THE WILD WOODSMAN
by Burton Mrs. Harrison · from The Old-Fashioned Fairy Book
Adapted Version
Martha loved John very much. John was a brave hunter. One day, Martha went into the big forest. She wanted to find John there. She looked for him.
Martha got lost in the forest. John came back to the village. He heard sad news. Martha was gone. He worried about the Wild Woodsman.
John was very brave. He went into the big forest. His good dog went with him. They looked for Martha. John wanted to find her.
John found Martha's red scarf. It was on the ground. He saw marks on a big rock. Someone went up the rock. He knew this was Martha.
John climbed the big rock. He saw an old man there. The old man made shoes. John's Dog did not like him. The dog growled loudly.
John talked to the old man. The old man looked strange. He changed his shape. He became the Wild Woodsman. He looked very scary now.
John used his gun. The Wild Woodsman ran away fast. He was hurt. John and his dog followed him. They ran through the trees.
They found the Wild Woodsman's house. It was covered in green moss. The Wild Woodsman fell down there. He stopped moving. He was still.
John found Martha in the house. She was tied up with ropes. Many shiny things were there. Martha did not know John. She looked confused.
John carried Martha in his arms. He took her from the bad house. They left all the shiny things. John walked very fast away.
A big storm came then. The house fell into the ground. It was gone forever. The earth shook very hard. Smoke came from the hole.
The storm stopped. The sky was clear. Martha remembered John. She felt strong again. They went home to the village.
Martha's parents were very happy. John and Martha got married. They lived happily ever after. Being brave and kind helps good always win!
Original Story
THE WILD WOODSMAN.
ONCE there lived a peasant whose only daughter, Martha, had eyes as blue as corn-flowers and long hair like the silk around an ear of corn. All the lads of the village were after her, but she cared only for John, a young huntsman, who was called by her father an idle vagabond, and sent away from his cottage in disdain. Now, the village where they lived was at the foot of a high mountain covered with a dense forest, into certain portions of which few were found to venture, so wild and lonely they were. One day Martha went, unknown to her father and mother, to ramble in the forest. She said to some of her friends that she meant to gather flowers and pick berries, to sell to a rich lady who lived near them; but the truth was, that a week had passed without John having set foot in the village, and she was anxious and uneasy, and wished to visit some of her lover's favorite haunts, to see if he might be there. It was no uncommon thing for John to be absent for several days, while trapping and hunting. He could sleep as well on a bank of moss as on his pallet at home, and he loved to go to rest under the broad canopy of the sky, studded with bright stars, and to be lulled by the music of falling waters.
Martha, dressed in her brown cotton frock, with the scarlet handkerchief knotted over her fair hair, was seen to go up a rocky pathway on the mountain-side, where the firs and larches made a bower overhead; but that night she did not come home, and next day, when John came into the village with a splendid string of birds he had shot miles away from there, in an opposite direction to the one Martha had taken, it was to hear the sad news of the poor girl's disappearance.
John's face grew pale and his stout heart grew faint; he thought of what all the others were thinking of—the Wild Woodsman, against whose magic his gun and staff might avail nothing!
The mountain above was believed to be the haunt of a mysterious being, half man, half brute, fierce and cruel, from whose den no living creature might ever be rescued. The Wild Woodsman, for so the natives called him, took many a shape to trap unwary travellers, and a fair young girl like Martha would be a rich prize for him. John had long vowed to capture the Wild Woodsman; and now he was filled with a mad thirst to seek him at once. Without stopping to hear more, the young man rushed off up the steep mountain path, bounding like a chamois from rock to rock, as the villagers, awe-struck and tearful, gazed after him and crossed themselves in superstitious fear.
Through brake and brier, John darted on; he was soon in the dark recesses of the forest, where the undergrowth was like a jungle. His fleet foot never tired in the chase, and, erelong, he spied a little red handkerchief upon the ground. Recognizing this to be Martha's, he gazed about him, and saw, by the token of broken bushes, that the girl had been dragged away from that spot up a rocky wall, which it seemed to him no foot could scale.
Struggling to keep down his sickening dread, John determined to follow. He began to climb the steep rock. His faithful dog, who had kept close beside him, suddenly gave a low fierce growl, and the hair on its back bristled up in fury. John was already half-way up the cliff, when, on looking down, there, just where he had picked up the handkerchief, he saw a queer little old fellow, making shoes as quietly as if nothing at all had happened.
"Hallo, there!" roared John, for he suspected mischief.
The old man looked up, and John saw that he had a young and rosy face with hair as gray as a badger's. The odd creature made signs that he was stone deaf, and beckoned John to come down. All this time, the dog was growling fearfully, and John took warning from the sign. He levelled his gun without more ado, and said:
"Answer, you fellow. Who are you that have cheeks so fair, and an old man's locks?"
"I?" said the old man, hopping up with a dreadful grin, "you will know me soon enough, sirrah, for I am the devil's grandfather."
He stretched out an arm that grew longer every minute, and his hands changed to the claws of a beast. John lost no time, but taking aim fired at the Wild Woodsman, for he it was, and none other. Bang! The friendly bullet made straight for the creature's heart, and though it did not kill him outright, the Wild Woodsman was sorely wounded. He fell over a log, groaning pitifully, and prayed John to come to the aid of a poor old man. John said, "That I will with another bullet," when the Wild Woodsman darted from the spot, and was lost in the thicket.
After him went the dog, after the dog went John. Such a hunt there never was! Through spots in the woods where man's foot had never penetrated, into bogs, and into serpents' lairs, past the caves where bears were lurking; but no animal would touch John, for the Wild Woodsman was their deadly enemy.
At last they came to a cleft in a little green hillock. Here was a hut covered with moss, and the Wild Woodsman, uttering a frantic yell, fell dead upon the threshold. John heard a shriek within the hut, and, dashing down the door, saw Martha, lying, bound with ropes made of plaited willow, in a corner.
He flew to set her free; but, to his surprise, Martha did not appear to know him. She let him take her by the hand and lead her from the fearful spot where the inner walls were built of the bones of the Wild Woodsman's victims. She looked up into his face and smiled, and John saw she had lost her reason. He did not stop to pick up the jewels and gold, stolen from murdered travellers, with which the hut was strewn, but made all speed to leave behind the horrid place. He lifted Martha in his strong arms and carried her down a path along the far side of the mountain. A great storm arose, and the earth trembled under his feet; but he kept bravely on his way, and looking back saw the cleft in the hills widen; then a great gulf opened, fire and smoke burst forth, and the hut of the Wild Woodsman was swallowed forever from sight.
John gave a shout of joy, and began singing a hymn in his clear young voice. The storm ceased. The clouds parted. Down in the valley below was their own peaceful village, and the sound of the evening bells came floating up to him. Martha, who had lain in his arms as if asleep, stirred, and recognized him. Her strength returned, and she asked to walk beside him. Strangely enough, she said nothing of her late adventure, then or ever afterward. Not a trace of it remained in her memory.
When they reached the village, all the people came out to meet them, rejoicing. John told them he had rescued the lost girl, but the true history of his chase of the Wild Woodsman he kept to himself. Martha's father and mother greeted her with tears of thankfulness; and before another year had gone by John and Martha were married in the village church. From that day forth, peace reigned upon the mountain-side; but when stories of the Wild Woodsman were told to Martha's grandchildren, they little knew the share their hale old grandsire had in ridding the country-side of such a scourge.
Story DNA
Moral
True love and courage can overcome even the most terrifying evil, bringing peace and happiness.
Plot Summary
Martha, in love with the huntsman John, disappears into a dangerous forest, feared to be the haunt of the monstrous Wild Woodsman. John, upon hearing the news, immediately sets out to rescue her. He tracks her to the Woodsman's lair, confronts and wounds the shapeshifting creature, and pursues him until he dies. John rescues Martha, who has lost her memory, and as they escape, the Woodsman's evil hut is swallowed by the earth. Martha regains her memory, and they return to the village, marry, and live peacefully ever after.
Themes
Emotional Arc
anxiety and despair to triumph and joy
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common folk beliefs about dangerous wilderness and monstrous figures, typical of European fairy tales before industrialization.
Plot Beats (13)
- Martha, in love with John despite her father's disapproval, goes into the dangerous forest to look for him.
- Martha disappears, and John returns to the village to learn the sad news, immediately fearing the Wild Woodsman.
- John, determined to find Martha, rushes into the forest, followed by his faithful dog.
- He finds Martha's handkerchief and signs that she was dragged up a sheer rock face.
- John climbs the cliff and encounters a strange old man making shoes, whom his dog growls at suspiciously.
- John confronts the old man, who reveals himself as the 'devil's grandfather' and transforms into the Wild Woodsman.
- John shoots the Wild Woodsman, wounding him, and pursues him through the wilderness.
- They track the Wild Woodsman to a moss-covered hut, where the creature collapses and dies on the threshold.
- John finds Martha bound inside the hut, surrounded by bones and stolen treasures, but she doesn't recognize him.
- He carries the disoriented Martha away from the horrid hut, leaving the treasures behind.
- A great storm erupts, and the Wild Woodsman's hut and its cleft in the hill are swallowed by a chasm of fire and smoke.
- The storm ceases, Martha regains her memory and strength, and they descend to the peaceful village.
- John and Martha are joyfully reunited with her parents, and they marry within the year, living happily ever after.
Characters
Martha ★ protagonist
A young peasant girl of average height and slender build, with fair skin and rosy cheeks.
Attire: A simple, practical brown cotton frock, suitable for a peasant girl, and a distinctive scarlet handkerchief knotted over her fair hair.
Wants: To find John, driven by love and concern. Later, to recover from her ordeal and live a peaceful life.
Flaw: Vulnerability to danger due to her adventurous spirit and trusting nature, leading her into the Wild Woodsman's trap. Her memory loss is also a vulnerability, though it ultimately protects her.
She goes from an anxious, adventurous girl to a victim of the Wild Woodsman, then is rescued and loses her memory of the event. She ultimately marries John and lives a peaceful life, never recalling her trauma.
Anxious, uneasy (when John is absent), adventurous (venturing into the forest alone), resilient (recovering from trauma), loving (towards John).
Image Prompt & Upload
A young peasant girl standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has long, very light blonde hair like corn silk, covered by a scarlet handkerchief knotted over her head. Her eyes are round and corn-flower blue, set in a fair-skinned, rosy-cheeked face. She wears a simple, practical brown cotton frock. Her expression is gentle and slightly anxious. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
John ★ protagonist
A young huntsman, described as having a 'stout heart' and 'strong arms', suggesting a robust and athletic build, suitable for a life in the woods.
Attire: Practical hunting attire, likely made of durable fabrics like wool or linen in earthy tones, suitable for traversing dense forests and mountains. He carries a gun and a staff.
Wants: To rescue Martha, driven by love and a long-standing vow to capture the Wild Woodsman. To protect his loved ones and rid the land of evil.
Flaw: His initial fear when confronted with the Wild Woodsman's magic, though he quickly overcomes it.
He transforms from a village huntsman into a heroic figure who confronts and defeats a supernatural evil. He marries Martha and becomes a respected elder, though he keeps his greatest adventure a secret.
Brave, determined, loving (towards Martha), resourceful, persistent, quick-thinking, somewhat secretive (keeping the true history of his chase to himself).
Image Prompt & Upload
A young huntsman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a robust, athletic build, with a determined expression on his youthful face. He wears practical, durable hunting attire in earthy tones, possibly a tunic and trousers made of wool or linen, with sturdy leather boots. He holds a hunting gun in one hand and a wooden staff in the other. A loyal, shaggy hunting dog stands beside him. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Wild Woodsman ⚔ antagonist
Initially appears as a 'queer little old fellow'. His true form is a mysterious being, 'half man, half brute', with an arm that can stretch and hands that transform into beast claws. He is capable of taking many shapes.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but likely rustic and camouflaged, blending with the forest environment. Perhaps simple, tattered garments befitting a wild, reclusive creature.
Wants: To trap unwary travelers, especially young girls, for his den. To hoard stolen treasures.
Flaw: Vulnerable to a hunter's bullet, specifically aimed at the heart. His physical form can be wounded, leading to his death.
He is introduced as a feared legend, then revealed as a deceptive, powerful, and cruel entity. He is wounded by John, pursued, and ultimately killed, leading to the destruction of his lair and the end of his reign of terror.
Fierce, cruel, deceptive, cunning, malevolent, predatory, cowardly (when wounded), manipulative (praying for aid).
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An old man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a surprisingly young and rosy face, but his hair is thick and gray like a badger's. He wears simple, tattered, earthy-toned garments that blend with the forest. One of his arms is unnaturally long and ends in sharp, beast-like claws. He has a wide, dreadful grin on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
John's Dog ◆ supporting
A faithful hunting dog, described as giving a 'low fierce growl' and having hair that 'bristled up in fury', suggesting a robust, possibly shaggy or wiry-haired breed, well-suited for tracking and protection.
Attire: Natural fur coat.
Wants: To protect John and aid him in his hunt.
Flaw: None apparent in the story; it acts as a pure strength.
Remains a steadfast and loyal companion, instrumental in tracking the Wild Woodsman.
Loyal, protective, brave, perceptive (sensing evil), fierce.
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A shaggy, medium-sized hunting dog standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. Its fur is bristling along its back, and it has a low, fierce growl on its face, showing its teeth. Its eyes are alert and focused. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Village at the Mountain Foot
A peaceful peasant village nestled at the base of a high mountain, surrounded by fields and leading to a dense, wild forest. The sound of evening bells floats up from here.
Mood: Initially peaceful and idyllic, later anxious and fearful due to Martha's disappearance, then joyful and celebratory upon her return.
Martha lives here, John is sent away from here, Martha disappears from here, and they return here to be married.
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A quaint German-style peasant village at the foot of a towering, dark mountain. Half-timbered Fachwerk houses with thatched roofs are clustered along a dirt road. Smoke curls from stone chimneys. Beyond the village, cultivated fields stretch towards the dense, dark green forest that climbs the mountain slopes. The sky is a soft, clear evening blue, with the first stars beginning to appear. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Dense Mountain Forest
A vast, dense forest covering a high mountain, with rocky pathways, firs and larches forming a bower overhead, and dark recesses where undergrowth is like a jungle. It contains bogs, serpent's lairs, and bear caves.
Mood: Wild, lonely, mysterious, and increasingly dangerous, filled with dread and the unknown.
Martha rambles here and disappears. John hunts here, then searches for Martha, encountering the Wild Woodsman.
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A winding, rocky pathway ascends through a dense, ancient German forest. Towering fir and larch trees form a thick, dark canopy overhead, filtering sunlight into dappled patterns on the mossy forest floor. Exposed tree roots crisscross the path, and the air is thick with the scent of pine and damp earth. Deep shadows obscure the undergrowth, hinting at hidden depths. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Rocky Wall and Cliff Face
A steep, unscalable rocky wall leading up a cliff face within the dense forest, where Martha was dragged and John encounters the Wild Woodsman disguised as a shoemaker.
Mood: Tense, perilous, and confrontational, marking a critical turning point in John's pursuit.
John finds Martha's handkerchief and first confronts the Wild Woodsman.
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A sheer, rugged cliff face of dark, weathered granite rises dramatically from a dense forest floor. Sparse, gnarled pine trees cling precariously to crevices. At the base, broken bushes and scattered leaves suggest a struggle. Halfway up, a small, precarious ledge offers a foothold. The light is bright and direct, casting sharp shadows on the rock textures. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Wild Woodsman's Hut
A small, moss-covered hut located in a cleft of a little green hillock, deep within the wildest part of the forest. Its inner walls are horrifyingly constructed from the bones of the Wild Woodsman's victims, and it is strewn with stolen jewels and gold.
Mood: Eerie, macabre, and terrifying, a place of captivity and death, later consumed by a chasm.
John finds Martha captive here, the Wild Woodsman dies, and the hut is swallowed by the earth.
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A small, decrepit hut, heavily covered in thick, vibrant green moss, is nestled precariously in a deep cleft of a gently sloping, verdant hillock. The wooden door is rough-hewn and appears ancient. Inside, the walls are chillingly constructed from bleached human bones, forming a grotesque, macabre pattern. Piles of glittering jewels and gold coins are scattered on the dirt floor. The light inside is dim and oppressive, filtering through small gaps. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.