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The white snake

by Brothers Grimm

The white snake

The White Snake

CEFR A1 Age 5 410 words 2 min Canon 93/100

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Once upon a time, there was a boy. His name was Tom. Tom was very kind. He worked for a good king.

One day, Tom found a plate. A small white snake was on it. Tom took one small bite. Now Tom could hear them talk!

The queen lost her pretty ring. She was very sad. "Oh no!" said the queen. "Tom, please help!" said the king.

Tom went outside. He heard a duck talk. "I found a ring!" said the duck. Tom got the ring back. He gave it to the queen.

"Thank you, Tom!" said the king. Tom wanted to see the world. The king gave him a horse. Tom rode away.

Tom rode to a river. Three small fish were stuck. "Help us!" they cried. Tom put them in the water. "Thank you!" said the fish. "We will help you one day!"

Tom rode down a path. He saw tiny ants on the ground. Tom walked his horse past them. "Thank you!" said the ants. "We will help you one day!"

Then Tom found three baby birds. They were very hungry. Tom shared his food with them. "Thank you!" said the birds. "We will help you one day!"

Tom came to a big castle. A pretty princess lived there. She had three hard tasks for Tom.

"Find my ring," said the princess. "It is in the big sea." "Oh no!" said Tom.

Then the three small fish came! They swam deep into the sea. They found the ring! Tom was so happy.

"Pick up all these seeds!" she said. There were so many seeds!

Tom was worried. But the tiny ants came! They worked all night long. They picked up all the seeds. It was done by morning.

"One more task!" said the princess. "Bring me a magic apple." It was on a far away tree.

Then the three birds came! They flew far, far away. They found the magic tree. They brought the apple to Tom.

Tom gave the apple to her. They shared it. The princess smiled. Tom smiled too. They were the best of friends. And they lived happy ever after.

Original Story 1622 words · 8 min read

The white snake A fairy tale by the Brothers Grimm A long time ago there lived a king who was famed for his wisdom through all the land. Nothing was hidden from him, and it seemed as if news of the most secret things was brought to him through the air. But he had a strange custom; every day after dinner, when the table was cleared, and no one else was present, a trusty servant had to bring him one more dish. It was covered, however, and even the servant did not know what was in it, neither did anyone know, for the King never took off the cover to eat of it until he was quite alone. This had gone on for a long time, when one day the servant, who took away the dish, was overcome with such curiosity that he could not help carrying the dish into his room. When he had carefully locked the door, he lifted up the cover, and saw a white snake lying on the dish. But when he saw it he could not deny himself the pleasure of tasting it, so he cut off a little bit and put it into his mouth. No sooner had it touched his tongue than he heard a strange whispering of little voices outside his window. He went and listened, and then noticed that it was the sparrows who were chattering together, and telling one another of all kinds of things which they had seen in the fields and woods. Eating the snake had given him power of understanding the language of animals. Now it so happened that on this very day the Queen lost her most beautiful ring, and suspicion of having stolen it fell upon this trusty servant, who was allowed to go everywhere. The King ordered the man to be brought before him, and threatened with angry words that unless he could before the morrow point out the thief, he himself should be looked upon as guilty and executed. In vain he declared his innocence; he was dismissed with no better answer. In his trouble and fear he went down into the courtyard and took thought how to help himself out of his trouble. Now some ducks were sitting together quietly by a brook and taking their rest; and, whilst they were making their feathers smooth with their bills, they were having a confidential conversation together. The servant stood by and listened. They were telling one another of all the places where they had been waddling about all the morning, and what good food they had found, and one said in a pitiful tone, "Something lies heavy on my stomach; as I was eating in haste I swallowed a ring which lay under the Queen's window." The servant at once seized her by the neck, carried her to the kitchen, and said to the cook, "Here is a fine duck; pray, kill her." - "Yes," said the cook, and weighed her in his hand; "she has spared no trouble to fatten herself, and has been waiting to be roasted long enough." So he cut off her head, and as she was being dressed for the spit, the Queen's ring was found inside her. The servant could now easily prove his innocence; and the King, to make amends for the wrong, allowed him to ask a favour, and promised him the best place in the court that he could wish for. The servant refused everything, and only asked for a horse and some money for travelling, as he had a mind to see the world and go about a little. When his request was granted he set out on his way, and one day came to a pond, where he saw three fishes caught in the reeds and gasping for water. Now, though it is said that fishes are dumb, he heard them lamenting that they must perish so miserably, and, as he had a kind heart, he got off his horse and put the three prisoners back into the water. They quivered with delight, put out their heads, and cried to him, "We will remember you and repay you for saving us!" He rode on, and after a while it seemed to him that he heard a voice in the sand at his feet. He listened, and heard an ant-king complain, "Why cannot folks, with their clumsy beasts, keep off our bodies? That stupid horse, with his heavy hoofs, has been treading down my people without mercy!" So he turned on to a side path and the ant-king cried out to him, 'We will remember you - one good turn deserves another!" The path led him into a wood, and here he saw two old ravens standing by their nest, and throwing out their young ones. "Out with you, you idle, good-for-nothing creatures!" cried they; "we cannot find food for you any longer; you are big enough, and can provide for yourselves." But the poor young ravens lay upon the ground, flapping their wings, and crying, "Oh, what helpless chicks we are! We must shift for ourselves, and yet we cannot fly! What can we do, but lie here and starve?" So the good young fellow alighted and killed his horse with his sword, and gave it to them for food. Then they came hopping up to it, satisfied their hunger, and cried, "We will remember you - one good turn deserves another!" And now he had to use his own legs, and when he had walked a long way, he came to a large city. There was a great noise and crowd in the streets, and a man rode up on horseback, crying aloud, "The King's daughter wants a husband; but whoever sues for her hand must perform a hard task, and if he does not succeed he will forfeit his life." Many had already made the attempt, but in vain; nevertheless when the youth saw the King's daughter he was so overcome by her great beauty that he forgot all danger, went before the King, and declared himself a suitor. So he was led out to the sea, and a gold ring was thrown into it, in his sight; then the King ordered him to fetch this ring up from the bottom of the sea, and added, "If you come up again without it you will be thrown in again and again until you perish amid the waves." All the people grieved for the handsome youth; then they went away, leaving him alone by the sea. He stood on the shore and considered what he should do, when suddenly he saw three fishes come swimming towards him, and they were the very fishes whose lives he had saved. The one in the middle held a mussel in its mouth, which it laid on the shore at the youth's feet, and when he had taken it up and opened it, there lay the gold ring in the shell. Full of joy he took it to the King, and expected that he would grant him the promised reward. But when the proud princess perceived that he was not her equal in birth, she scorned him, and required him first to perform another task. She went down into the garden and strewed with her own hands ten sacks-full of millet-seed on the grass; then she said, "To-morrow morning before sunrise these must be picked up, and not a single grain be wanting." The youth sat down in the garden and considered how it might be possible to perform this task, but he could think of nothing, and there he sat sorrowfully awaiting the break of day, when he should be led to death. But as soon as the first rays of the sun shone into the garden he saw all the ten sacks standing side by side, quite full, and not a single grain was missing. The ant-king had come in the night with thousands and thousands of ants, and the grateful creatures had by great industry picked up all the millet-seed and gathered them into the sacks. Presently the King's daughter herself came down into the garden, and was amazed to see that the young man had done the task she had given him. But she could not yet conquer her proud heart, and said, "Although he has performed both the tasks, he shall not be my husband until he has brought me an apple from the Tree of Life." The youth did not know where the Tree of Life stood, but he set out, and would have gone on for ever, as long as his legs would carry him, though he had no hope of finding it. After he had wandered through three kingdoms, he came one evening to a wood, and lay down under a tree to sleep. But he heard a rustling in the branches, and a golden apple fell into his hand. At the same time three ravens flew down to him, perched themselves upon his knee, and said, "We are the three young ravens whom you saved from starving; when we had grown big, and heard that you were seeking the Golden Apple, we flew over the sea to the end of the world, where the Tree of Life stands, and have brought you the apple." The youth, full of joy, set out homewards, and took the Golden Apple to the King's beautiful daughter, who had no more excuses left to make. They cut the Apple of Life in two and ate it together; and then her heart became full of love for him, and they lived in undisturbed happiness to a great age. *     *     *     *     *

Moral of the Story

Acts of kindness, even small ones, will be repaid in unexpected ways, and true worth is not determined by birthright but by character.


Characters 8 characters

The King ◆ supporting

human adult male

Not explicitly described, but implied to be of a regal bearing.

Attire: Royal attire, befitting a king famed for wisdom.

Wise, just (eventually), authoritative, secretive.

The Servant ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Described as a "handsome youth" later in the story.

Attire: Initially servant's livery, later simple traveling clothes, then more formal attire when a suitor.

Curious, kind-hearted, resourceful, brave, innocent.

The Queen ○ minor

human adult female

Not explicitly described, but owns a "most beautiful ring."

Attire: Royal attire, including a valuable ring.

Distraught by loss, quick to suspect.

The King's Daughter ⚔ antagonist

human young adult female

Possesses "great beauty."

Attire: Princess's gown, likely elaborate and costly.

Proud, scornful, demanding, initially cold-hearted, later loving.

The White Snake ○ magical object

magical creature ageless non-human

A white snake, small enough to be served on a dish.

Attire: None.

Imparts magical abilities, passive.

The Three Fishes ◆ supporting

animal adult non-human

Fishes, initially caught in reeds, later swimming freely.

Attire: None.

Grateful, helpful.

The Ant-King ◆ supporting

animal adult male

An ant, presumably larger or more distinct than common ants.

Attire: None.

Complaining, grateful, commanding (of other ants).

The Three Young Ravens ◆ supporting

animal child non-human

Young ravens, initially helpless chicks, later grown.

Attire: None.

Helpless, hungry, grateful, resourceful (when grown).

Locations 5 locations
King's Private Dining Room

King's Private Dining Room

indoor night

A private room in the King's palace where he eats a special, covered dish alone after dinner. The table is cleared.

Mood: mysterious, secretive

The servant tastes the white snake and gains the ability to understand animal languages.

cleared dining tablecovered dishwhite snake
Palace Courtyard with Brook

Palace Courtyard with Brook

outdoor morning

A courtyard within the palace grounds, featuring a quiet brook where ducks are resting and preening.

Mood: anxious, revealing

The servant overhears ducks revealing the location of the Queen's stolen ring.

brookduckspalace architecture
Seashore by a Large City

Seashore by a Large City

outdoor day

The edge of the sea near a large city, where a gold ring is thrown into the water.

Mood: desperate, hopeful

The youth is tasked with retrieving a gold ring from the bottom of the sea, aided by the fish he saved.

seashoregold ringmussel
Princess's Garden

Princess's Garden

outdoor night to dawn

A garden belonging to the King's daughter, where millet-seed is strewn on the grass.

Mood: challenging, magical

The youth must collect ten sacks of millet-seed from the grass before sunrise, aided by the ants he saved.

grassmillet-seedsacksants
Wood with the Tree of Life

Wood with the Tree of Life

outdoor evening to night

A wood where the youth rests, and where the Tree of Life is implicitly located, though its exact appearance is not described.

Mood: mystical, fulfilling

The ravens bring the youth a golden apple from the Tree of Life, completing his final task.

treebranchesgolden appleravens

Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Acts of kindness, even small ones, will be repaid in unexpected ways, and true worth is not determined by birthright but by character.

Plot Summary

A curious servant tastes a king's secret dish, gaining the ability to understand animal speech. Falsely accused of theft, he uses his new power to clear his name, earning a reward that allows him to travel. On his journey, he performs three acts of kindness, saving fish, ants, and ravens. He then encounters a proud princess who sets three impossible tasks for her suitors. With the help of the grateful animals, he successfully completes each task, culminating in retrieving the Apple of Life. Eating the apple transforms the princess's heart, and they marry, living happily ever after.

Themes

kindness and reciprocityperseverancehumility vs. pridefate and destiny

Emotional Arc

fear to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (animals saved, tasks performed)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs. person (initially), person vs. society (false accusation), person vs. nature (tasks)
Ending: happy
Magic: white snake granting animal speech, talking animals (sparrows, ducks, fish, ants, ravens), Tree of Life and its apple
the white snake (knowledge, transformation)the Queen's ring (justice, false accusation)the Apple of Life (love, truth, overcoming pride)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Grimm's fairy tales often reflect German folklore and societal values of the 19th century, including social hierarchies and the importance of virtue.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A king eats a secret dish daily; his servant, out of curiosity, tastes it and gains the ability to understand animal speech.
  2. The Queen's ring is stolen, and the servant is falsely accused and threatened with execution.
  3. The servant overhears ducks discussing the ring's location (swallowed by one), proving his innocence.
  4. As a reward, he asks to travel and is granted a horse and money.
  5. He saves three fish from perishing in reeds.
  6. He saves an ant colony from being trampled by his horse.
  7. He sacrifices his horse to feed three starving young ravens.
  8. He arrives in a city where a princess offers her hand to anyone who can complete an impossible task, but failure means death.
  9. He volunteers and is tasked with retrieving a gold ring from the bottom of the sea.
  10. The saved fish retrieve the ring for him.
  11. The proud princess gives him a second task: sorting ten sacks of millet seeds by sunrise.
  12. The saved ants sort the millet seeds for him overnight.
  13. The princess gives him a third task: bringing her an apple from the Tree of Life.
  14. The saved ravens fly to the end of the world and bring him the Apple of Life.
  15. He and the princess eat the apple, her heart fills with love, and they marry and live happily.

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