ALLHALLOW'S NIGHT
by James Bowker · from Goblin Tales of Lancashire
Adapted Version
Long ago, a big hill stood. Its name was Pendle. Farmer Ralph lived near it. He had a family. People told scary stories. Strange things happened there.
Things went wrong on the farm. Farmer Ralph was sad. His animals were not well. His plants did not grow. He had bad luck. He thought scary things made it happen.
Farmer Ralph wanted bad luck to stop. He went to the hill. It was a special night. He wanted bad things to go away. Ralph's Wife was very worried. She asked him not to go.
Isaac was his helper. He said he would go too. They took special branches. They took candles. They hoped these kept them safe.
It was the special night. They started their walk. The Dog went with them. They walked up Pendle Hill. It was a big hill.
They tried to light their candles. But a big storm started. The wind blew very hard. The Dog got scared. It made a sad noise.
They walked higher up the hill. Lightning flashed. Thunder boomed loudly. A scary shadow flew past. It made a loud, scary noise. The Dog got very scared. It ran all the way home.
They came to an old house. It was dark. They saw strange lights inside. They heard scary sounds. It was like laughing. It was a strange party.
They turned to go away from the house. Then a very scary face appeared. It was big. Or maybe it was a big, scary noise. Their candles went out. It was very dark now.
They shouted, "Oh dear!" They cried, "Help us!" Then the lights in the house went out. All the scary sounds stopped. The strange party was over.
They ran away fast. It was dark. Farmer Ralph fell down. He fell into a little hole. Isaac could not see him. Isaac felt very sad and scared.
Isaac thought Farmer Ralph was gone. He walked around in the dark. He felt very lost. Then he hid under a big rock. He waited there until morning.
The sun came up. People found Isaac. Ralph's Wife helped them. The Dog helped them too. The Dog ran home. It told them to search.
They found Farmer Ralph! He was in the little hole. He was a little hurt. He could not walk well. They helped him go home. He was safe.
After that, things got better. The family was happy. Farmer Ralph and Isaac told their story. It was a scary night. They were very brave.
Original Story
ALLHALLOW'S NIGHT.
TO many a beautiful landscape the majestic Pendle adds a nameless charm, and the traveller who gazes upon it from any of the points whence a view of the whalelike mass is to be obtained, would hardly dream that the moss and fern-covered hill, smiling through the dim haze, once was the headquarters of witchcraft and devilry. Readers of the quaint and sad trials of the witchmania period, and of Harrison Ainsworth's celebrated novel based thereon, will, however, remember what dread scenes were said to have transpired in the dim light of its cloughs and upon its wild sides, when Chattox, Mouldheels, and the other poor wretches whose 'devilish practices and hellish means,' as they were termed in the old indictments, made the neighbourhood of the mountain so unsafe a locality.
In a lonely little house some distance from the foot of Pendle, there dwelt a farmer and his family, together with a labourer whom he employed. Entirely illiterate, and living in a wild and weird district, with but few houses nearer than a mile away, the household believed firmly in all the dreadful boggart, witch, and feeorin stories current in the district. For a long time, however, the farmer had not any personal experience of the power of either witch or boggart; but at length his turn came. After a tempestuous night, when the windows and doors rattled in their frames, and the wind, dashing the big rain drops against the little diamond-shaped panes, moaned and shrieked round the lonely dwelling, three of the beasts were found dead in the shippon. A few days afterwards two of the children sickened, and when 'th' edge o' dark' was creeping up the hill-side one of them died. As though this trouble was not enough, the crops were blighted. With reluctance the farmer saw in these things proof that he had in some unknown manner incurred the displeasure of the invisible powers, and that the horse-shoe over his door, the branches of ash over the entrance to the shippon, and the hag stones hung up at the head of his own and of the children's bed, had lost their power of protection.
The family council, at which the unprotected condition of the house was discussed, was of the saddest kind, for even the rough labourer missed the prattle of the little one whose untimely end had cast a shadow over the dwelling, and he thoroughly sympathised with his master in his losses; while, as for the farmer and his wife, dread of what the future might have in store for them mingled with their sorrow, and added to the heaviness of their hearts.
'Isaac, yo' may as weel tek' th' wiggin27 an' th' horse shoes deawn, for onny use they seem to be on. We'en nowt to keep th' feorin' off fra' us, an' I deawt we'es come off bud badly till November,' said the farmer, as he knocked the ashes from his pipe.
'An' why nobbut till November, Ralph,' asked the wife in a terrified voice, as she gazed anxiously towards the little window through which Pendle could be dimly seen looming against the evening sky.
'Because on O'Hallow neet, mi lass, I meean to leet th' witches28 on Pendle.'
'Heaven save us!' cried the woman. 'Tha'll be lost as sewer as th' whorld.'
There was a short silence, and then old Isaac spoke—
'If th' mestur goes, Isik guz too. Wis be company, at onny rate.'
The farmer gratefully accepted this offer of fellowship, and the appeals of his wife, who implored him to abandon the notion, were of no avail. Others had lighted the witches, and thereby secured a twelvemonth's immunity from harm, and why should not he go and do likewise? Ruin was staring him in the face if things did not improve, thought he, and his determination to 'leet' his unseen enemies grew stronger and stronger.
At length the last day of October came, bringing with it huge clouds and a misty rain, which quite obscured the weird hill; but at nightfall the wind rose, the rain ceased, the stars began to appear, and the huge outline of Pendle became visible.
When the day's work was over, the farmer and Isaac sat in the kitchen, waiting for the hour at which they were to start for the haunted mountain, and the dread and lonesome building where the witches from all parts gathered in mysterious and infernal conclave. Neither of the men looked forward to the excursion with pleasurable feelings, for, as the emotion caused by the losses had somewhat subsided, terror of the beings who were supposed to assemble in the Malkin Tower resumed its sway; but soon after the old clock had chimed ten they rose from the settle and began their preparations for the lighting. Each man grasped a branch of mountain ash, to which several sprigs of bay were tied as a double protection against thunder and lightning, and any stray fiends that might happen to be lurking about, and each carried in the other hand an unlighted candle.
As they passed from the house the tearful goodwife cried a blessing upon them, and a massive old bulldog crept from a corner of the yard and took its place at their heels.
The three stepped along bravely, and before long they had crossed the brook and reached the foot of Pendle. Rapidly making their way to a well-known ravine they paused to light the candles. This operation, performed by means of a flint and steel and a box of tinder, occupied some time; and while they were so engaged clouds obscured the moon, a few heavy drops of rain fell, the wind ceased to whisper, and an ominous silence reigned, and the dog, as though terrified, crept closer to its master and uttered a low whine.
'We's hev' a storm, I daat, Isik,' said the farmer.
'Ise think mysen weel off an' win nowt else bud a storm,' drily replied the old man, as, lighted candle in hand, he began to climb the hill-side, his master and the dog following closely behind.
When they had almost reached the top of the ravine a flash of lightning suddenly pierced the darkness, and a peal of thunder seemed to shake the earth beneath them; while a weird and unearthly shriek of laughter rang in their ears as a black figure flew slowly past them, almost brushing against their faces in its flight. The dog immediately turned and fled, howling terribly as it ran down the hill-side; but the men went on, each one carefully shading his light with the hand in which the branch of ash was grasped. The road gradually became rougher, and occasionally Isaac stumbled over a stone, and almost fell, the farmer frantically shouting to him to be careful of his candle, but without any serious mishap the pair managed to get within sight of the tower.
Evidently some infernal revelry was going on, for light streamed from the window-openings, and above the crash of the thunder came shrieks of discordant laughter. Every now and again a dark figure floated over their heads and whirled in at one of the windows, and the noise became louder, by the addition of another shrill voice.
'It mon be drawin' nee midneet,' said the farmer. 'If we con but pass th' hour wis be reet for a twelvemonth. Let's mek for whoam neaw.'
Both men readily turned their backs to the building, but no sooner had they done so than a Satanic face, with gleaming eyes, was visible for a moment, and instantaneously both lights were extinguished.
'God bless us!' immediately cried both men.
Almost before the words had left their lips the tower was plunged in total darkness, the shrieks of unholy laughter were suddenly stilled, and sounds were heard as of the rapid flight of the hags and their familiars, for the ejaculations had broken up the gathering.
Terrified beyond measure at the extinction of their lights, but still clinging tenaciously to the branches, which apparently had proved so ineffectual to preserve them against the power of the witches, the men hurried away. They had not proceeded far in the direction in which they supposed the farm lay, when, with a cry, the farmer, who was a little in advance of his aged companion, fell and vanished. He had slipped down the cleft, on the brink of which Isaac stood, tremblingly endeavouring to pierce the darkness below.
Not a sound came up to tell the old man that his master had escaped with his life; and, as no response came to his shouts, at length he turned away, feeling sure that he was masterless, and hoping to be able to reach the farm, and obtain assistance. After wandering about for some time, however, half-blinded by the lightning, and terrified beyond measure at the result of their mutual boldness, Isaac crept under a large stone, to wait for the dawn. Influenced by the cold and by fatigue, the old man fell asleep; but no sooner had the first faint rays of coming day kissed the hill-summit, than he was aroused by the old bulldog licking his face, and as he gazed around in sleepy astonishment some men appeared. The farmer's wife, terrified by the arrival of the howling dog, and the non-arrival of the 'leeters,' had made her way to a distant farm-house and alarmed the inmates, and a party of sturdy fellows had started off to find the missing men. Isaac's story was soon told; and when the searchers reached the gorge the farmer was found nursing a broken leg.
Great were the rejoicings of the goodwife when the cavalcade reached the farm, for, bad as matters were, she had expected even a worse ending; and afterwards, when unwonted prosperity had blessed the household, she used to say, drily, 'Yo' met ha' kept th' candles in to leet yo' whoam, for it mon ha' bin after midneet when he blew 'em aat,' a joke which invariably caused the farmer and old Isaac to smile grimly.
Story DNA
Moral
Sometimes, confronting your fears directly can lead to unexpected consequences, but faith and community can help overcome adversity.
Plot Summary
A farmer near Pendle Hill suffers a string of misfortunes, believing his family is cursed by witches. In desperation, he and his loyal labourer, Isaac, venture to the infamous Malkin Tower on Allhallow's Night to 'light the witches' and break the spell. They face terrifying supernatural phenomena, including a demonic revelry and their candles being extinguished by a Satanic figure. Fleeing in terror, the farmer falls into a chasm, leaving Isaac to seek help. The farmer is eventually rescued with a broken leg, and though their ordeal was harrowing, their fortunes turn, leaving them with a grim, enduring tale.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story directly references the Pendle Witch Trials of 1612, a significant event in English history where a group of people from the Pendle area were accused and tried for witchcraft. Malkin Tower was reputedly the meeting place of the witches.
Plot Beats (15)
- The story introduces Pendle Hill, a place historically associated with witchcraft, and a farmer's family living in its shadow.
- The farmer experiences a series of misfortunes: dead livestock, sick children (one dies), and blighted crops, which he attributes to witches.
- Feeling unprotected, the farmer decides to 'light the witches' on Allhallow's Night to secure a year's immunity, despite his wife's pleas.
- His loyal labourer, Isaac, volunteers to accompany him, and they prepare with mountain ash, bay sprigs, and unlit candles.
- On Allhallow's Night, they set out, accompanied by their bulldog, and climb Pendle Hill.
- While lighting their candles, a storm breaks, and the dog whines in terror.
- As they ascend, lightning flashes, thunder peals, and a black figure flies past with an unearthly shriek, causing the dog to flee.
- They reach Malkin Tower, seeing lights and hearing shrieks of laughter from an infernal revelry.
- As they turn to leave, a Satanic face appears, extinguishing both their candles.
- Their cries of 'God bless us!' cause the tower to go dark and the sounds of the hags to cease, breaking up the gathering.
- Terrified, they flee in darkness, but the farmer falls into a deep cleft, vanishing from Isaac's sight.
- Isaac, believing his master dead, wanders before taking shelter under a stone until dawn.
- At dawn, Isaac is found by a search party, alerted by the farmer's wife and the returned dog.
- The farmer is found alive in the gorge with a broken leg, and they return home.
- The family's fortunes improve, and the incident becomes a darkly humorous tale for the farmer and Isaac.
Characters
Ralph, the Farmer ★ protagonist
A sturdy, weathered man, likely of medium height and build, accustomed to hard agricultural labor. His hands would be calloused and strong. His face is etched with the worries of his farm and family, showing signs of stress and determination.
Attire: Typical 19th-century Lancashire farmer's attire: sturdy wool trousers, a thick linen or fustian shirt, a waistcoat, and a heavy wool or fustian jacket for warmth. His boots would be well-worn and practical for muddy fields. Colors would be muted earth tones like browns, greys, and dark blues.
Wants: To protect his family and farm from the perceived witchcraft and misfortune plaguing them, and to restore prosperity to his household.
Flaw: His deep-seated superstition and willingness to take extreme risks based on local folklore, leading him into dangerous situations.
Starts as a desperate man driven by fear and superstition to confront the witches. He endures a terrifying ordeal, suffers a broken leg, but ultimately, his actions (or the breaking of the spell by his words) lead to renewed prosperity, making him a grimly humorous survivor.
Determined, superstitious, practical, resilient, and somewhat stubborn. He is driven by a desire to protect his family and livelihood.
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A sturdy adult man of medium height and build, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sun-beaten, rough face with a short dark beard, and practical, short dark hair. His eyes are a common color like brown, reflecting determination mixed with worry. He wears sturdy dark grey wool trousers, a thick cream linen shirt, a dark brown waistcoat, and a heavy dark blue fustian jacket. His boots are well-worn brown leather. He clutches a branch of mountain ash with sprigs of bay in his left hand and an unlit tallow candle in his right. His posture is resolute but slightly hunched with tension. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Isaac ◆ supporting
An old, rough labourer, likely thin and wiry from a lifetime of physical work, but still possessing surprising resilience. His movements might be a bit stiff, but he is capable of enduring hardship.
Attire: Simple, worn peasant clothing typical of the era: patched wool trousers, a coarse linen shirt, a threadbare waistcoat, and a rough, dark fustian coat. His boots would be old and mended. Colors are faded and drab, reflecting his humble station.
Wants: Loyalty to his master and a shared belief in the supernatural threats drive him to accompany the farmer, despite his fear.
Flaw: His advanced age makes him physically vulnerable, and his deep superstition can lead him to despair.
Remains steadfastly loyal to the farmer, enduring the terrifying journey and the loss of his master in the chasm. He survives the night and is instrumental in finding the farmer, showing his resilience and dedication.
Loyal, stoic, dry-witted, resilient, and deeply superstitious. He is a man of few words but strong actions.
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A thin, elderly man, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a wizened, deeply lined face with pale, knowing eyes, and sparse, unkempt white hair. He wears patched dark grey wool trousers, a coarse cream linen shirt, a threadbare dark brown waistcoat, and a rough, faded dark blue fustian coat. His boots are old and mended brown leather. He clutches a branch of mountain ash with sprigs of bay in his left hand and an unlit tallow candle in his right. His posture is stooped with age but resolute. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Farmer's Wife ◆ supporting
A hardworking woman, likely of sturdy build, showing the weariness of farm life and recent grief. Her hands would be capable and strong from household chores.
Attire: Practical 19th-century Lancashire peasant woman's attire: a long, dark wool or linen skirt, a plain linen blouse, a sturdy apron, and a shawl draped over her shoulders. Her shoes would be simple and robust. Colors are muted and functional.
Wants: To protect her husband and family from harm, and to alleviate the misfortunes plaguing their household.
Flaw: Her overwhelming fear and anxiety, which can make her feel helpless.
Starts as a terrified woman pleading with her husband not to go. Her fear is realized when he doesn't return, prompting her to bravely seek help. She ultimately finds relief and later develops a dry, humorous perspective on their ordeal.
Anxious, loving, deeply superstitious, practical, and resilient. She prioritizes the safety of her family above all else.
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A sturdy adult woman, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a careworn face with worried eyes and dark hair pulled back severely under a simple white cap. She wears a long, dark grey wool skirt, a plain cream linen blouse, a sturdy dark blue apron over it, and a dark brown wool shawl draped over her shoulders. Her shoes are simple, dark leather. Her posture is anxious, with hands clasped in front of her. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Bulldog ◆ supporting
A massive, old bulldog, with a powerful, muscular build, loose skin, and a distinctive underbite. Its coat is likely a brindle or fawn color, showing signs of age but still formidable.
Attire: None, as an animal.
Wants: Loyalty to its master and an instinct to protect the household.
Flaw: Its animalistic fear response to truly supernatural phenomena, causing it to abandon its masters.
Starts as a brave companion, but is overcome by supernatural terror, fleeing the scene. It later redeems its loyalty by finding Isaac and leading the search party to the farmer.
Loyal, protective, brave (initially), but ultimately susceptible to overwhelming supernatural terror.
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A massive, old brindle bulldog, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has a powerful, muscular build, loose skin, and a distinctive underbite. Its broad, wrinkled face has dark, deep-set eyes and a short snout. Its coat is short and coarse. It stands with a low, powerful posture, but its expression is one of deep fear, with its mouth slightly open in a low whine. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Witches / Black Figures ⚔ antagonist
Described as 'black figures' that fly slowly and whirl into the tower. One is seen as a 'Satanic face, with gleaming eyes.' They are ethereal and terrifying, not necessarily human in form, but capable of manifesting visually.
Attire: Described as 'black figures,' suggesting dark, flowing, indistinct forms rather than specific garments. They might appear as shadowy cloaks or amorphous shapes.
Wants: To cause harm, spread misfortune, and engage in 'infernal revelry.' Their existence seems to be driven by pure malice.
Flaw: The utterance of 'God bless us!' or other holy words, which causes them to disperse and their power to be broken.
They are initially powerful and terrifying, causing great distress. Their revelry is interrupted and broken by the men's desperate cry, forcing them to flee, suggesting a temporary defeat.
Malicious, malevolent, cruel, and reveling in discord and terror. They are unseen forces of misfortune and evil.
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A shadowy, indistinct black figure, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has a grotesque, non-human 'Satanic face' with glowing red eyes. Its form is flowing and amorphous, like a dark cloak or smoke, with no specific garments visible. It is depicted in a swirling, flying posture, its body slightly blurred as if in motion. Its expression is one of malevolent, shrieking laughter. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Lonely Farmhouse
A small, isolated dwelling with rattling windows and doors, and little diamond-shaped panes. It is situated some distance from the foot of Pendle Hill, in a wild and weird district with few other houses nearby. The interior includes a kitchen with an old clock and a settle.
Mood: Dreadful, lonesome, sorrowful, later tense with anticipation.
The family discusses their misfortunes and the farmer's decision to 'light the witches' on Allhallow's Night. The farmer and Isaac prepare for their journey.
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A dimly lit, rustic 17th-century Lancashire farmhouse kitchen interior at night. Rough-hewn timber beams support a low ceiling, and a large stone hearth with a dying fire casts flickering shadows. A small, diamond-paned window shows only inky blackness outside. Simple, sturdy wooden furniture, including a settle and a table, are arranged on a flagstone floor. The air is thick with a sense of quiet dread and anticipation. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Foot of Pendle Hill - Ravine Entrance
The base of the majestic, whalelike Pendle Hill, covered in moss and fern. A brook runs nearby. A well-known ravine marks the entrance to the ascent.
Mood: Ominous, silent, terrifying, foreboding.
The farmer and Isaac cross the brook and reach the foot of Pendle, pausing at the ravine to light their candles.
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A dark, rugged ravine entrance at the base of a looming, whale-shaped hill, Pendle Hill, on a moonless Allhallow's Night. The ground is a mix of damp earth, exposed rock, and sparse, dark vegetation. A narrow, winding path leads into the shadowy cleft. The air is heavy and still, with a sense of deep foreboding. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Ascent of Pendle Hill - Rough Path
A gradually rougher path winding up the hillside, leading towards the summit. The terrain is uneven, with loose stones and exposed rock. The air is filled with the sound of wind and later, thunder and unearthly shrieks.
Mood: Terrifying, perilous, supernatural, chaotic.
The farmer and Isaac climb the hill, encountering a lightning flash, thunder, and a flying black figure. The dog flees in terror.
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A treacherous, winding path ascending a steep, rocky hillside on a stormy Allhallow's Night. Jagged rocks and sparse, wind-battered heather cling to the dark, exposed earth. Lightning occasionally illuminates the scene, revealing the dramatic, rugged terrain and the vast, turbulent sky. The air is thick with the smell of rain and ozone, and the wind whips around the exposed slopes. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Malkin Tower (Witches' Conclave)
A dread and lonesome building, likely a derelict or ruined tower, from which light streams from window-openings. It is the gathering place for witches, filled with shrieks of discordant laughter and unholy revelry.
Mood: Infernal, chaotic, terrifying, supernatural, unholy.
The farmer and Isaac witness the infernal revelry inside the tower. Their candles are extinguished by a Satanic presence, breaking up the gathering.
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A crumbling, ancient stone tower, Malkin Tower, on a stormy Allhallow's Night, with an unearthly, flickering orange and red light streaming from its broken window openings. The rough-hewn stone walls are dark and weathered, partially overgrown with ivy. Dark, swirling clouds obscure the sky above, occasionally lit by distant lightning. The immediate surroundings are desolate and rocky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Cleft on Pendle Hill
A deep, dark cleft or gorge on the hillside, treacherous and unseen in the total darkness after the lights are extinguished. Its brink is perilous.
Mood: Terrifying, disorienting, perilous, desolate.
The farmer falls into the cleft after his light is extinguished. Isaac waits out the night under a large stone nearby.
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A treacherous, deep cleft in the rugged, dark terrain of Pendle Hill, shrouded in absolute darkness after midnight. The edges of the chasm are barely discernible, with loose rocks and sparse, wind-beaten scrub. A large, weathered boulder offers minimal shelter on the desolate, exposed hillside. The air is cold and damp, carrying the faint scent of wet earth and stone. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.