Wonderland
by David Cory · from The Iceberg Express
Adapted Version
Mary Louise was on a big, sandy beach. She felt a little lonely. The Polar Bear brought her to land. He sailed away. Mary Louise waved goodbye to him. An Old Fisherman sat nearby. He mended his net. "Hello, little girl," he said. Mary Louise stopped. "Come sit with me," he said. "I will tell you a story."
The Old Fisherman told a story. Long ago, land was here. A Bad Wizard came. He was very angry. He hit the ground. Water came out. The land went under the sea. The Small People live there now. They wait for help. "Come with me," he said. "We will see them. They live under the sea."
They went in the boat. A Fish Man came close. He looked at Mary Louise. He had big, round eyes. His mouth looked like a fish. He wore shiny clothes. He pointed down into the water. Mary Louise looked closer.
She leaned far over. She went into the water. It felt like a soft dream. She did not get wet. She was in a new place. The Fish Man stood by her. This was under the sea.
A shell carriage stood there. It was very shiny. Two gold fish pulled it. Two silver fish pulled it. A fish coachman drove them. He looked like a mackerel. "Jump in," said the Fish Man. Mary Louise sat on soft seats.
The carriage moved fast. Big, strange fish swam by. They had big eyes. They looked at Mary Louise. The Fish Man spoke to them. "She is kind to fish," he said. The big fish swam away. They were not scary.
They came to a big house. Many Small People lived there. They looked very strange. The Fish Man gave Mary Louise a box. "You can help us," he said. "You can break a bad spell."
Mary Louise was brave. "Yes, I will help," she said. She opened the box carefully. Words were on the box. "Land will rise," they said. "The sea will sink."
Mary Louise was back in the boat. The Old Fisherman smiled. A big green island came up. It came from the water. The sun shone on it. It was very beautiful. Mary Louise felt happy. She was very brave. She helped the Small People. The land was safe now.
Original Story
Wonderland
For a few minutes Mary Louise felt quite lonely. Presently she asked the Polar Bear to be kind enough to land her on the nearest shore.
At once the big kind animal trimmed in his sail and before long they entered a beautiful bay whose dark waters were dotted with the white sails of the fisher boats, and directly in front, climbing up to the sky, a high mountain on which stood a castle, where from a tall tower all night long shone a light that could hardly be told from the stars around it.
Mary Louise jumped from the boat to the beach, and then turned to wave good-by to the Polar Bear as he sailed away to the North Pole.
Nearby sat an old fisherman on a bench mending his net.
"Hello, little girl," he said, as Mary Louise hesitated. "Moor your little hulk 'longside o' me an' I'll spin you a yarn!"
Then he began to tell how, many hundred years ago, all the land around about was covered with a thick forest instead of the deep blue water of the bay.
Then came the great giant Cormoran, who was 18 feet high and 3 yards wide, and his wife Cormelian, who was just as big, and they brought from the hills great gray rocks which they piled up, one on the other, hundreds of feet high, until they had made a mountain. And on the top of this they built their castle, where they lived until the giant's wife died and was buried under the Chapel rock.
Then Jack the Giant Killer climbed up the mountain, and after a hard fight Cormoran was killed, and there were no more giants in the land.
Next came the Small People, who cut down most of the forest, and built cottages for themselves, ploughed the fields and made gardens.
But one day a great enchanter came that way, and his strange dress and long gray beard frightened the women and children, and they shut their doors in his face whenever he asked for a drink, for he had walked far and was tired and thirsty.
At last he found the principal man of the Small People, a little old crusty fellow and very miserly. And when the great enchanter asked him for a drink of water, the Small Man told him he didn't keep a hotel for beggars. And this made the great enchanter so angry that he struck the ground with his staff, so that it made a deep hole, and then he went upon his journey.
Soon a little spring of water bubbled up through the hole, and by and by a stream burst forth that swelled to a river, and after a time the whole land was drowned, and only the high mountain remained above the water.
But the Small People who were buried under the water didn't die. They lived on just the same, waiting for the enchanter to return and lift the spell, and the land to rise, again with all the people on it.
When the old fisherman had finished his story, he said, "I will take you in my boat to see the Small People deep down in the water.
"Yes, come with me in my boat and you shall see the Wonderland under the Sea."
As soon as the old fisherman had hoisted the sail, away they went out to sea over a wide path of moonlight like a silver road leading straight out to the sky where it dipped down to the water.
All of a sudden Mary Louise noticed something come close up under the side of the boat, and remain there staring straight at her. She bent over until she nearly touched the water, when what she had taken for a fish appeared to be a very odd-looking little man. He was even shorter than she, very broad about the shoulders, with funny little arms and feet that were brought together at the heels, with the toes turned straight out when he stood up, making them look like a fish's tail. His eyes were big and round, without any eyelids or eyebrows. But his mouth was the funniest part, and when he opened it, he looked like a fish trying to talk. He was dressed in silvery white, shaded to blue and green.
With a sudden nod, he pointed to the road which opened behind him down through the depths of the water until lost in the distance.
Little Mary Louise could not take her eyes from him, and, forgetting all about the old fisherman and the boat, she bent over more and more, so as to look closer at the funny little old man, until, splash! down she went into the water.
Then came a tremendous ringing in her ears and she felt her breath go and she knew nothing more until she found herself standing with the strange little fish man by the side of a splendid carriage made of a scallop shell, burnished until it shone with pearl and silver, and drawn by two beautiful gold-fish and two silver-fish harnessed with the silken threads of the finest sea-mosses, and driven by an old coachman that looked like a mackerel.
"We are the sea-horses of the deep,
And we race through the waters blue,
Faster than wind and swifter than tide
We gallop the ocean through."
"Jump in," said the little old fish man; and without a question Mary Louise stepped into the carriage and sat down on the beautiful pea-green cushions.
Then the little man got in, the mackerel-faced coachman cracked his whip, the gold and the silver fishes darted ahead, and away they went.
Great trees waved their long branches as the carriage swept past, and odd-looking shapes came out from behind them. Huge mouths opened and shut, long arms waved about trying to catch anything in their reach, and fierce looking monsters with fishes' heads came rushing in from all sides, to stare at little Mary Louise with their great savage eyes.
Presently the little old man stood up and bowing politely, told them that Mary Louise had never caught a fish with a cruel hook.
Then these dreadful monsters snapped their horny jaws and swam away.
At once the mackerel-faced coachman whipped up his team of gold and silver fishes and away they went spinning down the road again.
At last the carriage stopped in front of a fine mansion, and Mary Louise and the little old man jumped out on the smooth beach of sparkling sand which sloped down to a glassy lake on which curious and beautiful little boats were sailing in all directions.
Along the edge of the lake were many houses, some stately castles and some little cottages. The little cottages were covered with creeping plants abloom with red flowers and the stately castles with moss like vines.
But the people. Oh dear me! They were the strangest folk! Some had very long noses and ugly looking teeth in their wide mouths, and others were so thin they looked like small sticks, and others so round that they could almost trundle themselves along like a coach-wheel. Some were dressed in the shabbiest clothes, others in splendid suits, and some covered with knobs and spikes and strange looking armor.
"Come," said the little fish man, and he led Mary Louise into his house.
Presently he brought out from a closet a quaintly shaped box. "It is the legend of Wonderland that a little girl shall break the spell that hangs over us. For it is deemed well-nigh impossible that a mortal child would venture beneath the water to visit us. Therefore, little Mary Louise, if I call all my people together, will you open this box and deliver us from the spell of the Great Enchanter?"
"I will," she answered bravely, and at once the little old fish man called together all his subjects.
As little Mary Louise looked at the box she saw printed on the cover these words:
"If a little girl mortal
Shall uncover this prize,
The sea will sink
And the land will rise."
And, would you believe it, the first thing she knew after carefully opening the box, she was back in the boat with the old sailor, who was shading his eyes and looking towards a beautiful green island that had suddenly come out of the water.
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Plot Summary
Mary Louise is left on a shore where an old fisherman tells her the legend of Wonderland, a land submerged by an enchanter's curse. Intrigued, she is drawn into the water by a mysterious fish-man and transported to the magical underwater world. There, she learns she is prophesied to break the spell. Mary Louise bravely opens a magical box, fulfilling the prophecy, and is instantly returned to the fisherman's boat as the enchanted land rises from the sea, transformed into a beautiful island.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to wonder to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story draws on classic fairy tale tropes, particularly the 'journey to a magical land' and 'breaking a spell' narratives common in European folklore.
Plot Beats (12)
- Mary Louise is dropped off on a shore by a Polar Bear and feels lonely.
- She meets an old fisherman who tells her the story of giants, the Small People, and an enchanter who flooded their land, turning it into Wonderland.
- The fisherman offers to take her to see the Small People under the sea.
- While on the boat, a strange fish-man appears and beckons Mary Louise.
- Mary Louise, captivated, falls into the water and is transported to an underwater world.
- She finds herself in a scallop-shell carriage drawn by fish, driven by a mackerel-faced coachman.
- They journey through the underwater world, encountering various sea monsters who are appeased when told Mary Louise is kind to fish.
- They arrive at a mansion in the underwater city, filled with strange-looking inhabitants.
- The fish-man reveals that Mary Louise is the mortal child prophesied to break the spell.
- Mary Louise agrees to help and opens a box with an inscription promising the land will rise.
- Upon opening the box, Mary Louise is instantly returned to the fisherman's boat.
- She sees a beautiful green island, the formerly submerged land, rising from the water.
Characters
Mary Louise
A small, curious young girl, likely of average height and build for her age. Her specific ethnicity is not mentioned, but given the story's setting, she could be inferred as European.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a child on an adventure, perhaps a plain dress or skirt and blouse, made of durable fabric like cotton or linen, in muted colors.
Wants: To explore, to understand the strange new world she finds herself in, and ultimately, to help the Small People.
Flaw: Her childlike impulsiveness, which leads her to fall into the water.
Transforms from a lonely, hesitant child into a brave hero who breaks a magical spell.
Curious, brave, kind, observant, adventurous.
Polar Bear
A very large, powerful polar bear with thick, white fur. He is described as 'big kind animal'.
Attire: None, as he is an animal, but he is described as 'trimmed in his sail', implying he has some kind of sailing apparatus.
Wants: To assist Mary Louise in her journey.
Flaw: None apparent in the story.
Aids Mary Louise at the beginning of her journey and then departs.
Kind, helpful, accommodating.
Old Fisherman
An old man, likely weathered by years of sea life, with a sturdy build. His skin would be tanned and lined from sun and wind exposure. Given the story's likely European folk tale influence, he would be of European descent.
Attire: Practical, worn clothing typical of a fisherman: a thick woolen sweater, sturdy canvas trousers, and possibly a sou'wester hat or a simple knitted cap. His clothes would be patched and faded, smelling of salt and fish.
Wants: To share his knowledge and offer assistance to Mary Louise.
Flaw: None apparent in the story.
Introduces Mary Louise to the history of Wonderland and takes her to the underwater realm.
Friendly, hospitable, a good storyteller, wise.
Great Enchanter
A powerful magical being, whose appearance is striking and somewhat intimidating. His specific ethnicity is not mentioned, but his 'strange dress' suggests he is an outsider.
Attire: Described as having 'strange dress', implying unusual or exotic attire, perhaps flowing robes in dark, rich colors, possibly embroidered with mystical symbols, made of heavy fabrics like velvet or brocade.
Wants: To punish those who deny him hospitality, to assert his power.
Flaw: His quick temper and pride.
His actions create the underwater Wonderland, setting the stage for the story's main conflict.
Powerful, easily angered, vengeful, solitary.
Little Old Fish Man
Very short, even shorter than Mary Louise, but broad-shouldered. His arms and feet are 'funny little', with heels brought together and toes turned straight out, resembling a fish's tail when standing. His skin might have a slightly aquatic sheen.
Attire: Dressed in 'silvery white, shaded to blue and green', suggesting clothing made of iridescent, scale-like material that blends with the water.
Wants: To find a mortal child to break the spell on his people and land.
Flaw: His people's reliance on an external force (Mary Louise) to break the spell.
Serves as Mary Louise's guide and the catalyst for her heroic act.
Polite, helpful, hopeful, a leader among his people.
Locations
Beautiful Bay and Mountain Shore
A beautiful bay with dark, deep blue waters dotted with white sails of fisher boats. Directly in front, a high mountain climbs to the sky, topped by a castle with a tall tower from which a light shines all night, almost indistinguishable from stars. The shore is a beach where Mary Louise lands.
Mood: mysterious, inviting, historical
Mary Louise arrives, meets the old fisherman, and learns the history of Wonderland.
Moonlit Open Sea
The open sea at night, illuminated by a wide path of moonlight stretching like a silver road leading straight out to the sky where it dips down to the water. The water's surface is calm, reflecting the moonlight.
Mood: magical, serene, mysterious
Mary Louise journeys with the fisherman and encounters the fish-man, leading to her fall into the water.
Wonderland Under the Sea
A vibrant, fantastical underwater world. It features great, waving 'trees' (seaweed forests), odd-looking shapes, huge mouths opening and closing, long waving arms, and fierce monsters with fish heads. The 'road' is a clear path through the depths. Later, a smooth beach of sparkling sand slopes down to a glassy lake, surrounded by houses, stately castles, and cottages. Cottages are covered with creeping plants with red flowers, castles with moss-like vines.
Mood: magical, wondrous, initially frightening, then welcoming
Mary Louise explores the underwater world, meets its inhabitants, and is asked to break the spell.