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THE BLUE LIGHT

by Brothers Grimm

THE BLUE LIGHT

The Magic Blue Light

CEFR A1 Age 5 575 words 3 min Canon 95/100

Here is the revised story (the only change from the previous draft):

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Once there was a brave soldier. He helped the King for a long time. But the King was not kind.

"Go away," the King said. "I do not need you."

The soldier was very sad. He walked and walked. He had no home.

He came to a big forest. It was dark. He saw a little house. A grumpy old woman lived there.

"Can I stay?" the soldier asked.

"Help me first," she said.

"I will help," he said.

The old woman had a deep, dark well. "Go down," she said. "Bring me the blue light."

The soldier went down, down, down. He found the blue light! It glowed bright blue.

"Give it to me first!" she called.

"No," the soldier said. "Pull me up."

But the old woman let go. The soldier was stuck. It was dark and cold.

The soldier sat in the well. He was sad. Then he touched the blue light. It glowed warm and bright. Pop! A tiny little helper stood there. He had a long white beard.

"What do you need?" the little helper asked.

"Help me get out!" the soldier said.

The little helper waved his hands. Magic! Up, up, up they went. The old woman saw the magic. She ran away fast.

The soldier went back to town. He had a nice little house now. The blue light glowed on his table.

Every night, the little helper came. He took the soldier to see the Princess. They played games. They told stories. The Princess laughed and laughed.

"I had a funny dream!" the Princess said. "I have a new friend!"

The King was worried. "Who is this friend?" he asked.

"Leave your shoe behind," the King said.

The little helper said, "Watch out!" The soldier was not worried. The Princess left her shoe.

The King's guards found the shoe. They found the soldier. The King was cross.

"You must go away forever!" the King said.

The soldier walked to the town gate. He touched the blue light. It glowed bright blue. Pop! The little helper came back.

"I can help!" the little helper said. He waved his hands. Magic filled the room. The King saw pictures in the air. He saw the soldier helping people. He saw the soldier being kind. The King sent him away long ago. He gave no thank you.

The King's eyes grew wide. "I was wrong," he said. "I am sorry. Please stay."

The soldier smiled. The Princess clapped. "My friend can stay!" she said.

The King asked for help. "Help me be a kind king," he said. The soldier said yes. The little helper smiled. The Princess and the soldier were best friends. They helped the King every day. The King learned to say thank you. And the blue light glowed, soft and warm.

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Original Story 1778 words · 8 min read

THE BLUE LIGHT

![A Ghibli-style illustration of the soldier with the Blue Light and the gnome.](/library-files/english/grimm/grimm_fairy_tales_illustrated/the_blue_light/images/cover/cover_001.png)

There was once on a time, a soldier who for many years had served the King faithfully. But when the war came to an end he could serve no longer because of the many wounds which he had received.

The King said to him, “You may return to your home, I need you no longer. You will not receive any more money, for only he receives wages who renders me service for them.”

Then the soldier did not know how to earn a living, went away greatly troubled, and walked the whole day, until in the evening he entered a forest. When darkness came on, he saw a light, which he went toward, and came to a house wherein lived a Witch.

“Do give me one night’s lodging, and a little to eat and drink,” said he to her, “or I shall starve.”

“Oho!” she answered, “who gives anything to a runaway soldier? Yet will I be compassionate, and take you in, if you will do what I wish.”

“What do you wish?” said the soldier.

261 “That you should dig all round my garden for me, to-morrow.”

The soldier consented, and next day labored with all his strength, but could not finish it by the evening.

“I see well enough,” said the Witch, “that you can do no more to-day. But I will keep you yet another night, in payment for which you must to-morrow chop me a load of wood, and make it small.”

The soldier spent the whole day in doing it, and in the evening the Witch proposed that he should stay one night more. “To-morrow, you shall do me a very trifling piece of work. Behind my house, there is an old, dry well, into which my light has fallen. It burns blue, and never goes out, and you shall bring it up again for me.”

Next day, the Old Woman took him to the well, and let him down in a basket. He found the Blue Light, and made her a signal to draw him up again. She did draw him up, but when he came near the edge, she stretched down her hand and wanted to take the Blue Light away from him.

“No,” said he, perceiving her evil intention, “I will not give you the light, until I am standing with both feet upon the ground.”

The Witch fell into a passion, let him down again into the well, and went away.

The poor soldier fell without injury on the moist ground, and the Blue Light went on burning. But of what use was that to him? He saw very well that he could not escape death. He sat for a while very sorrowfully, then suddenly he felt in his pocket and found his pipe, which was still half full of tobacco. 262 “This shall be my last pleasure,” thought he, pulled it out, lit it at the Blue Light and began to smoke.

When the smoke had circled about the cavern, suddenly a little Black Man stood before him, and said, “Master, what are your commands?”

“What commands have I to give you?” replied the soldier, quite astonished.

“I must do everything you bid me,” said the Little Man.

“Good,” said the soldier; “then in the first place help me out of this well.”

The Little Man took him by the hand, and led him through an underground passage, but the soldier did not forget to take the Blue Light with him. On the way the Little Man showed him treasures hidden there, and the soldier took as much gold as he could carry.

When he was above, he said to the Little Man, “Now go and bind the old Witch, and carry her before the judge.”

In a short time she, with frightful cries, came riding by, as swift as the wind, on a wild tom-cat, nor was it long after that before the Little Man reappeared. “It is all done,” said he, “and the Witch is already hanging on the gallows. What further commands has my lord?” inquired the Little Man.

“At this moment, none,” answered the soldier; “you may return home. Only be at hand immediately, if I summon you.”

“Nothing more is needed than that you should light your pipe at the Blue Light, and I will appear before you at once.” Thereupon he vanished from sight.

The soldier returned to the town from which he had come. He went to the best inn, ordered himself handsome clothes, 263 and then bade the landlord furnish him a room as magnificent as possible.

When it was ready and the soldier had taken possession of it, he summoned the Little Black Man and said, “I have served the King faithfully, but he has dismissed me, and left me to hunger, and now I want to punish him.”

“What am I to do?” asked the Little Man.

“Late at night, when the King’s Daughter is in bed, bring her here in her sleep; she shall do servant’s work for me.”

The Little Man said, “That is an easy thing for me to do, but a very dangerous thing for you, for if it is discovered, you will fare ill.”

When twelve o’clock had struck, the door sprang open, and the Little Man carried in the Princess.

“Aha! are you there?” cried the soldier, “get to your work at once! Fetch the broom and sweep the chamber.”

When she had done this, he ordered her to come to his chair. Then he stretched out his feet and said, “Pull off my boots for me,” and made her pick them up again, and clean and brighten them.

She, however, did everything he bade her, without opposition, silently and with half-shut eyes. When the first cock crowed, the Little Man carried her back to the royal Palace, and laid her in her bed.

Next morning, when the Princess arose, she went to her father, and told him that she had had a very strange dream. “I was carried through the streets with the rapidity of lightning,” said she, “and taken into a soldier’s room, and I had to wait upon him like a servant, sweep his room, clean his boots, and 264 do all kinds of menial work. It was only a dream, and yet I am just as tired as if I really had done everything.”

“The dream may have been true,” said the King. “I will give you a piece of advice. Fill your pocket full of peas, and make a small hole in it, and then if you are carried away again, they will fall out and leave a track in the streets.”

But unseen by the King, the Little Man was standing beside him when he said that, and heard all. At night, when the sleeping Princess was again carried through the streets, some peas certainly did fall out of her pocket, but they made no track, for the crafty Little Man had just before scattered peas in every other street. And again the Princess was compelled to do servant’s work until cock-crow.

Next morning, the King sent his people out to seek the track, but it was all in vain, for in every street poor children were sitting, picking up peas, and saying, “It must have rained peas, last night.”

“We must think of something else,” said the King; “keep your shoes on when you go to bed, and before you come back from the place where you are taken, hide one of them there. I will soon find it.”

The Little Black Man heard this plot, and at night when the soldier again ordered him to bring the Princess, revealed it to him, and told him that he knew of no way to overcome this stratagem, and that if the shoe were found in the soldier’s house it would go badly with him.

“Do what I bid you,” replied the soldier. And again this third night, the Princess was obliged to work like a servant, but before she went away, she hid her shoe under the bed.

265 Next morning, the King had the entire town searched for his daughter’s shoe. It was found at the soldier’s, and the soldier himself, who at the entreaty of the Little Man, had gone outside the city-gate, was soon brought back, and thrown into prison.

In his flight he had forgotten the most valuable things he had, the Blue Light and the gold, and had only one ducat in his pocket. And now loaded with chains, he was standing at the window of his dungeon, when he chanced to see one of his comrades passing by.

The soldier tapped at the pane of glass, and when this man came up, said to him, “Be so kind as to fetch me the small bundle I have left lying in the inn, and I will give you a ducat for doing it.”

His comrade ran thither and brought him what he wanted. As soon as the soldier was alone again, he lighted his pipe and summoned the Little Black Man.

“Have no fear,” said the latter to his master. “Go wheresoever they take you, and let them do what they will, only take the Blue Light with you.”

Next day the soldier was tried, and though he had done nothing wicked, the judge condemned him to death. When he was led forth to die, he begged a last favor of the King.

“What is it?” asked the King.

“That I may smoke one more pipe on my way.”

“You may smoke three,” answered the King, “but do not imagine that I will spare your life.”

Then the soldier pulled out his pipe and lighted it at the Blue Light. And as soon as a few wreaths of smoke had ascended 266 the Little Man was there with a small cudgel in his hand, and said, “What does my lord command?”

“Strike down to earth that false judge there, and his constable, and spare not the King who has treated me so ill.”

Then the Little Man fell on them like lightning, darting this way and that, and whosoever was so much as touched by his cudgel fell to earth, and did not venture to stir again. The King was terrified; he threw himself on the soldier’s mercy, and begged merely to be allowed to live. He gave him his kingdom for his own, and the Princess to wife.

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Moral of the Story

Those who are unjustly treated may find unexpected power to turn the tables on their oppressors.


Characters 5 characters

The Soldier ★ protagonist

human adult male

Wounded, initially impoverished, later well-dressed

Attire: Initially, worn-out military uniform; later, handsome, richly-made civilian clothes

Resourceful, vengeful, commanding

The Witch ⚔ antagonist

human elderly female

Implied to be ugly and cruel-looking

Attire: Dark, tattered robes

Deceitful, greedy, malicious

Little Black Man ◆ supporting

magical creature ageless male

Small, black-skinned

Attire: Unspecified, possibly simple dark clothing

Obedient, efficient, somewhat mischievous

The Princess ◆ supporting

human young adult female

Beautiful, delicate

Attire: Royal nightgown, fine shoes

Passive, obedient (under magical influence), observant

The King ◆ supporting

human adult male

Regal, powerful

Attire: Royal robes, crown

Initially ungrateful, later fearful and yielding

Locations 4 locations
Witch's Garden and Well

Witch's Garden and Well

outdoor day

A garden that needs digging, with an old, dry well behind the house.

Mood: eerie, dangerous

The soldier retrieves the blue light, is betrayed, and discovers the little black man.

gardenold wellblue lightbasket
Underground Passage

Underground Passage

transitional night N/A

A passage beneath the well, filled with hidden treasures.

Mood: mysterious, fortunate

The soldier escapes the well with the help of the little black man and acquires wealth.

underground passagetreasuregold
Soldier's Lavish Room

Soldier's Lavish Room

indoor night N/A

A magnificently furnished room in the best inn of the town.

Mood: opulent, secretive

The soldier humiliates the princess by making her do servant's work.

fine clotheschairbroomboots
Dungeon Cell

Dungeon Cell

indoor day N/A

A prison cell with a window overlooking the street.

Mood: desperate, confined

The soldier summons the little black man one last time to exact revenge.

windowchainspane of glass

Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Those who are unjustly treated may find unexpected power to turn the tables on their oppressors.

Plot Summary

A faithful soldier is discharged by his ungrateful King and left destitute. He encounters a witch who traps him in a well after he retrieves a magical 'Blue Light' for her. Using the light, he summons a powerful magical servant, who helps him escape, punish the witch, and then exact revenge on the King by forcing the Princess to serve him nightly. Despite the King's attempts to catch him, the soldier is only apprehended when the servant warns him too late about a hidden shoe. Condemned to death, the soldier uses the Blue Light one last time at his execution, and the servant intervenes, forcing the terrified King to surrender his kingdom and daughter to the soldier.

Themes

justice and retributionpower and its abuseresourcefulnesssocial mobility

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (tasks, attempts to catch the soldier), direct address to reader (implied through narrative tone)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: the Blue Light (enchanted object), magical servant (Little Black Man), witchcraft, supernatural transportation (Princess being carried)
the Blue Light (power, hidden potential)the pipe (means to activate power)the Princess's shoe (evidence, means of detection)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects common themes of social injustice and the desire for upward mobility prevalent in European folklore, often featuring discharged soldiers or commoners gaining power.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A soldier is discharged by the King after faithful service, left with nothing.
  2. He wanders into a forest, finds a witch's house, and agrees to work for lodging and food.
  3. The witch assigns him three tasks: digging, chopping wood, and retrieving a blue light from a well.
  4. The soldier finds the blue light in the well, but the witch tries to trick him out of it, leaving him trapped.
  5. Trapped, the soldier lights his pipe with the blue light, summoning a magical black man.
  6. The black man helps the soldier escape the well, showing him hidden treasures, and then punishes the witch.
  7. The soldier returns to town, lives lavishly, and uses the black man to bring the King's daughter to his room nightly to serve him.
  8. The Princess tells her father about her strange dream, prompting the King to devise a plan with peas to track her.
  9. The black man thwarts the pea-tracking plan by scattering peas everywhere else.
  10. The King devises a new plan: the Princess should hide a shoe in the soldier's room.
  11. The black man warns the soldier, but the soldier insists, and the Princess hides her shoe.
  12. The shoe is found in the soldier's room, leading to his arrest and condemnation to death.
  13. On his way to execution, the soldier requests a last pipe, lights it with the blue light, and summons the black man.
  14. The black man attacks the King, judge, and constable, forcing the King to beg for mercy.
  15. The King gives his kingdom and daughter to the soldier, who becomes king and marries the princess.

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