THE MAGIC NECTAR
by David Cory · from The Magic Soap Bubble
Adapted Version
Ned is a boy. But today, Ned is very, very big! He is a giant! Ned walks. The Gnome walks with him. Ned is big. The Gnome is small. They walk by a shiny river.
They see a waterfall. Water falls down. The Gnome points. "The Queen lives there," he says. "She has magic drink. It makes you small." Ned wants small.
Ned sees small things. He picks them up. Ned throws them at the door. Gnome says, "No, Ned!" Ned does not listen. Ned is too big. He stands by the door. He blocks the way.
A tiny car comes. The Queen Fairy is inside. She is very small. Her palace shines. It is made of crystals. The Queen goes inside.
Ned looks inside. Many fairies dance. They are very small. Ned is very big. The fairies stop dancing. The Queen Fairy sees Ned.
The Queen jumps. She pinches Ned's nose. "Your breath is hot," she says. "It is hot for us. We are small. You must be careful." Ned learns a lesson.
The Gnome speaks. "Ned ate gnome cake," he says. "He drank juice. Now he is big. "He needs your magic drink." Gnome asks help.
Queen says, "Yes, I help." She tells fairies. "Make magic drink." She tells Ned, "Sit down."
The fairies come back. They have a lily. A white drink is inside. It is the magic drink.
The Queen comes. She pours the drink. It goes on Ned's lips.
Ned feels strange. A tingle runs through him. His hands get small. His feet get small. He is getting smaller. Ned is very happy.
Ned is very happy. He says, "Thank you, Queen!" He thinks of his mom. He wants to see her.
The Queen gives Ned a ring. It is a magic ring. "Whistle for a bird," she says. "Send the bird to me. I will help you."
Ned is small again. He is a boy. He thanks the Queen. "Thank you, Queen," he says. Ned waves goodbye.
Ned and The Gnome walk. They go down the valley. Ned is happy. He is small again.
Original Story
THE MAGIC NECTAR
Ned and the Gnome continued their journey down the valley, following the crystal stream, in whose waters he had just a short time before seen his distorted figure, until they came to a beautiful waterfall, down whose silvery sheen slid numerous water sprites and water fairies.
"Over yonder," exclaimed the Gnome, "lives the Fairy of the Lake. She brews a magic liquid from checkerberries, which, I am told, if you but drink a thimbleful, will enable you to regain your natural shape. There she goes now, over the bridge, on some such errand I dare say."
Ned watched the fairy stepping across the silver network which hung above a miniature Niagara that he could easily have spanned with a single step. Catching up a handful of berries he followed her, not heeding the Gnome's remark "that she would probably prefer to pick them herself," and, almost treading on some of the fairies who were blowing about in the long grass like the flowers they represented, threw the berries in a heap at the door of her castle.
It was, indeed, a most beautiful little palace. Made of brilliant crystals, it sparkled in the sun like a rainbow. Inside, it was even more exquisite, for all her little subjects, the flower fairies and the woodland fays, had adorned it with many lovely things.
Ned stooped over and peeped in at the doorway. There was a bright light inside which came from a little star suspended from the ceiling, the crystal walls on all sides reflecting the light with great brilliancy. Here and there were draped beautiful laces, no doubt spun by the spiders kept by the fairies for that purpose.
"Come," said the Gnome somewhat impatiently, as Ned's curiosity still held him at the little castle's doorway. "Come away, or else the Queen will not return. How is she to enter if you block up her entrance?"
Following his advice, Ned withdrew some little distance and stood watching the gay scene around him.
Hundreds of insects were flying about and large, gay-winged butterflies fluttered over the flowers. On some he noticed tiny figures and others with blades of grass tied around the necks of robins, bluebirds and golden orioles were also flying about in mid-air, while some sailed on the silver backs of fishes or floated in shells upon the water near his feet.
"Look!" cried the Gnome suddenly, "here she comes."
A half horsechestnut, with damask roseleaf cushions, mounted on four ivy-berry wheels and with four shining beetles for horses came driving up from the waterfall.
Leaning back in her carriage sat the Queen Fairy, fanning her face with a fly's wing.
The beetles came to a stand in front of the palace, and the Queen, gathering up her white satin dress, stepped out.
Instantly numerous ladies in waiting, jumped from off their butterfly steeds and escorted her through the palace door.
Ned cautiously peeped in again. The room was filled with fairies about as large as your thumb, dancing here and there and singing a low, sweet song.
On perceiving that a mortal was gazing at them they began to dance more slowly, and presently ceased altogether. Whereupon the Queen, looking about to ascertain the reason and catching sight of Ned's admiring face, exclaimed:
"No wonder you feel so faint, my little fays, and that you stop your merry dancing. The hot air is pouring in upon us from a fiery furnace outside. Look here, my giant friend," she added, coming up to Ned, "if you want to see how we live you mustn't hold your mouth open with astonishment. Your breath is very hot to us little people!"
With that the mischievous Queen jumped quite unexpectedly on Ned's nose and gave it a sharp pinch.
"Don't cry," said the fairy in a cheery voice, the laughs falling from her like waterdrops from the cascade just outside; "I only wanted to let you know what I could do; but I am ready to be as polite as you wish."
"May it please your highness," interposed the Gnome, who at this point squeezed himself through Ned's legs and entered the door, "to give my mortal friend a drop of your crystal nectar, in order that he may regain his boyish shape again?"
The Queen Fairy looked politely inquisitive.
"You see, your highness," the Gnome went on to explain, "he has eaten too heartily of gnome cake, and that together with a gobletful of gnome watermelon juice, has caused him much inconvenience, as well as an entire change of form."
No sooner had he finished speaking than the Queen called the Waterfall Fairy, the Brook Fairy and yet another, somewhat smaller, called Violet Water.
"Hasten," she said to them when they had assembled before her, "hasten to make a draft of crystal nectar, that this mortal may drink and assume once more his natural shape."
"Move off!" cried a shrill voice in Ned's ear, and, looking up, he saw a Snapdragon, who seemed to be a sort of policeman for the fairies.
"How can you expect these Ladies-in-Waiting to fulfill their Queen's commands if you stand there blocking the royal exit?"
"Tell your friend to sit him down and wait patiently, for it will take some time to brew the magic draft," said the Queen to the Gnome, who repeated her words to Ned.
He was very glad indeed to rest, for, not being accustomed to carry so much weight on his young legs, he felt very weary and somewhat discouraged.
However, relief was in sight, and, following the suggestion of the good fairy, he threw himself down on a mossy bank and waited.
Before long the three fairies returned, bearing between them a lily filled with a white liquid.
As they approached the Queen herself came forth from her crystal palace, followed by many of her subjects.
Stepping up to where Ned lay, she said in a soft voice: "Do not rise, for even now you are much too tall. I myself must pour this magic nectar upon your lips."
So saying, she stepped lightly upon a stone close by and, bending forward, placed the lily to Ned's mouth.
"DO NOT RISE," SAID THE FAIRY QUEEN.
The next moment he felt a strange sensation running through him, and looking down at his hands and feet was delighted to see that they were becoming smaller and smaller.
Though great was his delight, he did not forget his manners, and, turning to the little fairy, said: "How may I ever repay you for your great kindness? Indeed," he added, scarcely able to restrain the tears which came to his eyes, "whatever would my dear mother have thought had I returned to her in the form of a giant?"
"Thank me no more," answered the Fairy Queen, "for gladly will I do any favor for the boy who thinks of his mother first. In the future, should you need my aid, hang this ring about a bluebird's throat and send him to me."
And with these words she placed a slender gold ring upon Ned's little finger.
"But how shall I catch the bird?" asked Ned, his curiosity aroused before he had time to think of thanking her small highness.
"Whistle thrice upon a blade of grass," she answered, "and the bird will fly to thee. Then place the ring about his neck and bid him hasten to the Fairy Queen of the Lake."
During all this time Ned had been growing smaller and smaller. He had almost forgotten this, when his little friend, the Gnome, exclaimed: "There! You're your own self again!" At which Ned turned to the Queen, and, after thanking her again ran hastily to the brook to assure himself that such was the case.
So, bidding farewell to his kind friend, the Fairy Queen, and her three Ladies-in-Waiting, he accompanied the Gnome down the valley.
Story DNA
Moral
It is important to be polite and grateful, and to remember the needs of others, especially those smaller than yourself.
Plot Summary
Ned, transformed into a giant after eating too much gnome cake, journeys with a Gnome to find the Fairy of the Lake, who can brew a magic nectar to restore his shape. Initially, Ned's giant size causes him to be clumsy and somewhat rude to the tiny fairies, even blocking their Queen's castle entrance. The Queen Fairy playfully scolds him for his lack of consideration, but upon hearing his plight from the Gnome, she kindly orders her fairies to prepare the transforming nectar. After drinking the nectar, Ned shrinks back to his normal size, expresses profound gratitude, and receives a magic ring from the Queen for future assistance before continuing his journey with the Gnome.
Themes
Emotional Arc
discomfort to relief
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
David Cory was an American children's author known for his 'Little Jack Rabbit' stories and other fairy tales, often featuring nature-based magic and gentle morals.
Plot Beats (15)
- Ned, in giant form, travels with a Gnome along a crystal stream.
- They arrive at a waterfall where the Gnome points out the Fairy of the Lake's castle and her magic nectar.
- Ned, in his giant state, rudely throws berries at the castle door and blocks the entrance, ignoring the Gnome's advice.
- The Queen Fairy arrives in her carriage and is escorted into her sparkling crystal palace.
- Ned peeks in, startling the dancing fairies, and the Queen approaches him.
- The Queen playfully pinches Ned's nose and scolds him for his hot breath, which is uncomfortable for the tiny fairies.
- The Gnome explains Ned's transformation due to gnome cake and watermelon juice, requesting the magic nectar.
- The Queen instructs three fairies to brew the nectar, and Ned is told to sit and wait patiently.
- The three fairies return with a lily cup filled with the white magic liquid.
- The Queen Fairy herself pours the nectar onto Ned's lips.
- Ned feels a strange sensation and watches as his hands and feet shrink back to normal size.
- Ned expresses his profound gratitude, thinking of his mother.
- The Queen gives Ned a magic ring, explaining how to summon her aid with a bluebird.
- Ned fully returns to his normal size, thanks the Queen again, and bids farewell.
- Ned and the Gnome continue their journey down the valley.
Characters
Ned
Initially a human boy, he is transformed into a giant due to eating gnome cake and watermelon juice. In his giant form, he is described as having a 'distorted figure' and being 'much too tall' for the fairies, with hot breath. He is unaccustomed to carrying his own weight in this form, indicating a somewhat clumsy or unwieldy stature. He eventually returns to his 'boyish shape'.
Attire: No specific clothing is mentioned, but as a 'boy' in a fairy tale, likely simple, practical attire for a journey, perhaps linen or wool tunic and trousers in muted colors.
Wants: To regain his natural human form and return home to his mother.
Flaw: Curiosity can lead him into trouble or distract him; perhaps a bit naive.
Transforms from a giant back into his human boy form, learning gratitude and receiving a magical ring for future aid.
Curious, polite (remembering his manners even when delighted), thoughtful (thinking of his mother), and somewhat easily distracted (his curiosity about catching a bird).
The Gnome
Small, likely stout, as is typical for gnomes. He is able to squeeze himself through Ned's legs, indicating a very small stature. No specific details on height or build are given beyond his small size.
Attire: No specific clothing is mentioned, but traditionally gnomes wear earthy, practical attire, perhaps a pointed hat, tunic, and trousers in greens, browns, and reds.
Wants: To help Ned regain his natural shape.
Flaw: Can be a bit impatient.
Remains consistent as Ned's guide and helper.
Knowledgeable (knows about the Fairy of the Lake and the nectar), somewhat impatient ('somewhat impatiently'), helpful, and practical ('she would probably prefer to pick them herself').
The Queen Fairy
Tiny, about the size of a thumb, graceful. She is able to jump onto Ned's nose. She is described as having a 'white satin dress'.
Attire: A 'white satin dress', implying elegance and purity. As a fairy queen, it would likely be flowing and ethereal, perhaps with iridescent qualities.
Wants: To maintain order in her realm, to help those in need (especially those who show good character), and to perhaps playfully assert her power.
Flaw: None explicitly shown, but perhaps a slight inclination towards playful mischief.
Remains consistent as a benevolent and powerful magical figure.
Mischievous, powerful, polite, kind, wise, and observant (noticing Ned's hot breath and his admiration). She values thoughtfulness towards mothers.
Locations
Crystal Stream and Waterfall
A crystal-clear stream flowing down a valley, leading to a beautiful waterfall with a silvery sheen. Water sprites and water fairies slide down the waterfall. A miniature Niagara is spanned by a silver network bridge.
Mood: magical, serene, lively
Ned and the Gnome arrive here; the Fairy of the Lake is introduced; Ned collects checkerberries.
Fairy Queen's Crystal Palace
A small, exquisite palace made entirely of brilliant crystals, sparkling like a rainbow in the sun. Inside, crystal walls reflect light from a suspended star. Beautiful laces, spun by spiders, are draped throughout. The room is filled with thumb-sized fairies.
Mood: magical, enchanting, delicate, vibrant
Ned first encounters the Fairy Queen; the magic nectar is brewed and administered; Ned regains his shape.
Mossy Bank near the Palace
A soft, mossy bank located a little distance from the Crystal Palace. It's surrounded by long grass where flower fairies blow about, and numerous insects and butterflies flutter among flowers. Robins, bluebirds, and golden orioles fly about, some with grass blades tied around their necks.
Mood: peaceful, vibrant, natural, watchful
Ned waits here for the magic nectar to be brewed, observing the fairy world around him.