MAID MALEEN

by Brothers Grimm

fairy tale transformation solemn Ages 8-14 1817 words 8 min read
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Original Story 1817 words · 8 min read

MAID MALEEN

A Ghibli-style illustration of Maid Maleen in her tower.

There was once a King who had a son who asked in marriage the daughter of a mighty King. She was called Maid Maleen, and was very beautiful. As her father wished to give her to another, the Prince was rejected.

But since they both loved each other with all their hearts, they would not give each other up, and Maid Maleen said to her father, “I can and will take no other for my husband.”

Then the King flew into a passion, and ordered a dark tower to be built, into which no ray of sunlight or moonlight should enter. When it was finished, he said, “Therein shall you be imprisoned for seven years, and then I will come and see if your perverse spirit is broken.”

Meat and drink for the seven years were carried into the tower; and then she and her waiting-woman were led into it and walled up, and thus cut off from the sky and from the earth. There they sat in the darkness, and knew not when day or night began. The King’s Son often went round and round the tower, and called their names, but no sound from without 361 pierced through the thick walls. What else could they do but lament and complain?

Meanwhile, the time passed, and by the small amount of food and drink left they knew that the seven years were coming to an end. They thought the moment of their deliverance was come. But no stroke of the hammer was heard, no stone fell out of the wall, and it seemed to Maid Maleen that her father had forgotten her. As they had food for only a short time longer, and saw a miserable death awaiting them, Maid Maleen said, “We must try our last chance, and see if we can break through the wall.”

She took the bread-knife, and picked and bored at the mortar of a stone, and when she was tired, the waiting-maid took her turn. With great labor they succeeded in getting out one stone, then a second, and third. And when three days were over, the first ray of light fell on their darkness, and at last the opening was so large that they could look out.

The sky was blue, and a fresh breeze played on their faces; but how melancholy everything looked all around! Her father’s castle lay in ruins, the town and the villages were, so far as could be seen, destroyed by fire, the fields far and wide laid to waste, and no human being was visible.

When the opening in the wall was large enough for them to slip through, the waiting-maid sprang down first, and then Maid Maleen followed. But where were they to go? The enemy had ravaged the whole kingdom, driven away the King, and slain all the inhabitants. They wandered forth to seek another country, but nowhere did they find a shelter, or a human being to give them a mouthful of bread. Their need was 362 so great that they were forced to appease their hunger with nettle-plants.

When, after long journeying, they came into another country, they tried to get work everywhere. But wherever they knocked they were turned away, and no one would have pity on them.

At last they arrived in a large city and went to the royal palace. There also they were ordered to go away, but at last the cook said that they might stay in the kitchen and be scullions.

The King’s Son in whose kingdom they were, was, however, the very man who had been betrothed to Maid Maleen. His father had chosen another Bride for him, whose face was as ugly as her heart was wicked. The wedding was fixed, and the girl had already arrived. Because of her great ugliness, however, she shut herself in her room, and allowed no one to see her, and Maid Maleen had to take her her meals from the kitchen.

When the day came for the Bride and the Bridegroom to go to church, she was ashamed of her ugliness, and afraid that if she showed herself in the streets, she would be mocked and laughed at by the people. Then said she to Maid Maleen, “A great piece of luck has befallen you. I have sprained my foot, and cannot walk through the streets. You shall put on my wedding-clothes and take my place. A greater honor than that you cannot have!”

Maid Maleen, however, refused it, and said, “I wish for no honor which is not suitable for me.”

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It was in vain, too, that the Bride offered her gold. At last 363 she said angrily, “If you do not obey me, it shall cost you your life. I have but to speak the word, and your head will lie at your feet.”

Then she was forced to obey, and put on the Bride’s magnificent clothes and all her jewels. When she entered the royal hall, every one was amazed at her great beauty, and the King said to his son, “This is the Bride whom I have chosen for you, and whom you must lead to church.”

The Bridegroom was astonished, and thought, “She is like my Maid Maleen, and I should believe that it was she herself, but she has long been shut up in the tower or dead.”

He took her by the hand and led her to church. On the way was a nettle-plant, and she said:

“What are you saying?” asked the King’s Son.

“Nothing,” she replied, “I was only thinking of Maid Maleen.”

He was surprised that she knew about her, but kept silence. When they came to the foot-plank into the churchyard, she said:

“What are you saying there?” asked the King’s Son.

“Nothing,” she replied, “I was only thinking of Maid Maleen.”

364 When they came to the church-door, she said once more:

“What are you saying there?” asked he.

“Ah,” she answered, “I was only thinking of Maid Maleen.”

Then he took out a precious chain, put it round her neck, and fastened the clasp. Thereupon they entered the church, and the priest joined their hands together before the altar, and married them. He led her home but she did not speak a single word the whole way.

When they got back to the royal palace, she hurried into the Bride’s chamber, put off the magnificent clothes and the jewels, dressed herself in her gray gown, and kept nothing but the jewel on her neck, which she had received from the Bridegroom.

When the night came, and the Bride was to be led into the apartment of the King’s Son, she let her veil fall over her face, that he might not observe the deception.

As soon as every one had gone away, he said to her, “What did you say to the nettle-plant which was growing by the wayside?”

“To which nettle-plant?” asked she; “I don’t talk to nettle-plants.”

“If you did not do it, then you are not the true Bride,” said he.

So she bethought herself, and said:

365 She went out and sought Maid Maleen. “Girl, what have you been saying to the nettle?”

“I said nothing but:

The Bride ran back into the chamber, and said, “I know now what I said to the nettle,” and she repeated the words which she had just heard.

“But what did you say to the foot-bridge when we went over it?” asked the King’s Son.

“To the foot-bridge?” she answered. “I don’t talk to foot-bridges.”

“Then you are not the true Bride.”

She again said:

and ran out and found Maid Maleen. “Girl, what did you say to the foot-bridge?”

“I said nothing but:

“That costs you your life!” cried the Bride, but she hurried into the room, and said, “I know now what I said to the foot-bridge,” and she repeated the words.

“But what did you say to the church-door?”

“To the church-door?” she replied; “I don’t talk to church-doors.”

366 “Then you are not the true Bride.”

She went out and found Maid Maleen, and said, “Girl, what did you say to the church-door?”

“I said nothing but:

“That will break your neck for you!” cried the Bride, and flew into a terrible passion, but she hastened back into the room, and said, “I know now what I said to the church-door,” and she repeated the words.

“But where have you the jewel which I gave you at the church-door?”

“What jewel?” she answered; “you did not give me any jewel.”

“I myself put it round your neck, and I myself fastened it. If you do not know that, you are not the true Bride.”

He drew the veil from her face, and when he saw her ugliness, he sprang back terrified, and said, “How come you here? Who are you?”

“I am your betrothed Bride, but because I feared lest the people should mock me when they saw me out of doors, I commanded the scullery-maid to dress herself in my clothes, and to go to church instead of me.”

“Where is the girl?” said he; “I want to see her, go and bring her here.”

She went out and told the servants that the scullery-maid was an impostor, and that they must take her out into the courtyard and strike off her head.

The servants laid hold of Maid Maleen and wanted to drag 367 her out, but she screamed so loudly for help, that the King’s Son heard her voice, hurried out of his chamber and ordered them to set the maiden free.

Lights were brought, and then he saw on her neck the gold chain which he had given her at the church-door.

“You are the true Bride,” said he, “who went with me to church. Come with me now to my room.”

When they were both alone, he said, “On the way to the church you did name Maid Maleen, who was my betrothed Bride. If I could believe it possible, I should think she was standing before me—you are like her in every respect.”

She answered, “I am Maid Maleen, who for your sake was imprisoned seven years in the darkness, who suffered hunger and thirst, and has lived so long in want and poverty. To-day, however, the sun is shining on me once more. I was married to you in the church, and I am your lawful wife.”

Then they kissed each other, and were happy all the days of their lives.

The false Bride was rewarded for what she had done by having her head cut off.

The tower in which Maid Maleen had been imprisoned remained standing for a long time, and when the children passed by it, they sang:


Story DNA

Moral

True love and virtue will ultimately triumph over adversity and deceit, and those who commit evil will face just consequences.

Plot Summary

Maid Maleen is imprisoned in a dark tower for seven years by her father for refusing to marry anyone but her beloved Prince. After escaping the ruined tower into a desolate world, she and her waiting-woman become scullions in a distant palace, where her former betrothed is about to marry a wicked princess. The princess, ashamed of her ugliness, forces Maid Maleen to impersonate her at the wedding. During the ceremony, Maid Maleen's cryptic remarks and a distinguishing jewel lead the Prince to uncover the deception, recognize his true love, and reunite with her, while the false bride faces justice.

Themes

perseverancetrue love vs. superficialityjusticeidentity

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition (of Maid Maleen's name and the verses), rule of three (questions about the journey)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: the almost supernatural endurance of Maid Maleen and her maid in the tower
the dark tower (imprisonment, isolation, suffering)the nettle-plant (humiliation, hardship, survival)the gold chain (recognition, true identity, unbreakable bond)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects common themes in medieval European folklore, such as imprisonment, war-torn kingdoms, and the triumph of virtue. The specific details of the tower and the wandering are characteristic of Grimm's tales.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Maid Maleen and a Prince fall in love, but her father rejects the Prince and demands she marry another.
  2. Maid Maleen refuses, leading her father to imprison her and her waiting-woman in a sealed tower for seven years with provisions.
  3. After seven years, they realize they are forgotten and use a bread-knife to painstakingly dig their way out of the tower.
  4. Upon escaping, they find Maleen's kingdom destroyed by war, her father's castle in ruins, and no one alive.
  5. They wander as beggars, eating nettles, until they reach a new kingdom and find work as scullions in the royal kitchen.
  6. The King's Son of this kingdom is Maid Maleen's former betrothed, and he is to marry an ugly, wicked princess.
  7. The wicked princess, ashamed of her appearance, forces Maid Maleen to take her place at the wedding ceremony under threat of death.
  8. During the procession to the church, Maid Maleen speaks three cryptic verses to a nettle-plant, a foot-bridge, and a church-door, referencing her past suffering.
  9. The Prince questions her about these utterances, and she attributes them to 'Maid Maleen,' while he also gives her a precious chain at the church door.
  10. After the wedding, Maid Maleen returns to her scullion clothes, keeping only the chain, while the false bride prepares for the wedding night.
  11. The Prince repeatedly questions the false bride about the verses and the chain, which she cannot answer, forcing her to ask Maid Maleen for the information.
  12. Finally, the Prince demands to see the jewel, which the false bride does not possess, and he pulls off her veil, revealing her ugliness.
  13. The false bride confesses her deception and orders Maid Maleen's execution, but the Prince intervenes, recognizing the chain.
  14. Maid Maleen reveals her true identity, and the Prince recognizes her as his long-lost love.
  15. Maid Maleen and the Prince are joyfully reunited and live happily ever after, and the false bride is executed.

Characters

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Maid Maleen

human young adult female

Very beautiful, initially imprisoned and deprived, later disguised as a scullery maid

Attire: Initially fine dresses, then rags as a scullery maid, then the Bride's magnificent wedding clothes and jewels, finally her gray gown

The gold chain at her neck, hidden beneath her rags

Loyal, patient, resilient, virtuous

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King's Son

human young adult male

Not explicitly described, but handsome and of noble bearing

Attire: Princely attire, wedding garments

The precious chain he gives to his bride

Loyal, discerning, persistent

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False Bride

human young adult female

Ugly, wicked

Attire: Magnificent wedding clothes and jewels

Her unveiled, ugly face

Deceitful, cruel, vain

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Waiting-Woman

human adult female

Not described

Attire: Simple dress suitable for a servant

Bread-knife used to escape the tower

Loyal, helpful

Locations

Dark Tower

indoor constant darkness N/A, perpetually enclosed

A tall, dark tower with thick walls, built without windows to block sunlight and moonlight.

Mood: Oppressive, desolate, hopeless

Maid Maleen is imprisoned for seven years and eventually escapes.

thick stone walls small amount of food and drink bread-knife mortar between stones small opening to the outside

Ruined Kingdom

outdoor Implied desolation, possibly after a harsh season

A kingdom ravaged by war, with the King's castle in ruins, towns and villages destroyed by fire, and fields laid to waste.

Mood: Desolate, melancholic, dangerous

Maid Maleen and her waiting-woman emerge from the tower and find their kingdom destroyed.

ruined castle burned villages barren fields nettle-plants

Royal Palace Kitchen

indoor N/A

A kitchen in the palace of the King's Son, where food is prepared and scullions work.

Mood: Humble, subservient, place of hiding

Maid Maleen works as a scullion, hiding her identity.

cooking implements scullery tasks food preparation gray gown of Maid Maleen

Church

indoor daytime N/A

A church with an altar, a foot-plank in the churchyard, and a church-door.

Mood: Solemn, ceremonial, tense

Maid Maleen, disguised as the bride, is unknowingly married to the King's Son.

altar priest foot-plank church-door nettle-plant by the wayside