THE MAGIC BALLOON
by David Cory · from The Magic Soap Bubble
Adapted Version
The little bluebird was sad. She lost Ned's magic ring. The ring fell into the water. She flew over the water. She could not get the ring. She felt very sad.
A Speckled Trout swam near. He saw the Little Bluebird. "Why are you sad?" he asked. "I lost Ned's ring." The trout said, "I have the ring!" He would take it to Fairy Queen.
The Speckled Trout swam fast. He went down the stream. He went over a waterfall. He came to the lake. He swam to Fairy Queen. She took the ring.
Fairy Queen was very happy. She had the magic ring. She rode a fast robin. Her friends rode robins too. They flew to the castle. They went to help Ned.
Little Bluebird saw the trout leave. She thought of King Gnome. He was a good friend. She flew to his cave. She needed more help. The cave was in the forest.
King Gnome was kind. He gave the bird food. Little Bluebird told him all. Ned needed help. King Gnome got his pipe. He got his soap too. These were magic tools.
King Gnome blew his pipe. A big soap bubble grew. It was a magic bubble. King Gnome went inside. Little Bluebird went inside too. The bubble flew to the castle. Up, up it went.
The bubble flew very fast. It passed the Fairy Queen. They saw the Princess. She was asleep. King Gnome told the bird. "Tell Princess help is near." Little Bluebird flew to her.
They made a rescue plan. Ned was a small bird. Prince was another small bird. Princess was in her room. They would all go in the bubble. Fairy Queen had the ring.
The bubble came to the window. Princess stepped inside. Fairy Queen touched Ned. He became a boy again. She touched the Prince. He became a boy again. Princess hugged them both. They were very happy.
The Giant was a big tree. Fairy Queen touched the tree. It became the Giant again. He was very big. He walked to the drawbridge. He needed to get in.
The drawbridge made noise. Mean King heard the noise. He was very angry. His guards came quickly. They ran to the bridge. They wanted to stop them.
Giant tried to get in. The bubble door was small. He could not fit. Ned had a good idea. "Blow the pipe!" Ned said. Giant blew the pipe hard. The bubble grew big. The guards were very close.
Giant stepped inside the bubble. He fit this time. King Gnome closed the door tight. "We are safe!" he said. Everyone felt happy and safe. The bubble flew away fast.
The magic bubble flew home. It took everyone home. Fairy Queen went to her lake. King Gnome went to his cave. Giant went to his mother. Ned went to his chair. He was safe and happy.
Friends help friends. It is good to work together.
Original Story
THE MAGIC BALLOON
Great was the grief of the little bluebird as she skimmed over the waters of the moat, realizing how impossible it was for her to regain the lost ring.
She had not the heart for the moment to return to the castle to inform Ned of his loss; so she perched herself disconsolately on a bush which grew close to the margin of the moon-lit water, wondering what was best to do.
Suddenly the speckled trout rose to the surface, and, seeing how despondent was the pretty bluebird, inquired the cause of her grief.
"Ah, me!" she sighed in answer. "I have lost a magic gold ring, and I know not what to do, nor how to recover it."
At this the speckled trout flapped his silvery tail gleefully, and answered: "Worry no more, pretty bluebird, for I have it safely tucked away inside of me."
"If that be the case, Sir Trout," joyously chirped the happy bird, "swim at your greatest speed and deliver the ring to her majesty, the Waterfall Fairy, Queen of the Lake. Tell her that Ned, her little mortal friend, is in dire peril and that he needs her aid."
"That will I gladly do," answered the speckled trout, and without more delay he darted off down the moat toward the dam at the farther side, over which the water ran in a clear stream into the purling brook, which finally led to the lake, where lived Ned's friend, the Fairy Queen. Down the silvery cascade he glided and whirled away through the running water, frightening the minnows and miller's thumbs lying among the stones in the shallow places, and startling the crawfishes and little fresh water lobsters hidden under the hollow banks.
Faster and faster he swam, like a courier with important dispatches, down the clear stream running over its pebbly bed, with the luscious meadow sweet and the large blue geranium blooming all about its banks, and the wild rose on its bushes.
Nor did he pause until with a loud splash he dived over the waterfall safely into the lake and rose to the surface close to the palace of the Queen of the Lake.
A big black spider was busily at work mending the suspension bridge which spanned the water at this narrow point, for the heavy drops of dew had broken the slender strands in several places.
He stopped his work to look at the speckled trout, who at once addressed him.
"I am the bearer of a most important dispatch for her highness," he began.
"Well, and I am engaged in the most important duty of repairing her highness' bridge," replied the spider.
"So, I see," answered the trout, "but——" At this very moment the Queen herself, hearing voices at so early an hour outside her window, peeped out. Catching sight of her the trout called out boldly:
"Listen to me, I beg of you, most gracious Queen. I have brought you the gold ring from Ned, who sorely needs thy aid!"
"HERE IS THE RING," SAID THE TROUT.
At this the Queen quickly withdrew her head, and in a short time emerged from the doorway of her castle.
Hastily running to the water's edge, she leaned over, grasping hold of a stalk to keep her from falling.
"Here is the ring," said the trout, holding it in his teeth and swimming as close to the bank as he was able.
The Queen reached out and took it safely from him.
"I will make you king of my fishes, noble Sir Trout," she cried, "for what you have this day accomplished. Remain here in my lake henceforth, and now, to the rescue!"
In an incredibly short time she was mounted on her swiftest robin and with her three ladies in waiting flew away toward the castle, where Ned and the beautiful princess, her brave brother and the giant were held prisoners by the magic of the wicked king.
Now, the little bluebird, as she saw her friend, the trout, swim away, suddenly thought of her former master, the King of the Gnomes, and decided to seek aid from him. So, whirling around in a circle to get her bearings, she darted off swiftly through the air toward the cave in the forest.
She made rapid progress until she reached the thick foliage of the woods, and here, in her eagerness, she nearly lost her way.
Indeed, in the uncertain light that struggled through the thick boughs, it was not easy to make out certain familiar landmarks which would guide her to her destination.
At length, just at dawn, she found herself at the foot of the hill wherein was the cave of the King of the Gnomes.
Worn out with her arduous journey, she fluttered down to the edge of the bubbling fountain and drank of its refreshing waters.
Then, picking up a pebble, she dropped it into the little gravelly basin, hopped painfully over to the great flat stone, and tapped upon it three times with her beak.
No one replied, but the rock opened in the middle, and there stood the King of the Gnomes himself.
On seeing the little bluebird, he stretched out a kindly hand for her to rest upon, and carried her into the inner room.
It was his breakfast hour, for gnomes are early risers. Seating himself at the table, he ordered that the little bird be served with breakfast at once, for well he knew that a hungry bird's first wish must be for food.
The King had scarce given this order before several nimble little men of the forest placed seeds and grains of wheat and a goblet of golden fruit juice before the bluebird.
Soon she was sufficiently revived to address the gnomes, and it took her but a few moments to tell him all.
"Come, let us hasten," he said, as she finished, and, slipping into his pocket his magic pipe and little pieces of soap, he left the cave and walked rapidly toward a small clearing.
Leaning over a little pool in the hollow of the grassy earth, he filled his pipe, rubbed the soap about the rim, and in a moment more blew a large soap bubble.
Taking the little bluebird in his hand, he opened a small door and entered the magic balloon. Up and up it went, until it was well above the tops of the trees.
Then it took a course toward the east, where the rising sun was gilding the sky with its golden fingers.
Faster and faster it sailed, overtaking in a short time the Fairy Queen and her three ladies-in-waiting, mounted on their friendly robins.
In the distance could be seen the turrets of the castle, gleaming in the morning sun like bayonets thrust up from the earth in monster guns.
"Now, little bluebird," said the Gnome, opening the little door and thrusting her out upon his hand, as the big Soap Bubble hovered above the castle, "fly down and tell Ned that deliverance is near at hand. So also inform the beautiful Princess, who, I see, is still sitting at her window, but asleep!"
Off flew the bluebird on her happy errand.
"Your Majesty," cried the Gnome, addressing the Fairy Queen, as she drew rein at the doorway of the soap bubble, "I would suggest that you touch with the Magic Ring only the cage wherein is confined our friend Ned, instructing him, while still in the form of a cockatoo, to fly up to the topmost branch of the pine tree. Also for the Princess' brother, while he is still a gamecock, to do likewise. After I have brought the bubble close to the window ledge, so that the beautiful Princess may step easily inside, I will cause it to rise to the treetop, from which advantageous position Ned and the Princess' brother can step within. But what to do with the Pine Tree Giant," said the Gnome, scratching his beard reflectively, "gets me! However, one thing at a time, as my old grandfather used to say when I was a boy, 'one thing at a time!'"
As the bluebird whispered in the ear of the beautiful Princess, the Magic Soap Bubble approached the window ledge.
Rubbing her eyes, but making no outcry, although she was very much startled, she obeyed the bluebird's command to "step softly," and entered the Bubble. It then ascended till it was on a line with the topmost branch, where it swayed in the gentle morning breeze, like a barnyard weather cock, the game rooster on one side and the cockatoo on the other!
The Fairy Queen touched them with the ring as they hopped into the bubble, and they regained immediately their natural shape.
The Princess threw her arms around her dear brother and hugged Ned, so great was her delight.
Ned ran over to his little friend, the Gnome, and thanked him again and again for his aid, and was about to lean out of the doorway to also thank the Fairy Queen when the Gnome restrained him.
"Not so fast, Ned, my boy! All is not yet over."
"No, indeed," answered Ned, "we must rescue the giant."
"Aye, there's the rub," replied the Gnome. "How are we ever to get him in the bubble, either as a tree or as a giant?"
At this point the Fairy Queen joined in the conversation, kissing Ned at the same time as he attempted to thank her.
"Let me first change him into his natural form," she said. "Then he can walk across the courtyard and out upon the drawbridge. From there he can easily step off into the bubble, which your majesty can lower to the right height above the water of the moat."
"Good!" said the Gnome. "Go and do your part and I will attend to the bubble."
Just as the bubble cleared it the pine tree became once more the friendly giant, who immediately strode across the courtyard.
Quickly lowering the drawbridge he hastened out upon it.
The creaking of the chains, however, had aroused the wicked King, who looked out of his window to see what was the cause of the noise. In another moment he was rushing toward the gates at the head of the castle guard.
"Quick!" shouted the Gnome to the giant. "Get in!"
But, alas! The doorway was too small. In vain the giant wiggled and squirmed. In vain Ned and the princess' brother pulled his arms. His great shoulders could not be forced through the doorway. Finally, with a tremendous shove he managed to go half way in, but no further, for at this point his head was against the opposite side of the bubble.
On came the wicked King and his castle attendants, who, seeing the predicament of the giant, fitted arrows to their strong bows, preparing to shoot the hapless fellow.
"Blow the bubble larger!" shouted Ned. "Put the pipe in his mouth and tell him to blow like thunder."
The Gnome placed the pipestem between the lips of the giant and commanded him to blow for his life, and before an arrow left a bow the bubble widened sufficiently to enable the giant to crawl inside. Slamming the door shut the Gnome cried out exultingly: "We are safe!"
Away sailed the Magic Soap Bubble, with the Fairy Queen and her little robin perched securely on the top, and her three ladies in waiting standing close by on their own little feathered steeds.
Back to the beautiful Waterfall Lake, where the Fairy Queen bade Ned goodby; back to the friendly Gnome's cave in the woods, where he said farewell to Ned; back to Big Man's Land, where lived the Giant with his kind old mother; back to the castle where lived the beautiful Princess and her brother before the wicked King had kidnapped them, and back at last to Ned's own home, where it left him in the old easy chair by the window, from which he had started out to visit Gnomeland.
Well, well, little reader, here we are, you and I, at the end of the book. What shall we do, for we have grown to be such good friends while you have been reading this story of mine.
Listen, I will tell you another story, it's called "The Iceberg Express"—it is one of The Little Journeys to Happyland books. So come with me on the Iceberg Express.
Yours for a story,
David Cory.
Story DNA
Moral
With the help of loyal friends, even the most difficult challenges can be overcome.
Plot Summary
A little bluebird loses Ned's magic ring, leading her to seek help from a speckled trout, who delivers the ring to the Waterfall Fairy Queen. Meanwhile, the bluebird also enlists the aid of the King of the Gnomes, who creates a magic soap bubble. Together, these magical allies coordinate a daring rescue of Ned, a princess, her brother, and a giant, who are all imprisoned by a wicked king. After a tense escape where the giant barely fits into the bubble, they all return safely to their homes, thanks to their combined efforts and the magic bubble.
Themes
Emotional Arc
peril to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
David Cory was a prolific American children's author in the early 20th century, often writing serialized adventures with recurring characters.
Plot Beats (15)
- A little bluebird is distressed after losing Ned's magic gold ring in the moat.
- A speckled trout, having swallowed the ring, offers to deliver it to the Waterfall Fairy Queen, Ned's friend.
- The trout swims swiftly through the stream and waterfall to the lake, delivering the ring to the Queen.
- The Fairy Queen, with her ladies-in-waiting, flies on robins towards the castle to aid Ned.
- The bluebird, remembering her former master, flies to the cave of the King of the Gnomes for help.
- The King of the Gnomes, after feeding the bluebird, learns of Ned's plight and prepares his magic pipe and soap.
- The Gnome blows a large magic soap bubble, and he and the bluebird enter it, sailing towards the castle.
- The magic bubble overtakes the Fairy Queen, and the Gnome instructs the bluebird to tell the sleeping Princess that help is near.
- The Gnome, Fairy Queen, and bluebird devise a plan to rescue Ned (as a cockatoo), the Princess's brother (as a gamecock), and the Princess.
- The Princess steps into the bubble, and the Fairy Queen transforms Ned and her brother back to human form with the ring.
- The Fairy Queen transforms the giant from a pine tree back to his natural form so he can walk to the drawbridge.
- The wicked King and his guards are alerted by the drawbridge and rush to stop the escape.
- The giant struggles to fit into the bubble, but Ned suggests he blow into the Gnome's pipe, enlarging the bubble just as the King's arrows are drawn.
- The giant successfully enters the enlarged bubble, and the Gnome seals it, proclaiming their safety.
- The Magic Soap Bubble returns everyone to their homes, and Ned is left in his easy chair, concluding his adventure.
Characters
Little Bluebird
A small, agile bird with vibrant blue feathers, a slender build, and delicate wings. Her movements are quick and precise, whether skimming water or darting through the air.
Attire: Natural blue feathers, unadorned.
Wants: To help Ned and recover the lost ring; to seek aid for her friends.
Flaw: Can become easily disheartened when faced with a problem.
Starts despondent over a lost item, then becomes a crucial messenger and active participant in the rescue, demonstrating her resourcefulness.
Loyal, persistent, resourceful, easily despondent but quick to action.
Speckled Trout
A fish with a sleek, silvery body covered in distinctive speckles. He is robust and capable of great speed in water.
Attire: Natural fish scales, silvery with speckles.
Wants: To assist the bluebird and Ned, and to gain recognition for his service.
Flaw: Can be a bit boastful about his accomplishments.
Begins as a helpful bystander, then becomes a crucial courier, earning the title 'King of my fishes' for his service.
Helpful, gleeful, swift, loyal, proud.
Waterfall Fairy, Queen of the Lake
A graceful and ethereal being, small in stature, with delicate features and a radiant aura. She moves with swiftness and elegance.
Attire: Flowing, shimmering gown, likely made of light, translucent fabric in shades of blue, green, or white, adorned with natural elements like dewdrop jewels or water lilies. Her attire suggests a connection to water and nature.
Wants: To aid her mortal friend Ned and rescue the prisoners from the wicked king.
Flaw: Not explicitly shown, but perhaps her reliance on her magic ring for certain transformations.
Acts as a powerful ally, using her magic to reverse transformations and facilitate the escape, demonstrating her leadership and magical prowess.
Gracious, decisive, swift to act, grateful, and affectionate.
King of the Gnomes
A small, sturdy man of the forest, with a kindly demeanor. He has a reflective habit of scratching his beard.
Attire: Practical, earthy attire, possibly made of woven natural fibers in greens, browns, and greys, suitable for living in a cave and forest. Perhaps a pointed cap. His clothes are functional rather than ornate.
Wants: To aid his friend Ned and rescue the prisoners from the wicked king.
Flaw: Can be momentarily stumped by complex problems, but quickly finds solutions.
Becomes the primary strategist and executor of the rescue plan, demonstrating his wisdom and magical abilities to overcome seemingly impossible obstacles.
Kindly, wise, resourceful, thoughtful, decisive, and a bit reflective.
Ned
A young boy, initially transformed into a cockatoo, but later regaining his human form. He is small enough to be carried by the King of the Gnomes.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but upon regaining his form, likely simple, comfortable clothes suitable for a child, perhaps a tunic and breeches in natural colors.
Wants: To escape captivity, rescue his friends, and return home.
Flaw: Initially helpless due to being transformed and imprisoned.
Starts as a helpless prisoner, is rescued, and actively participates in the rescue of the Giant, showing growth in courage and resourcefulness.
Friendly, grateful, concerned for others, eager to help.
Beautiful Princess
A beautiful young woman, initially asleep at her window, then startled but composed. She is graceful and affectionate.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a princess, she would wear a fine gown, perhaps of silk or velvet, in soft, elegant colors. Given the fairy tale context, it would be a classic, flowing style, not overly ornate but clearly of noble quality.
Wants: To escape captivity and be reunited with her brother and friends.
Flaw: Initially helpless due to being imprisoned and asleep.
Starts as a sleeping prisoner, then becomes an active participant in the escape, showing her resilience and affection for her loved ones.
Beautiful, startled but composed, affectionate, obedient to commands in a crisis.
Brave Brother (of the Princess)
A young man, initially transformed into a gamecock, then regaining his human form. He is strong enough to pull the Giant's arms.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a prince, he would wear noble attire, possibly a tunic and breeches of fine fabric, perhaps with a cloak, in colors befitting royalty or a knight.
Wants: To escape captivity and help rescue the Giant.
Flaw: Initially helpless due to being transformed and imprisoned.
Starts as a transformed prisoner, is rescued, and actively participates in the rescue of the Giant, demonstrating his bravery and strength.
Brave, determined, helpful, affectionate towards his sister.
Pine Tree Giant
A very large man, initially transformed into a pine tree. When in human form, he has great shoulders and is of immense size, making it difficult for him to fit through small openings.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a giant, likely simple, durable clothing made of coarse fabric, perhaps a large tunic and trousers, in earthy tones to match his connection to nature.
Wants: To escape captivity and return home to his mother.
Flaw: His immense size makes him vulnerable in confined spaces.
Starts as a transformed prisoner, is rescued, and through his struggle to enter the bubble, inadvertently helps enlarge it, becoming a symbol of overcoming physical limitations.
Friendly, strong, determined, and a bit clumsy due to his size.
Wicked King
A king, likely imposing in stature, with a stern or cruel demeanor. He is quick to anger and action when his plans are thwarted.
Attire: Regal, but dark and imposing attire. Perhaps a heavy, dark velvet robe with sharp angles or menacing embroidery, a crown, and fine, but severe, accessories. His clothing would reflect his wicked nature.
Wants: To maintain his power and keep his prisoners captive.
Flaw: His overconfidence and inability to foresee or counter magical interventions.
Remains a static antagonist, ultimately defeated as his prisoners escape.
Wicked, cruel, quick to anger, possessive, tyrannical.
Locations
Castle Moat
Moon-lit water surrounding a castle, with a bush growing close to its margin. The moat leads to a dam where water runs into a purling brook.
Mood: disconsolate, mysterious, later hopeful
The bluebird grieves over the lost ring, then encounters the speckled trout who has the ring.
Waterfall Lake and Fairy Queen's Palace
A clear stream running over a pebbly bed, lined with meadow sweet, blue geraniums, and wild roses, leading to a waterfall that cascades into a lake. A suspension bridge spans a narrow point of the lake, near the Queen's palace.
Mood: magical, serene, bustling with activity
The speckled trout delivers the ring to the Waterfall Fairy Queen, who then sets off to rescue Ned.
Gnome King's Cave in the Forest
A thick, dark forest with uncertain light filtering through boughs, leading to the foot of a hill. At the hill's base is a bubbling fountain and a great flat stone that serves as the entrance to the gnome king's cave. Inside, there's an inner room with a table.
Mood: mysterious, ancient, comforting
The bluebird seeks aid from the King of the Gnomes, who then prepares his magic pipe and soap for the magic balloon.
Wicked King's Castle
A formidable castle with turrets, gleaming in the morning sun. It has windows, a courtyard, and a drawbridge over a moat. The interior includes a room where the princess is held, and a cage for Ned (as a cockatoo) and the princess's brother (as a gamecock).
Mood: imprisoning, tense, ultimately triumphant
Ned, the princess, her brother, and the giant are rescued from the wicked king's imprisonment by the magic balloon and the Fairy Queen's ring.