The Shoes That Were Danced to Pieces

by Brothers Grimm · from Household Tales

fairy tale mystery whimsical Ages 8-14 1488 words 7 min read
Original Story 1488 words · 7 min read

The shoes that were danced to pieces

A fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm

There was once upon a time a King who had twelve daughters, each one more beautiful than the other. They all slept together in one chamber, in which their beds stood side by side, and every night when they were in them the King locked the door, and bolted it. But in the morning when he unlocked the door, he saw that their shoes were worn out with dancing, and no one could find out how that had come to pass. Then the King caused it to be proclaimed that whosoever could discover where they danced at night, should choose one of them for his wife and be King after his death, but that whosoever came forward and had not discovered it within three days and nights, should have forfeited his life. It was not long before a King's son presented himself, and offered to undertake the enterprise. He was well received, and in the evening was led into a room adjoining the princesses' sleeping-chamber. His bed was placed there, and he was to observe where they went and danced, and in order that they might do nothing secretly or go away to some other place, the door of their room was left open.

But the eyelids of the prince grew heavy as lead, and he fell asleep, and when he awoke in the morning, all twelve had been to the dance, for their shoes were standing there with holes in the soles. On the second and third nights it fell out just the same, and then his head was struck off without mercy. Many others came after this and undertook the enterprise, but all forfeited their lives. Now it came to pass that a poor soldier, who had a wound, and could serve no longer, found himself on the road to the town where the King lived. There he met an old woman, who asked him where he was going. "I hardly know myself," answered he, and added in jest, "I had half a mind to discover where the princesses danced their shoes into holes, and thus become King." - "That is not so difficult," said the old woman, "you must not drink the wine which will be brought to you at night, and must pretend to be sound asleep." With that she gave him a little cloak, and said, "If you put on that, you will be invisible, and then you can steal after the twelve." When the soldier had received this good advice, he went into the thing in earnest, took heart, went to the King, and announced himself as a suitor. He was as well received as the others, and royal garments were put upon him. He was conducted that evening at bed-time into the ante-chamber, and as he was about to go to bed, the eldest came and brought him a cup of wine, but he had tied a sponge under his chin, and let the wine run down into it, without drinking a drop. Then he lay down and when he had lain a while, he began to snore, as if in the deepest sleep. The twelve princesses heard that, and laughed, and the eldest said, "He, too, might as well have saved his life." With that they got up, opened wardrobes, presses, cupboards, and brought out pretty dresses; dressed themselves before the mirrors, sprang about, and rejoiced at the prospect of the dance. Only the youngest said, "I know not how it is; you are very happy, but I feel very strange; some misfortune is certainly about to befall us." - "Thou art a goose, who art always frightened," said the eldest. "Hast thou forgotten how many Kings' sons have already come here in vain? I had hardly any need to give the soldier a sleeping-draught, in any case the clown would not have awakened." When they were all ready they looked carefully at the soldier, but he had closed his eyes and did not move or stir, so they felt themselves quite secure. The eldest then went to her bed and tapped it; it immediately sank into the earth, and one after the other they descended through the opening, the eldest going first. The soldier, who had watched everything, tarried no longer, put on his little cloak, and went down last with the youngest. Half-way down the steps, he just trod a little on her dress; she was terrified at that, and cried out, "What is that? who is pulling my dress?" - "Don't be so silly!" said the eldest, "you have caught it on a nail." Then they went all the way down, and when they were at the bottom, they were standing in a wonderfully pretty avenue of trees, all the leaves of which were of silver, and shone and glistened. The soldier thought, "I must carry a token away with me," and broke off a twig from one of them, on which the tree cracked with a loud report. The youngest cried out again. "Something is wrong, did you hear the crack?" But the eldest said, "It is a gun fired for joy, because we have got rid of our prince so quickly." After that they came into an avenue where all the leaves were of gold, and lastly into a third where they were of bright diamonds; he broke off a twig from each, which made such a crack each time that the youngest started back in terror, but the eldest still maintained that they were salutes. They went on and came to a great lake whereon stood twelve little boats, and in every boat sat a handsome prince, all of whom were waiting for the twelve, and each took one of them with him, but the soldier seated himself by the youngest. Then her prince said, "I can't tell why the boat is so much heavier to-day; I shall have to row with all my strength, if I am to get it across." - "What should cause that," said the youngest, "but the warm weather? I feel very warm too." On the opposite side of the lake stood a splendid, brightly-lit castle, from whence resounded the joyous music of trumpets and kettle-drums. They rowed over there, entered, and each prince danced with the girl he loved, but the soldier danced with them unseen, and when one of them had a cup of wine in her hand he drank it up, so that the cup was empty when she carried it to her mouth; the youngest was alarmed at this, but the eldest always made her be silent. They danced there till three o'clock in the morning when all the shoes were danced into holes, and they were forced to leave off; the princes rowed them back again over the lake, and this time the soldier seated himself by the eldest. On the shore they took leave of their princes, and promised to return the following night. When they reached the stairs the soldier ran on in front and lay down in his bed, and when the twelve had come up slowly and wearily, he was already snoring so loudly that they could all hear him, and they said, "So far as he is concerned, we are safe." They took off their beautiful dresses, laid them away, put the worn-out shoes under the bed, and lay down. Next morning the soldier was resolved not to speak, but to watch the wonderful goings on, and again went with them. Then everything was done just as it had been done the first time, and each time they danced until their shoes were worn to pieces. But the third time he took a cup away with him as a token. When the hour had arrived for him to give his answer, he took the three twigs and the cup, and went to the King, but the twelve stood behind the door, and listened for what he was going to say. When the King put the question, "Where have my twelve daughters danced their shoes to pieces in the night?" he answered, "In an underground castle with twelve princes," and related how it had come to pass, and brought out the tokens. The King then summoned his daughters, and asked them if the soldier had told the truth, and when they saw that they were betrayed, and that falsehood would be of no avail, they were obliged to confess all. Thereupon the King asked which of them he would have to wife? He answered, "I am no longer young, so give me the eldest." Then the wedding was celebrated on the self-same day, and the kingdom was promised him after the King's death. But the princes were bewitched for as many days as they had danced nights with the twelve.

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Story DNA

Moral

Truth, even when hidden, will eventually come to light, and perseverance can lead to unexpected rewards.

Plot Summary

A King's twelve daughters mysteriously wear out their shoes dancing every night. The King offers his kingdom and a princess to anyone who can discover their secret, but failure means death. Many princes fail, but a clever soldier, aided by an old woman's advice and an invisibility cloak, pretends to sleep and follows the princesses through a secret passage to an underground world where they dance with twelve bewitched princes. He collects magical tokens as proof. Upon revealing the truth to the King, the soldier marries the eldest princess and is promised the throne, while the princes are punished.

Themes

curiosity and discoverydeception and secretsperseverance and rewardsocial class and ambition

Emotional Arc

mystery to revelation

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (three nights of observation, three types of trees)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (soldier vs princesses' secret) and person vs society (soldier's low status vs royal challenge)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: invisibility cloak, secret underground passage, trees with silver, gold, and diamond leaves, bewitched princes, magical castle
worn-out shoes (symbol of secret activity)twigs (proof of the magical world)invisibility cloak (tool for discovery)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Reflects common European fairy tale motifs of hidden magical worlds, royal challenges, and the rise of a commoner through cleverness.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A King's twelve daughters mysteriously wear out their shoes dancing every night.
  2. The King offers a reward (marriage, throne) and a penalty (death) for anyone who can discover their secret.
  3. Many princes attempt and fail, losing their lives.
  4. A poor soldier, advised by an old woman and given an invisibility cloak, decides to try.
  5. The soldier pretends to drink a sleeping draught and snore, fooling the princesses.
  6. He observes the eldest princess tapping her bed, revealing a secret passage to an underground world.
  7. The soldier puts on his cloak and follows the princesses down the passage.
  8. He collects tokens (silver, gold, diamond twigs, and a cup) from the magical avenues and castle, causing alarm to the youngest princess.
  9. The princesses dance with twelve princes in an underground castle until their shoes are worn out.
  10. The soldier returns with the princesses, pretending to be asleep again.
  11. This process repeats for two more nights, with the soldier collecting more tokens.
  12. On the third day, the soldier presents his evidence (twigs and cup) to the King.
  13. The princesses confess, and the soldier chooses the eldest princess as his wife.
  14. The soldier marries the princess and is promised the kingdom; the bewitched princes are punished.

Characters

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The Soldier

human adult male

Wounded, implying a past military career, otherwise unremarkable.

Attire: Initially poor, then royal garments provided by the King, and a little cloak that makes him invisible.

Wearing an invisible cloak, holding three magical twigs and a cup.

Clever, observant, determined, resourceful.

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The King

human adult male

A ruler, likely of imposing stature.

Attire: Royal attire, crown.

Sitting on a throne, looking perplexed by his daughters' worn-out shoes.

Authoritative, desperate to solve the mystery, just.

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The Eldest Princess

human young adult female

Beautiful, like her sisters.

Attire: Beautiful dresses for dancing, royal attire otherwise. Worn-out dancing shoes.

Leading her sisters down a secret passage, wearing a beautiful gown and worn-out shoes.

Dominant, cunning, dismissive of others' concerns, leader of her sisters.

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The Youngest Princess

human young adult female

Beautiful, like her sisters.

Attire: Beautiful dresses for dancing, royal attire otherwise. Worn-out dancing shoes.

Startled by strange occurrences, clutching her dress.

Apprehensive, sensitive, easily frightened, less deceptive than her sisters.

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The Old Woman

human elderly female

Old, wise-looking.

Attire: Simple, peasant-like clothing.

Handing the invisible cloak to the Soldier on a road.

Wise, helpful, mysterious.

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The Twelve Princes

human young adult male

Handsome.

Attire: Regal attire suitable for dancing at a ball.

Rowing twelve small boats across a lake to a brightly lit castle.

Enchanting, eager to dance, complicit in the princesses' secret.

Locations

The Princesses' Sleeping Chamber

indoor night

A chamber where twelve beds stand side by side, shared by the King's twelve beautiful daughters. The King locks and bolts the door every night.

Mood: Secretive, confined, mysterious, initially secure but ultimately a gateway to adventure.

The princesses prepare for their nightly dance, and the secret passage to the underworld is revealed.

twelve beds locked door worn-out shoes wardrobes, presses, cupboards mirrors opening in the floor

The Ante-Chamber (Soldier's Room)

indoor night

A room adjoining the princesses' sleeping-chamber, where the suitor's bed is placed. The door to the princesses' room is left open.

Mood: Observational, tense, deceptive.

The soldier pretends to sleep and observes the princesses' departure.

bed open door to princesses' room cup of wine

The Silver, Gold, and Diamond Avenues

outdoor night

A wonderfully pretty avenue of trees with leaves of silver, followed by an avenue with leaves of gold, and finally one with leaves of bright diamonds. Each tree cracks loudly when a twig is broken.

Mood: Magical, glittering, slightly eerie due to the cracking sounds.

The soldier collects tokens to prove his discovery.

trees with silver leaves trees with gold leaves trees with diamond leaves cracking sound

The Great Lake and Underground Castle

outdoor night warm weather implied by the youngest princess

A great lake with twelve little boats, each carrying a handsome prince. On the opposite side stands a splendid, brightly-lit castle from which joyous music emanates.

Mood: Festive, romantic, enchanting, but also a place of deception and bewitchment.

The princesses dance with the bewitched princes until their shoes are worn out.

great lake twelve little boats handsome princes splendid, brightly-lit castle music (trumpets and kettle-drums) dancing figures