The Wreck

by David Cory · from The Iceberg Express

fairy tale adventure whimsical Ages 5-10 1562 words 7 min read
Cover: The Wreck

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 324 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Mary Louise and Mermaid Princess rode a special train. It was the Iceberg Express. The train was made of ice. It had soft seats. Pretty lights shone. They felt very cozy.

Mary Louise remembered another train. It was not like this one. That train had a loud noise. Then they were in the water.

They went to the dining car. Other animal friends were there. Mary Louise ate yummy food. Mermaid Princess ate yummy food. It was very good.

They looked out the window. Many fish swam by. Green plants grew. It was a pretty view. Mary Louise liked it.

It got dark outside. They got ready for bed. Mary Louise felt sleepy. She heard a soft song. She closed her eyes. She fell fast asleep.

Mary Louise woke up. Bells made loud noise. The train whistle screamed. All the lights went out. Mary Louise felt scared. Mermaid Princess was scared too.

Mary Louise tried to dress. It was very dark. She could not find her clothes. Mermaid Princess was worried. She put on the wrong clothes.

The train had a big bump. It stopped very fast. Mary Louise was in the water. The water felt warm. She saw Star Fish. She saw Polar Bear.

Polar Bear spoke. "We are in a warm sea." Far from home. It was a new place.

Star Fish met Little Polyp. Little Polyp was very small. Her family built homes. They built homes in the sea.

Mary Louise saw a boat. She and Mermaid Princess got in. Polar Bear put up a sail. They sailed on the sea. It was a new journey.

The air got cold. Mermaid Princess looked around. "My home is near," she said. She wanted to go home.

Mary Louise asked her friend. "Please make me a girl again." She wanted legs.

Mermaid Princess used her comb. Mary Louise had legs again. The friends said goodbye. Mermaid Princess swam home. She made a splash.

Original Story 1562 words · 7 min read

The Wreck

Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess settled themselves back comfortably in their seats and looked about them. The Iceberg Express certainly had every convenience. Of course almost everything was made of ice. But, then, so is most everything in a Pullman car made of steel. There was really very little difference except that the ice was much prettier, it was so clear and white, and the moss cushions that covered the seats were soft and springy. The crystal chandeliers that hung from the ceiling were resplendent with little twinkling lights, and the curtains at the ice-paned windows were made of the thinnest spun ice threads. Even the little drinking cups that were packed in a column, one within the other, at the ice water tank, were made of thin ice.

"I don't feel the least bit cold," said Mary Louise, turning with a laugh to her mermaid friend. "Do you?"

"Not the least bit," she replied.

"It's so different, though, from the first train we were on," continued Mary Louise. "It isn't anything like it really. Why, the first train was only an ordinary iceberg, don't you remember?"

"That's because we never went inside," replied the mermaid. "We didn't have the opportunity, the explosion came so soon."

"That's so," agreed Mary Louise. "The only think I distinctly remember is the Polar Bear porter calling out to be careful, and then the awful explosion. After that we were in the water and there was nothing around us but cracked ice."

"Dining car in the rear," announced the Polar Bear porter, walking down the isle with a menu card held gracefully in his paw. "Last call for the dining car!"

"Goodness!" exclaimed Mary Louise. "Let's hurry, or we won't be able to get anything to eat, and I always love to eat in a dining car."

Jumping up from the seat, she and the Princess swam down the aisle, across the vestibuled platform, through the next car, and then into the diner.

There were quite a number of passengers still seated at the different little tables. A soldierly looking Penguin sat at one and a few tables beyond a motherly looking Seal with a baby boy Seal at her side was just finishing some delicious looking pink water ice.

Mary Louise and the Mermaid sat down at the nearest table and looked over the menu. It was great fun selecting what they wanted, and when they had finished their water ices they felt that they had dined most sumptuously.

They then returned to their seats and looked out of the window for a time. Strange sights met their eyes as the train rushed on. There were no telegraph poles to count, nor cows to see grazing in green meadows. Instead, however, were numerous fish swimming here and there, some of gorgeous coloring, others of white or silver hue. Hills and valleys of sand, as well as long meadows of seaweed, stretched away for miles and miles. Strange-looking sea animals crawled close to the rushing train. If they came too close the suction of the water drew them along until they disappeared beneath the car.

As darkness settled down over the quiet deep, Mary Louise turned from the window with a sigh. "I feel sleepy already," she said, "and it's only supper time!"

"We'll tell the porter to make up our berths," said the Mermaid Princess. "He can do it while we are having our supper in the dining car."

On their return they found their berth in readiness. Soft green seaweed curtains hung gracefully to the floor, one of them being drawn aside, showing a little white bed. It looked as comfortable as her own little bed at home, Mary Louise thought.

It took the two little mermaids but a few minutes to undress, and as soon as their tired heads touched the pillow they were sound asleep.

Softly the seabells are ringing away,

Dipping and dripping and white with the spray,

Ding-dong, and ding-dong, and ding-dong, so deep,

The seabells are singing me softly to sleep.

Over and over again in her dreams little Mary Louise repeated this song. Then suddenly the bells seemed to change their tune. They clanged out wildly until a sudden loud crash awoke her with a start. The engine whistle was sending forth loud, warning cries. The Mermaid Princess began to tremble with fright.

"What do you suppose is the matter?" she whispered.

"I'm sure I don't know," replied little Mary Louise. "Perhaps there's something on the track."

By this time all the passengers were thrusting their heads out through the curtains of their berths.

"Porter, Porter!" called the Penguin, who had been vainly pressing the electric call-button.

But as usual, when a porter was wanted he is nowhere to be found.

Then the Baby Seal began to cry. Suddenly all the lights went out. Mary Louise hastily caught up her clothes and commenced dressing. "Thank goodness," she said in a trembling voice, "I don't have to bother with stockings!"

"I never was anything but a Mermaid," said the Princess in a frightened whisper, "so I don't know anything about them!"

"Where's my waist?" asked Mary Louise, hardly able to keep from crying. "I can't find it anywhere, and it's so dreadfully dark, too."

"Oh, dear me!" suddenly cried the Mermaid Princess. "I believe I'm trying to get yours on over mine. I'm so excited I forgot that I already had on my own."

"Well, I'm dressed at last," exclaimed Mary Louise after wriggling and squirming about for a few minutes longer. "Isn't it awful hard work dressing in a berth?"

Suddenly the engine bell clanged out more furiously than ever. The whistle shrieked again and again. Mary Louise looked with frightened eyes at the princess who gave a cry of terror and threw her arms about her neck as the lights again went out. Then there was a sudden crash, and the Iceberg Express shivered and toppled over.

The next instant Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess found themselves in the water.

It was quite warm and pleasant, and in a few minutes they reached the surface. To their surprise they saw their fellow passenger, the little Star Fish, swimming near them, and not far away, on a piece of ice, the Polar Bear porter.

"Where are we?" asked Mary Louise. But no one replied to her question, although the Star Fish looked all around, before and behind and both sides at once, which I'm sure you can't do no matter how hard you may try—while with his fifth eye he kept a bright lookout for sharks.

Presently the Polar Bear porter replied, "I think we are in the Caribbean Sea."

And if you don't know where that is, please get out you map of North America, although school is over, and find it.

"I never thought we'd get here so soon," said the little Star Fish at last. "You see, I boarded the train somewhere off Cape Cod. And that's a long way from here."

"I got on much farther north," said the Polar Bear porter, fanning himself with a large sea shell. "Gracious me, but it's dreadfully hot down here."

"This Caribbean Sea is as full of mountains as New Hampshire and Vermont are, but none of them have caps of snow like that which Mount Washington sometimes wears," said the Mermaid Princess. "Snow wouldn't last a second under this hot sun."

"Where did you learn all this?" asked Mary Louise.

"Oh, I went to the Coral School for Girls," answered the Mermaid Princess, and she sighed, for she suddenly remembered she was a long way from home.

Just then the little Star Fish met a soft little body, much smaller than himself, who invited him to visit her relatives, who live, by millions, in this mountain region.

So off they started for Coraltown, where this little Miss Polyp lived.

Her father and mother, brothers and sisters, uncles and aunts, were all polyps. They had built the coral islands by fastening themselves to the tops of the mountains under the sea, year after year, and at last their soft bodies had turned into stone. And now you know how these millions of little polyps finally made the small islands that dotted the surface of the water.

After the Star Fish and his little friend had swum away, Mary Louise spied a boat drifting toward them. So she and the Mermaid Princess scrambled inside, and the polar Bear porter hoisted a sail, which he found wrapped around a mast in the bottom of the boat.

"Hip, hurrah, we're off once more,"

Shouted the Polar Bear, waving his paw,

And the Mermaid Princess laughed in glee

As he held the tiller and sailed o'er the sea!

By and by the air became colder and the Mermaid said:

"We must be near my father's castle. I think I'll slip into the ocean and swim home."

"Before you go, please comb my hair with your magic comb so that I may be a little girl again," begged Mary Louise; "I don't want to be a mermaid forever."

As soon as the magic pearl comb touched Mary Louise's hair her tail changed into her own little pair of legs.

"Now kiss me good-by," said the little Mermaid Princess, and, with a splash, she disappeared in the ocean.


Story DNA

Plot Summary

Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess embark on a luxurious journey aboard the Iceberg Express, an underwater train. After enjoying the unique sights and amenities, a sudden and violent crash derails the train, plunging them into the warm Caribbean Sea. They reunite with other animal passengers and learn about the coral-building polyps before finding a boat. Eventually, as they near the Mermaid Princess's home, Mary Louise uses a magic comb to transform back into a human girl, bidding farewell to her friend as she sails towards her own home.

Themes

friendshipdiscoverytransformationresilience

Emotional Arc

comfort to surprise to wonder

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: personification, songs/rhymes

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs nature
Ending: happy
Magic: talking animals, mermaid princess, iceberg express train (underwater train made of ice), magic pearl comb (transformation), starfish with five eyes
the magic pearl comb (symbol of transformation and choice)the Iceberg Express (symbol of adventure and the unknown)

Cultural Context

Origin: American
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story uses elements of early 20th-century train travel (Pullman cars, porters, dining cars) but places them in a fantastical underwater setting.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess are comfortably riding the luxurious Iceberg Express, an underwater train made of ice.
  2. They recall a previous, less pleasant train journey on an ordinary iceberg that ended in an explosion.
  3. They visit the dining car, where they enjoy water ices alongside other animal passengers like a Penguin and a Seal.
  4. Returning to their seats, they observe the unique underwater landscape and sea creatures outside the window.
  5. As darkness falls, they prepare for bed in their berths, and Mary Louise falls asleep to a lullaby about seabells.
  6. Mary Louise is abruptly awakened by clanging bells, a shrieking whistle, and the lights going out, causing widespread panic.
  7. Amidst the chaos, Mary Louise struggles to dress in the dark, and the Mermaid Princess is also flustered.
  8. The train crashes, and the girls find themselves in the warm Caribbean Sea, encountering the Star Fish and Polar Bear porter.
  9. The Polar Bear porter identifies their location as the Caribbean Sea, far from where they boarded.
  10. The Star Fish is invited by a small polyp to visit Coraltown, where polyps build coral islands.
  11. Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess find a drifting boat, and the Polar Bear porter hoists a sail, setting them off again.
  12. As the air grows colder, the Mermaid Princess realizes they are near her father's castle and decides to swim home.
  13. Before parting, Mary Louise asks the Mermaid Princess to use her magic pearl comb to turn her back into a human girl.
  14. The magic comb transforms Mary Louise's tail into legs, and after a good-bye kiss, the Mermaid Princess disappears into the ocean.

Characters

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Mary Louise

human child female

A young girl of indeterminate height and build, with a human form that temporarily transforms into a mermaid's tail. Her skin is likely fair, given the context of a child's story, but no specific details are provided.

Attire: Initially wears typical child's clothing, which she struggles to put on in the dark. After transforming into a mermaid, she has a tail. Upon returning to human form, she regains her 'own little pair of legs,' implying her original clothes are restored or she is simply back to her human state.

Wants: To experience new adventures, enjoy her journey, and ultimately return to her normal human form.

Flaw: Fearful in moments of crisis (the wreck), struggles with practical tasks like dressing in the dark.

Experiences a new adventure and a second wreck, but ultimately learns to appreciate her human form and returns home, reaffirming her identity.

Her transformation from a human girl to a mermaid and back, specifically the moment her legs return.

Curious, adventurous, easily excited, a little fearful in danger, appreciative of new experiences (like dining cars), and practical (not bothering with stockings).

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Mermaid Princess

magical creature (mermaid) child female

A young mermaid with a fish tail instead of legs. No specific details on her skin tone or build are given, but she is described as 'little'.

Attire: Naturally wears her mermaid tail. When in the berth, she is implied to have some form of upper garment, as she tries to put on Mary Louise's 'waist' over her own.

Wants: To travel, enjoy the journey, and eventually return to her father's castle.

Flaw: Prone to extreme fright and panic during emergencies.

Experiences a journey and a wreck, but ultimately returns to her home, providing the means for Mary Louise to return to human form.

Her shimmering fish tail and the magic pearl comb she carries.

Calm and knowledgeable (initially), easily frightened, affectionate, educated (Coral School for Girls), and a bit wistful for home.

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Polar Bear porter

animal (polar bear) adult male

A large, white polar bear, standing upright like a human, serving as a train porter. He has paws capable of holding a menu card and fanning himself.

Attire: Implied to wear a porter's uniform, though not explicitly described. He carries a menu card as part of his role.

Wants: To perform his duties as a porter, survive the wreck, and find a comfortable environment.

Flaw: Not present when needed during the emergency.

Survives the wreck, adapts to a new environment, and helps Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess continue their journey.

A large, white polar bear wearing a porter's cap and uniform, fanning himself with a seashell.

Professional (initially), somewhat absent-minded (when needed during the wreck), adaptable (survives the wreck, sails a boat), and prone to complaining about the heat.

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Star Fish

animal (starfish) ageless unknown

A small starfish, described as 'little', with five eyes (one for lookout).

Attire: None, as a sea creature.

Wants: To travel, observe, and socialize.

Flaw: None explicitly shown.

Survives the wreck and continues his journey, making new acquaintances.

A starfish with five eyes, one of which is constantly on lookout.

Observant, friendly (invites others to visit relatives), and a bit talkative.

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Miss Polyp

magical creature (polyp) child female

A soft, very small body, much smaller than the Star Fish.

Attire: None, as a sea creature.

Wants: To socialize and invite new friends to her home.

Flaw: None explicitly shown.

Introduces the concept of coral formation and provides a destination for the Star Fish.

A tiny, soft-bodied polyp, barely visible next to a starfish.

Friendly, inviting.

Locations

The Iceberg Express Passenger Car

indoor Implied cold, but interior is comfortable

A train car where almost everything is made of clear, white ice. The seats are covered with soft, springy moss cushions. Crystal chandeliers with twinkling lights hang from the ceiling, and the windows have curtains made of thin spun ice threads. Even the drinking cups are thin ice.

Mood: Magical, whimsical, comfortable, unique

Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess travel and observe the unique environment of the train.

ice walls and ceiling moss cushions on seats crystal chandeliers ice-paned windows spun ice thread curtains ice water tank ice drinking cups

The Iceberg Express Dining Car

indoor afternoon Implied cold, but interior is comfortable

A dining car within the Iceberg Express, featuring small tables where various sea creatures dine. The overall construction is still of ice, similar to the passenger car.

Mood: Lively, social, unique, whimsical

Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess enjoy a meal and observe other passengers.

ice tables ice chairs various sea creature passengers (Penguin, Seal mother and baby) pink water ice dessert

Underwater Landscape (from train window)

outdoor day to dusk Underwater, deep sea conditions

A vast, deep-sea environment seen through the train's windows. It features hills and valleys of sand, long meadows of seaweed stretching for miles, and numerous fish of gorgeous coloring (white, silver, vibrant hues) swimming by. Strange-looking sea animals crawl close to the train.

Mood: Mysterious, serene, vast, alien

Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess observe the journey through the deep ocean.

hills of sand valleys of sand seaweed meadows colorful fish strange sea animals

Caribbean Sea

outdoor day Hot, tropical, sunny

A warm, pleasant tropical sea with numerous coral mountains beneath the surface. The surface is dotted with small coral islands. The air is hot, contrasting with the colder northern waters.

Mood: Warm, vibrant, exotic, surprising

Mary Louise and the Mermaid Princess find themselves here after the wreck and learn about Coraltown.

warm ocean water coral mountains (underwater) small coral islands (surface) hot sun date palms (implied by tropical setting)

Coraltown (underwater)

outdoor day Underwater, tropical sea conditions

An underwater 'town' built by millions of polyps on the tops of mountains under the sea. The polyps' soft bodies have turned into stone, forming the coral structures.

Mood: Dense, intricate, bustling, natural wonder

The Star Fish goes to visit his new friend's relatives, revealing the origin of the coral islands.

coral structures (formed by polyps) underwater mountains millions of polyps small sea creatures (Star Fish, Miss Polyp)