KING ARTHUR'S CAVE

by William Elliot Griffis · from Welsh Fairy Tales

folk tale cautionary tale cautionary Ages 8-14 2075 words 10 min read
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Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 490 words 3 min Canon 100/100

Taffy was a man. He loved gold very much. He always wanted more. He sold his cows. He got much money. But Taffy wanted more gold.

One day, Taffy was in London. He stood on a big bridge. An Old Man came to him. The Old Man saw Taffy's stick. It was a special stick. The Old Man said, "I know a secret. There is much gold. I can show you."

Taffy was not sure. He did not trust the man. But the Old Man talked more. He talked about gold. Taffy liked gold. So Taffy said, "Yes, I will go."

They went to Wales. They came to a big rock. Taffy saw a bush. He said, "My stick came from here." The Old Man was happy.

They dug in the ground. They dug and dug. They found a big, flat stone. They moved the stone. Under it were steps. The steps went down. Down into the dark ground.

The Old Man went first. Taffy went after him. They went down the steps. They came to a door. They went inside. It was a big, dark cave.

Many men were in the cave. They were The Knights. They had swords. They had shields. They sat at a big table. King Arthur was there. He had a special sword. All were fast asleep. They slept for a long, long time.

The Old Man saw a bell. He pointed at it. He said, "Do not touch this bell! The Knights sleep now. They sleep for many years. They must not wake up. Not yet. It is not time."

They walked past The Knights. They found much gold. Heaps of gold! Taffy wanted more. The Old Man wanted more. They put gold in their pockets. They put gold in their clothes. Much, much gold.

They walked back. Taffy saw the bell again. He thought, "What if I ring it?" He forgot the warning. Taffy hit the bell. Dong! It made a loud sound.

The bell rang. All The Knights woke up. They stood up fast. They took their swords. They took their shields. The cave shook. It was very noisy. It was very scary.

A deep voice spoke. "Is it time?" The Old Man was scared. He said, "No, not yet! Please sleep. Sleep now, brave Knights." He was very afraid.

King Arthur spoke too. He said, "It is not time." The Knights slept again. They slept very fast. The cave was quiet.

The Old Man was angry. He was very scared. He pulled Taffy out. He put the big stone back. He covered the cave door. He ran away fast. Taffy was alone now.

Taffy had some gold. But he wanted more. He looked for the cave. He looked every day. He never found it again. He lost his gold. He was sad. Taffy learned that it is not good to want too much. It is always good to listen to warnings.

Original Story 2075 words · 10 min read

KING ARTHUR'S CAVE

In our time, every boy and girl knows about the nuts and blossoms, the twigs and the hedges, the roots and the leaf of the common hazel bush, and everybody has heard of the witch hazel. In old days they made use of the forked branches of the hazel as a divining rod. With this, they believed that they could divine, or find out the presence of treasures of gold and silver, deep down in the earth, and hidden from human eyes.

And, what boy or girl has never played the game, and sung the ditty, "London Bridge is falling down, falling down, falling down," even though nobody now living ever saw it fall?

Now, our story is about a hazel rod, a Welshman on London Bridge, treasures in a cave, and what happened because of these.

It was in the days when London Bridge was not, as we see it to-day, a massive structure of stone and iron, able to bear up hundreds of cars, wagons, horses and people, and lighted at night with electric bulbs. No, when this Welshman visited London, the bridge had a line of shops on both sides of the passage way, and reaching from end to end.

Taffy was the name of this fellow from Denbigh, in Wales, and he was a drover. He had brought, all the way from one of the richest of the Welsh provinces, a great drove of Black Welsh cattle, such as were in steady demand by Englishmen, who have always been lovers of roast beef. Escaping all the risks of cattle thieves, rustlers, and highwaymen, he had sold his beeves at a good price; so that his pockets were now fairly bulging out with gold coins, and yet this fellow wanted more. But first, before going home, he would see the sights of the great city, which then contained about a hundred thousand people.

While he was handling some things in a shop, to decide what he should take home to his wife, his three daughters and his two little boys, he noticed a man looking intently, not at him, but at his stick. After a while, the stranger came up to him and asked him where he came from.

Now Taffy was not very refined in his manners, and he thought it none of the fellow's business. He was very surly and made reply in a gruff voice.

"I come from my own country."

The stranger did not get angry, but in a polite tone made answer:

"Don't be offended at my question. Tell me where you cut that hazel stick, and I'll make it to your advantage, if you will take my advice."

Even yet Taffy was gruff and suspicious.

"What business is it of yours, where I cut my hazel stick?" he answered.

"Well it may matter a good deal to you, if you will tell me. For, if you remember the place, and can lead me to it, I'll make you a rich man, for near that spot lies a great treasure."

Taffy was not much of a thinker, apart from matters concerning cattle, and his brain worked slowly! He was sorely puzzled. Here was a wizard, who could make him rich, and he did so love to jingle gold in his pockets. But then he was superstitious. He feared that this sorcerer derived all his uncanny knowledge from demons, and Taffy, being rather much of a sinner, feared these very much. Meanwhile, his new acquaintance kept on persuading him.

Finally Taffy yielded and the two went on together to Wales.

Now in this country, there are many stones placed in position, showing they were not there by accident, but were reared by men, to mark some old battle, or famous event. And for this, rough stone work, no country, unless it be Korea or China, is more famous than Wales.

On reaching one called the Fortress Rock, Taffy pointed to an old hazel root, and said to his companion:

"There! From that stock, I cut my hazel stick. I am sure of it."

The sorcerer looked at Taffy to read his face, and to be certain that he was telling the truth. Then he said:

"Bring shovels and we'll both dig."

These having been brought, the two began to work until the perspiration stood out in drops on their foreheads. First the sod and rooty stuff, and then down around the gravelly mass below, they plied their digging tools. Taffy was not used to such toil, and his muscles were soon weary. But, urged on by visions of gold, he kept bravely at his task.

At last, when ready to drop from fatigue, he heard his companion say:

"We've struck it!"

A few shovelfuls more laid bare a broad flat stone. This they pried up, but it required all their strength to lift and stand it on edge. Just below, they saw a flight of steps. They were slippery with wet and they looked very old, as if worn, ages ago, by many feet passing up and down them.

Taffy shrunk back, as a draught of the close, dead air struck his nostrils.

"Come on, and don't be afraid. I'm going to make you rich," said the sorcerer.

At this, Taffy's eyes glistened, and he followed on down the steps, without saying a word. At the bottom of the descent, they entered a narrow passage, and finally came to a door.

"Now, I'll ask you. Are you brave, and will you come in with me, if I open this door?"

By this time, Taffy was so eager for treasure, that he spoke up at once.

"I'm not afraid. Open the door."

The sorcerer gave a jerk and the door flew open. What a sight!

There, in the faint, red light, Taffy discerned a great cave. Lying on the floor were hundreds of armed men, but motionless and apparently sound asleep. Little spangles of light were reflected from swords, spears, round shields, and burnished helmets. All these seemed of very ancient pattern. But immediately in front of them was a bell. Taffy felt some curiosity to tap it. Would the sleeping host of men then rise up?

Just then, the sorcerer, speaking with a menacing gesture, and in a harsh tone, said:

"Do not touch that bell, or it's all up with us both."

Moving carefully, so as not to trip, or to stumble over the sleeping soldiers, they went on, and Taffy, stopping and looking up beheld before him a great round table. Many warriors were sitting at it. Their splendid gold inlaid armor, glittering helmets and noble faces showed that they were no common men. Yet Taffy could see only a few of the faces, for all had their heads more or less bent down, as if sound asleep, though sword and spear were near at hand, ready to be grasped in a moment.

Outshining all, was a golden throne at the farther end of the table and on it sat a king. He was of imposing stature, and august presence. Upon his head was a crown, on which were inlaid or set precious stones. These shone by their own light, sending out rays so brilliant that they dazzled Taffy, who had never seen anything like them. The king held in his right hand a mighty sword. It had a history and the name of it was Excalibur. In Arthur's hand, it was almost part of his own soul. Its hilt and handle were of finely chased gold, richly studded with gems. Yet his head, too, was bent in deep sleep, as if only thunder could wake him.

"Are they all, everyone, asleep?" asked Taffy.

"Each and all," was the answer.

"When did they fall asleep?" asked the drover.

"Over a thousand years ago," answered the sorcerer.

"Tell me who they are, and why here," asked Taffy.

"They are King Arthur's trusty warriors. They are waiting for the hour to come, when they shall rise up and destroy the enemies of the Cymry, and once again possess the whole island of Britain, as in the early ages, before the Saxons came."

"And who are those sitting around the table?" asked Taffy.

The sorcerer seemed tired of answering questions, but he replied, giving the name of each knight, and also that of his father, as if he were a Welshman himself; but at this, Taffy grew impatient, feeling as if a book of genealogy had been hurled at him.

Most impolitely, he interrupted his companion and cried out:

"And who is that on the throne?"

The sorcerer looked as if he was vexed, and felt insulted, but he answered:

"It's King Arthur himself, with Excalibur, his famous sword, in his hand."

This was snapped out, as if the sorcerer was disgusted at the interruption of his genealogy, and he shut his mouth tight as if he would answer no more questions, for such an impolite fellow.

Seizing Taffy by the hand, he led him into what was the storehouse of the cave. There lay heaps upon heaps of yellow gold. Both men stuffed their pockets, belt bags, and the inside of their clothes, with all they could load in.

"Now we had better get out, for it is time to go," said the sorcerer and he led the way towards the cave door.

But as Taffy passed back, and along the hall, where the host of warriors were sleeping, his curiosity got the better of him.

He said to himself, "I must see this host awake. I'll touch that bell, and find out whether the sorcerer spoke the truth."

So, when he came to it, he struck the bell. In the twinkling of an eye, thousands of warriors sprang up, seized their armor, girded their swords, or seized their spears. All seemed eagerly awaiting the command to rush against the foe.

The ground quaked with their tramping, and shook with their tread, until Taffy thought the cave roof would fall in and bury them all. The air resounded with the rattle of arms, as the men, when in ranks, marked time, ready for motion forward and out of the cave.

But from the midst of the host, a deep sounding voice, as earnest as if in hot temper, but as deliberate as if in caution against a false alarm, spoke. He inquired:

"Who rang that bell? Has the day come?"

The sorcerer, thoroughly frightened and trembling, answered:

"No, the day has not come. Sleep on."

Taffy, though dazzled by the increasing brilliancy of the light, had heard another deep voice, more commanding in its tones than even a king's, call out, "Arthur, awake, the bell has rung. The day is breaking. Awake, great King Arthur!"

But even against such a voice, that of the sorcerer, now scared beyond measure, lest the king and his host should discover the cheat, and with his sword, Excalibur, chop the heads off both Taffy and himself, answered:

"No, it is still night. Sleep on, Arthur the Great."

Erect over all, his head aloft and crowned with jewels, as with stars, the King himself now spoke:

"No, my warriors, the day has not yet come, when the Black Eagle and the Golden Eagle will meet in war. Sleep on, loyal souls. The morning of Wales has not yet dawned."

Then, like the gentle soughing of the evening breeze among forest trees, all sound died away, and in the snap of a finger, all were asleep again. Seizing the hand of Taffy, the sorcerer hurried him out of the cave, moved the stone back in its place and motioning to Taffy to do the same, he quickly shoveled and kicked the loose dirt in the hole and stamped it down: When Taffy turned to look for him, he was gone, without even taking the trouble to call his dupe a fool.

Wearied with his unwonted labors and excitements, Taffy walked home, got his supper, pondered on what he had seen, slept, and awoke in the morning refreshed. After breakfast, he sallied out again with pick and shovel.

For months, Taffy dug over every square foot of the hill. Neglecting his business as cattle man, he spent all the money he had made in London, but he never found that entrance to the cave. He died a poor man and all his children had to work hard to get their bread.


Story DNA

Moral

Unbridled greed and reckless curiosity can lead to ruin and loss.

Plot Summary

Taffy, a greedy Welsh drover, is approached by a sorcerer who identifies his hazel stick as a divining rod and promises him treasure. They travel to Wales, find a hidden cave, and discover King Arthur and his knights sleeping, surrounded by gold. Despite a strict warning, Taffy's curiosity leads him to strike a bell, briefly awakening the ancient army. The sorcerer quickly calms them, rushes Taffy out, and disappears, leaving Taffy to spend the rest of his life fruitlessly searching for the cave entrance, dying a poor and ruined man.

Themes

greedcuriosityconsequenceshidden power

Emotional Arc

hope to despair

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader, rhetorical questions

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs self
Ending: tragic
Magic: divining rod, sorcerer with uncanny knowledge, magical cave entrance, sleeping army of King Arthur, Excalibur (magical sword), self-luminous jewels
the hazel stick (divining rod)the bell (trigger for awakening)Excalibur (King Arthur's power and destiny)

Cultural Context

Origin: Welsh
Era: pre-industrial

The story draws on the widespread European belief in divining rods and the enduring legend of King Arthur, particularly the motif of the sleeping king who will one day return to save his people. London Bridge with shops was a historical reality.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Taffy, a Welsh drover, sells his cattle in London, earning a good sum, but still yearns for more wealth.
  2. A sorcerer approaches Taffy on London Bridge, recognizing his hazel stick as a divining rod and offering to reveal a hidden treasure.
  3. Despite Taffy's initial gruffness and suspicion, the sorcerer convinces him to return to Wales to find the treasure.
  4. They arrive at Fortress Rock in Wales, and Taffy identifies the hazel root from which he cut his stick.
  5. They dig at the spot, uncover a large flat stone, and pry it open to reveal a flight of ancient, slippery steps leading underground.
  6. Following the sorcerer, Taffy descends into a narrow passage that opens into a vast cave.
  7. Inside the cave, they see hundreds of ancient, armed warriors, including King Arthur and his knights at a round table, all in a deep sleep.
  8. The sorcerer points out a bell and sternly warns Taffy not to touch it, explaining that the warriors have been asleep for over a thousand years, waiting to rise and reclaim Britain.
  9. They proceed to a storehouse filled with gold, and both men greedily stuff their pockets and clothes with treasure.
  10. As they leave, Taffy's curiosity overwhelms him, and he strikes the forbidden bell.
  11. Thousands of warriors instantly awaken, seizing their arms, causing the cave to quake and fill with the sound of rattling weapons.
  12. A deep voice asks if the day has come, and the terrified sorcerer quickly assures them it has not, telling them to sleep on.
  13. King Arthur himself speaks, confirming the day has not yet arrived for the great battle, and the warriors instantly fall back into a deep sleep.
  14. The sorcerer, furious and frightened, drags Taffy out of the cave, replaces the stone, and quickly covers the entrance before disappearing.
  15. Taffy, now alone and with his gold, spends the rest of his life fruitlessly digging for the cave entrance, neglecting his business, losing his wealth, and dying poor.

Characters

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Taffy

human adult male

A sturdy Welsh drover, likely of medium height and a broad, strong build from his work with cattle. His face is probably weathered from outdoor life, with a somewhat unrefined appearance. His hands would be calloused.

Attire: Practical, durable clothing suitable for a drover in 17th-18th century Wales and London. This would include sturdy wool or linen trousers, a simple tunic or shirt, and a thick, perhaps homespun, wool jacket or coat. He would wear practical leather boots. His pockets are described as bulging with gold coins, suggesting a simple, functional garment that allows for such storage.

Wants: To acquire more wealth, specifically gold. He is driven by the desire to be rich.

Flaw: Greed and lack of self-control. His inability to resist touching the bell, despite a clear warning, leads to his downfall and loss of the treasure. His slow thinking also contributes to his vulnerability.

Starts as a successful, if unrefined, drover who is financially well-off. He is lured by the promise of greater riches, experiences a fantastical adventure, but ultimately loses everything due to his impulsiveness and greed, dying a poor man.

His hazel stick, which is the catalyst for his adventure, and his bulging pockets of gold.

Gruff, suspicious, greedy, superstitious, easily puzzled, curious, and ultimately persistent to a fault. He is not very refined in manners and lacks foresight.

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The Sorcerer

human adult male

His physical description is not detailed, but he is observant and persuasive. He likely has an appearance that suggests wisdom or arcane knowledge, perhaps lean and sharp-featured, with an intense gaze.

Attire: Not explicitly described, but given his role and the period, he would likely wear more refined, perhaps darker, robes or a cloak that suggests his mystical profession, rather than common attire. It would be practical for travel but distinct from a drover's clothes.

Wants: To find the treasure in King Arthur's Cave, using Taffy's hazel stick as a divining tool. He seems to want the gold for himself.

Flaw: His reliance on Taffy, who proves to be impulsive and disobedient, and his own fear when the situation escalates beyond his control.

Introduced as a mysterious figure who seeks Taffy's help to find a treasure. He successfully guides Taffy to the treasure but is thwarted by Taffy's impulsiveness, leading to a hasty escape and abandonment of Taffy.

His intense, discerning gaze and perhaps a subtle, knowing smile.

Polite, persuasive, knowledgeable (especially of ancient lore and Welsh genealogy), easily vexed by impoliteness, cautious, and ultimately fearful when his plans are jeopardized.

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King Arthur

human ageless male

An imposing stature and august presence, suggesting a powerful and regal figure. He is described as a king, implying a strong, noble build.

Attire: Splendid gold-inlaid armor, glittering helmet, and a crown set with brilliant precious stones. His attire is ancient and regal, befitting a legendary king.

Wants: To awaken and lead his warriors to reclaim Britain for the Welsh when the destined time arrives.

Flaw: His deep, enchanted sleep, which prevents him from acting until the prophesied moment.

He remains in a state of enchanted sleep, briefly stirring and speaking when the bell is rung, but ultimately returning to sleep as 'the day has not yet come.' He does not change within the story's timeframe.

Sitting on a golden throne, crowned with self-luminous jewels, holding the mighty sword Excalibur.

Noble, patient (waiting for over a thousand years), commanding, and wise. He is a protector of the Cymry (Welsh people).

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King Arthur's Warriors

human adult male

Hundreds of armed men, described as warriors, implying strong, battle-ready builds. They wear ancient pattern armor.

Attire: Ancient pattern armor, including swords, spears, round shields, and burnished helmets. Some sitting at the round table wear splendid gold-inlaid armor.

Wants: To await the command to rise and destroy the enemies of the Cymry, reclaiming Britain.

Flaw: Bound by an enchanted sleep, unable to act until the prophesied time.

They remain in a state of enchanted sleep, briefly stirring and preparing for battle when the bell is rung, but returning to sleep when the command is given.

Hundreds of armored warriors, motionless and asleep, with light glinting off their ancient weapons and armor.

Loyal, disciplined, and eager for battle, even after a thousand years of sleep.

Locations

London Bridge

transitional Implied temperate, busy city atmosphere.

In old days, the bridge had a line of shops on both sides of the passageway, reaching from end to end. It was not the massive stone and iron structure seen today, but a bustling thoroughfare with many people.

Mood: Bustling, commercial, slightly overwhelming for a country drover.

Taffy, a Welsh drover, sells his cattle and is approached by a sorcerer who recognizes the significance of his hazel stick, initiating their quest for treasure.

shops lining both sides of the bridge passageway for people and animals crowds of people Taffy's hazel stick

Fortress Rock (Wales)

outdoor day Implied temperate, possibly overcast or clear.

A prominent, rough stone formation in the Welsh countryside, likely a standing stone or cairn, marking an ancient battle or event. The ground around it is sod and rooty, transitioning to gravelly soil beneath.

Mood: Ancient, mysterious, rugged, hinting at hidden secrets.

Taffy identifies the spot where he cut his hazel stick, and he and the sorcerer begin digging, eventually uncovering a large flat stone.

Fortress Rock (rough standing stone) old hazel root/stock sod and rooty ground gravelly soil shovels and digging tools

King Arthur's Cave Entrance

transitional day (external), dark (internal) Damp, cool underground air.

Beneath a large, flat stone, a flight of old, wet, and slippery steps descends into darkness. The air is close and dead, suggesting a long-sealed space.

Mood: Eerie, ancient, foreboding, leading to the unknown.

Taffy and the sorcerer uncover the entrance to the cave and descend into its depths, facing the initial fear of the unknown.

broad flat stone (concealing entrance) slippery, wet stone steps narrow passage at the bottom heavy, old door

King Arthur's Great Cave

indoor eternal night (underground) Still, cool, underground air.

A vast, cavernous space illuminated by a faint, red light. Hundreds of armed men lie motionless, asleep on the floor, their ancient armor, swords, spears, and shields glinting. A large bell stands prominently. Further within, a great round table is surrounded by sleeping warriors in splendid gold-inlaid armor. At the far end, a golden throne holds King Arthur, crowned with dazzling precious stones and holding the mighty sword Excalibur. A separate storehouse area contains heaps of yellow gold.

Mood: Magical, awe-inspiring, ancient, mysterious, tense, with a sense of suspended time.

Taffy and the sorcerer discover King Arthur and his knights in their enchanted sleep. Taffy's curiosity leads him to ring the bell, briefly waking the host, before they are put back to sleep by the sorcerer and King Arthur himself. They then collect treasure.

faint red light hundreds of sleeping warriors (ancient armor, swords, spears, shields) large bell great round table sleeping knights in gold-inlaid armor golden throne King Arthur (crowned, holding Excalibur with gem-studded hilt) heaps of yellow gold (in storehouse)