A BOY THAT VISITED FAIRYLAND
by William Elliot Griffis · from Welsh Fairy Tales
Adapted Version
Once, a boy named Elidyr lived. He loved to play games more than anything!
Elidyr did not like books. He liked to play all day. His teachers were not happy. His father was not happy. Elidyr often got into trouble. He was often scolded.
One day, Elidyr ran away. He ran far from home. He found a big cave. He went inside to sleep. The next day, he was free. But his tummy felt empty. Elidyr was very hungry.
Two small elves came to him. They were very friendly. "Come with us!" they said. "Come to fun land! Play all day! Elidyr forgot hunger." He went with the elves.
They went to Fairyland. The Fairy King was kind. The Fairy Prince was there. He asked Elidyr to play. They played with golden balls. Elidyr had much fun. No one scolded him there.
Elidyr played for many days. But he missed his mother. He wanted to see her. He felt very sad. He asked the Fairy King. "Can I visit my mother?"
The Fairy King said yes. "Do not take anything," he said. Elidyr promised the King. He went to see his mother. He came back to Fairyland. He kept his promise. He visited her many times. He never took anything.
One day, Elidyr talked. He told his mother about Fairyland. He told her of golden balls. His mother saw the shining ball. "Please bring one for me," she said. Elidyr felt unsure.
Elidyr wanted to please her. He took a golden ball. He hid it in his hand. He walked to his home. He went through the dark path. He held the ball tight.
Elidyr heard footsteps. The First Elf and Second Elf came. They followed him fast. Elidyr ran to his door. He fell down inside. The golden ball rolled. It stopped at his mother's feet.
The First Elf came inside. He picked up the ball. The elves looked very angry. "You broke your promise!" they said. "Do not take things! Elidyr felt bad." The elves went away fast.
Elidyr felt very sad. He felt very sorry inside. He broke his promise. He went to find the cave. He looked for Fairyland. He looked for many days. But he could not find it. Fairyland was gone forever.
Elidyr wanted to be good. He went back to his school. He worked very hard there. He learned many new things. He read many books. He helped other people. He was a good person now.
Elidyr lived a good life. He was always honest. He was always kind. He helped many people. He remembered his lesson. Always tell the truth. This made him happy. He felt good inside.
Original Story
A BOY THAT VISITED FAIRYLAND
Many are the places in Wales where the ground is lumpy and humpy with tumuli, or little artificial mounds. Among these the sheep graze, the donkeys bray, and the cows chew the cud.
Here the ground is strewn with the ruins of cromlechs, or Cymric strongholds, of old Roman camps, of chapels and monasteries, showing that many different races of men have come and gone, while the birds still fly and the flowers bloom.
Centuries ago, the good monks of St. David had a school where lads were taught Latin and good manners. One of their pupils was a boy named Elidyr. He was such a poor scholar and he so hated books and loved play, that in his case spankings and whippings were almost of daily occurrence. Still he made no improvement. He was in the habit also of playing truant, or what one of the monks called "traveling to Bagdad." One of the consequences was that certain soft parts of his body—apparently provided by nature for this express purpose—often received a warming from his daddy.
His mother loved her boy dearly, and she often gently chided him, but he would not listen to her, and when she urged him to be more diligent, he ran out of the room. The monks did not spare the birch rod, and soon it was a case of a whipping for every lesson not learned.
One day, though he was only twelve years old, the boy started on a long run into the country. The further he got, the happier he felt—at least for one day.
At night, tired out, he crept into a cave. When he woke up, in the morning, he thought it was glorious to be as free as the wild asses. So like them, he quenched his thirst at the brook. But when, towards noon, he could find nothing to eat, and his inside cavity seemed to enlarge with very emptiness, his hunger grew every minute. Then he thought that a bit of oat cake, a leek, or a bowl of oat meal, whether porridge or flummery, might suit a king.
He dared not go out far and pick berries, for, by this time, he saw that people were out searching for him. He did not feel yet, like going back to books, rods and scoldings, but the day seemed as long as a week. Meanwhile, he discovered that he had a stomach, which seemed to grow more and more into an aching void. He was glad when the sunset and darkness came. His bed was no softer in the cave, as he lay down with a stone for his pillow. Yet he had no dreams like those of Jacob and the angels.
When daylight came, the question in his mind was still, whether to stay and starve, or to go home and get two thrashings—one from his daddy, and another from the monks. But how about that thing inside of him, which seemed to be a live creature gnawing away, and which only something to eat would quiet? Finally, he came to a stern resolve. He started out, ready to face two whippings, rather than one death by starvation.
But he did not have to go home yet, for at the cave's mouth, he met two elves, who delivered a most welcome message.
"Come with us to a land full of fun, play, and good things to eat."
All at once, his hunger left him and he forgot that he ever wanted to swallow anything. All fear, or desire to go home, or to risk either schooling or a thrashing, passed away also.
Into a dark passage all three went, but they soon came out into a beautiful country. How the birds sang and the flowers bloomed! All around could be heard the joyful shouts of little folks at play. Never did things look so lovely.
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Soon, in front of the broad path along which they were traveling, there rose up before him a glorious palace. It had a splendid gateway, and the silver-topped towers seemed to touch the blue sky.
"What building is this?" asked the lad of his two guides.
They made answer that it was the palace of the King of Fairyland. Then they led him into the throne room, where, sat in golden splendor, a king, of august figure and of majestic presence, who was clad in resplendent robes. He was surrounded by courtiers in rich apparel, and all about him was magnificence, such as this boy, Elidyr, had never even read about or dreamed.
Yet everything was so small that it looked like Toy Land, and he felt like a giant among them, even though many of the little men around him were old enough to have whiskers on their cheeks and beards on their chins.
The King spoke kindly to Elidyr, asking him who he was, and whence he had come.
While talking thus, the Prince, the King's only son appeared. He was dressed in white velvet and gold, and had a long feather in his cap. In the pleasantest way, he took Elidyr's hand and said:
"Glad to see you. Come and let us play together."
That was just what Elidyr liked to hear. The King smiled and said to his visitor, "You will attend my son?" Then, with a wave of his hand, he signified to the boys to run out and play games.
A right merry time they did have, for there were many other little fellows for playmates.
These wee folks, with whom Elidyr played, were hardly as big as our babies, and certainly would not reach up to his mother's knee. To them, he looked like a giant, and he richly enjoyed the fun of having such little men, but with beards growing on their faces, look up to him.
They played with golden balls, and rode little horses, with silver saddles and bridles, but these pretty animals were no larger than small dogs, or grayhounds.
No meat was ever seen on the table, but always plenty of milk. They never told a lie, nor used bad language, or swear-words. They often talked about mortal men, but usually to despise them; because what they liked to do, seemed so absurd and they always wanted foolish and useless things. To the elves, human beings were never satisfied, or long happy, even when they got what they wanted.
Everything in this part of fairyland was lovely, but it was always cloudy. No sun, star or moon was ever seen, yet the little men did not seem to mind it and enjoyed themselves every day. There was no end of play, and that suited Elidyr.
Yet by and by, he got tired even of games and play, and grew very homesick. He wanted to see his mother. So he asked the King to let him visit his old home. He promised solemnly to come back, after a few hours. His Majesty gave his permission, but charged him not to take with him anything whatever from fairyland, and to go with only the clothes on his back.
The same two elves or dwarfs, who had brought him into fairyland, were chosen to conduct him back. When they had led him again through the underground passage into the sunlight, they made him invisible until he arrived at his mother's cottage. She was overjoyed to find that no wolf had torn him to pieces, or wild bull had pushed him over a precipice.
She asked him many questions, and he told her all he had seen, felt, or known.
When he rose up to go, she begged him to stay longer, but he said he must keep his word. Besides, he feared the rod of the monks, or his daddy, if he remained. So he made his mother agree not to tell anything—not even to his father, as to where he was, or what he was doing. Then he made off and reported again to his playmates in fairyland.
The King was so pleased at the lad's promptness in returning, and keeping his word, and telling the truth, that he allowed him to go see his mother as often as he wanted to do so. He even gave orders releasing the two little men from constantly guarding him and told them to let the lad go alone, and when he would, for he always kept his word.
Many times did Elidyr visit his mother. By one road, or another, he made his way, keeping himself invisible all the time, until he got inside her cottage. He ran off, when anyone called in to pay a visit, or when he thought his daddy, or one of the monks was coming. He never saw any of these men.
One day, in telling his mother of the fun and good times he had in fairyland, he spoke of the heavy yellow balls, with which he and the King's sons played, and how these rolled around.
Before leaving home, this boy had never seen any gold, and did not know what it was, but his mother guessed that it was the precious metal, of which the coins called sovereigns, and worth five dollars apiece, were made. So she begged him to bring one of them back to her.
This, Elidyr thought, would not be right; but after much argument, his parents being poor, and she telling him that, out of hundreds in the King's palace, one single ball would not be missed, he decided to please her.
So one day, when he supposed no one was looking, he picked up one of the yellow balls and started off through the narrow dark passageway homeward.
But no sooner was he back on the earth, and in the sunlight again, than he heard footsteps behind him. Then he knew that he had been discovered.
He glanced over his shoulder and there were the two little men, who had led him first and had formerly been his guards. They scowled at him as if they were mad enough to bite off the heads of tenpenny nails. Then they rushed after him, and there began a race to the cottage.
But the boy had legs twice as long as the little men, and got to the cottage door first. He now thought himself safe, but pushing open the door, he stumbled over the copper threshold, and the ball rolled out of his hand, across the floor of hardened clay, even to the nearly white-washed border, which ran about the edges of the room. It stopped at the feet of his mother, whose eyes opened wide at the sight of the ball of shining gold.
As he lay sprawling on the floor, and before he could pick himself up, one of the little men leaped over him, rushed into the room, and, from under his mother's petticoats, picked up the ball.
They spat at the boy and shouted, "traitor," "rascal," "thief," "false mortal," "fox," "rat," "wolf," and other bad names. Then they turned and sped away.
Now Elidyr, though he had been a mischievous boy, often willful, lazy, and never liking his books, had always loved the truth. He was very sad and miserable, beyond the telling, because he had broken his word of honor. So, almost mad with grief and shame, and from an accusing conscience, he went back to find the cave, in which he had slept. He would return to the King of the fairies, and ask his pardon, even if His Majesty never allowed him to visit Fairyland again.
But though he often searched, and spent whole days in trying to find the opening in the hills, he could never discover it.
So, fully penitent, and resolving to live right, and become what his father wanted him to be, he went back to the monastery.
There he plied his tasks so diligently that he excelled all in book-learning. In time, he became one of the most famous scholars in Welsh history. When he died, he asked to be buried, not in the monk's cemetery, but with his father and mother, in the churchyard. He made request that no name, record, or epitaph, be chiseled on his tomb, but only these words:
WE CAN DO NOTHING AGAINST THE TRUTH, BUT ONLY FOR THE TRUTH.
Story DNA
Moral
Honesty and diligence, even after mistakes, lead to a fulfilling life, and truth ultimately prevails.
Plot Summary
Elidyr, a lazy and disobedient boy, runs away from his strict monastic school and finds refuge in a cave. Starving, he is led by elves to Fairyland, a magical realm of endless play where he befriends the King's son. He frequently visits his mother, promising the Fairy King not to take anything from Fairyland. However, his mother persuades him to steal a golden ball, leading to his discovery by the elves and banishment from Fairyland. Filled with remorse, Elidyr returns to the monastery, transforms into a diligent scholar, and lives a life dedicated to truth, leaving behind an epitaph reflecting his journey.
Themes
Emotional Arc
rebelliousness to regret to redemption
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story draws on Welsh folklore traditions of 'fairies' or 'little people' inhabiting mounds and underground realms, often with strict rules about interaction with mortals. The monastic school setting reflects a historical period of education.
Plot Beats (13)
- Elidyr is a lazy, truant boy who is constantly punished by monks and his father.
- He runs away from home and hides in a cave, eventually becoming very hungry.
- Two elves appear and invite him to Fairyland, a beautiful place of endless play and small, kind people.
- Elidyr becomes a playmate to the King's son, enjoying a life free from lessons and scolding.
- Despite the fun, Elidyr grows homesick for his mother and asks the King for permission to visit her.
- The King grants permission, making Elidyr promise not to take anything from Fairyland, and Elidyr keeps his word on several visits.
- During a visit, Elidyr tells his mother about the golden balls, and she, being poor, convinces him to bring one back.
- Elidyr secretly takes a golden ball from Fairyland and attempts to return home.
- He is pursued by the two elves, stumbles at his cottage door, and the ball rolls to his mother's feet.
- One elf retrieves the ball, and both elves scold Elidyr, calling him a traitor and thief, before disappearing.
- Overwhelmed with guilt and shame for breaking his word, Elidyr tries to find the cave and Fairyland again but cannot.
- Penitent, Elidyr returns to the monastery, dedicates himself to his studies, and becomes a renowned scholar.
- Upon his death, he requests a simple epitaph reflecting his lifelong commitment to truth.
Characters
Elidyr
A young boy, approximately twelve years old, with the typical build of a child who enjoys active play. His legs are noted to be long, allowing him to outrun the smaller elves.
Attire: Simple, era-appropriate clothing for a Welsh peasant boy of the time, likely consisting of a tunic and breeches made of coarse wool or linen, possibly in muted, earthy tones. No specific details are given, so it would be practical and durable for play and running.
Wants: Initially driven by a desire for play and freedom from schoolwork and punishments. Later, his motivation shifts to pleasing his mother, then to seeking forgiveness and redemption.
Flaw: Impulsiveness, susceptibility to temptation (especially from his mother's pleas), and a strong aversion to discipline and academic work.
Transforms from a lazy, mischievous truant who avoids responsibility into a diligent, penitent scholar who excels in his studies and becomes a famous Welsh historian, ultimately seeking burial with his parents and leaving a profound epitaph about truth.
Mischievous, willful, lazy, playful, initially disliking books, but also fundamentally truthful and capable of deep penitence and diligence when motivated.
Elidyr's Mother
A woman of humble means, likely with a practical, sturdy build from a life of labor. Her hands would show signs of work. No specific height or build is given.
Attire: Simple, functional clothing typical of a poor Welsh peasant woman of centuries ago. This would include a long, plain linen or wool gown, possibly with an apron over it, in muted, natural colors. Her clothing would be well-worn but clean.
Wants: To ensure her son's well-being and to alleviate their family's poverty.
Flaw: Her poverty and her desire to improve her family's circumstances, which leads her to tempt Elidyr to break his word.
Remains largely consistent, acting as a catalyst for Elidyr's temptation and subsequent fall, but also as a constant source of love and a reason for his visits.
Loving, gentle, concerned, persuasive (especially when appealing to Elidyr's sympathy regarding their poverty), and somewhat susceptible to temptation (desiring the gold).
King of Fairyland
An august figure of majestic presence, though everything about him is small, like a toy. He is surrounded by courtiers, also small, some with whiskers and beards.
Attire: Resplendent robes, described as being of golden splendor and rich apparel, but all in miniature. Likely made of fine, shimmering fabrics like silk or velvet, adorned with tiny jewels or embroidery.
Wants: To rule his kingdom justly and maintain the order and values of fairyland (truth, play, no lies).
Flaw: Not explicitly shown, but his trust in Elidyr is ultimately betrayed.
Remains consistent as the benevolent ruler, initially trusting Elidyr and later being betrayed.
Kind, majestic, august, appreciative of honesty and keeping one's word, but also firm in his rules (e.g., not taking anything from fairyland).
Fairy Prince
A small boy, similar in size to the other elves, but with a princely appearance. He is described as being very small, hardly as big as a baby to Elidyr.
Attire: Dressed in white velvet and gold, with a long feather in his cap, indicating his royal status.
Wants: To play and enjoy the endless games of fairyland.
Flaw: Not explicitly shown.
Remains consistent as Elidyr's primary playmate in fairyland.
Friendly, playful, welcoming, and enjoys games.
First Elf Guide
Very small, hardly as big as a baby to Elidyr, but with the features of an adult, including whiskers on cheeks and a beard on the chin. Agile and quick.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but implied to be simple yet functional, allowing for quick movement. Perhaps earthy tones, consistent with magical forest dwellers.
Wants: To serve the King of Fairyland, guide visitors, and uphold the rules of fairyland.
Flaw: Not explicitly shown, but their anger is easily provoked by betrayal.
Remains consistent as a loyal servant, transitioning from guide to furious accuser.
Initially welcoming and helpful, later furious, vengeful, and quick to anger when rules are broken.
Second Elf Guide
Very small, hardly as big as a baby to Elidyr, but with the features of an adult, including whiskers on cheeks and a beard on the chin. Agile and quick.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but implied to be simple yet functional, allowing for quick movement. Perhaps earthy tones, consistent with magical forest dwellers.
Wants: To serve the King of Fairyland, guide visitors, and uphold the rules of fairyland.
Flaw: Not explicitly shown, but their anger is easily provoked by betrayal.
Remains consistent as a loyal servant, transitioning from guide to furious accuser.
Initially welcoming and helpful, later furious, vengeful, and quick to anger when rules are broken.
Locations
Welsh Countryside (Tumuli and Ruins)
A landscape of lumpy and humpy ground with tumuli (artificial mounds), strewn with the ruins of ancient Cymric strongholds (cromlechs), old Roman camps, chapels, and monasteries. Sheep graze, donkeys bray, and cows chew cud amidst blooming flowers and flying birds.
Mood: Ancient, pastoral, somewhat desolate due to ruins, but also vibrant with animal life.
Elidyr runs away from the monastery into this wild country.
The Cave Entrance
A dark, hidden cave entrance in the hills, serving as a portal between the mortal world and Fairyland. It is initially a refuge for Elidyr, then becomes the meeting point with the elves.
Mood: Mysterious, foreboding, then hopeful and magical.
Elidyr sleeps here, meets the elves, and later attempts to re-enter Fairyland after his betrayal.
Fairyland Palace and Grounds
A glorious palace with a splendid gateway and silver-topped towers that seem to touch the sky. The interior includes a magnificent throne room with a king in resplendent robes, surrounded by courtiers in rich apparel. Everything is small, like a 'Toy Land', with golden balls for play and small horses with silver saddles. The land is always cloudy, with no sun, moon, or stars visible.
Mood: Magical, playful, opulent yet miniature, with an underlying sense of unreality due to the constant cloudiness.
Elidyr lives and plays here, serving the King's son, and later attempts to steal a golden ball.
Elidyr's Mother's Cottage
A humble cottage with a copper threshold and a floor of hardened clay. The walls are nearly whitewashed, with a border running about the edges of the room.
Mood: Warm, familiar, safe, but also a place of temptation and eventual confrontation.
Elidyr visits his mother here, tells her about Fairyland, and the golden ball is retrieved by the elves after his failed theft.