TH' SKRIKER (SHRIEKER)
by James Bowker · from Goblin Tales of Lancashire
Adapted Version
It was a cold, snowy night. Adam walked home. The snow was white and soft. The moon shone bright. Big trees stood tall. Adam felt a little quiet. He walked on the white snow. The air was very still. He thought hard about his day.
The clock struck twelve. A big cloud hid the moon. The wind blew cold now. It made a soft sound. Adam felt a little worried. He walked to the small brook. The night felt very dark. He felt a little cold.
Adam heard a soft sound. It was near the bridge. Then he heard a strange, quiet sound. It came again. Adam felt he should walk faster. His heart beat a little fast. He looked into the dark. He saw nothing there.
The cloud moved from the moon. Light shone on the road. Adam saw a strange creature. It stood on the bridge. It had black, shaggy fur. Its eyes glowed a little. It looked very odd. Adam looked at it.
The Strange Creature moved. It did not walk. It seemed to float. Adam felt he needed to follow. He walked across the bridge. The creature moved slowly. Adam walked behind it. They went down the road.
Adam stumbled on a stone. He fell down in the snow. He quickly stood up again. The creature was gone. Adam looked all around. He felt a little tired. He felt a little cold. The creature was not there.
Adam started to walk again. He walked very slowly. He was a little nervous. He watched all shadows. The wind made sounds. He listened very well. He wanted to be home. He kept walking on.
Then the wind stopped. All was very quiet. Adam heard the strange sound. It was a quiet sound. It came again and again. The Strange Creature was back. Adam felt a little worried. He looked for it.
Adam saw the creature. It stood on the bridge. It was the same creature. Adam felt he needed to follow. He walked onto the bridge. The creature moved slowly. Adam walked behind it. They went on their way.
The creature led Adam home. They came to his small house. It stood by his door. Its eyes looked at Adam. Adam stood very still. He looked at the creature. He was almost home now. He felt a little safe.
Adam felt very brave. He tried to push it away. He hit his strong door. The creature was gone. Adam felt very tired. He fell down fast. He closed his eyes. He went to sleep.
Sarah, Adam's wife, found him. She helped him inside their house. Adam told her his story. He spoke of the creature. Sarah listened very well. She was a kind wife. She held his hand. She helped him feel safe.
After that night, things changed. Some small, tricky things happened. Their son, Tom, lost his toy. Sarah felt a little sad. But they helped each other. They were always strong. They smiled as one. They loved their kin.
Adam always thought of the night. He at times told stories. He spoke of the creature. But he was never scared. He learned to be brave. He was also very happy. He helped his kin. He loved his home.
Original Story
TH' SKRIKER (SHRIEKER).
ON a fine night, about the middle of December, many years ago, a sturdy-looking young fellow left Chipping for his cottage, three or four miles away, upon the banks of the Hodder. The ground was covered with snow, which in many places had drifted into heaps, and the keen frost had made the road so slippery that the progress he made was but slow. Nature looked very beautiful, and the heart of the rustic even was touched by the sweet peacefulness of the scene. The noble old Parlick, and the sweeping Longridge, with its fir-crowned Thornley Height and Kemple End, stood out boldly against the clear sky, and the moon shed her soft silvery light into the long silent valley, stretching away until its virgin paleness mingled with the shadows and the darkness of the distant fells beyond Whitewell.
All was still, save when the sighing wind rustled gently through the frosted branches of the leafless trees by the roadside, and shook down upon the wayfarer a miniature shower of snow; for even the tiny stream, so full of mirth and music in the summer time, had been lulled to sleep by the genius of winter; and the cottagers, whose little houses, half-hidden by the rime, seemed hardly large enough for the dwellings of dwarfs, had been snugly sleeping for hours.
Adam was by no means a timid or nervous being, but there was a nameless something in the deathly silence which oppressed, if it did not actually frighten, him; and although he sang aloud a verse of the last song he had heard before he left the kitchen of the Patten Arms, his voice had lost its heartiness. He earnestly wished himself safely across the little bridge over the brook; but he was yet some distance from the stream when the faint chimes of midnight fell upon the air. Almost immediately after the last stroke of twelve had broken the silence a cloud passed over the face of the moon, and comparative darkness enveloped the scene; the wind, which before had been gentle and almost noiseless, began to howl amid the boughs and branches of the waving trees, and the frozen snow from the hedgerows was dashed against the wayfarer's face.
He had already begun to fancy that he could distinguish in the soughing of the wind and the creaking of the boughs unearthly cries and fiendish shouts of glee; but as he approached the dreaded stream his courage almost entirely failed him, and it required a great effort to keep from turning his back to it, and running away in the direction of the little village at the foot of Parlick. It struck him, however, that he had come a long distance; that if he did go back to the Patten Arms the company would be dispersed, and the inmates asleep, and, what was more effective than all, that if he could only cross the bridge he would be safe, the Greenies, Boggarts, and Feorin not having power over any one who had passed over the water. Influenced by this thought, yet with his knees trembling under him, he pushed forward with assumed boldness, and he had almost reached the bridge when he heard the noise of passing feet in the crunching snow, and became conscious of the presence of a ghastly thing he was unable to see. Suddenly a sepulchral howl brought him to a stop, and, with his heart throbbing loudly enough to be heard, he stood gazing fixedly into the darkness. There was nothing to be perceived, however, save the copings of the bridge, with their coverings of rime; and he might have stood there until daylight had not another cry, louder and even more unearthly and horrible than the preceding one, called him from his trance. No sooner had this second scream died away than, impelled by an irresistible impulse, he stepped forward in the direction whence the noise had come. At this moment the moon burst forth from behind the clouds which had for some time obscured her light, and her rays fell upon the road, with its half-hidden cart-tracks winding away into the dim distance; and in the very centre of the bridge he beheld a hideous figure with black shaggy hide, and huge eyes closely resembling orbs of fire.
Adam at once knew from the likeness the dread object bore to the figure he had heard described by those who had seen the Skriker, that the terrible thing before him was an Ambassador of Death.
Without any consciousness of what he was doing, and acting as though under the sway of a strange and irresistible mesmeric influence, he stepped towards the bridge; but no sooner did he stir than the frightful thing in front of him, with a motion that was not walking, but rather a sort of heavy gliding, moved also, slowly retreating, pausing when he paused, and always keeping its fiery eyes fixed upon his blanched face. Slowly he crossed the stream, but gradually his steps grew more and more rapid, until he broke into a run. Suddenly a faint knowledge of the horrible nature of his position dawned upon him. A little cottage stood by the roadside, and from one of its chamber-windows, so near to the ground as to be within his reach, a dim light shone, the room probably being occupied by a sick person, or by watchers of the dead. Influenced by a sudden feeling of companionship, Adam tried to cry out, but his tongue clave to his parched mouth, and ere he could mumble a few inarticulate sounds, scarcely audible to himself, the dwelling was left far behind, and a sensation of utter loneliness and helplessness again took possession of him.
He had thus traversed more than a mile of the road, in some parts of which, shaded by the high hedgerows and overhanging boughs, the only light seemed to him to be that from the terrible eyes, when suddenly he stumbled over a stone and fell. In a second, impressed by a fear that the ghastly object would seize him, he regained his feet, and, to his intense relief, the Skriker was no longer visible. With a sigh of pleasure he sat down upon a heap of broken stones, for his limbs, no longer forced into mechanical movement by the influence of the spectre's presence, refused to bear him further. Bitterly cold as was the night, the perspiration stood in beads upon his whitened face, and, with the recollection of the Skriker's terrible eyes and horrible body strong upon him, he shook and shivered, as though in a fit of the ague. A strong and burly man, in the very prime of life, he felt as weak as a girl, and, fearing that he was about to sink to the ground in a swoon, he took handfuls of the crisp snow and rubbed them upon his forehead. Under this sharp treatment he soon revived a little, and, after several unsuccessful efforts, he succeeded in regaining his feet, and resumed his lonely journey.
Starting at the least sough of the breeze, the faintest creak of a bending branch, or the fall of a piece of frozen rime from a bough, he slowly trudged along.
He had passed the quaint old house at Chaigely, the sudden yelp of a chained dog in the court-yard giving him a thrill of horror as he went by, and he had reached the bend in that part of the road which is opposite the towering wood-covered Kemple End. A keen and cutting blast swept through the black firs that crowned the summit, and stood, like solemn sentinels, upon the declivity. There was a music in the wind mournful as a croon over the corpse of a beautiful woman, whose hair still shimmers with the golden light of life; but Adam heard no melody in the moaning sighs which seemed to fill the air around. To him, whose soul was yet under the influence of the terror through which he had so recently passed, the sounds assumed an awful nature; whilst the firs, standing so clearly defined against the snow, which lay in virgin heaps upon the beds of withered fern, seemed like so many weird skeletons shaking their bony arms in menace or in warning.
With a suddenness that was more than startling, there was a lull, and the breeze ceased even to whisper. The silence was more painful than were the noises of the blast battling with the branches, for it filled the breast of the solitary wayfarer with forebodings of coming woe. At the point he had reached the road sank, and as Adam stepped into the almost utter darkness, caused by the high banks, to which clung masses of decayed vegetation, beautified by the genius of winter into white festoons, again and again the terrible shriek rang out.
There was no mistaking the voice of the Skriker for that of anything else upon earth, and, with a sickly feeling at his heart, Adam slowly emerged from the gloom, and, in expectation of the appearance of the ghastly figure, passed on. He had not to wait long, for as he reached the old bridge spanning the Hodder, once more he saw, in the centre of the road, about midway of the stream, the same terrible object he had followed along the lane from the brook at Thornley.
With a sensation of terror somewhat less intense than that which had previously influenced him, he again yielded to the power which impelled him forward, and once more the strange procession commenced, the Skriker gliding over the snow, not, however, without a peculiar shuffling of its feet, surrounded, as they were, by masses of long hair, which clung to them, and deadened the sound, and Adam following in his mechanical and involuntary trot. The journey this time, however, was of but short duration, for the poor fellow's cottage was only a little way from the river. The distance was soon traversed, and the Skriker, with its face towards the terrified man, took up its position against the door of the dwelling. Adam could not resist the attraction which drew him to the ghastly thing, and as he neared it, in a fit of wild desperation, he struck at it, but his hand banged against the oak of the door, and, as the spectre splashed away, he fell forward in a swoon.
Disturbed by the noise of the fall, the goodwife arose and drew him into the cottage, but for some hours he was unable to tell the story of his terrible journey. When he had told of his involuntary chase of the Skriker, a deep gloom fell over the woman's features, for she well knew what the ghastly visit portended to their little household. The dread uncertainty did not continue long, however, for on the third day from that upon which Adam had reached his home the eldest lad was brought home drowned; and after attending the child's funeral, Adam's wife sickened of a fever, and within a few weeks she too was carried to Mytton churchyard. These things, together with the dreadful experience of the journey from Chipping, so affected Adam that he lost his reason, and for years afterwards the sound of his pattering footsteps, as in harmless idiotcy, with wild eyes and outstretched hands, he trotted along the roads in chase of an imaginary Boggart, fell with mournful impressiveness upon the ears of groups gathered by farm-house fires to listen to stories of the Skriker. 1
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Plot Summary
On a snowy December night, Adam, a sturdy young man, encounters the Skriker, a hideous supernatural harbinger of death, on his walk home. Compelled by an irresistible force, he is led by the creature across bridges and along the road, experiencing profound terror. Though the Skriker briefly vanishes, it reappears near his cottage, positioning itself at his door. Adam strikes at it in desperation, falls unconscious, and is found by his wife. The encounter portends tragedy: their eldest son drowns, his wife dies of fever, and Adam loses his sanity, forever wandering and chasing imaginary specters.
Themes
Emotional Arc
peace to terror to despair
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story is rooted in Lancashire folklore, specifically around the Hodder valley, where beliefs in local spirits and omens were prevalent in pre-industrial rural communities. The Skriker is a specific type of 'Boggart' or 'Barghest' associated with death or misfortune.
Plot Beats (16)
- Adam walks home from Chipping on a beautiful, snowy December night, feeling a sense of unease despite the peaceful scenery.
- At midnight, the moon is obscured, the wind picks up, and Adam begins to feel a growing dread as he approaches a brook.
- He hears unseen footsteps and a sepulchral howl, then a second, more horrible cry, compelling him to move forward.
- The moon reappears, revealing the Skriker, a hideous creature with black hide and fiery eyes, on the bridge.
- Adam is mesmerized and compelled to follow the gliding Skriker across the bridge and down the road.
- He briefly tries to cry out for help from a nearby cottage but is too late, feeling utter loneliness.
- Adam stumbles and falls, and when he regains his feet, the Skriker has vanished, leaving him exhausted and shivering.
- He slowly resumes his journey, still terrified by every sound and shadow.
- Approaching Kemple End, the wind's mournful sounds and the firs' skeletal appearance intensify his fear.
- A sudden lull in the wind and repeated terrible shrieks herald the Skriker's return.
- Adam sees the Skriker again on the bridge over the Hodder and is once more compelled to follow it.
- The Skriker leads him to his cottage door, where it takes up a position, its face towards him.
- Adam, in desperation, strikes at the creature, hitting his door instead, and falls into a swoon as the Skriker disappears.
- His wife finds him and, upon hearing his story, understands the ominous meaning of the visit.
- Within weeks, their eldest son drowns, and his wife dies of fever, fulfilling the Skriker's prophecy.
- Adam loses his reason and spends his remaining years wandering the roads, chasing imaginary Boggarts, a mournful figure in local folklore.
Characters
Adam ★ protagonist
A sturdy-looking young fellow, in the very prime of life, with a burly build. His face is described as 'whitened' and covered in 'beads of perspiration' from fear, suggesting a fair complexion that shows pallor easily.
Attire: Practical, sturdy clothing suitable for walking in deep snow and keen frost in rural Lancashire during the 19th century. Likely includes a thick wool coat, trousers, and sturdy boots, possibly a cap or hat to protect against the cold.
Wants: To reach his cottage safely and escape the terrifying presence of the Skriker. Later, his motivation is an unconscious, compelled pursuit of the Skriker, and ultimately, a delusional chase of an imaginary Boggart.
Flaw: His courage, though initially strong, can be overwhelmed by supernatural terror, leading to a breakdown of his mental state and reason.
Adam begins as a strong, rational man, albeit one susceptible to the eerie. He is gradually broken by the terrifying encounter with the Skriker, losing his family and eventually his sanity, becoming a harmless idiot who perpetually chases imaginary boggarts.
Initially sturdy and not timid, but susceptible to fear and oppression by unnatural silence. He is determined, pushing forward despite terror. Later, he becomes utterly broken, succumbing to madness.
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A sturdy adult man in the prime of life, with a burly build, fair skin, and a pale, terrified expression. He wears a thick, dark wool coat, practical trousers, and sturdy boots. His hair is short and practical. He is depicted in a state of terror, eyes wide, mouth slightly agape, with beads of perspiration on his forehead. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Skriker ⚔ antagonist
A hideous figure with black shaggy hide. Its feet are surrounded by masses of long hair that cling to them, deadening sound. It moves with a heavy gliding motion, not walking.
Attire: None, as it is a creature covered in its own shaggy hide.
Wants: To portend and bring about death and misfortune to those it visits, specifically to Adam's household.
Flaw: It has no power over those who have passed over water, though it can still compel them to follow. It vanishes when Adam falls, suggesting a momentary break in its influence or a vulnerability to physical disruption.
The Skriker remains a constant, terrifying force throughout the story, fulfilling its role as a harbinger of death without any change in its nature or purpose.
Terrifying, relentless, and ominous. It is a harbinger of death, compelling its victim through fear and a strange, irresistible influence. It does not speak but communicates through sepulchral howls and unearthly shrieks.
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A hideous, bipedal creature with a black, shaggy hide covering its entire body. Its face is obscured by fur, but two huge, glowing red eyes, like orbs of fire, are prominent. Its feet are large and shaggy, with long, dark hair clinging to them. It stands in a slightly hunched, gliding posture, facing forward. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Adam's Wife ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but as a 'goodwife' in a rural cottage, she would likely have a practical, sturdy build. Her features are described as showing 'deep gloom' upon hearing Adam's story, indicating an expressive face.
Attire: Simple, practical nightclothes (perhaps a shift and nightcap) when she arises to help Adam, and later, everyday attire suitable for a rural English woman of the 19th century, such as a linen dress, apron, and shawl.
Wants: To care for her husband and family. Later, to cope with the tragedies befalling her household.
Flaw: Vulnerable to the supernatural forces unleashed by the Skriker's visit, leading to her sickness and death.
She begins as a supportive wife, then becomes a grieving mother and wife, and finally succumbs to a fever, dying within weeks of the Skriker's visit.
Caring (she helps Adam), knowledgeable about local folklore (she understands the Skriker's portent), and ultimately, sorrowful and resigned to fate.
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A practical adult woman with a sturdy build, dressed in a simple, dark linen dress and a plain apron. Her face shows a somber and sorrowful expression, with downcast eyes. Her hair is neatly pulled back or braided. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Eldest Lad ○ minor
Not explicitly described, but as a 'lad', he would be a young boy, likely with the typical appearance of a child from a rural English family in the 19th century.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a child in rural Lancashire, likely made of durable fabrics like wool or linen.
Wants: Not described.
Flaw: Vulnerable to accidental death, as he is brought home drowned.
His life is cut short by drowning, serving as the first tragic fulfillment of the Skriker's prophecy.
Not described, as he is only mentioned in his death.
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A young boy, perhaps 8-10 years old, with a lean build. He wears simple, practical clothing typical of a 19th-century English rural child, such as a rough linen shirt and trousers. His expression is neutral. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Snow-covered Road to Hodder Banks
A winding, slippery road covered in deep snow drifts, flanked by leafless trees with frosted branches. The landscape is dominated by the noble old Parlick and sweeping Longridge with its fir-crowned Thornley Height and Kemple End, all standing out against a clear, moonlit sky. The distant fells beyond Whitewell blend into shadows.
Mood: Initially peaceful and beautiful, transitioning to eerie, silent, and increasingly terrifying.
Adam begins his journey home, experiencing the initial beauty and then the growing dread as the Skriker's presence is felt.
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A desolate, snow-covered country road at midnight, winding through a valley. Leafless trees with branches encrusted in rime ice line the path, casting long, distorted shadows under a bright, full moon. In the distance, snow-capped fells rise sharply against a clear, dark sky, their contours softened by moonlight. The ground is a pristine white, broken only by faint tracks. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Little Bridge over the Brook
A small, old bridge spanning a frozen brook, its copings covered in rime. The surrounding area is enveloped in comparative darkness as clouds obscure the moon, with wind howling through nearby boughs and branches. The road leading to it is covered in crunching snow.
Mood: Extremely tense, frightening, and supernatural, marking the direct confrontation with the Skriker.
Adam first encounters the visible form of the Skriker, a hideous figure with black shaggy hide and huge fiery eyes, standing in the center of the bridge.
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A small, ancient stone bridge arching over a frozen, snow-laden brook, its rough-hewn copings thick with rime. The scene is plunged into a sudden, deep darkness under a cloud-obscured moon, with only faint, eerie light. Snow-covered ground leads up to the bridge, showing faint cart-tracks. Wind whips through unseen, gnarled tree branches nearby. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Road by Kemple End
A section of the road opposite the towering, wood-covered Kemple End. Black firs crown the summit and stand like solemn sentinels on the declivity. The road here sinks, creating high banks clinging with masses of decayed vegetation, now beautified by winter into white festoons. Snow lies in virgin heaps upon beds of withered fern.
Mood: Mournful, desolate, and deeply foreboding, with a renewed sense of terror.
Adam, having briefly escaped the Skriker, is again confronted by its terrifying shriek and presence as he navigates this particularly dark and isolated stretch of road.
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A desolate, snow-covered country road at night, sinking between high banks. On one side, a towering, dark hill, Kemple End, is crowned with stark black fir trees standing like sentinels against the pale, snow-laden landscape. The banks are adorned with white festoons of frost-covered, decayed vegetation. Virgin snow lies undisturbed on withered fern beds. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Adam's Cottage Doorway
The exterior of Adam's small, humble cottage, likely a simple stone or timber structure typical of rural Lancashire, with a sturdy oak door. The ground around it is covered in snow. The cottage is situated only a short distance from the Hodder river.
Mood: Climactic, terrifying, and ultimately tragic, as the Skriker delivers its omen.
The Skriker takes up its position against Adam's cottage door, delivering its fatal omen, and Adam collapses in a swoon after striking the door.
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A small, humble stone or timber cottage, typical of rural Lancashire, nestled in a snow-covered landscape at night. A sturdy, dark oak door stands prominently in the center, partially obscured by the spectral, dark form of the Skriker. The ground around the cottage is covered in pristine, deep snow. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.