MOTHER and CHILD
by James Bowker · from Goblin Tales of Lancashire
Adapted Version
Each year, a strange thing happens at Plumpton. The people were a little scared. They waited for a strange thing. It was dark. All was quiet. They held their breath.
A tired man walked outside. He ran very fast past the house. He was scared. He did not stop. He ran away from the old hall.
The big clock hit many times. *Dong, dong, dong*. Then, bumps came from the stairs. A big chair moved down. It went bump, bump, bump. A thing unseen moved the chair. The people hid under blankets.
A fire started in the fire place. There was no wood. But the fire was bright. The Sad Mother Ghost sat in the chair. She held The Baby Ghost. The baby was very small.
Each year, the fire glowed. A soft, quiet song was heard. The Sad Mother Ghost sang to her baby. The song was a puzzle. It came from the room.
No one knew the song's words. They were a secret. The next day, the room was clean. No fire, no chair, no dust. It was a strange puzzle.
Other people saw the fire. It looked warm and nice. They came to the window. They saw The Sad Mother Ghost. She held The Baby Ghost.
One night, The Tired Traveler came. He saw the warm fire. He was hungry and cold. He tapped on the glass. He asked The Sad Mother Ghost for food. He asked for a warm bed.
The Sad Mother Ghost did not speak. She did not help him. The Tired Traveler was angry. He said cross words. "Why do you not help me?" he asked. He was very sad.
The Sad Mother Ghost looked at him. Her eyes were big and quiet. They were very sad eyes. The Tired Traveler felt cold. He felt very scared. He shivered and shook.
The Tired Traveler ran away fast. He ran into the dark night. He was very scared. Later, people found him. He was tired and cold. He was still very scared. He told a strange story.
The Sad Mother Ghost and baby stay a puzzle. People still wonder about them, year after year.
Original Story
MOTHER AND CHILD.
THE tenants of Plumpton Hall had retired to rest somewhat earlier than was their wont, for it was the last night of November.
The old low rooms were in darkness, and all was silent as the grave; for though the residents, unfortunately for themselves, were not asleep, they held their breath, and awaited in fear the first stroke of the hour from the old clock in the kitchen. Suddenly the sound of hurried footsteps broke the silence; but with sighs of relief the terrified listeners found that the noise was made by a belated wayfarer, almost out of his wits with fright, but who was unable to avoid passing the hall, and who, therefore, ran by the haunted building as quickly as his legs could carry him. The sensation of escape, however, was of but short duration, for the hammer commenced to strike; and no sooner had the last stroke of eleven startled the echoes than loud thuds, as of a heavy object bumping upon the stairs, were heard.
The quaking occupants of the chambers hid their heads beneath the bedclothes, for they knew that an old-fashioned oak chair was on its way down the noble staircase, and was sliding from step to step as though dragged along by an invisible being who had only one hand at liberty.
If any one had dared to follow that chair across the wide passage and into the wainscoted parlour, he would have been startled by the sight of a fire blazing in the grate, whence, ere the servants retired, even the very embers had been removed, and in the chair, the marvellous movement of which had so frightened all the inmates of the hall, he would have seen a beautiful woman seated, with an infant at her breast.
Year after year, on wild nights, when the snow was driven against the diamond panes, and the cry of the spirit of the storm came up from the sea, the weird firelight shone from the haunted room, and through the house sounded a mysterious crooning as the unearthly visitor softly sang a lullaby to her infant. Lads grew up into grey-headed men in the old house; and from youth to manhood, on the last night of each November, they had heard the notes, but none of them ever had caught, even when custom had somewhat deadened the terror which surrounded the events of the much-dreaded anniversary, the words of the song the ghostly woman sang. The maids, too, had always found the grate as it was left before the visit—not a cinder or speck of dust remaining to tell of the strange fire, and no one had ever heard the chair ascend the stairs. Chair and fire and child and mother, however, were seen by many a weary wayfarer, drawn to the house by the hospitable look of the window, through which the genial glow of the burning logs shone forth into the night, but who, by tapping at the pane and crying for shelter, could not attract the attention of the pale nurse, clad in a quaint old costume with lace ruff and ruffles, and singing a mournful and melodious lullaby to the child resting upon her beautiful bosom.
Tradition tells of one of these wanderers, a footsore and miserable seafaring man on the tramp, who, attracted by the welcome glare, crept to the panes, and seeing the cosy-looking fire, and the Madonna-faced mother tenderly nursing her infant, rapped at the glass and begged for a morsel of food and permission to sleep in the hayloft—and, finding his pleadings unanswered, loudly cursed the woman who could sit and enjoy warmth and comfort and turn a deaf ear to the prayers of the homeless and hungry; upon which the seated figure turned the weird light of its wild eyes upon him and almost changed him to stone—a labourer, going to his daily toil in the early morn, finding the poor wretch gazing fixedly through the window, against which his terror-stricken face was closely pressed, his hair turned white by fear, and his fingers convulsively clutching the casement.
Story DNA
Plot Summary
Every year on the last night of November, the residents of Plumpton Hall are terrorized by a haunting. As the clock strikes eleven, an invisible force drags an oak chair down the stairs, and a mysterious fire appears in the parlor, revealing a beautiful ghostly woman nursing an infant. This spectral mother sings an unheard lullaby, and though many wayfarers witness the scene, one desperate man curses her for her indifference, only to be found the next morning, his hair turned white and face frozen in terror, having been petrified by her gaze. The haunting continues annually, leaving its mystery unsolved.
Themes
Emotional Arc
fear to enduring mystery
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story reflects a common theme in English folklore of 'local' ghosts, often tied to specific houses or families, and the idea of a 'fixed' haunting that repeats annually.
Plot Beats (11)
- On the last night of November, the tenants of Plumpton Hall are terrified, awaiting a supernatural event.
- A belated wayfarer runs past the hall, momentarily distracting the fearful residents.
- The clock strikes eleven, and loud thuds are heard as an oak chair bumps down the stairs, seemingly dragged by an invisible entity.
- A mysterious fire appears in the parlor grate, and a beautiful woman with an infant is seen seated in the chair.
- Year after year, on this night, the firelight shines, and a mysterious crooning lullaby is heard from the haunted room.
- The words of the lullaby are never understood, and the room is always found undisturbed the next morning.
- Many wayfarers are drawn to the house by the inviting glow, seeing the mother and child.
- One footsore seafaring man, attracted by the fire, begs for food and shelter from the woman.
- Receiving no answer, the man curses the woman for her apparent indifference to his suffering.
- The seated figure turns her 'wild eyes' upon the man, terrifying him.
- The next morning, a laborer finds the man gazing fixedly through the window, his hair white with fear and his fingers clutching the casement.
Characters
The Ghostly Mother ★ protagonist
A beautiful woman with a pale complexion, appearing ethereal and somewhat translucent. Her form is distinct enough to be seen clearly, but she possesses an otherworldly quality.
Attire: A quaint old costume, likely a formal gown from an earlier century, with a lace ruff around her neck and lace ruffles at the cuffs. The fabric would be fine, possibly silk or velvet, in muted, perhaps faded, colors appropriate for a spectral figure.
Wants: To eternally care for and lull her infant, reliving a moment of maternal tenderness, possibly trapped by an unresolved tragedy.
Flaw: Her inability to interact with the living world or respond to its needs; her existence is a repetitive loop.
She remains unchanged throughout the story, a fixed spectral presence.
Maternal, sorrowful, protective (of her child), capable of immense, terrifying power when provoked, unresponsive to the living world's pleas.
Image Prompt & Upload
A beautiful young adult woman, appearing ethereal and pale, with a serene, Madonna-like face and wild, dark eyes. Her dark hair is long and flowing. She wears a quaint, old-fashioned, floor-length gown of faded silk, with a prominent lace ruff around her neck and lace ruffles at the cuffs. She is seated in a heavy, dark oak chair, gently holding and nursing an infant. Her expression is tender and sorrowful. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Infant ◆ supporting
A small, unmoving infant, held close to the Ghostly Mother's breast. Its appearance is likely as ethereal and pale as its mother's.
Attire: Wrapped in swaddling clothes or a simple infant's gown, likely white or cream, consistent with the period and its spectral nature.
Wants: To be nurtured and comforted by its mother.
Flaw: Completely vulnerable and dependent.
Remains unchanged, a constant presence with its mother.
Passive, serene, eternally dependent on its mother.
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A small, pale infant, appearing ethereal, with soft, innocent features. It is wrapped in simple, white swaddling clothes. The infant is held gently, resting at the breast of an unseen figure. Its eyes are closed, in a state of peaceful repose. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Seafaring Man ○ minor
A footsore and miserable man, likely of average height and build, showing signs of hardship and travel. After his encounter, his hair turns white from fear, and his face is terror-stricken.
Attire: Practical, worn clothing suitable for a seafaring man on the tramp, likely coarse wool or canvas, in dark, muted colors, showing signs of wear and tear.
Wants: To find warmth, shelter, and food.
Flaw: His desperation leads him to curse the ghostly figure, provoking its terrifying power.
Transforms from a desperate wanderer to a petrified, fear-stricken wreck, his hair turned white.
Desperate, hungry, initially hopeful, then frustrated, angry, and finally utterly terrified.
Image Prompt & Upload
A footsore adult man, with a gaunt face and unkempt, stark white hair. His eyes are wide with terror, and his face is pressed against a windowpane. He wears worn, dark, coarse wool clothing, indicative of a seafaring man. His fingers are convulsively clutching the window casement. His body is rigid with fear. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Plumpton Hall Exterior
An old, haunted building, likely a large manor or estate, with diamond-paned windows. On wild nights, snow is driven against these panes, and a 'genial glow' of firelight shines from a specific window, visible to wayfarers.
Mood: Eerie, foreboding, yet deceptively inviting due to the firelight, mysterious
Wayfarers pass by, drawn to the light, and witness the ghostly scene from outside. One wayfarer is turned to stone by the ghost's gaze.
Image Prompt & Upload
A desolate, snow-swept English manor house, Plumpton Hall, on a wild late November night. Driving snow lashes against the dark, rough-hewn stone walls and diamond-paned windows. A single window on the ground floor glows with a warm, flickering orange light, stark against the frigid blue moonlight illuminating the snowdrifts around the house. Gnarled, bare tree branches claw at the stormy sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Plumpton Hall Staircase
A noble staircase within the old low rooms of Plumpton Hall. It is made of wood, likely oak, given the description of the chair.
Mood: Terrifying, suspenseful, silent before the haunting
At the stroke of eleven, an old-fashioned oak chair is heard bumping down the stairs, dragged by an invisible entity.
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A grand, dark oak staircase in an old English manor, Plumpton Hall, lit only by faint, cool moonlight filtering through a distant window. The wooden banister is intricately carved, and the wide steps show signs of age and wear. Shadows cling to the corners and under the risers, creating a sense of deep mystery and foreboding. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Wainscoted Parlour
A wainscoted parlour with a fireplace grate. Despite servants removing embers, a fire blazes here on haunted nights. The room is where the ghostly woman and child appear.
Mood: Eerie, magical, melancholic, warm yet unsettling
The ghostly mother and child appear here, the mother singing a lullaby by a mysteriously blazing fire, visible to both the terrified residents and outside wayfarers.
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A cozy yet eerie wainscoted parlour in an old English manor, Plumpton Hall, illuminated by the warm, flickering light of a roaring fire in a stone hearth. The dark wooden wainscoting gleams with reflections. An old-fashioned oak armchair sits before the fire, its silhouette softened by the glow. Outside the diamond-paned window, snow can be seen falling. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.