THE LADY of THE LAKE

by William Elliot Griffis · from Welsh Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation melancholic Ages 8-14 2178 words 10 min read
Cover: THE LADY of THE LAKE

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 503 words 3 min Canon 98/100

Gwyn was a boy. He lived by a big lake. It was a special lake. He watched his cows. One day, a lady came from water. Her hair was long. Gwyn saw her. He liked her very much.

Gwyn had hard bread. He gave it to the lady. She shook her head. "This bread is too hard," she said. She went back into the water. Gwyn was sad.

Gwyn's Mother said: "Try soft bread." Gwyn made soft bread. He gave it to the lady. She shook her head. "This bread is too soft," she said. She went back into the water.

Gwyn tried again. He made bread, not hard, not soft. It was just right. He gave it to the Lake Lady. She took the bread. She smiled at Gwyn. Gwyn asked, "Will you marry me?"

The Lake Lady said yes. But she made a promise. "Do not touch me three times," she said. "If you do, I must go away. I must go back to the lake." Gwyn knew. He said he would not forget.

Then the Lake Lady went away. Gwyn was very sad. He sat by the lake. He missed her so much. Then, an old man came. He had a long, white beard. Two ladies were with him. They looked just like the Lake Lady.

Gwyn looked at the ladies. One lady had a special shoe. Gwyn knew it was his Lake Lady. He took her hand. The Old Man of the Lake was happy. He gave them many magic creatures. The creatures came from the lake.

Gwyn and Nelferch got married. They had a happy home. They had three little boys. They lived happy for many years. Gwyn loved Nelferch very much. He forgot the promise.

One day, Gwyn and Nelferch were outside. A horse ran away. Gwyn had his gloves. He gently tapped Nelferch's arm. He was just playing. This was the first gentle touch. Nelferch looked sad.

Next day, Nelferch was very quiet. She looked sad. Gwyn saw her. He wanted to know why. He gently tapped her shoulder. "What is wrong?" he asked. This was the second gentle touch.

One sunny day, Nelferch looked at flowers. She was thinking. Gwyn wanted to show her. He gently touched her arm. He wanted her to look. This was the third gentle touch. Gwyn did not mean harm.

Nelferch looked very sad. She said, "The promise is broken." She called all the magic creatures. The creatures came to her. They followed her to the lake. She walked into the water. She went back to her home.

The three boys grew up. They missed their mother. They went to the lake often. One day, Nelferch came out! She saw her sons. She taught them about special plants. These plants helped sick people. She showed them how to heal.

The sons became good doctors. They helped many people. People did not forget them. Their special place was "Healers' Hill". Their mother's magic lived on. It was a special, kind magic.

Original Story 2178 words · 10 min read

THE LADY OF THE LAKE

One easily gets acquainted with the Welsh fairies, for nearly all the good ones are very fond of music.

Or, they live down in the lakes, or up in the mountains. They are always ready to help kind or polite people, who treat them well or will give them a glass of milk, or a saucer of flummery.

But, oh, what tricks and mischief they do play on mean or stingy or grumpy folks with bad tempers! They tangle up the harness of the horses; milk the cows, letting the milk go to waste, on the stable floor; tie knots in their tails, or keep the dog's mouth shut, when the robbers come sneaking around. Better not offend a fairy, even though no higher than a thimble!

A favorite place for the elfin ladies of the lake is high up in one of the fresh water mountain ponds. They are cousins to the mermaids, that swim in the salt water.

They say that these lake maidens love to come up close to the shore, to smell the sweet grass and flowers, which the cows like so much.

Near one of these lakes dwelt a widow, with only one son, named Gwyn. One day he took his lunch of barley bread and cheese, and went out, as usual, to tend the cows. Soon he saw rising out of the water, to dress her long and luxuriant hair, the most beautiful lady he had ever seen. In her hand she held a golden comb, and was using the bright lake-surface as a mirror.

At once Gwyn fell in love with her, and, like an unselfish lad, held out his refreshments—barley bread and cheese—all he had—bidding her to come and take.

But though the lady glided toward him, while he still held out his hand, she shook her head, saying:

O thou of the hard baked bread,

It is not easy to catch me

Sorry enough to miss such a prize, he hurried home to tell his mother. She, wondering also, whether fairies have teeth to chew, told him to take soft dough next time. Then, perhaps, the strange lady would come again.

Not much sleep did the boy get that night, and, before the sun was up, he was down by the lake side holding out his dough.

There, hour after hour, neglecting the cows, he looked eagerly over the water, but nothing appeared, except ripples started by the breeze. Again and again, he gazed in hope, only to be disappointed.

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Meanwhile he thought out a pretty speech to make to her, but he kept his dough and went hungry.

It was late in the afternoon, when the trees on the hills were casting long shadows westward, that he gave up watching, for he supposed she would come no more.

But just as he started to go back to his mother's cabin, he turned his head and there was the same lady, looking more beautiful than ever. In a moment, he forgot every word he meant to say to her. His tongue seemed to leave him, and he only held out his hand, with the dough in it.

But the lake lady, shaking her head, only laughed and said:

Thou of the soft bread

I will not have thee

Though she dived under the water and left him sad and lonely, she smiled so sweetly, as she vanished, that, though again disappointed, he thought she would come again and she might yet accept his gift.

His mother told him to try her with bread half baked, that is, midway between hard crust and soft dough.

So, having packed his lunch, and much excited, though this time with bright hopes, Gwyn went to bed, though not to sleep. At dawn, he was up again and out by the lake side, with his half baked bread in his hand.

It was a day of rain and shine, of sun burst and cloud, but no lady appeared.

The long hours, of watching and waiting, sped on, until it was nearly dark.

When just about to turn homewards, to ease his mother's anxiety, what should he see, but some cows walking on the surface of the water! In a few minutes, the lady herself, lovelier than ever, rose up and moved towards the shore.

Gwyn rushed out to meet her, with beseeching looks and holding the half baked bread in his hand. This time, she graciously took the gift, placed her other hand in his, and he led her to the shore.

Standing with her on land, he could not speak for many seconds. He noticed that she had sandals on her feet, and the one on the right foot was tied in a way rather unusual. Under her winsome smile, at last, he regained the use of his tongue. Then he burst out:

"Lady I love you, more than all the world besides. Will you be my wife?"

She did not seem at all willing at first, but love begets love. Finally yielding to his pleadings, she said, rather solemnly:

"I will be your bride but only on this condition, that if you strike me three times, without cause, I will leave your house and you only will be to blame, and it will be forever."

These words stuck in his mind, and he inwardly made a vow never to give his lovely wife cause to leave him.

But not yet did happiness come, for, even while he took oath that he would rather cut off his right hand, than offend her, she darted away like an arrow, and, diving in the lake, disappeared.

At this sudden blow to his hopes and joy, Gwyn was so sorely depressed, as to wish to take his own life. Rushing up to the top of a rock, overhanging the deepest part of the lake, he was just about to leap into the water and drown himself, when he heard a voice behind him, saying:

"Hold rash lad, come here!"

He looked and there down on the shore of the lake, stood a grand looking old man, with a long white beard. On either side of him was a lovely maiden. These were his daughters.

Trembling with fear, the lad slipped down from the rock and drew near. Then the old man spoke comfortably to him, though in a very cracked voice.

"Mortal, do you wish to marry one of my daughters? Show me the one you love more than the other, and I will consent."

Now the two maidens were so beautiful, yet so exactly alike, that Gwyn could not note any difference. As he looked, he began to wonder whether it had been a different lady, in each case, that rose out of the water. He looked beyond the old man, to see if there were a third lady. When he saw none more, he became more distracted. He feared lest he might choose the wrong one, who had not promised to love him.

Almost in despair, he was about to run home, when he noticed that one of the maidens put forward her right foot. Then he saw that her sandal was tied in the way he had already wondered at. So he boldly went forward and took her by the hand.

"This one is mine," said he to the father.

"You are right," answered the old man. "This is my daughter Nelferch. Take her and you shall have as many cattle, sheep, horses, hogs, and goats, as she can count, of each, without drawing in her breath. But I warn you that three blows, without cause, will send her back to me."

While the old man smiled, and Gwyn renewed his vow, the new wife began to count by fives—one, two, three, four, five.

At the end of each count drawing in a fresh breath, there rose up, out of the lake, as many sheep, cattle, goats, pigs, and horses, as she had counted.

So it happened that the lad, who went out of his mother's cottage, in the morning, a poor boy, came back to her, a rich man, and leading by the hand the loveliest creature on whom man or woman had ever looked upon.

As for the old man and the other daughter, no one ever saw them again.

Gwyn and his wife went out to a farm which he bought, and oh, how happy they were! She was very kind to the poor. She had the gift of healing, knew all the herbs, which were good for medicine, and cured sick folk of their diseases.

Three times the cradle was filled, and each time with a baby boy. Eight long and happy years followed. They loved each other so dearly and were so happy together, that Gwyn's vow passed entirely out of his mind, and he thought no more of it.

On the seventh birthday of the oldest boy, there was a wedding at some distance away, and the father and mother walked through a field where their horses were grazing. As it was too far for Lady Nelferch to walk all the way, her husband went back to the house, for saddle and bridle, while she should catch the horse.

"Please do, and bring me my gloves from off the table," she called, as he turned towards the house.

But when he returned to the field, he saw that she had not stirred. So, before handing his wife her gloves and pointing playfully to the horses, he gave her a little flick with the gloves.

Instead of moving, instantly, she heaved a deep sigh. Then looking up at him with sorrowful and reproachful eyes, she said:

"Remember our vow, Gwyn. This is the first causeless blow. May there never be another."

Days and years passed away so happily, that the husband and father never again had to recall the promise given to his wife and her father.

But when they were invited to the christening of a baby, every one was full of smiles and gayety, except Nelferch. Women, especially the older ones, often cry at a wedding, but why his wife should burst into tears puzzled Gwyn.

Tapping her on the shoulder, he asked the reason:

"Because," said she, "this weak babe will be in pain and misery all its days and die in agony. And, husband dear, you have once again struck me a causeless blow. Oh, do be on your guard, and not again break your promise."

From this time forth, Gwyn was on watch over himself, day and night, like a sentinel over whom hangs the sentence of death, should he fall asleep on duty. He was ever vigilant lest, he, in a moment of forgetfulness, might, by some slip of conduct, or in a moment of forgetfulness, strike his dear wife.

The baby, whose life of pain and death of agony Nelferch had foretold, soon passed away; for, happily, its life was short. Then she and her husband attended the last rites of sorrow, for Celtic folk always have a funeral and hold a wake, even when a baby, only a span long, lies in the coffin.

Yet in the most solemn moment of the services of burial, Nelferch the wife, laughed out, so long and with such merriment, that everyone was startled.

Her husband, mortified at such improper behavior, touched her gently, saying:

"Hush, wife! Why do you laugh?"

"Because the babe is free from all pain. And, you have thrice struck me! Farewell!"

Fleeing like a deer home to their farm, she called together, by its name, each and every one of their animals, from stable and field; yes, even those harnessed to the plow. Then, over the mountain all moved in procession to the lake.

There, they plunged in and vanished. No trace of them was left, except that made by the oxen drawing the plow, and which mark on the ground men still point out.

Broken hearted and mad with grief, Gwyn rushed into the lake and was seen no more. The three sons, grieving over their drowned father, spent their many days wandering along the lakeside, hoping once more to see one, or both, of their dear parents.

Their love was rewarded. They never saw their father again, but one day their mother, Nelferch, suddenly appeared out of the water. Telling her children that her mission on earth was to relieve pain and misery, she took them to a point in the lake, where many plants grew that were useful in medicine. There, she often came and taught them the virtues of the roots, leaves, juices and the various virtues of the herbs, and how to nurse the sick and heal those who had diseases.

All three of Nelferch's sons became physicians of fame and power. Their descendants, during many centuries, were renowned for their skill in easing pain and saving life. To this day, Physicians' Point is shown to visitors as a famous spot, and in tradition is almost holy.


Story DNA

Moral

Breaking a sacred vow, even unintentionally, can lead to irreversible loss and sorrow.

Plot Summary

Gwyn, a poor Welsh boy, falls in love with a beautiful lake maiden, Nelferch, who agrees to marry him on the condition that he never strikes her three times without cause. They marry, become wealthy through her magic, and have three sons. However, Gwyn inadvertently 'strikes' her three times over the years through playful or questioning touches. After the third instance, Nelferch, with all their magical livestock, returns to the lake forever. A grief-stricken Gwyn drowns himself, but Nelferch later reappears to their sons, teaching them the art of healing, establishing a lineage of famous physicians.

Themes

love and lossthe sacredness of vowsthe clash of worldshealing and compassion

Emotional Arc

hope to joy to profound sorrow to enduring legacy

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: bittersweet
Magic: lake maidens, magical appearance of livestock, gift of healing and knowledge of herbs, foretelling the future
the half-baked breadthe uniquely tied sandalthe three blowsPhysicians' Point

Cultural Context

Origin: Welsh
Era: timeless fairy tale

This tale is a variant of the 'Physicians of Myddfai' legend, a famous Welsh folk tale explaining the origins of a renowned medical family.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Gwyn, a poor boy, sees a beautiful lady rise from a mountain lake and falls in love.
  2. He offers her hard barley bread, but she refuses, saying it's too hard to catch her.
  3. His mother advises him to try soft dough, but the lady refuses again, saying she won't have him.
  4. Finally, Gwyn offers her half-baked bread, which she accepts, and he proposes marriage.
  5. The lady agrees to marry him on the condition that if he strikes her three times without cause, she will leave him forever.
  6. She disappears, and Gwyn, in despair, is about to drown himself when her father appears with two identical daughters.
  7. Gwyn identifies his beloved by a unique sandal tie, and her father grants them magical livestock as she counts.
  8. Gwyn and Nelferch marry, become rich, and have three sons, living happily for eight years.
  9. Gwyn playfully flicks Nelferch with his gloves for not catching a horse, marking the first causeless blow.
  10. At a christening, Nelferch cries, foretelling the baby's painful life; Gwyn taps her shoulder to ask why, marking the second causeless blow.
  11. At the baby's funeral, Nelferch laughs joyously because the baby is free from pain; Gwyn gently touches her to hush her, marking the third causeless blow.
  12. Nelferch declares the vow broken, calls all their magical animals, and leads them into the lake, vanishing forever.
  13. Gwyn, heartbroken, drowns himself in the lake.
  14. The three sons wander by the lake until Nelferch reappears to them, teaching them the healing properties of plants.
  15. The sons become famous physicians, and their legacy of healing continues for centuries at 'Physicians' Point'.

Characters

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Gwyn

human young adult male

A young man of average height and build, with the sturdy frame of someone accustomed to tending livestock in the Welsh mountains. His complexion is likely ruddy from outdoor work.

Attire: Simple, practical Welsh peasant clothing: likely a homespun linen tunic, wool breeches, and sturdy leather boots. Colors would be natural earth tones.

Wants: To win the love of the Lady of the Lake and build a happy life with her.

Flaw: Forgetfulness and a tendency to act impulsively, leading him to break his vow.

Transforms from a poor, lovestruck boy into a rich husband and father, then loses everything due to his own actions, ultimately dying of grief.

A young man holding out a piece of bread, gazing longingly at a lake.

Loving, persistent, somewhat naive, easily distracted by beauty, forgetful, ultimately grief-stricken.

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Nelferch (The Lady of the Lake)

magical creature ageless (appears as a young adult) female

Exquisitely beautiful, with a graceful, ethereal presence. Her skin is likely pale, shimmering as if touched by water. She moves with an otherworldly fluidity.

Attire: She appears from the water, suggesting a natural, flowing garment that might resemble water itself, or a simple, elegant gown. When on land, she wears sandals, one of which has a distinctive tie. Given her magical nature, her attire would be ethereal, perhaps of shimmering fabric in blues, greens, or whites, possibly adorned with natural elements like pearls or shells, rather than human clothing.

Wants: To find love, to fulfill her magical purpose of healing, and to uphold the conditions of her father's vow.

Flaw: Her vulnerability to the three causeless blows, which forces her to leave.

Leaves her watery home for love, becomes a wife and mother, then returns to the lake after her husband breaks his vow, eventually reappearing to teach her sons healing arts.

A beautiful woman with long, flowing hair, rising from a lake, holding a golden comb.

Mysterious, beautiful, solemn, kind-hearted (especially to the poor and sick), sensitive, bound by magical vows.

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Gwyn's Mother (The Widow)

human adult female

A practical, likely weathered woman, showing the signs of a life of hard work as a widow in the Welsh countryside. Of average height and build.

Attire: Simple, functional Welsh peasant clothing: a dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, and a practical apron. Colors would be muted and natural.

Wants: To help her son find happiness and to ensure his well-being.

Flaw: Her inability to fully understand or control the magical world her son enters.

Remains a constant, supportive figure, offering practical advice.

An older woman in simple peasant attire, offering advice to her son.

Wise, practical, supportive, a bit superstitious, caring.

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The Old Man of the Lake

magical creature elderly male

A grand-looking old man with a long, flowing white beard, suggesting ancient wisdom and power. His skin might have a slightly ethereal quality, like his daughters.

Attire: Flowing, perhaps ancient-looking robes in deep blues or greens, possibly adorned with natural elements like shells or lake stones, befitting a magical being of the lake.

Wants: To ensure his daughter's well-being and to uphold the conditions of the magical pact.

Flaw: His strict adherence to the three-blow condition, which ultimately causes his daughter's departure.

Appears to set the conditions for Gwyn's marriage and bestow wealth, then vanishes.

An old man with a very long white beard, standing by a lake with two identical beautiful maidens.

Solemn, wise, powerful, protective of his daughters, bound by ancient vows.

Locations

Mountain Lake Shore

transitional morning | afternoon | dusk | varies Varies, includes sunny days, breezy days, and days with rain and sun bursts.

The edge of a freshwater mountain pond, where sweet grass and flowers grow abundantly. The water surface is bright and reflective, acting as a mirror. The surrounding hills are covered with trees that cast long shadows in the afternoon.

Mood: Magical, serene, hopeful, later tinged with sadness and mystery.

Gwyn first encounters the Lady of the Lake, proposes to her, and later meets her father and sister. It is also the place where Nelferch and the animals vanish, and where she later reappears to teach her sons.

freshwater mountain pond sweet grass wildflowers reflective lake surface tree-covered hills overhanging rock

Widow's Cottage

indoor Implied to be temperate, reflecting the Welsh climate.

A humble, traditional Welsh cottage, likely built of stone with a thatched roof, where Gwyn lives with his mother. It is a place of warmth and simple living.

Mood: Warm, humble, supportive, a place of counsel and rest.

Gwyn returns here to consult with his mother after his initial failed attempts to woo the Lady of the Lake. It is his childhood home before he becomes wealthy.

stone walls thatched roof simple interior table

Gwyn and Nelferch's Farm

outdoor daytime Temperate, with clear days suitable for grazing.

A prosperous farm bought by Gwyn, filled with numerous cattle, sheep, horses, hogs, and goats that emerged from the lake. It includes fields for grazing and stables for the animals. The land is fertile and well-maintained.

Mood: Joyful, prosperous, domestic, later becoming sorrowful.

The setting for Gwyn and Nelferch's happy married life and the raising of their three sons. It is also where the first two 'causeless blows' occur, and where Nelferch gathers all the animals before their final departure.

grazing fields stables various farm animals (cattle, sheep, horses, hogs, goats) plow