THE UNBIDDEN GUEST
by James Bowker · from Goblin Tales of Lancashire
Adapted Version
Once, there was a man. His name was Mr. Jeremy. He lived in a small house. He said he did magic. He told people lies. He took their money. He said he had a special helper. This helper was very strong. Mr. Jeremy's house was old. It looked dark inside. It was not really scary. It was just old. He had tricks inside. He made it look spooky.
One day, a person left his house. Mr. Jeremy went to a window. He pulled back a curtain. Sunlight came into the room. He saw the green hills. He saw the blue sky. It was a very nice view. Mr. Jeremy liked the view. He knew his magic was not real. He just liked to trick people.
Then, Mr. Jeremy went back inside. He saw a man in his chair. The man was strange. He looked very dark. "Mr. Jeremy," the man said. "I want some of your money." Mr. Jeremy did not know this man. He felt a little scared.
Mr. Jeremy said, "I do not know you!" He went to the window again. He tried to open the curtain. But it was dark outside. A big storm started. The wind blew hard. Rain fell down fast. Mr. Jeremy felt very strange.
Mr. Jeremy told the man to go. "Leave my house!" he said. The strange man showed his foot. It was a funny foot. It was not like a human foot. Mr. Jeremy was very scared. He fell down in his chair. The man laughed a lot.
The strange man had a paper. "Sign this paper," he said to Mr. Jeremy. "You must promise me something. You used my name for your tricks. Now you must sign this paper." Mr. Jeremy was still very scared. He did not want to sign.
Mr. Jeremy said, "No! I will not sign." He thought the man would be angry. But the man was calm. "Okay," the man said. "I will tell everyone. Your magic is not real. Another trick man will come. He will take your money."
The strange man left the house. Days passed by. No one came to Mr. Jeremy. Children were not scared of him. They played in the street. A new trick man came to town. People went to see him. He was very popular. Mr. Jeremy felt very sad.
Mr. Jeremy had no money. He had no food. He was very hungry. He wished for another chance. He said, "I wish for another chance." Then, a big thunder sound came. The wind blew around his house. The strange man was back. He sat in the chair. The paper was on the table.
"Are you ready to sign?" the man asked. Mr. Jeremy said, "Yes!" The strange man took his hand. He took Mr. Jeremy's finger. He used it like a pen. He made an 'X' mark. Mr. Jeremy signed the paper.
The strange man left again. Then, Mr. Jeremy was very lucky! The other trick man went away. Mr. Jeremy became famous. People came from far away. They gave him lots of money. He was rich for a long time.
After a long time, Mr. Jeremy was gone. His house was empty. His luck was all gone. No one saw him again. It was a lesson. It is not good to tell lies.
Original Story
THE UNBIDDEN GUEST.
IN a little lane leading from the town of Clitheroe there once lived a noted 'cunning man,' to whom all sorts of applications were made, not only by the residents, but also by people from distant places, for the fame of the wizard had spread over the whole country side. If a theft was committed, at once the services of 'Owd Jeremy' were enlisted, and, as a result, some one entirely innocent was, if not accused, at least suspected; while maidens and young men, anxious to pry into futurity, and behold the faces of their unknown admirers, paid him trifling fees to enable them to gratify their curiosity. In short, Jeremy professed to be an able student of the Black Art, on familiar speaking terms with Satan, and duly qualified to foretell men's destinies by the aid of the stars.
The cottage in which the old man resided was of a mean order, and its outward appearance was by no means likely to impress visitors with an idea that great pecuniary advantages had followed that personal acquaintance with the Evil One of which the wizard boasted. If, however, the outside was mean and shabby, the inside of the dwelling was of a nature better calculated to inspire inquirers with feelings of awe, hung round, as the one chamber was, with faded and moth-eaten black cloth, upon which grotesque astrological designs and the figure of a huge dragon were worked in flaming red. The window being hidden by the dingy tapestry, the only light in the room came from a starved-looking candle, which was fixed in the foot of the skeleton of a child, attached to a string from the ceiling, and dangling just over the table, where a ponderous volume lay open before a large crystal globe and two skulls.
In an old-fashioned chair, above which hung suspended a dirty and dilapidated crocodile, the wizard sat, and gave audience to the stray visitors whose desire to peer into futurity overmastered the fear with which the lonely cottage was regarded. A quaint-looking old man was Jeremy, with his hungry-looking eyes and long white beard; and, as with bony fingers he turned over the leaves of the large book, there was much in his appearance likely to give the superstitious and ignorant customers overwhelming ideas of his wondrous wisdom. The 'make up' was creditable to Jeremy, for though he succeeded in deceiving others with his assumption of supernatural knowledge, he himself did not believe in those powers whose aid he so frequently professed to invoke on behalf of his clients.
One day, when the ragged cloth had fallen behind a victim who was departing from the wizard's sanctum with a few vague and mysterious hints in exchange for solid coin, the old man, after laughing sarcastically, pulled aside the dingy curtains and stepped to the casement, through which the glorious sunlight was streaming. The scene upon which the wizard looked was a very beautiful one; and the old man leaned his head upon his hands and gazed intently upon the landscape.
''Tis a bonnie world,' said he,—''tis a bonnie world, and there are few views in it to compare with this one for beauty. My soul is drawn toward old Pendle, yon, with a love passing that of woman, heartless and passionless though the huge mass be. Heartless!' said he, after a pause,—'heartless! when every minute there is a fresh expression upon its beautiful front? Ay, even so, for it looms yonder calm and unconcerned when we are ushered into the world, and when we are ushered out of it, and laid to moulder away under the mountain's shadow; and it will rear its bold bluffs to heaven and smile in the sunlight or frown in the gloom after we who now love to gaze upon it are blind to the solemn loveliness of its impassable face. Poor perishable fools are we, with less power than the breeze which ruffles yon purple heather!'
With a heavy sigh Jeremy turned away from the window, and as the curtain fell behind him, and he stood again in the wretchedly-lighted room, he saw that he was not alone. The chair in which the trembling hinds generally were asked to seat themselves held a strange-looking visitor of dark and forbidding aspect.
'Jeremiah,' said this personage, 'devildom first and poetising afterwards.'
There was an unpleasant tone of banter in this speech, which did not seem in keeping with the character of one who fain would pry into futurity; and as the wizard took his usual position beneath the crocodile, he looked somewhat less oracular than was his wont when in front of a shivering and terrified inquirer.
'What wantest thou with me?' said he, with an ill-assumed appearance of unconcern.
The occupant of the chair smiled sardonically as he replied—
'A little security—that's all. For five-and-twenty years thou hast been amassing wealth by duping credulous fools, and it is time I had my percentage.'
The wizard stared in astonishment. Was the stranger a thief, or worse? he wondered, but after a time, however, he said, drily—
'Even if thou hadst proved thy right to a portion of the profits of my honest calling—and thou hast not—thou wouldst not require a packhorse to carry thy share away. Doth this hovel resemble the abode of a possessor of great wealth? Two chairs, a table, and a few old bones, its furniture; and its tenant a half-starved old man, who has had hard work to support life upon the pittance he receives in return for priceless words of wisdom! Thou art a stranger to me, and thy portion of my earnings is correctly represented by a circle.'
A loud and unmusical laugh followed the wizard's words; and before the unpleasant sound had died away the visitor remarked—
'If I am yet a stranger to thee, Jeremiah, 'tis not thy fault, for during the last quarter of a century thou hast boasted of me as thy willing servant, and extorted hard cash from thy customers upon the strength of my friendship and willingness to help thee; and now, true to thy beggarly instincts, thou wouldst deny me! But 'twill be in vain, Jeremiah—'twill be in vain! I have postponed this visit too long already to be put off with subterfuges now.'
'I repeat, I know thee not,' said the wizard, in a trembling voice. And, hurriedly rising from his chair, he flung aside the thick curtain, in order that the light of day might stream into the chamber, for a nameless fear had taken possession of him, and he did not care to remain in the darkened apartment with his suspicious visitor. To his surprise and terror, however, darkness had fallen upon the scene, and, as he gazed in alarm at the little diamond-framed window, through which so short a time before he had looked upon a fair prospect of meadow and mountain, a vivid flash of lightning darted across the heavens, and a clap of thunder burst over the cottage.
''Twill spoil good men's harvests, Jeremiah,' the stranger calmly said; 'but it need not interrupt our interesting conversation.'
Angry at the bantering manner in which the visitor spoke, the wizard flung open the door, and cried—
'Depart from my dwelling, ere I cast thee forth into the mire!'
'Surely thou wouldst not have the heart to fulfil thy threat,' said the stranger, 'although 'tis true I have but one shoe to be soiled by the mud.' And as he spoke he quietly crossed his legs, and Jeremiah perceived a hideous cloven foot.
With a groan, the wizard sank into his chair, and, deaf to the roaring of the thunder, and to the beating of the rain through the doorway, he sat helplessly gazing at his guest, whose metallic laughter rang through the room.
'Hast thou at length recognised me, Jeremiah?' asked the Evil One, after an interval, during which he had somewhat prominently displayed the hoof, and gloated over the agony its exhibition had caused his victim.
The old man was almost too terrified to answer, but at last he whispered—
'I have.'
'And thou no longer wilt refuse me the security?' hissed the tormentor, as he placed a parchment upon the table.
'What security dost thou demand?' feebly inquired the quaking wizard.
'Personal only,' said Satan. 'Put thy name to this,' and he pointed to the bond.
Jeremy pushed his chair as far from the suspicious-looking document as he could ere he replied—
'Thou shalt not have name of mine.'
He had expected that an outburst of fiendish wrath would follow this speech, but to his surprise the guest simply remarked—
'Very well, Jeremiah. By to-morrow night, however, thou shalt be exposed as the base and ignorant pretender thou art. Thou hast trespassed upon the rightful trade of my faithful servants long enough, and 'tis time I stopped thy prosperous career. Ere sunset thou shalt have a rival, who will take the bread from thy ungrateful mouth.'
After this polite speech the visitor picked up the parchment, and began to fold it in a methodical manner.
Such utterly unexpected gentlemanly behaviour somewhat reassured Jeremiah, and in a fainter voice he humbly asked what his visitor had to give in exchange for a wizard's autograph.
'Twenty-two years of such success as thou hast not even dared to dream of! No opposition—no exposure to thy miserable dupes,' readily answered Satan.
Jeremiah considered deeply. The offer undoubtedly was a tempting one, for after all, his profession had not been very lucrative, and to lose his customers, therefore, meant starvation. He was certain that if another wizard opened an establishment the people would flock to him, even through mere curiosity; but he knew what signing the bond included, and he was afraid to take the step.
After a long delay, during which Satan carefully removed a sharp stone from his hoof, Jeremiah therefore firmly said—
'Master, I'll not sign!'
Without more ado the visitor departed, and almost before he was out of sight the storm abated, and old Pendle again became visible.
A few days passed, and no one came to the dwelling of the wizard; and as such an absence of customers was very unusual, Jeremy began to fear that the supernatural stranger had not forgotten his threat. On the evening of the fifth day he crept into the little town to purchase some articles of food. Previously, whenever he had had occasion to make a similar journey, as he passed along the street the children ran away in terror, and the older people addressed him with remarkable humility; but this time, as he stepped rapidly past the houses, the youngsters went on with their games as though only an ordinary mortal went by, and a burly fellow who was leaning against a door jamb took his pipe from his mouth to cry familiarly—
'Well, Jerry, owd lad, heaw are ta'?'
These marks of waning power and fading popularity were sufficiently unmistakable; but as he was making his few purchases he was informed that a stranger, who seemed to be possessed of miraculous powers, had arrived in the town, and that many people who had been to him were going about testifying to his wonderful skill. With a heavy heart the wizard returned to his cottage. Next night a shower of stones dashed his window to pieces, and, as he peered into the moonlight lane, he saw a number of rough fellows, who evidently were waiting and watching in hopes that he would emerge from his dwelling. These were the only visitors he had during an entire week; and at length, quite prepared to capitulate, he said to himself—
'I wish I had another chance.'
No sooner had he uttered the words, than there was a sudden burst of thunder, wind roared round the house, again the clients' chair was occupied, and the parchment lay upon the table just as though it had not been disturbed.
'Art thou ready to sign?' asked Satan.
'Ay!' answered the old man.
The Evil One immediately seized the wizard's hand, upon which Jeremy gave a piercing yell, as well he might do, for the Satanic grip had forced the blood from the tips of his fingers.
'Sign!' said the Devil.
'I can't write,' said the wizard.
The Evil One forthwith took hold of one of the victim's fingers, and using it as a pen, wrote in a peculiarly neat hand 'Jeremiah Parsons, his × mark,' finishing with a fiendish flourish.
After doing this he again vacated the chair and the room as mysteriously as on the previous occasion.
The autograph-loving visitor had barely departed with the parchment ere a knock at the door was heard, and in stepped a man who wished to have the veil lifted, and who brought the pleasing news that, influenced by the reports of the opposition wizard, he had been to his house in Clitheroe, but had found it empty, the whilom tenant having fled no one knew whither. From that time things looked up with Jeremy, and money poured into the skulls, for people crowded from far and near to test his skill. For two-and-twenty years he flourished and was famous, but the end came.2 One morning, after a wild night when the winds howled round Pendle, and it seemed as though all the powers of darkness were let loose, some labourers who were going to their work were surprised to find only the ruins of the wizard's cottage. The place had been consumed by fire; and although search was made for the magician's remains, only a few charred bones were found, and these, some averred, were not those of old Jeremy, but were relics of the dusty old skeleton and the dirty crocodile under the shadow of which the wizard used to sit.
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Moral
Those who dabble in deceit and make pacts with evil will ultimately face dire consequences.
Plot Summary
Jeremy, a cynical 'cunning man' in Clitheroe, deceives people with fake magic and boasts of ties to Satan. One day, Satan himself appears, demanding a share of Jeremy's profits and exposing his fraud. After Jeremy initially refuses to sign a pact for 22 years of success, his reputation plummets, and a rival wizard emerges, driving him to desperation. Jeremy eventually relents, signing the pact with his mark, which restores his fame and wealth for the agreed period. However, at the end of the 22 years, his cottage is found burned to ashes, implying his soul was claimed.
Themes
Emotional Arc
false security to terror to brief triumph to ultimate destruction
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Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story reflects a period when belief in magic and the supernatural was common, and 'cunning folk' often served as local advisors or healers, sometimes exploiting the credulous.
Plot Beats (12)
- Jeremy, a 'cunning man' in Clitheroe, deceives villagers with fake magic and claims of association with Satan, living in a theatrically dark but outwardly shabby cottage.
- After a client leaves, Jeremy steps into the sunlight, reflecting on the beauty of nature and the transience of human life, revealing his true, cynical nature.
- Returning to his dark room, Jeremy finds a dark, forbidding stranger in his client's chair, who addresses him by name and demands a percentage of his earnings.
- Jeremy denies knowing the stranger and tries to open the curtain for light, but finds darkness outside, followed by a storm.
- Jeremy orders the stranger to leave, but the stranger reveals a cloven foot, confirming he is Satan, and Jeremy collapses in terror.
- Satan presents a parchment, demanding Jeremy's signature as 'security' for his years of falsely invoking the Devil's name.
- Jeremy refuses to sign, expecting wrath, but Satan calmly threatens to expose him as a fraud and send a rival wizard to ruin his business.
- Satan departs, and over the next few days, Jeremy's reputation plummets, children no longer fear him, and a new, successful wizard appears in town.
- After a week of no clients and public scorn, Jeremy wishes for another chance, and Satan immediately reappears with the parchment.
- Jeremy agrees to sign, but claims he cannot write; Satan then uses Jeremy's finger to make an 'X' mark on the parchment.
- Satan departs, and immediately Jeremy's fortunes reverse; the rival wizard flees, and Jeremy becomes immensely famous and wealthy for 22 years.
- After 22 years, following a wild night, Jeremy's cottage is found burned to the ground, with only a few charred bones remaining, suggesting his soul was taken.
Characters
Owd Jeremy (Jeremiah Parsons) ★ protagonist
A quaint-looking old man, gaunt and thin, with bony fingers. His overall appearance suggests a life of hardship, despite his claims of wealth.
Attire: Ragged, mean, and shabby clothing, likely made of coarse wool or linen, in muted, dark colors, reflecting his impoverished reality rather than his boasted wealth. Perhaps a worn, dark tunic and trousers, with a threadbare cloak.
Wants: To survive and amass wealth by duping credulous fools, to maintain his reputation as a 'cunning man', and later, to avoid starvation and exposure.
Flaw: Greed, fear, and his lack of genuine magical power. His fear of starvation and exposure makes him vulnerable to Satan's offer.
Starts as a cynical deceiver, is confronted by the literal Devil, initially refuses to sign a pact, experiences a rapid decline in his fortunes and reputation, and ultimately capitulates to Satan, gaining wealth and fame for 22 years before his mysterious and fiery demise.
Cynical, sarcastic, deceptive, fearful, ultimately desperate. He pretends to be a powerful wizard but is a non-believer in his own magic. He is also a poet at heart, appreciating nature.
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An elderly, gaunt man with a long, unkempt white beard and deep-set, hungry eyes. He has a wrinkled face and bony fingers. He wears a dark, threadbare wool tunic over simple trousers, and a worn, patched cloak. His posture is slightly hunched, and he holds one bony hand over a large, open, leather-bound book on a table. He has a cynical, fearful expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Unbidden Guest (Satan / The Evil One / The Devil) ⚔ antagonist
A strange-looking visitor of dark and forbidding aspect. He has a cloven foot, which he prominently displays. His grip is described as 'Satanic', forcing blood from Jeremy's fingers.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but given his 'gentlemanly behaviour' and methodical folding of parchment, he might wear dark, formal, but subtly sinister attire, perhaps a dark, well-tailored coat and trousers, suggesting an unexpected sophistication for a demon.
Wants: To claim his 'percentage' from Jeremy's fraudulent use of his name, to punish Jeremy for trespassing on his 'rightful trade', and to secure Jeremy's soul through a pact.
Flaw: None apparent in the story; he is depicted as all-powerful and inescapable.
Appears to confront Jeremy, offers a pact, leaves when refused, orchestrates Jeremy's downfall, and returns to secure the pact, ultimately claiming Jeremy's soul/life after 22 years.
Sardonic, bantering, methodical, patient, manipulative, and ultimately terrifying. He enjoys tormenting his victim and is true to his word regarding the pact.
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A tall, dark-skinned man with a forbidding, angular face and piercing, dark eyes. He has a sardonic smile. He wears a dark, impeccably tailored Victorian-era frock coat, a crisp white shirt, and dark trousers, but one of his feet is clearly a cloven hoof. He holds a rolled parchment in one hand. His posture is confident and slightly leaning forward, with an air of sinister politeness. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Owd Jeremy's Cottage Exterior
A mean and shabby cottage located in a little lane leading from the town of Clitheroe. It appears unimpressive from the outside, suggesting no great wealth. It is situated in a beautiful landscape with views of Pendle Hill.
Mood: Initially unassuming, later becomes ominous and desolate.
Jeremy often looks out from here, contemplating nature. It is the setting for the cottage's eventual destruction.
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A small, weathered stone cottage with a sagging, moss-covered thatched roof, nestled beside a narrow, muddy lane. The walls are rough-hewn, and a single, small casement window is visible. In the background, the majestic, rolling slopes of Pendle Hill rise, covered in patches of purple heather and dark green bracken under a dramatic, cloud-streaked sky. The air feels damp and cool. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Owd Jeremy's Inner Chamber
A single, awe-inspiring chamber within the cottage, hung with faded and moth-eaten black cloth. Grotesque astrological designs and a huge red dragon are worked into the cloth. The window is hidden by dingy tapestry, with the only light coming from a starved-looking candle fixed in a child's skeleton, dangling over a table.
Mood: Eerie, mystical, oppressive, and later terrifying.
This is where Jeremy conducts his 'cunning man' business and where Satan makes his appearances to demand the bond.
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A claustrophobic, dimly lit chamber with walls entirely draped in heavy, moth-eaten black cloth. Faded, grotesque astrological symbols and a large, stylized red dragon are crudely stitched onto the fabric. A single, flickering candle, held by the skeletal foot of a small, dangling human skeleton, casts long, dancing shadows. On a rough wooden table, a large, leather-bound book lies open beside a glowing crystal globe and two ancient, yellowed human skulls. Above a worn, high-backed wooden chair, a dusty, mummified crocodile hangs suspended from the ceiling. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Clitheroe Town Street
A street in the small town of Clitheroe, lined with houses. Children play in the street, and burly fellows lean against door jambs.
Mood: Initially fearful and respectful towards Jeremy, later becomes familiar and dismissive.
Jeremy observes the change in public perception towards him, indicating his waning power.
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A narrow, cobbled street in a small, medieval English market town. Timber-framed houses with wattle-and-daub infill and steeply pitched, tiled roofs line both sides, their upper stories overhanging the street. Children in simple tunics play with wooden hoops near a horse-drawn cart, while a burly man with a clay pipe leans casually against a heavy oak door jamb. The evening light is soft, casting long shadows down the street. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.