THE PALACE UNDER THE WAVES

by William Elliot Griffis · from Swiss Fairy Tales

fairy tale cautionary tale whimsical Ages 8-14 1685 words 8 min read
Cover: THE PALACE UNDER THE WAVES

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CEFR A1 Age 5 384 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Water Fairies lived by a big, blue lake. They loved to dance with people. They came to the village. They changed to look like people. Their green clothes were always wet. This was their secret.

People danced with them. They felt wet clothes. But they did not think about it. They had much fun. They laughed and sang loudly.

One night, the music man played music. He saw a Water Fairy girl. Her green dress was very wet. Water drops fell to the ground. The music man stopped playing. He said, "Look! Wet clothes!"

The Water Fairies ran very fast. They went to the big lake. They jumped in the water. The Water King was cross with them. He told them, "Be smart next time!"

After this, people watched new dancers. They looked at their clothes well. They checked for wet spots. But Water Fairies still came at times. They danced and had fun.

Princess Lily lived in a big house. She came to a village dance. She saw a handsome man. He was very nice. He danced very well. Princess Lily liked him much.

A Wise Woman watched the dancers. She saw the man's green clothes. They were wet and shiny. She knew his big secret. He was the Water King. He lived under the lake.

The Water King saw the Wise Woman. He knew she saw his secret. He made her stand very still. She could not move or speak. He took Princess Lily's hand. They went to the lake fast.

He jumped into the water. Princess Lily was with him. They went deep down. They went to his pretty house. It was a crystal palace.

Princess Lily became a queen. She had many nice things. She had many helpers. She lived in the palace. Days passed like hours. Time went very fast.

At times, Lily thought of home. She missed her old house. But her new home was so pretty. She stayed there always. She could not go back.

She ate special fairy food. She got nice gifts. Her skin was green now. It shone like the water. She was a Water Fairy.

People at times hear sweet music. It comes from the lake. On sunny days, they look down. They think they see a palace. It is under the water.

Original Story 1685 words · 8 min read

THE PALACE UNDER THE WAVES

Fashions change in the fairy world, as well as among mortals who live on the earth. The Swiss water fairies, called Undines, at times grew tired of living down below the surface of the lakes and rivers. When restless, they longed to mingle in the village gatherings. They wanted to hear the lively music of the young men and maidens, as they sang and danced. Their favorite time for waltzes and cotillions was on moonlight nights.

So it became quite common, at these times, for the fairy maids and swains to swim up to the shore. Then these Undines changed themselves into girls and young men. They put on clothes, that were deep green, the color of the waves. Slipping in among the dancers, they joined in the fun and merry making. In this manner, many a lad romped with a water fairy and even kissed her, thinking she was or might be his sweetheart; for, in the dim light of the moon, it was not always easy to see clearly the face of one’s partner. Many a lassie received an embrace, or a salute on the lips, from a lively dancer, whom she supposed was a new comer. He might not be well known in the village, she thought, though he appeared graceful and dressed very nicely, in sea green, gauzy clothes.

Yet no matter how hard these Undines might try to get their clothes entirely dry, they could never wring the water out wholly of their garments, so that they were always more or less damp. If they had changed their form too quickly, their clothes would drip, and make spots on the floor, or ground. Often the village folk felt dampness, on their limbs below the knees. Yet few ever gave the matter a second thought, for their minds were wholly set on having a good time, and they had it.

Sometimes the lady fairies started rather late in the evening to take their swim to the lake shore. Fearing to lose some of the fun, and thinking they might even find the dancing all over, and the people gone home to bed, they were in a great hurry, while on the strand, to change into the form of mortals and put on their human clothes. So it happened that, when they joined in the dance, one sharp-eyed fellow, who was playing the violin for the measures, noticed that something was wrong. In fact, he was so surprised, that he suddenly stopped fiddling. Then, instantly, everybody dropped arms and stood looking around at the musician’s stand, to see what was the matter. In a moment, it was as quiet as a church aisle, when the parson was praying.

What he saw made his eyes big and round. Then, most impolitely—as some of the girls thought—he pointed to a maiden’s green petticoat, that was beneath her outer dress and that had come a little below her frock. It was dripping with water. Again, after looking with searching eyes at another, and a third, he screamed out:

“Folks and fellow villagers! Don’t you know you’ve got the Undines among you? Look there, and there, and there!” Then he pointed, with his fiddle bow, to some of the prettiest of the female dancers. “Just feel the hem of their skirts, and you’ll know what sort of guests have been dancing with you tonight.”

Whereupon, every young man turned his female partner round, and some of them, most ungallantly, flapped their hands on their lower skirts. Feeling and finding that these were very damp, four or five of them at once lifted up their hands, which were wringing wet, and shook off the drops.

One bold fellow even went behind, and seized the tail of his partner’s petticoat. She seemed to be the sloppiest-looking girl in the whole party, and he actually wrung out a half pint of water.

Thereupon, a tall handsome fellow, leader of the Undine party of a half dozen or so, put his two fingers in his mouth and gave a sort of whistle. At once, all the Undines shouted and ran down to the water’s edge. There, they stopped a minute or two, on the lake beach, and then leaped below the waves and disappeared. It sounded as if six big seals had made a dive.

One villager, who pretended to be an Undine, ran quickly after these water sprites and saw them for a moment on the shore, when they changed their form before resuming their old shapes.

He came back to tell a wonderful tale of what he had seen. When he examined the clothes they had left behind, he found that though they looked shiny, in the moonlight, the stuff was only that of some water plants like sea weed.

When arrived in their crystal palace under the waves, the king of the Undines gave the girl fairies a good scolding, for not, in the first place, being more punctual in both starting and coming home, and next, for being in too much of a hurry in changing themselves into mortals. As for the others, he punished these by forbidding them ever to dance again on that side of the lake.

Ever after that, when, on moonlight nights, the village lads and lasses came out to waltz, they scrutinized each partner in the dance, before allowing him or her to join in when the music began. Some, among the younger set of girls, felt offended at such a severe examination; but it was necessary, and the other girls agreed to it.

Yet even then, the water sprites would sometimes join in; for, when everybody was lively, and the fun was fast and furious, each one of the lads and lasses was too much excited to notice the dress, or to be certain as to who was who, or which was which, or what was what, or even to see the face of a partner.

One night, the daughter of the lord of the grand chateau, the Princess Babi, slipped out the castle gate, along with several of her maids, and joined the village youth in their fun. At the very height of the dance, a young man became her partner in the waltz, chiefly because of his elegant clothes and polished manners. Though he did not talk, but expressed his offers and wishes by signs and motions, she enjoyed mightily his dancing, which was both deft and graceful.

There was present, however, a sharp-eyed mother, a nurse, who had three nieces in the dance. She kept looking, like a lynx, at every lad in the party. At last, she noticed this unusually handsome and stylish fellow, who seemed to wear finer clothes than most of the village boys.

The old woman’s suspicions were fully aroused, when she saw the young couple linked, arm in arm, and, especially, as he turned his body round in the dance. For, when the moonbeams fell upon the skirt of his coat, it shone as only wet clothes could, in the silvery light. The color reflected was that of wave green.

Upon this, she made up her mind that this fine fellow was no other than the King of the Crystal Cavern, which was far down in the world under the waters.

She was about to give the signal, that would expose him, when her mouth was shut, and her limbs felt as if paralyzed by some unseen and unknown power, when she saw him offer to take, as his partner, the Princess Babi, the daughter of the castle lord.

Smilingly the lovely maiden put out her arms, in return for his embrace. All she thought of was the fun and merriment. Yet, within a few minutes after they had linked arms together, he started in a whirling dance. It was so rapid, that the mother and the older spectators, who sat watching the young people, were too fascinated to speak or cry out. They noticed him whirling his partner around, but getting ever nearer the lakeside. Wider and wider were the circles they made, but all the time he was bringing her nearer the beach; while she seemed delirious with delight, apparently oblivious to everything but the rapturous motion.

Reaching the shore, pausing hardly a moment, he leaped with her into the water, which was then silvered with the moonbeams and rippling with the breeze.

Down, down, below the sparkling waves, the King of the World under the Waters—for it was he—made her his wife and queen, but never would he let her go back home.

There, among the great coral trees and groves of gold and silver and amid heaps of shining gems, with a score of maidens to wait on her, valets and footmen and servants of a strange sort, and with food rich and abundant, pleasing and tempting to both eye and palate, and with the most entrancing music ever at her command, she was enraptured. So delighted was she, that the years passed away as days.

Yet even when touched with homesickness, and longing for those she had left behind on earth, in her castle home, she found herself watched and guarded. The gates, though made of emerald and sapphire, shut of themselves, because moved, by some secret spring, against her return. Having once eaten of fairy food, and accepted her husband’s gifts, she could never again leave either the palace or the World under the Waves. The crystal cavern was her prison. When she looked in the mirror, she found her teeth were wave green. She was now an Undine.

Yet in the village, where the story of the castle princess was told, it was declared that, on calm still nights, when the moon shone brightest, the most delightful music could be heard coming up from the lake. Some of the fishermen were sure that, far below on quiet summer days, also when no wind blew, and the sunbeams struck deep into the waters, they could peer down into the depths and see the walls and towers of this crystal palace.


Story DNA

Moral

Be wary of strangers and the allure of forbidden pleasures, for they may lead to irreversible consequences.

Plot Summary

Undines, Swiss water fairies, frequently join human village dances, disguising themselves but always retaining a tell-tale dampness. After a musician exposes them, villagers become more cautious, but the Undines occasionally persist. One night, Princess Babi is enchanted by the Undine King, who, upon being recognized by a nurse, abducts her into his magnificent underwater palace. Despite the luxury, Babi becomes his queen, forever trapped and transformed into an Undine, unable to return to her human life, while echoes of her new world sometimes reach the surface.

Themes

temptationthe allure of the unknownloss of innocenceconsequences of curiosity

Emotional Arc

innocence to entrapment

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: descriptive imagery, rule of three (implied in the Undines' repeated attempts)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: bittersweet
Magic: Undines (water fairies), transformation (Undines to humans, Princess to Undine), crystal palace under waves, magical paralysis, fairy food
damp clothes (sign of the otherworld)wave-green teeth (symbol of irreversible transformation)crystal palace (beautiful prison)

Cultural Context

Origin: Swiss (implied by Undines as Swiss water fairies)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Undines are a class of elemental beings associated with water, often depicted as beautiful women. Their lore is prevalent in Germanic and Swiss folklore.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. Undines, Swiss water fairies, often visit human village dances, changing into human form but always having damp clothes.
  2. Villagers sometimes feel the dampness but are too caught up in the fun to notice.
  3. One night, a musician notices a maiden's dripping petticoat and exposes the Undines to the villagers.
  4. The exposed Undines flee back to the lake, and their king scolds them for their carelessness.
  5. After this, villagers become more scrutinizing of new dancers, though Undines still sometimes slip through.
  6. Princess Babi, from the local chateau, joins a village dance and is captivated by a handsome, elegant stranger.
  7. A sharp-eyed nurse notices the stranger's wet, wave-green clothes and realizes he is the King of the Crystal Cavern.
  8. The King, sensing exposure, paralyzes the nurse and whirls Princess Babi towards the lake.
  9. He leaps into the water with her, taking her to his crystal palace under the waves.
  10. Princess Babi is made his queen, surrounded by luxury and servants, and loses track of time.
  11. She eventually feels homesickness but finds herself trapped, unable to leave the palace or the underwater world.
  12. Having eaten fairy food and accepted gifts, she is transformed into an Undine, with wave-green teeth.
  13. Villagers occasionally hear enchanting music from the lake or claim to see the underwater palace on calm days.

Characters

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The Undines (Female)

magical creature young adult female

Graceful and lithe, with a natural elegance. Their skin might have a slightly luminous quality, and they are always somewhat damp to the touch, especially their lower limbs.

Attire: Gauzy clothes, deep sea-green in color, resembling water plants like seaweed. They are always damp, and if they change form too quickly, their clothes drip water. They wear petticoats under their outer dresses.

Wants: To experience the joy and excitement of human village gatherings, particularly dancing and music.

Flaw: Their inability to completely dry their clothes, which betrays their true nature. Also, their impulsiveness and haste in changing forms.

They learn to be more cautious after being scolded by their king, but their inherent impulsiveness means they still sometimes join the dances.

Their deep sea-green, gauzy, and perpetually damp clothing, especially the dripping petticoats.

Playful, mischievous, eager for fun, somewhat careless, and easily excited by human merriment.

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The Undines (Male)

magical creature young adult male

Handsome and lively, with an elegant build. Like their female counterparts, they are always somewhat damp.

Attire: Gauzy clothes, deep sea-green in color, resembling water plants like seaweed. Always damp, and if they change form too quickly, their clothes drip water.

Wants: To experience the joy and excitement of human village gatherings, particularly dancing and music.

Flaw: Their inability to completely dry their clothes, which betrays their true nature. Also, their impulsiveness and haste in changing forms.

They learn to be more cautious after being scolded by their king, but their inherent impulsiveness means they still sometimes join the dances.

Their deep sea-green, gauzy, and perpetually damp clothing.

Playful, mischievous, eager for fun, somewhat careless, and easily excited by human merriment.

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The Violinist

human adult male

Not explicitly described, but he is sharp-eyed and observant.

Attire: Typical village attire for a musician of the era, likely practical and perhaps a bit worn, but not specified beyond that.

Wants: To expose the truth about the mysterious dancers and protect his fellow villagers.

Flaw: His directness might be seen as impolite by some.

He serves as the catalyst for the villagers' awareness of the Undines.

Holding his violin and bow, pointing with the bow at the dripping Undines.

Observant, sharp-eyed, quick-witted, bold (to stop the music and point out the Undines), and a bit impolite in his directness.

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The Bold Fellow

human young adult male

Not explicitly described, but implied to be strong enough to wring out a petticoat.

Attire: Typical village attire for a young man, likely practical and sturdy.

Wants: To confirm the Violinist's claims about the Undines.

Flaw: His lack of gallantry.

A minor character who helps confirm the Undines' presence.

Wringing water from a green petticoat.

Bold, ungallant, curious, and direct in verifying the Undines' nature.

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The Undine King

magical creature ageless male

Tall and handsome in his human form. In his true form, he is the King of the Crystal Cavern, implying a powerful and regal presence.

Attire: Elegant clothes, finer than most village boys, deep wave-green in color, and shining wetly in the moonlight. This suggests rich fabrics, possibly silk or fine linen, in a regal style appropriate for a king, even when disguised.

Wants: To rule his underwater kingdom, to enjoy human festivities (in disguise), and to claim Princess Babi as his queen.

Flaw: His true nature is revealed by his perpetually damp clothing.

He successfully abducts Princess Babi and makes her his queen, solidifying his power and desire for a human companion.

His elegant, wave-green clothes that shine wetly in the moonlight, and his ability to whisk people into the water.

Regal, powerful, decisive, somewhat possessive (he never lets Princess Babi go), and capable of both scolding and enchanting.

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Princess Babi

human (becomes Undine) young adult female

Lovely maiden, implied to be of noble birth, with delicate features. After becoming an Undine, her teeth turn wave-green.

Attire: Fine clothes befitting the daughter of a lord of a grand chateau. While not explicitly detailed, it would be a beautiful, perhaps silk or velvet, gown, likely in a fashionable style of the period, possibly with rich embroidery or jewels. After becoming an Undine, she wears the clothes of her new world, though not described.

Wants: To experience fun and merriment, to enjoy dancing, and to find delight in her surroundings.

Flaw: Her naivety and susceptibility to enchantment and pleasure, which lead to her abduction.

Transforms from a carefree human princess to the enchanted, captive queen of the Undine King, losing her freedom but gaining a life of perpetual luxury and becoming an Undine herself.

Her lovely, smiling face, dancing gracefully, then her wave-green teeth after her transformation.

Joyful, carefree, easily enraptured by beauty and pleasure, somewhat naive, and later, homesick but resigned.

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The Sharp-Eyed Mother (Nurse)

human adult | elderly female

Not explicitly described, but she is a 'sharp-eyed mother' and a 'nurse,' implying a watchful and perhaps slightly stern demeanor.

Attire: Practical and modest clothing typical of a nurse or watchful older woman in a village setting, likely made of sturdy fabrics like linen or wool, in muted colors.

Wants: To protect the young people, especially her nieces and the princess, from potential danger.

Flaw: Her inability to act or speak when faced with the Undine King's magic.

She serves as a warning figure, recognizing the danger but ultimately unable to prevent the princess's abduction.

Her lynx-like, suspicious eyes, fixed on the dancers.

Observant, suspicious, protective (of her nieces and the princess), cautious, and wise.

Locations

Swiss Village Gathering

outdoor night Moonlight nights, implying clear weather, possibly cool air given the dampness of the Undines.

A lively village gathering place, likely a common or open field near a lake shore, illuminated by moonlight. The ground might be grassy or packed earth, potentially becoming damp from the Undines' presence. The atmosphere is festive and bustling with music and dancing.

Mood: Joyful, festive, romantic, later suspicious and chaotic.

Undines mingle with mortals, their damp clothes reveal their true nature, leading to their exposure and retreat. Princess Babi is abducted by the Undine King from this location.

Moonlit open ground Dancing villagers Musician's stand with a violinist Lake shore in the background Gauzy, sea-green clothes of the Undines

The Crystal Palace Under the Waves

indoor Submerged, so unaffected by surface weather, but described as visible on 'quiet summer days' when sunbeams penetrate deep.

A magnificent, ethereal palace constructed entirely of crystal, nestled deep beneath the surface of a Swiss lake. It features grand walls and towers, gates made of emerald and sapphire, and is surrounded by vibrant coral trees, groves of gold and silver, and heaps of shining gems. The interior is opulent, with rich food and enchanting music.

Mood: Magical, opulent, enchanting, but ultimately a gilded prison.

The Undine King's domain where Princess Babi is taken, transformed into an Undine, and held captive forever.

Crystal walls and towers Emerald and sapphire gates Coral trees Groves of gold and silver Heaps of shining gems Strange servants Rich food Mirrors reflecting wave-green teeth