DER KÖNIG UND SEIN FALKE
by Friedrich Giese · from Türkische Märchen
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, there was a king named Leo. He loved his special falcon, Flicker. King Leo loved to hunt. He fed Flicker with his hand. Flicker was very special.
One day, King Leo went hunting. He saw a big deer. He rode his horse fast. He wanted the deer. His friends could not follow. King Leo was alone.
King Leo was very thirsty. He looked for water. He found water on a mountain. It dripped down slowly. Just a little drop came out.
King Leo had a cup. He put the cup under the drip. He wanted to drink. Flicker hit the cup. The water spilled out. King Leo was angry. He filled the cup. Flicker hit the cup again. Water spilled out.
King Leo was very thirsty. He was very angry. He hit Flicker hard. Flicker fell down. Flicker did not move. King Leo was still angry.
Then Old Ben came. He was King Leo's helper. Old Ben saw Flicker. Flicker was still. Old Ben gave King Leo water. It was from his bottle.
King Leo wanted mountain water. He told Old Ben: 'Go up. See the water. Fill my cup there.'
Old Ben climbed the mountain. He found the water source. A big, bad snake was there. It was dead in the water. The water was not good. It was sick.
Old Ben ran down the mountain. He told King Leo the news. 'The water is bad!' he said.
King Leo understood. Flicker saved him. Flicker hit the cup to help. The water was bad. Flicker stopped him. Flicker saved his life.
King Leo felt very sad. He cried for Flicker. He made a big mistake. He was so sorry. He felt bad for what he did.
Old Ben spoke softly. 'Flicker was good,' he said. 'Flicker helped you. You were too fast. It is good to think first. Do not be angry.'
King Leo nodded his head. 'I was too fast,' he said. 'I will always remember Flicker. I will always think first. I will not be angry.'
Original Story
59. DER KÖNIG UND SEIN FALKE
In alter Zeit lebte ein König, der die Jagd sehr liebte. Dieser König hatte einen Falken, der im Fluge jedes Wild einholte. Der König liebte diesen Falken über die Maßen und fütterte ihn immer mit eigener Hand. Eines Tages jagte er mit ihm auf einer Wiese und plötzlich erschien ein Hirsch. Der König verfolgte ihn ohne Überlegung mit größtem Eifer und ließ seinem leichtfüßigen Pferde die Zügel schießen. Es rannte so schnell, daß selbst der Morgenwind, der die Welt in einem Augenblicke durcheilt, es nicht einholen konnte. Infolgedessen blieb sein Gefolge einer nach dem anderen zurück und die Diener trennten sich von ihm. Nach einiger Zeit war auch der Hirsch nicht mehr zu sehen, und der König mußte die Jagd aufgeben. Da er von brennendem Durste gequält wurde, durcheilte er die Wüste, um Wasser zu suchen, nach allen Richtungen. Schließlich kam er an den Fuß eines Berges und sah, daß von dem Berge klares Wasser herabtröpfelte. Er nahm einen Becher, den er bei sich führte, und füllte ihn mit dem Wasser, das tropfenweise herabfloß, voll. Als er davon trinken wollte, schlug der Falke mit seinem Flügel an den Becher, so daß das Wasser ausfloß. Als der König ärgerlich den Becher mit vieler Mühe von neuem füllte und trinken wollte, geschah dasselbe wie vorher.
Der König, von der Glut des Durstes gequält und zornig über das Betragen des Falken, schlug ihn zu Boden und tötete ihn. In diesem Augenblick kam der Steigbügelhalter des Königs heran und fand den Falken tot und den König durstig. Er holte eine Feldflasche hervor, füllte den Becher und gab dem König zu trinken. Der König sagte: „Ich möchte von diesem Wasser haben, das von dem Berge herabtröpfelt, aber da es nur tropfenweise fließt, so macht es viel Mühe den Becher zu füllen. Du mußt hinaufklettern und sehen, ob dort irgendein Hindernis für das Wasser ist, und den Becher füllen.“ Der Steigbügelhalter sagte: „Zu Befehl“ und stieg den Berg hinauf. Da sah er eine Quelle, die nur tropfenweise Wasser gab und vor der Quelle lag eine tote große Schlange und durch die Einwirkung der Sonne war sie verwest und ihr Gift hatte sich mit dem Wasser vermischt und rieselte den Berg hinab. Der Steigbügelhalter lief erschreckt und bestürzt den Berg hinunter, nachdem er vorher seine Feldflasche mit dem kalten Wasser gefüllt hatte, und erzählte dem König, was er gesehen. Der König erquickte sich an dem kühlen Wasser, während aus seinen Augen Tränen flössen. Der Steigbügelhalter fragte ihn nach dem Grunde der Tränen. Der König erzählte die Geschichte und sagte: „Ich weine darüber, daß ich den Falken zu unrecht getötet habe.“ Der Steigbügelhalter erwiderte: „O König, dieser Falke hat dich vor einem großen Unglück bewahrt, und das ganze Volk des Landes ist ihm zu großem Danke verpflichtet. Es wäre besser gewesen, wenn der König nicht so eilig gewesen wäre, ihn zu töten und wenn er die Glut seines Zornes mit dem Wasser der Milde gedämpft hätte.“ Der König antwortete: „Ich bereue meine Handlung, aber die Reue nützt nichts und, so lange ich lebe, werde ich stets durch Gewissensbisse gequält werden.“
Story DNA
Moral
Act with patience and consider consequences before giving in to anger, for hasty actions can lead to irreversible regret.
Plot Summary
A king, passionate about hunting, outruns his retinue and becomes desperately thirsty. He finds a dripping spring, but his beloved falcon repeatedly knocks away his cup of water. Enraged by thirst, the king kills the falcon. Soon after, his stirrup-holder arrives, and upon investigating the spring, discovers a poisonous snake contaminating the water. The king realizes his falcon sacrificed itself to save him, and is overcome with profound, lasting regret for his hasty and unjust action.
Themes
Emotional Arc
anger to profound regret
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story, while presented as a fable, reflects common themes found in medieval European literature concerning kingship, justice, and the consequences of unchecked temper. Falconry was a highly esteemed activity among nobility.
Plot Beats (13)
- A king, passionate about hunting, possesses a magnificent falcon he cherishes and personally feeds.
- During a hunt, the king pursues a deer so intensely that he outruns his entire retinue.
- Exhausted and severely thirsty, the king searches for water and finds a mountain spring dripping slowly.
- He attempts to collect the water in his cup, but each time, his falcon knocks the cup away, spilling the water.
- Overwhelmed by thirst and fury, the king strikes down and kills his loyal falcon.
- His stirrup-holder arrives, finds the dead falcon, and offers the king water from his own flask.
- The king, still desiring the mountain water, instructs the stirrup-holder to investigate the source and fill the cup.
- The stirrup-holder climbs the mountain and discovers a large, dead, poisonous snake decomposing in the spring, contaminating the water.
- He rushes back to inform the king of the deadly discovery.
- The king immediately understands that the falcon sacrificed itself to save him from poisoning.
- Overcome with profound grief and remorse, the king weeps bitterly for his unjust act.
- The stirrup-holder admonishes the king for his impulsiveness, emphasizing the falcon's heroic deed.
- The king expresses deep regret, acknowledging that his guilt will torment him for the rest of his life.
Characters
The King
A man of regal bearing, likely of average to tall height and a strong, athletic build, accustomed to the rigors of hunting and horseback riding. His features would be sharp, indicative of his noble status and active lifestyle.
Attire: Rich, but practical hunting attire suitable for ancient times, possibly of Persian or Middle Eastern influence given the desert setting. He would wear a tunic of fine linen or silk, perhaps in deep blues or reds, under a leather or embroidered vest. Trousers would be loose-fitting, tucked into soft leather boots. A heavy, ornate belt with a large buckle would hold a small dagger or pouch. He might wear a simple, unadorned circlet or a wrapped headcloth (like a keffiyeh) to protect from the sun, rather than a heavy crown, while hunting.
Wants: To enjoy the thrill of the hunt, to quench his thirst, and ultimately, to learn from his mistakes and live with the consequences.
Flaw: Impulsiveness and a fiery temper, leading him to act without full consideration of the consequences.
Begins as an impulsive and quick-tempered ruler who acts without thinking. He undergoes a profound transformation, learning a harsh lesson about patience and the dangers of unchecked anger, leading to deep remorse and self-reflection.
Impetuous, passionate, quick to anger, devoted (to his falcon), regretful, just (in his self-assessment).
The Falcon
A magnificent hunting falcon, large and powerful, with sharp talons and a keen beak. Its feathers would be a rich, mottled brown and white, with distinct markings around its eyes.
Attire: None, but would have a finely crafted leather jess (strap) on its leg, possibly with a small bell, indicating its training and value.
Wants: To protect its beloved master from harm, driven by instinct and loyalty.
Flaw: Its inability to communicate its intentions to the King, leading to misunderstanding.
Acts as a silent protector, ultimately sacrificing itself to save the King, and becoming the catalyst for the King's profound realization and regret.
Loyal, intelligent, protective, instinct-driven.
The Stirrup-Holder
A man of sturdy build, accustomed to physical labor and long journeys, perhaps slightly older than the King, with a weathered but kind face. His height would be average.
Attire: Practical, durable clothing suitable for a loyal servant and attendant in ancient times. He would wear a simple, sturdy linen tunic in an earthy tone (browns, greys), with a leather belt. Loose-fitting trousers and practical, well-worn leather boots. He might carry a simple leather satchel or pouch.
Wants: To serve his King faithfully, to provide comfort and counsel, and to ensure the King's well-being.
Flaw: His position as a servant limits his ability to directly intervene or challenge the King's initial actions.
Remains a steady and wise presence throughout the story, acting as a catalyst for the King's understanding and remorse, solidifying his role as a trusted advisor.
Loyal, observant, patient, wise, respectful, empathetic.
Locations
Hunting Meadow
A wide, open grassy area suitable for hunting, where a king on a swift horse pursues a deer.
Mood: Exciting, fast-paced, initially exhilarating, then isolating as the king outpaces his retinue.
The king's initial pursuit of the deer, leading to his separation from his companions.
Deserted Wilderness
A desolate, arid landscape that the king traverses in search of water after losing his way during the hunt.
Mood: Desolate, parched, desperate, lonely.
The king's agonizing search for water, driven by intense thirst.
Mountain Base and Poisoned Spring
The foot of a rocky mountain where clear water trickles down, leading to a hidden, poisoned spring at its summit.
Mood: Initially hopeful and refreshing, then tragically revealing and sorrowful.
The king's repeated attempts to drink, the falcon's intervention, the falcon's death, and the subsequent discovery of the poisoned water source.