THE HEADLESS WOMAN
by James Bowker · from Goblin Tales of Lancashire
Adapted Version
Gabriel walked home. Trotty walked with him. It was dark. Gabriel left a friend's house. The air was cold. He walked on a long path. Trotty walked close to him. Trotty was a good dog.
The night was very quiet. Gabriel felt cold. He walked alone on the path. The path was long. The moon was bright. But the path felt lonely.
Gabriel heard a strange sound. It was a little cry. He looked up. He saw something moving. It was far away on the path. He thought it was a person. A person walking home.
Gabriel walked closer. Trotty barked. Trotty ran away very fast. Trotty was scared. Gabriel was alone now. He felt a little scared too.
Gabriel spoke to the person. "Hello," he said. "Are you okay?" A soft voice answered him. "Hello," it said. The person did not turn around. She walked beside him.
The person carried a big basket. It looked heavy. "Can I help you?" Gabriel asked. He took the basket from her. A soft voice said, "Thank you." Then a little laugh came. It was a strange laugh.
Gabriel dropped the basket. It made a loud sound. Something round and hard fell out. It rolled on the path. Gabriel looked at the person. This person was very strange. She was not like others.
Gabriel was scared. He ran very fast. The Strange Person ran too. She ran after him. The round thing bounced. It bounced near Gabriel's feet. He ran faster.
The round thing bounced again. It bounced in his way. Gabriel jumped over it. He ran even faster now. He did not look back. He just ran.
Gabriel ran and ran. He heard soft steps. They were behind him. He heard the round thing. Bounce, bounce, bounce. It was still there.
Gabriel saw a little river. Water ran fast there. He jumped over the water. He landed on the other side. The sounds stopped. All was quiet now. He was safe.
Gabriel ran home. He opened the door. Trotty was at the door. Trotty was happy to see him. Gabriel went inside. He saw Gabriel's Wife. "I saw something strange," he said. "Very strange."
Gabriel's Wife smiled a little. "You were out late," she said. "Home is the best place. It is safe here. You know this now." Gabriel agreed. He felt very safe.
Gabriel was safe at home. Trotty was safe too. Home was the best place.
Original Story
THE HEADLESS WOMAN.
(BEAWT HEEOD.)
IT was near upon twelve when Gabriel Fisher bade good night to the assembled roysterers who were singing and shouting in the kitchen of the White Bull, at Longridge, and, turning his back to the cosy hearth, upon which a huge log was burning, emerged into the moonlit road. With his dog Trotty close at his heels, he struck out manfully towards Tootal Height and Thornley, for he had a long and lonely walk before him. It was a clear and frosty night, but occasionally a light cloud sailed across the heavens, and obscured the moon. Rapidly passing between the two rows of cottages which constituted the little straggling village, his footsteps ringing upon the frozen ground, Gabriel made for the fells, and, as he hurried along, he hummed to himself a line of the last song he had heard, and now and again burst into a fit of laughter as he remembered a humorous story told by 'Owd Shuffler.' When he reached the highest point of the road whence he could see the beautiful Chipping valley, a soft breeze was whispering among the fir-trees, with that faint rustle suggestive of the gentle fall of waves upon a beach. Here and there a little white farm-house or labourer's cottage was gleaming in the moonlight, but the inmates had been asleep for hours. There was an air of loneliness and mystery over everything; and though Gabriel would have scorned to admit that he was afraid of anything living or dead, before he had passed out of the shadow of the weird-looking melodious branches he found himself wishing for other company than that of his dog. He suddenly remembered, too, with no access of pleasurable feelings, that on the previous day he had seen a solitary magpie, and all sorts of stories of 'Banister Dolls' and 'Jinny Greenteeths,' with which his youthful soul had been carefully harrowed, came across his mind. He tried to laugh at these recollections, but the attempt was by no means a successful one, and he gave expression to a hearty wish that Kemple End were not quite so far off.
Just then a sharp shrill cry fell upon his ear, and then another and another. 'Th' Gabriel Ratchets,'33 he shouted, 'what's abaat to happen?' The cries were not repeated, however, and he went on, but when he reached the peak of the fell, and gazed before him into the deep shade of a plantation, he could not repress a slight shudder, for he fancied that he saw something moving at a distance. He paused for a moment or two to assure himself, and then went on again slowly, his heart throbbing violently as he lessened the space between the moving object and himself. The dog, as though equally influenced by similar feelings, crept behind him in a suspicious and terrified manner.
'It's nobbut a woman,' said he, somewhat re-assured; 'it's a woman sewerly. Mebbee someburry's badly, an' hoo's gooin' for help. Come on, Trotty, mon.'
So saying, he quickened his pace, the dog hanging behind, until he approached almost close to the figure, when, with a wild howl, away Trotty fled down the hillside. As Gabriel drew still closer, he saw that the object wore a long light cloak and hood, and a large coal-scuttle bonnet; and surprised to find that the sound of his footsteps did not cause her to turn to see who was following, he called out:
'It's a bonny neet, Missis; bud yo're aat rayther late, arn't yo'?'
'It is very fine,' answered the woman, in a voice which Gabriel thought was the sweetest he had ever heard, but without turning towards him as she spoke.
'Summat wrong at your fowk's, happen?' he asked, anxious to prolong the talk. There was no reply to this, though, and Gabriel knew not what to think, for the silent dame, although she declined to reply, continued to keep pace with him, and to walk at his side. Was it some one who had no business to be out at that hour, and who did not wish to be recognised, he wondered? But if so, thought he, why did she continue to march in a line with him? The voice, certainly, was that of one of a different rank to his own; but, on the other hand, he reflected, if she were one of the gentle folks, why the cottager's cloak and bonnet, and the huge market basket? These conjectures crossed his brain in rapid succession; and influenced by the last one—that as to his companion's clothing—he determined again to address her.
'Yo' met a left yir tung at whoam, Missis,' said he, 'sin' yo' connot answer a civil mon.'
This taunt, however, like the direct query, failed to provoke an answer, although the startled Gabriel could have sworn that a smothered laugh came from beneath the white cloth which covered the contents of the basket 'Let me carry yer baskit,' said he; 'it's heavy for yo'.'
Without a word, the woman held it out to him; but, as Gabriel grasped the handle, a voice, which sounded as though the mouth of the speaker were close to his hand, slowly said:
'You're very kind, I'm sure;' and then there came from the same quarter a silvery peal of laughter.
'What i' th' warld can it be?' said Gabriel, as without more ado he let the basket fall to the ground. He did not remain in ignorance very long, however, for, as the white cloth slipped off, a human head, with fixed eyes, rolled out 'Th' yedless boggart!' cried he, as the figure turned to pick up the head, and revealed to him an empty bonnet, and away he fled down the hill, fear lending him speed. He had not run far, however, before he heard a clatter of feet on the hard road behind him; but Gabriel was one of the fleetest lads about the fells, and the sight he had just seen was calculated to bring out all his powers; so the sound did not grow louder, but just as he turned into the old Chaighley Road, the head, thrown by the boggart, came whizzing past in unpleasant proximity to his own, and went rolling along in front of him. For a second or two Gabriel hesitated what to do, the headless woman behind and the equally terrible head in front; but it did not take long to decide, and he went forward with renewed vigour, thinking to pass the dreadful thing rapidly rolling along in advance of him. No sooner was he near to it, however, than, with an impish laugh, which rang in his ears for days afterwards, the ghastly object diverged from its course and rolled in his way. With a sudden and instinctive bound, he leaped over it; and as he did so the head jumped from the ground and snapped at his feet, the teeth striking together with a dreadfully suggestive clash. Gabriel was too quick for it, however, but for some distance he heard with horrible distinctness the clattering of the woman's feet and the banging of the head upon the road behind him.
Gradually the sounds grew fainter as he speeded along, and at length, after he had crossed a little stream of water which trickled across the lane from a fern-covered spring in the fell side, the sounds ceased altogether. The runner, however, did not pause to take breath until he had reached his home and had crept beneath the blankets, the trembling Trotty, whom he found crouched in terror at the door of the cottage, skulking upstairs at his heels and taking refuge under the bed.
'I olus said as tha'd be seein' a feeorin wi' thi stoppin' aat o' neets,' remarked his spouse after he had narrated his adventure; 'bud if it nobbut meks tha fain o' thi own haath-stooan I'se be some glad on it, for it's moor nor a woman wi' a heead on her shoothers hes bin able to do.'20
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Plot Summary
Gabriel Fisher, a man returning home late from a pub, encounters a mysterious, silent woman on a lonely road. After his dog flees in terror, Gabriel tries to engage her, only for a human head to roll out of her basket when he offers to help. The figure reveals itself to be a headless boggart, which then pursues Gabriel, throwing its head at him. Gabriel narrowly escapes by crossing a stream and finally reaches the safety of his home, where he recounts his terrifying ordeal to his wife, who uses the incident to chide him for his late-night habits.
Themes
Emotional Arc
comfort to terror to relief
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story reflects common folk beliefs and the oral tradition of ghost stories in rural England, particularly Lancashire, where such tales were used to explain strange occurrences or enforce social norms.
Plot Beats (13)
- Gabriel Fisher leaves the White Bull pub late at night to walk home across the fells with his dog, Trotty.
- He feels a growing sense of unease and remembers local superstitions as he walks through the lonely landscape.
- Gabriel hears shrill cries, then spots a moving figure in the distance, which he initially believes is just a woman.
- As he approaches, his dog Trotty flees in terror, leaving Gabriel alone with the mysterious figure.
- Gabriel attempts to speak to the woman, who responds with a sweet voice but never turns to face him, maintaining a strange silence.
- He offers to carry her heavy market basket, and as he takes it, a voice from near his hand thanks him, followed by a laugh.
- Gabriel drops the basket in surprise, and a human head rolls out, revealing the figure to be a headless boggart.
- Terrified, Gabriel flees, but the headless woman pursues him, throwing her head which rolls in front of him.
- The head actively tries to impede his escape, snapping at his feet as he leaps over it.
- Gabriel continues to run, hearing the sounds of the boggart and its head behind him.
- He finally escapes the pursuit by crossing a stream of water, at which point the sounds cease.
- Gabriel reaches his home, where he finds his terrified dog, and recounts his horrifying experience to his wife.
- His wife uses the incident as an opportunity to chide him for staying out late, suggesting the scare might finally make him appreciate his home.
Characters
Gabriel Fisher ★ protagonist
A sturdy, athletic young man, likely of average height and build, accustomed to physical labor and long walks across the fells. His movements are swift and strong, especially when spurred by fear.
Attire: Practical, warm clothing suitable for a frosty night in rural Lancashire, likely including sturdy trousers, a thick woolen jacket or coat, and strong boots. His attire would be functional rather than fashionable.
Wants: To get home safely after a night out, and later, to escape the terrifying encounter.
Flaw: His initial bravado and skepticism quickly crumble into extreme fear when faced with the truly inexplicable.
Starts as a confident, slightly dismissive young man, but is utterly terrified and humbled by his encounter, leading him to appreciate the safety of his home.
Boisterous and jovial among friends, initially brave and dismissive of superstitions, but quickly becomes terrified and superstitious when confronted with the supernatural. He is curious, a bit taunting, and ultimately very fast.
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A young man of sturdy build, average height, with a ruddy complexion and practical, short brown hair. He wears a thick, dark woolen jacket, sturdy brown trousers, and heavy leather boots. His face is contorted in fear, eyes wide, mouth open in a shout. He is in a running posture, leaning forward, arms pumping. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Headless Woman ⚔ antagonist
A spectral figure of a woman, appearing to be of average height and build, but notably lacking a head. Her movements are initially slow and steady, then become supernaturally swift and aggressive.
Attire: A long, light-colored cloak (possibly white or pale grey linen/wool), a hood, a large coal-scuttle bonnet (empty when headless), and carries a huge market basket. The clothing appears to be that of a cottager, despite her 'gentle folks' voice.
Wants: To terrify and torment those who encounter her, possibly a lingering curse or supernatural compulsion.
Flaw: Cannot cross running water, which provides a temporary escape for Gabriel.
Remains a terrifying, unchanging supernatural entity throughout the encounter.
Mysterious, silent, and unnerving. She exhibits a playful, impish cruelty, enjoying the terror she inflicts, as evidenced by her silvery peal of laughter and impish laugh.
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A tall, slender female figure, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. She wears a long, flowing light grey linen cloak with a hood, and a large, empty black coal-scuttle bonnet on her shoulders where her head should be. Her neck is a smooth, pale column. She holds a large, woven market basket in her left hand. Her posture is upright and slightly menacing. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Trotty ◆ supporting
A dog, likely a working breed common to rural Lancashire, such as a sheepdog or terrier mix, agile enough to keep pace with Gabriel. He is described as 'crept behind him' and 'hanging behind' when scared, and later 'trembling'.
Attire: None, as he is a dog.
Wants: To accompany and protect Gabriel, and later, to escape the terrifying entity.
Flaw: Extreme fear of the supernatural, leading him to abandon Gabriel.
Starts as a loyal companion, becomes utterly terrified, and seeks refuge, reflecting Gabriel's own fear.
Loyal to Gabriel, but extremely sensitive to supernatural presence and easily terrified, showing more instinctual fear than his master initially.
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A medium-sized, shaggy-haired brown and white dog, resembling a terrier mix, with its tail tucked between its legs. Its ears are flattened, and its eyes are wide with terror. It is cowering low to the ground, looking over its shoulder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Gabriel's Spouse ○ minor
Not described, but likely a woman of the Lancashire fells, practical and perhaps a bit stern.
Attire: Not described, but would be simple, practical clothing of a cottager woman in rural England.
Wants: To keep her husband safe and perhaps to encourage him to stay home more.
Flaw: None shown.
No arc, appears only at the end to deliver a concluding remark.
Practical, somewhat admonishing, and perhaps a bit resigned to her husband's late-night habits. She uses the incident to make a point about him staying out late.
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A middle-aged woman with a stern but knowing expression, fair skin, and practical, dark brown hair pulled back from her face. She wears a simple, long-sleeved dark blue linen dress and a white apron. Her arms are crossed over her chest. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The White Bull Inn Kitchen
A warm, lively kitchen with assembled roysterers singing and shouting. A huge log burns on a cosy hearth, casting a warm glow.
Mood: Cosy, boisterous, warm, social.
Gabriel Fisher bids goodnight before starting his journey home.
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A rustic English inn kitchen, late 19th century, with rough-hewn timber beams and a large stone hearth where a huge log burns brightly, casting warm, flickering light across the room. Several boisterous men in period clothing are gathered around wooden tables, singing and laughing, their faces illuminated by the firelight and a few flickering oil lamps. The air is thick with warmth and merriment. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Tootal Height and Thornley Fells Road
A long, lonely, moonlit road winding through the fells, passing between rows of cottages and then ascending to higher ground. The ground is frozen, and fir-trees whisper in a soft breeze. Scattered white farmhouses and labourers' cottages gleam in the moonlight. The highest point offers a view of the Chipping valley.
Mood: Lonely, mysterious, eerie, gradually becoming terrifying.
Gabriel encounters the headless woman and is pursued by her and the rolling head.
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A desolate, winding, frozen dirt road cutting through the Lancashire fells under a bright, cold full moon. Sparse, gnarled fir trees line the higher ridges, their branches silhouetted against the cloudy, moonlit sky, creating long, shifting shadows. The ground is hard and frosty, reflecting the moonlight. In the distance, a few small, whitewashed stone cottages with slate roofs gleam faintly. The overall atmosphere is stark and chilling. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Gabriel's Cottage
A humble cottage, Gabriel's home, where he eventually finds refuge. Trotty, his dog, is crouched in terror at the door.
Mood: Safe, comforting, a place of refuge after terror.
Gabriel finally reaches home and recounts his terrifying experience to his wife.
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The interior of a simple, cozy 19th-century Lancashire labourer's cottage, dimly lit by the dying embers of a hearth and a single candle. Rough-hewn timber walls and a low ceiling create a sense of enclosure. A simple wooden bed with thick blankets is visible in the corner. The atmosphere is one of humble warmth and safety, a stark contrast to the cold night outside. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.