THE WAKEFUL

by Oliver Herford · from The Fairy Godmother-in-law

fairy tale transformation whimsical Ages 8-14 645 words 3 min read
Cover: THE WAKEFUL

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 354 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once there was a boy named Leo. He loved to make poems. Leo read his poems loudly. He read in the town. People did not listen. They walked away from Leo.

People did not like his loud poems. The town leader spoke to Leo. He told Leo to leave town. Leo had no money. Leo felt sad then. But he was also brave.

Leo walked away from the town. He was not sad for long. He saw pretty flowers. He saw green trees. Birds sang in the trees. Leo felt happy again.

Leo walked for many days. Kind people gave him food. He wanted to share poems. He read his poems to them. But they walked away quickly. They did not like his words.

Leo did not stop making poems. He read his poems to the birds. The birds sang back to him. They seemed to like his words. Leo liked that very much.

Then Leo came to a big forest. It was dark there. The forest felt a little scary. But Leo did not stop. He sang his happy poems loudly.

Leo walked out of the dark trees. He saw a bright, sunny field. Green grass grew there. Many flowers bloomed. He saw a big palace. It was very beautiful.

Leo walked into the palace garden. It had many bright flowers. He made a new poem. He saw a pretty lady there. She lay on soft grass. She looked very sad.

The lady looked at Leo. She spoke in a soft voice. 'Please read your poem,' she said. 'I heard you sing it.' Leo felt surprised.

Leo read his poem to her. He read with a clear voice. The lady's eyes closed slowly. She fell into a deep sleep. It was a peaceful sleep. She slept for a long time. The bad magic was gone.

The King came to the garden. He was very happy. 'You helped my daughter,' he said. 'You can be our special poet.' 'You can be Princess Lily's friend.' 'Do not wake her now.' Leo was very happy too. He loved his poems. His poems made good things happen.

Original Story 645 words · 3 min read

THE WAKEFUL

PRINCESS

One time there lived (that is to say,

If half a crust of bread a day

And sleeping on a bed of hay

May so be rated)

A Gentle Youth who tuned his lay

To all the Metres of the day,

But was not, I regret to say,

Appreciated.

In Market-place or Public Way

He read his ode or sang his lay,

As was the custom of the day,

But none suggested

A Laurel Wreath or Crown of Bay:

Instead, one morn, to his dismay,

While spouting forth a Tragic Play,

He was arrested.

In Irons he was led away,

And, by a Justice stern and gray,

For blocking up the Public Way

He was indicted.

Then, since he had nowith to pay

The Fine (a trifle anyway),

To leave the town without delay

He was invited.

There was no choice but to obey—

He left the town at break of day,

Yet still his heart was brave and gay;

Fate could not queer him.

For was it not the month of May,

Were there not flowers beside the way,

And little lambs to sport and play,

And birds to cheer him?

He journeyed on for many a day;

The Peasants gave him Curds and Whey;

For aught I know the Fairies may

Some Food have found him.

At night he slept beneath a Bay

Or Laurel Tree, and, I dare say,

Dreamed he was Laureate, and they

Were twined around him.

Indeed, his only trouble lay

In this, that tho’ his spirits gay

And gentle Heart and winning way

Charmed and delighted

All whom he met, yet, strange to say,

To hear his verses none would stay—

Even the Peasants ran away

When he recited.

But he was not the sort that say,

“Oh, woe is mine—alack-a-day!”

He lived for Hope, and in some way

Was bound to find it.

“What matter! Let them go,” he’d say;

“Each to his taste—henceforth I’ll play

And sing to Birds alone, for they

Don’t seem to mind it.”

And so he journeyed many a day,

Till now at last his darkening way

Lies thro’ a forest dim and gray;

Yet, nothing daunted,

Though hoary branches bar the way,

And twisted roots his steps betray,

And ghostly voices seem to say

The place is haunted.

Singing a Carol blithe and gay,

He presses on, nor does he stay,

Until at last the light of day

His sight surprises.

And now a little winding way

Leads, through a meadow pink with May,

To where, not half a mile away,

A Palace rises.

He wandered on, his thoughts astray,

Framing a little Roundelay

And weaving garlands of the May

(For whom not guessing),

Until before him suddenly

There loomed a gateway grim and gray,

Whose dark doors yielded to the sway

Of his light pressing.

And lo! a garden gleaming, gay

With flowers in dazzling array,

And fountains flashing silver spray,

And bowers shady;

And on an emerald bank there lay

A creature fairer than the day,

Yet sadder than a moonlight ray—

A wondrous lady.

Abashed the Poet turned away,

When a low voice entreated, “Stay!

Read me that little Roundelay

I heard you singing.”

It was as though upon him lay

A spell that forced him to obey,

And he recited it straightway

In voice clear ringing.

A dreamy, languid, far-away

Expression dims her eyes as they,

Like violets at droop of day,

Are closing—closing.

The Poet ends his Roundelay,

And turns to hear what she may say,

And finds to his complete dismay

The Princess dozing.

Then rose a cry: “She sleeps! Hurray!

The Princess sleeps! Oh, joyful day!

The spell is broken—Rise, I pray,

Oh, sweet song-maker.”

’Twas the King spoke, “Arise, I pray:

I make you Laureate this day;

My daughter’s hand, too, by the way,

Is yours—don’t wake her.”



Story DNA fairy tale · whimsical

Moral

Perseverance in one's passion, even when unappreciated, can lead to unexpected rewards and fulfill one's destiny.

Plot Summary

An unappreciated poet, banished from his town for public recitations, journeys through the countryside, finding joy in nature despite continued rejection of his art. He eventually discovers a palace where a beautiful princess lies under a mysterious spell. When he recites his poem to her, she falls into a deep sleep, which, to everyone's surprise, breaks the enchantment. The overjoyed King rewards the poet by making him Laureate and offering his daughter's hand in marriage.

Themes

perseveranceunrecognized talentthe power of artdestiny

Emotional Arc

struggle to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rhyme scheme (AABBCCDD), poetic meter, archaic language, direct address to reader (e.g., "For aught I know")

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: happy
Magic: a sleeping spell on the princess, the power of poetry to break a spell
the poet's verses (symbolizing his unappreciated talent and ultimately his power)the sleeping princess (symbolizing a problem only the hero can solve)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

The concept of a 'Laureate' dates back to ancient Greece and Rome, revived in various European monarchies. The story reflects a romanticized view of the struggling artist.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. An unappreciated, impoverished poet tries to share his verses in public.
  2. He is arrested for public disturbance and, unable to pay a fine, is banished from his town.
  3. The poet leaves town, maintaining a brave and gay spirit, finding solace in nature.
  4. He journeys for many days, receiving food from peasants, but they, like everyone else, flee when he recites his poetry.
  5. Undaunted, he decides to sing only to birds, who don't seem to mind his verses.
  6. He travels through a dark, foreboding forest, singing cheerfully despite the eerie atmosphere.
  7. He emerges from the forest into a beautiful meadow, where he sees a palace.
  8. He wanders into the palace garden, composing a roundelay, and finds a beautiful, sad lady.
  9. The lady, under a spell, asks him to recite the roundelay she heard him singing.
  10. As he recites, her eyes close, and she falls into a deep sleep, breaking a long-standing enchantment.
  11. The King appears, overjoyed, and rewards the poet by making him Laureate and offering his daughter's hand in marriage, cautioning him not to wake her.

Characters 3 characters

The Gentle Youth ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Of slender build, likely of average height for his time, with a somewhat unkempt but earnest appearance from his travels. His face, though often overlooked, holds a gentle and hopeful expression.

Attire: Simple, worn peasant attire suitable for travel and poverty. Perhaps a coarse linen tunic in a muted earth tone like grey or undyed cream, possibly patched, with simple breeches and worn leather shoes or boots. No adornments.

Wants: To share his poetry and be appreciated for his art; to find hope and beauty in the world.

Flaw: His poetry is universally unappreciated, making him seem naive or out of touch with public taste. He struggles to connect with an audience.

Transforms from an unappreciated, banished poet to a celebrated Laureate and future prince, discovering that his unique talent, though misunderstood by many, holds a powerful, unexpected magic.

A young man with an earnest, hopeful expression, holding a small scroll of poetry, walking through a meadow.

Optimistic, persistent, gentle, artistic, resilient. He is undeterred by rejection and finds joy in simple things.

Image Prompt & Upload
A young man of slender build, average height, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has fair skin, a gentle and hopeful expression, and light brown, slightly disheveled, shoulder-length hair. He wears a coarse, undyed cream linen tunic, simple brown breeches, and worn leather shoes. He holds a small, rolled-up parchment scroll in his right hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Princess ◆ supporting

human young adult female

Exquisitely beautiful, described as 'fairer than the day,' yet with an air of profound sadness and languor due to her enchantment. She is likely of a delicate build, reflecting her prolonged state of wakefulness.

Attire: Royal attire, but perhaps slightly rumpled or less vibrant than it would be if she were well. A flowing gown of fine silk or velvet in a soft, regal color like lavender, pale blue, or rose, possibly with subtle embroidery. No heavy jewels, as her condition prevents her from fully appreciating them.

Wants: To find rest and escape her enchantment, though she is too weary to actively pursue it.

Flaw: Her magical enchantment, which prevents her from sleeping and makes her perpetually weary.

Remains largely passive until she is cured of her enchantment by the Youth's poetry, transforming from a sad, wakeful figure to a sleeping, and presumably, happy princess.

A beautiful young woman with violet-like eyes, lying on an emerald bank, her eyelids heavy with sleep.

Languid, sad, enchanted, passive. Her personality is largely overshadowed by her magical affliction, making her seem distant and perpetually tired.

Image Prompt & Upload
A beautiful young woman of delicate build, lying gracefully on a grassy bank, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has fair skin, a serene expression, and long, elegant light brown hair. Her eyes are violet-like, heavy-lidded and almost closed. She wears a flowing gown of soft lavender silk, subtly embroidered. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The King ◆ supporting

human adult male

A regal figure, likely of a dignified and perhaps slightly anxious bearing due to his daughter's condition. He would be well-dressed, reflecting his royal status.

Attire: Rich, formal royal robes. A heavy velvet tunic in a deep jewel tone like crimson or sapphire, possibly trimmed with ermine or gold embroidery, with a matching crown or circlet. He would wear fine leather boots.

Wants: To cure his daughter of her enchantment and see her sleep again.

Flaw: Powerless to cure his daughter's magical affliction himself.

Remains consistent in his role as a concerned father and benevolent ruler, ultimately finding joy and relief when his daughter is cured.

A regal king, wearing a jeweled crown, with a look of immense relief and joy on his face.

Concerned, benevolent, decisive, grateful. He is deeply worried about his daughter but quick to reward those who help her.

Image Prompt & Upload
A dignified, mature man of regal bearing, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a mature face with a neatly trimmed grey beard and hair, and a beaming expression of immense joy and relief. He wears a heavy crimson velvet tunic trimmed with gold embroidery, and a golden, jeweled crown on his head. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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Public Way / Market-place

outdoor morning Spring, likely a clear day

A bustling public space in a medieval European town, likely paved with cobblestones, where people gather for commerce and entertainment. It's a place of public assembly.

Mood: Initially lively, then quickly becomes indifferent and dismissive towards the Youth's performances.

The Youth attempts to perform his poetry but is ignored, then arrested for blocking the way.

cobblestone ground stalls or market structures crowds of peasants and townspeople Justice stern and gray
Image Prompt & Upload
A busy medieval European market square, paved with worn cobblestones, under a bright morning sky. Half-timbered Fachwerk houses with thatched roofs line the square, their upper floors overhanging. Peasants in simple tunics and merchants haggle around wooden stalls laden with goods. In the foreground, a small crowd gathers, some looking on with disinterest, others moving past. Sunlight casts sharp shadows from the buildings. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Dim and Gray Forest

outdoor day, but appears dim and gray Spring, but the canopy makes it feel perpetually shadowed

A dense, ancient forest with a somber atmosphere. Hoary, twisted branches form a thick canopy, blocking out much of the light, and gnarled roots crisscross the forest floor.

Mood: Eerie, haunted, mysterious, yet the Youth remains undaunted.

The Youth journeys through this foreboding forest, singing to keep his spirits up, before emerging into a meadow.

hoary, twisted tree branches gnarled roots on the ground dense canopy filtered, dim light
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A deep, ancient European forest, shrouded in perpetual twilight. Massive, gnarled oak and beech trees with hoary, twisted branches form a dense, interlocking canopy that filters the daylight into a dim, greenish-gray glow. Thick, exposed roots snake across the mossy, uneven forest floor, creating natural obstacles. The air feels still and heavy, with a sense of ancient mystery. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Palace Garden

outdoor day May, sunny and pleasant

A magnificent, gleaming garden belonging to a grand European palace, filled with dazzling flowers, sparkling fountains, and shaded bowers. It features an emerald bank where the Princess rests.

Mood: Luxurious, enchanting, yet tinged with a melancholic beauty due to the sleeping Princess.

The Youth enters the garden, discovers the sleeping Princess, and recites his roundelay, breaking her spell.

dazzling array of flowers fountains flashing silver spray shaded bowers emerald green bank ornate gateway
Image Prompt & Upload
A resplendent European palace garden in full bloom during a bright May afternoon. Manicured flowerbeds burst with vibrant, dazzling colors, arranged around intricate marble fountains that spray shimmering silver water into the air. Shaded bowers with climbing roses and honeysuckle offer secluded spots. An emerald green lawn slopes gently, leading towards the distant, elegant facade of a Baroque-style palace. Sunlight illuminates the scene, highlighting the rich textures of the flowers and the sparkle of the water. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.