to your store."
said little Mary Louise. And how she ever could have spoken in poetry is more than I can tell, but perhaps the fairy maple sugar candy, which she had eaten on her way to town, had lent magic to her tongue.
Then the little old woman made a curtsy, and Mary Louise continued on her way, and by and by, after a while, she came to a great big bear sitting on a stone by the roadside. On the ground by his side was a big bundle tied with a thick leather strap.
Well, as soon as the bear saw Mary Louise, he took off his cap and said,
"I wish I had a pony,
Either brown or gray,
So I could ride whate'er betide
For many miles away."
"Why, what's the matter?" asked little Mary Louise.
"I have a splinter in my foot," answered the bear.
So Mary Louise dismounted and looked at the bear's foot, and when she found the splinter, she said:
"Now don't you cry, and don't you pout,
And I will pull the splinter out."
And would you believe it, in less than five hundred short seconds, she held the splinter under the bear's nose so he could see it, for the bear was very near sighted and couldn't even see the end of his toes.
"Dear me," sighed little Mary Louise, "I wish I were safe at home with Mother," she set out once more, and by and by she came to Candy Town.
Now I guess many a little boy and girl wonders where all the Christmas candies come from, but they wouldn't if they had once seen Peppermint City, all painted white with red stripes, just like a stick of peppermint candy.
Each house was built of white candy with columns of peppermint sticks supporting the roof. On either side the door stood lovely peppermint statues and striped pillars held up the little porches and big piazzas.
The opera house was guarded by a candy lion, and a fountain in the middle of the town spouted maple syrup. Rock candy crystal chandeliers hung from the ceilings in the rich man's house and little peppermint candlesticks made light for the workman's hut. Even the lamp posts on the corners were peppermint sticks and so were the barber poles.
"Goodness me," said Mary Louise to herself, "I wonder what would happen if it rained." But you see it never rained in Candy Country, which was mighty lucky.
"What do you wish?" asked a Chocolate Man, as she knocked on the Candy Town Gate.
The next moment the gate swung open and out marched a regiment of Lemon Soldiers dressed in Lemon Khaki Uniforms.
"Oh, I'm just lost," replied Mary Louise with a sigh.
"I'm a little traveler who goes
For miles and miles upon her toes.
But sometimes when I'm tired out
I think I hear a kind of voice shout,
'Come, ride with me upon my Goose,'
And other times it is a Moose,
And then again a steed with wings;
Or maybe some kind stranger brings
A ship that sails the ocean wide,
And so instead of walk, I ride."
"Well, well, your a little poetry maker," said the Chocolate Man. "Now you are the very person to write pretty little verses on our round peppermint candies." And then he held out his chocolate hand and drew tired Mary Louise inside the gate, after which he locked it with a silver key.
"Come with me to our Candy Factory," and he ran down the street, which was paved with little red brick candies, until he came to a big Rock Candy Building.
"Look here," gasped Mary Louise, all out of breath with running, for that Chocolate Man was the best athlete in all Peppermint City, "I said I was lost. I'm not a poetry maker. I wouldn't make poetry for anything. I want to see things, not dream about them!"
"Dear me," said the Chocolate Man, and he let go the lollypop door handle, "I'm sorry. I thought you'd like to stay here."
"Don't feel badly about it," said Mary Louise as he shook hands and said good-by. "I must find my way home. I've no time to lose."
"Heigh ho, this is a big river," she exclaimed a little later as she stood on the bank of a swiftly flowing stream.
"There isn't any bridge, how can you get across,
There isn't any boat and you haven't any horse
That could swim across this river with you upon its back,
So I guess you'll have to turn about and go back upon your track,"
sang a cross voice.
"She won't have to do anything of the sort," answered a kind voice and a little white duck in a boat rowed up to the bank.
"Come, jump aboard," quacked Commodore Drake, for that was the name of this duck sailor.
Mary Louise jumped in and away they went down the river to the deep blue sea. And after a while, maybe a mile, and perhaps a little more, they came to the restless ocean.
"Now," said the duck, with a wheezy, breezy quack, "I'll take you to the Hotel Wave Crest."
Presently they came to an island where a lovely coral building shone pinky bright in the rays of the sun. Right in front of it were two bell buoys who rang little bells to tell the man who owned the hotel that somebody wanted a room with a fresh salt water bath.
As soon as Commodore Drake had fastened the little boat to the wharf, he and Mary Louise walked up the steps and into Wave Crest Hotel.
When the proprietor, a nice old Dolphin, saw Mary Louise's lovely sea green coat, he at once asked where she had bought it.
"The King of the Crabs gave it to me."
"You don't tell me," exclaimed the old Dolphin. "Do you know that coat is a magic one?"
"What can it do?" asked Mary Louise, even more surprised than you are.
"Why, anybody who wears it can swim like a fish," answered the good-natured Dolphin. "It's better than a pair of water wings," and he turned over three times and began to sing,
"Oh, many a mile I've swum in the sea
Like a hoop that rolls on the ground,
Over and over and over again,
Round and around and around,
But I always come right side up at last,
Out in the deep blue sea,
You bet I can do the loop de loo
High diddle diddledy dee."
As he finished speaking, the good-natured Dolphin turned a somersault, and after that I guess he thought he'd done enough to amuse Mary Louise, and the little white sailor duck, so he went inside the hotel and stood at the desk behind the big register book.
Just then a great whale came swimming by, blowing a stream of water high in the air. Maybe a piece of seaweed had tickled his nose, for when a whale spouts he's really sneezing, I'm told.
And after that a pretty Cat Fish began to purr, and I guess she would have asked Mary Louise a lot of questions if all of a sudden a Dog Fish hadn't barked, which so frightened the pussy cat fish that she went into her room and locked the door, dropping the kin in her vanity bag which she hid under her pillow.
"If you'll stay awhile," said the old Dolphin, "I'll give you the finest fish dinner you ever ate,
"A whale fish steak,
And some sea gull eggs,
And a pint of sea cow's milk,
Green sea weed sauce
And water cress
And oysters served on silk."
But, would you believe it, little Mary Louise didn't feel hungry. Instead she asked the duck sailor to take her back to the boat and to sail away, over the ocean's misty spray, until they should come to the Land of Nod where sleep is sent by the Little Dream God.
As soon as she and the little white duck reached this wonderful little land, they became sleepy and their eyes winked and blinked and pretty soon they both lay down on the soft grass and went sound to sleep. And then the twinkle, twinkle star shone down with its pretty golden eye and sang a sleepy lullaby,
"Over the ocean cool and sweet
Up to the sea grass's waving feet
Blows the wind from the rainbow west
Whispering low, 'It is time for rest.'"
Story DNA
Plot Summary
Tired Mary Louise is given a ride by a magical pony, Dapple Gray, and embarks on an episodic journey. She encounters Sugar Candy Men, delivers a message to a sweet shop, helps a bear, and visits a city made entirely of candy, declining an offer to stay. A duck sailor, Commodore Drake, helps her cross a river and sail to a hotel where she learns her coat is magic. Finally, feeling sleepy, she is taken to the Land of Nod where she falls asleep.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to wonder to contentment
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects early 20th-century children's literature style, often featuring episodic adventures and personified animals.
Plot Beats (13)
- Mary Louise is tired and a pony named Dapple Gray offers her a ride.
- They arrive at a glen where little men are making maple sugar candy.
- The Sugar Candy Men give Mary Louise candy and ask her to deliver a message to the 'Goody Sweet Tooth-Shop'.
- Mary Louise rides to town, pays a penny toll to a singing old lady at a bridge, and delivers the message.
- She encounters a bear with a splinter in his foot and kindly removes it.
- Mary Louise arrives at Candy Town, a city made of various sweets, and is invited by a Chocolate Man to stay and write poetry.
- She declines the offer, stating she is lost and wants to go home.
- She reaches a wide river with no bridge and is helped by Commodore Drake, a duck in a boat.
- They sail to the deep blue sea and arrive at the Hotel Wave Crest, a coral building on an island.
- The Dolphin proprietor recognizes Mary Louise's sea green coat as magic, allowing the wearer to swim like a fish.
- Mary Louise is offered a grand fish dinner but is not hungry.
- Feeling sleepy, Mary Louise asks Commodore Drake to take her to the Land of Nod.
- Upon reaching the Land of Nod, Mary Louise and the duck fall asleep under a singing star.
Characters
Mary Louise
A small, perhaps slightly weary, child. Her exact height and build are not specified, but she is small enough to be easily carried by a pony and to be referred to as 'little girl' by various characters.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but she acquires a 'lovely sea green coat' later in the story, which is magical. Before that, she likely wears simple, comfortable clothes suitable for walking, possibly a dress or smock, with pockets large enough to be filled with candy.
Wants: Initially, to find her way home. Along the way, she is driven by curiosity and a desire to help others and experience new things.
Flaw: Her youth and tendency to get lost, as well as her initial weariness. She is easily led into new situations.
She begins lost and tired, but through her journey, she experiences many magical encounters, helps others, and learns about the world, ultimately finding a temporary resting place in the Land of Nod.
Kind, polite, curious, appreciative, resilient, and a bit naive. She readily helps others (the bear) and accepts help. She is also honest, admitting she is lost and not a poetry maker.
Dapple Gray
A small, pretty pony with a dappled gray coat. He is strong enough to carry Mary Louise for long distances.
Attire: Wears a saddle for Mary Louise to ride on.
Wants: To assist Mary Louise on her journey.
Flaw: None apparent in the story.
Remains a steadfast companion to Mary Louise throughout a significant portion of her journey.
Happy, helpful, loyal, and enduring. He offers his back to Mary Louise when she is tired and carries her faithfully.
Little Man with Red Peaked Hat
A small man, part of the 'Sugar Candy Men'. His height is notably small, as he stands on a stump to reach Dapple Gray. His build is not specified.
Attire: Wears a red peaked hat and long, turned-up pointed shoes. His other clothing is not detailed but would be practical for making maple sugar in the snow.
Wants: To make maple sugar cakes and sell them, and to be helpful to visitors.
Flaw: None apparent.
Remains consistent as a helpful and generous character.
Generous, friendly, and industrious. He is quick to offer candy and help Mary Louise.
Toll Keeper
A funny little old lady with a crutch under her arm. Her face is likely wrinkled, and her hands are described as 'withered' when she shades her eyes.
Attire: Wears an apron, which she holds up with both hands to catch the penny. Her other clothing is not specified but would be practical for her role, likely simple and worn.
Wants: To collect the toll for crossing the bridge.
Flaw: Physical infirmity, requiring a crutch.
Remains consistent in her role.
Direct, business-like (collecting tolls), but also friendly and sings a little song.
Goody Sweet Tooth-Shop Lady
A little old woman. Her hand is described as 'withered' when she shades her eyes.
Attire: Not specified, but likely simple, practical clothing suitable for running a shop, perhaps a dress and apron.
Wants: To receive the maple sugar candy for her shop.
Flaw: None apparent.
Remains consistent in her role.
Curious, appreciative, and polite. She is eager for the candy delivery.
Bear
A great big bear, sitting on a stone by the roadside. He is nearsighted, unable to see the end of his toes.
Attire: Wears a cap, which he takes off politely. He also has a big bundle tied with a thick leather strap beside him.
Wants: To get rid of the splinter in his foot and to travel.
Flaw: Nearsightedness and a painful splinter.
Is helped by Mary Louise and presumably continues his journey relieved of his pain.
Polite, expressive (sings about his wish for a pony), and vulnerable (due to his splinter).
Chocolate Man
A man made of chocolate. He is described as the 'best athlete' in Peppermint City, suggesting a fit and energetic build.
Attire: Not specified, but implied to be part of the 'Candy Town' aesthetic. Perhaps a uniform or simple attire made of candy-like materials.
Wants: To find a poetry maker for the peppermint candies and to welcome visitors to Candy City.
Flaw: Misjudges Mary Louise's desires and talents.
Remains consistent in his role.
Enthusiastic, welcoming, persuasive, and a bit pushy. He is quick to assume Mary Louise's talents and tries to recruit her.
Commodore Drake
A little white duck. He is a 'duck sailor', implying a certain competence and perhaps a jaunty air.
Attire: Not specified, but as a 'duck sailor', he might wear a small sailor's cap or scarf, though not explicitly stated.
Wants: To help Mary Louise cross the river and explore the sea.
Flaw: None apparent.
Remains a consistent helper and guide for Mary Louise on her water journey.
Kind, helpful, and adventurous. He readily offers assistance to Mary Louise.
Dolphin (Hotel Proprietor)
A nice old Dolphin. He is capable of standing at a desk and turning somersaults.
Attire: None, as a dolphin, but he is described as a hotel proprietor, implying a certain dignified air.
Wants: To run his hotel, entertain guests, and share his knowledge.
Flaw: None apparent.
Remains consistent in his role.
Nice, good-natured, knowledgeable (about the magic coat), and entertaining (sings and does somersaults).
Locations
Maple Sugar Glen
A green valley where little men are at work, surrounded by maple trees. There are great big pots for boiling sap and queer little dishes of various shapes for cooling the sugar.
Mood: Industrious, magical, sweet, welcoming.
Mary Louise discovers the Sugar Candy Men making maple sugar and receives a generous gift of candy.
Peppermint City
A fantastical city entirely constructed from candy, painted white with red stripes like peppermint sticks. Houses have peppermint stick columns, doors are flanked by peppermint statues, and striped pillars support porches and piazzas. The opera house is guarded by a candy lion, and a fountain spouts maple syrup. Lamp posts and barber poles are peppermint sticks. The streets are paved with little red brick candies.
Mood: Whimsical, sweet, artificial, slightly overwhelming, bustling.
Mary Louise arrives in the fantastical Peppermint City, marvels at its edible architecture, and encounters the Chocolate Man and Lemon Soldiers.
Hotel Wave Crest (Coral Island)
A lovely coral building shining pinky bright on an island. In front of it are two bell buoys. The interior has a desk with a big register book.
Mood: Tropical, serene, welcoming, slightly magical.
Mary Louise and Commodore Drake arrive at the hotel, meet the Dolphin proprietor, and learn about her magic coat.