Herr Korbes

by Brothers Grimm · from Household Tales

fairy tale transformation whimsical Ages 5-10 407 words 2 min read
Original Story 407 words · 2 min read

Herr Korbes

A fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm

There were once a cock and a hen who wanted to take a journey together. So the cock built a beautiful carriage, which had four red wheels, and harnessed four mice to it. The hen seated herself in it with the cock, and they drove away together. Not long afterwards they met a cat who said, "Where are you going?" The cock replied, "We are going to the house of Herr Korbes." - "Take me with you," said the cat. The cock answered, "Most willingly, get up behind, lest you fall off in front. Take great care not to dirty my little red wheels. And you little wheels, roll on, and you little mice pipe out, as we go forth on our way to the house of Herr Korbes."

After this came a millstone, then an egg, then a duck, then a pin, and at last a needle, who all seated themselves in the carriage, and drove with them. When, however, they reached the house of Herr Korbes, Herr Korbes was not there. The mice drew the carriage into the barn, the hen flew with the cock upon a perch. The cat sat down by the hearth, the duck on the well-pole. The egg rolled itself into a towel, the pin stuck itself into the chair-cushion, the needle jumped on to the bed in the middle of the pillow, and the millstone laid itself over the door. Then Herr Korbes came home, went to the hearth, and was about to light the fire, when the cat threw a quantity of ashes in his face. He ran into the kitchen in a great hurry to wash it off, and the duck splashed some water in his face. He wanted to dry it with the towel, but the egg rolled up against him, broke, and glued up his eyes. He wanted to rest, and sat down in the chair, and then the pin pricked him. He fell in a passion, and threw himself on his bed, but as soon as he laid his head on the pillow, the needle pricked him, so that he screamed aloud, and was just going to run out into the wide world in his rage, but when he came to the house-door, the millstone leapt down and struck him dead. Herr Korbes must have been a very wicked man!

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Story DNA

Moral

Evil deeds will eventually be met with unexpected and collective retribution.

Plot Summary

A cock and hen embark on a journey to Herr Korbes' house, picking up a cat, millstone, egg, duck, pin, and needle along the way. Upon arriving, they find Herr Korbes absent and each hides within his house. When Herr Korbes returns, each hidden traveler successively attacks him – the cat throws ashes, the duck splashes water, the egg glues his eyes, the pin pricks him, and the needle pricks him again. Enraged, he attempts to flee but is killed by the millstone falling on him as he exits, implying he was a wicked man deserving of his fate.

Themes

justiceretributioncollective actionthe unexpected

Emotional Arc

anticipation to surprise to grim satisfaction

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: repetition (of 'Herr Korbes'), cumulative structure, personification

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural (in a sense, as the objects act with malicious intent)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals, sentient inanimate objects (millstone, egg, pin, needle), animals driving a carriage
the carriage (journey, collective effort)the millstone (finality, crushing weight of justice)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Grimm's fairy tales often reflect a pre-industrial, agrarian society with clear social roles and a strong sense of poetic justice.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A cock builds a carriage and sets out with a hen for Herr Korbes' house.
  2. A cat asks to join them and is allowed, with instructions not to dirty the wheels.
  3. A millstone, an egg, a duck, a pin, and a needle successively join the journey.
  4. The group arrives at Herr Korbes' house, but he is not home.
  5. Each traveler finds a strategic hiding spot: mice in barn, cock/hen on perch, cat by hearth, duck on well-pole, egg in towel, pin in cushion, needle in pillow, millstone over door.
  6. Herr Korbes returns home and goes to light a fire.
  7. The cat throws ashes in his face.
  8. Herr Korbes goes to wash his face, and the duck splashes water on him.
  9. He tries to dry his face, but the egg rolls out of the towel, breaks, and glues his eyes shut.
  10. He sits in a chair to rest, and the pin pricks him.
  11. He throws himself onto his bed, and the needle pricks him.
  12. Enraged, he runs to leave the house.
  13. As he exits, the millstone falls from above the door and kills him.
  14. The narrator concludes that Herr Korbes must have been a very wicked man.

Characters

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Cock

animal adult male

Carries himself with purpose, resourceful

Building a miniature carriage

Organized, leader, somewhat bossy

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Hen

animal adult female

Plump, follows the cock's lead

Riding in the carriage

Compliant, trusting, along for the ride

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Cat

animal adult unknown

Ashen fur

Throwing ashes

Opportunistic, vengeful

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Millstone

object ageless unknown

Large, round, heavy

Crushing Herr Korbes

Patient, final

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Herr Korbes

human adult male

Implied to be wicked

Attire: Peasant clothing

Covered in ashes, egg yolk, and pin pricks

Unsuspecting, easily angered, abusive

Locations

Road to Herr Korbes' House

outdoor Implied fair weather for travel

A road suitable for a small carriage pulled by mice.

Mood: Neutral, journey-like

The cock and hen gather companions for their journey.

carriage red wheels mice dust

Barn

indoor Implied dry storage space

A barn large enough to accommodate a small carriage.

Mood: Safe, temporary haven

The animals hide the carriage upon arrival.

perch carriage hay mice

Interior of Herr Korbes' House

indoor night Implied protection from the elements

A house with a hearth, kitchen, well-pole, chair, and bed.

Mood: Initially homey, then chaotic and dangerous

The animals enact their revenge on Herr Korbes.

hearth chair-cushion bed pillow towel

House Door

transitional night Unspecified

The exit of Herr Korbes' house.

Mood: Deadly

Herr Korbes is killed by the millstone.

door frame millstone latch