THE MIGHTY MONSTER AFANG

by William Elliot Griffis · from Welsh Fairy Tales

folk tale overcoming the monster hopeful Ages 8-14 2251 words 10 min read
Cover: THE MIGHTY MONSTER AFANG

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 465 words 3 min Canon 100/100

Long ago, in a nice land, happy people lived. They built nice homes. They grew yummy food. The people made the land pretty. They had rich farms. Children played outside. Flowers grew all around. It was a good place.

But a big, grumpy monster lived nearby. His name was Afang the Monster. He lived in a wet, muddy place. It was hidden in dark trees. Afang the Monster ate their food. He scared the people. He was not a nice monster.

Afang the Monster did naughty things. He broke the river walls. Water came into the farms. It made homes wet. It made crops sad. The people had no food. Children had no cookies. This made all people very sad.

The monster was too strong. Their tools could not hurt it. No one could go near him. He was very big. They did not know what to do. It was a big problem.

Then a kind girl had a clever idea. Her name was Elara. She was very brave. She said she would stop the monster. She had a good plan.

Elara’s friend was Gareth. He was strong and kind. Gareth went to all the farms. He asked for help. Farmers brought many strong oxen. They made big, strong ropes. All people worked as one.

Elara put on her best dress. She smelled like sweet flowers. She went to the monster's home. It was a wet, muddy place. She was not afraid.

Afang the Monster smelled the flowers. He saw Elara. He was very surprised. He forgot his grumpy ways. He liked her pretty face. He did not want to scare her. He looked very happy.

Elara was kind to the monster. She stroked its head. She tickled its neck. Afang the Monster laughed. Elara sang a soft song. The monster fell asleep. Its head was in her lap.

Gareth and his friends came out. They walked very softly. Elara kept singing her song. They tied the sleeping monster. They used big, strong ropes. They tied it to many strong oxen.

The oxen pulled hard. Afang the Monster woke up fast. He tried to get free. He made loud noises. He rolled around. But the ropes were strong. He could not escape.

The strong oxen pulled and pulled. They pulled the monster far away. They made a long path. They went over the hills. The monster could not stop them.

They put Afang in a big hole. The hole filled with water. It became a lake. The monster stayed there always. It could not come out. The people were safe.

The land was safe and happy now. Elara and Gareth got married. All people were happy. They remembered their brave act. Being clever helped them. Working as one helped them. This made big problems small.

Original Story 2251 words · 10 min read

THE MIGHTY MONSTER AFANG

After the Cymric folk, that is, the people we call Welsh, had come up from Cornwall into their new land, they began to cut down the trees, to build towns, and to have fields and gardens. Soon they made the landscape smile with pleasant homes, rich farms and playing children.

They trained vines and made flowers grow. The young folks made pets of the wild animals' cubs, which their fathers and big brothers brought home from hunting. Old men took rushes and reeds and wove them into cages for song birds to live in.

While they were draining the swamps and bogs, they drove out the monsters, that had made their lair in these wet places. These terrible creatures liked to poison people with their bad breath, and even ate up very little boys and girls, when they strayed away from home.

So all the face of the open country between the forests became very pretty to look at. The whole of Cymric land, which then extended from the northern Grampian Hills to Cornwall, and from the Irish Sea, past their big fort, afterward called London, even to the edge of the German Ocean, became a delightful place to live in.

The lowlands and the rivers, in which the tide rose and fell daily, were especially attractive. This was chiefly because of the many bright flowers growing there; while the yellow gorse and the pink heather made the hills look as lovely as a young girl's face. Besides this, the Cymric maidens were the prettiest ever, and the lads were all brave and healthy; while both of these knew how to sing often and well.

Now there was a great monster named the Afang, that lived in a big bog, hidden among the high hills and inside of a dark, rough forest.

This ugly creature had an iron-clad back and a long tail that could wrap itself around a mountain. It had four front legs, with big knees that were bent up like a grasshopper's, but were covered with scales like armor. These were as hard as steel, and bulged out at the thighs. Along its back, was a ridge of horns, like spines, and higher than an alligator's. Against such a tough hide, when the hunters shot their darts and hurled their javelins, these weapons fell down to the ground, like harmless pins.

On this monster's head, were big ears, half way between those of a jackass and an elephant. Its eyes were as green as leeks, and were round, but scalloped on the edges, like squashes, while they were as big as pumpkins.

The Afang's face was much like a monkey's, or a gorilla's, with long straggling gray hairs around its cheeks like those of a walrus. It always looked as if a napkin, as big as a bath towel, would be necessary to keep its mouth clean. Yet even then, it slobbered a good deal, so that no nice fairy liked to be near the monster.

When the Afang growled, the bushes shook and the oak leaves trembled on the branches, as if a strong wind was blowing.

But after its dinner, when it had swallowed down a man, or two calves, or four sheep, or a fat heifer, or three goats, its body swelled up like a balloon. Then it usually rolled over, lay along the ground, or in the soft mud, and felt very stupid and sleepy, for a long while.

All around its lair, lay wagon loads of bones of the creatures, girls, women, men, boys, cows, and occasionally a donkey, which it had devoured.

But when the Afang was ravenously hungry and could not get these animals and when fat girls and careless boys were scarce, it would live on birds, beasts and fishes. Although it was very fond of cows and sheep, yet the wool and hair of these animals stuck in its big teeth, it often felt very miserable and its usually bad temper grew worse.

Then, like a beaver, it would cut down a tree, sharpen it to a point and pick its teeth until its mouth was clean. Yet it seemed all the more hungry and eager for fresh human victims to eat, especially juicy maidens; just as children like cake more than bread.

The Cymric men were not surprised at this, for they knew that girls were very sweet and they almost worshiped women. So they learned to guard their daughters and wives. They saw that to do such things as eating up people was in the nature of the beast, which could never be taught good manners.

But what made them mad beyond measure was the trick which the monster often played upon them by breaking the river banks, and the dykes which with great toil they had built to protect their crops. Then the waters overflowed all their farms, ruined their gardens and spoiled their cow houses and stables.

This sort of mischief the Afang liked to play, especially about the time when the oat and barley crops were ripe and ready to be gathered to make cakes and flummery; that is sour oat-jelly, or pap. So it often happened that the children had to do without their cookies and porridge during the winter. Sometimes the floods rose so high as to wash away the houses and float the cradles. Even those with little babies in them were often seen on the raging waters, and sent dancing on the waves down the river, to the sea.

Once in a while, a mother cat and all her kittens were seen mewing for help, or a lady dog howling piteously. Often it happened that both puppies and kittens were drowned.

So, whether for men or mothers, pussies or puppies, the Cymric men thought the time had come to stop this monster's mischief. It was bad enough that people should be eaten up, but to have all their crops ruined and animals drowned, so that they had to go hungry all winter, with only a little fried fish, and no turnips, was too much for human patience. There were too many weeping mothers and sorrowful fathers, and squalling brats and animals whining for something to eat.

Besides, if all the oats were washed away, how could their wives make flummery, without which, no Cymric man is ever happy? And where would they get seed for another year's sowing? And if there were no cows, how could the babies or kitties live, or any grown-up persons get buttermilk?

Someone may ask, why did not some brave man shoot the Afang, with a poisoned arrow, or drive a spear into him under the arms, where the flesh was tender, or cut off his head with a sharp sword?

The trouble was just here. There were plenty of brave fellows, ready to fight the monster, but nothing made of iron could pierce that hide of his. This was like armor, or one of the steel battleships of our day, and the Afang always spit out fire or poison breath down the road, up which a man was coming, long before the brave fellow could get near him. Nothing would do, but to go up into his lair, and drag him out.

But what man or company of men was strong enough to do this, when a dozen giants in a gang, with ropes as thick as a ship's hawser, could hardly tackle the job?

Nevertheless, in what neither man nor giant could do, a pretty maiden might succeed. True, she must be brave also, for how could she know, but if hungry, the Afang might eat her up?

However, one valiant damsel, of great beauty, who had lots of perfumery and plenty of pretty clothes, volunteered to bind the monster in his lair. She said, "I'm not afraid." Her sweetheart was named Gadern, and he was a young and strong hunter. He talked over the matter with her and they two resolved to act together.

Gadern went all over the country, summoning the farmers to bring their ox teams and log chains. Then he set the blacksmiths to work, forging new and especially heavy ones, made of the best native iron, from the mines, for which Wales is still famous.

Meanwhile, the lovely maiden arrayed herself in her prettiest clothes, dressed her hair in the most enticing way, hanging a white blossom on each side, over her ears, with one flower also at her neck.

When she had perfumed her garments, she sallied forth and up the lake where the big bog and the waters were and where the monster hid himself.

While the maiden was still quite a distance away, the terrible Afang, scenting his visitor from afar, came rushing out of his lair. When very near, he reared his head high in the air, expecting to pounce on her, with his iron clad claws and at one swallow make a breakfast of the girl.

But the odors of her perfumes were so sweet, that he forgot what he had thought to do. Moreover, when he looked at her, he was so taken with unusual beauty, that he flopped at once on his forefeet. Then he behaved just like a lovelorn beau, when his best girl comes near. He ties his necktie and pulls down his coat and brushes off the collar.

So the Afang began to spruce up. It was real fun to see how a monster behaves when smitten with love for a pretty girl. He had no idea how funny he was.

The girl was not at all afraid, but smoothed the monster's back, stroked and played with its big moustaches and tickled its neck until the Afang's throat actually gurgled with a laugh. Pretty soon he guffawed, for he was so delighted.

When he did this, the people down in the valley thought it was thunder, though the sky was clear and blue.

The maiden tickled his chin, and even put up his whiskers in curl papers. Then she stroked his neck, so that his eyes closed. Soon she had gently lulled him to slumber, by singing a cradle song, which her mother had taught her. This she did so softly, and sweetly, that in a few minutes, with its head in her lap, the monster was sound asleep and even began to snore.

Then, quietly, from their hiding places in the bushes, Gadern and his men crawled out. When near the dreaded Afang, they stood up and sneaked forward, very softly on tip toe. They had wrapped the links of the chain in grass and leaves, so that no clanking was heard. They also held the oxen's yokes, so that nobody or anything could rattle, or make any noise. Slowly but surely they passed the chain over its body, in the middle, besides binding the brute securely between its fore and hind legs.

All this time, the monster slept on, for the girl kept on crooning her melody.

When the forty yoke of oxen were all harnessed together, the drovers cracked all their whips at once, so that it sounded like a clap of thunder and the whole team began to pull together.

Then the Afang woke up with a start.

The sudden jerk roused the monster to wrath, and its bellowing was terrible. It rolled round and round, and dug its four sets of toes, each with three claws, every one as big as a plowshare, into the ground. It tried hard to crawl into its lair, or slip into the lake.

Finding that neither was possible, the Afang looked about, for some big tree to wrap its tail around. But all his writhings or plungings were of no use. The drovers plied their whips and the oxen kept on with one long pull together and forward. They strained so hard, that one of them dropped its eye out. This formed a pool, and to this day they call it The Pool of the Ox's Eye. It never dries up or overflows, though the water in it rises and falls, as regularly as the tides.

For miles over the mountains the sturdy oxen hauled the monster. The pass over which they toiled and strained so hard is still named the Pass of the Oxen's Slope. When going down hill, the work of dragging the Afang was easier.

In a great hole in the ground, big enough to be a pond, they dumped the carcass of the Afang, and soon a little lake was formed. This uncanny bit of water is called "The Lake of the Green Well." It is considered dangerous for man or beast to go too near it. Birds do not like to fly over the surface, and when sheep tumble in, they sink to the bottom at once.

If the bones of the Afang still lie at the bottom, they must have sunk down very deep, for the monster had no more power to get out, or to break the river banks. The farmers no longer cared anything about the creature, and they hardly every think of the old story, except when a sheep is lost.

As for Gadern and his brave and lovely sweetheart, they were married and lived long and happily. Their descendants, in the thirty-seventh generation, are proud of the grand exploit of their ancestors, while all the farmers honor his memory and bless the name of the lovely girl that put the monster asleep.


Story DNA

Moral

Even the most formidable challenges can be overcome through cleverness, courage, and collective effort.

Plot Summary

The Cymric people, having settled and cultivated Wales, are terrorized by the monstrous Afang, which devours inhabitants and maliciously floods their lands, ruining crops. Traditional weapons are useless against its iron-clad hide and poisonous breath. A brave and beautiful maiden volunteers to subdue the beast, while her sweetheart, Gadern, gathers the community with forty yokes of oxen and heavy chains. The maiden charms the Afang with her beauty and perfume, then lulls it to sleep with a song. Gadern and his men bind the sleeping monster, and upon its awakening, the oxen drag the struggling Afang for miles before dumping it into a deep hole, which becomes a permanent lake, trapping it forever. The land is freed, and the maiden and Gadern marry, celebrated as heroes.

Themes

courageingenuity over brute forcecommunity cooperationtaming nature

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: descriptive imagery, mythological allusions, explanation of place names

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: monster (Afang), monster's impenetrable hide, monster's poisonous breath, monster's ability to cause floods
the Afang (symbol of untamed, destructive nature)the maiden's beauty and song (symbol of gentle power and ingenuity)the ox team (symbol of collective strength and perseverance)

Cultural Context

Origin: Welsh (Cymric)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects a period of early settlement and land reclamation, where natural dangers (like floods and large predators, personified as monsters) were significant threats to communities.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. The Cymric people settle in Wales, transforming the land into a beautiful and productive place, driving out lesser monsters.
  2. A fearsome monster named the Afang, with an iron-clad hide and destructive habits, lives in a hidden bog, preying on people and animals.
  3. The Afang also maliciously breaks river banks, causing floods that ruin crops, drown animals, and bring great suffering to the Cymric people.
  4. The people realize that the Afang's hide is impenetrable to weapons and its poisonous breath makes direct combat impossible, leaving them desperate.
  5. A beautiful and courageous maiden volunteers to subdue the monster, believing that what men cannot do, a maiden might.
  6. Her sweetheart, Gadern, organizes the community, gathering farmers, forty yokes of oxen, and blacksmiths to forge special heavy chains.
  7. The maiden, dressed in her finest clothes and perfumed, goes to the Afang's lair.
  8. The Afang, drawn by her scent and captivated by her beauty, forgets its predatory instincts and behaves like a lovestruck suitor.
  9. The maiden strokes and tickles the monster, making it laugh, and then gently lulls it to sleep with a cradle song, its head in her lap.
  10. Gadern and his men, having stealthily approached, bind the sleeping Afang with the heavy chains, securing it to the forty yokes of oxen.
  11. The oxen are whipped, and the sudden pull awakens the Afang, which struggles violently, bellowing and trying to escape.
  12. The oxen, straining with all their might, drag the monster for miles, even losing an eye in the process, creating a landmark.
  13. The Afang is finally dumped into a deep hole, which becomes a lake, permanently trapping the monster.
  14. The Cymric land is freed from the Afang's terror, and the maiden and Gadern marry, their descendants celebrating their heroic deed.

Characters

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The Afang

magical creature ageless non-human

A monstrous creature of immense size, with an iron-clad back and a long tail capable of wrapping around a mountain. It has four front legs with large, bent, grasshopper-like knees covered in steel-hard, bulging scales. A ridge of horns, higher than an alligator's, runs along its back. Its body swells like a balloon after eating.

Attire: None, it is a wild monster.

Wants: To eat, to cause mischief by flooding the Cymric lands, and to satisfy its base desires.

Flaw: Vanity and susceptibility to beauty and sweet scents, which can lull it into a false sense of security and sleep.

Initially a terrifying, destructive force, it is ultimately outsmarted by the maiden and Gadern, subdued, and permanently trapped in a deep hole, forming 'The Lake of the Green Well'.

Its iron-clad back, grasshopper-like scaled legs, and large, green, scalloped eyes.

Destructive, ravenous, mischievous, bad-tempered, easily smitten by beauty, susceptible to flattery, gluttonous.

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The Maiden

human young adult female

A valiant damsel of great beauty, described as one of the prettiest Cymric maidens. Her appearance is captivating enough to smite a monster.

Attire: Her prettiest clothes, perfumed. She wears a white blossom at her neck. Inferring from the Welsh setting, this would likely be a finely woven linen or wool dress, perhaps with some embroidery, in natural dyes, possibly with a simple overdress or apron, and a shawl, reflecting a more traditional Cymric style rather than elaborate court wear.

Wants: To save her people from the Afang's destruction and to secure a future with her sweetheart, Gadern.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but her reliance on charm and gentleness could be seen as a vulnerability if the monster were not susceptible to it.

Transforms from a brave volunteer into the heroine who directly confronts and subdues the monster, leading to her marriage and a long, happy life.

Her enticingly dressed hair with white blossoms over her ears and at her neck.

Valiant, brave, clever, resourceful, gentle, charming, confident, loving.

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Gadern

human young adult male

A young and strong hunter, capable of rallying men and organizing a large-scale operation.

Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a hunter and leader of farmers, he would wear practical, sturdy clothing suitable for the Welsh countryside, likely made of wool or linen in earthy tones, perhaps a tunic and trousers, with sturdy boots.

Wants: To defeat the Afang, protect his people, and marry his sweetheart.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but his strength alone was insufficient against the Afang's hide.

From a strong hunter, he becomes the orchestrator of the Afang's capture, demonstrating leadership and resourcefulness, leading to his marriage and a celebrated legacy.

Leading a team of oxen, perhaps with a log chain.

Strong, brave, resourceful, determined, a leader, loving towards his sweetheart.

Locations

Cymric Lowlands and Rivers

outdoor Implied pleasant weather for farming, but subject to severe flooding from the Afang's mischief.

Open country between forests, made to smile with pleasant homes, rich farms, and gardens. Characterized by many bright flowers, yellow gorse, and pink heather on the hills. Rivers where the tide rises and falls daily.

Mood: Initially delightful and prosperous, but frequently threatened and made sorrowful by the monster's destructive floods.

The primary setting for the Cymric people's daily lives, farming, and suffering from the Afang's destructive floods.

half-timbered Fachwerk houses thatched roofs stone hearths cultivated fields gardens rivers dykes yellow gorse pink heather oak trees

The Afang's Bog Lair

outdoor Implied damp and possibly gloomy conditions due to the bog and dark forest.

A big bog hidden among high hills and inside a dark, rough forest. The ground around the lair is littered with wagon loads of bones from the monster's victims.

Mood: Eerie, dangerous, and desolate, marked by the presence of death and the monster's foul nature.

The dwelling place of the monster Afang, where the maiden confronts and lulls it to sleep, allowing Gadern and his men to bind it.

dense, dark forest high hills large bog skeletal remains gnarled oak trees shaking bushes

The Pass of the Oxen's Slope

transitional day Implied strenuous conditions, possibly clear but demanding.

A rugged mountain pass over which the forty yoke of oxen toiled and strained to drag the Afang. It is a long, arduous path leading from the monster's lair to its final resting place.

Mood: Strenuous, determined, and monumental, reflecting the immense effort required to move the monster.

The route taken by the oxen and men as they haul the bound Afang away from its lair.

rocky mountain path steep slopes rugged terrain sparse, tough vegetation distant valleys

The Lake of the Green Well

outdoor Implied consistent, perhaps slightly eerie, conditions.

A great hole in the ground, big enough to be a pond, where the carcass of the Afang was dumped. It became a little lake, considered uncanny and dangerous, with water that rises and falls like tides. Birds avoid flying over it, and sheep sink immediately.

Mood: Uncanny, dangerous, and mysterious, with a lingering sense of the monster's presence.

The final resting place of the Afang, where its body formed a permanent, dangerous lake.

deep, dark lake steep, earthen banks sparse, hardy vegetation around edges still, reflective water surface