DIE VERSCHWENDERISCHE MAUS
by Friedrich Giese · from Türkische Märchen
Adapted Version
Once, there was a farmer. He had a big barn. In the barn, he kept much, much grain. He saved it for hard times. He wanted food later.
A Little Mouse was hungry. She lived near the barn. She dug a hole. She dug under the barn. She found much grain. So much grain! Grain was all around. She was very happy. She ate the grain.
The Little Mouse had much food. She ate a little. She threw much away. She thought, 'More grain will come.' She thought, 'Food will not end.' She did not care. She wasted much food. She was very proud. She had so much.
Other Mice came to her home. They saw the grain. They said, 'You are good!' They said, 'You have much food!' The Little Mouse gave them food. She gave them much food. They ate and ate. They were not real friends. They liked her food. They did not like her.
Outside, food became hard. People had no food. Beasts had no food. All were hungry. But the Little Mouse did not know. She had much food. She thought all was well. She did not think of others.
The Farmer was hungry. He had no food. He thought of his grain. He went to the barn. He opened the big door. He saw less grain. He was sad. He took the grain. He took it to a new place. He needed his food.
A Wise Mouse saw the Farmer. She saw him take the grain. She saw the food go. She ran to the Other Mice. She said, 'Run! Run! Food is gone! Farmer takes all!'
The Other Mice heard this. They ran away fast. They ran very fast. They left the Little Mouse. They did not help her. They were not good friends. They only liked food.
The Little Mouse woke up. She looked around. No friends were there. Her home was empty. No food was there. She was all alone.
She went outside. She saw no food around. She saw the empty barn. She was very sad. She was very hungry.
She knew her mistake. She wasted much food. Her friends were not real. She was alone. She was very sad. The Little Mouse was sad and hungry. She learned a big lesson. It is good to save food. It is good to have real friends. The end.
Original Story
41. DIE VERSCHWENDERISCHE MAUS
Ein Landmann hatte in seiner Scheune eine Menge Getreide liegen, legte nicht Hand daran, es zu verbrauchen, und hatte die Tore seiner Verwendung zugeschlossen, damit es zu Zeiten der höchsten Not und des größten Elends ihm als Nahrung diene. Nun hatte eine ganz verhungerte Maus am Rande dieses Platzes sich ihr Haus und in der Nähe des Speichers ihr Nest gemacht. Sie hatte andauernd unter der Erde alles mit dem ehernen Meißel ihrer Zähne durchbohrt und mit ihren minierenden, Steine spaltenden Vorderzähnen die ganze Gegend durchlöchert. Endlich hatte sie ein geheimes Loch mitten unter dem Kornspeicher fertig und von dem Dach ihres Nestes fielen Weizenkörner wie Meteore vom Himmel. Die Maus sah, daß das Versprechen des Koranwortes: „Eure Nahrung ist im Himmel“ erfüllt war, und daß der dunkle Spruch: „Suchet eure Nahrung in den Schlupfwinkeln der Erde“ klar und deutlich geworden war, daher erfüllte sie die Pflichten der Dankbarkeit wegen der Gottesgabe und ließ das Koranwort: „Gott sei Dank, daß er uns einen Tisch vom Himmel gesendet hat“ zum Gipfel des Himmels emporsteigen.
Als sie nun durch die Erlangung dieser Kostbarkeiten sehr reich geworden war, wurde sie so stolz wie Karun41 und so anmaßend wie Pharao. In kurzer Zeit war die Sache unter den Mäusen des Viertels bekannt, und sie beeilten sich, ihr freigebiges Haus zu besuchen. Trügerische Freunde sind wie Fliegen um den Zucker! Freunde beim Mahl und Genossen beim Becher sammelten sich alle um die Maus und nach ihrer Gewohnheit webten sie den Faden ihrer Rede nach ihrem Charakter und nach ihren Wünschen und schmeichelten ihr. Sie erkundigten sich andauernd nach ihrem Befinden und waren in ihrem Lob, Preis, Dank und Gebet übermäßig, und sie prahlte unverständig und verschwendete ihr Vermögen in der Meinung, daß das Korn der Scheune nie abnehmen werde und die Getreidekörner immer wie Sand aus diesem Loche herunterfallen würden. Jeden Tag gab sie ihren Genossen eine Menge davon. Nie dachte sie daran, von dem Heute auch etwas für das Morgen aufzuheben.
In dieser Zeit, als sie so im Winkel der Abgeschiedenheit sich dem Wohlleben hingaben, hatte die kalte Hand des Hungers und der Not die Menschen unglücklich gemacht. Überall verlangten sie Brot und legten ihr Leben auf die Wagschale, aber niemand nahm es als Gewicht an, für ein Stück Brot wollten sie ihren Haushalt verkaufen, aber niemand war Käufer dafür.
Die Maus, stolz und glücklich in dem Gedanken großen Reichtums, wußte nichts davon, daß das Korn teuer geworden und die Hungersnot sehr groß war. Als dieser Zustand nun einige Zeit dauerte, ging dem Landmann die Sache ans Leben und das Messer bis an die Knochen, so daß er wohl oder übel den Speicher öffnen mußte. Da sah er, daß das Korn durch Betrug weniger geworden war. Er seufzte tief auf, bedauerte seinen Verlust und sagte zu sich: „Trauer über diejenigen Sachen, die wiederzuerlangen außerhalb der Möglichkeit ist, gehört sich nicht für verständige Leute. Das beste ist es nun, daß die Überbleibsel des Getreides gesammelt und anderswohin gebracht werden.“ Er widmete sich also der Arbeit, das übrig gebliebene wenige Getreide herauszuholen.
Nun war die Maus, die sich für den Hausherrn und Meister dieses Platzes hielt, vom Weine des Schlafes trunken, und auch die anderen Mäuse hatten bei dem Lärm nicht den Laut der Fußtritte, überhaupt nichts vom Kommen und Gehen des Landmannes gehört. Unter ihnen war aber eine kluge Maus, die die Sachlage begriff und, um sie festzustellen, auf das Dach stieg, aus einer Fensterecke schaute und sah, wie es mit der Scheune stand. Sofort stieg sie vom Dach, erzählte die ganze Geschichte ihren Freunden und entfloh durch das Loch. Als die andern dies sahen, zerstreuten sie sich, der eine hierin, der andere dorthin, und ließen ihren Wohltäter allein.
Als die törichte Maus sich am nächsten Tage von ihrem Lager der Ruhe erhob und aus dem Schlafe der Sorglosigkeit aufwachte, sah sie, daß weder Freund noch Feind da war. Soviel sie sich auch rechts und links umschaute, nichts war zu sehen, soviel sie auch suchte, sie konnte sie nicht finden. Vor Furcht und Einsamkeit ängstigte sie sich und fing laut an zu wehklagen:
Die Freunde, die ich hatte, wo sind sie geblieben?
Was ist gescheh’n, was hat sie von mir weggetrieben?
Um die Sache aufzuklären, kroch sie aus einer Ecke des Nestes heraus, da sah sie, daß in der Welt eine solche Hungersnot herrschte, daß das Wort Brot wie Wasser von den Lippen floß. In ihrer Aufregung kehrte sie eiligst wieder in ihr Haus zurück. Dann dachte sie, dafür zu sorgen, ihre Vorräte aufzusparen. Sie fand aber in ihrem Hause kein Korn mehr vor. Als sie dann aus dem Loche in die Scheune kletterte, fand sie auch dort, trotz allen Suchens, kein Weizenkorn. Da brach ihre Kraft zusammen. Sie zerriß mit der Hand des Unglücks den Kragen der Geduld42 und schlug ihren törichten Kopf so stark auf den steinigen Grund, daß das Gehirn herausspritzte, und stürzte sich mit unheilvollem Tode in den Abgrund des Untergangs.
Story DNA
Moral
Extravagance and short-sightedness lead to ruin, and fair-weather friends abandon you in times of need.
Plot Summary
A farmer hoards grain, which a hungry mouse discovers through a secret tunnel. The mouse becomes arrogant and wasteful, attracting many false friends with her lavish generosity. Unbeknownst to her, a severe famine strikes, forcing the farmer to retrieve his grain. A wise mouse warns the others, who immediately abandon their benefactor. The foolish mouse awakens to find herself alone and her wealth gone, leading to her despair and tragic end.
Themes
Emotional Arc
joy to sorrow
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Friedrich Giese was a German orientalist, and his collection 'Volksmärchen der Syrer' (Syrian Folk Tales) suggests this story is likely a translation or adaptation of a Middle Eastern fable, hence the Islamic references.
Plot Beats (11)
- A farmer stores grain in his barn for future hardship.
- A starving mouse tunnels into the barn and finds an abundant, seemingly endless supply of grain.
- The mouse becomes arrogant and wasteful, believing her wealth is permanent.
- Other mice flock to her, flattering her and enjoying her lavish feasts.
- A severe famine grips the land, making grain extremely valuable, but the mouse remains unaware.
- The farmer, facing starvation, decides to open his barn and move the remaining grain.
- A wise mouse observes the farmer's actions and warns the other mice.
- All the guest mice immediately abandon the foolish mouse and flee.
- The foolish mouse awakens to find herself utterly alone and her home empty.
- She discovers the famine and the loss of her grain, realizing her ruin.
- Overcome by despair, she takes her own life.
Characters
The Prodigal Mouse
A small, plump mouse, initially gaunt from hunger but quickly growing sleek and well-fed due to her newfound abundance. Her fur is likely a common field mouse brown or grey, well-groomed when she is prosperous.
Attire: None, as a mouse. Her 'wardrobe' is her fur.
Wants: Initially, survival and finding food. Once rich, her motivation shifts to maintaining her image of wealth and generosity, seeking admiration and pleasure.
Flaw: Her greatest weakness is her naivety and short-sightedness, believing her wealth is endless and failing to plan for the future. She is easily swayed by flattery.
She transforms from a starving, resourceful mouse into an arrogant, wasteful, and popular figure among her peers. Her arc culminates in a tragic downfall, losing everything and dying in despair due to her lack of foresight and the betrayal of her 'friends'.
Initially resourceful and diligent in finding food, she quickly becomes arrogant, wasteful, naive, and overly trusting of flatterers. She is short-sighted and lacks foresight.
The Landowner
A man of the land, likely of sturdy build from physical labor, perhaps with a weathered face from working outdoors. His height and specific build are not detailed, but he would appear as a typical German farmer of the period.
Attire: Simple, durable peasant clothing typical of 19th-century Germany: a sturdy linen or wool tunic, practical trousers, and perhaps a simple vest. Colors would be muted earth tones like brown, grey, or undyed linen.
Wants: To provide for himself and his family during times of hardship by saving grain. Later, to salvage what remains of his store.
Flaw: His initial trust in the security of his grain store, which was breached. His sorrow over loss, though he quickly overcomes it with practicality.
He experiences a loss due to the mouse's actions but demonstrates resilience by accepting the situation and moving to salvage what remains, showing no significant personal transformation beyond facing adversity.
Foresighted (initially saving grain), prudent, patient, but also capable of deep sorrow and practical decision-making when faced with loss.
The Clever Mouse
A small, agile mouse, likely appearing lean and quick, contrasting with the plumpness of the Prodigal Mouse. Her fur would be a common mouse color, perhaps a slightly darker shade to suggest her seriousness.
Attire: None, as a mouse. Her 'wardrobe' is her fur.
Wants: Self-preservation and the survival of her community (initially, by warning them).
Flaw: None explicitly stated; her caution prevents her from falling into the same trap as the Prodigal Mouse.
She serves as a foil to the Prodigal Mouse, demonstrating the value of intelligence and caution. She successfully escapes danger, highlighting the consequences of heedlessness.
Observant, intelligent, cautious, and quick-thinking. She is a realist who understands danger and acts decisively.
The Deceptive Friends (Other Mice)
Initially, they would appear hungry and lean, similar to the Prodigal Mouse before her discovery. As they feast, they would become plump and well-fed, reflecting their parasitic lifestyle.
Attire: None, as mice.
Wants: To gain free food and enjoy the bounty provided by the Prodigal Mouse.
Flaw: Their greed and lack of loyalty make them unreliable and ultimately leave them vulnerable when their source of food disappears.
They remain static characters, serving as a representation of false friendship and the dangers of unchecked generosity. They appear, exploit, and disappear when the going gets tough.
Opportunistic, flattering, self-serving, disloyal, and cowardly. They are fair-weather friends.
Locations
Farmer's Barn
A large, enclosed structure belonging to a farmer, filled with a vast quantity of grain, specifically wheat. The doors to its use were initially locked. It contains a secret hole leading into the grain storage.
Mood: Initially abundant and secure, later revealed to be vulnerable and eventually depleted, leading to desolation.
The primary setting where the mouse discovers the grain, becomes wealthy, hosts lavish parties, and where the grain is eventually removed by the farmer.
Mouse's Nest
A small, hidden dwelling made by a mouse, located at the edge of the grain storage area, deep underground. It is connected to the barn's grain supply by a secret tunnel.
Mood: Initially a place of desperate hunger, then transformed into a lavish, celebratory space, and finally a desolate, empty void.
The mouse's home, where it first finds the miraculous supply of grain, entertains its 'friends', and ultimately faces its ruin and death.
Window Corner of the Barn
A specific vantage point within the barn, likely a small, high window or opening, from which a clever mouse can observe the outside world and the farmer's actions.
Mood: A place of observation and revelation, shifting from ignorant bliss to stark reality and impending doom.
Where the clever mouse observes the farmer removing the grain and the widespread famine, leading to its escape and the warning to others.