THE PILGRIM PIGEONS
by William Elliot Griffis · from Belgian Fairy Tales
Adapted Version
Once, in a sunny land, lived pigeons. But they were not happy. Monkeys lived in that land. They were very naughty. The monkeys bothered The Pigeons. They broke their homes. They made The Pigeons scared. The Pigeons felt very sad. They wanted to be safe. They wanted peace.
The Pigeons did not like this. They wanted peace. Papa Pigeon spoke. "We must fly away," he said. "We need a new home. A safe home for us. We need a safe place." Pigeons agreed. They flew from Monkey Land. They flew far.
The Pigeons flew far away. They found a warm, sunny land. Here, they grew big and happy. They made many new pigeon families. People were kind to them. People taught them to fly messages. The Pigeons carried letters. They flew fast. They were happy in this land. They made good homes.
Then, people started to fight. Big, scary birds came. These were falcons. Falcons chased The Pigeons. They scared The Pigeons very much. Many pigeon mothers did not come home. The little ones were sad. The Pigeons were very scared. Their homes were not safe.
The wise father pigeons met. Papa Pigeon spoke again. "We must fly away again," he said. "We go to a far, cold land. It is in the North. We will find a safe place there. No fighting, no scary birds. We will be safe." Granny Pigeon nodded. She agreed.
The Pigeons started their long trip. It was a hard trip. They flew to the cold North. Little pigeons got tired. The big pigeons stopped often. They rested their small wings. They helped the young ones. They flew together, brave and strong. They flew very far.
At last, they came to the cold North. People left food for them. Yummy seeds were there. The Pigeons found warm places. They built new, cozy nests. They were safe now. They were very happy. No more scary birds. They were truly safe.
Kind fairies lived in the North. Queen Freya was their queen. She heard about The Pigeons. She heard how good they were. The Pigeons were gentle. They were very polite. Queen Freya liked this news. She smiled a kind smile. She wanted to meet them.
A Little Fairy saw The Pigeons. She saw their big wings. She saw they flew far. She told Queen Freya. This was new news. King Odin had black birds. They brought him news. But Little Fairy found this first. She was very clever.
Queen Freya was a kind queen. She loved all good things. She sent a special letter. It was for Papa Pigeon. "Come to my palace," she said. "Bring a pigeon friend. Come to my beautiful palace. I want to meet you." Papa Pigeon felt happy. He felt honored.
The Pigeons chose two friends. They were white doves. Their feathers were very white. White is good for ice. White is good for snow. They would visit Queen Freya. They would go to her ice palace. They felt very proud. This was a great honor.
So, the pigeons found a happy home. They were brave and never gave up. When things were hard, they found new ways. This made them safe and happy! And so, the brave pigeons found their forever home, safe and loved in Queen Freya's beautiful palace. They were happy, happy, happy!
Original Story
THE PILGRIM PIGEONS
Every child, old enough to eat with a spoon, knows that monkeys and pigeons cannot get along together. The birds are gentle and of sweet disposition, but the beasts behave like ruffians. All the pigeons of any family, that want to have a quiet time, move away into other countries. It would be like imps and angels living together.
The naughty monkeys are too fond of fresh eggs, to care where they get them, and they have no regard for the feelings of other creatures. They climb up into the trees and pull down the pigeons’ nests, and even eat up the young squabs.
So it happened that, long, long ago, the pigeon fathers and mothers flew far, far away, from Monkey Land. Then the young fuzzy fellows, with such long fingers and toes, had to do without the little blue eggs for their breakfast, of which they had been so fond.
The first country, in which the flock of emigrant pigeons rested their weary wings, was where the Saracens lived. Here were orange and lemon trees, and figs and nut trees, besides plenty of barley and other grain. So that the little birds, that had been made thin and very tired by flying so far, soon got fat again. The young lady pigeons preened their feathers, and made themselves very lovely to look at. This pleased the young male birds greatly. From ducking their heads so vigorously while eating, the pigeons were sometimes called doves; that is divers.
Now that traveling was over, the season of courting began. Soon it was whispered among the pigeon mothers that this, or that son, and daughter, had mated, and both were busy at nest building.
The Saracen boys and girls were very kind to these new comers. They made playmates of them, and taught the mother bird to carry messages, from one city to another. For once away from her nest and young ones, she wanted to get back in a hurry. By and bye, when well trained, a homing pigeon would fly long distances without regard to family cares, or little ones in the nest. So the pigeons were very happy in the Saracen world.
In this warm region, they not only multiplied, but found new and strange places to live in, some in minarets, and some in the mountains; others in the woods, some in the crowded cities, and some by the seashore. Wonderful to relate, instead of being all alike, in size and color, they changed in form, weight and habits, the carrier birds, especially, being strong of wing. Yet they were all called doves, or pigeons, though so varied in appearance.
But after a long time, just when everything in the bird world was going on finely, all the pigeons were made dreadfully unhappy by very sad news. Some of the old feathered daddies at once declared the whole flock would have to become emigrants and pilgrims, again, and seek another country.
What was the matter? All the young fathers and mothers, with their little families, could not, at first, see the reason why. They had built nests, and their birdlings were just putting on their first coat of feathers, and their proud parents wanted to show them off in their varied colors and bright neck-sheen. In fact, every mother bird was sure that her fledglings were very accomplished young ones, and would certainly surprise the world when they made their début. It was too bad that, just when their babies were growing up to be big birds, and coming out into pigeon society, they must leave the olive groves and pleasant vineyards, to go to a strange country where nobody knew them. Already they had learned to coo a ditty, that sounded very much like “Home, sweet home.”
Well, this was the trouble. There was war going on in the world of human beings, and men were killing each other, because, on one side, one set of fellows did not believe the stories the other lot told. The Crusaders fought with a red cross on their coats, but the Saracens had a silver crescent on their banners. One of the most famous of the Saracens was Saladin, but the victor and king of Jerusalem was Godfrey de Bouillon, a Belgian. The Crusaders and the Saracens had dressed themselves in iron clothes, and their armies had gone to battle. They were not contented to hack and chop each other to pieces, but these fierce fighters had to carry their quarrels even into the air and there they made the birds fight and kill each other.
The Crusaders brought into the Saracen country hundreds of falcons. These terrible birds of prey had sharp beaks, like knives, and horrible talons like steel hooks, that choked and killed at once. The men from the West set these savage creatures to catch the carrier pigeons, which the Saracens had used for letter carriers. In this way, they could find out their enemy’s war secrets.
Hundreds of innocent doves were thus cruelly torn to pieces. In many a nest, there was grief. Mournful cooings were heard all over the land, because the little pigeons were lonely, without their mothers that did not come back. The poor daddies had hard work to get food enough for the birdies to eat. Everybody knows that father-birds do not know much about taking care of motherless little things, when they have not enough feathers to fly with. Some of the tiny squabs, that missed the warm bosoms of their mothers, actually died in the nest.
So a great meeting of the daddies was held to take counsel as to what should be done. A few of the older mothers were present, who sat on the top branches of the trees and listened. The whole subject was talked over. To stay there meant to be all torn to pieces by the falcons of the Crusaders. So it was decided to leave Saracen land, and migrate to another country; and, in fact, nearly all the young and stronger birds went.
“But this time,” said one of the older of the father-birds, who seemed to be chief of the company, “we shall leave the warm countries and go into the cold north. There, it may be that men do not fight, and there are no falcons.”
“At any rate,” cooed the very oldest of the mother-birds, “there will be no monkeys there.”
At this, all the other mother pigeons winked and blinked at each other, as if to say, “What a long memory she has!” And, indeed, this bald-pated old pigeon was the oldest in the entire party. She was not a carrier, but she remembered what her great, great grand-mother had told her, about the mischievous monkeys, that ate up the pigeons’ eggs, to the grief of the parents, that could only fly at the rascals, and peck the ears of the ugly brutes.
“Nor any falcons, either,” snapped out another rather old Mrs. Pigeon, that had six times laid eggs, and borne six broods of squabs, each time educating them properly, and teaching them to fly. Now, in her old age, just when she hoped for a little quiet, without family cares or trouble, she had to take sole charge of two sets of young pigeons, whose mothers had been killed by falcons. The poor daddies, that were now widowers, did not know much about the business of housekeeping, or of washing, dressing, and preening the feathers of his young brood, or about keeping the nest in order; yet they could spank the lazy squabs when necessary, and box the heads of the naughty ones, and do it well.
As for the old lady pigeon, who had to attend to the matter of properly raising two motherless families, she grumbled a good deal about it, declaring to her neighbors that she had already, for six successive spring seasons, raised six lots of youngsters. For her part, she was tired of squabs, that had no clothes on, and did not know how to coo, or behave properly. She would do the best she could, to look after other folks’ babies, yet she did hope that, as soon as their wings grew, the flight of the whole community would at once take place, and not be put off a day; for she had heard that more falcons were coming.
It must be at night, when the terrible hunters of the air were asleep, or could not see, that the pigeons were to migrate in a body. The country decided on was Norway.
So, after a long flight, with many stops on the way, to give rest to the wings of the youngsters, that were not strong, the entire flock—enough of them almost to darken the air—arrived in the land of mountains, lakes, and waterfalls, of stormy winds, and of ice and snow, that fell heavy and often; sometimes even in summer. They received a right royal welcome from the people living in the country where reindeer were numerous and nearly all the houses were built of wood.
Tied to the chimneys of the barns and wooden houses, the stranger birds noticed sheaves of grain and hay. From these, the pigeons found food when they were hungry, and carried away warm stuff for the building and lining of their nests. Soon they were very happy in their new quarters, with no wars, or monkeys, or falcons, to disturb their housekeeping.
There was much billing and cooing, and a great many nests were built at once. These were soon filled, first, with pretty blue eggs, and then by chirping birdies, and everybody in the pigeon world was happy as happy could be.
Now when the fairies in Norway heard of the arrival of this new kind of bird, in their realm, and of the good behaviour of the young, and the fine character of the old ones, they wanted to see them and could hardly wait till they paid a formal visit.
There was a fairy maid, that traveled much over the whole country, and heard all the news. She listened at keyholes, and over chimneys, and in the market places, where she could overhear the chat and the gossip. She always had her ears open, and when told of the pigeons and their wonderful ways, and fine manners, she hied at once to see how they looked.
When this news carrier found that the birds were short legged, but very strong, had big wings, and could fly long distances, she went right off and told Freya, the Fairy Queen, whose husband, Odin, was a mighty king and knew everything. Freya at once sent for a pair of doves, to pay a visit at her court.
Because of this, the fairy maid gained great glory, and was very proud. Everybody had hitherto supposed that only the two ravens, which fly out all through the world during the day, and come back at night, could find out the news. This pair of wise birds, perched every evening on the shoulder of the fairy King, after he had had his supper, and was in good humor. They whispered in his ear, telling him about all manner of things, and especially the latest news. In this way, he got to know first everything that went on.
Yet in this case, the ravens had failed to learn about the pigeons, while the fairy maid had found them. That is the reason why she was very proud. She boasted over the ravens so much, that she made herself very disagreeable, and hardly any one loved her. But as for the king, he lost his temper and called the ravens slow pokes, blockheads, and other names, until Freya, his queen and wife, soothed his temper. Then the ravens promised to be more alert, and not let a single fairy ever get ahead of them in carrying news.
Now the fairy queen, that invited the pigeons to her snow palace was named Freya, and her day to be at home was Friday. Every time we speak of that day in the week, we pronounce her name. When we say Wednesday, or Woden’s day, we utter the name of her husband, the fairy king.
Freya, the beautiful, was always dressed in white, her robes being trimmed with ermine. Her cap, cloak, skirts, leggings and buskins were snowy-hued. Her skis were of white birch, and her skates were of silver.
It was her business to attend to the love affairs of young people. She tied their marriage knots, made homes, and welcomed little babies to their cradles, and helped in giving them names. On Valentine’s day, she was always very busy, for she taught the young men and women how to write love letters. Then she attended to getting valentines carried and delivered to the lads and lassies, who were waiting and expecting them.
In great glee, at having such charming visitors in her realm, Freya sent an invitation to the king of the doves, asking that a pair of his great family should visit her court, on a certain day. She promised them a good dinner—not of whale blubber, or seal meat, or fish, or mushrooms, or moss, such as reindeers eat, but of wheat, barley, grain, and seeds, such as pigeons enjoy.
The King of the doves, on receiving the invitation from Freya, at once called a council of father and mother birds. All were delighted to be thus honored. After much talk, it was decided that a pair of white doves should be sent, the hue of their plumage being best suited to the situation, and most pleasing to the fairies in Norway, where ice and snow lie longest on the land. So the happy pair, chosen to represent the kingdom of the doves, set out on their journey.
In the next story we shall tell what happened to them.
Story DNA
Moral
Even in the face of repeated adversity, a community can find peace and prosperity through resilience and seeking new opportunities.
Plot Summary
Pigeons, constantly harassed by mischievous monkeys, migrate from their homeland to Saracen country, where they thrive and become carrier pigeons. However, human wars between Crusaders and Saracens lead to falcons hunting the pigeons, forcing them to migrate again to the cold, peaceful land of Norway. There, they find safety and prosperity, eventually catching the attention of the local fairies, particularly Queen Freya, who invites a pair of doves to her court, symbolizing their successful integration and newfound peace.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story loosely references the Crusades and integrates elements of Norse mythology, particularly the figures of Odin and Freya, and their associated days of the week.
Plot Beats (11)
- Monkeys in Monkey Land constantly harass pigeons, eating their eggs and young.
- The pigeons, seeking peace, decide to emigrate from Monkey Land.
- They settle in Saracen land, where they thrive, multiply, and are trained by humans as carrier pigeons.
- Human wars between Crusaders and Saracens lead to falcons being used to hunt and kill carrier pigeons, causing great sorrow.
- A council of pigeon daddies decides to migrate again, this time to the cold North, specifically Norway, to escape war and falcons.
- The pigeons undertake a long, arduous journey to Norway, making stops for the young.
- They arrive in Norway, find food from grain sheaves left by humans, and build new nests, living in peace.
- The Norwegian fairies, led by Freya, hear of the pigeons' arrival and good conduct.
- A fairy maid discovers the pigeons' abilities and reports to Queen Freya, outperforming Odin's ravens.
- Freya, the goddess of love and Friday, sends an invitation to the King of the doves for a pair to visit her court.
- The pigeon community selects a pair of white doves to represent them at Freya's snow palace.
Characters
The Pilgrim Pigeons (Collective)
Initially, a flock of small, gentle birds, made thin and tired by their long flight from Monkey Land. After settling in Saracen land, they grew fat and varied in size and color, with carrier birds being strong-winged. In Norway, they are described as short-legged but very strong, with big wings capable of long distances. The chosen representatives for Freya are specifically white doves.
Attire: Natural plumage, varying in color and sheen. No artificial clothing.
Wants: To find a safe, peaceful home free from predators (monkeys, falcons) and human conflict, to raise their young in security, and to thrive as a community.
Flaw: Vulnerability to predators like monkeys and falcons, and to the collateral damage of human wars. Their gentle nature makes them susceptible to harm from more aggressive creatures.
Undergo a series of forced migrations, evolving from a simple flock seeking safety to a resilient community capable of adapting to vastly different environments (warm Saracen lands to cold Norway). They learn to navigate dangers and establish new homes, ultimately gaining recognition from mythical beings.
Gentle, sweet-dispositioned, adaptable, resilient, family-oriented, mournful when suffering loss, resourceful, community-minded, appreciative of kindness.
The Old Lady Pigeon
An older pigeon, likely with slightly faded or less vibrant plumage compared to younger birds, but still strong enough to care for young. Her physical description is not explicitly detailed beyond being an 'old lady pigeon'.
Wants: To ensure the survival and proper upbringing of the young pigeons, despite her personal weariness. To find a truly safe and peaceful home for the community.
Flaw: Her grumbling nature and weariness from raising many broods.
Remains a steadfast, if grumbling, figure of wisdom and responsibility, particularly in caring for the motherless young. Her character reinforces the theme of community resilience.
Grumpy, experienced, responsible, somewhat complaining but ultimately dutiful, wise (as she points out the absence of monkeys in the north).
The Chief Father-Bird
A mature, strong father-bird. No specific physical details are given beyond his role as a leader.
Wants: To lead his flock to a safe haven where they can live without fear of predators or war.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but perhaps the burden of leadership and making difficult decisions for the entire flock.
Remains a consistent figure of leadership, guiding the pigeons through their second major migration.
Decisive, thoughtful, strategic, a leader, concerned for the community's future.
Freya, the Fairy Queen
Beautiful and always dressed in white. Her robes are trimmed with ermine. She is associated with snow and ice, suggesting a graceful, ethereal presence.
Attire: Snowy-hued robes trimmed with ermine, a matching cap, cloak, skirts, leggings, and buskins. Her skis are of white birch, and her skates are of silver.
Wants: To fulfill her duties as the goddess of love, marriage, and family. To welcome and honor worthy creatures in her realm.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but perhaps a slight impatience with her husband's temper or the ravens' shortcomings.
Remains a consistent benevolent figure, offering a safe and honored place for the pigeons in her realm.
Beautiful, welcoming, benevolent, concerned with love and family matters, appreciative of good behavior, regal.
Odin, the Fairy King
A mighty king, but no specific physical details are given beyond his power and knowledge.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but implied to be regal attire befitting a mighty king.
Wants: To maintain his knowledge of the world and his authority as king.
Flaw: His quick temper, especially when his trusted sources (the ravens) fail him.
Remains a consistent figure of authority, learning a lesson about relying solely on his traditional news sources.
Mighty, all-knowing (though sometimes surprised), prone to losing his temper, but can be soothed by his wife.
The Fairy Maid
A fairy maid who travels much. No specific physical details are given, but she is agile enough to listen at keyholes and over chimneys.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but likely light and suitable for travel and eavesdropping.
Wants: To gather news and gain recognition for her efforts, especially by outperforming the ravens.
Flaw: Her excessive pride and boasting, which makes her unpopular.
Experiences a moment of great pride and glory for discovering the pigeons, but her subsequent boasting leads to her becoming disagreeable.
Curious, observant, diligent, proud, boastful, somewhat disagreeable due to her boasting.
The Two Ravens
Two wise black ravens, strong enough to fly throughout the world daily.
Attire: Natural black plumage.
Wants: To gather news for Odin and maintain their position as his primary news-carriers.
Flaw: Can be slow to discover new things, leading to Odin's displeasure.
Experience a moment of failure when they miss the news of the pigeons, leading them to promise to be more alert.
Wise, diligent (usually), knowledgeable, but can be outsmarted, and are sensitive to criticism.
Locations
Monkey Land
A warm, lush land characterized by abundant trees where monkeys climb and pigeons build nests. It is implied to be a place of natural abundance, but also danger for pigeons.
Mood: Initially peaceful for pigeons, but quickly becomes dangerous and hostile due to monkey predation.
The original home of the pigeons before they were forced to emigrate due to monkey predation on their eggs and squabs.
Saracen Land
A warm, fertile region with orange, lemon, fig, and nut trees, alongside fields of barley and other grains. It features diverse landscapes including mountains, woods, crowded cities, and seashores, with distinctive Islamic architecture like minarets.
Mood: Initially welcoming and prosperous for the pigeons, becoming increasingly dangerous and sorrowful due to human warfare and the introduction of falcons.
The pigeons' first refuge after leaving Monkey Land, where they thrived and were trained as carrier birds, but were eventually forced to leave due to the Crusades and falcons.
Norway (Fairy Queen Freya's Snow Palace)
A grand palace made of snow and ice, reflecting the cold, northern climate. It is the residence of Freya, the Fairy Queen, who is always dressed in white and associated with winter sports.
Mood: Magical, regal, and welcoming, especially for the chosen white doves. It embodies the serene and powerful presence of the Norse deities.
The destination for the chosen pair of white doves, invited by Freya, symbolizing the ultimate safety and honor for the pigeon community.
Norway (Pigeon Settlement)
A cold, northern land of mountains, lakes, and waterfalls, with stormy winds and frequent heavy snow and ice, even in summer. The human dwellings are primarily wooden houses and barns, often with sheaves of grain and hay tied to their chimneys.
Mood: Safe, peaceful, and abundant for the pigeons, a stark contrast to their previous homes. It is a place of new beginnings and undisturbed family life.
The final refuge for the main flock of pigeons, where they find peace, abundant food, and freedom from human conflict, monkeys, and falcons.