THE TREASURE STONE of THE FAIRIES

by William Elliot Griffis · from Welsh Fairy Tales

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1731 words 8 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 452 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once there is a little boy. His name is Gruff. He lives in a little house on a hill.

Gruff lives with his Mama. He lives with his Papa. Their house is small. It is a pink house. Mama keeps it very clean. Mama loves her house. Papa works hard every day. Papa works on the farm. They love Gruff very much. Gruff loves them too.

One day Gruff goes to the hill. He sees some children there. They are the fairies. The fairies play with Gruff. They play many games. They give him shiny gifts. Gruff takes the gifts home. Mama sees the shiny gifts. "These are just paper," Mama says. "Do not go there again," she says. Mama is a little scared.

Gruff wants to play more. He goes to the hill again. He plays with the fairies. Gruff is gone for a long time. Mama and Papa miss him. They are very, very sad. Then Gruff comes home. He looks the same. He thinks he was gone one day. Mama and Papa are happy.

One day, something bad happens. Mama and Papa are sad. They do not have much money. They do not have much food. They are very, very sad. Gruff is sad too. His family needs help.

There is a big stone. It is on the hill. It is a very big stone. People say treasure is under it. Only a good person can move it. It is a magic stone. Many people know this.

Papa tries to move the stone. Neighbors help Papa. They push and push. They pull and pull. The stone does not move. It is too big. They try again. They try very hard. Still, it does not move.

Gruff sees Mama and Papa. They are very sad. They need help now. Gruff wants to help them. He thinks of the fairies. "The fairies can help," he thinks.

Gruff goes to the hill. He finds the fairies. "My family is sad," Gruff says. "They have no food. Please help them."

The fairy smiles at Gruff. "Go to the big stone," she says. "You can move it," she says. "You are good. Go now, little Gruff."

Gruff goes to the big stone. He puts his hand on it. The stone shakes! It trembles a little. Gruff pushes the stone. It rolls down the hill. It rolls far away. Gruff is very surprised. It is magic!

Under the stone is treasure. Shiny, pretty treasure! Gruff takes it home. Mama and Papa see it. They smile and smile. They are not sad now. They are very happy. Gruff is happy too. The family is happy. And Gruff and Mama and Papa are happy. Very, very happy.

Original Story 1731 words · 8 min read

THE TREASURE STONE OF THE FAIRIES

The Gruffyds were one of the largest of the Welsh tribes. To-day, it is said that in Britain one man in every forty has this, as either his first, middle, or last name. It means "hero" or "brave man," and as far back as the ninth century, the word is found in the Book of Saint Chad.

The monks, who derived nearly every name from the Latin, insisted the word meant Great Faith.

Another of the most common of Welsh personal names was William; which, when that of a father's son, was written Williams and was only the Latin for Gild Helm, or Golden Helmet.

Long ago, when London was a village and Cardiff only a hamlet, there was a boy of this name, who tended sheep on the hill sides. His father was a hard working farmer, who every year tried to coax to grow out of the stony ground some oats, barley, leeks and cabbage. In summer, he worked hard, from the first croak of the raven to the last hoot of the owl, to provide food for his wife and baby daughter. When his boy was born, he took him to the church to be christened Gruffyd, but every body called him "Gruff." In time several little sisters came to keep the boy company.

His mother always kept her cottage, which was painted pink, very neat and pretty, with vines covering the outside, while flowers bloomed indoors. These were set in pots and on shelves near the latticed windows. They seemed to grow finely, because so good a woman loved them. The copper door-sill was kept bright, and the broad borders on the clay floor, along the walls, were always fresh with whitewash. The pewter dishes on the sideboard shone as if they were moons, and the china cats on the mantle piece, in silvery luster, reflected both sun and candle light. Daddy often declared he could use these polished metal plates for a mirror, when he shaved his face. Puss, the pet, was always happy purring away on the hearth, as the kettle boiled to make the flummery, of sour oat jelly, which, daddy loved so well.

Mother Gruffyd was always so neat, with her black and white striped apron, her high peaked hat, with its scalloped lace and quilled fastening around her chin, her little short shawl, with its pointed, long tips, tied in a bow, and her bright red plaid petticoat folded back from her frock. Her snowy-white, rolling collar and neck cloth knotted at the top, and fringed at the ends, added fine touches to her picturesque costume.

In fact, young Gruffyd was proud of his mother and he loved her dearly. He thought no woman could be quite as sweet as she was.

Once, at the end of the day, on coming back home, from the hills, the boy met some lovely children. They were dressed in very fine clothes, and had elegant manners. They came up, smiled, and invited him to play with them. He joined in their sports, and was too much interested to take note of time. He kept on playing with them until it was pitch dark.

Among other games, which he enjoyed, had been that of "The King in his counting house, counting out his money," and "The Queen in her kitchen, eating bread and honey," and "The Girl hanging out the clothes," and "The Saucy Blackbird that snipped off her nose." In playing these, the children had aprons full of what seemed to be real coins, the size of crowns, or five-shilling pieces, each worth a dollar. These had "head and tail," beside letters on them and the boy supposed they were real.

But when he showed these to his mother, she saw at once from their lightness, and because they were so easily bent, that they were only paper, and not silver.

She asked her boy where he had got them. He told her what a nice time he had enjoyed. Then she knew that these, his playmates, were fairy children. Fearing that some evil might come of this, she charged him, her only son, never to go out again alone, on the mountain. She mistrusted that no good would come of making such strange children his companions.

But the lad was so fond of play, that one day, tired of seeing nothing but byre and garden, while his sisters liked to play girls' games more than those which boys cared most for, and the hills seeming to beckon him to come to them, he disobeyed, and slipped out and off to the mountains. He was soon missed and search was made for him.

Yet nobody had seen or heard of him. Though inquiries were made on every road, in every village, and at all the fairs and markets in the neighborhood, two whole years passed by, without a trace of the boy.

But early one morning of the twenty-fifth month, before breakfast, his mother, on opening the door, found him sitting on the steps, with a bundle under his arm, but dressed in the same clothes, and not looking a day older or in any way different, from the very hour he disappeared.

"Why my dear boy, where have you been, all these months, which have now run into the third year—so long a time that they have seemed to me like ages?"

"Why, mother dear, how strange you talk. I left here yesterday, to go out and to play with the children, on the hills, and we have had a lovely time. See what pretty clothes they have given me for a present." Then he opened his bundle.

But when she tore open the package, the mother was all the more sure that she was right, and that her fears had been justified. In it she found only a dress of white paper. Examining it carefully, she could see neither seam nor stitches. She threw it in the fire, and again warned her son against fairy children.

But pretty soon, after a great calamity had come upon them, both father and mother changed their minds about fairies.

They had put all their savings into the venture of a ship, which had for a long time made trading voyages from Cardiff. Every year, it came back bringing great profit to the owners and shareholders. In this way, daddy was able to eke out his income, and keep himself, his wife and daughters comfortably clothed, while all the time the table was well supplied with good food. Nor did they ever turn from their door anyone who asked for bread and cheese.

But in the same month of the boy's return, bad news came that the good ship had gone down in a storm. All on board had perished, and the cargo was totally lost, in the deep sea, far from land. In fact, no word except that of dire disaster had come to hand.

Now it was a tradition, as old as the days of King Arthur, that on a certain hill a great boulder could be seen, which was quite different from any other kind of rock to be found within miles. It was partly imbedded in the earth, and beneath it, lay a great, yes, an untold treasure. The grass grew luxuriantly around this stone, and the sheep loved to rest at noon in its shadow. Many men had tried to lift, or pry it up, but in vain. The tradition, unaltered and unbroken for centuries, was to the effect, that none but a very good man could ever budge this stone. Any and all unworthy men might dig, or pull, or pry, until doomsday, but in vain. Till the right one came, the treasure was as safe as if in heaven.

But the boy's father and mother were now very poor and his sisters now grown up wanted pretty clothes so badly, that the lad hoped that he or his father might be the deserving one. He would help him to win the treasure for he felt sure that his parent would share his gains with all his friends.

Though his neighbors were not told of the generous intentions credited to the boy's father, by his loving son, they all came with horses, ropes, crowbars, and tackle, to help in the enterprise. Yet after many a long days' toil, between the sun's rising and setting, their end was failure. Every day, when darkness came on, the stone lay there still, as hard and fast as ever. So they gave up the task.

On the final night, the lad saw that father and mother, who were great lovers, were holding each other's hands, while their tears flowed together, and they were praying for patience.

Seeing this, before he fell asleep, the boy resolved that on the morrow, he would go up to the mountains, and talk to his fairy friends about the matter.

So early in the morning, he hurried to the hill tops, and going into one of the caves, met the fairies and told them his troubles. Then he asked them to give him again some of their money.

"Not this time, but something better. Under the great rock there are treasures waiting for you."

"Oh, don't send me there! For all the men and horses of our parish, after working a week, have been unable to budge the stone."

"We know that," answered the principal fairy, "but do you yourself try to move it. Then you will see what is certain to happen."

Going home, to tell what he had heard, his parents had a hearty laugh at the idea of a boy succeeding where men, with the united strength of many horses and oxen, had failed.

Yet, after brooding awhile, they were so dejected, that anything seemed reasonable. So they said, "Go ahead and try it."

Returning to the mountain, the fairies, in a band, went with him to the great rock.

One touch of his hand, and the mighty boulder trembled, like an aspen leaf in the breeze.

A shove, and the rock rolled down from the hill and crashed in the valley below.

There, underneath, were little heaps of gold and silver, which the boy carried home to his parents, who became the richest people in the country round about.


Story DNA

Moral

True goodness and innocence can achieve what brute strength and worldly efforts cannot.

Plot Summary

Young Gruffyd, a Welsh boy, plays with fairy children and disappears for two years, returning home seemingly only a day older. His family then loses all their savings in a shipwreck, plunging them into poverty. A local legend speaks of an immovable treasure stone that only a 'very good man' can budge, but all attempts by the villagers fail. Gruffyd, seeing his parents' despair, seeks help from his fairy friends, who instruct him to try moving the stone himself. With a simple touch and shove, Gruffyd moves the mighty boulder, revealing a treasure of gold and silver beneath, making his family rich.

Themes

kindnessperseveranceinnocencefaith

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: descriptive imagery, emphasis on character's inner state

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs nature
Ending: happy
Magic: fairy children, time distortion in fairy realm, magical paper money/clothes, treasure stone only movable by a 'good' person, fairies' ability to guide and empower
the treasure stonethe paper money/clothes

Cultural Context

Origin: Welsh
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story grounds itself in Welsh identity through names and setting, while also touching on the historical importance of trade ships for income in coastal regions.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The Gruffyd family, including young Gruffyd (or 'Gruff'), lives a simple, hardworking life in a neat cottage.
  2. Gruffyd encounters and plays with fairy children, who give him what appear to be coins, but his mother recognizes them as paper and warns him against further contact.
  3. Gruffyd disobeys, returns to play with the fairies, and disappears for two years, returning home seemingly unchanged in age.
  4. His mother finds the 'clothes' the fairies gave him are also paper, reinforcing her distrust.
  5. The family suffers a great calamity when their invested savings are lost with a sunken ship, leaving them in dire poverty.
  6. A local legend about a treasure stone, only movable by a 'very good man', offers a glimmer of hope.
  7. Gruffyd's father and neighbors attempt to move the stone with all their might and tools, but fail repeatedly.
  8. Gruffyd, witnessing his parents' despair and prayers, decides to seek help from his fairy friends.
  9. He goes to the mountain, explains his family's troubles to the fairies, and asks for money.
  10. The principal fairy tells him they won't give him money, but instructs him to try moving the treasure stone himself.
  11. Gruffyd's parents are initially amused but, out of desperation, allow him to try.
  12. Accompanied by the fairies, Gruffyd touches the stone, which trembles, and then shoves it, causing it to roll down the hill.
  13. Underneath the stone, Gruffyd finds gold and silver, which he brings home, making his family wealthy.

Characters

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Gruffyd (Gruff)

human child male

A young boy, appearing no older than when he disappeared, even after two years in the fairy realm. His build is likely slender, typical of a child who tends sheep.

Attire: Initially, simple, practical peasant clothes suitable for tending sheep on hillsides. After his first return from the fairies, he is dressed in 'pretty clothes' which his mother identifies as a dress of white paper. Upon his second return, he is still in his original, simple clothes.

Wants: Initially driven by a desire for play and adventure. Later, his primary motivation is to help his impoverished family.

Flaw: Impulsiveness and a tendency to disobey rules, especially when tempted by fun or adventure.

Starts as a disobedient but loving child who is drawn to the magical world. He matures through his family's hardship, learning to use his unique connection to the fairy world for the greater good, becoming the family's savior.

A young boy with a simple, earnest expression, standing before a massive boulder that he has just moved with a single touch.

Curious, playful, disobedient (initially), loving (towards his mother), determined, compassionate (for his family's plight).

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Mother Gruffyd

human adult female

A neat and tidy woman, likely of average height and build for a Welsh farmer's wife of the era. Her appearance suggests diligence and care for her home and family.

Attire: Very specific and picturesque: a black and white striped apron, a high peaked hat with scalloped lace and a quilled fastening around her chin, a short shawl with pointed, long tips tied in a bow, and a bright red plaid petticoat folded back from her frock. She also wears a snowy-white, rolling collar and a neck cloth knotted at the top and fringed at the ends. This is a traditional Welsh costume.

Wants: To protect her family, maintain a clean and beautiful home, and provide for her children.

Flaw: Her initial fear and mistrust of the fairy world, which causes her to discourage her son's unique connection.

Initially very wary of the fairy world and protective of her son, she changes her mind about fairies after a family calamity, becoming open to the possibility of their help. She learns to trust her son's unique abilities.

A Welsh woman in a distinctive black and white striped apron and a high peaked hat, with a worried but loving expression.

Meticulous, loving, cautious, fearful (of fairies), devout, resilient, patient.

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Father Gruffyd

human adult male

A hard-working farmer, likely with a sturdy build from years of manual labor. His face would show the effects of toil and worry, especially after the loss of his savings.

Attire: Simple, practical farmer's clothes suitable for working the land. These would be durable and made of natural fibers like wool or linen, in earthy tones.

Wants: To provide for his family and ensure their comfort and well-being.

Flaw: His reliance on traditional methods and his initial skepticism, which prevents him from seeing alternative solutions.

Starts as a practical, hard-working man who provides for his family. After a financial calamity, he becomes dejected but eventually, through his son, finds renewed hope and prosperity. He learns to accept the unexpected and the magical.

A weathered Welsh farmer, with a look of quiet determination, holding his wife's hand in prayer.

Hard-working, resilient, generous (willing to share wealth), loving (towards his wife and children), initially skeptical (of fairies), dejected (after financial loss), patient (in prayer).

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Fairy Children

magical creature child unknown

Lovely children, dressed in very fine clothes, with elegant manners. They appear human but possess magical qualities (paper money, ability to distort time).

Attire: Very fine, elegant clothes, implying delicate fabrics, rich colors, and intricate designs, far superior to peasant attire. These clothes are a gift to Gruffyd, but turn out to be paper.

Wants: To play and interact with human children, possibly to test their character or simply for amusement.

Flaw: Their gifts, though seemingly valuable, are ultimately insubstantial in the human world (paper money, paper clothes).

They remain consistent throughout the story, serving as a gateway for Gruffyd into the magical world and eventually guiding him to the treasure.

A group of ethereal children in exquisitely detailed, shimmering clothes, playing with what appears to be golden coins.

Playful, charming, generous (with their 'money' and 'clothes'), mysterious, timeless.

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Principal Fairy

magical creature ageless unknown

Unspecified, but as a 'principal fairy', likely possesses an aura of authority and ancient wisdom. Would appear graceful and perhaps slightly more substantial than the fairy children.

Attire: Likely more regal and substantial than the fairy children's attire, perhaps made of shimmering natural elements or fine, flowing fabrics in deep, rich colors.

Wants: To guide worthy individuals to their rightful destiny and the treasures meant for them.

Flaw: None apparent in the story.

Remains consistent, acting as a wise mentor figure to Gruffyd.

A serene, wise fairy figure with an aura of ancient power, pointing towards a hidden treasure.

Wise, benevolent, direct, knowledgeable about human nature and destiny.

Locations

Gruffyd Family Cottage

indoor Implied temperate climate, cozy indoors

A neat and pretty Welsh cottage, painted pink, with vines covering the outside. Inside, flowers bloom in pots on shelves near latticed windows. The copper door-sill is bright, and broad whitewashed borders line the clay floor. Pewter dishes on the sideboard shine, and china cats on the mantle piece reflect light. A hearth with a purring cat and boiling kettle.

Mood: Warm, cozy, domestic, well-kept, loving

Gruffyd's home life, where his mother discovers the fairy coins are paper, and where he returns after two years.

pink painted walls vines on exterior latticed windows potted flowers copper door-sill whitewashed clay floor borders shining pewter dishes china cats on mantle hearth with cat boiling kettle

Welsh Hillsides

outdoor Implied temperate Welsh climate, possibly windy on higher elevations

Stony ground where the farmer tries to grow oats, barley, leeks, and cabbage. Later, described as beckoning to Gruffyd, with caves and a specific hill featuring a large, unique boulder partly embedded in the earth. Grass grows luxuriantly around this boulder, and sheep rest in its shadow.

Mood: Wild, natural, ancient, mysterious, inviting, later desperate

Gruffyd tends sheep, meets fairies, disappears for two years, and later returns to the specific hill with the Treasure Stone.

stony ground sparse crops (oats, barley, leeks, cabbage) sheep grazing caves large, unique boulder (Treasure Stone) luxuriant grass around boulder

Fairy Cave

indoor day Cool, damp, sheltered from outside weather

One of the caves on the hilltops where Gruffyd meets the fairies. It is a place of counsel and magic.

Mood: Mysterious, magical, secluded, ancient

Gruffyd consults with the fairies about his family's misfortune and is directed to the Treasure Stone.

rock walls shadows fairies