THE MAGIC CAKE
by David Cory · from The Magic Soap Bubble
Adapted Version
Ned was very, very hungry. A friendly Gnome came to him. "Come with me!" said the Gnome. "We will find yummy food!"
The Gnome sat with Ned. They went down a big slide. It was very fast. The wind blew on Ned's face. Ned felt happy. They went so fast. Ned held on tight. This was fun.
They landed in a soft forest. Birds sang sweet songs. Pretty flowers grew there. Ned saw a huge watermelon. A Melon Gnome stood by it. The Gnome gave Ned pink juice. Ned was very hungry.
"Drink this," said the Gnome. Ned drank the sweet juice. It tasted very good. "No more," the Gnome said. "More juice makes you too hungry." Ned felt happy.
They walked to a strange hut. It smelled very sweet. It was a big oven. Goblins stood around it. A special cake was inside. It was a magic cake. Ned wanted to eat it.
"Eat some cake!" said the Gnome. Ned pulled off a piece. He ate it very fast. The cake was warm and soft. Ned ate more and more. He loved the sweet taste.
"Be careful, Ned," said the Gnome. "This cake is special. It fills you up fast. Do not eat too much." Ned was still hungry. He did not stop.
Ned ate a big hole. He crawled inside the cake. It was soft and warm. Ned ate more and more. The hole got smaller. The cake closed around him. Ned was stuck inside. Oh no!
Ned felt scared. The cake started to move. It rolled and tumbled. Ned moved with it. He held on tight. This was a surprise. The cake rolled faster.
The cake tumbled down. It broke into many pieces. Ned was free! He landed on soft moss. He was safe and sound. The Gnome ran to him.
Ned looked at the brook. He saw his face. Oh dear! Ned was very wide. The magic cake made him big. The sweet juice helped too. Ned was very surprised.
The Gnome laughed a little. "Oh, Ned!" he said. "You ate too much cake! Eat is good, not too much. You are big. We will fix it! Do not worry. I know what to do."
Original Story
THE MAGIC CAKE
As the last drum beat died away in the distance, the Gnome turned to Ned and said: "Come, let us hasten, for I am rather hungry, and you no doubt are in need of nourishment also."
Ned obeyed willingly, for he had tasted nothing since breakfast and was now as hungry as a healthy youngster should be.
At the farther end of the cavern was an inclined plane, very much like the chutes at Coney Island.
Carefully seating Ned at his side the Gnome said: "Now hold tight, and hold your breath and hold your tongue—in fact, hold everything you've got—for we are going to take a swift shoot to the bottom of the mountain and you'll find out what the word swift means if you never have before!"
At this they began to move, and in another moment they were traveling as fast as a bullet from a gun.
The wind, whistling by, cut Ned's cheeks like little sharp needles; his hair stood out behind like feathers on a speeding arrow.
They were going so fast it was almost impossible to breathe.
Presently a tiny light appeared in the distance, and he saw that they were now on a level, although still going at a tremendous rate of speed.
In another moment they shot through the little round hole of light, which turned out to be the opening at the other end, and he and the Gnome landed safely on a big soft bunker of moss in the midst of a beautiful forest.
Birds were singing in the treetops and little rabbits were skipping on the soft carpet of the woodland.
Pretty flowers sent forth a delicious perfume and a brook close at hand rippled over the pebbly bottom of its bed.
"Wait," cried the Gnome, as Ned leaned over to drink the cool water. "Wait; I have for you the most delicious drink if you will restrain your impatience a moment longer."
Ned obeyed and followed the Gnome along a narrow path until they came to a small clearing, where the blue sky smiled down upon them.
In the center of the spot was a monstrous watermelon, standing up on end, the thick vine supporting it like a strong round barrel stave.
A large wooden spigot protruded from one side and over it leaned a Gnome, who had climbed upon the vine in order to reach the handle.
Ned's little companion lifted a goblin cup to catch the drops of delicious looking pink juice which began to drip slowly from the spigot when the Gnome carefully turned the handle.
"Careful, now," commanded the Gnome, as he handed the brimming goblet to Ned. "See that you spill not a drop of the precious nectar.
"Good, is it?" he inquired, seeing the sparkle in Ned's eyes and hearing the smack on his lips as the last drop disappeared. "Pretty good, eh?"
"Better'n soda water," replied Ned; "lots better."
The little Gnome at the spigot smiled. "I grew the melon," he said with pride. "It's the largest so far in Gnomeland. But next year I'm going to grow even a bigger one!"
"How do you make them grow so large?" inquired Ned, hoping he would be invited to have another glass of the juice.
"Not another drop!" said Ned's little friend. "A second goblet and you would be so hungry you could eat stones."
"Come with me," said the small Gnome guide. "We must eat."
Ned eagerly followed him, and they pressed forward at a rapid walk until they came to a queer little hut, from which issued a most delicious odor of sponge cake.
Around the door, or, more properly, what appeared to be one, but which was in fact but a small opening, stood several goblins, evidently awaiting orders from someone.
As Ned drew near he perceived that instead of a hut it was in reality a huge oven, in which something very delicious was being baked.
"Minions!" called out Ned's friend, "is not the goblin cake ready?"
"Yes, sire!" responded several voices, and in another moment the oven was taken apart and removed from the most delicious looking sponge cake that Ned had ever seen. A soft, warm brown color made it most tempting to the eyes, and the delicious smell made Ned so anxious to commence eating that he could with difficulty restrain himself.
"Help yourself," cried his little friend, and without a moment's hesitation Ned pulled off a piece of cake and eagerly commenced.
"Begone!" commanded the Gnome to the small bakers, who still stood around curiously watching their cake disappearing down the mouth of a mortal as rapidly as its owner could cram it in; "begone and leave us to enjoy the cake alone!"
At this they turned away and descended the steep hill which lay to the right and disappeared below.
"Be careful," admonished the Gnome, as Ned showed no signs of finishing, "you may eat too much. Gnome cake, while most delicious, is more filling than that of mortal make!"
But Ned paid no heed. Already he had eaten a great hole in the cake and, finding the inside warm and flaky, he squeezed himself in.
It was much easier to eat the inside, as it was softer, and the crust had already grown quite hard.
He was so busy eating and, I'm sorry to say, so greedy, that he did not notice that as he ate away the interior of the sponge cake the outside gradually grew tighter, and the opening which he had made at the beginning of his feast, and through which he had crowded, became smaller and smaller, until finally it closed altogether.
When Ned perceived this, and it was some time after, I assure you, he was indeed frightened. He pounded on the walls of his sponge cake prison and called loudly to the Gnome, but for some time he heard nothing.
Finally, after frantically running around and around inside the huge cake ball, he thought he heard the voice of his small friend. He pressed his ear close to the wall and listened.
Sure enough, he could just hear the words, "Hold on tight to one side, and brace your feet," and the next moment he perceived that the cake was in motion.
Slowly at first, but in a few minutes the great cake ball began to revolve faster and faster.
Ned was terrified at first, as it was with great difficulty that he kept his body from playing battledore and shuttlecock. The greater the speed of the huge mass, however, the less inclination there was to bounce about, and he soon found himself literally glued, as it were, to one side.
While thus traveling in this novel way, he began to entertain some fear as to what would happen should an obstacle be encountered, and by some strange coincidence no sooner had, the idea come than it was followed by a terrific crash!
The crust of the cake ball broke into a thousand pieces, and Ned landed safely some distance from the spot, still clinging to a huge piece of sponge cake, which acted like a cushion between him and the ground.
Looking anxiously around, after wiping some stray crumbs from his eyes, he saw his little friend, the Gnome, running frantically down the steep incline, which, luckily for Ned, had been the cause of his liberation.
Finding him unhurt, the Gnome sat down on the piece of cake to rest himself and regain his breath before speaking.
When he did, however, what he said caused Ned to run quickly over to the brook to look at himself in the water.
To his dismay, what the Gnome had said was, indeed, too true. Ned was nearly as broad as he was high.
The cake he had eaten had evidently occupied the same space inside of him as it had inside the brown crust.
"What am I ever going to do?" said Ned.
"'Twas a lucky think I kept you from drinking another gobletful of the watermelon juice," answered the Gnome. "Otherwise you might have eaten the whole cake, and then you might have been twice as large as you are now."
"I don't think there is anything to laugh at," said Ned, as his small friend burst into a hearty peal of laughter.
"Of course you don't," replied the Gnome, "you can't see yourself. If you could, though—oh, my!" and he again burst into peals of laughter.
Ned waited a few moments and then asked: "Well, what are we going to do?"
"Don't worry, Ned, dear," replied his little friend, touched by his good nature and feeling sorry for him, "don't worry. The watermelon juice made the sponge cake swell. All that is necessary now is to take the antidote, and I know where it can be found without any trouble."
Story DNA
Moral
Unchecked greed can lead to unexpected and undesirable consequences.
Plot Summary
Ned, a hungry boy, embarks on a magical journey with a Gnome, sliding down a mountain to a forest. There, he drinks potent watermelon juice and then encounters a giant, magical sponge cake. Despite warnings, Ned greedily eats his way inside the cake, becoming trapped as it seals around him. The cake then spins and crashes, freeing Ned but leaving him comically wide. The Gnome, amused, promises an antidote for Ned's predicament.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to fear to relief
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
David Cory was a prolific American children's author in the early 20th century, known for his 'Little Jack Rabbit' and 'Billy Whiskers' series. His stories often featured whimsical adventures and talking animals/creatures.
Plot Beats (11)
- Ned and the Gnome take a thrilling, high-speed slide down a mountain.
- They land in a beautiful forest where Ned is offered a special watermelon juice.
- The Gnome warns Ned that a second glass of juice would make him incredibly hungry.
- They proceed to a peculiar hut, which is actually a giant oven baking a magical sponge cake.
- Ned is offered the cake and, despite its size, begins to eat it voraciously.
- The Gnome warns Ned not to eat too much, as the cake is more filling than mortal cake.
- Ned ignores the warning, eats his way inside the cake, and becomes trapped as the opening closes.
- Terrified, Ned is spun around inside the cake as it begins to move and accelerate.
- The cake crashes, breaking into pieces and freeing Ned, who lands safely.
- Ned discovers he has become very wide, a consequence of the magic cake and watermelon juice.
- The Gnome laughs at Ned's predicament but reassures him that he knows where to find an antidote.
Characters
Ned
Initially a healthy, normal-sized youngster. After eating the magic cake, he becomes nearly as broad as he is high, significantly wider than his original stature, with a rounder, swollen appearance.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a child in an unspecified, likely European, setting. Nothing specific is mentioned, implying common attire for a young boy of the era.
Wants: To satisfy his hunger and curiosity, to explore the magical world he finds himself in, and later, to return to his normal size.
Flaw: Greed, particularly for delicious food, which leads him into trouble.
Transforms from a normal-sized, hungry boy into an enlarged, cake-filled boy, learning a lesson about moderation and greed, and is on the path to being restored.
Obedient, eager, curious, easily frightened when in danger, and quite greedy when it comes to food, but also good-natured.
The Gnome
A small, presumably elderly-looking, magical creature. He is described as 'little' and 'small', suggesting a diminutive stature typical of gnomes.
Attire: Unspecified, but would likely be rustic and earthy, perhaps in shades of green or brown, made of natural materials, suitable for a forest dweller. Perhaps a pointed cap.
Wants: To guide and nourish Ned, to share the wonders of Gnomeland, and to help Ned overcome the consequences of his greed.
Flaw: A slight tendency to tease or laugh at others' misfortunes, though always with good intent.
Remains consistent as a wise and helpful guide, though he experiences a moment of amusement at Ned's predicament before offering a solution.
Helpful, wise, a bit mischievous, proud (especially of his melon), and ultimately kind-hearted. He enjoys a good laugh, even at Ned's expense, but also shows genuine concern.
The Melon-Growing Gnome
A gnome, similar in species to Ned's companion, but specifically noted for his role with the watermelon. He is able to climb the vine to reach the spigot.
Attire: Unspecified, but likely practical and earthy, similar to other gnomes, perhaps with some gardening-related elements.
Wants: To grow the largest watermelons in Gnomeland.
Flaw: None apparent in the story.
Remains consistent, appearing only briefly to showcase his achievement.
Proud of his accomplishments, particularly his giant watermelon, and ambitious to grow even larger ones.
The Goblins
Several small, subservient creatures, described as 'minions' and 'small bakers'. They are curious and observant.
Attire: Unspecified, but likely simple, utilitarian, and perhaps slightly tattered clothing, suitable for bakers or servants.
Wants: To follow the Gnome's orders and bake the magic cake.
Flaw: None apparent in the story.
Remain consistent, serving their function in the story.
Obedient, curious, and subservient.
Locations
Underground Chute
An inclined plane, very much like the chutes at Coney Island, leading from a cavern to the bottom of a mountain. It's a dark, narrow passage where the wind whistles by like sharp needles.
Mood: Exhilarating, terrifying, fast-paced, dark.
Ned and the Gnome take a swift, terrifying ride down the mountain.
Enchanted Forest Clearing
A beautiful forest with birds singing in the treetops and little rabbits skipping on a soft carpet of woodland. Pretty flowers send forth a delicious perfume, and a brook ripples over a pebbly bottom. A small clearing bathed in blue sky contains a monstrous watermelon standing on end, supported by a thick vine, with a wooden spigot.
Mood: Magical, serene, idyllic, bountiful, slightly whimsical.
Ned and the Gnome land here after the chute ride, and Ned drinks the magical watermelon juice.
The Giant Oven/Cake Hut
A queer little hut, from which issued a delicious odor of sponge cake. Upon closer inspection, it is revealed to be a huge, disassembled oven, or a structure that can be taken apart, containing a monstrous, warm brown sponge cake. It is situated on a steep hill.
Mood: Mysterious, enticing, delicious, later becomes claustrophobic and terrifying.
Ned eats the magic cake and gets trapped inside it, then is liberated by a crash.