THE KING of THE FAIRIES
by James Bowker · from Goblin Tales of Lancashire
Adapted Version
Once there was a farmer named Daniel. His farm was the best in the village.
Farmer Daniel had a very good farm. His crops were big. His farm was always clean. People saw his good farm. They wondered why it was so good. They thought it was magic.
Puck the Fairy helped Farmer Daniel. Puck did all the farm work at night. He milked cows. He cleaned the barn. The farm was always tidy. All was ready each morning.
One morning, a farm worker came. He told Farmer Daniel the corn was ready. All the corn was in the barn. Farmer Daniel was not happy. He worried about his horses. He thought Puck worked them too hard. Farmer Daniel was greedy.
Puck the Fairy heard Farmer Daniel. Puck was very angry. He shouted. Puck said he would not help Daniel again. Puck went away. He vanished.
Next day, corn was in the field. No work was done. The barn was empty. Farmer Daniel was sad. He had to work very hard.
Farmer Daniel was sad. His farm was not good now. But Puck the Fairy still helped the maids. He cleaned inside the house.
One night, Farmer Daniel walked home. He wanted Puck the Fairy to come back. He saw a bush. He thought Puck the Fairy was there. Daniel said, "God bless Puck!" Loudly. He hoped Puck the Fairy heard him.
Puck the Fairy heard Daniel's words. Puck made a scared sound. Puck went away for good. No one saw Puck the Fairy again.
Now, no one helps in the house either. All must do all the work themselves. It is hard work. Farmer Daniel's farm was never the same. He had to work very hard each day. He learned to be thankful for help. Greedy people lose good things. Be happy for good things. Say thank you.
Original Story
THE KING OF THE FAIRIES.
MANY years ago there lived in a farm-house at a point of the high-road from Manchester to Stockport, where Levenshulme Church now stands, a worthy named Burton, 'Owd Dannel Burton.'A The farm held by Daniel was a model one in its way, the old man raising finer crops than any other farmer in the district. It was rumoured that Daniel was very comfortably provided for, and that a few bad years would not harm him; and so wonderfully did everything he took in hand prosper, that his 'luck' became proverbial. Such uniform prosperity could not long continue without the tongue of envy and detraction being set wagging, and the neighbours who permitted thistles to overrun their pastures whilst they gadded about to rush-bearings and wakes, finding a reproach to their idleness not only in the old man's success, but also in the careful, industrious habits of his daily life, were not slow to insinuate that there was something more than farming at the bottom of it. 'Dannel' had sold himself to Satan, said some whose pigs had faded away, and whose harvests had not been worth the gathering; and others pretended to know even the terms of the contract, and how many years the old man yet had to play on. A few of these detractors were young men whose imaginations were not kept in sufficient control, but they grew wonderfully reserved respecting the Satanic bargain after the hearty Daniel had had an interview with them, and proved to them that he had not forgotten the use of a good tough black-thorn.
A Mr. Burton's grandson was for many years rector of All Saints', Manchester.
'It's nobbut luck,' philosophically remarked others, 'mebbe it'll be my turn to-morn;' but the remainder vowed that neither luck or Evil One had anything to do with it, for the success was due to the labours of Puck, King of the Fairies.
They were right. It was Puck, although no one ever knew how the old man had been able to enlist the services of so valuable an auxiliary, Daniel being strangely reticent upon the point, although generally by no means loth to speak of the fairies and their doings. Reserve with reference to these things, however, would not have availed much, for the farm labourers, the ruddy-cheeked milkmaids, and the other women-folk about the farm-house, were fond of boasting of the exploits of Puck—how during the night everything was 'cleaned up,' and all was in apple-pie order when they came into the kitchen at daybreak, the milk churned, the cows foddered, the necessary utensils filled with water from the well, the horses ready harnessed for their day's work at the plough, and even a week's threshing done and the barn left as tidy as though it had just been emptied and swept. Evidently the servant lasses had no fear of, or objection to, a hard-working supernatural visitor of this kind, but just the reverse, and many of their listeners found themselves wishing that their house, too, had its Boggart.
For so long a period did this state of things continue, each morning revealing an astounding amount of work performed by the willing and inexpensive workman, that at length the assistance was taken for granted, and as a matter of course, offering no food for surprise, although it did not cease to be a cause of envy to the neighbours.
On one occasion, however, as old Daniel was despatching a hearty and substantial breakfast, a heated labourer brought word that all the corn had been housed during the past night. The strange story was true enough, for when the old man reached the field, where on the previous evening the golden sheaves of wheat had stood, he found the expanse quite bare, and as clean as though reapers, leaders, gleaners, and geese had been carefully over it. The harvest was in the barn, but not content with this, Daniel, illustrating the old proverb that 'much would have more,' suddenly exclaimed, 'I wonder whose horses Puck4 used in this work. If yon of mine, I daresay he sweated them rarely;' and away he strode towards the stable. He had not reached the fold, however, when he met Puck coming towards him, and in a fever of greedy anxiety he cried, 'Puck, I doubt thou'st spoiled yon horses!' No sooner were the words out of his mouth, however, than he saw that for once in his life he had made a mistake, for the fairy went pale with anger as he shouted in a shrill treble:—
Sheaf to field, and horse to stall,
I, the Fairy King, recall!
Never more shall drudge of mine
Stir a horse or sheaf of thine.
After which vow he at once vanished.
The old man walked home in a sorrowful mood, and actually forgot to go to the stable; but next morning early he was disturbed by a knocking at his chamber door. 'Mesthur, ger up,' cried the messenger, who on the previous day had brought the news of the housing of the corn, 'Mesthur, ger up, th' corn's back i'th' fielt.' With a groan of anguish Daniel arose, and hastily made his way to the barn. All the pile was gone, and the floor littered with straw, exactly as it was before the fairy labour had so transformed the place.
It did not take the farmer long to get over the ground between his barn and the corn-field, and arrived there he found the expanse once more covered with yellow sheaves, on which the beams of the rising sun were beginning to fall. Here and there a sheaf had fallen upon the ground, and everywhere straw and ears of corn were scattered about as though the reapers had not long before left the place. The old man turned away in despair.
From that time forward there was no more work done about the farm, or the shippons, and stables; but in the house, however, the maids continued to find their tasks performed as usual.
Great were the rejoicings in the locality when the story of the sheaves became known, and it got noised about that 'Dannel's' fairy had 'fown eawt' with him. The old man became very dejected, for although he did not clearly perceive that the rupture was entirely due to his own selfish greed, he could not go about the farm without observing how much he had lost.
One summer evening in a thoughtful mood he was walking homewards, and wishing that the meadows were mown. Plunged in such reflections, he met a neighbour, who at once asked the cause of his trouble. Daniel turned to point to the meadows, and as he did so he saw the fairy, in an attitude of rapt attention, stooping behind the hedgerow as though anxious to overhear the conversation. 'Yo' miss your neet-mon?' said the neighbour. The old man thought that the time was come to make his peace with offended royalty, and with a cunning glance in the direction of the hiding-place, he answered, 'I do, Abrum, and may God bless Puck, th' King o'th' Fayrees.'5 There was a startled cry from behind the hedgerow, and both men turned in that direction, but there was nothing to be observed. The fairy had vanished, never again to be seen in Daniel Burton's fields. That night the work was left undone even inside the farm-house, and thenceforward when the kitchen needed cleaning, water was wanted from the well, or when milk had to be churned, the maids had to get up early and do the work, for Puck, King of the Fairies, would not touch either mop or pail.
Story DNA
Moral
Insatiable greed and a lack of gratitude can lead to the loss of even the greatest blessings.
Plot Summary
Daniel Burton, a prosperous farmer, secretly benefits from the tireless labor of Puck, King of the Fairies, who performs all his farm work overnight. However, Daniel's insatiable greed leads him to complain that Puck might have overworked his horses, despite the fairy's immense help. Offended by Daniel's ingratitude, Puck vows to cease his assistance, reversing all his previous work and vanishing from the farm. Daniel's attempts to appease Puck are futile, and the fairy ultimately departs forever, leaving Daniel and his household to manage all their own labor, a consequence of his own ungrateful nature.
Themes
Emotional Arc
prosperity to loss to regret
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common folk beliefs in England regarding helpful household spirits or fairies, often associated with specific places or families, and the dangers of offending them.
Plot Beats (9)
- Daniel Burton, a successful farmer, is known for his unusual prosperity, which neighbors attribute to either the devil or Puck, King of the Fairies.
- It is revealed that Puck secretly performs all the farm's arduous tasks overnight, making Daniel's farm exceptionally productive and tidy.
- One morning, Daniel learns that all his corn has been housed overnight, but instead of gratitude, he expresses greedy concern that Puck might have overworked his horses.
- Puck, overhearing Daniel's ungrateful remark, becomes enraged and declares he will recall all his work and never help Daniel again, then vanishes.
- The next morning, the housed corn is found back in the field, and all the farm work that Puck used to do is left undone.
- Daniel becomes dejected as his farm's prosperity declines, though the housemaids still find their tasks completed by Puck.
- Daniel, walking home one evening, cunningly blesses Puck, King of the Fairies, within earshot of a hedgerow where he suspects Puck is listening.
- Puck, startled by the blessing, cries out and vanishes completely, never to be seen again.
- From that night forward, even the housemaids' tasks are left undone, and Daniel's household must perform all their own labor.
Characters
Owd Dannel Burton ★ protagonist
A sturdy, robust elderly farmer, likely of average height with a strong, weathered build from years of manual labor. His hands would be calloused and his face lined from sun exposure. He carries himself with a confident, perhaps slightly stubborn, bearing.
Attire: Practical, durable 19th-century English farmer's attire: a thick, dark wool or fustian coat, a waistcoat, a linen shirt, sturdy corduroy breeches, and heavy leather boots. He might wear a simple neckerchief. His clothes would be well-worn but clean.
Wants: To maintain and increase his prosperity and the efficiency of his farm. He desires comfort and success.
Flaw: Greed and a lack of gratitude. His suspicion and demanding nature alienate his benefactor.
Starts as a successful farmer, becomes overly reliant and greedy, loses his magical help due to his ingratitude, and then tries to cunningly regain it, ultimately failing to restore the full extent of his previous aid.
Industrious, prosperous, initially grateful, but prone to greed and suspicion, philosophical, cunning when trying to mend fences.
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An elderly English farmer standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy, weathered build, a ruddy complexion, and a broad, lined face with shrewd, observant eyes. His thinning grey hair is practical and short. He wears a dark wool fustian coat, a waistcoat, a cream linen shirt, sturdy corduroy breeches, and heavy brown leather boots. He holds a thick, gnarled black-thorn stick in his right hand. His expression is a mix of determination and a hint of cunning. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Puck, King of the Fairies ◆ supporting
Small, agile, and ethereal, with a mischievous yet powerful presence. He is likely slender and quick, capable of immense work.
Attire: Simple, natural attire, perhaps made of leaves, moss, or rough spun cloth in greens and browns, allowing for quick movement. It would be rustic and unadorned, fitting for a working fairy king, not a regal one.
Wants: To perform tasks efficiently and perfectly, possibly out of a sense of duty or pride in his work. He values respect and gratitude.
Flaw: His pride and sensitivity to perceived insults or ingratitude. He cannot tolerate being taken for granted.
Starts as a diligent, invisible helper, becomes offended by Daniel's greed and ingratitude, and withdraws his services, first partially, then completely, never to return.
Industrious, diligent, powerful, easily offended by ingratitude, proud, and capable of swift, decisive action.
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A small, agile magical creature standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a slender build and an ethereal quality. His face is pale and expressive, with sharp, bright eyes. His dark, disheveled hair is short. He wears simple, rustic attire made of dark green leaves and brown moss, allowing for quick movement. His posture is rigid and commanding, with an expression of intense anger. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Heated Labourer ○ minor
A robust, working-class man, likely of average height and a strong build from farm work. He would appear disheveled and sweaty from exertion.
Attire: Typical 19th-century English farm labourer's clothing: a simple linen shirt, sturdy trousers, and work boots. His clothes would be functional and likely stained with dirt from the fields.
Wants: To inform his master of significant farm events.
Flaw: None explicitly shown.
Static, serves as a messenger.
Diligent, observant, dutiful, and eager to deliver news.
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An adult English farm labourer standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a robust build, a ruddy and flushed face, and practical, dark hair. He wears a simple cream linen shirt, sturdy brown trousers, and heavy work boots. His clothes are functional and show signs of wear and dirt. He appears breathless and urgent, with an expression of urgency. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Abrum ○ minor
A typical neighbor farmer, likely of similar build and appearance to Daniel Burton, though perhaps less prosperous-looking.
Attire: Simple, practical 19th-century English farmer's clothing, similar to Daniel's but perhaps less well-maintained, reflecting his less prosperous farm.
Wants: To engage in neighborly conversation and inquire about Daniel's well-being.
Flaw: None explicitly shown.
Static, serves as a catalyst for Daniel's final interaction with Puck.
Friendly, inquisitive, and conversational.
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An adult English farmer standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy build and a friendly, weathered face. His dark hair is practical and short. He wears a simple grey wool jacket, a light-colored linen shirt, dark trousers, and worn leather boots. His posture is relaxed and conversational, with a curious expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Burton's Farmhouse Kitchen
A bustling, well-maintained kitchen within a traditional Lancashire farmhouse, likely with a large hearth, sturdy wooden table, and various farm implements and dairy equipment. At daybreak, it is always found in 'apple-pie order'.
Mood: orderly, industrious, initially magical, later mundane
The maids discover the overnight work done by Puck; later, they find the work undone after Puck's final departure.
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A warm, early morning light streams through a small, leaded-pane window into a tidy, rustic Lancashire farmhouse kitchen. A large, scrubbed wooden table stands center, surrounded by simple wooden chairs. A stone hearth with a simmering pot is to one side, and various copper and earthenware pots hang from hooks on the timbered walls. Sunlight illuminates dust motes dancing in the air and highlights the texture of the rough-hewn wooden beams overhead. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Corn Field
An expansive field of golden wheat sheaves, ready for harvest, located on Daniel Burton's farm in Levenshulme, near Manchester. It appears miraculously bare one morning, then re-covered with scattered sheaves and straw the next.
Mood: initially prosperous, then bewildering, finally despairing
Puck performs the miraculous housing of the corn, then returns it to the field in anger; Daniel finds the field re-covered with corn.
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A vast, open cornfield in rural Lancashire, bathed in the soft, golden light of a rising summer sun. Rows of ripe, yellow wheat sheaves stand tall, with some scattered loosely on the ground, indicating recent activity. The field stretches towards a distant hedgerow and a few scattered trees under a clear, pale blue sky. The ground is a mix of dry earth and stubble. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Farm Barn
A large, functional barn on Daniel Burton's farm, typically used for storing harvested crops. It is found miraculously filled with corn sheaves overnight, then empty and littered with straw the next morning.
Mood: mysterious, then empty and desolate
Daniel discovers the entire harvest housed in the barn; the next morning, he finds it empty again.
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Inside a rustic, timber-framed barn in rural Lancashire, early morning light filters through gaps in the weathered wooden planks, creating shafts of light and shadow. The vast, open space is initially filled to the rafters with golden corn sheaves, then later, the rough-hewn wooden floor is littered with scattered straw and a few stray ears of corn, indicating a sudden emptiness. Heavy wooden beams support the high ceiling. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Meadows and Hedgerow
Lush, unmown meadows surrounding Daniel Burton's farm, bordered by a thick, green hedgerow. This is where Daniel encounters his neighbor and sees Puck for the last time.
Mood: thoughtful, hopeful, then finality
Daniel walks home, wishing the meadows were mown, and sees Puck hiding behind the hedgerow, making his final peace.
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A wide, verdant meadow in the Lancashire countryside, with tall, unmown grass swaying gently in the soft breeze of a summer evening. A dense, tangled hedgerow, rich with hawthorn and bramble, runs along the edge of the field, casting long shadows as the sun begins to set. The sky is a gradient of warm oranges and soft blues, and the air feels still and humid. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.