RAPUNZEL

by Brothers Grimm

fairy tale transformation tender Ages 5-10 1414 words 7 min read
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RAPUNZEL

A Ghibli-style illustration of Rapunzel's tower in the enchanted garden.

There was once a man and a woman, who had long in vain wished for a child. At length, the woman hoped that God was about to grant her desire.

These people had a little window at the back of their house from which a splendid garden could be seen. It was full of the most beautiful flowers and herbs. It was, however, surrounded by a high wall, and no one dared to go into it because it belonged to a Witch, who had great power and was dreaded by all the world.

One day, the woman was standing by this window and looking down into the garden, when she saw a bed which was planted with the most beautiful rampion (rapunzel), and it looked so fresh and green that she longed for it, and had the greatest desire to eat some.

This desire increased every day, and as she knew that she could not get any of it, she quite pined away, and looked pale and miserable.

Then her husband was alarmed, and asked, “What ails you, dear Wife?”

25 “Ah,” she replied, “if I can’t get some of the rampion to eat, which is in the garden behind our house, I shall die.”

The man, who loved her, thought, “Sooner than let your wife die, bring her some of the rampion yourself, let it cost you what it will!”

In the twilight of evening, he clambered over the wall into the garden of the Witch, hastily clutched a handful of rampion, and took it to his wife. She at once made herself a salad of it, and ate it with much relish.

She, however, liked it so much—so very much—that the next day she longed for it three times as much as before. If he was to have any rest, her husband must once more descend into the garden. In the gloom of evening, therefore, he let himself down again. But when he had clambered down the wall he was terribly afraid, for he saw the Witch standing before him.

“How dare you,” said she with angry look, “descend into my garden and steal my rampion like a thief? You shall suffer for it!”

“Ah,” answered he, “let mercy take the place of justice! I had to do it out of necessity. My wife saw your rampion from the window, and felt such a longing for it that she would have died, if she had not got some to eat.”

Then the Witch let her anger be softened, and said to him, “If the case be as you say, I will allow you to take away with you as much rampion as you will, only I make one condition, you must give me the child which your wife will bring into the world. It shall be well treated, and I will care for it like a mother.”

The man in his terror consented to everything, and when the 26 woman at last had a little daughter, the Witch appeared at once, gave the child the name of Rapunzel, and took it away with her.

Rapunzel grew into the most beautiful child beneath the sun. When she was twelve years old, the Witch shut her into a tower, which lay in a forest, and had neither stairs nor door. But quite at the top was a little window. When the Witch wanted to go in, she placed herself beneath this, and cried:

Rapunzel had magnificent long hair, fine as spun gold, and when she heard the voice of the Witch, she unfastened her braided tresses and wound them round one of the hooks of the window above. And then the hair fell twenty ells down, and the Witch climbed up by it.

After a year or two, it came to pass that the King’s Son rode through the forest and went by the tower. Then he heard a song, which was so charming that he stood still and listened. This was Rapunzel, who in her solitude passed her time in letting her sweet voice resound.

The King’s Son wanted to climb up to her, and looked for the door of the tower, but none was to be found. He rode home, but the singing had so deeply touched his heart, that every day he went out into the forest and listened to it.

Once when he was thus standing behind a tree, he saw that a Witch came there, and he heard how she cried:

27 Then Rapunzel let down the braids of her hair, and the Witch climbed up to her.

“If that is the ladder by which one mounts, I will for once try my fortune,” said he.

The next day when it began to grow dark, he went to the tower and cried:

Immediately the hair fell down, and the King’s Son climbed up.

At first Rapunzel was terribly frightened when a man, such as her eyes had never yet beheld, came to her. But the King’s Son began to talk to her quite like a friend, and told her that his heart had been so stirred, that it had let him have no rest, so he had been forced to see her.

Then Rapunzel lost her fear, and when he asked her if she would take him for her husband, and she saw that he was young and handsome, she thought, “He will love me more than old Dame Gothel does;” and she said yes, and laid her hand in his.

She said also, “I will willingly go away with you, but I do not know how to get down. Bring with you a skein of silk every time that you come, and I will weave a ladder with it. When that is ready I will descend, and you will take me on your horse.”

They agreed that until that time, he should come to her every evening, for the old woman came by day. The Witch remarked nothing of this, until once Rapunzel said to her, “Tell me, Dame Gothel, how it happens that you are so much heavier 28 for me to draw up, than the young King’s Son—he is with me in a moment.”

“Ah! you wicked Child!” cried the Witch. “What do I hear you say! I thought I had separated you from all the world, and yet you have deceived me!”

In her anger she clutched Rapunzel’s beautiful tresses, wrapped them twice round her left hand, seized a pair of scissors with the right, and snip, snap, they were cut off, and the lovely braids lay on the ground. And she was so pitiless that she took poor Rapunzel into a desert, where she had to live in great grief and misery.

On the same day, however, that she cast out Rapunzel, the Witch, in the evening, fastened the braids of hair which she had cut off, to the hook of the window; and when the King’s Son came and cried:

she let the hair down.

The King’s Son ascended. He did not find his dearest Rapunzel above, but the Witch, who gazed at him with wicked and venomous looks.

“Aha!” she cried mockingly, “you would fetch your dearest! But the beautiful bird sits no longer singing in the nest. The cat has got it, and will scratch out your eyes as well. Rapunzel is lost to you! You will never see her more!”

The King’s Son was beside himself with grief and in his despair he leapt down from the tower. He escaped with his life, but the thorns into which he fell, pierced his eyes. Then he 29 wandered quite blind about the forest, ate nothing but roots and berries, and did nothing but lament and weep over the loss of his dearest wife.

Thus he roamed about in misery for some years, and at length came to the desert where Rapunzel lived in wretchedness. He heard a voice, and it seemed so familiar to him that he went toward it. When he approached, Rapunzel knew him, and fell on his neck and wept. Two of her tears wetted his eyes and they grew clear again, and he could see with them as before.

He led her to his Kingdom where he was joyfully received, and they lived for a long time, happy and contented.

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Ghibli-style decorative element for i 040.

Ghibli-style decorative element for i 040.


Story DNA

Moral

True love and perseverance can overcome even the most formidable obstacles and cruelest enchantments.

Plot Summary

A desperate husband steals rampion from a witch's garden for his pregnant wife, promising their unborn child in return. The witch takes the baby, Rapunzel, and later locks her in a tower, accessible only by her long hair. A prince discovers Rapunzel, falls in love, and plans their escape, but Rapunzel accidentally reveals their secret to the witch. Enraged, the witch cuts Rapunzel's hair, banishes her to a desert, and blinds the prince. After years of wandering, the blind prince finds Rapunzel and their children; her tears restore his sight, and they return to his kingdom to live happily ever after.

Themes

imprisonment and freedomlove and devotionconsequences of desireperseverance

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition of phrases, direct address for spells/calls

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: witch's power, magical garden, Rapunzel's impossibly long, strong hair, tears with healing properties
Rapunzel's hair (freedom, beauty, connection)the tower (imprisonment, isolation)the rampion (forbidden desire, catalyst for fate)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

The Grimm's version is a compilation of older oral traditions, reflecting common European folklore motifs of imprisonment, magical hair, and a prince's quest.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A childless couple lives next to a witch's walled garden.
  2. The pregnant wife craves rampion from the witch's garden to the point of illness.
  3. The husband steals rampion for his wife, is caught by the witch, and promises their firstborn child in exchange for his life and the rampion.
  4. The witch takes the newborn girl, names her Rapunzel, and raises her.
  5. At age twelve, the witch imprisons Rapunzel in a tall tower without doors or stairs, accessible only by Rapunzel's long hair.
  6. A prince, riding through the forest, hears Rapunzel singing and is captivated.
  7. The prince observes the witch calling Rapunzel's hair down and uses the same method to visit Rapunzel.
  8. Rapunzel and the prince fall in love and plan her escape by weaving a ladder from silk the prince brings.
  9. Rapunzel innocently reveals the prince's visits to the witch, who discovers the deception.
  10. The witch, in a fury, cuts off Rapunzel's hair, banishes her to a desert, and then uses the cut hair to trap the prince.
  11. The prince climbs the hair, finds the witch instead of Rapunzel, and is told Rapunzel is lost to him.
  12. In despair, the prince leaps from the tower, falling into thorns that blind him.
  13. The blind prince wanders for years, eating roots and berries, lamenting Rapunzel.
  14. He eventually finds Rapunzel in the desert, now with twins, and her tears restore his sight.
  15. The prince leads Rapunzel and their children to his kingdom, where they live happily.

Characters

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Rapunzel

human child female

Exceedingly beautiful, with extraordinarily long, golden hair

Attire: Simple dress, likely homespun, appropriate for a girl confined to a tower

Impossibly long, golden hair cascading from a tower window

Initially frightened but trusting, obedient, and ultimately loving

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Witch

magical creature elderly female

Dreaded, with great power, suggesting a formidable and perhaps grotesque appearance

Attire: Dark, flowing robes, perhaps adorned with strange symbols or charms

A pair of scissors raised to cut Rapunzel's hair

Cruel, possessive, and easily angered

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King's Son

human young adult male

Handsome and persistent

Attire: Fine clothing befitting a prince, including a tunic, hose, and perhaps a cloak

Climbing Rapunzel's hair, silhouetted against the tower

Brave, determined, and romantic

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Man

human adult male

Driven by love for his wife

Attire: Simple peasant clothing

Climbing over the witch's garden wall in twilight

Loving, desperate, and fearful

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Woman

human adult female

Longing for rampion

Attire: Simple peasant clothing

Gazing longingly out the window at the rampion

Desperate, longing, and demanding

Locations

Witch's Garden

outdoor twilight

A splendid garden full of beautiful flowers and herbs, surrounded by a high wall.

Mood: coveted, forbidden, dangerous

The husband steals rampion for his wife, encountering the Witch and making a deal for their future child.

rampunzel bed high wall flowers herbs

Rapunzel's Tower

outdoor

A tall tower in a forest, with no stairs or door, but a small window at the top.

Mood: isolated, lonely, magical

Rapunzel is imprisoned, sings to pass the time, and is visited by the Witch and later the Prince.

tower forest small window long golden hair

Desert Wasteland

outdoor

A desolate desert where Rapunzel is banished to live in grief and misery.

Mood: desolate, grief-stricken, miserable

Rapunzel lives in exile until she is reunited with the blinded Prince, and her tears restore his sight.

sand sparse vegetation barren landscape